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Is there a fic

That Misa got the death note from Rem earlier enough for her to take matter into her own hand, then upon she've done her revenge, she figured it's enough and never used the note again, but didn't relinquish ownership cause she wants Rem to stay

And when Kira appeared, she decided to help the task force, or done her own investigation to catch them

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Instead of "Said", consider

replied

stated

exclaimed

remarked

declared

mentioned

commented

responded

articulated

noted

announced

asserted

observed

suggested

opined

acknowledged

claimed

professed

explained

affirmed

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“Oh,” They giggled, cheeks pink.

“Oh!” They gasped, hands to their mouth in horror.

“Oh,” they whined, gripping their hair in frustration.

“Oh,” they breathed, head back and lashes fluttering.

“Oh,” they mumbled, shifting awkwardly.

“Oh,” they deadpanned, arms crossed.

“Oh?” they asked, brow arched and smile bitter.

“Oh,” they chided with a smirk.

“Oh?” they asked, head tilted curiously.

“Oh!” they hissed, scrambling away.

“Oh,” they mumbled, rubbing their neck.

“Oh,” they uttered, eyes wide in awe.

“Oh,” they muttered with an ill-impressed frown.

“Oh!” They cried, throwing their arms around them.

“Oh,” they goaded, smiling mischievously.

“Oh,” they taunted, skipping backwards.

“Oh,” they snarked, hands on their hips.

“Oh,” they breathed, putting it all together.

“Oh,” they said softly, hugging themselves.

“Oh,” they whispered, holding back tears.

“Oh!” they gasped, ducking out of the way.

“Oh,” they uttered, and smacked their forehead.

“Oh,” they laughed, brows wiggling.

“Oh,” they tittered, batting their lashes.

“Oh,” they hissed, gritting their teeth.

"Oh."

Tag your dialogue.

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words to use instead of ________

"Mad"

aggravated, angry, annoyed, boiling, cross, enraged, exasperated, fuming, furious, heated, incensed, indignant, irate, irritable, livid, offended, outraged, riled, steamed, storming, upset

"Nice"

amiable, charming, cordial, courteous, delightful, favorable, friendly, genial, gentle, gracious, helpful. inviting, kind, lovely, obliging, peaceful, peachy, pleasant, polite, swell, sympathetic, tender, welcoming, well-mannered, winning

"Pretty"

alluring, appealing, attractive, beautiful, charming, cute, delightful, desirable, elegant, eye-catching, fair, fascinating, gorgeous, graceful, intriguing, lovely, pleasing, striking, stunning, sweet

"Said"

alleged, argued, asked, asserted, babbled, bellowed, bragged, commented, complained, cried, declined, demanded, denied, encouraged, expressed, giggled, growled, inquired, moaned, nagged, rebuked, rebutted, replied, rejected, retorted, roared, scolded, shrieked, shrugged, stated, taunted, vowed, warned, whined, whispered, yelled

"Went"

avoid, bolt, bound, depart, exit, escape, flee, fly, hike, hop, jaunt, jolt, journey, leap, leave, lurch, march, mosey, move, pace, parade, pass, progress, retreat, saunter, scoot, skip, split, step, stride, stroll, tour, travel, vanish

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HOW TO WRITE A CHARACTER WHO IS IN PAIN

first thing you might want to consider: is the pain mental or physical?

if it’s physical, what type of pain is it causing? — sharp pain, white-hot pain, acute pain, dull ache, throbbing pain, chronic pain, neuropathic pain (typically caused by nerve damage), etc

if it’s mental, what is the reason your character is in pain? — grief, heartbreak, betrayal, anger, hopelessness, fear and anxiety, etc

because your character will react differently to different types of pain

PHYSICAL PAIN

sharp and white-hot pain may cause a character to grit their teeth, scream, moan, twist their body. their skin may appear pale, eyes red-rimmed and sunken with layers of sweat covering their forehead. they may have tears in their eyes (and the tears may feel hot), but they don’t necessarily have to always be crying.

acute pain may be similar to sharp and white-hot pain; acute pain is sudden and urgent and often comes without a warning, so your character may experience a hitched breathing where they suddenly stop what they’re doing and clench their hand at the spot where it hurts with widened eyes and open mouth (like they’re gasping for air).

dull ache and throbbing pain can result in your character wanting to lay down and close their eyes. if it’s a headache, they may ask for the lights to be turned off and they may be less responsive, in the sense that they’d rather not engage in any activity or conversation and they’d rather be left alone. they may make a soft whimper from their throat from time to time, depends on their personality (if they don’t mind others seeing their discomfort, they may whimper. but if your character doesn’t like anyone seeing them in a not-so-strong state, chances are they won’t make any sound, they might even pretend like they’re fine by continuing with their normal routine, and they may or may not end up throwing up or fainting).

if your character experience chronic pain, their pain will not go away (unlike any other illnesses or injuries where the pain stops after the person is healed) so they can feel all these types of sharp pain shooting through their body. there can also be soreness and stiffness around some specific spots, and it will affect their life. so your character will be lucky if they have caretakers in their life. but are they stubborn? do they accept help from others or do they like to pretend like they’re fine in front of everybody until their body can’t take it anymore and so they can no longer pretend?

neuropathic pain or nerve pain will have your character feeling these senses of burning, shooting and stabbing sensation, and the pain can come very suddenly and without any warning — think of it as an electric shock that causes through your character’s body all of a sudden. your character may yelp or gasp in shock, how they react may vary depends on the severity of the pain and how long it lasts.

