hazbinhotelexpansion
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This is a blog dedicated to my and my partner’s Hazbin Hotel fan fiction. The fic will follow the canon plot but give us more interactions, scenes, and depth than Amazon’s official story.
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hazbinhotelexpansion · 6 months ago
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Fix it Fridays
We've gotten a lot of suggestions on how we can improve Hazbin Hotel and give it more depth. So we want to tell you all what ideas we specifically are incorporating into each episode.
Today: The Vees!
Episode 2 is the first episode with the Vees, but we've already introduced Vox and Velvette in chapter 1. Our hope was to create a more defined dynamic between the three. I (the writer for chapters 1 and 2) especially love them, they're the power of friendship turned evil in my mind.
The first thing we did was make a little Venn diagram for them. What did they have in common? What do they share with each other? What's unique to just one of them? We wanted to especially explore the idea of control, so they are written to reflect the three kinds of control we decided were the broadest and most complimentary.
Velvette has been the most fun to work through. She's perceptive, cunning, and superficial. We've decided that she's best at one-on-one manipulation, and likes to use social pressure most. Her form of control is control of media and opinions.
Vox changed the least, he's a pretty strong written character. The face of their company, he's the one in front of the camera the most. My favorite part about writing him is fleshing out how well The Vees know each other. It makes them fun foils to our getting-to-know-you Main Cast. Vox's form of control is of the masses.
Valentino has been the most challenging to work with. We really want to handle Angel's character well, and so we needed him to sound like less of a shitty boyfriend and more of a cold, well-versed, purposefully manipulative Pimp. He's an intoxicating control of one person at a time. Effective and all encompassing.
Let us know what else we should change from the original Hazbin Hotel
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hazbinhotelexpansion · 6 months ago
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Word Count Wednesdays
This week was much more productive (now that I have my laptop back)
Our total word count this week is at 7983
the first word written this week was dismissed, and that last word was products
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hazbinhotelexpansion · 6 months ago
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So like. The Hell that hazbin takes place in is the same as the Hell that helluva takes place in, cause helluva goes from human realm to greed to gluttony to lust to pride, but the sector of hell that hazbin is mainly in doesn’t appear to obviously be any of those? Idk.
Does anyone know? Am I missing something obvious? Lmao
But I am fucking obsessed w the like. Demon princes? Idk what they’re called. Like Lucifer, Asmodeus, Beelzebub, and I can’t care remember what greed’s real name is 🥱
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hazbinhotelexpansion · 6 months ago
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Word count Wednesdays
We want to keep you guys in the loop, so for every Wednesday that our team is writing, we’ll tell you guys what our word count is.
Today we’re at 4358 words
The first word we wrote this week was Vox, and the most recent word is Promised
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hazbinhotelexpansion · 6 months ago
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Update
Our writing has currently been very slow due to external factors. This chapter might take a while to come out, but after this Friday we should be able to pick up the pace!
Please continue to leave us ideas and suggestions for the series, this has already been so much fun and we have no intention of stopping
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hazbinhotelexpansion · 7 months ago
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Thank you to everyone who got me to 250 likes!
Hazbin Hotel Expansion Pack ask game
we are working on introducing our Egg Bois, and we need more ridiculous shit for them to say!
submit any random ass quote you can think of, ones about the fandom, ones about conspiracy theories, ones about anything you can think of! If we can work it into a scene, we will!
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hazbinhotelexpansion · 7 months ago
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With Episode two coming up, we have a crucial problem to solve: Are the Vees Dating???
Vivienne says no. Vox and Val make out in the finale. The fandom widely agrees that they’re dating.
So which should we write?
Please reblog if you vote :3
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hazbinhotelexpansion · 7 months ago
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With Episode two coming up, we have a crucial problem to solve: Are the Vees Dating???
Vivienne says no. Vox and Val make out in the finale. The fandom widely agrees that they’re dating.
So which should we write?
Please reblog if you vote :3
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hazbinhotelexpansion · 7 months ago
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bring back tumblr ask culture let me. bother you with questions and statements
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hazbinhotelexpansion · 7 months ago
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hazbinhotelexpansion · 7 months ago
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Oh I was BORN to answer your request, prepare for all of my random discord quotes
Are you climbing the inside of the elevator??? ..........maybe
"I want them Zoloft boys"
"ok I think the phone has been in the microwave long enough"
She could run a kingdom, people would listen to her, she's very loud!
I'll sop your wet! ... I'll wet your sop? No, neither of those sound right, joke canceled, goodbye
You know me I love dead people
You want me to go straight to bed? Why not gay to bed???
"this tastes like battery acid, but if battery acid was tasty"
Gusty showers sounds like a terrible name for a retirement community
What happens if you have nipple pasties that just look like nipples? "Then you need nipple pasties for your nipple pasties" Nipple-pasty-ception "Get a bra that looks like boobs and put nipple pasties on that"
Yeah I'm like canonically allergic to chihuahuas in specific
"Jesus told a tree to off itself and then he threw a table"
"am I a Honda or a person?"
