#which is a problem early game bc MC actively pushes everyone away

[zushiran-elris]

I played your demo and really enjoyed it!! I like how you describe scenes, like the darkness and blood around the shark for example; and choosing a course of action to take w/that intimidating visual in mind was fun (chose magic)! Out of curiosity, how long have MC and R known each other/do they ever fish together? R seems like they're very familiar with fishing! I'm intrigued, and best of luck w/this project! ^.^

awww, thank you so much, nonnie!! i rewrite things a lot (bc i never seem satisfied of how it reads haha) so i’m super glad you liked it!

as for the questions... i’m trying to make the times vague so you can headcanon MC as any age, but by the time the story starts, it should be a few years since they met!

R would love to fish together but they don’t bc MC is nocturnal for...reasons while R is a v responsible child who sleeps and wakes up at the same time every day

(who knows though; if you play your cards right, maybe you can invite R to hang out with you sometime? 👀)

thank you again! i’ll do my best~