EMOTIONAL PAIN

grief can make your character shut themself off from their friends and the world in general. or they can also lash out at anyone who tries to comfort them. (five states of grief: denial, anger, bargaining, depression and eventual acceptance.)

heartbreak — your character might want to lock themself in a room, anywhere where they are unseen. or they may want to pretend that everything’s fine, that they’re not hurt. until they break down.

betrayal can leave a character with confusion, the feelings of ‘what went wrong?’, so it’s understandable if your character blames themself at first, that maybe it’s their fault because they’ve somehow done something wrong somewhere that caused the other character to betray them. what comes after confusion may be anger. your character can be angry at the person who betrayed them and at themself, after they think they’ve done something wrong that resulted in them being betrayed, they may also be angry at themself next for ‘falling’ for the lies and for ‘being fooled’. so yes, betrayal can leave your character with the hatred that’s directed towards the character who betrayed them and themself. whether or not your character can ‘move on and forgive’ is up to you.

there are several ways a character can react to anger; they can simply lash out, break things, scream and yell, or they can also go complete silent. no shouting, no thrashing the place. they can sit alone in silence and they may cry. anger does make people cry. it mostly won’t be anything like ‘ugly sobbing’ but your character’s eyes can be bloodshot, red-rimmed and there will be tears, only that there won’t be any sobbing in most cases.

hopelessness can be a very valid reason for it, if you want your character to do something reckless or stupid. most people will do anything if they’re desperate enough. so if you want your character to run into a burning building, jump in front of a bullet, or confess their love to their archenemy in front of all their friends, hopelessness is always a valid reason. there’s no ‘out of character’ if they are hopeless and are desperate enough.

fear and anxiety. your character may be trembling, their hands may be shaky. they may lose their appetite. they may be sweaty and/or bouncing their feet. they may have a panic attack if it’s severe enough.

and I think that’s it for now! feel free to add anything I may have forgotten to mention here!

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Random AU idea I just got

So basically, Alejandro and Sierra are paid actors to stir the drama. However…

1.Alejandro and Heather are friends

2.Heather and Sierra are dating

3.Alejandro is secretly dating someone who will also join season three (haven't decided who) and doesn't want his family to know

So anyway, Chris, who doesn't know any of these, decided it's a good idea to let the new antagonist have a crush on someone, so Alejandro found Heather and asked her to be his fake love interest

Heather: I mean, if you don't mind my girlfriend might trying to kill you…

Alejandro: What?

Meanwhile, Sierra on the phone with Chris: What did you mean I have to be obsessed with a twink?

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someone edit bridgettes face on a brige for me

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First season done!!!!

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I forgot Zoey is wearing a flowers and thought it's a 💢 on her head

uwiehfuwer

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Obsessed with what hypothetical terror trio Noah Izzy and Sierra would look like

This is how I envision the Terror Trio becoming friends.

* In the Celebrity Manhunt episode, Sierra mentions a rumour about Noah having false teeth- it's later revealed that Izzy's the one who's been feeding Sierra 'information' on the cast. So Izzy was the one to spread the rumour. That's why Noah gives her a look here, he knows Izzy's been airing his secrets.

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These are all the duos that didnt make action!

VOTE AWAY!!!!

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I just posted the fiftieth, aka the last aftermath chapter of my swap fic

The finale is going to happen! Finally! Why would I think writing two long fic in the same time is a good idea!?

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If we have blue moon every night in Island or AS will be hilarious

that one episode of all stars with the moon except a whole au

specifically so i can see owen be a rude fuckboy thatd be hilarious

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I finally had time to finish it, so let's continue

Anyway, after some trial and error, he figured out how his dream work:

1.He need to experiment the dreamt scene before he went unconsciousness again(included but not limited to: fall asleep, fainted, dead), or else he will wake up at the same time again

2.Context of how that scene happened can be ignored (like if he saw he had bruises in dream, he can fulfill the prediction by either using the makeup or just go on his day as normal and let his toe hit the table)

3.Whether the scene is self-made or happened naturally, everything have look the same in his perspective. In other word, he can change what's going on by using the blinds spot

So he survived the stab by putting a plank and a bag of fake blood inside his shirt. That's how he learned how precognitive dream work

This idea have two extension:

One being Harold start dream about his friends dying in the very brutal way, and he had to prevent the worst happen even though people will probably think he's insane. This can happen both on the island or highschool AU

