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Ahahaha… erm- perhaps?
getting caught (kissing/being romantic with) their crush or S/O? By the rest of the chain of course😇
Ily🫶 if not a taken request, than some food for excellent thought 🥰
Yes!!!! You got it Anti! I'm going full menece!!
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Part 1 will include Wild, Four and Hyrule.
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Wild
"Do you think anyone is going to find us here?" You whispered, holding onto the hand of your boyfriend.
He snorted and shook his head. "Not a chance."
He had the kind of confidence that, were you anyone else, would quickly gather that it was foreshadowing. However, since you weren't willing to read between the lines the universe was trying to send you, you happily held onto his hand a little tighter and continued following him where ever he led you.
"So where are we going anyway?" You swung your conjoined hands and rested your head on his shoulder.
"Hmmm.... I don't know!"
"Link!"
"I just wanted to spend time with you... alone. Is that so much to ask?" Wild laughs, poking your forehead gently.
You huff and puff but you can't find it in yourself to be mad. He was such a sweetheart that it was hard to bother with any sort of annoyances. "Do you have a plan?"
"I just wanted to love on you." He laughs, pulling you closer and kissing your cheek. His arms keep you in an iron grip. Even though you try to push yourself away to get in a more comfortable angle, he's adamant in keeping you right where you are.
"Hey!" You laugh back, try to move away. "That's not fair! I wasn't ready!"
"Well I was. Should have been paying more attention." He smirks, trailing his kisses from the innocent spots on your face to a more heated location.
It's starts off chaste. A peck on the lips, a caress of your cheek- gentle repositioning of your hair- then he shifts. You find your back against the wall of the rock beside you. Wild kisses your chin, your jaw, trialing heated kisses to you neck.
"Link-"
"Ahem!"
You jump out of your skin, blood freezing in your veins as your stomach drops to the floor.
Wild gently drops his head to your shoulder, not bother to look up. "So we've been caught."
"No kidding." Sky tries his best to keep his face neutral. A slight blush begins to seep through his defenses, much to everyone's chagrin. "...Um.... We were looking for you."
"What?" Wild looks up finally, disbelief on his face. "Impossible. We haven't even been gone for more than fifteen minutes."
Sky coughs a bit, shuffling on his feet. "Bad timing on your part then. You were asked for the second you left, I guess."
Wild deadpans before turning around, kissing you square on the lips once more. "We'll continue where we left off another time."
You feel breathless and dizzy. You nod. Are you embarrassed or charmed? Horrified or smitten? Sky certainly wants to erase the past ten seconds from his mind.
Wild takes your hand, lookin victorious. "Let's go."
Four
"Follow me. Quickly." Four took your hand and begin dragging you along without any forewarning.
You stumbled after him, trying your hardest to keep up with his faster (and shorter) strides. "Wait, wait, wait, where are we going?"
"Shh!" Four put a finger to his lip, pulling you aside and into a dark alley way. He looked around the corner, as if checking if you were being followed before he relaxed. "Alright. This way."
"Four-!" He started pulling you away again, but at a much slower pace, merely walking to where it was he had in mind. "Link. Can you tell me what this is about? Is there anything I should be made aware of?"
"Nope!" Four grinned, stepping aside and gesturing to a small shop on the corner. "Just wanted to treat my sweet to something."
Your heart flutters and you can't help but smile. "So you had to capture me like a runaway criminal?"
"It was that or have eight other busy bodies with nothing better to do breathing down our necks."
You grin and bend down to kiss his cheek. Four beams and leads you into the shop. You both order something small to eat and warm drink, quickly securing spot by the window where you both could sit in peace.
"How did you find this place anyway? Have you been here before?" You ask Four, putting you hands on the table and lean close to him.
Four snorts and shakes his head. "I passed it while we were gathering information yesterday. I figure it would be nice to get away for a little bit."
"I doubt it would be for long." You grin but reach over to take his hand. "But thank you, I already love it."
Four grins and holds your hand gently, pulling it close to leave a tender kiss on your knuckles. "Let's make the most of it then."
A worker comes around with both of your orders and places them in front of you. Not about to be blocked by food of all things, Four moves from his spot in front of you to sit beside you instead.
You both grin, thanking the lady before going right back to looking at each other. The woman doesn't say much.
Before you both know it, you're both giggling, whispering sweet nothing about each other. Your sharing stories, compliments, kisses, innocent touches. Before you know it your lips are on his and your hands are in his hair.
Someone taps on the glass window next you.
You both jump and look over.
The entire chain is there.
You explode in a blush and look away hiding your face. Four glares at them and makes a rude gesture. You think you hear some of them laughing from the other side.
You can never show your face again. This is it, you're done for.
Four kisses once more for good measure. "Can't have anything in Hyrule."
Hyrule
You had managed to sneak away with Hyrule for a little time alone. It wasn't for anything special.
You both were lying on your backs in the grass next to each other. Between you, your hands were laced together. You rolled over and smiled, looking at your boyfriends features in silence.
His eyes were closed and he looked peaceful. If it weren't for the fact that he smiles softly when you rolled over, you could have sworn he was sleeping.
"Hey." You called out softly.
Hyrule opened his eyes and rolled over to look at you as well. "Yes?"
"I love you." You whispered, unable to keep the smile off of your face. Your impulses are rewards when you see his ears twitch as he flushes softly.
He grins after a beat and reaches over with his free hand, carding it through your hair softly and tucking it away form your face. He brings your hands up and kisses your knuckles, giving your hand a gentle squeeze. "I love you too."
"I know." You whisper again and scoot closer.
Hyrule lets go of your hand and moves his arm to cushion your head as move closer. His arm wraps around your shoulders, tracing lazy nonsensical patterns on your back. His other stay by your face, running his fingertips over your cheek with light butterfly touches.
It's so soft. Your heart feels as if it's about to burst with affection.
You lean up, aiming to kiss him before he can move away. You get close. Your hand entangles itself into his hair as you angle him a little to the side to make it easier on yourself. Your breathes begin to mingle with his. Your lips are only a hairbreadth away from contact.
"Found them!"
You jolt away from each other, faces aflame.
Wind tilts his head, jogging to where you both were. "What are you doing?"
"NothINg!" Your voice cracks and you cough to clear it. "You startled us."
Hyrule ruffles his hair, sitting up with a disgruntled look on his face. "Did they send you to look for us?"
"You snuck off again." Wind pouts.
"Did not!" You fire back. "It hasn't even even thirty minutes!"
Wind rolls his eyes but turns around to leave. Sure enough, you can already hear the footsteps of the rest of the group making their way towards your location, no doubt wondering if there was anything they needed to do. Heal, lecture, defend- ect...
You turn around, kissing Hyrule's cheek before they can get closer. "Another time."
Hyrule smiles boyishly at you, ignoring the questioning looks from the upcoming boys. "I'll be waiting then."
Part 2
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AHHHHH we got Promo for the new season today so I wanted so share my thoughts and opinions 🫶🏼❤️🔥
First off… THE OUTFITS, OMG ACTUALLY GORGEOUS. They’ve obviously upped the quality this season and I am FOREVER grateful. Emma D’arcy and Olivia Cooke look absolutely STUNNING.
I really enjoy how they went with a very Daenerys season eight looking outfit for Rhaenyra. It’s probably a reference to her gradual decline into cruelty (ugh hate how this happened to Dany in season eight but irrelevant). Love how there giving Rhaenyra good old Targ colours!!! GORGEOUS.
Don’t even get me started on Alicent, Olivia Cooke is one of the most gorgeous woman I have ever seen. The outfit is so flattering, the fabric is gorgeous SHE IS GORGEOUS. The detailing on this dress is actually so stunning. Green and auburn/red hair is actually like perfect Olivia.
I’m really liking the expression on these two ladies as well. In the bigger poster that this promo is apart of, you can see that it’s Alicent kind of looking at Rhaenyra. I feel like this is meant to represent Alicents inner turmoil with her decision. I think ultimately she kind of regrets, I’ve read some 🚨leaks that say that Aegon stops listening to her, and I think that ultimately makes her realise maybe all of this wasn’t worth it🚨 while I do think it’s a look of regret, I mostly think it’s a look a grief. B&C causes Alicents daughter to go into horrible grief and also leads to the death of her grandson. Very interesting! Cant wait to see what Olivia Cooke has in store this season.
For Rhaenyra I think it’s a look of determination. She completely looks past Alicent and it looks as if she’s looking at the iron throne. I’m so happy that this season there giving Rhaenyra the same cunningness and agency she had in the book. I kind of hated how in the show you didn’t really feel the desire she had for the throne. But THIS SEASON! I have so much faith.
There both so gorgeous as well!! I think these are my favourite promo images.
Hmmmm I wonder if this promo could foreshadowing to any possible events in the future….hmmm…..hmmm…..
Anyways, both of these promos are really cool. I really like how they both have there swords out (ofc Aemond sword isn’t as cool as Darksister…), there both in front of there banners ready to fight for there team!
I’ll be honest I don’t really have much to say about these promo’s itself other than it’s obviously setting the kind of rivalry these two have (sort of.)
Although for these characters I’m really curious on where there characters are headed. I think at the end of season one we saw that Aemond kind of regretted his decision in killing Luke (whether that’s cuz he didn’t wanna actually kill him or didn’t wanna deal with the consequence) I’m really interested in how he will handle it. I don’t think he’s in Kingslanding when Jaehaerys dies but I wonder how he will handle the news. ‘Son for a son, an eye for an eye’.
Daemon I’ll be honest I can kind of assume will probably stay the same, I feel like the type of character he is was set up nicely ect ect. I’m curious with how him and Rhaenyra’s relationship will be. Obviously it’s a bit rocky, with him choking her, and also him organising B&C against her wishes, I’m very curious! Matt Smith will be phenomenal.
Aegon I hate you but you ate this ONEEEEE little thing. His promo ate so bad guys I’m sorry like… who let him serve that much?? Also RHAENYS IS FREE FROM THE CONE HEAD! THANK GOD! I PRAYED FOR TIMES LIKE THIS.
Overall Aegons promo is probably the most ‘symbolic’, in the corner you can see one of the swords going through a green banner, probably to symbolise his usurpation and how the throne isn’t ‘his’. I also find it really interesting how he’s holding his crown and not wearing it, whereas Rhaenyra is wearing hers. I think it’s to show how the iron throne is something that Rhaenyra WANTS it’s something that was promised to her for most of her life Vs Aegon who was kind of forced upon the role.
