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theheartofthestar · 8 months ago
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Prompt 28 - Poorly Timed Confession
@wolfstarmicrofic - May 28th, 472 words, non explicit but still NSFW
Sirius' curtains fall closed in a hurry as James opens the door. He narrows his eyes at his best friend's bed. This is it, James thinks, he cannot take the secrecy and blatant lies anymore.
"Padfoot, I know you're awake and I know you're in there," James says, walking to the bed.
"Don't open the curtains!" Sirius' voice has a frantic tone to it, and James almost snorts. So much for a man who was resting a terrible migraine.
"Headache, still?" He's not above torturing Sirius a little bit longer.
"Uhm, yes! Yes, exactly, the light, it's, uhm, too bright" Sirius says, sounding breathless, voice hitching at moments. James rolls his eyes, how could Sirius ever think he could hide this from him, from him.
"Oh, I thought you'd feel better by now, maybe we ought to go to the infirmary, Pomfrey probably has a potion for-"
"No, no! I, uhm, ah- rest! Yes, rest is, ah, what I need" Sirius says, voice strained.
"Right" James deadpans. Some dick from your secret boyfriend too, probably, he thinks, glaring at the closed curtains.
"Ah- anything, uh, anything else, Prongs?" Sirius asks, and well, James wasn't planning on it, but now he can't help the smirk on his face.
"Actually, Padfoot, there is something" James bites the inside of his cheek to avoid laughing. For this to work, he needs to sound like he means it.
"Mmhm" Sirius prompts him, but it sounds even more strained than before.
"You see, Sirius, I have something I need to confess" James says, laughter choking his words. If Sirius weren't otherwise occupied at the moment, James is sure he would have been caught already.
"Prongs, uhm, ah- this is not the best moment, mate" Sirius groans.
"No, no, it must be right now, I can't keep it any longer" James knows his voice is full of fake remorse, but Sirius, still, hasn't noticed.
"Aha, tell me, uh, then"
"Oh, but I'm so afraid you will not forgive me, Padfoot" James bites his cheek again, he can practically hear Sirius' frustrated groan.
"I'll forgive you, ah, I forgive you now, Prongs, it's fine, whatever it is, ah- uhm, it's fine" Sirius says, and James smirks before blurting out the most unhinged thing he can think of.
"I'm dating Regulus"
"YOU WHAT"
The curtains are dragged so hard that they come off the rail, revealing a very naked Remus, with spit all over his face, kneeling near the end of the bed. James has only a second of victory before Sirius jumps off the bed, the thunderous frown on his face at odds with the way his cock hard against his stomach.
James sprints, reaching the bathroom with just enough time to close the door in Sirius' face. His laugh is drowned by the sound of Sirius slamming his fist on the bathroom door, promising murder.
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rei-ismyname · 4 months ago
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From The Ashes - Mystique
So, Mystique has her own book once more with issue #1 dropping on October 16th. Given the state of the Marvel world at the moment (or at least the X-books, everyone else seems focused elsewhere while mutants are being slaughtered and imprisoned... again) it really feels like Raven Darkholme's time to shine.
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Looks cool but feels like something's missing
She hasn't had a solo book since 2004 - 20 years - and a lot has changed since then. She was quite the breakout character during the Krakoan age - she got her wife Destiny back, she found a sort of understanding with their son Nightcrawler (and we all learned the truth of the retcon in a pretty slick way), and perhaps most importantly we got a sense of her interiority. I'd be remiss in not mentioning Rogue, but they weren't really in each other's orbits until Fall of X. YMMV, but she became sympathetic for the first time ever. We got to see her interact with almost everyone as an uneasy ally while still being her bad bitch black ops self. Not friends, but on the same team with the overarching investment in keeping their shared home working. There was a foundation of connective tissue there right until the end.
Be Gay, Do Crime?
Alas, the wheel has turned again and Krakoa is no more. The connective tissue is gone. However, out of the three people she was closest to narratively - Destiny, Kurt and Rogue - the relationship I'm truly invested in seeing more of is her and Destiny. The book isn't called Mystique and Destiny, and she's not in any of the solicits or preview artwork, but surely they wouldn't do a Mystique book without her, would they?
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My favourite sapphic terrorists
Yeah, I think they would tbh. Destiny is a very complex character to write and she was so entwined with Krakoa from the start in HoxPoX due to the nature of her gift - seeing possible futures. As the narrative pulls away from Krakoa, as we look for those pieces of connective tissue, as character growth is left by the wayside or undone, the world and stories are getting much smaller. Destiny had reached the promised land and her gift was focused on survival - of the married couple and Krakoa itself. I'm just not sure where she'd fit in a From The Ashes world.
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Such a strong partnership too - Sherlock Holmes and Irene Adler.
The elephant in the room is that the pair are very popular and I'm pretty sure the Mystique-buying demographic would have something to say about Destiny being absent. I'm thinking the Magneto treatment is likely, some contrived way of keeping her in the margins of the run or even depowering her. We know Mystique is going to be more of a face than she's been in the past, 'protecting mutants.' That is a good thing as her motivations were often baffling pre-2019. Her behaviour was often handwaved with 'craziness' which is not good for any character, especially a woman.
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Destiny in her distinctive mask is visible in this header, although...
This was somewhat explained in Fall of X that Xavier's (consensual) memory tampering knocked something loose, for lack of a better term. I'm hoping the growth we saw sticks, and I don't think that's unrealistic, it's the rest of it. What prompted me writing this was the AIPT review of the first issue. It all sounds exciting but the only other character mentioned is Nick Fury, nothing on Destiny. Any reviewer worth their salt should have a sense of expectations, and the absence feels meaningful.
Obviously this is all speculation, which is fun, though I'm not going off nothing here. I'm trying to be mindful of being the 'Krakoa was the best and this shit sucks' person, but Krakoa WAS the best and I really don't want From The Ashes to suck. I don't have any control over that, though I do have control over my expectations.
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Bling! knows what's up, leaning on the fourth wall.
The last thing I think needs consideration is that the couple got the Wedding Special very recently. It was pretty good, though I thought the best parts were the Claremont interview and Anole's ongoing protest. But it was popular!
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Mystique would LOVE that. Bisexual Menace for life.
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He ended up putting it on a t-shirt. I need one!
As fun as it was and as much hype it got at the time, remember that it was a Pride Month thing. Ever the rainbow capitalists, Marvel picked a winning focus but I don't think they'd have done outside of Pride Month. Sadly, that might apply to their relationship as well. I think it would be a miscalculation, but the signs point to it being a solo book. As I often say in my doomsaying posts, we shall see and I hope I'm wrong.
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They're just too iconic and work so well together. Don't get me wrong, good writing can make anything work. Aside from my ongoing mourning of Krakoa, WLW rep is important and for all their faults they deserve love like everyone else. Maybe a Sisterhood of Evil Morally Ambiguous Mutants is on the cards?
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keepmovinjunior · 2 months ago
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respond to the following prompts out of character, then tag others you'd like to get to know a little bit better.
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ROLEPLAYER NAME: jenn :)
ROLEPLAYER PRONOUNS: she / her
MUSE NAME: megara
PREFERRED COMMUNICATION: here or tumblr IM
EXPERIENCE: i started on myspace back in 2006 ; my first ever characters were rouge the bat and rita from oliver & company. so many fond memories of that honestly! we all had a group of lady disney dogs who were friends <3
PREFERRED ROLEPLAY TYPE: i really like everything, honestly. banter, crack... just those little fun things are great, because i don't always have time to do longer things, and they're just so much fun and good for keeping a muse's voice fresh and having characters bounce off of each other! but longer threads are great too, and i really enjoy them a lot for world and relationship building between two muses.
PET PEEVES & DEALBREAKERS: too much like... out of character moping tbh, like. i get that sometimes we all have to let it out and that this place is very supportive and therapeutic in a lot of ways, but... at the end of the day, everyone is responsible for themselves, and they have actual therapists in the world. also. this is my happy (hopefully) drama free place to escape from the issues of the real world and have fun, and i assume it is most everyone elses' here, too, and it gets really draining to see people playing victim all of the time (it's obvious when that's being done), so i don't engage with that kind of energy. also, if you're pushy. like the "hello???" messages if i don't respond, or the asking if i'm responding to you more than once, that's one million and one percent gonna turn me off. just be chill, no one owes anyone anything here, we're all having fun and we have lives.
PLOTS OR MEMES: hmmmmmm, this is hard. probably plots. i appreciate memes for the icebreaker aspect, but they don't always fit my character. sometimes i edit them a bit to sound more like meg, and i would encourage any of my followers to do the same too, if they want to with me!
BEST TIME TO WRITE: i have more time during the day if i'm wfh / have the day off, but i usually feel most creative at night, lol. i try to run a queue though. it's not working v well because i'm excited and always want to post things right away but we're getting there team
ARE YOU LIKE YOUR MUSE: in some ways i think so; she's more like me than a lot of muses i've written. i think meg, jane, and maybe elsa are the disney gals i'm most like, personally. we're both women around the same age (meg's older for a disney female romantic lead, which is refreshing), we've both had our hearts broken, we both don't have any biological family whom we keep in touch with... and we both have been guilty of using dark humor as a defense mechanism. also, i am soft and enjoy *~ kisses and hugs *~ like meg, but don't tell anyone no one can know i am a geek and nerd ok. but at the same time, meg is not entirely a self insert. she's a lot funnier than me. she's had a harder time in life than i have by comparison, and she lives in a much worse time for women, lmao. also i really admire her sacrificial side, the fact that she'd do anything for her loved ones, and her moral compass. she won't harm someone she loves, even if she dies in the process. i want to be that way, and she's an inspiration to me because of it.
