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that chapter didn’t happen 🫶 i don’t know anyone named gege akutami the only jjk i know is The Odyssey series by hotcocoaaa <3

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Dming you to yell about omega logan

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this tiktok made me think of you… i feel like if ACD megumi was a bit older and knew about gojo’s first life he would call him a boomer https://vm.tiktok.com/ZGeqsjAC4/

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OH MY GOD

been reading achilles come down & the other fics in that series by @biscaanii / @biscaani & i am honestly obsessed. so of course i doodled some things inspired by it uwu

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some more doodles inspired by @biscaanii /@biscaani 's odyssey series bc im still rotating everything in my head at all times...fix it fic of all time truly

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Hey hey hey 👋 ☺️ Just wanted to say how much I love love LOVE the Achilles Come Down series- seriously (get it), what an absolute masterpiece! Had me sucked up and fixated for days bro, just sasusho brainrot. Nothing else. Head empty. I was listening to some music on the way to work the other day, and came across the song RED by Survive said the Prophet, and couldn't help but compare it to the first part of the series and how I felt like it really related to Gojo's situation. I recommend checking it out when you have time- or not. :) Either way, you're cool. I hope you have the most amazing day! Sending love and support! <3

Aw thank you :) yeah I can definitely see it, it's a great song, but man that brainrot must be real bad to make that connection after you finished the story, lmao. Thank you for the nice message <3

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Hi! I just wanted to tell you that I don't think I've ever fallen in love with a fic before the way I did with your Odyssey series! I think it has become my favourite fanfiction of all time!!!!! You're an incredible writer, thank you for your work!!

Thank you!! I try my best haha. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much :)

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hi!!! i found your Tumblr while rereading Achilles come down and I just HAD to tell you how much I love your story!!! I'd found it when I was in a satosugu angst spiral (a long while ago tbh) and your fic healed me in ways I didn't even know I needed healing. i remember crying midway through the first book and the feelings I've felt throughout the story are just... yeah.

words can't express how much your story and writing means to me!! i especially adore the depth of your writing, and how you broke all the characters down to their cores and just... the characterization is soo on point!! i love the complexity of the emotions, and especially how their powers tie into their beliefs as people. IDK HOW TO EXPLAIN IT AHJDHWJD but just know that I really, really love your characterization.

also the way you analyze and explain cursed techniques in the three books is just so awesome!! like the first time I read the scene with satoru's new, changed domain, it was definitely a galaxy brain moment!! and just everything else sorcery related!!! the sygils, the tattoos,,, I love the world building you did bc it only made the story richer and just,,, yeah. ESPECIALLY THE STRING THEORY I WAS LITERALLY ROLLING AROUND ON THE FLOOR WITH HOW MUCH IT MADE SENSE!!! (and the sticky atoms, can never forget how that changed my perspective of a lot of things).

man I hope I make sense, im just rambling at this point abjdsnkfn. what I want to say is that I love your story, the angst, hurt/comfort, and fluff are top tier and I would very politely like to know how your brain works (in the most respectful manner ofc).

thank you for sharing it with the world!! i will most likely end up rereading the story every once in a while (and please don't feel pressured to post the next part quickly, take care of yourself because we are all willing to wait however long it takes) 💖💖💖

aww thank you. I appreciate it. Honestly I can't believe you guys are still re-reading them, I respect the dedication at least sjjhs. Uhhhh my brain is an unfathomable place I'm not very certain I could describe. Much like your mom's infinite coat closet. Or something who knows. Thanks again for the kind words :)

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No one had said anything, because no one had been there but Suguru when Satoru had swayed nearly to his feet and then frozen, straightening back up in a way that didn’t allow for gravity, looking up to the sky like he’d never seen it before. It had almost been a relief to carry his unconscious body to the infirmary, because he hadn’t been conscious to fall to his knees again looking like he’d seen hell itself. 

—Achilles Come Down, Chapter 3, by HotCocoaaa ( @biscaani )

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...my hand slipped again guys. I love this song and I loved this imagery.

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“Oh, your love is sunlight”

—Hozier, Sunlight

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And the reason comes on the common tongue of your loving me

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I wanted to start off by saying, I love your work. I finished Achilles Come Down months ago and can’t stop re-reading.

I know this is probably a silly question to ask but how did you learn how to write so well? You’re writing so beautiful and I would love any tips. ( If you would like to share of course)

Thank you

Hi! Aw, thank you. Im glad you like it :)

Short answer: write and read a lot. Like a loooot.

Long answer: I grew up reading as a kid to the point my mom would unscrew the lightbulb in my closet because she'd catch me reading late at night in it. It was my main hobby, so I learned a lot of literary basics really young just by the principle of seeing them in action a lot. I discovered fanon spaces around 6th grade, which was when I started to write actual stories, so what you're looking at is pretty much the process of 11 years of experience.