Also interesting that Cristons hair is long and in BTS pics we see that he has short hair, I wonder if he cuts it during the season. I also like how he’s next to Aegon, “kingmaker” also a sign to how he becomes Aegons hand of the king.
I dont think theres anything to say about Rhaeny’s and Corlys other than that RHAENYS SLAYS!! Thats my queen FR.
Also, I want to point out at Aegons window we can see Vhager (you can tell by the sag, lol.) and at Rhaenys we can assume thats Meleys… Rooks rest anyone?💔
ALL the promos where so amazing, good job to everyone who worked on them and I will BE DISCUSSING THE TRAILER TMRW.
BONUS:
Olivia Cooke posted Trailer(s) I saw someone on twitter mention how maybe there will be a team green trailer and a team black trailer??? I HOPE SO.
Im really hoping that we see Jace and Baela in tbe trailer tomorrow… guys i miss jace 😭
#asoiaf#house of the dragon#a song of ice and fire#hotd#house targaryen#house hightower#team black#team green#rhaenyra#valyrianscrolls#rhaenys the queen who never was#rhaenys targaryen#aegon the second#criston cole#corlys velaryon#rhaenicent#hotd leaks#hotd season 2#hotd spoilers#aemond one eye#aemond targaryen#daemon targeryan#olivia cooke#emma d’arcy#matt smith#hotd promo#hotd trailer
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Ever wondered why the Elucien arguments pulling out Sarah’s 2016 interview and Facebook comment (yeah that one after ACOMAF came out) are SO annoying? 🙄
Ok so I ended up in a TikTok comment section today (yes I know that was my first mistake) and it occurred to me, we are once again not on the same page about some fundamental ideas on writing. The OP argued Sarah hasn’t changed her mind on the next books &elucien and that she said so in an interview after ACOSF.
Ok, but there’s a huge GLARING problem with that.
Basically, a writer makes promises in the text. I’m paraphrasing Sanderson here (I watch his lectures for fun, even tho I don’t write cuz I’m a dork) so he was talking about the first chapter and prologue of a book, or movie… but if you’re writing a multi-book epic, then you’re probably going to make promises about plots and characters of your future books, right?
So what are these promises? Basically what kind of book it is, plot&trope hints, the tone, goals, journeys and obstacles.
Ok back to SJM: why is the argument that “she said Elucien and hasn’t changed her mind infuriating? Because she made different promises in the books. And that is what Elriels mean when we say “set up”.
I mean just from the amount of interactions, Elriel have more than Elucien.. not to mention the warmth, positivity and thoughtfulness she put into their interactions over seriously 4 books. The promises are crystal clear: there is a romance that started as friendship==plot, but she has a bond w/someone else==obstacle, and Rhys forbade it in a moment resulting in her thinking he rejected her, but he didn’t == twist.
These promises need to be addressed, resolved, fulfilled. Is there something even CLOSE to this kind of story promise existing for Elucien?
I have seriously seen people claim that Elucien are both “friends to lovers” AND “enemies to lovers”…. These cannot both be true, like come on… you’re not even sure what kind of story they promise to be? You’re not sure what kinds of promises Sarah made about Elucien?
Why are you not sure? Because it’s not in the text. My personal view is that Elucien is neither… if they happen it’s kind of worse than either trope, they’re certainly not friends, they are at best indifferent to each other and at worst resentful. Mmmm … delicious “indifferent to lovers” 🫠
On a serious note, I don’t “hate” Elucien, but SJM hasn’t made a single promise in the text that I can quote in here that would make me excited about them. He gave her gifts that she didn’t throw away…. ?? Really?… she made a half step toward him… once… no, just no! And that’s how I feel, regardless if “Lulu deserves love”… sure he does, then write a love interest that brings out flirty firey fox boy from book1 and I’m on board 🫡 ….and don’t try to convince me after 4 books of a tepid nothing that all along it was Elain. Because. I. Don’t. Buy. It.
And my last point (I swear!) why did I get my panties all up in a twist… basically this: a writer makes promises IN THE TEXT, and if what you are saying in interviews directly CONTRADICTS your actual text, then you kinda have a problem. … at that point either you’re a bad writer, or you can’t blindly trust an interview from 7 years ago, it’s outdated!
The great GRRM himself said how often his “gardening style” of writing led to character arcs and romantic pairings changing… so why don’t we start treating Sarah as an adult author, and trust the text, and not an old interview?
It also comes down to trust. You don’t wanna be left feeling like “hmmm this doesn’t feel real, I don’t buy it” it takes you out of the text, and it happens when an author messes up promise-delivery . When an author foreshadows well, and sets up the story with their promises, still manages to surprise us while keeping the promises… well I trust THAT PERSON to tell me the most satisfying story.
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Hi, it's me again with another theory cause I'm an overthinker ! Phee theory it is.
Let's put all the Tech and Phee situation aside. I personally have nothing against the ship and Phee. She's an amazing character and a boss lady. Tech deserves happiness. I enjoy her character as much as I enjoy Cid. That's why she's intriguing to me.
However, I don't trust neither of them. I don't trust anyone except for Rex when it comes to The Batch.
I just feel that the writers are trying really hard to misdirect us. Away from Cid and Phee's true intentions.
So let's compare. We have ☯️ situation here.
Cid
From the start, she was shown to be kind of mean, dislikable, morally grey character and all she cared about was her business. The subject of "trust" has been mentioned many times between The Batch and her and we know it's definitely not there.
In the episode (that people call a filler episode) "Faster", we had a chance to see more of Cid. We found out she has a low key dark past. We heard Millegi's advice to not trust her.
With her The Batch was always busy, going on missions with their guard up. They were always ready for a fight.
Now we see they decided to cut ties with Cid due to her denying them help on Makko.
Phee
When Phee was introduced, we immediately fell in love because we met a cool pirate lady, who doesn't take anyone's shit and she gave all the deserved attention to our man Tech. She's doing God's work.
Another filer episode "Entombed" where Phee taking them on a mission to look for a treasure. We could see more of her and her amazing stories. Omega absolutely adores her, she's like a cool aunty. She's all smooth and awesome. Sweet.
Now we have her helping The Batch. She took them on Pabu, where she made them feel safe and relaxed. She showed them a place to stay.
What a nice contrast, isn't it?
Also quick note : Those "filler" episodes are not fillers in my opinion. They had a purpose – to mislead us even more. See how all the fillers were connected to Cid or Phee?
But as I said in my Cid theory, this show taught me to pay attention to every detail and every little word.
And what made me go "hmmm" was Phee's "makes you wonder, doesn't it?" When Hunter asked why did she bring them on Pabu.
I dont trust both of these ladies, but while everyone thinks Cid will be the traitor, I think it's Phee whom we should worry about.
The writers seem to try to make us see Cid as a bad person. While with Phee, we are totally sold to the vision of her being a friend.
The moment when Phee heard they cut ties with Cid, she immediately took them on a planet that is a secret sanctuary and that Cid doesn't know about its existence.
She took them on Pabu, saying this is a place to stay. When Hunter asked her if she meant them staying there permanently, she didn't say simple yes. She used Hunter's weakness - Omega, "She seemed to like it here."
And Hunter was sold. They are now thinking of Pabu as a potential home. They are safe, relaxed and what's the more important... they lowered their guard.
Let's look at this from the "If Phee is indeed the traitor" POV. She took them on a secret planet. No one now knows the batch's location except for Phee. They don't suspect anything bad happening. So...one signal sent to the Empire, and they have the batch on a golden platter.
You'd ask, "If it's true, what does Phee gain from betraying the batch?". Maybe it would be an exchange for freedom of Pabu? Maybe some ancient good or someone of a high value to her that the Empire now posses? Treasure can be many things right?
It's true that she would endanger Pabu but Shep said they don't have any reason to come on Pabu since this planet has no valuable resources and even if they come they will be manage, whatever that means.
We all know that Pabu being the silence before the storm is a fact. Funny enough, the whole episode looked like a foreshadowing of it.
The Empire is looking for Omega. We will probably see Crosshair being sent for the hunt. He needs some information about where she can possibly be. Cid doesn't know about Pabu's existence, so she can't be the traitor, even if she wanted. She has no location to give the Empire.
Some may think my theories about Cid and Phee are too complex for this show. But are they? Meanie becoming a hero and sweet soul turning out to be a traitor is one of the most basic tropes in both kids and adult shows. Also if you think I'm reaching then scroll away idk 🤷🏽♀️.
At the end of the day I really hope both, Cid and Phee turn out to be the batchers' friends and will help them escape the Empire for good. But you're lying if you say theories aren't fun 😌
#the bad batch#the bad batch theory#tbb theories#tbb phee#tbb cid#tbb hunter#tbb tech#tbb wrecker#tbb echo#tbb crosshair#tbb omega#clone force 99#the bad batch season 2#dont come for me phee girlies#its just a theory
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Wowza, I have a LOT of thoughts and feelings about part 7. A real mixed bag. BUCKLE UP.
2033
yaaay they had a sleep over that didn't end absolute destruction of our collective hearts!
I feel the storm a brew'in with Drew. Something is coming and its not gonna be good lol.
Stephie’s quiet for a second, hiccoughing to herself as she searches for something on Paige’s face before she holds out a pinky, “promise you’ll never leave?” oof. my gut. is punched.
Paige is terrified. hmmm ok I like were getting into Paige's psyche a little more. Unlike other anons I don't think she's going to straight up run away or something drastic like that, but I think its totally fair that now that they are over the 'hump' (even though there has been no humping :( ) of admitting their feelings and trying to build something new, it is sinking in for Paige that wow this could be amazing… or I could get my heart trampled again and combust into a million pieces if this dream doesn't work out
Paige laughs, tucking that little tidbit away to tease Azzi with later, “how about you and I go get your Mama her favorite coffee?” oh I love this domestic shit. Paige would be the kind of sweet lover girl to go out and get her woman her favorite coffee even if theres coffee already in the house
Hmmm when is Jose's wedding happening? Will Paige be Azzi's date? Will being at a wedding give her a PTSD trauma response? I normally love weddings but i feel like you aint gonna give us a fluff fest with this one. Or maybe Azzi and Paige have a wonderful romantic time and start talking about what they want to do for their own wedding. happy happy happy fluff yay.
