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The book opened with the words:

“I am Aaliyah. Today, I am 18 years old, and my birthday preparations are being done in a very grand manner by my father. The entire palace is decorated, and the people are invited for a feast. I am very happy and sitting by the window of my room, observing everything, while I write this book.”

Ali was deeply engrossed in the story. He wondered if he should take the book home and read it carefully. So, he took the book and a few coins home. He gave his mother the coins and said, Look, this is my earnings for today.

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*Burnig Heart: Fuljha Kill Zuko**

Once upon a time, there was a young man named Fuljha. One day he rode his horse and set out into the jungle for hunting. Passing through dense, winding paths, he reached an open field, where he saw a zebra from a distance.

Fuljha picked up his bow, pulled an arrow and aimed it at the zebra. But as soon as the arrow headed towards its target, the zebra ran away. Without stopping, Fuljha shot the arrow once, twice and even a third time, but each time the zebra managed to escape. Fuljha, immersed in the thrill of the hunt, continued to chase the zebra relentlessly. Running through the jungle, they finally reached the other side, where there was a small village.

When Fuljha reached an open field near the village chasing the zebra, he saw a girl running towards him. Her name was Jugnu. Fuljha, lost in the excitement of the hunt, did not see her, but still shot the arrow. This time the arrow hit the target-the zebra fell to the ground.

Jugnu ran to the fallen zebra, jumped on top of it and started crying uncontrollably. The zebra named Zuko was her beloved pet. Fulja immediately realized her mistake at this sight. She put her bow and arrow on the ground and stood there, repentant. Her heart melted at the sight of Jugnu's tear-stained face.

Fulja tried to explain:

**“Forgive me... I didn't know it was your pet. I'll do anything to make it up to you. Just tell me what you want.”**

But Jugnu's anger was not subsiding. Her eyes were filled with tears and she was burning with anger as she screamed:

**“You killed my Zuko! What did he do to you? Who gave you the right to take his life?”**

Fulja could only repeat:

**“It was a mistake. I didn't know... Please forgive me. I will do anything to atone for this.”**

However, Jugnu's anger grew even stronger. She began pushing him and screaming:

**“Excuse me? I will kill you with my own hands!”**

Fulzha could feel her anguish. She was overwhelmed with grief, and he could not bring himself to fight back. Instead, he stood silently, tears streaming down his cheeks. He did his best to console her, but Jugnu kept hitting him, crying uncontrollably.

Meanwhile, the people of the village armed with sticks, prepared to avenge Zuko's death. Seeing them approach, Fulzha realized he had no choice but to leave.

He walked to his horse, mounted it, and fled, leaving the village behind.

Fulzha stayed behind, sitting beside Zuko's lifeless body, mourning his departure. Fulzha, running into the dense forest, was overwhelmed with guilt. He had made a terrible mistake, and now its weight weighed heavy on his heart as he disappeared into the shadows of the forest.

Will Fuljha ever come back and apologize?

And how will he pay for Zuko's life?

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Echo Dream - Ep-02 @VoomComix

कई दिनों बाद, राहिल की आँख खुली। घर में खुशी का माहौल था। लेकिन एक बात अजीब थी—राहिल के पास से कोई एक मिनट के लिए भी दूर होता, तो वह तेज़ चीखने लगती। उसकी आवाज़ बिल्कुल वैसी थी, जैसे कुएं के अंदर से आती है।

धीरे-धीरे समय बीतता गया, और राहिल ठीक होती गई। कुछ महीनों बाद वह ठीक तो हो गई, लेकिन उसमें अजीब बदलाव आ चुके थे। वह अब हमेशा किसी कोने में रहना पसंद करती। वह डर-डर कर जीने लगी थी। न उसे धूप पसंद थी, न कोई दोस्त, न परिवार से लगाव था, न किसी रिश्तेदार से। वह बस चुप रहना चाहती थी।

स्कूल में भी, वह हमेशा एक कोने में बैठी रहती। न पढ़ाई में मन लगता, न दोस्तों से बात करती। धीरे-धीरे स्कूल के बच्चे उससे डरने लगे। उसके अजीब से बाल और घूरने की आदत ने उसे और अजीब बना दिया। अगर कोई उसके पास बैठता, तो वह उसे ऐसी नज़रों से देखती, जैसे उसे जान से मार देगी।

