kaylierosewriter

[kaylierosewriter]

This is my latest version of the query letter for The StarHawk, a 100,000 word SciFantasy novel crossing genres between fantasy and the stars. I’d love your thoughts and suggestions!

Dear xxxx,

Aboard the spaceship StarHawk, an elite student of the mystical Way of the Charis is about to discover that her prestigious peacekeeping Order harbors dark secrets. When Lyrae becomes plagued by visions of intergalactic war, she uncovers truths buried deep in the Order of Libra's history—truths that reveal a threat capable of destroying both past and future. As the visions intensify, Lyrae finds herself transformed from the Order's most promising acolyte to an unwitting pawn in their machinations. All she’d wanted was to live up to the Order’s expectations. But now she must decide: remain loyal to the institution that raised her or trust the terrifying prophecies that could tear it all apart.

THE STARHAWK - THE ORDER OF LIBRA is a 100,000-word fantasy novel that weaves mystical elements into a space-faring setting. Drawing readers into a universe where prophecy meets starlight, it will appeal to fans of THE UNMAKING OF JUNE FARROW's prophetic journey and THE STARLESS CROWN's sweeping cosmic scale. While the novel stands complete, it opens the door to future adventures in this vast universe.

As a published poet with works including "Reflecting the Sky" (Silver Bow Publishing, 2022) and pieces featured in the "Circular Whispers" anthology, I bring a lyrical sensibility to my prose. My storytelling has been shaped by a lifetime of immersion in fantasy, particularly the character-rich worlds of Tolkien, David Eddings, and Terry Brooks.

Having grown up immersed in both classic fantasy and the Star Wars universe, my storytelling draws from the character-rich worlds of Tolkien and Brooks while embracing the space opera mastery of Timothy Zahn's novels. This dual influence has helped shape THE STARHAWK into a unique blend of mystical fantasy and interstellar adventure. Given your interest in science fiction that pushes boundaries while honoring its roots, I believe this project would be a strong fit for your list. As requested in your submission guidelines, I've included the Prologue and first three chapters along with this letter and synopsis.

Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

Kaylie Chamberlain (writing as Kaylie Rose)