OOoh lawd is Paige gonna let an 'i love you' slip and freak Azzi out
“your daughter has you wrapped around her little finger huh?” “yeah, yeah she does.” SOBBING. But for real by the time Stephie is a teenager Azzi is going to have to impose a monthly limit on how much Paige can spend on random shit for Stephie cause she would be rollin up to school in a G-wagon and a louis v backpack and get mugged/become insufferable lol.
“I got you an iced vanilla latte with extra whipped cream,” foreshadowing smut with Paige putting whipped cream on azzi's nips? yes? great.
“Sounds good,” Paige confirms, “we’ll be there!” - awwww cutie paige. Couple mode.
But there’s something about being a secret again, that raises a bitter taste of what killed us then could kill us now in her mouth. hmmmm this is interesting. I often forget about the fact that their first relationship was a secret, and how clearly there is an element of that involved in their breakup. Azzi pulling back again? Im getting sad.
dun dun dun dun the moment we've been waiting for - FRENCHIE!
Hmm ok so Stephie doesn't seem to know clem was not just a platonic friend for Azzi… wondering if its cause they weren't in a serious relationship and it was just FWB or if it was a full blown relationship and Azzi consciously hid it from stephie
I mean Im sure Paige hates clemence already for obvious reasons, but STEPHIE loving her……ohhhhh lawd
Oof ok Clemence traded to atlanta… glad we dont have to have her around for long. I dont want paige to be arrested for homicide. Also Im absolutely picturing Clemence looking like Marine Johannes cause we know Azzi's type is white blond haired blue eyed Guards lol
“just one night.” I feel this night out is going to be an alcohol fueled disaster and IM SO EXCITED
2028
Why isn't Azzi playing for team USA? Stephie was born in January so could she not theoretically be back in it by now? Or did she take 2 seasons off?
OK Olivia. You know I love the whole Olivia of it all and I find the relationship so intriguing and complex. My first instincts about her in this chapter were of course, dear god she is such a bitch. And then I have to remind myself SHES NOT. She is just kind of a dumbass who is in love with someone who isn't in love with her, and its pretty much torturing her. -- “You did it,” Olivia screams, running into Paige’s arms as friends and family start to gather on the court, “I’m so proud of you!” “Thanks Olivia-” Paige is about to say more like… you are congratulating your wife on her winning a game at the Olympics and she can't even get out a full sentence in response cause she SEES the back of her ex girlfriends head. Thats grounds for divorce right there lol.
eeeek i dont like confrontation this would make me pee my pants "“Oh I don’t know about that,” Olivia says airily, sharp nails digging a little too roughly into Paige’s skin as her grip tightens further, “there’s plenty of talent up and coming in the next 4 years.”
"This is a side of Olivia that Paige is only just beginning to unveil, the side of Olivia that makes snide bitchy comments with a saccharine voice." … hmmm just starting to reveal? so theyve been married for like 8 months at this point. Olivia was keeping up a facade for a while ….. or Paige's clear preference for azzi is just getting worse and worse and the woman is finally cracking.
Ok the image of Olivia being LIVID in their hotel room, and Paige is just laying in bed watching tiktoks not listening to a thing Olivia says. Why is Olivia still here?! Take the money and run bitch your wife aint that into you!
gazing down at her phone where another fuckass Clézzi edit has started to play "fuckass clezzi edit' HHAHAHAHAH this is so Paige
Another thing about Olivia is that she seems to have a real issue with Basketball despite you know, being a sports reporter and pursuing a player romantically?? When Paige and her have that post presser spat in the earlier chapter Olivia says something like "There are other jobs than playing basketball" and here again she goes "right, fucking basketball. again". Sorry Olivia but your house, luxury cars, jewelry, are all courtesy of the fact that your wife is a basketball player! Who you met... while she was a basketball player! -OK Olivia, not going to the gold medal game? Bitch gots to go. How did this marriage continue for 2 more years lol
Azzi’s eyes soften, “I came for you. I don’t know if I’m allowed to say that but- I’m here for you.” ok and im crying again. Just get back together right here and now you fools.
I do have a short addition to the end of the chapter, ahem im a little rusty:
And they both know that they’re saying words they shouldn’t say. That when they break apart from this moment, they’ll have to walk away. But for now, being in each other’s arms is the only thing that feels right, that feels golden. Except, at the afterparty their eyes meet again. Olivia had gone back to Dallas in a huff instead of staying for closing ceremonies. Clemence had to go be French somewhere, and didn't want to celebrate the USA win. And despite both being in relationships, the pull towards each other they felt was undeniable. After a couple dirty shirleys, Azzi followed Paige to her now empty suite. Once inside Paige opened a bottle of champagne, realized it was from France, and threw the bottle out the window. She then opened a Budweiser, poured it over azzis tits, chugged he rest of it, and they made passionate and patriotic love. As Paige buried her face in Azzis pussy, sucking on her clit like a goddamn AMERICAN, Azzi chanted 'USA USA USA'! She was reminded how much she loved Paige's Red Blooded American passion. Sure, sex with Clem was nice. But she was always stopping in the middle to bring out a cheese plate, and some preserves, or some croissants that got crumbs all over the place. While they both seemed to understand this was a one time thing, Azzi and Paige felt the Olympic spirit erupting within them, that it was fate they they connected here in LA, and released the tension they had been bottling up for 4 years. As they both squirted simultaneously, it was reminiscent of old faithful, another classic American relic. What a night it was. 🤱🤱🤱🤱🤱🤱🤱🤱🤱🤱🤱🤱
Buckling up m'am!
Paige is rightfully apprehensive about a lot of things. I think with her, when she was trying to convince Azzi, she's wasn't thinking about more than just being together. Now that they are taking step towards that, Paige is starting to have an epiphany of "hey there were actual reasons why we haven't been together for the last 8 years and maybe I needa think about those just a little bit".
The wedding will happen on-page and there's two ways it could go. I haven't fully decided yet so it's just as much a mystery to me I guess.
LMFAO Paige is just gonna give that girl an amex card and let her go ham with it if she gets her way
I'm glad you caught that line!
A lot of people seemed to think Clémence looks like Marine Johannes which is lowkey what I pictured as well and so I'm very amused that we all seem to be on the same wavelength with that lmao
I don't think she took two seasons off because she's definitely playing in the 2028 W season but with Stephie having been born only a couple months ago, I think Azzi, as a single mother, prioritized Stephie over going to Olympic training camps and stuff and so she wasn't on the team.
She is just kind of a dumbass who is in love with someone who isn't in love with her, and its pretty much torturing her. - this is exactly it like she's in a very depressing situation if we look at it through non-pazzi tinted glasses
Olivia is holding onto a dream that's threatening to turn into a nightmare and I don't think even she could tell you why she's holding on except for this ridiculous things called hope.
It's easier to take her anger out on Paige's love for basketball than take it out on Paige's love for Azzi that they're both trying to pretend doesn't exist anymore.
JESUS FUCKING CHRIST BABES!
I just- throwing out the champagne cause it's french? the beer? USA USA USA chanting? cheese plates?
No notes, 10/10 perfection. Please take over my writing credentials.
#ask#fic talk#🤱 anon my personal jester <3#that last part will have me wheezing for days lmao how do you come up with this stuff
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7-12 for Space Boy and 3-6, 16, & 19 for The Silver Eye, please?
Space Boy
7. how does the story compare to your initial impressions of it? has it surprised you yet? how?
Gosh I…I feel like it just constantly tackles subjects that are so hard, like grief and even conspiracies and what-not. It’s so…real in that sense and I don’t know if I expected all of that at the beginning haha
8. what questions are or were you most excited to learn the answers to while experiencing the story for the first time?
Bro I want to know what the Artifact is, and what’s up with the Wanderer…and like HOW IS OLVER GONNA GET BACK TO EARTH CAUSE HE HAS TO OKAY?!?
9. give the most UNHELPFUL and/or SILLY summary possible.
Girl just trying to catch up to a world she’s 30 years behind on, but ends up figuring out a huge coverup while getting to know the boy everyone tells her is creepy
10. if you made an amv about this, what song would you set it to?
I had to look through my music then I remembered “Broken Boy” by Flannel Graph and I feel like it would be a good Oliver/Amy song…
11. if you were put in the main character's position, how well would that go for you on a scale of 1-5?
Oh gosh…I…I don’t know if I could handle that…either Amy *or* Oliver…0…I’m saying 0 😂
12. assuming your loved ones would be there, would you want to live in the world of the story?
Hmmm…kind of but also…I don’t like how like…prevalent VR is…so I’m torn…😂
The Silver Eye
3. quickly list 3 things you like about the story!
Mystery, beautiful art, such a complex story and world but so engaging too with all of the characters!
4. assign this story a hyper-specific genre name, e.g. "inspirational religious semi-horror sci-fi western"
Fantasy/mystery/I genuinely am blanking help me 😂
5. do you have a favorite character? who?
…Avidan…I mean, I love so many characters but Avidan just…became my favorite forever ago and it has not changed since 😂
6. do you have a LEAST favorite character? who?
Aetius, I mean he makes me laugh but he’s also legitimately insane so…
16. do you think this story has broad appeal, or is it meant for a very specific audience? if it's more "niche", what kind of person would most enjoy this story?
Hmmm…I mean, I think it has broad appeal but you have to be okay with like…a bunch of mystery and things slowly revealed, to the point that you usually have to reread the story every once in a while to remember all of the little tidbits and build up/foreshadowing
19. pitch an idea for a sequel or spinoff novel for this story!
I know Laura mentioned a whole idea about Blue and her backstory…not sure if that’s something I’m super interested in or not…we might get more of this too but having a little spin off of Bhatair and Marcus meeting and their adventures when they were younger would be fun!
#lowkey aetius reminds me of bill because me makes me laugh but…*gestures to both of them being 100% insane and fine with being insane*#a message from fulcrum#the silver eye#space boy webtoon#nerdarians#space boy#tse
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MHA 2.7 - Victory or Defeat - part 4
This is my first time watching MHA, and I decided to share all my brain farts on tumblr while watching, pls no spoilers.
