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The first thing I do is hug them. Judge me all you want, but who knows how long they've been trying to revive me. How many of my other minions were sacrificed to do this. My memories- My sentience is completely intact, which you can't do without a massive sacrifice.
I allow myself a week to mourn for my dear companions before turning back to the Elder Lich. Their name tag has music notes around the border and their name, Melody, in elegant cursive.
I remember Melody. It's embarrassing to admit this, but I crushed on her hard when we were children and she always wanted to be a musician. But the orphanage she was raised in didn't have the money to buy her the instrument if they even wanted her to in the first place. She was always headstrong and had a deep sense of loyalty, which would get her into trouble when her friends were adopted into abusive homes.
Then one day when I visited to play with her, the director said that Melody was adopted and like the naive child I was, I believed him.
I found her years later frozen in the snow. There was just enough intact of her for me to recognize my old crush. I had started on my journey as a necromancer at that point, but I threw myself into my craft.
I too, almost shared the same fate. Sold off through marriage and not adoption when I told my parents that I liked women. Most of the skeletons I revived are like that, those with a tragic past. I couldn't bring them back with their memories, but I could give them a chance to exist without the fear and bad memories.
After I collect myself, I ask Melody about what she knows about the world now. After all, who knows how long I've been dead.
You, a necromancer, were always fond of your skeleton minions. Even going as far as to make each one a personalized name tag. Then you were cut down by those blasted heroes, only to one day reopen your eyes and see an Elder Lich looming over you with a very faded name tag.
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Danger
I wake to chatter from outside. Getting up, I walk out and drum my hand on the door and crack it open.
"Pyria! It's about 7 o'clock, you might want to get up." She starts to wake up and mutter an ‘alright’, so I leave her, leaving the carved wood slightly open.
The house is eerily quiet, I brush it off. Looking outside the magpies are about, it's not spring so we're fine, there are other bird calls out there, like the willy-wagtails, it's how it always is.
Those people outside were still loud, what were they doing? It's better not to look or ask.
"You alright Ryllae?" My sister asks, bringing me out of my daze.
"Y-yeah nah, I'm fine, just thinking," I reply, started by her sudden appearance next to me. I start making our lunch for later.
"Looks like rain, we should stay inside today," Pyria remarks, glancing outside.
"What abou-"
"Oh, it's fine, I'll call and say we can't go." She walks off leaving me by myself.
I brush it off, better not to continue this conversation. Through the windows, I could see shadows of people, and the banksia trees do screw my sight up. I should continue lunch, even if we don't go outside today.
"Yep.... y-yes will do. Thanks, I'll see you tomorrow... everything is fine." I could hear parts of her call. I shouldn't interfere or listen in; I've learned from my mistakes before.
"If we're not going out, I'll go and do the work I need to do in my room!" I holler out to her, she's finished her call so it's fine, I think. I walk up before she can say anything else.
The chatter can still be heard.
I should go check it out, maybe see what's going on, maybe a festival is on, or a rally, a march perhaps. I shouldn't though, I need this work done. I sit at my desk, staring at the craft tools laid out on the workbench.
I look up, it's been hours, maybe three or four, those people can still be heard, and the birds are quiet now. I get up from my desk, I can't hear Pyria, I doubt she would have left, she said we weren't going out, perhaps we don't have bread or milk, though I swear we had enough this morning.
I look at the old clock hanged on the dark wooden wall, it’s been about three or four hours since I sat down. The house is quiet, thought Pyria would be carving, or making some noise at least. The birds who were loud, are silent.
I need to walk; I want fresh air. It couldn't hurt to go outside, maybe the backyard will be fine, I should still check with my sister though.
Circling the house, she is nowhere, with no noise or any indication she is there. It’s too quiet.
Stopping by the front it's so empty, it's only me and Pyria so why did I think there was more? Outside is a mess of trees, bushes, and weeds, all overgrown. Someone has deal with this it’s out of control, maybe Pyria or I should send something to the council about it.
There's still no sign of her. Stepping quietly through the house we share, as if there would be someone inside, the mirrors are dusty, the whole house is, it feels like it's been abandoned.
I step outside, the backyard a mess, a desolate place that shows no care put into the placement of the plants and trees, them both being overgrown, moss growing on the once intricately designed stone paths. It won't matter if I chose to neaten this up, I'm supposed to stay inside, the clouds on the other hand, show no sign of rain and I can clearly see the sky, it’s clear just like the ocean.
Chirp, chirp.... Chirp, chirp...
Those sounds continued kind-of like a bird, and they got closer. I could go back inside. I turn around seeing those beady eyes staring, making those chirps, and other small noises.
The weird thing is, it looks elvish, has it tricked people, does it think it can trick me, and maybe it has?
I walk closer, no longer thinking, although I'm not walking, it's pulling me. I look down at my abdomen, vines and roots entangled themselves around me.