हालात इतने बिगड़ गए कि स्कूल वालों ने उसे पढ़ाने से मना कर दिया। उन्होंने कहा कि उसकी वजह से बच्चे स्कूल छोड़ने की धमकी दे रहे हैं।

घर पर भी राहिल के परिवार वाले उसकी हरकतों से परेशान हो गए थे। अब राहिल के पास जाने से उनके अपने परिवार को भी डर लगने लगा था। वह आधी रात को कुएं के पास चली जाती और वहीं खड़ी रहती। सुबह घरवाले उसे वापस लाते। उसकी माँ बस उसे देखकर रोती रहतीं, क्योंकि वह उनकी इकल���ती बेटी थी।

थक हारकर, परिवार ने किसी ओझा को बुलाने का फैसला किया। किसी को शक नहीं था कि राहिल पर किसी आत्मा का साया है।

ओझा ने आकर राहिल से बात करने की कोशिश की। लेकिन राहिल चुप रही। न कोई आवाज़, न कोई डर, बस चुपचाप वह वही करती, जो ओझा कहता।

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Echo Dream- Episode 01 @voomcomix

Darr Bohot Zaruri Hota Hai. Baap ka ho ya apne liye kiye hue paap ka, darr toh darr hota hai. Lekin kuch darr aise bhi hote hain jo tumhe sirf raat ke andhere mein darate hain. Hum unhe kalpanik darr kahte hain.

Esa hi ek darr mein jee rahi thi ek ladki, Rahil. Rahil ek aisi ladki thi jisne chhoti si umar mein ek aisi ghatna dekhi thi jo ek bade se bada insaan dekhe toh uski rooh tak kanp uthe.

Rahil ke bachpan ka woh shaam:

Rahil sirf 6 saal ki thi. Ek shaam wo apne doston ke saath chhupan-chhupai khelte-khelte gayab ho gayi. Doston ne socha, “Shayad wo ghar chali gayi hogi,” aur andhera hote hi sab apne ghar chale gaye.

Par ghar pahunchkar pata chala ki Rahil wahan nahi thi. Uske gharwalon ne har jagah dhundha, lekin Rahil ka koi pata nahi chala. Ek hafta beet gaya, Par uske gharwale ab bhi har jagah use dhoondh rahe the, unhone ummeed nahi chhodi thi.

Fir ek din…

Ek din subah, gaon ke paas wale kue se ek ajeeb si chillane ki awaaz sunayi di. Awaaz darawani thi, jaise koi zindagi ki bheekh maang raha ho.

Kue ke paas ke charwaho ne jab wo awaaz suni, toh woh bhagte hue kue ke paas aaye. Itni darawani aur bhayanak awaaz sun ke wo bhi dar gaye. Dheere dheere gaon ke log jama hone lage. Har koi dar ke kue mein jhank raha tha. Neeche sirf andhera tha aur chillane ki awaaz aa rahi thi. Gaon ke kuch logon ne kue mein jaane ka faisla kiya. Jab wo kue ke andar gaye, toh awaaz achanak band ho gayi.

Bahar sab un logon ke liye dua kar rahe the ki unhe kuch na ho. Thodi der baad kue ki rassi hilne lagi. Gaon walo ne rassi kheenchna shuru kiya aur dekha ki Rahil us rassi se kamar par bandhi hui latak rahi thi. kue me se 4 log bahar Aa chuke the. ek admi ko abhi bhi nikalne ki taiyyari chal rahi thi. Rahil ki saansein chal rahi thi, lekin uska sharir bilkul sukh gaya tha. Uski twacha pe kale-kale daag the, aur uski halat dekh kar sabki raaton ki neend udd gayi.

Doctors usse turant hospital le gaye, lekin Rahil hosho-hawaas mein nahi thi. Doctors samajh nahi paa rahe the ki uske saath kya hua hai. Wo zinda thi, lekin jaise uski atma use chhod kar ja chuki thi.

Doctors ne 2 din tak lagatar koshish ki, par uski aankhein nahi khul rahi thi. Rahil jaise ek ajeeb si neend mein thi jo maut aur zindagi ke beech latakti hui lag rahi thi.

Rahil ke saath kya hua hoga?

Wo kue mein kaise gayi hogi?