Oh, so OFA is even more like ATLA than I thought. Will Deku have an Avatar state? All Might just handed him this quirk (that seemed to be like a strength enhancer?), but it looks like there is more mystery to the power. Hmmm.
I know, right? Spooky wooky shit, but All Might, you are not supposed to have the same reaction as me, lol. How is OFA a mystery to him when it is his quirk?
The mystery thickens. What does it mean? Since the “traces” look like the ghosts of previous wielders, will we get a flashback where we learn about who some of them were? I WANT!
DOES THIS MEAN ALL MIGHT IS DYING? THIS BETTER NOT BE DEATH FORESHADOWING. I AM SCARED.
If you want to encourage Toadyrocks to use his fire power, belittling him into it is not a great strategy. Even without the family baggage, I feel like anyone would refuse out of regular teen-spite. You’re not the boss of me, Dad!
He’s a Momma’s boy for sure.
I do not totally understand the dynamic going on yet, so I am a bit confused. Flame Face is obviously an asshat, but why does Todoroki have no issue with his Mom when she gave him his scar? I need to learn more!
Not with that attitude you won’t.
Total tangent here. Can this guy never wear long sleeves? Or would it have to be an over-sized baggy situation to get his elbows to fit in anything. Now that I’m thinking about it, I want to go to a clothing store in MHA.
OH SHIT! Peppermint is extra frosty today. These three are seeing their lives flash before their eyes, damn!
You think? Boy was pissed and Scotch McTape just happened to be there to take the rage blow. It is kind of cute the way he apologized.
The absolute humiliation. Spiderman-lite is out here getting pity cheered. I would die.
Episode 8 is here
#mha#bnha#my hero academia#boku no hero academia#anime#deku#izuku midoriya#Midoriya#todoroki shoto#todoroki#endevour#all might#sero
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I’m just going to drop three KOLTC theories down here quick because I’ve had them on my mind forever and I’m hoping with the graphic novel coming out in a few days we’ll also get news on the next book.
Theory 1: The mysterious person mentioned on page 527 of Unlocked who Oralie can’t remember is going to be revealed to be Prentice. We know form Stellarlune that I seems likely that Prentice did end up working with Kenric, on what? Don’t know.
NOTE: I also can’t help but feel like whatever he was doing with Kenric is what got him arrested but that’s more of a blind suspicious dart than a definitive theory.
Theory 2: This is more of a statement than a genuine theory but I think Keefe has already sort of reached the height of his ability. At least when Sophie is enhancing him. On the bottom of page 50 of Stellarlune Lady Gisela says, “I don’t know. Do you think he’ll (Keefe) be able to influence someone’s emotions?” Keefe’s dad replies with, “No Empath can do that.” We’ve seen Sophie Enhance Empaths other than Keefe a few times before (Stina and Oralie mainly) but what Keefe describes (Being able to tap into someone’s emotional center and “guide” there feelings) is never brought up expect with him. You’d think during the whole “Learning to control her enhancing” thing with Oralie in Legacy Oralie would have brought it up, but she doesn’t really seem to notice (or have it.) Leading me to believe that this is a Keefe exclusive thing. Having nothing to do with the strength of the Empath, and more to do with Stellarlune. Which means that the only way Keefe can ever reach his full potential and complete his “legacy” is if Sophie (or some other enhancer but that’s no fun) is at his side. :)
Theory 3: I have had this theory wading around my mind since the night Unlocked came out and I scimmed through the files on all the Intelligent Species. It states in the one about goblins that no goblin has defected to join the Neverseen yet but doing so would, quote on quote, “If they did decide to break their treaty with the elves, it would be disastrous— particularly if any bodyguard turned against there charge.” Hmmmm… hmmm… HMMMMMMM. Now, obviously this is foreshadowing but the two main goblin body guards present in the series (Sandor and Griziel) are so loyal it can’t be them. But not every bodyguard is as loyal as them, particularly when there charge, shall I say, enjoys vanishing and running off? Yes, I am referencing Biana and Woltzer. Now, I can acknowledge that merely having a bad charge who constantly runs off isn’t enough to build that kind of resentment (I mean seriously, look at Sophie and Sandor. Girl has done that a lot.) but, at the bottom of page 498 of Stellarlune (which really just solidified this theory in my mind and left me screaming) when there loosing there collective minds over the dropping of the trolls treaty and they bring up the goblin treaty Woltzer says, “Is this peace? Or forced submission?” AND SANDOR IMMEDIATELY SHUTS HIM UP! *cue the “I am telling you! That mfer— that mfer” meme*. So yes, he is definitely the goblin traitor who will defect first and get a bunch to join him.
All around… seems like the next book is going to be interesting.
#koltc#books and reading#koltc theories#I have to much time on my hands#book theories#sokeefe#fitz vacker#sophie foster
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There’s details in ‘All in the Mind’ that makes me curious:
1. The memory from Scratch’s childhood is contained in that chest, but a building is used to intially keep it away from Scratch and Molly. I’m curious as to why that was used as an obstacle.
Was it another clue to Scratch’s past? Maybe he worked in an office as an adult. It would seem fitting that something symbolizing his possible adult life would keep something from his childhood out of his reach, especially if there was something about his adult life that wasn’t pleasant (besides him dying of course). Alternatively it could represent one of the locations Adia talked about with him (that being Chicago).
2. On the back of the chest is a sticker of a pyramid (my mind thought it was a Bill Cypher connection at first LOL) and we see that one of the locations Adia talks about is the pyramids of Egypt. She even has three pyramids that he most likely made. (In a previous post, I already talked about how this detail ties back to a certain detail (that being there’s a pyramid amongst Todd’s junk) in the Internship episode).
3. Did anyone notice the shark sticker in the boat during the memory? Interesting future foreshadowing right there....
4. While we don’t see his face, child!Scratch does look like he could easily be the younger version of Todd (assuming that the wraith theory IS correct or that he could be related to him if it isn’t). Ignoring the color filter, the color of his shirt and hair, and even the bangs seem to be major hints. The hair length in the back could also help hint as to which time period Sratch would have been a kid.
5. Though I admit the bangs... kind of remind me of Libby’s a little. Hmmm.... maybe that’s just a coincidence?
6. I think this episode adds to why Scratch is so interested in Molly’s culture on her mom’s side besides her being his friend–he wanted to travel the world with his friend, so of course he’d be curious about Thailand. (Which seemed to be pretty close to one of the stars on Adia’s map).
7. During the title outro I find it interesting that the bubble with Adia’s face cuts in mid song, right at Molly’s part. Hopefully it doesn’t symbolize anything negative and just shows that Scratch might be thinking about her still.
8. As for the monkey... honestly, I have no clue if not even the characters know what the deal with the monkey was.
#the ghost and molly mcgee#the ghost and molly mcgee spoilers#wraith theory#interesting details to notice
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author's note | chapter four: habitat 🍂🐾
here is the author's note for chapter four of Beasts! this chapter sees gin return to the skies and starts to explore flight and fear (and asks some tricky questions about the soul). come to watch an author who can neither throw nor catch a ball try and write about sports; stay for the henry viii cameo & the girls getting their arts and crafts on. ok all the usual writing notes, headcanons, fic/meta inspo recs are below…
….as is a ✨ sneak peek ✨ of chapter five (did someone say hinny seaside fluff?) 🐚🎣🌊
🏹 spoilers for this chapter under the cut! 🏹
[ habitat, n.: the natural environment in which an animal or plant usually lives ]
writing notes and headcanons:
on writing: this chapter was the toughest yet to write honestly - still feel i'm learning the ropes about pacing, foreshadowing and suggesting, and how to balance flashbacks with driving plot forward in the present. i've made my peace with how it turned out and was excited to put it out after a lot of revision, but damn did you know writing was hard who else knew this and didn't tell me hmmm! also i'm a fair weather writer and a chipper lil bean why am i writing all this sad shit. questions without answers
on quidditch: ah man i honestly love writing about quidditch (the metaphor potential!) re the muggleborns in quidditch issue - i know in PS/SS there’s talk of the first-years having multiple flying lessons, but it always seemed wild to me how obviously at a disadvantage muggleborn students would be at with confidence and practice on a broom (like, no shade to the weasley boys, who are clearly a talented bunch, but they do get to spend the first eleven years of their lives and every summer after that playing and practicing in their orchard - like, justice for dean thomas making it to be a reserve, honestly!) ginny is her father’s daughter, so reckon this is bit of a social justice issue for her, but in a sort of i-want-the-best-and-i’ll-find-it way (i also think she knows from playing on a team with ron that underconfidence doesn’t mean a lack of talent). much more to come on rina!
on souls: one of the things i had the most fun with in this chapter was the soul chat scene - a tricky topic for a teacher to broach, even under normal circumstances, but especially for this bunch of war-hardened teens, some of whom (ginny and hermione, but also all the azkaban survivors) have far too much first-hand experience with soul magic of the darkest kind. i’ve learnt so much from some truly fantastic metas and analyses of souls in hp (some shared below) and have always wanted to think and write about the soul-as-both-personality-and-conscience tension that runs throughout canon - in harry’s narration, other than in passing in conversation with dumbledore over horcruxes, we don’t get a ton of exploration of what a soul actually is. i intended to do it as a meta but honestly i’m having so much fun trying to weave these ideas and speculation into this fic, as well as use questions of souls and what makes you, you, as ginny herself goes through this unwanted process of self-examination and reflection as she’s knocked off course with her own sense of self
on molly and ginny’s letters and their relationship: a lot of what i want to use Beasts to explore are the relationships between different female characters, including mothers and daughters. a criticism often made of molly from her critics is often that she doesn’t really write to harry or any of her children when they’re at school. to that i say: here are all my headcanons defending molly weasley til the death! in canon, i think ron’s lingering jealousy of molly’s attachment to ginny and fears that she favours ginny (‘least loved always, by the mother who craved a daughter…’), and ginny’s constant conflict with molly over her coddling risks means we don’t always get to see a positive read on ginny and molly’s relationship. we also know, though, that ginny and molly both enter and end the series beside one another, and we saw molly become a killer to defend ginny from bellatrix. this is such an important relationship and i'm so excited to write about it in this piece. i just love the idea that ginny and molly are extremely close over the years, actually, despite their conflict, and that they were in regular contact throughout the school year in ways the boys just would never have been, making each other feel less lonely in their more solitary years.