"Oh... No, you c-can't le-eave." It chokes out, I didn't dare to look into its eyes as I tried to rip those vines from me, "You already left, y-you can undo this... mistake." Its voice barely made any incoherent sentences, it could atleast choke out the last word, 'Mistake'.
Chirp, cracking followed, as it tries to move closer, as is gets closer.
I try moving backwards, just to keep my eyes on it but failing those roots from before tripping me, I bring my head up to look at this thing in its eyes.
It's already staring, I look behind there's more behind, why wouldn’t I move?
Those eyes, the hair coloured like the fire burnt trees and their pointed ears, maybe it was my imagination. I don’t think it would be, but I can’t take any chances.
"Pyria..."
#short stoy#this is the first story I've written#i do like it thought but obviously could be better with practice#this story is based in Australia just so you know :)
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You Should Be Here With Me
A 2024 Advent Fic by lululawrence
Harry Styles/Louis Tomlinson | 34k | 26 Chapters
The festive period is a traditionally hectic one in the world of Premier League football, and this year is no different. A lot is riding on how Manchester United is able to come through the fixtures in the coming weeks.
Louis and his teammates know all too well the pressure that is on their shoulders. They need to prove, not just to fans of the club but the entire league, that they still have what it takes to be a team worthy of fighting for the top of the table.
Throw in the fact that Louis is all too aware that he's not getting any younger in a profession that demands your peak physical fitness year round and the incredibly fit Harry Styles, who is part of the club's social media team, and this year's festive period might just be the most important one yet.
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NOW COMPLETE!
#my fic post#advent fic#teaser post#2024 advent fic#fic rec#you guys i have this entire thing plotted out in detail#and i've got most of the first five days written so far#hopefully will get more written over the next few days so i'm not writing the chapters the day of or anything... if all goes well...#please send me good vibes that stress is not how i like to live#but i sure will if i have to#anyway all that to say#this fic... is going to be long#so i apologize ahead of time for the length of the chapters as we go on lol#but hopefully it's a story that you will be just as into as i am#haha#thanks for coming to my ted tags talk
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The first chapter of my sci-fi dystopian Team Rancher au, Finality’s Fault, is here! I worked really hard on this first chapter and am very proud of it, so comments and rbs (feedback in general) would be greatly welcomed!
Also, asks are always open if you wanna ask me about it, theorize, or just chat in general :)
#FinFault au#team rancher#tangotek#jimmy solidarity#ethoslab#(I'm tagging the art here)#trafficshipping#< ship tag for filtering purposes#I am so new to Ao3 that I was just quivering like a chihuahua the entire time I was making the post#but in an excited way mostly#I am very excited about this fic#I've written lots of oc stories before but this is my first fic ever so pls be nice#Thank you to everyone who's given me feedback on the concept art so far! ily all#aris paracosm art
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in tha story building process again... i think the transition from "here's some stuff i like all put in a blender" to "here's what i want to say" in the process is pretty cool. sometimes the stuff i like has to come out of the blender because it won't contribute to what i want to say
#in recent years i've been trying really hard at this even when i know i won't rly be working on the story beyond just outlines#i've been writing all my life it's my primary means of self expression but until recently it was more like... a super long-running#sitcom with 20 seasons where i just threw everything in and watched the characters bounce off it with no real conclusion#like my first setting (rip) had 13 books written in it and although there was a vague 'first contact' plot going on that didn't start until#the 8th book... everything before it was internal setting drama & establishment#but anyway i'm an adult now i'm trying to be serious. 'what do i want to say about this topic' is my go-to#imimata rampant
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A sci-fi(ish), queered retelling of the Medusa myth. Content warnings for discussions of rape and sexual assault. You can find my story here on AC|DC.
#sjlwrites#MY FIRST EVER PUBLISHED SHORT STORY 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳#it's actually my least favourite short story i've written recently the ending isn't as polished as it was in my head but i'm still proud!!#my writing#writing#writers#writers on tumblr#writeblr#short story#medusa#medusa retelling#short fiction#queer writing#queer fiction
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What if we fell in love and you died LMAOOO what then
#joke of the century fr#the real what if is like what if I made a little prologue comic for bloodlines to show the night when pepper died#jk there's no what if I'm already doing it HAHA#and NONE of you can stop me 🔫#sleep.txt#sketch tag#only I can stop MYSELF#fr tho. if I may be fr for a sec#I've written an outline just to see what the story would be like if I were to do like. the entire story of the game#the vincent & pepper TM version of the story ofc which deviates a bit from canon#and uh. the outline is over 30 pages long#and I've come to the conclusion there would be about 30 chapters#if I were to cover the entire game#and yk I'm insane bc I looked at the finished outline and went 'well it's not even that long'#LIKE BRO#is my little character obsession worth starting a 30 chapters comic. is it.#I'm genuinely wondering#bc ON ONE HAND#I'd definitely improve on my comic skills & writing skills(especially writing dialogue and structuring a story and chapters)#and probably improve a lot on my art also bc of so many different scenarios I'd be drawing#but on the other hand.#it IS 30 chapters. like. I feel like I'm delusional rn#honestly I should probably just get the prologue done first and Then we'll see fnsjjcnfncn#no way to tell how fast or slow this would be until I finish this part first
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thirteen update 💕💍🍽️🩸

chapter 5: february
summary:
“These things do not concern you,” Papa told him flatly. “I will run my household however I see fit. Your concerns are with your schoolwork and your modeling.” Blood pumped heavy and fast through Adrien’s heart. That wasn’t—fair. Concern was about all he was capable of these days. “And what about Maman?” Adrien asked, exhausted, reckless. “May I be concerned about Maman?” Something shifted on Papa’s face, all his emotions smothered in stone.