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tagged by : @peculiarbeauty the one and only belle, ty queen <3 tagging: anyone who wants to!! steal it ya filthy animals
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anemcia · 8 months ago
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4, 13 aaaand 28!
TRUTHTFUL... WEDNESDAY - [ACCEPTING]
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4. What’s one thing that always manages to get under your skin?
//A lot of things get under my skin tbh, but I'm finding that's a lot easier since I've been here long enough to see it all. If I had to narrow it down to a singular problem, I'll keep it RPC relevant. Not a fan of muns policing how to run other people's muses if it doesn't fit the "fanon" interpretations (Or sometimes even THEIR OWN headcanons)
I get that many of us get attached to a specific view of a character. I'm one of those people! Everyone knows by now that I am a stickler for how Cell is portrayed, it's just my vision. Ya can't get heated over someone doing their own thing with em'. I genuinely don't care if the entire community has agreed that "This character IS LIKE THIS / NOT LIKE THIS!!!" Nnnnnaaaah, you don't make the rules. People are going to play with their fictional paper dolls regardless of your input, so let go and move on. Even if it's Problematic? More like NOT MY PROBLEMATALL. I don't care, it's just not worth the fuss or headache. Just block them for fucks sake.
13. What’s underrated in the rpc?
Perhaps a nostalgic feeling, but what ever happened to magic anons? I get that it's easier to reblog memes for specific prompts, but I kinda miss the wild west of "SHIAKAZING, YOU ARE NOW NAKED FOR 24 HOURS." And that's just how it was a little over 10 years ago. I think we need to go back to that old tumblr rpc, bring a little bit of goofy fun now and again for the sake of something unusual to happen to our characters. This is implying you're allowed to ignore CERTAIN prompts, but otherwise? Have fun with it.
28. What’s your favorite genre to write?
I would be lying to myself if I didn't fancy a little bit of romance now and again. It's hardly touched upon because I'm a lil stinky nervous baby who overthinks everything when writing with friends, but it warms my soul. Refreshing, even, just to do something nice. Though it goes without saying that I love just about all genres of writing, I just wish I could do romance a little more sometimes.
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luckhissoul · 10 months ago
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GET TO KNOW THE MUN.
respond to the prompts out of character!
what made you pick up the current muse(s) you have? okay so i started the books just before the show came out. and i was just so absolutely in love with all of it. but originally i had added moiraine and lan, with mat on the side just to, you know, add someone extra. but then by the time i got towards the end of the great hunt i just really wanted to add him. and he was so annoying n there, too lol but then there was the illuminator party ( where he was really annoying lol ) and then THEN my favorite part with the portal stones and just !!
is there anything you don’t like to write? i mean i pretty much like writing anything tbh but i don't think i'd like writing pwp lol or like -- uhm idk like sometimes there are interesting plots that i like to write but then it doesn't fit a character so then things get weird and you don't want to write it anymore lol
is there anything you really enjoy writing? i like writing anything! i enjoy writing just to write tbh
how do you come up with headcanons?  usually they mostly happen during writing with someone else or like small throwaway lines from the books that just get like expanded on
do you write in silence or do you play music? music , movies, i don't really like complete silence
do you plan your replies or wing them? some replies get planned. some don't.
do you enjoy shipping? i do really like shipping actually! it's always fun! but i like them to be very fleshed out and stuff, like growing into something over time. i'll do preestablished ships but i prefer them to be plotted out beforehand.
what’s your alias/name?  liz
age?  31 years old
birthday?  january 8th ( like elvis and david bowie omf
favorite color?  white, gray, pink, black.
favorite song?  uhmm i always have a different one ??.
last movie you watched?  open your eyes - good movie. love eduardo noriega so much ok
last show you watched?  the walking dead : the ones who live
last song you listened to?  bride and groom - the airbourne toxic event
favorite food?  pasta - bread - cheese - apple pie
favorite season?  as long s it'snot that hot ??? i dont like hot weather
do you have a tumblr best friend? @caracarnn & @xhideyourfires ( im cheating..those are my sisters )
tagged by @adversitybloomed tagging EVERYONE
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hoshigray · 11 months ago
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Spread love to fanfic writers! Answer these questions about your fanfics then send this to 5 other fanfic writers 💙 Name a fic you loved writing the most. Name a fic that others loved but you didn’t care for as much. Name a fic you had the most fun writing. Name a fic that you are the most proud of. Name a fic that you wish had gotten more recognition. Name your happiest/saddest/most comedic fics!
mona bearrrr !! omg, i appreciate this as this gives me time to look through all the pieces I've worked on. So hmmmm....
Loved Writing the Most: Old Tricks, Same Treats is my pride and joy. Sure, it's my most popular work, but it means a whole lot to me to make a story with my favorite character with my favorite trope and make it come out in the way I actually envisioned! Like I think about it all the time; how it makes me proud that I made that piece and how I wish to make a series for it when I get the time.
Others Loved; I Didn't: mmmmm I'mma be real with you; none really come to mind. but, if I had to really pick, maybe Gotta Have "U" in Sugar??? idk, at the time of writing it, I thought it was a pretty good concept. But now, it was my first long fic and tbh, I think I could do a better job structuring the story or actually have Toji be, well, Toji. i don't know....maybe a concept I can pick up again? who knows.
Most Fun to Write: Omgggg I'd give that to Sink Your Teeth to Drink!! that was my second time writing for Choso (sadddd i love him sm) and it was with a prompt that fit him so well!! I tried to make it as cute and funny as possible, but also hot and steamy, ya know. omg, I just realized I never proofread that one.....might have to fix that ngl, hehe.
Most Proud Of: I'd give that to SMASH or SLASH[er]!! tbh. It was the first fic I got to make after my one or two-month hiatus from fanfic writing. And not only was it my first time writing a threesome fic (holy shit!!), but I believe this was a pivotal point for me in terms and a foundation for how I write fics as of now. I owe this fic a lot for my growth, so I'm still kinda psyched about writing it myself.
Wished Had More Recognition: I'd say I Can Drink Your Sorrow for this one. It was my first time writing a full fic for Gojo, so I kinda get how it didn't get traction. However, I did put a lot of heavy emotion into the story and tried to make it not about the smut. It's a pretty mild yet messy story, esp at the end.
Most "______" Fic:
Happiest: Bear Mine is probabaly it, bc 1) i'd love to have babies with toji lmfaooo, 2) I love having the opportunity to explore toji's vulnerable side when I can. Whenever I go back and read this, I can't stop fighting the smile as I read! Like yes, Toji having happiness in his life which he deserves!?? Sign me up!! and tbh, a close second would be this fic as well...
Saddest: I Can Drink Your Sorrow; again, has a lot of heavy emotion because I wanted the reader to actually feel the goat from Gojo's perspective and what he was doing. I guess I wouldn't say it's "sad," but the way he beats himself up over what he did (which is valid) is a bit heart-wrenching.
Comedic: lol i think that one goes to Seven Hellish Minutes of Heaven; idkkkk i guess it's bc i modleled from conversations with my friends to make the bickering and insults between reader and Gojo seem more realistic, but funny at the same time, ya know? I think writing for him is where I find it easiest to come up with comedy dialogue, so (as of recent) I'd say this is my most funniest.
And that's it, really!! Honestly, this was kinda hard to do as I don't usually go back on the things I write — especially the old ones, lol. But tysm for this, mona dearest, love ya mwah !! 💓
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shadowmaat · 11 months ago
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Overlooked
I checked to see if I'd put Mischief & Misinformation on AO3. Yup, I did. It's just really unpopular. Probably from the combination of lacking a ship and also debunking a monolithically* popular bit of Legends lore.
It isn't my least popular fic, at least. That's still the "Palpatine gets zombified by a Sith Spider-lady" story I wrote on a prompt. Which, TBH, still breaks my heart a little since I had so much fun writing it and it was such a cracky, ridiculous idea.
No real point, here. It just got me thinking about how the quality of a story doesn't matter if the audience only wants to read certain kinds of fics. Which sounds a bit egotistical, but oh well. It isn't just about me and my fics, it's about all the others who may have written some really cool stories, but hardly anyone reads them or talks about them because they don't fit the generalized expectations of what readers think they want. And trust me, I know I'm just as guilty of that as others.
*by "monolithically" I mean "every canon-verse fic I can remember reading has incorporated it as fact."
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wetcatspellcaster · 11 months ago
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Hello my darling!
8 & 15 for pieces and an honest lie pls 💜 your choice on whether to write one for each or just one and one
Thank you for the question, lovely!
8. What inspired the title for this fic? Is that how you usually choose titles?
An Honest Lie - I wanted something that sounded like it fit stylistically with 'A Bleeding Heart', and this was the one that sounded best in my brain. I think I had something like 'A Broken Mask' as another possibility, or 'Heart on Your Sleeve' as another way to reformat the convention? But both of those felt pretentious or vague, so I ended up with the one I liked best!
Pieces Still Stuck in Your Teeth - I have a lot of reasons for this one. Obviously, it's a song from the latest Hozier album, because that is what Hozier albums are for: fic titles. I started with a working title which was a line from 'Eat Your Young', which I think is peak-Ascendency core tbh. but as I realised how much the fic would be based in Rosalie's perspective and the implications of her 'tragic timeline', and how that would effect the themes/tone of the story, I realised that 'Unknown' was a far better fit, as it was more about loneliness and messy divorce feelings, not to mention the morality underlying the love throughout.