The other is during his time on the show, the dream have become longer and longer, with lot more details and some stuff that's not even supposed to happen. Harold don't know what causes this annoying change, all he knows that it's probably have something to do with the show or the island since the dream have back to normal after he got voted out. So he thought this just a one time thing, everything will be fine after he got home

And then the night before TDDDDI, he had the thirty minutes dream, with great detail telling him what to do. And announced that he will stuck in this show for much longer

Harold is so fed up, but there's nothing he can do except complain to Heather. He didn't expect she will believe him or anything, he just tell her because she's there, and it's not like she will remember after everything reset

So imagine his suprise when Heather told him that she also had the script controlling her act

The story is about they discover that some of the campers(or all, or maybe the hosts are involved. I haven't go into the details) have some sort of 'prediction' need to follow. Like Gwen will sleep sketching and Noah will sleep writing…that all I have for now

Okay so when I was reading the WT biographies, I noticed Harold's craziest dream is same as his most embarrassing moment at school. That lead me to this weird idea of Harold can see the future in his dreams, but not just simple as that

TW: mention of blood and murder attempt

Everytime he goes to sleep, there will we one very vivid scene in his dreams that he will remember after waking up, and that scene will definitely happen before he go to sleep again. Harold never tried to avoid what will happen since it just some harmless stuff, plus some dream he had just so absurd that he just have to know the context

Until one day he dreamt that he got stabbed right at the heart, blood soaking his shirt and hoodie, brown wooden knife handle sticking out of his chest. The culprit being a drunk old man(or maybe he's on drug? it's really hard to tell with the blurred vision), standing in front of him

Harold is scared, so he did the most rational decision——not leave his house for the whole day, hoping he can escape that future

And he did! He didn't get stab for the whole day, he stay in his room and had the most peaceful sunday ever. So he went to sleep, no dream in the night for the first time of his life

When he wakes up, ready for school and the whole new week. His mother look at him and said

"It's rare to see you up so early in sunday"

That's when Harold realises that he's stuck in the time loops, and the only way for him to escape is to recreate the scene he dreamt

(To be continued…)

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Okay so when I was reading the WT biographies, I noticed Harold's craziest dream is same as his most embarrassing moment at school. That lead me to this weird idea of Harold can see the future in his dreams, but not just simple as that

TW: mention of blood and murder attempt

Everytime he goes to sleep, there will we one very vivid scene in his dreams that he will remember after waking up, and that scene will definitely happen before he go to sleep again. Harold never tried to avoid what will happen since it just some harmless stuff, plus some dream he had just so absurd that he just have to know the context

Until one day he dreamt that he got stabbed right at the heart, blood soaking his shirt and hoodie, brown wooden knife handle sticking out of his chest. The culprit being a drunk old man(or maybe he's on drug? it's really hard to tell with the blurred vision), standing in front of him

Harold is scared, so he did the most rational decision——not leave his house for the whole day, hoping he can escape that future

And he did! He didn't get stab for the whole day, he stay in his room and had the most peaceful sunday ever. So he went to sleep, no dream in the night for the first time of his life

When he wakes up, ready for school and the whole new week. His mother look at him and said

"It's rare to see you up so early in sunday"

That's when Harold realises that he's stuck in the time loops, and the only way for him to escape is to recreate the scene he dreamt

(To be continued…)

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We need a Total Drama character who has the Chinese character for "soup" on their shirt. They claim it means "courage" and everyone else knows it doesn't, without necessarily knowing what it means. They actually know it means soup and they're just playing dumb to seem more naive and less of a threat

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Few idea I got but too lazy to go into detail and make it actual fic

Drama Class, Alejandro x Harold

So basically, the class have to act a medieval story for an big event. Alejandro wrote the script but he didn't tell anyone what the story is when, saying he wants it to be a 'surprise'. That result in everyone have to picked their character without knowing how it'll play except 1.Alejandro will be the prince and 2.He need to kiss someone on stage

While everyone are fighting for the princess role thinking it's the character get to kiss the prince. Harold volunteers for playing the knight, because he's satisfied just staying at the side assists his love

And the script turn out to be the love story between the prince and his knight

Dress code, Raj x Bowie

So a teacher told Emma her skirt is too short, and Bowie stood up for his friend

Bowie: You said anything above knee length is against the rule, doesn't that mean they (point at hockey bros) also breaking the rule?

Wayne: He's right, our shorts is too short!

Teacher: It's different, they didn't distract anyone

Bowie: You're wrong ma'am, cause I think they distract ME!

Bowie: (To Raj) And by the way, this is my number

Raj: Thanks…?

The most random first meet, Mike & Cameron(not exactly a ship idea cause this is too stupid)

Mike who's doing the dare: Excuse me, did you mind if I pick you up lion king style and walking around the school while singing Circle of Life?

Cameron, first day at school: What???

So I kind of want to make a serial killer AU, Sierra x Heather

Sierra ready to strangle Heather from the back: You know, this date is pretty nice…

Heather suddenly turn around with a knife in hand: Too bad it'll be your LAST!

Sierra:

Heather:

Heather: Okay this is awkward, let's just go home and pretend this never happened