excerpt:
The best day of Adrien’s life was eight months and six days ago. No contest.
It was a crisp kind of cold that day, the Paris sky blooming a bright and brilliant blue overhead. The sun pierced right through the brisk February air, a shock of spearmint and adrenaline in his veins. He couldn’t stop widening his eyes, couldn’t stop smiling. The city was so alive. Strains of love songs poured out of open cafe doors and onto tourists, their hands full of red roses and lovers’ hands. The cobblestones sang with the patters of paired footsteps all down the street. It was the city of love always, but today especially. Today Adrien was made of the stuff, just bursting with it.
And, like every other day in the running for the best of his life, Marinette was there.
“You’d better not pull anything,” she warned, tightening her grip on his hand as they passed by a tourist couple looking very… engrossed with each other in the middle of the street. “And—and if you do, you have to tell me. Right now.”
Marinette’s brow was lightly furrowed, the bridge of her nose just barely scrunched up. Her hair was pulled half-back with a pink ribbon, matching the shade of the skirt she wore beneath her velvety black peacoat. Her Mary Janes clipped anxiously down the road and Adrien’s heart danced and swelled and spun in his chest.
“Pull something? Me?” Adrien stepped aside so their arms were outstretched, and then pulled at Marinette’s fingers, sending her tumbling back into his arms. She looked up at him, trying to frown, smiling. He grinned. “I would never.”
“I’m serious.” Marinette untangled herself from his arms and interlocked her fingers again with his. Her hand was the warmest thing in the world. She looked at him sternly, wagging a finger in his face. “I need to know so I can—prepare. Especially if it’s something crazy. No funny business.”
“Marinette,” he moaned, draping a wounded hand over his heart. One corner of his mouth quirked into a smile, eyes darting to meet her gaze. “You think I’m funny?”
She groaned. “I think you‘re—I think you’re ridiculous, and sappy, and romantic, and I think it’s Valentine’s Day in Paris”—this part she shouted, which drew a few stares—“and I think you’re about to take me on an insanely adorable date, and I think Alya took me to get my nails done last week—!”
“You’re so thoughtful,” Adrien remarked, swinging their hands back and forth. “And observant. What a beautiful mind you have, my lady.”
“You have to tell me,” Marinette insisted. She stopped them on the street and frowned at him, pink flushing the apples of her cheeks. “Is it—are you—?”
“Hm?” Adrien murmured, brushing a lock of hair behind her ear. Marinette’s cheeks went ablaze.
“I—you—you know what I mean!” she spluttered. “Are you gonna…you know!”
He tilted his head to the side. “Am I…?”
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#ml#miraculous#miraculous ladybug#my art#thirteen#adrien agreste#emilie agreste#she's there. just look#don't be worried about the blood emoji it's actually a very funny story#and doesn't involve death at all I promise#shout out to the procreate perspective tools for this one. owe them my life#happy february it's march. are any of us surprised#maybe march will be in march this year but I cannot make any promises#the first 2k of this is just the cutest adrinette fluff i've ever written and I love that for me#(me making my own content) I stay winning#anyway. adrien is having a hard time etc. read more
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"Oi, don't wait up for me, yeah?" Charles informs Edwin, "I'll be in Crystal's room all night."
"Charles! I'm surprised at you," Edwin exclaims, looking flustered.
"It's not like that, mate--she's been having nightmares about David and I've agreed to keep her company. Said she feels safer with a friend looking after her, y'know?" He shifts from one leg to the other, one hand rubbing his other arm, absent-mindedly. "It's not a big deal, alright? Just didn't want you wondering after me." He shrugs non-chalantly and gives his partner a gentle clap on the shoulder before re-entering Crystal's room.
She's already changed into her sleep clothes and curled up under the covers. Crystal meets Charles' eyes and pats the bed beside her. With a small smile, he approaches and sits on the side of the bed, leaning on one hand and looking down on her.
"Would you like to talk before bed, or should I leave you to it?"
Seeing him only sit on the edge, she takes his hand and guides him to lay down next to her. "C'mere. Just lay with me, okay? If you don't mind. . .?"