on ginny and hermione: relevant to the above and honestly a bit of a soapbox issue/manifesto for this whole fic - it's really important to me to try to find a way to write friendship and conflict between two characters (especially female characters, and particularly female characters who have historically been at the centre of fandom shipping wars), while doing justice to both characters’ perspectives and not bashing either of them. i love both hermione and ginny as characters. i’m very interested in their friendship and both characters’ flaws and failings, and so getting to write this post-war year with both of them back at hogwarts, spending the most time together they ever have but also such different wartime experiences and perspectives is just *chef’s kiss*. we know their friendship is strong - hermione and ginny do appear in canon as people who have fun together and serve as each other’s confidants on key issues. but they’re also two strong-willed characters who canonically do fall out and must, by virtue of their characterisations, have certain faultlines running through their friendship. obvs they famously have that fantastic clash over harry and the sectumsempra curse in HBP that i’ve always been kind of obsessed with (ginny coming out swinging for harry, very strongly, rightly calling hermione out for being manipulative, but also immediately going mean in her response - the “oh, don't start acting as though you understand quidditch you'll only embarrass yourself” is, like, as iconic as it is devastating, lol) that scene remains a big jumping off point for thinking more broadly about their dynamic and relationship in this period of their lives. hermione can be tone-deaf and patronising sometimes, ginny can be angry, spiteful and childish - i want to write about that, and let both women be flawed and interesting and still worthy of respect and affection. (also i re-watched fleabag for this fic, because we're thinking about sisterhood here babyyy)
on parallels between harry and ginny as characters: writing this fic has just been me repeatedly finding 9000 more parallels between ginny and harry throughout the series i'd missed lol. this chapter i was thinking about how ginny is harry’s understudy in two quidditch finals (both of which she wins obvs), and again in the DA during DH (i know neville ends up as the only DA leader by the time of the battle of hogwarts, but i think we can tell from their canon characterisations and the deliberate parallel building between the golden and silver trios that ginny = harry, hermione = luna, and neville = ron. it’s also strongly implied in chapter 15 in DH through phineas nigellus’ testimony about the sword-stealing incident that it was ginny who was the DA ringleader and architect of that mission). now, here they are again, two captains, mirror images again. it’s just a throwaway line from angelina in this chapter (“you’re no harry” to ginny when she's trying out as seeker) but i’m having so much fun finding these parallels but trying to understand what that must have been like for ginny, to repeatedly be stepping into the shoes of the boy she loves and admires (soulmate shit, but also soul-searching shit, no?). even the way ginny is reacting to stuff in some of these scenes - hermione going to london and ginny doing her best not to sound openly jealous but failing - i was thinking about ron and the prefect badge all over again. ginny is not harry, crucially, and she has her own distinct characterisation and different responses, but they are enormously similar characters in ways i’m still learning about. (these guyyssssss honestly)
on seamus writing to ginny: have literally decided the seamus and ginny friendship arc from pebblysand’s the fault in faulty manufacturing is canon soooo that's what that is!
on the twins and ginny at muriel’s: firstly, i'm so sorry!!! secondly... i’ve had a version of that scene in my head for so so long and never knew how to use it. i briefly flirted with the idea of writing a fic about fred, george and ginny in hiding together with their parents at muriel’s and what those weeks were like for them, in what ended up being the last weeks of fred’s life. but honestly uh i cried writing that tiny vignette (and tbh welled up writing that last sentence jfc), so clearly i would not be able to get through writing that fic. their DH coins lighting up and the three of them being like woo we’re free from muriel’s we’re going to go fight let’s go? but it’s actually them going to fred’s death? i’m not ok!!!
on ginny’s card-making materials: canon compliant ginny weasley is an arts and crafts girlie. love u cute little loser girl! i see you with your sticky tape and gel pens! girls who make dumb crafts and inflict them on their friends representation!
reading list for chapter four:
on ginny and flying:
Little Sugar Men by DopeyTheDwarf @bluethepineapple
on ginny and hermione’s friendship:
I'll Be There by StarlingFlight
you were broken-hearted and the world was, too by celaenos
on souls:
The soul in the Harry Potter universe; a joint meta by @artemisia-black and @ashesandhackles
The Infinite Divide: A Study on Horcruxes and Souls in the Harry Potter Universe by @celestemagnoliathewriter
songs from the playlist particularly for this chapter:
for the widows in paradise, for the fatherless in ypsilanti - sufjan stevens | morrison's jig by orthodox celts | dot the dragon's eye by hanneke cassel | featherweight by fleet foxes | soon-to-be innocent fun by arthur russell | troubled waters by cat power | fallen fruit by lorde
and a sneak peek of chapter five because we need harry and gin to hang out again don't we? we've kept them apart enough 🌊🐚🎣
Of course, they get fish and chips by the sea, their new little ritual. Both of them hang off the counter, a little giddy, pointing at the notices stuck up on the wall ('Should we look for that man's cat, do you reckon? 'Gin, that cat's been missing since June, it's extremely dead'). Harry’s appalled by how much vinegar she makes the man at the shop put on her chips, grumbling as they leave the shop with the goods wrapped in warm newspaper paper. ‘I have to kiss you after you eat those, you know –’ ‘Have to?’ They perch up on the beach wall while she does battle with a ketchup sachet. He's cracking open a can of a suspicious-looking Muggle fizzy drink made by a man claiming to call himself Dr Pepper. ‘What do you mean, have to? Real hardship, is it? Great burden?' 'Yep.' He takes the ketchup sachet off her, tears it open, hands it back. 'It's tough work, but someone's got to do it.' 'How about I find myself someone else on this beach who's not such a baby and doesn't mind kissing a girl after she's had a bit of vinegar -' (She gets an unvinegared chip to the head for that one. He does let her share the fizzy drink, though it transpires he knows shamefully little about the identity of this Dr Pepper character.)
#whoops got on my soapbox again#what am i like#ginny and hermione's friendship matters ok!#and so does molly apologism#author's note#authors note#AN#beasts#writing#beasts fic#hinny#hermione granger#ginny weasley
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Toony's McCallistan Lore: Chapter 1
~The Robot Problem~
(requested by @kaneda-shotaros-12th-bike )
Remember, if you want more tobeysode analysis posts, feel free to send them my way in some asks!
(SPOILER WARNING: This series contains heavy spoilers. If you wanna read it, you're gonna have to watch the actual episode first.)
The first key detail that is mentioned in the episode is that Ms. Davis, Becky and literally everyone else's teacher, has split the class into individual pairs. However, these are not just ordinary pairs. One of the pairs are... BECKY. AND. TOBEYYYYYY LESS FRIGGIN GOOOOO-
It is clear that Ms. Davis put these two together for a reason, considering the fact that she basically said, and I quote, "Hmmm, I guess we can either dedicate the playground to both of you and call it the Tobey and Becky Playground, which would be kind of cool because your names would be next to each other forever..." (Quote source: Tobey's Playground Calamity). This demonstates that Ms. Davis clearly had the ToBecky pairing in mind. I know fully well that if this series continued, ToBecky would be extremely close to being canon, because like Ms. Davis, there are going to be people who are aware of the pairing (for example, Dr. Two-Brains, most likely Victoria Best, and the Coach, who I will mention later). If I continued the series, I would use that entire clip as foreshadowing to another seriously adorable ToBecky bonding moment.
The second detail is that Tobey McCallisnerdemoji really demonstrates his arrogant but hella savage personality when it comes to collaboration with Becky Botsford. He literally says that the assignment is "much too basic" for him (which isn't a surprise, because he literally creates giant robots. Tobots, if I may.) He also demonstrates his high level of intelligence by cackling while doodling his plans to potentially use the potato-electricity-fuel experiment to power his own robot, clearly using his intelligence and understanding of the assignment to his advantage. The most significant conclusion I came to about this scene was that because of his high intelligence and his clear demonstration of class assignments to the point where he uses them to his advantage for creating new ways for his robots to destroy the city, he is literally not wrong about the assignment being "much too basic". The purpose of him doing this wasn't for him to delay any work time or just to be a jerk to everyone else, the purpose of him doing this was for his own role as a villain. He knew fully well what he was doing and what the entire assignment was about, and even went out of his way to tell Becky that yes, his plans are always about robots, and he would never slack off on his intelligence. Speaking of keeping maintaining his role as a villain, let's not forget the fact that the entire reason he's a villain in the first place is because he has a crush on his own enemy and he wants to impress her by showing how highly intelligent and powerful he is. Tobey wants to be appreciated by the only person he truly loves, and judging by the fact that he almost exposed Becky's identity twice in this entire series, he's clearly trying to show her that he's simply as intelligent as her and all he wants is for her to just tell him the truth. Not only that, but he also suggested that they BOTH worked together on building that potato-fueled robot. How do I know this, you ask? Well, that's because he stated, "Think of it. With my genius and your... your- sitting next to a genius, we could create a robit that uses potatoes for fuel!" Notice how he says "we" and not "I". He explicitly stated that he wants to work with Becky, adding more fuel to the ToBecky ship flame. It's almost like he's saying he wants to dominate humanity alongside his very own crush while they both watch the world get smashed into bits with mechanical giants.
(Also, random but funny detail, Tobey later got put in timeout by Ms. Davis because he shouted that he was going to dominate humanity out loud. He got sent to timeout. In the corner. In the chair. 💀)
The third detail is that the Coach (y'know, the goofy short homie that teaches Villain School) was selling books about how to awaken the inner genius inside you or some wacky shazz like that. Tobey goes up to him and goes "yeah i wanna destroy my school with potato-fueled robots" and the mf goes "Chapter 47" like there are chapters in his book for all these oddly specific plans or something. What a goofy ahh 💀
Anyways, the Coach then tries to trick Tobey into letting him snatch his plans. Tobey refuses to give his plans to him until Coach goes "Oh, isn't that WordGirl?" and then points in a random direction to distract Tobey to snatch the plans away from him successfully. Remember when I said earlier that some characters were fully aware of the ToBecky pairing and Coach was one of them? This was what I meant.
Let that sink in.
A grown man snatched a 10 year old's plans all by distracting him using one of his very few weaknesses besides his mother: his secret crush on WordGirl.