I went with Pieces Still Stuck in Your Teeth bc. teeth. vampires. (also it's a lyric referencing a heart, which is some nice continuity with the series overall)
Other lines that were relevant to the content of the fic but didn't make good titles:
'You know the distance never made a difference to me I swam a lake of fire, I'd have walked across the floor of any sea'
(this refers to the separation, travelling the hells, and Rose living on an isolated island)
'Funny how true colours shine in darkness and in secrecy [...] Where you were held frozen like an angel to me'
(this links to Cania and the 'truth' hiding in the House of Peace)
'It ain't the being alone [...] it's more the being unknown'
(both Rosalie and the Ascendent have been alone and isolated, both of them feel alienated from their true selves and wonder if romance will fix it. they miss the one person they felt understood them.)
Do you know, I could break beneath the weight Of the goodness, love, I still carry for you That I'd walk so far just to take The injury of finally knowing you
(I really did this to my silly little wizard. I really did this. Anyway, how we feeling about Act 3?)
15. Was there anything you had to research for this fic? Do you usually do a lot of research?
An Honest Lie - lol nope. I just played the game man.
Pieces Still Stuck in Your Teeth - I guess a little? There have been multiple times when I've used D&D lore or spells as story prompts. There have also been times when I've had to research a spell deeper than usual to make plot work (True Polymorph, for instance, also did you know that Mage Hand doesn't take concentration? that fucked up a large part of Act 3 for me lmaooooo).
I also. read. so much smut. 😌😌😌😌😌
But generally, I don't really tend to research! Fic is something I write for fun, and I don't tend to find research fun as it's also my job. Deep dives on D&D lore don't really count in my brain, that's just more of the hyperfixation fuel.
behind the scenes fic asks!
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shipsgaysfordays · 2 years ago
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i am carrying this ask game
3, 8, 18
hello, i guess i'll keep going on, i find this pretty fun too<3
for this ask game
3. Describe the creative process of writing a chapter/fic
tbh it's hard to describe. it's like there's some mystical and/or devilish intervention that gives me the ideas. and then i'll write those out in a general outline, some dialogue ideas if i have any specific ideas for those. and then i write out all the other shit: intro to where the fuck we are in the story, plot beats with dialogue, my fucking tangents in order to try and tell a joke or make a point about some sort of emotion or whatever.
8. Do you prefer the beginning, middle, or end of a story?
arguably none of my stories have the clearest of ends, like all of them definitely have the ability to go on and i've even thought about the idea of going back to old stories before so i don't think i can say the end (despite it being quite satisfying to get to a stopping point). i think possibly the beginning simply because of the energy that a new project has, but then again i have this fic that i'm really wanting to start but i haven't yet because beginning it in comparison to my other two fics just feels like such a thing. i honestly really like where i'm at with although i am broken, my heart is unchanged still so i think the middle. like there's an ending in sight and i'm still excited about the story and everything.
18. Do you title your fics before, during, or after the writing process? How do you come up with titles?
for a long while i would do fics based on those wolfstar microfic prompts and simply title them the same thing as the prompt, lately though i've been doing more of my own shit. both of my long form fics had one original title that i made in the process of writing, and then i changed the title. so after normally i guess. (yes, this is my confirmation that i'm changing the title for my minnie/poppy fic).
although i am broken, my heart is unchanged still is a line from the 1D song Story of My Life, which is my favorite 1D song and i had just been listening to it randomly one day and thought that that specific line had a very similar feeling to where the story was going and would be a better title in comparison to Remus' Descent Into Madness (by that point i had begun expanding that fic to focus on many more characters and it was really only the first two chapters that focused on them)
is it everything your heart desired? is just a bit more personal to the story and i find it fits the more angsty direction that i plan on taking the story, also tbh i'm a bit sick of the wordy titles (don't mind me hiding this wordy title that i love for my fic that's very close to death but i may revive it). the original title of this fic, but if you feel like i feel, please let me know that it's real is from the song Can't Take My Eyes Off of You
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wikiangela · 2 years ago
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my 911 fics ranked by how much fun i had writing them - based on the ranking by @sibylsleaves bc it seemed fun, thank you for the idea ❤️
as of now I have 34 buddie fics (lmao what), so I did a top 10 (it was hard to narrow down tbh because I generally have fun writing all my fics, but this is the top 10:
1. For a holiday (and forevermore)
Eddie's sick of personal, intrusive questions about his love life whenever he visits his family, so he starts bringing Buck for the holidays as his (fake) boyfriend. He only wants to shut them up, and doesn't expect that the small crush he has on his best friend could actually turn into something more...
my first (and for now only) buddie multi chapter fic, inspired by the movie holidate (2020) - I saw the movie and had a vision, and this started - I'm having so much fun writing this, even if some chapters are more difficult (and it's getting away from me and they do what they want lol) - and writing Eddie so oblivious and so deep in denial is just so fucking fun, overall 9.5/10
2. I can't love you any more (than I do now)
Eddie's pretty sure he and Buck are dating and kind of living together. Neither acknowledges it, until Eddie finally does.
this is my newest one rn, and it's disgustingly fluffy and domestic, and I loved writing it so much, needed some fluff with all the 6b stuff - and I've been looking for an excuse to use this song as a fic title lmao (it didn't turn out exactly how I wanted, but writing it was a blast fr haha) 9/10
3. There’s no way that it’s not going there (with the way that we’re looking at each other)
5 times people wrongly assume Buck and Eddie are together + 1 time it's actually true.
wrote this two years ago and I remember having a lot of fun with that - now there's about a hundred things I'd do differently with this one, but I enjoyed writing it at the time haha (this is also THE fic with the most kudos out of all of my fics out of all of the fandoms for some reason? lol) 8/10
4. we got time (but we're only human)
“We got time, Eds.” Buck chuckles. “Not enough.” Eddie’s voice breaks a little. Buck squeezes his hand. “We almost ran out of time, and I can’t just wait until it happens again, Buck. Besides, life is short. We’ll never really have enough time, because a lifetime with you wouldn’t be enough." Or, Buck wakes up from his coma, and Eddie, done with wasting time, confesses his feelings.
post-6x10, but fluffy and happy, really loved writing this one, had a great time with it, 8/10
5. Who said this is a good idea?
Buck and Eddie are drunk, their inhibitions are low, and things escalate pretty quickly.
one of the fictober22 prompts, one of the easiest and quickest to write somehow, had fun with this one 7.5/10
6. You love this, don't you?
Clipboard Buck makes a reappearance, and Eddie's forced to confront his feelings.
this was supposed to be a silly clipboard!Buck fic, but then it got horny so I wrote a second chapter (while lowkey cringing at myself bc it's kinda out of my comfort zone lol), and I had a blast writing it, even if it lowkey sucks (idk if it does, I'm harsh on myself lmao) 7.5/10
7. Fine
Eddie’s foot feels heavy on the gas pedal, while his hands grip the steering wheel tightly, to prevent them from shaking. He’s driving almost on autopilot, while trying his best to compartmentalize and focus on just getting to the hospital, trying not to think about Buck- about what’s happening in the back of the ambulance right now. Or, after the drive to the hospital after Buck's hit by lightning, Eddie loses it. Sort of 6x10 coda.
It was easy to write, the words were just pouring out of me, and I think I blacked out for the last 1k words, it's the saddest thing I've written lol 7/10
8. You're making my head hurt
Eddie's really tired and accidentally confesses his love for Buck.
accidental confessions are my fave to write, I just feel like it'd fit them, and it might not be my best, but I had fun writing it, 7/10
9. don't know what I'd do if your tomorrow never came
He can’t help but think that this is some kind of sick joke from the universe, which he doesn’t believe but he knows Buck would. “The universe is screaming at you and you refuse to listen” is what Buck said once, it feels like a lifetime ago. He didn't believe it, then, either. And now the universe is mocking Eddie, having him have to tell their kid about Buck, just like Buck had to tell him about the shooting. Eddie doesn’t know how Buck did it, how he had the strength, because he’s on the verge of breaking down and shattering into a million little pieces. Or, Eddie goes home to tell Christopher about Buck getting hurt.
post 6x10, only this low bc I started writing it and loved it, and then I didn't have time to finish, so I got back to it later, and kinda struggled with the second half ngl haha gotta learn to write shit down as soon as it comes to me fr, 6.5/10
10. I think he knows
Eddie just could not tear his eyes away from him. And Buck finally noticed, looking back at him. “What?” “What? Nothing.” Eddie felt his face heat up, as he took another sip of his beer. “Why are you looking at me like that?” Buck’s piercing gaze was still on him, and Eddie felt as if he could read him so easily. “Like what?” he decided to play dumb. Maybe he’d succeed. “I don’t know.” Buck responded slowly. “You’re being weird tonight. Well, you’ve been acting weird for the past few weeks, actually.” “Weird how?” Eddie frowned, his heart hammering loudly. He knew how. But was he really being that obvious? Or Eddie's crush is becoming really obvious, so he does something about it.
it was just a silly idea about them getting together happening in the kitchen, it got away from me, I had a lot of fun with this one, even if it didn't turn out exactly how I wanted it to, but I don't think as much as the previous ones (it's so difficult to rank those fr) 6/10
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Wednesday, November 27 —  Wild Card! Today’s your day to get creative and do something different! Show off a talent that you wish you had more opportunity to show, or just write something that doesn’t fit any of the other prompts!