Ek hafte tak bina khaye piye wo kaise zinda rahi hogi?

Aur uske sharir pe kale daag kyun hue honge?

Is raaz ka pata lagane ke liye, Episode 2 zarur padhein.

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Echo Dream- Episode 01 @VoomComix

December 05, 2024

Echo Dream - Episode 01

Darr Bohot Zaruri Hota Hai. Baap ka ho ya apne liye kiye hue paap ka, darr toh darr hota hai. Lekin kuch darr aise bhi hote hain jo tumhe sirf raat ke andhere mein darate hain. Hum unhe kalpanik darr kahte hain.

Esa hi ek darr mein jee rahi thi ek ladki, Rahil. Rahil ek aisi ladki thi jisne chhoti si umar mein ek aisi ghatna dekhi thi jo ek bade se bada insaan dekhe toh uski rooh tak kanp uthe.

Rahil ke bachpan ka woh shaam:

Rahil sirf 6 saal ki thi. Ek shaam wo apne doston ke saath chhupan-chhupai khelte-khelte gayab ho gayi. Doston ne socha, “Shayad wo ghar chali gayi hogi,” aur andhera hote hi sab apne ghar chale gaye.

Par ghar pahunchkar pata chala ki Rahil wahan nahi thi. Uske gharwalon ne har jagah dhundha, lekin Rahil ka koi pata nahi chala. Ek hafta beet gaya, Par uske gharwale ab bhi har jagah use dhoondh rahe the, unhone ummeed nahi chhodi thi.

Fir ek din…

Ek din subah, gaon ke paas wale kue se ek ajeeb si chillane ki awaaz sunayi di. Awaaz darawani thi, jaise koi zindagi ki bheekh maang raha ho.

Kue ke paas ke charwaho ne jab wo awaaz suni, toh woh bhagte hue kue ke paas aaye. Itni darawani aur bhayanak awaaz sun ke wo bhi dar gaye. Dheere dheere gaon ke log jama hone lage. Har koi dar ke kue mein jhank raha tha. Neeche sirf andhera tha aur chillane ki awaaz aa rahi thi. Gaon ke kuch logon ne kue mein jaane ka faisla kiya. Jab wo kue ke andar gaye, toh awaaz achanak band ho gayi.

Bahar sab un logon ke liye dua kar rahe the ki unhe kuch na ho. Thodi der baad kue ki rassi hilne lagi. Gaon walo ne rassi kheenchna shuru kiya aur dekha ki Rahil us rassi se kamar par bandhi hui latak rahi thi. kue me se 4 log bahar Aa chuke the. ek admi ko abhi bhi nikalne ki taiyyari chal rahi thi. Rahil ki saansein chal rahi thi, lekin uska sharir bilkul sukh gaya tha. Uski twacha pe kale-kale daag the, aur uski halat dekh kar sabki raaton ki neend udd gayi.

Doctors usse turant hospital le gaye, lekin Rahil hosho-hawaas mein nahi thi. Doctors samajh nahi paa rahe the ki uske saath kya hua hai. Wo zinda thi, lekin jaise uski atma use chhod kar ja chuki thi.

Doctors ne 2 din tak lagatar koshish ki, par uski aankhein nahi khul rahi thi. Rahil jaise ek ajeeb si neend mein thi jo maut aur zindagi ke beech latakti hui lag rahi thi.

Rahil ke saath kya hua hoga?

Wo kue mein kaise gayi hogi?

Ek hafte tak bina khaye piye wo kaise zinda rahi hogi?

Aur uske sharir pe kale daag kyun hue honge?

Is raaz ka pata lagane ke liye, Episode 2 zarur padhein.

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Echo Dream - Coming Soon

arr Bohot Jaruri Hota Hai. Bap Ka Ho Ya Apne Liye Hue Pap Ka Darr Darr Hota Hai. Lekin Kuch Darr Dar Ese Hote Hai. Jo tumhe Sirf Raaat ke Andhere me Darate Hai. Ham Ese Kalpanik Darr kah sakte hai.

Esa hi Ek Darr Me Rahti Thi Ek Larki. **RAHIL**. RAHIL Ek Esa Larki Hai Jisne Ek Chhoti si umar mei Ek Esi Durghtna Dekhi. Jo Ek Bare se Bara Insan Dekh to Uski Rooh Kanp Uthe.

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