#the text exchange between leo and ron felt so lifelike with leo writing and deleting each message before finally sending something
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A new chapter? In this economy? And it's a Ron and Leo chapter? Yeah, it sure is. This one's for you, Sofia!
#yipee! another chapter for only brooches :D I enjoy your writing so much#it’s vivid and brilliantly done#the opening drew me in at once I adore your description of leo’s passion: the “flow of energy emanating from” him and->#<-the “ease and elegance when he took the stage” and the “ joy woven intricately into each trick he performed.->#<-There was a well of love that ran eternal for the craft a happiness that those around the turtle could practically float on”#beautifully written#so many details grounding the reader in the scene like the “ phone screen blaring white light” and the “thick mist of drowsiness”#I like the word choice of “human enough” when ron cloaked#the text exchange between leo and ron felt so lifelike with leo writing and deleting each message before finally sending something#I love how you capture the contrast between them trying to keep the words upbeat at first though they’re feeling dread and pain#you describe it so well with ron’s “ familiar pit of dread latching onto his gut like a lump of lead” (nice internal rhyming)#and leo’s “plastron practically [vibrating] as his heart hammered inside”#aah it seemed like they were both blaming themselves for a moment there :(#love the “mr. ninja was my father” line oh dear leo falling back on humor to cope#I’m so proud of him though for opening up to ron the way he does and ron is supportive and kind#I love the way you write them <3#there is so much meaning to the line “You can be who you want to be instead of an unrealistic expectation of what your father wants.“#that ring sounds like such a cool design#love the line: “ It was too late and too early for complex thought” very relatable#other’s writing#fanfic#rottmnt#rise of the tmnt#no crime only brooches au#I hope you have a wonderful day and that you are doing well#love you so very much
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