His eyebrows raise and a twinkle of excitement crosses his eyes that he fails to suppress.
Crystal rolls her eyes at him and he chuckles. She pulls his arm over her side and holds onto him as best she can, letting out a long sigh. Charles feels a fluttering sensation in his chest, like a memory of a quickening heartbeat.
"Thanks for doing this. I'm sure it'll be less interesting than however you usually spend your nights, and I'm not much company to you when I'm asleep."
He grins, fingers attempting to brush lightly along her back. "I wouldn't say that."
She looks him up and down. "Oh, geez, you're not gonna' like, stare at me all night are you?"
"Well, I don't sleep, but I could try closing my eyes and laying here with you. Seems restful, anyway, doesn't it?" Her brow furrows, and he mirrors her expression, sobering up. "I'm not sure, uh, what your plan was?"
". . .I guess I'm not sure, either. I just didn't want to be alone in this big, empty room tonight."
"You could invite Niko across the hall for a sleepover," he teases, tempting her to explain why she chose him.
She recognizes this immediately and narrows her eyes playfully, pursing her lips, and refusing to take the bait. "You've got a cricket bat handy if any other ghosts or demons decide to pop up overnight. Niko would probably just talk their ear off and try to set them up with each other."
He chuckles. "Tough to argue with that."
. . .
After a while, Crystal's breathing slows, her chest rising and falling in smaller increments. Charles does observe this for a moment, before realizing he's doing exactly what she told him not to do. He shifts so he is staring up at the ceiling.
He can't feel Crystal's breath and warmth beside him. Without looking at her, he could forget she's there. He could just be laying alone in this bed for no reason.
He turns onto his side again, facing her and snuggling as close as he can without phasing into her. He has to focus to keep his form solid enough for her arm to rest on.
He closes his eyes and replicates breathing, concentrating on being present, and trying to remember old sensations. How would this moment feel, if he still had his body?
A cold chill runs down his core and he tries to focus on the memory of body contact sharing warmth.
While Crystal has one of the best nights of sleep she's had in weeks, Charles struggles to remember how it felt to be alive.
#text post#fanfiction#fanfic#first fanfic i've written in like a decade?#i haven't really written fanfiction much at all tbh#this fandom's doing it to me though#and if i have to be the only person creating cryland content so be it this is my white whale#cryland#crystal palace#charles rowland#crystal x charles#charles x crystal#dbda#dead boy detectives#dead boy detective agency#fluff#angst#ghost romance#ghost mechanics#ghost logistics#touch starved#charles rowland pov#one shot#oneshot#ficlet#short story#what do people tag fics as these days#drabble
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Genesis 4:1-5, translated by S. R. Driver, from The Book of Genesis, 1905
A Clash of Kings, Prologue - Maester Cressen

Emanuel Krescenc Liška – Cain (1885)
Claus Westermann, Genesis : a commentary, 1984

Arthur Segal - Kain und Abel (1918)
A Clash of Kings, Prologue - Maester Cressen
Natalie Diaz, A Brother Named Gethsemane, from When My Brother Was an Aztec

Lovis Corinth - Kain (1917)
Genesis 4:6-9, translated by S. R. Driver, from The Book of Genesis, 1905
A Clash of Kings, Chapter 33 - Catelyn IV

Odilion Redon - Cain and Abel (1886)
A Clash of Kings, Chapter 33 - Catelyn IV
Genesis 4:9-14, translated by S. R. Driver, from The Book of Genesis, 1905
A Clash of Kings, Chapter 31 - Catelyn III

St. Omer, Benedictine Abbey of St. Bertin; c. 1190-1200
A Storm of Swords, Chapter 36 - Davos V
S.R. Driver, The Book of Genesis, 1905
A Clash of Kings, Chapter 42 - Davos II

Lazzaro Pisani - Death of Abel (1885)
S.R. Driver, The Book of Genesis, 1905
A Clash of Kings, Chapter 42 - Davos II
A Clash of Kings, Chapter 42 - Davos II

Cain and Abel - City of Zeven - 2015 (source)
Genesis 4:14-16, translated by S. R. Driver, from The Book of Genesis, 1905
#stannis baratheon#renly baratheon#house baratheon#he was my brother and i killed him#asoiaf#web weaving#valyrianscrolls#mine#fun fact i had to go to my uni library to find When My Brother Was an Aztec to get this quote. It's a lovely poem you should all read it#there is a longer section that fits the characters but it feels a little iffy taking something that is clearly personal#and apply it to fictional characters. like it has racial motifs that i don't feel comfortable saying 'oh exactly like my little characters#written by a white man!' yk?#anyway! i'm actually proud of this#i'm so normal about these biblical siblings < lying#i've said it before but this was baby's first horror story. i was obsessed with them as a kid
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im completely feral over all your jelsa stories!!!!!! do you ever write established relationship jelsa or have any headcanons about what they would be like together in a serious relationship or marriage????