The best advice I can give you is just write. Put down any idea you want to see regardless of if it's long or short. I learned because I did, you know? The main reason I was able to finish Achilles when I was 18 was because the year prior during lockdown, I'd tried writing a 100k long fic for the first time that to this day is still a fucking mess. It was a forever failure, yeah, but it also taught me all the skills I needed to actually finish my next long fic- Achilles. (And Redemption).

In my opinion, getting really good at writing is really just getting good at understanding your specific quirks. Off the top of my head example, but I write in present tense pretty much exclusively, because it's the same as my natural flow of thought. Trying to write in past participle or past present is difficult for me to do in large or quick quantities because it misaligns to how I'm thinking in the moment. Figure out what kind of language you like to use- prose? Quick and to the point? Some weird in between? Do you like to over-use dialogue tags? Under-use them? What do you like to write about? Who do you like to write about? Are you exploring a character's emotional arc, a physical arc, something else? These types of question are what will guide your story because they're the foundation of why and how your story is happening, and through what means it will happen. Are you writing a romance or a thriller? What will give the reader a better picture, the internal thoughts of a character or the external imagery of their enviornment/actions? What's most important to the story's resolution? To the character's resolution? What will make this story satisfying? How can you tie all your plotlines together to reach a consistent and sensible conclusion?

And most importantly, what do you specifically want to get out of your writing? If you're only writing so others can validate your work, it'll be more difficult to continue writing if you've got low engagement. Also, cringe is dead. It's stupid to feel self-concious about anything you're writing, because that feeling will hold you back. Write whatever ideas you want because you want to see them, not necessarily because others will read it and judge you. It's not like you ever have to show it to anyone.

I write what I want, when I want, and how I want it. It's 100% self-indulgent and because of that, I'm writing mainly to read it back to myself, which makes it fun because I'm getting exactly what I want to see out of the story both as it forms and then once it's put to paper. I'm also a total anomaly though because my only hobby is writing, so my weekends are pretty much spent sat on google docs from like, morning until midnight. The fact that I've churned out three long fics so quickly is an outlier and should not be counted because im a gremlin with nothing else to do.

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Achilles, Come Down by HotCocoaaa

Pls someone read this fic i need to talk to someone abt it the writing is literally 🤌

“He’d wanted to die, had been glad for it even, and maybe he can’t remember how to be human but he does remember being a god… He can’t remember how to live, when he’s spent his whole life wanting to die. ”

“Otherwise, you’ve got nothing to do but be exceedingly gay together.” - love shoko

“Satoru from spilling out of his bed like a clumpy liquid” - how i get out of bed

“It’s almost a little funny how angelic he always looks. To every unsuspecting person, he’s pretty, refined, a face seen more in a fashion magazine than one out on the street. No one who sees him in passing would ever guess at what a huge, walking annoyance Satoru makes himself out to be on a day to day basis.”

“It’s not gay if I don’t think about it,’ he chants in his head, ” - 🫣

“Tell me what you’re thinking?” Suguru asks, endearing and earnest and always a blessing, no matter how much red had been dripping from his hands. ”

“because Satoru’s just as human as him, and Suguru knows that. ”

“Where and how the leopard print tie becomes fashionable remains a mystery to him. ” - hehe nanamin

“He likes pretty people, but he is a pretty person. He likes Suguru, but that’s a given. ”

“It’s easy to take you for granted.” Suguru frowns at that, knowing how disgustingly true it is, and yet unable to find it within himself to be mad about it. Satoru is a commodity, and he’s overlooked. What else is new? ”

“He trusts in Suguru even when he’s nothing but an apparition in the prison of a body. ” - 😭

“When they’d been children sent to die; children marching off to war; children being given the blade and told to paint the world red. Nobody had ever cared that they’d only been kids. Nobody but him. ”

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idk what this is supposed to be im ngl the fic its based on (achilles come down by HotCocoaaa, legit the best satoru death fic ive ever read) isnt even like this lmao but whatever. i love me bloody gory people <3

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“I made her feel powerless, I knocked her down and— and she still makes me feel scared.” —Satoru, So Find One And Seize It, Chapter 5

So a consequence of rereading Chapters 4 and 5 of SFOASI from The Odyssey series by the utterly incredible HotCocoaaa ( @biscaanii ) and then listening to Hawk in the Night by Maddie Buckley soon afterward is getting immediate brainrot for the most depressingly brutal piece I could start 2024 with. It worked too well for the Gojo Clan, especially Cocoa's rendition of Satoru and his grandmother, Akemi. She's a terrible woman and she fascinates me.

Go read this series guys it's so great—

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i’m just stoked for season two ok

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soft moment

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