Now, to be fair, this is quite silly, because Dr. Two-Brains and Victoria Best have done the exact dame thing, but for different purposes. However, those purposes were usually fairly petty, like bickering and hogging valentines from the entire school because "oh naur, I gotta be the best."
Oh, and here's a minor detail (I'm calling it minor because this is a tobeysode. We gotta give the people who aren't Tobey some credit here): After Coach does a goofy evil laugh, he says: "Now that I have these plans, I will get even with the city for closing down my supervillain school, and I will become the world's greatest supervillain!" This man really went out of his way to have beef with a random evil 10 year old he found on the side of the street because his school was shut down by the city. Take that frustration out on the mayor, not the world's most formidable, intelligent, and handsome boy genius in the whole wide world who had nothing to do with your school at all despite being in the same association as you. Yet again, another 💀skull emoji💀.
Anyways, when Becky and Bob leave school to take a walk in the park, they talk about how potatoes can be used as an electricity source. Exposition Guy (underrated character, we need to talk about him more in the fandom because over 50% of the time he carries the entire show and is probably one of the main reasons why WordGirl is still able to keep fighting crime) tells them that there's a giant robot attacking the city. The giant robot in question latches onto potatoes with wires that its hands connect to for electricity, and it threatens to destroy the city if the supervillain school isn't reopened. WordGirl tells Huggy that they have to find whatever is being used as fuel for the robot and cut of its power source.
Now, here's the interesting part: WordGirl's mindset goes, Giant robot? Tobey. They fly over, and, surprise! The Coach is the one who's been controlling the robot this time! Usually, the villains have a wide variety of weapons and getaway mechanisms (rays, types of meat, jetpacks, condiment rays, etc.), but Tobey, one of the main villains of the show, repeatedly uses robots, because according to what the boy genius himself said in one other episode, "But all I have is robots!" (Quote source: Book Ends). However, the difference between all those kinds of robots throughout the years is that they have different powers used for different purposes. Robo-Tobey was used for cheating in a field day competition, WordBot was used for giving Tobey the attention and love he's been begging for this entire time, and Chronos was used for making summer last forever. Notice how all of these motives seem so childlike and innocent. However, the difference WordGirl should have spotted in the Potato-fueled robot was that its motive, stated so loudly that she should've heard using superhearing, was NOT used for a childlike purpose. Its purpose was to force the city to reopen the supervillain school. This is one of the main ways how you tell someone else's robot apart from Tobey's robot: the motive.
When WordGirl tries to approach the Coach (that rhymed lolz), the robot immediately grabs her and Huggy and flings them all the way to... Paris? That's one strong robot. WordGirl comes up with an idea, and she realizes that the only way to defeat this robot is to collaborate with the one and only adorable boy genius, Tobey McCallister. YESSSS A TOBECKY COLLAB FINALLYYYYYY OMG YESSSSS I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS,THIS IS MY FAVORITE PART OMGOMGOMG YOOOHOHOHOHOOHHH
The fourth major detail in this episode is that when WordGirl flies into his room for some assistance, she sees him PETTING A WORDGIRL DOLL while having TEA WITH IT??? 😭
i cannot take this seriously i apologize 💀💀💀SKULL EMOJIIIIIIIII💀💀💀
Now, here is is. The most important detail of all: The playful and innocent coversations Tobey and WordGirl have together... as teammates. The dialogue goes back in forth like this (color coded AND verbatim):
"What an... ✨unexpeted and delightful surprise, WordGirl~✨ Join me for a cup of tea~?"
"I don't have time for tea, Tobey. 😒"
"It's 🎵lapsang souchong🎵"
"Look, somehow the Coach has gotten your plans for a potato-fueled robot and is ATTACKING THE CITY! >:("
"I know, it's terrible, awful! Completely unacceptable."
"Wow...! I didn't realize how much you cared about protecting the city! 😳"
"Don't be abSURD 😫 The Coach stole those plans from ME 🗣 Now I'm trying to develop a new plan to get my revenge... NO ONE treats 🌸Theodore McCallister the third🌸 in this way!!!"
"Well, then you'll help me defeat him...?"
"It will be my pleasure. 🐿heeHEEhEehEeHEehEehEE🐿" (profile pic origin story, guys ✨)
Notice how Tobey was being chill with WordGirl whenever he's not doing anything evil and was willing to help her with her plan regardless of whether or not they're stopping a fellow villain was using HIS very own plans to destroy the city. You see, when he's alone and not destroying the city with robots, his true colors really do show. Even though he's a cold, heartless, bratty child destroying the city using mega mechanical monstrosities from the maker's malevolent mindset, deep down inside he's a lovesick, lively, and lonely little lost boy who only wants to spend time with his favorite enemy, WordGirl. Teaming up with WordGirl was all that mattered to him, and all he wanted was her love and appreciation for him. Although he knew they were on opposite sides of morality and this was forbidden love for him and his secret crush, he wanted to appear the best for her, trying desperately to seem as powerful, intelligent, and handsome as he could get, only to come off as defeated, arrogant, and unappealing in reality.
The dialogue after this is extremely touching to my heart, and it's so sentimental that I could cry. In fact, I'm crying right now as I'm typing this, because the wholesomeness will always be so perfectly melting my heart.
"Good work, Tobey. I'm really impressed by your dedication!"
"And my superior intelligence? :)"
"Well, yes, that too, I guess. Y'know, we make a pretty good team! :D"
"Yes... 💖"
I genuinely had to take a break for 10 minutes after watching this scene to cry. I'm not joking. The way the lines are delivered here just makes me so emotional. WordGirl sounds so incredibly proud of Tobey for helping her save the city from doom, and Tobey sounds like he finally got the positive reinforcement he wanted from her. The way he says "Yes... 💖", in my interpretation, it's almost like he's saying "Please, darling... please spend more time with me... I want to stay with you forever..." and the way it seems like he's out of breath while continuing to smile through episodes of miserable pain he's went through when all of his attempts to impress his crush failed and this time it worked really speaks volumes on how he's just so desperate to simply bond with her. And his eyes... ooh, the eyes... he seems so obsessed with her in such a romantic fashion that it almost feels like he's daydreaming about her loving him for who he is despite him being a villain. This episode... feels like a true redemption story for Tobey. We need more ToBecky teamups like this. We need more wholesome interactions between WordGirl/Becky and Tobey. If this show still went on... I would make this real.
I love Tobey.
I love ToBecky.
I love... this episode.
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And then he completely kills the vibe by saying "If only my lab partner, Becky Botsford was more like you." 😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜
Oh yeah, by the way, while all this conversation was going down, the robot decides to ignore all of the Coach's plans and destroys the city all by itself based on the alphabet for whatever reason.
When the ToBecky duo is done building their creation, they head over to the Coach's robot and immediately brings out their giant ✨worg robit✨. I FREAKING LOVE THIS COLLABORATION Y'ALL HAVE NO IDEA HUEHUEHUEHUEHUEHOOHOO-
The giant worg robit, as Tobey describes it, is "a giant robot that is fueled by other robots that are fueled by potatoes. In other words, a super-giant-potato-fueled-robot-fueled-robot!" He then proceeds to deliver one of the most satisfying evil cackles I've ever heard in my entire life. I freaking love this guy.
The worg robot destroys the potato robot almost immediately, and after that, the Coach regrets his actions and "promises" to go good from now on. Then, Tobey goes on to say that the Coach's "promises" don't impress him. WHAT A SAVAGEEEEE ✨✨✨
It's kinda weird hearing a villain say that to another villain, though. Can't blame my boy Tobes, though, he had every reason to be angry at him.
Then, the teensy-weensy boy genius decides to make the worg robot pick up the Coach and the car he was about to drive away in and almost flick him into the air (gah dayum this boy woke up and chose friendly fire today-) until Huggy stops him by straight up smacking the remote out of his hands. WordGirl makes the robot put the Coach down.
Then Tobey says "I thouroughly enjoyed partnering with someone who is almost but not quite as smart as I am." Aww, Tobey, come on. You gotta give your girl at least some of the credit!
The final scene involves Ms. Davis partnering Becky and Tobey AGAIN (💀💀💀💀💀SKUUUUHUUUUUUHUHUHULLLL EMOJIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII💀💀💀💀💀) and showing the class that they can make electricity by rubbing balloons into their hair. Tobey tells Becky that she should be lucky to sit next to a hero, an acquaintance of WordGirl's, and genius like him (damn I WOULD be lucky if I were her). He also says that Becky should try to be more like WordGirl (he still doesn't know about her identity after two whole times almost putting two and two together... 😭). After that, Becky decides to tease him one lsst time before the episode comes to an end by rubbing a balloon in his hair, making him look like one of those super saiyan characters in Dragon Ball Z.
Overall, this episode was absolutely adorable and a rollercoaster of emotions. I loved it.
~The End~
Edit: Sorry for being late on this one, I had things going on in life lolz ^_^"
#wordgirl#tobey mccallister#theodore tobey mccallister iii#stan tobey mccallister#tobey mccallister iii#stantobeymccallister#tobey mcallister#tobey mcallister iii#tobecky#tobecky forever#tobeckyforever
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ok so maybe this is offensive stereotype but am i the only one who thinks the other white police officer in hawkins is written as gay? the writers would know this stuff and hint towards it even if it wasnt relevant to the plot. it could be in s5, but i just feel like them having a random gay cop who isnt out but its unspoken open secret is so Stranger Things. Conservative towns like Hawkins are full of contradictions and people who bend truths to fit their ideology. Plenty of townfolk could suspect or know without actually doing anything about it except feeling judgemental and superior behind closed doors. They other cop who works with Hopper is black, + he becomes the chief. People of colour are often featured in respectable, visible and authoritative positions like school staff, white collar workers (Lucas' family) and news reporters. Not to say they are free from prejudice, but I'm sure Hawkins bigots 'allow' these figures while whispers abide beneath the surface. I just like that non-conformists are dotted all over Hawkins and have been all along, and if the police officer is shown to be queer by being targeted in a very minor plot in s5 it could be really interesting as relates to will's story. Like just one moment in a scene during the inevitable witch hunt, or if there are church service scenes, perhaps some sly looks as the congregation files in or out. That kind of thing.