THANK YOU SO MUCH. 😭😭😭😭😭😭💕💕💕💕🙏 thank you thank you nonny for this super sweet ask and this really lovely question and all of your love and support!! 💕💕💕💕💕
i have... never actually written established!relationship (in any fandom), now that i'm thinking about it? that said, i guess i can come up with a quick list of some headcanons, maybe? 😂 i will have to think about this more, but for now, here's a quick drop:
elsa is an early riser; elsa helps jack create more sustainable sleeping patterns and habit formations 😂
when jack gets Impetuous Urges to Do Something Rash and Impractically Spontaneous, elsa will ground jack, reminding him to think before acting. (he occasionally Still Does It, anyway.) elsa knows what she signed up for, lol.
jack loves to play Harmless(!) Pranks, just to watch elsa’s reaction. (he is no longer allowed to sneak up on her after The Incident).
they also quibble over the definition of "harmless" and the specific logistical implications of that; for a while, jack was banned from further pranking, but then he got more creative at showing elsa that pranks could be wholesome and genuine, in which they could both be in on the joke. however, due to elsa's deeply-rooted Need to Excel and her (Not-so)Secret Competitive AF Streak, her retaliation in escalating the Cleverness Prank War quickly resulted in jack's prompt implementation of the Prank-Free Zones and Time Periods. (no, he was not scared.)
elsa, usually reserved, has learned to let her playful side show more often with jack. she might still pretend to be exasperated by his antics, but sometimes it's part of the game (or habit).
elsa sill struggles with opening up emotionally sometimes, but she progressively feels safe enough to share her innermost thoughts and fears. with time, she confides in him more about her worries. she still never likes the idea that jack sees her Imperfect Parts, but at least she can tolerate the discomfort (and, yes, take comfort in it) now
(jack loves elsa's Imperfect Parts, and jack admits that he is Weirdly Proud and Competitively Honored to be one of the only people, even including anna, who gets to see them. he also is strangely Comforted and Validated that elsa is, in fact, not perfect because for a while there, he was pretty freaked out and intimidated by how fancy she is.)
until he realized that no one ever let her actually be a Weirdo before, and once he realizes the Truth of Elsa Also Being a Secret (albeit perhaps more Subdued) Weirdo, the Universe Aligns.
jack listens to elsa's Big Conversations intently, activating varying levels of Serious Mode.
jack is getting better at recognizing the moments when elsa needs him to play and needs him to listen or Give His Opinion or any combination of those things.
jack learns that it's not always about Saying the Right Thing (which he is not very good at, anyway, or so our Serially Unreliable Narrator thinks), but rather being able to read elsa's mood and anticipate what she might need (even if she is not aware of it herself yet).
elsa is meticulous about planning and preparing for special occasions.
elsa likes traditions! jack likes tradition only because elsa likes them, lol, and hey, okay, these are more fun than he thought?? (who knew fun could be organized??!!?)
so he really wants to show (off to) her by pulling off Incredible Planning Feats in her honor, too (they do not go as smoothly, lol).
jack will often go out of his way to spontaneously create something meaningful, a moment or a gift or a gesture, that reminds elsa that he cares. he is big on words of affirmation, gift giving (but like, souvenirs that he collects on adventures like, "i saw this rock and it reminded me of your cousin olaf, we should put it on the window after we paint his face on it"), and acts of service, as well as physical touch and quality time. HE WANTS LOVE. he wants TO BE LOVED. he wants to prove that he is worthy of being loved.
(and elsa has to get him to Chill Out sometimes, remind him that he doesn't have to Do Things For Her/Anyone in order to be deserving of care; he is more than what he provides for other people.)
(jack gets its, and appreciates it, but also, the Urge to Provide and Protect is still strong, even after so much time, and sometimes Old Habits Die Hard.)
i get the sense that he'd be the type to he wake elsa up in the middle of the night to take her on a surprise adventure, or convince her to Do a Fun Thing without any preparation (/warning).
and she would Be Alarmed at the Lack of Plan (especially if/when jack Did Not Think This Through), but he also took precautions to ward off Concerns by pacifying her with tea, or reassurances that yes, he did call ahead to make sure the restaurant was open before they left the house, of course he did, he would never just leave home without double-checking beforehand (and frantically googles it two minutes later when he thinks she's not looking; she is, naturally, and even occasionally pretends not to be).
elsa approaches conflict with a desire to resolve things Calmly and Logically. she tries to understand jack’s perspective, even when she disagrees, and she’s careful with her words, not wanting to escalate the situation.
however, she can sometimes withdraw emotionally, fearing that she might say something hurtful if she’s too overwhelmed.
jack was initially (and, honestly, still is, even though he understands more now) hurt by her tendency to shut down when she Feels Too Much, and understands (although it's still hard) that elsa needs time to process her feelings and organize her thoughts.