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ok so here's the thing. i've gotten so stupid obsessed with dancing with the stars this year. idk man it's been a month and the cast is so good this year and i just chose this thing to escape reality. so i've decided to design a dancing with the stars season with my characters as the stars. this isn't the labors because i'm not following tropes or actually writing much, i'm just outlining what happens week by week. also all the cast is the same, pros are the same, judges are the same, and i'm going to follow this year's weekly themes. enjoy this is what i meant by obnoxiously self indulgent lmaooo.
disclaimer: i don't know enough about dance to say if these songs are good picks for the style of dance i'm putting them with. it's mostly on vibes tbh. however i googled a lot of them and did find real dances to each song so a lot of them are vouched for not that i think anyone is coming for me lol but ya
(i understand if u dont want to read all of this its so long but if i can make one recommendation disney night is very fun)
The Cast!
Phineas Flynn:
Claim to fame: co-host of the popular "Two Cents" podcast
Partnered with: Rylee Arnold
Tiana Truitt:
Claim to fame: celebrity chef
Partnered with: Jenna Johnson
Aquata Triton:
Claim to fame: Olympic swimmer
Partnered with: Alan Bersten
Anastasia Tremaine:
Claim to fame: Star of the hit reality show, The Secret Lives of Nashville Wives
Partnered with: Gleb Savchenko
Mirabel Madrigal:
Claim to fame: Internet personality, slightly-less-famous sister of the influencer Isabela Madrigal and Olympic weightlifter Luisa Madrigal
Partnered with: Ezra Sosa
Lightning McQueen:
Claim to fame: Olympic track runner
Partnered with: Daniella Karagach
Samuel Smiegel:
Claim to fame: TV game show host
Partnered with: Emma Slater
Rosalind Peterson-Boggs:
Claim to fame: Mystery novelist
Partnered with: Sasha Farber
Giselle Adams:
Claim to fame: Singer and actress
Partnered with: Brandon Armstrong
EPISODE 1: THEME SONG
Each couple will perform a Latin or Ballroom dance to the star's personal "theme song."
Dancing the Quickstep with his partner Rylee Arnold, it's Phineas Flynn!
Song: Fred Astaire by Jukebox the Ghost And the scores! Carrie Ann Inaba: 7! Derek Hough: 6! Bruno Toniolo: 7! Judges' comments: Loved the energy, remember to stay on the beat, and fix your frame!
Dancing the Rumba with her partner Jenna Johnson, it's Tiana Truitt!
Song: Blue Bayou by Linda Ronstadt Carrie Ann Inaba: 7! Derek Hough: 7! Bruno Toniolo: 7! Judges' comments: Bruno climbed over the table and said YOU WERE LIKE A BEAUTIFUL FIREFLY IN THE BAYOU. Derek wanted to see more hip action. Carrie Ann said to slow down.
Dancing the Cha Cha with her partner Alan Bersten, it's Aquata Triton!
Song: Rumors by Lizzo Carrie Ann Inaba: 6! Derek Hough: 6! Bruno Toniolo: 7! Judges' comments: Bruno complimented Aquata's fierceness, Carrie Ann pointed out that she seemed to be looking to Alan to remind her what the choreography was, Derek pointed out heel leads
Dancing the Tango with her partner Gleb Savchenko, it's Annie Tremaine!
Song: Look What You Made Me Do by Taylor Swift Carrie Ann Inaba: 7! Derek Hough: 6! Bruno Toniolo: 7! Judges' comments: Carrie Ann cried and complimented Annie for taking back her power after she just got cheated on. Derek said to work on frame and body contact. Bruno wanted more precision in the lines and kicks.
Dancing Salsa with her partner Ezra Sosa, it's Mirabel Madrigal!
Song: MAÑANA SERÁ BONITO by Karol G feat. Carla Morrison Carrie Ann Inaba: 7! Derek Hough: 7! Bruno Toniolo: 6! Judges' comments: Mirabel seemed like she was concentrating really hard- enjoy it and have fun and feel the music! Also some missed steps, but good recovery.
Dancing the Rumba with his partner Daniella Karagach, it's Lightning McQueen!
Song: Leave the Door Open by Silk Sonic Carrie Ann Inaba: 8! Derek Hough: 7! Bruno Toniolo: 7! Judges' comments: Carrie Ann and Bruno both thought it was super sexy, Bruno probably climbed on Derek lol. Derek agreed but commented on heel leads
Dancing the Cha Cha with his partner Emma Slater, it's Mr. Smee!
Song: Twist and Shout by the Beatles Carrie Ann Inaba: 6! Derek Hough: 5! Bruno Toniolo: 5! Judges' comments: Mainly just complimented him for doing this even though he's older lol. Carrie Ann cried.
Dancing the Viennese Waltz with her partner Sasha Farber, it's Roz Peterson-Boggs!
Song: You Don't Own Me by Leslie Gore Carrie Ann Inaba: 7! Derek Hough: 6! Bruno Toniolo: 6! Judges' comments: Carrie Ann called her a powerful woman, Derek had a comment about frame and would have liked to see more waltz content
Dancing the Quickstep with her partner Brandon Armstrong, it's Giselle Adams!
Song: You Can't Hurry Love by The Supremes Carrie Ann Inaba: 6! Derek Hough: 6! Bruno Toniolo: 7! Judges' comments: Carrie Ann called out a lift. Derek gave notes on frame. Bruno thought it was delightful but frame could use work as well.
Rankings:
Lightning & Daniella: 22 points Tiana & Jenna: 21 points Phineas & Rylee: 20 points Annie & Gleb: 20 points Mirabel & Britt: 20 points Aquata & Alan: 19 points Roz & Sasha: 19 points Giselle & Brandon: 19 points Smee & Emma: 16 points
Since it was week one, no one was eliminated!
EPISODE 2: OSCARS NIGHT!
Each couple will dance to an iconic song from a film.
Dancing the Samba with his partner, Rylee Arnold, it's Phineas Flynn!
Song: Bop to the Top from High School Musical Carrie Ann Inaba: 8! Derek Hough: 7! Bruno Tonioli: 7! Judges' comments: Musicality was much better, but lacking a bit of the bounce that Samba requires. Carrie Ann thought it was adorable.
Dancing the Charleston with her partner Jenna Johnson, it's Tiana Truitt!
Song: A Little Party Never Killed Nobody from The Great Gatsby Carrie Ann Inaba: 7! Derek Hough: 7! Bruno Tonioli: 7! Judges' comments: Started to lose steam toward the end. Bruno wanted to see more personality. Carrie Ann thought everything could have been sharper.
Dancing the Foxtrot with her partner Alan Bersten, it's Aquata Triton!
Song: Can't Take My Eyes Off You from Ten Things I Hate About You Carrie Ann Inaba: 6! Derek Hough: 6! Bruno Tonioli: 6! Judges' comments: Frame needs work, got off the beat halfway through and never quite got back to it
Dancing the Jive with her partner Gleb Savchenko, it's Annie Tremaine!
Song: Kids in America from Clueless Carrie Ann Inaba: 7! Derek Hough: 7! Bruno Tonioli: 8! Judges' comments: Still needs more precision but good job keeping up in an exhausting dance!
Dancing the Foxtrot with her partner Ezra Sosa, it's Mirabel Madrigal!
Song: Sometimes (MUNA cover) from Fire Island Carrie Ann Inaba: 7! Derek Hough: 7! Bruno Tonioli: 6! Judges' comments: Needed to glide more and watch shoulder on frame, but overall nice
Dancing the Tango with his partner Daniella Karagach, it's Lightning McQueen!
Song: Holding Out for a Hero from Footloose Carrie Ann Inaba: 7! Derek Hough: 6! Bruno Tonioli: 6! Judges' comments: Frame needs work and Derek commented on heel leads again, but nice energy and commitment to the story!
Dancing the Paso Doble with his partner Emma Slater, it's Mr. Smee!
Song: He's a Pirate from Pirates of the Carribean Carrie Ann Inaba: 7! Derek Hough: 6! Bruno Tonioli: 6! Judges' comments: Nothing all that constructive lol, the dance just didn't have a lot of content in it
Dancing the Quickstep with her partner Sasha Farber, it's Roz Peterson-Boggs!
Song: Perfect Day from Legally Blonde Carrie Ann Inaba: 7! Derek Hough: 7! Bruno Tonioli: 6! Judges' comments: Derek thought the frame improved. Bruno wanted to see more personality.
Dancing the Viennese Waltz with her partner Brandon Armstrong, it's Giselle Adams!
Song: Your Song from Moulin Rouge Carrie Ann Inaba: 7! Derek Hough: 8! Bruno Tonioli: 8! Judges' comments: Bruno thought it was BEAUTIFUL AND PASSIONATE! Derek thought frame improved.
The rankings!
Giselle & Brandon: 25 Annie & Gleb: 22 Phineas & Rylee: 22 Tiana & Jenna: 21 Roz & Sasha: 20 Mirabel & Ezra: 20 Smee & Emma: 19 Lightning & Daniella: 19 Aquata & Alan: 18
And going home is...... Aquata! She did really badly and did not get a lot of votes :(
EPISODE 3: SOUL TRAIN NIGHT
The couples will each pay tribute to the iconic Soul Train program with their songs/dances.