Hmmm, I can't say that I ever personally got gay vibes from that cop, definitely curious if you want to expand as to why? I'm open to hearing you out!! I mean, I don't know if it's a bad stereotype until I know what the stereotype(s) is? He's one of those side characters that's a familiar face, you know, but not one I've paid too much attention to for anything deeper than rounding out the cast. Tell me your vision.
Open secrets seem to definitely fit in the show, that's correct at least. I mean, we get little hints to this a lot in season one. Building up the vibes of the town. There's so much we learn but aren't flat out told about our core cast. Especially about the Byers and we never really get an easy picture - but we know exactly who they are. Lives lived is something I always say and the show does a good job "implying" things off screen. Trusts the audience to infer and understand. Joyce's known mental health issues, Lonnie being viewed different by different people (blue collar/lower class viewing him as a peer vs. the well-off families like the Harringtons calling him a fuck-up, etc.), the implication from various places about Will's sexuality or assumption of it, etc.
So that's interesting a situation to pose about other characters. I read it a while ago and I don't remember all the details (and I know the plots are only semi-canon) but wasn't there a plotline in the Robin novel about her english teacher who's a gay man? And if I recall - there was stuff about his fear of getting found out in Hawkins and I think he ended up leaving town or something? Clearly - from what I know, the authors are given key themes and plot points for the novel and this is pretty big. Because we've gotten hints and implications about how Hawkins really is but nothing has been absolutely blatant yet, re: bigotry regarding homophobia. There's Troy's bullying via Mike, the implication of Hopper maybe viewing Will's disappearance as a potential hate crime, and Lonnie's verbal abuse implied - but Will has yet to be shown facing it directly on screen. Uh-oh. I feel/fear it's coming.
We see the foreshadowing with how the town acts during a satanic panic plot with Hellfire and the murders and everything Jason whips up. We see more foreshadowing with the townspeople flocking to church post-Hawkins split. I think it's going to ramp up and expose the ugliness in town. I'd like to rewatch the show to see if there's any hints at all with this cop - but for some character outside of the main cast, it would be interesting to see what the fear and tension is like in the town during this catastrophe that happened, played out during season 5. Something's gonna happen. Will is a huge focus. We've seen so much of set leaks focused on that church. It's all lining up.
On a tangential note, you mention seeing this for the cop and I don't have an opinion yet, but it's funny that personally? I got gay vibes from Mr. Clark and yet he's been shown with woman on screen. Like, back in the early days as a casual watcher, from season 1 on I thought he was gonna eventually be key in Will's storyline specifically for his sexuality. He's already close with our little nerd sqaud, but I thought the seasons were always gonna revolve around fall and school and he'd play a bigger role. Because it's such a trope that gay kids are shown to have a close relationship with a teacher mentor. Rings true in media and in real life. Show went a different direction in many ways than how I thought haha. I always felt kinda sad that wasn't exactly a thing in the show. Maybe it's too cliche, but it's a cliche I like.
#asks#Also I know the cop actor from another thing and he plays the straightest character ever so I see that character when I see him tbh haha
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⸢I don't know whether you're a suitable guy for this 'three methods' or not, but at the least, I'm sure of this one thing.⸥ The following words were eerily similar to a certain body of text that I was familiar with. ⸢The you reading this story will definitely make it out of here alive.⸥ Han Sooyoung's afterwords came to an end there. For the longest time, I couldn't tear my eyes away from the full-stop at the end of the sentence.
Yeah, okay, at this point I feel like it's almost blatant that Sooyoung is the author of TWSA and the longer I think on things, the more I'm honestly ashamed that I never thought of this theory before now. I guess I was too focused on it being Dokja or Secretive Plotter...who might also be Dokja lmfao...and as a result just kind of ignored the very obvious possibility right in front of me.
Like, I recently started to think that Han Sooyoung is the author mainly because of the fact that we've still got three unknowns left and what looks to be three protagonists of ORV, i.e. Joonghyuk, Dokja, Sooyoung >>> Secretive Plotter, Oldest Dream, The Author. And, thinking on it, a general novel also has three people doesn't it? Writer, Reader, and the Character(s).
And also because Sooyoung's "Predictive Plagarism" is…interesting. She can plot out an entire novel whereas Anna Croft can only use her Future Sight three times a day in very specific ways? Hmmm. Not to mention this power carried her forward all the way to the 1863rd round and the only thing to mess up her plans at the very end was Dokja showing up. Dokja…who can create revisions of TWSA with his actions.
Even Sooyoung herself says that her predictions could be wrong, but even if you take it in the opposite direction and take them to be definite futures, we have this:
Now originally, the [Predictive Plagiarism] was the 1863rd-turn Han Sooyoung's power. The Han Sooyoung of this turn, the one responsible for writing this book, also had acquired that power now. And the result of that was this very book. Here was the brand-new signpost for me to follow, me who had read the 'Ways of Survival'.
I mean, it's possible that she straight up wrote TWSA (and/or the Revisions) with Predictive Plagarism and then forgot. Or that she's so good at predicting what will happen because she's literally the author so of course she knows how her own mind works.
And now she's literally directly mirroring TWSA and calling Dokja her sole reader despite literally immediately before that talking about both Dokja and Joonghyuk. So why is Dokja her sole reader? Why wouldn't she assume Joonghyuk might read it? Might also read it with Dokja? Not to mention Dokja just immediately devours it with a passion that he's only ever shown TWSA.
Also, I kind of glossed over it in one of my tags on a previous post, but Dokja got the Final Version immediately after wanting to ask Sooyoung if he's done a good job and if everything will turn out okay. Wanted to ask her as an author. And that's not the first time.
He's asked her before about TWSA, specifically why she would have written it if she wrote it. At the time, the way she responded to Dokja made me think he was the author but now, after seeing that Dokja can affect the course of the story both inside (revisions) and outside of it (comments to the author) plus everything shifting towards the idea of "the characters are going to make their own story" makes me think that was foreshadowing of an entirely different kind. And let's not even get started on this quote we just got:
The author of this scenario was Han Sooyoung. Regrettably, there was no guarantee of the work ending up as a success even if the author did an excellent job. – Time to start our attack, Yoo Joonghyuk. Because the ones to complete the story were the 'Characters', not the author, that's why.
Kind of sounds like the entire theme that we've been working towards for the whole plot, doesn't it?
And there's other clues, looking back.
Sooyoung always insisting she didn't plagiarize TWSA and Dokja even confirming that with Lie Detection. Sooyoung claiming that everything kind of pulls from each other & there's lots of common themes...and then we see that TWSA is full of other genres and very obviously referenced common tropes like isekai, reincarnation, mecha, battle tournaments, etc.
And then we have Asuka Ren writing Peace Land and then forgetting it and thinking it was something she read, which I have always thought was foreshadowing, though at the time I attributed that foreshadowing to Dokja. But more importantly, Asuka Ren getting discouraged because Peace Land wasn't doing well and breaking down and writing something else (Kyrgios) that was a bit more pandering to the general public. Almost makes you wonder if TWSA wasn't doing well and Sooyoung decided to write something else that took off...
And oh my goodness, I just went back to find the post to reference for the above and LOOK AT THIS WEBCOMIC PANEL! LOOK AT WHO'S LITERALLY IN FRAME WHEN ASUKA REN IS TALKING ABOUT "WRITER WHOSE WORK IS BEING READ BY A READER LIKE YOU." AHHHHHH.
That's actually so blatant I'm straight up ashamed of myself, especially when Dokja outright says he isn't the author, he's the reader. I actually remember thinking it was interesting that Sooyoung was there but figured "oh she's an author too." 🤦♂️
And there's other things too, some of which are admittedly more of a stretch than others.
Her attributes - not just the author attribute but also avatar. She can make and control multiple people. Kind of like an author writing a book, huh? Except then she's lost control of one of them because she put too much of herself in it (or vice versa). And now we have the novel where the characters are telling the story...
The huge emphasis on how gorgeous Joonghyuk is, not to mention various other characters' looks, which are compared to Joonghyuk's. Meanwhile, back in Peace Land again we have:
In the midst of running, Asuka Ren often looked back at the rocky area. Han Sooyoung glanced at Ren and asked, "Are you sorry?" "Huh? No." "Don't you feel that it is weird? It is probably the first time you saw a character that you made." "…Yes." "Furthermore, he is handsome."
Sooyoung not only focusing on how handsome Kyrgios is but tying that together with her statement about meeting a character who you created. Seems like that could potentially mirror someone else and their creation, hmm?
Also, on the topic of looks, I recently thought that maybe Dokja isn't from this dimension and that's why he looks blurred (because the Sooyoung of the other universe looked blurred too when speaking to "our" Sooyoung). But now I realize...there's no evidence at all that Sooyoung 1863rd doesn't also look blurred to the people of her world. And if we maybe consider that she's the original Sooyoung... What if both Dokja and Sooyoung are blurred to everyone but each other because they're both outside of this world as reader and author and the characters can't ever fully know what either looks like from inside the story?
Or, heck, I'm not certain we actually have proof that our Sooyoung isn't also blurred or that she sees Dokja as blurred? Like, sure, she calls him ugly but it's Sooyoung, plus that wasn't unprompted, Dokja was specifically asking about his looks and she kinda mocked/teased him. And there's even a scene in the Webtoon when he's dying of poison (the Nirvana arc) where she's like "he actually looks a little handsome" or something along those lines. Which I figured was worth mentioning because I remember thinking it was weird at the time but won't necessarily consider canon since it's the Webtoon and the novel is way more vague:
Like her, he was an ordinary person before the world was destroyed. Such a person had jumped onto a stage to decide the world's fate and was moving the main characters. Han Sooyoung had forgotten for a moment that Kim Dokja was also a normal human. She stretched out a finger and touched Kim Dokja's mouth. Then her face became a strange mixture of a smile and a frown. Han Sooyoung giggled. "…It is really strange."
...Actually that sounds vaguely foreshadow-y even without trying to decide if she can see his face or not.
And too we recently had the whole "which story will you vote for" thing going on where the dokkaebis are talking to each other. Now that we have at least two separate "versions" of TWSA going on I wonder if it's more along the lines of the author's version vs the reader's version?
idk I'll probably think of even more things if I continue reflecting on the novel, but this is long enough.