jack also helps elsa actually Feel her Feelings, instead of just trying to intellectualize and analyze them. (she hates it, BUT sees the value. jack lives for these moments in which he realizes that he's actually contributing positively to her life and helping her in some way, rather than just being a burden or a nuisance, as was/is his fear.)
his initial reaction might be to push for a resolution quickly, but he’s also deeply afraid of Creating Distance between them, so after the first few fights, he really makes an effort to find the right balance between Pushing Hard Enough and Not Pushing Too hard, so that he doesn't drive a wedge between them as they work things out.
jack FEELS intensely, and can be so stubborn. he does not always have the most precise vocabulary or tools to describe his thoughts and feelings, or identify the root causes of what is actually going on inside him; sometimes elsa asks a lot of insightful and guiding questions that help jack come to the conclusions himself, and other times, she Puts Into Words the very thing that he had been thinking or feeling, but could not name, and it is very reassuring to have someone who understands him well enough to be able to do that.
after conflicts or arguments, they take time to Decompress and reassure one another (especially if at least one of them, if not both, was Overthinking again).
when they argue (and healthy couples do, remember!), it’s a dance of patience and understanding: elsa might need a moment to Collect Herself, and jack learns to give her that Space while also making it clear that he’s ready to talk whenever she is, and that he is going to try very hard to be Rational and Patient About It.
in the end, they both prioritize their relationship over any disagreement, always finding a way back to each other.
#now that i am really thinking about it#i have not written ANY established!relationship stories (for jelsa or any other ship) actually! why??#that is probably a good question to ask myself. 😂#my first instinct is that it's because i am personally a#Steady Serial Serious Relationship Monogamist#and i already experience so many lovely and wonderful aspects of having a Life Teammate and a trusted partner in Marriage#so i don't typically feel the urge to explore the possibilities of an already-established relationship in fiction...#i feel like my storytelling/fanfiction is based in exploring similar tropes and the base core journeys in different contexts and universes#(e.g. modern mermaid colonial!america regency!england frozen-verse frozen-and-rotg-verses)#because i like playing with how such core ideas can happen so differently (and so similarly) in various worlds with so many different rules#i got into a flow state while writing this and had to stop because i reached the tumblr text post character limit 😅#also you may or may not be surprised to see that many of these characteristics i've listed here in this est.!relationship mindset are#things that they already do in many of my getting-together stories#that's the nature of human relationships for you i guess haha 💕 it's a process! (not a destination)#HERE ARE MY TAKES ANYWAY please enjoy comment reply etc.!#thank you again!!! 💕#therentyoupay anon#therentyoupay ask#jelsa#therentyoupay thoughts on characterization
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Hey so I wrote a thing I'm kinda proud of but super nervous about and totally forgot to post before Christmas.. 🧍
https://archiveofourown.org/works/61630390
Obviously inspired by the song, Baby it's cold outside. It's kinda holiday fluff but I had to add the undertones of angst or I'd explode. (And maybe because I don't think Jinx would willingly let herself enjoy anything)
Summary: Caitlyn was about to throw a Christmas party when a massive storm hits, and Jinx and Isha are the only ones already there.
Takes place in between/after s2 and a happy ending. Caitlyn lost her eye, Jinx lost her hair. But Viktor never did the weird world ending thing. And obviously Isha is alive.
#jinx x caitlyn#caitjinx#pistolwhip#lawbomb#jinx and isha#please give me feedback#i want to improve#this is the first thing I've written and actually fleshed out#the ending is rushed bc life and holidays happened so i might rewrite it or the whole story later
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Nes + Erin: partners in crime & platonic soulmates & always dressed coded (+ Erin all grown-up. ;-;)
#TBD#These were just screenshots from me testing things#TBH I am healing my inner teen by going back#and revisiting all my writing of Wednesday as a teen#The first version of her I wrote was when she was in#highschool but as I got older I just aged her with me#and kinda of left all of my original writing behind#which is better than my newer writing I think lol#Also left behind so many characters#I've posted Erin as an adult but never written them in any#story post#NO IDEA WHY#There also 4 male characters I just never post about#again no idea why not#After taking such a long break from sims coming back#and since the simblr is sooo#different now#and I am kinda starting over#it is kinda nice to just feel free to post whatever#to people who have no idea what I'm talking about
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John not being there in part 1 of The Three Gables makes me sad. :(
I know he needs time to grieve for Mary, but still. I miss him a lot.
That being said, I don't mind Mariana being the narrator this time. I love her voice too.
And I like the fact that Mariana and Sherlock are getting some alone time together (after loads of episodes of Mariana - John's alone time and John - Sherlock's alone time). Quite intriguing.