Dancing the Foxtrot with his partner Rylee Arnold, it's Phineas Flynn!
Song: Isn't She Lovely by Stevie Wonder Carrie Ann Inaba: 8! Derek Hough: 7! Bruno Tonioli: 8! Judges' comments: Frame is looking better but watch shoulder. Loved how he got into character
Dancing the Jive with her partner Jenna Johnson, it's Tiana Truitt!
Song: Proud Mary by Tina Turner Carrie Ann Inaba: 7! Derek Hough: 8! Bruno Tonioli: 7! Judges' comments: Derek applauded the energy and everyone thought there was more personality this week
Dancing the Cha Cha with her partner Gleb Savchenko, it's Annie Tremaine!
Song: I Will Survive by Gloria Gaynor Carrie Ann Inaba: 7! Derek Hough: 7! Bruno Tonioli: 8! Judges' comments: Bruno thought it was fierce, Carrie Ann thought she's on the right track but noticed she missed some steps. Derek liked it but wanted more.
Dancing the Samba with her partner Ezra Sosa, it's Mirabel Madrigal!
Song: Le Freak by CHIC Carrie Ann Inaba: 7! Derek Hough: 8! Bruno Tonioli: 7! Judges' comments: Bruno still wanted to see more hip action and personality, Derek thought it was a huge improvement
Dancing the Quickstep with his partner Daniella Karagach, it's Lightning McQueen!
Song: Blame it on the Boogie by the Jacksons Carrie Ann Inaba: 7! Derek Hough: 7! Bruno Tonioli: 7! Judges' comments: Frame is still not improved, though the musicality is very good.
Dancing the Argentine Tango with his partner Emma Slater, it's Mr. Smee!
Song: Funkytown by Lips Inc. Carrie Ann Inaba: 6! Derek Hough: 6! Bruno Tonioli: 5! Judges' comments: Once again nothing all that constructive but this dance really didn't have much going on in it and Smee was not on the beat
Dancing the Cha Cha with her partner Sasha Farber, it's Roz Peterson-Boggs!
Song: I'm Every Woman by Chaka Khan Carrie Ann Inaba: 7! Derek Hough: 7! Bruno Tonioli: 7! Judges' comments: Have more fun out there! Derek suggested getting into the music more, she seemed nervous still
Dancing Salsa with her partner Brandon Armstrong, it's Giselle Adams!
Song: How Will I Know? by Whitney Houston Carrie Ann Inaba: 8! Derek Hough: 7! Bruno Tonioli: 7! Judges' comments: Derek thought lines could be cleaner, but Carrie Ann thought major improvement from last week. Lots of fun!
And the rankings...
Phineas & Rylee: 23 Giselle & Brandon: 22 Mirabel & Ezra: 22 Annie & Gleb: 22 Tiana & Jenna: 22 Roz & Sasha: 21 Lightning & Daniella: 21 Smee & Emma: 17
And going home is... Roz! Smee and Lightning both got enough votes to save them, but Roz did not :(
EPISODE 4: HAIR METAL NIGHT
The contestants pay tribute to hair metal! Don't come for me if these songs aren't actually hair metal idk what I'm talking about.
Dancing the Viennese Waltz with his partner Rylee Arnold, it's Phineas Flynn!
Song: You Snuck Your Way Right Into My Heart by Love Händel Carrie Ann Inaba: 8! Derek Hough: 8! Bruno Tonioli: 7! Judges' comments: Big improvement on musicality and frame. Bruno wanted to see more PASSION.
Dancing the Foxtrot with her partner Jenna Johnson, it's Tiana Truitt!
Song: I Don't Want to Miss a Thing by Aerosmith Carrie Ann Inaba: 7! Derek Hough: 7! Bruno Tonioli: 8! Judges' comments: Carrie Ann points out illegal lift. Derek gives recommendations for frame.
Dancing the Paso Doble with her partner Gleb Savchenko, it's Annie Tremaine!
Song: Pour Some Sugar on Me by Def Lepperd Carrie Ann Inaba: 7! Derek Hough: 8! Bruno Tonioli: 7! Judges' comments: Nice lines, and good job getting into character. There was a slip toward the end but good recovery. Could use more content though.
Dancing the Paso Doble with her partner Ezra Sosa, it's Mirabel Madrigal!
Song: I Love Rock and Roll by Joan Jett & the Blackhearts Carrie Ann Inaba: 7! Derek Hough: 7! Bruno Tonioli: 7! Judges' comments: The paso needs to be sharp and clean, everything was a little too loosy goosey. But looked like they were having fun!!
Dancing the Cha Cha with his partner Daniella Karagach, it's Lightning McQueen!
Song: Nothin' But a Good Time by Poison Carrie Ann Inaba: 8! Derek Hough: 7! Bruno Tonioli: 8! Judges' comments: Love the energy, lots of fun, Derek noticed a slip up toward the end but recovered well
Dancing the Jive with his partner Emma Slater, it's Mr. Smee!
Song: School's Out by Alice Cooper Carrie Ann Inaba: 6! Derek Hough: 5! Bruno Tonioli: 5! Judges' comments: Once again nothing really constructive lol
Dancing the Tango with her partner Brandon Armstrong, it's Giselle Adams!
Song: Living on a Prayer by Bon Jovi Carrie Ann Inaba: 8! Derek Hough: 7! Bruno Tonioli: 8! Judges' comments: Beautiful!! Good improvement
The rankings:
Giselle & Brandon: 23 Lightning & Daniella: 23 Phineas & Rylee: 23 Annie & Gleb: 22 Tiana & Jenna: 22 Mirabel & Ezra: 21 Smee & Emma: 16
And going home is... Mirabel :( Simply no one knows who she is :(
EPISODE 5: DEDICATION NIGHT!
Each couple will dedicate their dance to an important person or thing in their star's life.
Dancing the Rumba with his partner Rylee Arnold, it's Phineas Flynn!
Song: Meet Me At Our Spot by WILLOW (it's like a slowed-down cover) Dedication: To his college friends and all the amazing memories they made together! Carrie Ann Inaba: 8! Derek Hough: 8! Bruno Tonioli: 8 Judges' comments: They really liked it! Didn't really give any notes
Dancing Contemporary with her partner Jenna Johnson, it's Tiana Truitt!
Song: O-o-oh Child by the Five Stairsteps Dedication: To her late father, who loved this song Carrie Ann Inaba: 7! Derek Hough: 8! Bruno Tonioli: 8! Judges' comments: Carrie Ann wanted to see more connection to the music, but everyone was very impressed with the lifts.
Dancing Contemporary with her partner Gleb Savchenko, it's Annie Tremaine!
Song: Upside Down by Jack Johnson Dedication: To her kids <3 Carrie Ann Inaba: 8! Derek Hough: 7! Bruno Tonioli: 7! Judges' comments: Very sweet! Bruno thought Annie could have gotten into character a bit more and been more playful/loose with it.
Dancing the Jive with his partner Daniella Karagach, it's Lightning McQueen!
Song: Born to Run by Bruce Springsteen Dedication: To his sport, running! Carrie Ann Inaba: 8! Derek Hough: 8! Bruno Tonioli: 7! Judges' comments: So much fun! Bruno thought he fumbled a step at one point but recovered it nicely. No one else noticed that.
Dancing the Foxtrot with his partner Emma Slater, it's Mr. Smee!
Song: Brandy (You're a Fine Girl) by Looking Glass Dedication: To his love and his lady, the sea! Carrie Ann Inaba: 7! Derek Hough: 6! Bruno Tonioli: 6! Judges' comments: They just loved that he's still getting out there and trying his best.
Dancing the Cha Cha with her partner Brandon Armstrong, it's Giselle Adams!
Song: Together Again by Janet Jackson Dedication: Her late brother Carrie Ann Inaba: 8! Derek Hough: 8! Bruno Tonioli: 8! Judges' comments: Beautiful!! no critiques really
The rankings!
Giselle & Brandon: 24 Phineas & Rylee: 24 Lightning & Daniella: 23 Tiana & Jenna: 23 Annie & Gleb: 22 Smee & Emma: 19
And going home is... Smee :( It was finally time.
EPISODE 6: DISNEY NIGHT!
The couples pay tribute to Disney! This is delightfully meta for me.
Dancing the Jive with his partner Rylee Arnold, it's Phineas Flynn!
Song: Today is Gonna Be a Great Day from Phineas and Ferb Carrie Ann Inaba: 9! Derek Hough: 8! Bruno Tonioli: 8! Judges' comments: Complimented how Phineas always gives his all. Derek wanted to see more precision but appreciated how he committed.
Dancing the Waltz with her partner Jenna Johnson, it's Tiana Truitt!
Song: Ma Belle Evangeline from Princess and the Frog Carrie Ann Inaba: 8! Derek Hough: 8! Bruno Tonioli: 8! Judges' comments: Derek thought the frame improved, Bruno thought it was EXQUISITE
Dancing the Viennese Waltz with her partner Gleb Savchenko, it's Annie Tremaine!
Song: A Dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes from Cinderella Carrie Ann Inaba: 8! Derek Hough: 7! Bruno Tonioli: 8! Judges' comments: Derek thought frame improved but there were occasional slip ups, especially getting back into frame after being out of it.
Dancing Jazz with his partner Daniella Karagach, it's Lightning McQueen!
Song: Route 66 from Cars Carrie Ann Inaba: 8! Derek Hough: 8! Bruno Tonioli: 8! Judges' comments: Nice job with the tricks but be careful, looked wobbly at one point!