"NOW GIVE ME YOUR FACE AND DONT ASK QUESTIONS"
Gasp! Someone cheesed him!
WHY WOULD YOU MAKE MY LITTLE BOY INTO LEMONADE
"using my telekinesis to lift my daughter out of her crib just in time for her father to see her levitating randomly"
"why are we talking about bacon now I thought we were talking about your daddy issues"
I do not have a gender, I have a question
oh pants stopped happening like 30 minutes ago
just calling me Charizard is unhelpful team
I AM THE PICASSO OF MEMES
Ope there goes angel climbing into the China closet again
EVIL JELLO MY NEW GENDER
"I have a *weird* problem, are you ready to hear about my *weird* problem" "always" "my brownies are too oily"
"Before I can own a pigeon, I need to get my bird permit" Your..... Birdmit
It doesn't have to be a bunch of sad white women drinking wine sitting in a rented conference room with a bunch of tables all done up in tablecloths with droopy streamers and half floating balloons
he can be a soft boi *and* a crackhead!!!
"they're Jean shoes" YOU GOT THE FUCKIN JHOES???
Please refrain from happy biting the cannibal
WOOHOO KEVIN GOT BOOPS
Two pigeons, chilling on the sidewalk, five feet apart cause they're not gay
"you're watching a weiner schnitzel be made? Isn't that a dog?"
"she wouldn't hit a cows arse with a banjo"
About husk: probably grumpy enough to overpower catnip by the sheer force of cynicism
About niffty being drunk: she's a spastic caffeinated squirrel in traffic that's just taken a nice long inhale of, uh, snow
no actually I think you're right! I like my impulsive, self destructive behaviors
don't turn yourself into one of those cooked children in the backseat you're always hearing about, Pls don't cook yourself over your trauma
YEAH WE HAVE CHILD LABOR ON THIS BUS!
Mickey mouse voice: you can't spell drunk driving without U and I!
He has the mcdonald's headset of infinite wisdom
*angrily* IM GONNA TURN YOU INTO TREE FOOD
Sudden vox in my head: and now introducing, this.... Fuckin thing..... *gestures to cursed cat alastor on a small runway behind him*
HOPE THESE HELP YOU GUYS IM LOOKING FORWARD TO SEEING THE NEW CONTENT!
Friend, I am
CRYING
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hazbinhotelexpansion · 7 months ago
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Hazbin Hotel Expansion Pack ask game
we are working on introducing our Egg Bois, and we need more ridiculous shit for them to say!
submit any random ass quote you can think of, ones about the fandom, ones about conspiracy theories, ones about anything you can think of! If we can work it into a scene, we will!
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hazbinhotelexpansion · 7 months ago
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I don't know who you are, but I see ask game and I want in.
let's see...
let's go with "ice"
that seems fitting enough.
You, my friend, are the first person to guess a word that's in our second chapter (mostly because we only have like 2 paragraphs in it so far)
Ice
"A pair of eyes fell on the sinner from behind, rendering him still and silent. He felt, he thought, the same way a rabbit felt upon seeing a wolf. The gaze behind him was purposeful, confident, and icey.
It came closer.
"Excuse me gentlemen!""
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hazbinhotelexpansion · 7 months ago
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Dreams
Dreams
“The book weighed heavy in Charlie’s hands, its promises and dreams resting between her fingers. She regarded it solemnly, taking a breath in before finally closing its pages.”
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hazbinhotelexpansion · 7 months ago
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Chapter 1 out now!
We just published our first chapter over on mama_tot's (@potato-mother) Archive Of Our Own account! here's the link below
Our Expansion Pack is dedicated to creating a canon compliant but largely expanded retelling of The Hazbin Hotel by Viviene Madrano. There will be 12 chapters total to depict the first season (and we may continue this for season two when it's out). This first episode follows the plot of Episode 1: Overture.
Please leave a comment here or on the work about what you would like to see more of in our rendition!
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hazbinhotelexpansion · 7 months ago
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My Favorite Lines from Chapter 1; part 4/4
"“No. No. Hold on, I said let me stop you.” Adam waved his hand up again, keeping it in front of her face. “As in, you’re done talking now.”
“No I’m-”
Adam continued without pause. “Yes you are.""
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"“I can’t think of a single bitch who hasn’t.” The overlord’s cheery cockney accent was hard to understand sometimes, but Vox had grown used to it. “What’s your take on the situation?”"
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"“What’d you learn?”
“Dead.” the angel shivered. “One of us is dead.”"
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hazbinhotelexpansion · 7 months ago
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My Favorite Lines from Chapter 1; part 3/4
 “Ugly people? Nah, math? Global warming? No, wait, that’s earth’s problem. Oh! Fanfiction writers!”
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A smart man would make money off of it.
Vox was the smartest man he knew.
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Charlie drew a breath, and considered counting how many more she had left.
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