#sherlock and co#sherlock & co#The Three Gables - 1#podcast#my ramblings#personal#not really in the mood to blog about this adventure this time for some reason#haven't listened to The Sign of Four adventure just yet (I think I'll do that later)#the first part of this adventure sounds so lonely and melancholic without John in it :/#I miss my cringey podcaster 🥺#but it's okay... he just needs some time I think.#sherlock holmes#john watson#mariana ametxazurra#the story The Three Gables from ACD canon was already not so good to begin with (given all the blatant racism and everything)#the description and intro of Steve Dixey as a character was still really weird in this episode#at least it wasn't overtly racist (because he hasn't been described as Black in the podcast) this time#spoilers#sherlock & co spoilers#I've just listened to the first couple of episodes of The Sign of Four and I quite like Mary too in this version of Sherlock Holmes#I'm pretty sure she's been characterised well this time (like how she was so well written in Guy Ritchie's first movie of Sherlock Holmes)#because I trust the writing team by now. They've been really good at plots and characterisations in most of the episodes so far#and that's really all that matters in the end#I still don't like war/stan as a ship though (even when I do love John and quite like Mary as individual people in this particular version)#yeah...
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For Slow Horses Conspiracy Theory Rip Off - :-D
“I don’t know. I don’t know. I…” His babbling is cut off when Lamb moves River's hands away from the wound, pressing down harder to stem the flow of blood from leaking further into the floor, and turns into a whine. “I-I can’t remember. I can’t remember. I…” River chokes off a sob, his bloodied hand coming to cover his face, smearing red as it trembles from from shock. “I’m sorry,” he whispers.
Lamb considers for a moment not accepting the apology, as though spite will help River, but it is only a moment. Fuck all. “Don’t be.”
“I can’t remember them,” River says, his hand clenching and moving away from his eyes to clench in a fist that he raps against his forehead, but he lacks the energy to do any real damage. “I can’t remember them. I can’t remember me.”
That was a disturbing comment, and Lamb made a mental note to bully Standish into checking up on River more often than she already was. She was more like River than either cared to admit - or perhaps, the other way around - adrift without something to do to make themselves feel like they were doing something that mattered. And River would take Standish’s presence better than anyone else.
River’s gaze fixes on Lamb. “But I remember you.” His face softens as he says it, like he realizes he can remember something, even if he doesn’t understand anything else. “I remember you.”
Lamb is uncomfortable with this level of familiarity, and wants no part of it.
Or so he tells himself, and purposely pushes away.
#slow horses#river cartwright#jackson lamb#these are all first edits mind you I have not gone and fixed any of the suggestions my editor gave me#clearly this is not as quiet a fandom as I thought so shame on me#you all are lovely and I've written more on these stories in the last 24 hours than I have in the last 24 days#you the real MVP's#I WILL MAKE LAMB SHOW SOME LEVEL OF AFFECTION EVEN IF IT KILLS HIM#Because as much as he accuses River of confusing drama with style he is just as bad
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Okay, since there was some interest in seeing this short story, here it is. The working title is Foot Quest but I might change that lmao
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The Dragon cracked open an eye at the distant sound of footsteps echoing faintly down the halls of its cavern. A group of several people, accompanied by hearty squabbling and crass insults. Hm, it hadn’t had visitors in quite some time. Perhaps these ones would be entertaining before being eaten.
It closed its eye and curled deeper into its golden hoard. It would find out soon enough.
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Another sound roused it shortly after, the sliding click of coins and jewels being displayed. Whether from a not-so-sly attempt to pocket a few of its gold pieces or to scale its prodigious hoard, the Dragon did not care. It cracked open a different eye. It was always better to observe one’s meal a bit before consumption, after all.
The figure below (rather far away, at nearly the bottom of its hoard) appeared to have sat down for a moment, possibly on one of the treasure chests that stayed down there. The wooden boxes were always a bit too odd and lump-like to do anything other than inhibit quality rest. From the Dragon’s best guess, it was likely a human. No beard, ears too small to be one of its cave goblins, and none of that insufferable stench elves carried with them wherever they went. That made it edible.
The biped shifted a bit, then jumped off the chest completely, flourishing what appeared to be a tiny dagger. It was too far away to truly tell. In any case, they seemed to realize rather quickly how ineffective their speck of a blade would be, and lowered it shamefacedly.
“... …. ……. ..?” What was that? The Dragon tilted its head at the human’s distant mouth sounds. Given that such things were distinctly less worthy of its attention than sounds like footfalls or clicking gold pieces tended to be, it wasn’t used to attending to such tongues. How did human speech go again? It hadn’t tested its vocal cords in some time.
“Ahem. Speak louder, puny thing.” It freed an arm from its bed, glittering jewels cascading down the hills of hoard. Pity, it would have to pick those up later. Preferably after a snack.
The human took a step back. Then raised their hands to their face, cupping them around their mouth. “I apologize for the intrusion!”
Not the typical first words of a prospective breakfast. “Do those companions of yours offer the same?”
The biped made some small motion with a hand. “I think the goblins got to them!”
Well, good. That was what the Dragon kept them around for. Cleaning out the tunnels.