Dancing the Foxtrot with her partner Brandon Armstrong, it's Giselle Adams!
Song: That's How You Know from Enchanted Carrie Ann Inaba: 8! Derek Hough: 9! Bruno Tonioli: 9! Judges' comments: Really nice work! Carrie Ann thought body contact could be better but overall really liked it.
I'm skipping the team dances because I accidentally eliminated too many people. Oops.
And the rankings...
Giselle & Brandon: 26 Phineas & Rylee: 25 Lightning & Daniella: 24 Tiana & Jenna: 24 Annie & Gleb: 23
And going home is... nobody! Happy Disney Week!
EPISODE 7: HALLOWEEN!
The couples' dances symbolize their nightmares!
Dancing the Argentine Tango with his partner Rylee Arnold, it's Phineas Flynn!
Nightmare: Werewolves Song: She Wolf by Shakira Carrie Ann Inaba: 9! Derek Hough: 9! Bruno Tonioli: 8! Judges' comments: Bruno wanted sharper lines, but everyone thought that Phineas did a great job getting into character and it was a lot of fun!
Dancing the Paso Doble with her partner Jenna Johnson, it's Tiana Truitt!
Nightmare: Vampires Song: Vampire Empire by Big Thief Carrie Ann Inaba: 8! Derek Hough: 9! Bruno Tonioli: 8! Judges' comments: Derek thought it was really clean and impressive, Carrie Ann loved it but wanted her to get into character more.
Dancing the Argentine Tango with her partner Gleb Savchenko, it's Annie Tremaine!
Nightmare: Murderers! Song: Heads Will Roll by Yeah Yeah Yeahs Carrie Ann Inaba: 8! Derek Hough: 8! Bruno Tonioli: 8! Judges' comments: Derek thought frame is much improved, Carrie Ann wanted to see sharper kicks and turns
Dancing the Argentine Tango with his partner Daniella Karagach, it's Lightning McQueen!
Nightmare: Black widow spiders Song: Maneater by Nelly Furtado Carrie Ann Inaba: 10! Derek Hough: 9! Bruno Tonioli: 9! Judges' comments: Carrie Ann has reached the "giving out tens like candy" portion of the evening.
Dancing Contemporary with her partner Brandan Armstrong, it's Giselle Adams!
Nightmare: Getting cursed by a witch Song: Who's Afraid of Little Old Me by Taylor Swift Carrie Ann Inaba: 10! Derek Hough: 9! Bruno Tonioli: 10! Judges' comments: Honestly it slayed so hard they were all deceased
And now, for 3 extra points... THE DANCE OFF!
Since Giselle and Brandon were the top scorers last week, they were exempt and get an automatic 3 points.
So now we have...
Phineas & Rylee vs. Lightning & Daniella
Dancing Salsa to Sweet But Psycho by Ava Max Winner: Lightning & Daniella!
and
Tiana & Jenna vs. Annie & Gleb
Dancing the Jive to Frankenstein by Rina Sawayama Winner: Tiana & Jenna!
And the rankings...
Giselle & Brandon: 32 Lightning & Daniella: 31 Tiana & Jenna: 28 Phineas & Rylee: 26 Annie & Gleb: 24
And going home is... Annie and Gleb :(
EPISODE 8: THE 500TH EPISODE SPECIAL
Each couple will pay tribute to an iconic dance from DWTS history. I'm ngl I haven't watched the show regularly since like 2008 so I'm just going to draw from the IRL season right now and pick my favorite dances.
Dancing the Tango with his partner Rylee Arnold, it's Phineas Flynn!
Song: Sweet Disposition by Temper Trap Inspired by: Stephen and Rylee's Semifinals Tango Carrie Ann Inaba: 9! Derek Hough: 9! Bruno Tonioli: 9! Judges' comments: Really great job! Not perfect for a 10 but pretty damn close!
Dancing Salsa with her partner Jenna Johnson, it's Tiana Truitt!
Song: I've Had the Time of My Life from Dirty Dancing Inspired by: Ilona and Alan's Oscars Night Salsa Carrie Ann Inaba: 8! Derek Hough: 9! Bruno Tonioli: 9! Judges' comments: Carrie Ann wanted to see more content. Derek and Bruno thought it was fun but said it was very close to perfect.
Dancing the Foxtrot with his partner Daniella Karagach, it's Lightning McQueen!
Song: I Won't Dance by District 78 feat. Erin Boheme Inspired by: Joey and Jenna's Semifinals Foxtrot Carrie Ann Inaba: 9! Derek Hough: 10! Bruno Tonioli: 9! Judges' comments: Derek thought it was technically brilliant!! Carrie Ann thought she saw an illegal lift but the other two disagreed.
Dancing the Paso Doble with her partner Brandon Armstrong, it's Giselle Adams!
Song: The Final Countdown by Europe Inspired by: The most underrated performance of the season, Jenn and Sasha's Hair Metal Paso Doble Carrie Ann Inaba: 10! Derek Hough: 10! Bruno Tonioli: 10! Judges' comments: PERFECTION! THIS IS THE BEST PASO DOBLE EVER! IT'S SO GOOD! THOSE KNEE SLIDES HELLOOOO
There will also be an instant dance challenge, in which each couple is assigned a song and style 5 minutes before they have to perform it! These are just random songs I like lol. No judges' comments bc they never rlly had anything useful to say after these.
Dancing an Instant Jive with his partner Rylee Arnold, it's Phineas Flynn!
Song: Rollercoaster by Bleachers Carrie Ann Inaba: 8! Derek Hough: 8! Bruno Tonioli: 7!
Dancing an Instant Cha Cha with her partner Jenna Johnson, it's Tiana Truitt!
Song: Super Graphic Ultra Modern Girl by Chappell Roan Carrie Ann Inaba: 7! Derek Hough: 7! Bruno Tonioli: 8!
Dancing an Instant Rumba with his partner Daniella Karagach, it's Lightning McQueen!
Song: Someone New by Hozier Carrie Ann Inaba: 8! Derek Hough: 8! Bruno Tonioli: 8!
Dancing an Instant Salsa with her partner Brandon Armstrong, it's Giselle Adams!
Song: Fantasy by Mariah Carey Carrie Ann Inaba: 9! Derek Hough: 8! Bruno Tonioli: 9!
The rankings!
Giselle & Brandon: 56 Lightning & Daniella: 52 Phineas & Rylee: 50 Tiana & Jenna: 48
And going home is... nobody guys sorry I started with a smaller number than the real show
EPISODE 9: THE SEMIFINALS!
Each couple will perform one Ballroom and one Latin style that they have not performed before.
Dancing the Waltz with his partner Rylee Arnold, it's Phineas Flynn!
Song: Lorelai by Fleet Foxes Carrie Ann Inaba: 10! Derek Hough: 10! Bruno Tonioli: 9! Judges' comments: Bruno thought it was moving a bit fast for a waltz, Derek and Carrie Ann disagreed.
Dancing the Quickstep with her partner Jenna Johnson, it's Tiana Truitt!
Song: Texas Hold 'Em by Beyoncé Carrie Ann Inaba: 9! Derek Hough: 10! Bruno Tonioli: 9! Judges' comments: Derek probably said yeehaw
Dancing the Viennese Waltz with his partner Daniella Karagach, it's Lightning McQueen!
Song: I Got You Babe by Sonny & Cher Carrie Ann Inaba: 10! Derek Hough: 9! Bruno Tonioli: 9! Judges' comments: Near perfect, Bruno wanted it to be glidier
Dancing the Waltz with her partner Brandon Armstrong, it's Giselle Adams!
Song: If I Ain't Got You by Alicia Keys Carrie Ann Inaba: 9! Derek Hough: 10! Bruno Tonioli: 10! Judges' comments: All glowing, Carrie Ann just didn't think she was quite there with the emotion
Dancing the Cha Cha with his partner Rylee Arnold, it's Phineas Flynn!
Song: Fireball by Pitbull Carrie Ann Inaba: 10! Derek Hough: 10! Bruno Tonioli: 10! Judges' comments: PERFECTION!
Dancing the Cha Cha with her partner Jenna Johnson, it's Tiana Truitt!
Song: Kill the Lights by Alex Newell Carrie Ann Inaba: 9! Derek Hough: 9! Bruno Tonioli: 10! Judges' comments: Derek pointed out a minor slip up at the end, Bruno didn't notice it.
Dancing the Samba with his partner Daniella Karagach, it's Lightning McQueen!
Song: Despacito by Luis Fonsi Carrie Ann Inaba: 9! Derek Hough: 10! Bruno Tonioli: 10! Judges' comments: Carrie Ann thought there were some missed steps, but the others didn't notice and praised the energy/flair.
Dancing the Samba with her partner Brandon Armstrong, it's Giselle Adams!
Song: Barcelona by Ed Sheeran Carrie Ann Inaba: 9! Derek Hough: 9! Bruno Tonioli: 9! Judges' comments: Missing some of the bouncy quality Samba requires and resembled more of a Cha Cha, but overall so much fun!
And the scores...
Phineas & Rylee: 59 Lightning & Daniella: 57 Tiana & Jenna: 56 Giselle & Brandon: 56
And going home is... Tiana :( As a celebrity chef she just didn't have as many votes as actress Giselle!
THE FINALE!!
We finally made it y'all. Each couple will perform a "redemption dance," repeating a style they previously scored less well on. They will also perform a freestyle, in which they can do whatever they want!