At this point idek what I'll do if Sooyoung isn't the author because it fits way better than my previous Dokja/Secretive Plotter theories and I was pretty certain at the time that it was definitely Dokja. 😂
#orv novel chapter 377#omniscient reader's viewpoint#orv#orv liveblog#orv spoilers#hsy#kdj#long post#I swear if orv reveals she's the author like two chapters from now after I spent an hour typing up all of this theorizing...#which I swear has happened to me like two or three times before
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If you think that Bram knew do you also think Fukuchi knew or had an inkling to the possibility at all or no?
hmmm i mean i wouldn't brush it off yk, given his explanation to fukuzawa he was very hopeful he'd solve all that though... but on the other hand we have his very unsurprised reaction now? i'm sure he had a bit of a clue about who he is.. i can't remember what the guy who kidnapped and brought fyodor to ace said about him and his ability again but wasn't that also some kind of foreshadowing (sth like "be careful that guy will overtake your mind")? and i mean if that guy knew surely fukuchi had some kind of information in regards to that as well? idk, i'm not even sure what the guy said anymore so hmmm
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Ok, ok, I'm gonna set aside that chapter ending for a bit so that I'm able to talk about the parts before it even though it has me in a very tight grip right now fdkhjgkjh
Just hrrrrrrrrr, so many thoughts where to even start!!! AHHHHH
Ok first of all, the first night! We get to see the perspective of the boys! They really were just about to go for a random human huh? Which I mean makes sense, but that would have been so very absolutely bad because while in the other hunter's case they could have claimed self-defense (very loosely as one, in the position of the hunter, could argue they didn't have to go that far), in this case would have literally just been, well, murder. From a demonic perspective it was perfectly reasonable of course! They DID seek out any animal prey first, and finding none, it was their one option left. But from a human perspective? Literally no different than any of the other monsters y/n has been hunting to protect innocent people. Little Reid will never know how his presence actually saved the people travelling with him.
And omg the kid! The sacred rules intrigue me more and more! The knowledge that he was in danger and lost was enough to make their growing hunger almost completely ignorable. As long as they hadn't found him they focused so intently on him and nothing else. Of course, the hunger was bad enough that they were still constantly aware of it, but it amazes me, because we see that later in the chapter they even fear being tempted by y/n's heart.
But ahhh, ok, getting back on track before I jump too much around, oof! That next morning was rough. Y/n already struggles so badly with their own self doubt, and obviously the one course of action the boys could take to not be discovered (or delay the hurt that came the next night anyway), was to latch onto that and make y/n belief they were tricking themselves which oof, oof, oof. I love the boys but yikes they do deserve to feel guilty for that one, because they at the same time made y/n feel guilty for doubting them.
AND then the next night! Oh boy, oh boy! I was actually wondering if the rake had no heartbeat, which I think this confirmed it doesn't, with Sun and Moon actively scanning for it. The night before they would not have noticed out of being too busy with Reid, (since they also didn't notice y/n's own when it spiked in fear), but this one? When filled with rage and scared that they could have returned to a corpse, and HUNGRY? I don't think they would have missed it, so I'm guessing it's kind of like the vampires that have it but it doesn't beat. Or it does but it produces no sound? Since the creature itself seems to not make a sound in general hmmm.
Oh and Naff! The foreshadowing with the bear traps was so clever! When they were mentioned again I didn't think of it much, but then I was like "huh funny that they've come up ag- WAIT A MINUTE, COULD IT BE?" And then it was!! Ahhh!! I like how once again we can see how smart and capable the hunter is. They are sick and very weak, but learned quickly from the last night and knew not to look at those eyes. They got a hit in, tried to get to the salt (which not a bad idea! and I have a feeling it will come up again too hehe), and then they manged to make a plan on the spot to lure the rake into the bear traps! Clever heart, indeed!
And then! What a brutal death for that cryptid! Honestly, all the others should be grateful (well, except doppleganger XD) that it was the hunter getting to them, because Sun and Moon do not hold back, especially knowing how close this one was to killing them. And gosh, y/n got to see every detail in that killing. They were horrified even when the thing was about to kill them. The glimpse at the demonic cryptid and now knowing it's the same one they thought they saw before? I can see a great deal of paranoia in the future days, which only combines now with what's happening with Sun and Moon.
(Sidenote: "Eclipses the gray fog" hehe, I see what you did there~ )
The relief of them being safe was so brief, because that following conversation was going to be hard yes or yes. Gosh, just, the plead for them to not be scared? Killed me. Instantly. They know they were seen. They know this fear, when everything is safe, is due to them. And now there is no hunger to distract from that little fact. And then the hurt, the disappointment. All around.
They were caught in a lie. As much as it was not a verbal lie, the insinuation that they didn't leave was clear as day. The making them believe that they were being ridiculous was clear as day. And they might be too sick to reflect on that now, but oof, it's right there for them to see. And it's a valid thing for y/n to push! The care has always been clearly mutual, but not the trust. From their perspective they have bared themselves to the boys, letting them in in so many ways, so from their perspective they are being shut out. And now they inevitably think it's because of something about them. Not proving themselves as trustworthy, and now Sun and Moon assuring it's not the case, and then immediately not providing a better explanation, while just having been caught tricking them will not be very credible.
And now y/n is afraid. Afraid their love for the boys is more one-sided than they thought, because even when asking if they won't ever leave (meaning for good), the boys can't promise they won't (because they might have to leave briefly again), and it hurts them so badly, it hurts them they aren't apparently trustworthy in the boys eyes and it's enough to not want them at their side through the night even when their presence has helped them emotionally and through the fever! And the boys can do nothing to reassure them, because it's either straining their relationship, or potentially losing them forever.
And hhhhh, when they ask if y/n wants them to leave! And they say no, but with how exact words are for them, the addition of there being something dangerous out there might imply to them the answer would be yes if not for the hypothetical threat! And that must hurt a lot too! And they are feeling rejected, and the last nights they couldn't allow themselves to be nearby and now that there is no pressing issue that would make them leave, they aren't welcome to be close and ahhhhh
My last thought is that now y/n is sad, and sick and will likely have night terrors for a good while, having felt the terror of a demonic so nearby again, thinking themselves so surely dead, but now the boys will be unwelcomed to help, at least these first few nights I think D:
Oooough, my heart hurts, I am eating this angst, it's just SO FREAKING GOOD!!
Excellent chapter Naff, 10 broken hearts out of 10 would cry again! </3
I'm so excited for what's to come! :D
Chaotik I am eating up this entire ask I just ahhhhh!!!! *rattles you affectionately*
There is so much I want to touch on but, especially that, yeah, the boys are making a lot of terrible decisions, not only for themselves but for Y/N's well-being and their relationship, but it's funny what fear will have you do, huh?
Thank you so much for reading and for all of your beautiful thoughts, babe ♥ ♥ ♥
#i'm excited for what's too come too hehehe#cryptid sightings#chaotikanvas#cryptid sightings spoilers
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Chum Liveblog - Chapter 1
So i already read this chapter but will read it again bc it fucks. Go read Chum by @reachartwork if you like baby superheroes with weird powers. Mute the tag #chum liveblog if you arent interested! I might also move this to my main @bugbeee if people prefer that
1) the writing style draws me in immediately since the way the narrator (Sam) thinks and talks is so very reminiscent of my own adhd riddled brain. The way she notices one thing before immediately moving to the next detail is just. Chefs kiss
2) the tapa tapa tapa does something to my hindbrain. Like literary asmr.
3) god Sam's awkwardness and hesitance about her accident combined with her bluntness is so fucking good
4) SHARK TEETH SHARK TEETH SHARK TEETH
5) SHARK TEETH WITH DRAWBACKS HOT DAMN
6) “I didn’t get any gills though, which would’ve been cool. I can’t breathe underwater. But I think I can swallow salt water, but that’s kind of a sh- kind of a poopy superpower so you don’t need to write that one down. Don’t write that one down, please?” I would die for you Sam
7) god the author is so good at writing the livewire nervousness that accompanies the MC. Like the little details of bouncing knees and flexing hands that she grabs to stop, the tapping and moving- i love you so much for this
8) her mom taught her the word austere :)
9) ohhh she's got those bruce the shark powers (sniffing blood)
10) god her asking if the officer needs her friends contact numbers like the fbi shes just a KID
11) ohoho JLUMA??? desperate to know the acronym meaning for that. Its something shes applied for and its a license so hmmm [thinky face]
12) the way she gets annoyed over her parents gushing over her its so teenager i love her. Also she did so good at her bat mitzvah :)
13) "Once I get my license, does that mean I can go out and start biting people? Not that I plan to do that, I’m just wondering.” Yeah does she know i would die for her???
14) sam says acab fuck yeah
15) Officer Gold shrugs his shoulders and opens the front door, clearly also trying to escape the situation like I am. “Well, who knows. A supe just got elected to City Council. Maybe you’ll be the first superhuman senator if you stay in school and focus on your studies?” Oh that is a fucking gorgeous piece of foreshadowing/world building. Frothing at the mouth rn
16) THE CATEGORIES time to toss the worm categories out of my brain
17) breakdown of her powers a la government dossier! God its fascinating to see how its classified and seen in this world
18) AND WE HAVE AN ACRONYM MEANING 'Juvenile License to Utilize Metahuman Abilities' holy shit theres so much unsaid in that. When did it come about, how, whats its scope (which was briefly touched upon) etc. i cannot WAIT
19) bad dream/flashback? Its written so well and sams commentary of it feels real. "The situation is fucked beyond repair. I think I’m allowed to say that now."
20) oh my fucking god. "I hope I don’t die right now, because thinking about my parents being sad at my funeral makes me sad, but also, I hope I do die, because if I have to live one more second with this kind of pain I’m going to kill myself, myself." Author. Author. Who gave you the RIGHT to hit me like that
21) her realisation about why shes in so much pain, seeing her grandpa screaming through the water, the fishing metaphors- aughhhhhhhh
22) god i love the continued mention of words her mom has taught her its just. So fucking real of her
Conclusion: holy fucking shit what an absolute BANGER of a first chapter. I am hooked. I am printing this out and eating it. Thank you author for writing this, I will read more tomorrow
#chum liveblog#bug talks#bug blogs#chum#AUFHHHHH DEAD DEAD DEAD#if the author publishes this im getting dibs
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