“You realize you shan’t leave, morsel.” The Dragon flicked a few eyes open and shut, blinking away the sleep-grime. “Intruders are only welcome if they become… long-term guests.”
A rather clever way to put it, if it said so itself, but if the human agreed they were unfortunately too far away for it to tell. Instead of answering, the two-legged thing displayed a tremendous amount of stupidity by beginning to climb up the steep slopes of the hoard, even daring to come closer to the side with the Dragon’s head clearly visible. A deliciously foolish endeavor.
The human stopped once more over a small rise in the glittery piles, still rather far for the Dragon to reach unless it really stood up and stretched its neck out to catch them. Perhaps not so unintelligent after all? “There! Can you hear me better now?”
The Dragon stretched for a moment, the gold covering it slowly giving way to its limbs. Ugh, this was a most encumbering way to have fallen asleep. “You must be exceptionally stupid or desperate to approach me.” Evidence pointed to the latter, but of course the former would be the tastier option.
Their face moved strangely, an awkward display of baring small, flat teeth. “Oh, I just came to ask a question. Care to share a small amount of your wealth with a humble orphan?” “Not a chance.”
“...perhaps a loan?” “Mm… no. Loans are for goblins only, which you clearly are not.” The Dragon shook its head, shiny objects spinning away with loud crashes as they tumbled downwards and smacked against things. Its neck was that much more mobile with the gold around it lessened.
“And at any rate, little thing, you’ve interrupted my sleep. And so—” it worked the other forelimb free, its tail almost there—“You are to be my dinner, as is the way of things.” Unless they did something worth its attention, but it was rapidly growing bored.
“Wait wait wait, please, I beg you, don't—your arm,” the human babbled. “Leg. Limb?”
It spared a glance for its stump, the limb most likely visible from the human's current location. “Yes, that. Staring is not appreciated, insect.” The last human to make it this far had said something annoyingly rude, and had needed to be eaten immediately as a result. A pity, wizards never tasted too good. All the thick wooly robes got caught in its teeth.
“No, I mean—” quite unexpectedly, the human sat down again, this time on a rise in the piles of gold, and did something to one of their lower limbs that appeared to involve undoing numerous straps, then held the limb out towards the Dragon.
…It didn’t know the smaller races could do that. It had never paid them much attention, to be sure, but weren't their limbs supposed to stay attached to their bodies?
“Here, my prosthesis. I lost the leg as a girl, it was some sickness the local apothecary couldn’t cure. Better limb than life, I think she said. And a while after that, I got another one to help me walk, but I’m still—we’ve got that in common.” the human explained breathlessly.
The Dragon lowered its head (interesting, how this ant-like creature barely flinched at its approach) and turned a set of eyes towards the thing. A facsimile of a leg, carved of wood with fabric and that cow-skin two-leggers were so fond of hanging off in thinnish bits and pieces. It even had a shoe to match the other one the biped wore.
It huffed, a gentle stream of smoke escaping its jaws to envelop the small figure. “Mildly interesting, I suppose. But why should I care?”
“The people outside haven’t seen you in over a century. It would do them well to remember your presence here,” the human said. Some small expression, too quick for the Dragon to read, crossed her face. “And… I know what it’s like. Losing a limb, figuring out how to live afterwards. Besides, the gnomish craft cities aren’t too far from here, and you know they love a challenge. You’ve got plenty of gold to spare, and they’d think it an honor to craft something for you.”
The Dragon reared its head back. “I have no need of gnome workmanship, you little asp. I am a great thing, powerful and fearsome! There is nothing here that needs to be fixed!” Its wings were yet buried, or it would have beat them dramatically for emphasis. Perhaps the brat was back on the menu.
“Please, it’s—it’s not—it wouldn’t be for fixing!” The human yelled, her hands lifted to shield her face. “It would be a tool! To make things easier!”
It stared down its nose at her. “And why should I bother with such a… tool?”
“You don’t have to,” came the answer. “Lots of people don’t. But I know the merchants from here to Ocean’s Crest, I know the metalsmiths and leather workers and tailors, and there’s dozens of ways that a leg can be built. And look, I can tell you it won’t fix things all the way. It might create other problems. But I can tell you this much—it works for me. And it might be able to work for you?”
The human held her hands outstretched above her head, a gesture something like a plea. For mercy, perhaps, or more time, or some other petty human desire. If the Dragon was already awake, it might as well move around a bit.
The Dragon blinked three eyes at once, snorted and began to stand, gold slithering over its scales as it shook itself free of its hoard. “You have piqued my interest, ant. I shall embark with you on this journey of yours. Now put back those coins you have in your pocket.”
#my writing#original story#original fiction#original character#the thief oc#the dragon oc#fantasy#dragon#thief#creative writing#writers on tumblr#writing#fantasy story#foot quest#this is the first original writing i've done in like. ages#several years at least#its also actually the first time i've written anything for these characters
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