Dancing the Quickstep with his partner Rylee Arnold, it's Phineas Flynn!
Song: Karma Chameleon by Culture Club Carrie Ann Inaba: 9! Derek Hough: 9! Bruno Tonioli: 10! Judges' comments: HUGE improvement from day one, but not perfect. Still, should be very proud!
Dancing the Tango with his partner Daniella Karagach, it's Lightning McQueen!
Song: Highway Tune by Greta Van Fleet Carrie Ann Inaba: 10! Derek Hough: 9! Bruno Tonioli: 10! Judges' comments: Carrie Ann and Bruno thought it was PERFECT, Bruno noticed a little slip but nice recovery.
Dancing the Quickstep with her partner Brandon Armstrong, it's Giselle Adams!
Song: I Dare You by the Regrettes Carrie Ann Inaba: 10! Derek Hough: 10! Bruno Tonioli: 10! Judges' comments: Amazing improvement from the bottom of the leaderboard to now! Frame looks a million times better and it was so fun.
Dancing Freestyle with his partner Rylee Arnold, it's Phineas Flynn!
Song: Gitchee Gitchee Goo by Phineas and the Ferbtones Concept: This is a song Phineas and his brother wrote when they had a band together. Ferb joins as well as some of his other childhood friends and the concept is backyard concert vibes. The dance is a sort of hip hop/cha cha/jive fusion. Phineas does a backflip. Carrie Ann Inaba: 10! Derek Hough: 9! Bruno Tonioli: 9! Judges' comments: They liked it! Didn't say this but it just wasn't the most impressive thing they've ever seen.
Dancing Freestyle with his partner Daniella Karagach, it's Lightning McQueen!
Song: Life is a Highway by Rascal Flatts Concept: Dedicated to his teammates, this was always their hype up song. His teammates are joining for the performance, which is a jazz/salsa combo with a lot of lifts and tricks! Carrie Ann Inaba: 10! Derek Hough: 10! Bruno Tonioli: 9! Judges' comments: Very ambitious but he pulled it off!
Dancing Freestyle with her partner Brandon Armstrong, it's Giselle Adams!
Song: I'll Be by Edwin McCain/Hold On by Wilson Phillips The Concept: Starts with a waltz/ballroom style that is like a dream, then transitions to "real life" where Giselle is surrounded by friends, which is more of a jazz/hip hop style. Ends with them all jumping around and dancing together! Carrie Ann Inaba: 9! Derek Hough: 9! Bruno Tonioli: 10! Judges' comments: Creative and fun! Carrie Ann didn't give full points because the end wasn't very technical.
And the scores...
Lightning & Daniella: 58 Giselle & Brandon: 58 Phineas & Rylee: 56
And the winners of your 2024 Len Goodman Mirrorball Trophy are...
GISELLE AND BRANDON!!!!!!
WOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now I go to sleep.
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multifandom-fanfic-writer · 11 months ago
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20 Questions for fic writers
Let's goooo
How many works do you have on Ao3?
36! Well that's certainly A Number
2. What's your total Ao3 word count?
585,468 (gonna his the 600k soon)
3. What fandoms do you write for?
Which don't I write for? Lol. Mostly Naruto and Hannibal. I've also written several fics for TMA, MCU, Ace Attorney, The Sandman, and fics for OFMD, GO and the Witcher.
4. What are your top 5 fics by kudos?
Shinra Tensei (Naruto: Akatsuki!Sakura fic(
you may be a sinner, but your innocence is mine (cute hannigram)
howl (non-trad a/b/o hannigram)
brighten the darkest hour (sandman hob/dream, but only bc i posted it on the right time i think tbh)
hold me, kiss me, rip off my tongue (plot and porn hannigram)
5. Do you respond to comments?
Absolutely! Not super fast, but I keep all the comment alerts in a folder of 'not yet answered' and move them from that folder when I've responded. In general the longer/more detailed the comment the more I try to give a very nice reply because I appriciated the comment. That can be hard to do without spoilers or leaving people to interpret the story how they like, sometimes.
6. What is the fic you wrote with the angstiest ending?
absolutely butterfly. I mean everyone dies. It's super tragic. Only time I really sat down to write an angst fic
7. What's the fic you wrote with the happiest ending?
probably Cooking for a Cutie (hannigram x queer eye). I mean, Will gets actual help, the Fab Five are wholesome and in character, and it's really just happy all is well vibe in general.
8. Do you get hate on fics?
Not on Ao3. I used to post on ff.net as well, both when I was a younger (and less good) writer, and got hate there. Even on Shinra Tensei when I used to post it there. Which I stopped. Because ff.net in my experience had so much haters compared to Ao3, where I've gotten criticism, yes, but not hate.
9. Do you write smut?
Heh. Yeah. Though often they are shorter fics that are centered around the sexual tension, with some exceptions (like my Steddy Hands fic) and for my big novels who are more dystopian vibe I don't write smut, because it doesn't fit. It has to fit the plot/themes of the story.
10. Do you write crossovers? What's the craziest one you have written?
A bit - I wrote a good omens/sandman crossover, and the aforementioned hannibal/queer eye crossover. But they are not very crazy, honestly, keep to both of their canons as much as possible, too. I wouldn't consider them crazy (though the second one more so than the first).
11. Have you ever had a fic stolen?
Not that I know of.
12. Have you ever had a fic translated?
Yeah! A couple of times, all of them Hannigram, I think. All of them in Russian at the Russian fic site, and they asked permission and I linked to that fic site too. I even went their once to read the comments there hihi
13. Have you ever co-written a fic before?
Nope. I did do a collab once where someone made art and I wrote fic. That was nice, but honestly not my favourite experience, especially the deadline attached to it. Same reason I've done a zine once but aren't a fan of it (for me) or those weekly prompts thing or whatever. I want to write when my muse is on, when I have time and energy for it, otherwise it isn't fun anymore. Co-writing a fic would also only be pressure for me.
14. What's your all time favorite ship?
Hmm... honestly, I think my favourite thing to write is the dynamic between the protagonist and the fucked up world they live in (maybe personified through a saviour or villain). So... yeah?
15. What is a WIP you want to finish but doubt you ever will?
I have two I want to finish but fear I'll never have the inspiration for again - one is a CR RPF fic that I have the second (smut) chapter half-written for, but I wrote such a long time ago I would have to re-write the whole thing, and I'm not sure I want to anymore. Second is a TMA JonElias fic I've written 4.5 out of 5 chapters for and I just don't have the muse for anymore. Maybe I'll finish the second one someday, but I'll probably won't finish the first.
16. What are your writing strengths?
Difficult for me to say about myself, lol. Uh. Worldbuilding, I think, and character voice? And fight scenes, or at least that's what people like about my Naruto fic. It also depends a bit on the thing I write fanfiction for. I'm honestly not quite sure. I'm not good at naming my own strengths lol
17. What are you writing weaknesses?
Writing things in too many words / using too many words, including over-used unnecessary words I think. Or worldbuiling something an obvious way and then missing an obvious question. Although that last one is also style, I don't worldbuild everything to the detail.
18. Thoughts of writing dialogue in another language in fics?
Not a fan, honestly. It can be done well - a very small couple of lines in another language said by a random not-even-minor character with the translation at the end of the chapter or otherwise somehow provided. But it can mostly be confusing and cause me to scroll up and down annoyingly.
19. First Fandom you wrote for?
LOL Jonas Brothers self-insert fic in my native language which thankfully never saw the light of day HAHA
20. Favorite fic you have written?
Oh most certainly my life's work Shinra Tensei and the sequel Bansho Ten'nin. Not only my biggest and longest fic, but also the one I love most. Which is why I started writing it around like 2015 (posted first chapter in like 2017) and am still writing it, and finally moving into the 4th and last arc soon.
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flightyfinch · 2 months ago
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ok this is only gonna be kinda interesting tbh bc it's been three years and i don't remember everything, this is mostly to entertain my friends
i used to freelance for Company. i started as a comics editor that worked with creators and reported to lead editors who were staff at Company and oversaw several comics at a time. idk how well this worked out as a system for Company (more on that later) but it worked well for me. eventually i was also signed on to write a comic adaptation of a book Company owned the rights to. i was given a lot of creative liberty on that and the schedule was strict but had plenty of time between chapter scripts being due, so it was pretty nice
in the middle of that project and a few others, i learned that another comic was in progress and was looking for a new writer to finish up the last 25%ish of scripts, and i was encouraged to throw my hat in the ring. i read all the published chapters of the comic and wrote up a short sample script according to prompts i was given
they wanted to see what i'd do with edit notes before taking me on, so enter two contributors to that google doc who we'll call Blake and Borpus. Blake was Company staff and a lead editor and a lovely person, i'd been in communication with her already about this job. she left nice productive notes about tweaks to the script
i never had any form of introduction or direct communication with Borpus. their name was listed on the comic as one of the creators, but apart from that i had no idea who they were. maybe they were also with Company or maybe they were an affiliate creator, but either way it looked like they'd been with this project from the start. their comments were blunt and honestly rude. this genius expected me to have included character development and backstory which hadn't been published yet. maybe they weren't looped in enough to know i hadn't actually signed on yet, i dunno, but one thing for which i give NO benefit of the doubt is that they rewrote entire parts of my dialogue. Company's editorial guide was very clear about how one should only ever provide EDITS, not directly redo another's work. on my own editing gigs i gave creators prompts and had them write the changes themselves. i only ever wrote out new lines or panels and offered them as suggestions if a creator and i had been working for a while and we had a level of trust
so Borpus pissed me off, but i still wanted more writing gigs. i took the notes and made changes to the sample script (putting BACK my dialogue and grudgingly working in the feel of SOME of Borpus's line changes) and my work was given the green light. when i signed on, to my relief Borpus's involvement vanished and i worked exclusively with dear Blake
but SHEEEESH i walked right into a mess. it looked like the comic's last chapters had been written at least once already and thrown out. i was given a rough version of the previous outline with a few story points they wanted to keep, and was asked to outline a new dozen ending chapters from that. i was given 2 (?) weeks for that and once that was done my schedule was one script due per week. this was a CRAZY speed bc every week was writing a new script and implementing edits on the previous week's script. i remember early on i was given a scrapped chapter that had reached the lineart phase, and was asked to rewrite the chapter and rearrange and reuse as many panels as possible to fit the new plot beats. it was understandable that they wanted to use work they'd already paid for and it was actually kind of a fun challenge, but it's also indicative how Fraught this production was
for the next couple months the pace was grueling, but apart from that it was fine. i wrote scripts, made edits, and they were shipped off to the art team. i reasonably thought that we were cleaning up from one emergency overhaul and the rest would be smooth sailing
after a couple of my chapters had published, Blake very apologetically approached me and i was T-boned by another overhaul. my chapters were spending too much time on new characters and story points and not enough time on the main couple...... the characters and the story points i had been assigned to do. yeah those. (specific gripe: how tf am i supposed to show the protagonist finding a place in her local lgbtq community without spending any time on the new people she meets in said community???) i made heavy new edits on scripts that hadn't been drawn yet, and i had to write one new chapter of the main couple hooking up and parting badly in order to amp up the feeling of resolution in the finale. i disagreed with this decision a Ton. this comic had been leaning hard on will-they-won't-they and it didn't make sense NOT to use them finally getting together for the finale. the reasons for the fight didn't make sense for the characters or for the fluffy goofy tone the comic had started with. but at this point i knew for sure that the clown car i was stuffed into was on fire, so i just wanted to maneuver myself to the nearest door. i made changes for them until they physically ran out of production time to ask me to make any more, and then i was done
a few other things happened mixed in this timeline of which i can't remember the order. Blake left Company (i doubt because of this particular comic but i'll never know). Company was acquired by a larger media corporation. and because i was the creator of the script Google Docs, i received the notifications when Borpus made their harbinger return and started doing rewrites to my scripts.
Contractually, anything i wrote for Company was their property. so long as any use of my work was credited and i was paid as agreed, it was theirs to do whatever they wanted with it. i know this doesn't seem to align with the practices i mentioned in the editorial guide, but it shows the hard split between the honor and respect generally shown on the production side of Company and the legal ownership rights the corporate side demanded. i could have edited those scripts as many times as they asked but they still could legally make any changes they wanted after the fact. no one WOULD, of course, bc that's stupid and insulting. no one except Borpus.
their changes sucked. characters became flatter and MEANER just to amp up drama. the scripts had been frankensteined and it was very obvious when you read them. i could have raised a stink about this if i wanted i guess, and someone probably would have stepped in on the principle of the thing, but i knew i didn't have any legal protection to lean on and this was all very clearly revealing itself to be stupid and not worth it. even in my early less muddled chapters the readers were unhappy. turns out if you keep trying to make changes to something WHILE it's in motion, people notice and realize they're being strung along. i just walked away.
as this was wrapping up Company's new owner, shockingly, did a big round of layoffs. maybe that system of freelancing editors to produce a higher quantity of comics wasn't good for quality, or maybe they were just being dicks. i don't know if anything would've even happened if i'd raised the rewrite issue, because the comic was finally ending and a ton of the people who'd made it were being let go anyway. all my connections at Company were gone and my work there dried up, so working on this comic didn't even amount to getting any better work there
to this day i don't know what the fuck was going on up top with that comic. maybe Borpus was in charge and behind every stupid demand for change. maybe this comic suffered a death by committee and Borpus was just one bad actor taking advantage of shitty management. all i know is mercifully people stopped reading this once popular comic, and it died in darkness where no one would see my name attached to it. many lessons learned, much dickheadedness witnessed. anyway the end. sometimes i like to look back on that smashed, flaming clown car wreckage, and now you can too ✌️
i think at some point i'll share the story of the shitshow that was the gl vertical scroll comic i wrote for bc i don't think i've ever explained the whole story to Anyone, and also who doesn't love hearing about a mess
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liannelara-dracula · 3 years ago
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what are your opinions on urie from tokyo ghoul?
Hi Love,
Great question, you guys should start asking more about the characters like this. Happy New year.
-Liannelara
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Okay, so let's talk about Urie.
Tokyo ghoul's Levi.
Now first let me just say that I don't write about him or almost anyone who is/was in the CCG.
Why? Well, it's mostly because I feel like I have no ideas for characters and feel like we don't know that much about them.
Plus it's not that fun to talk about them.
But anyways, boi got skill. Not gonna lie.
But he ain't as good as he thinks he is.
Like he's not a punk-ass like Ayato was when he was 15 but like Urie does have some pride going on there.
Is relatable in some sense, like if you have read the manga you can note that his inner thoughts about how he thinks about certain people can be relatable.
And his sarcasm is also something we can kinda relate to.
I wouldn't say he's as dark as people think he is, he's just mad at the world for his situation.
and he feels better by being successful because that way people like his dad won't have the same fate.
it could also be to kinda like be higher than his dad's co-workers sense he kinda has this vendetta against them and himself.
psychologically speaking, think he is fairly depressed.
though he may have an attitude that does seem unwelcoming, I think he's fairly hurt and just wishes he had more answers.
I'll be honest, he's a character I've always disliked.
This is mostly bc of how he treats people.
I'm just going to say it he's a pompous ass.
He's so obsessed with getting a promotion it's toxic and idk I've always found him annoying.
And little ridiculous cause he thinks he can do everything.
I don't like it too much when people relate him to Levi but I can see why, but still, Levi is better.
I also think Urie needs to loosen up a bit like idk get a girlfriend or do something his age.
He's so focused on something he may or may not achieve like it's good to have goals but don't only focus on one thing.
But it might be because he keeps himself busy with work since he doesn't want to think about what kinda life he lives.
Tragedy haunts him for sure.
He seems insecure as well, and think he feels like he's lost purpose sometimes.
I don't think he does well with love and wouldn't understand it.
But rather than dating he'd go with the norm (Japan/Asia) and get married to just some girl that fits housewife standard or something.
I think he also doesn't what love is bc he has no parental background.
I mean all he knows is how to be tough and be smart.
So everything else is difficult for him to level and understand with bc feelings were something he probably bottled up.
For years on end.
I think he didn't have a very normal life so some experiences make him feel indifferent.
And if you haven't noticed a lot of people raised by the CCG are kind of brainwashed into only focusing on getting rid of ghouls and all that.
Like the CCG establishes a purpose for them, rather then letting people be themselves.
So it sounds kinda culty, its also like propaganda but also not at the same time.
So yeah it may have to do with his upbringing tbh.
Wish he had more character development tho.
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seeuonadarknite · 5 years ago
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puppy — yandere oikawa tooru x f. reader
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hi i got inspired by @vermiliren’s yandere prompts and used two different prompts 😳 it’s been a while since i’ve watched hq (need to get caught up tBH) but the hq boys are fun to write for and i wanted to try it out with oikawa so i’m sorry if i didn’t portray him right-
warnings: toxic parents, kidnapping, abuse, noncon, degradation, facefucking
"Seriously? You lost another game?" The tantalizing tone of Oikawa's mother made him want to cringe.
It felt as if all his parents cared about was his volleyball career. They never asked about his wellbeing, they never asked about his grades, and they never asked about his social life. All they seemed to care about was volleyball.
And that's all anyone really cared about when it came to him. He was the great king, after all. He may have had good looks, but his fan club would have never supported him if it weren’t for his talents. It sucked.
Glancing up at his mother and father, who both seemed very distressed at his recent loss, he sighed. "Sorry, ma. I know you were rooting for me. I'll get em next time!" He sent his mother his signature grin, in hopes of receiving reassuring words or at least a smile back.
Nothing. She didn't even bat an eye. "Go to your room. I can't bear the sight of you right now." It was as if she wanted to call him a pathetic, good for nothing kid. It was frustrating; having parents that lived through him. If he wasn't successful, then they weren't successful.
The pressure was immense. Not only did he feel pressured by his team and fans, but his own parents too! If he made a simple mistake, he'd be done for. His stress was building up; he needed to relieve it before he messed up again.
Pushing his seat backwards, Oikawa departed from the dining room table and made his way down the stairs. His room was pretty secluded, he opted on taking the basement because it was spacious and pretty soundproof. He didn't have to worry about his parents hearing him yanking it, right?
Wrong. He didn't have to worry about the girl that had been locked down there in his closet. Without time to spare, Oikawa pulled the closet door open, revealing your peaceful, unconscious body.
It was really a shame that he had to disturb your peace. "Wake up, puppy." Your bloodshot eyes shot open, only to meet with your kidnapper's dull brown ones.
How long had you been in here? It was really a mystery to you. Oikawa had purposefully taken all clocks out of the room. He didn't want you to have a sense of time, he wanted you to suffer. He believed you deserved to go through the same misery that he did.
"You love me, right? So you wouldn't mind me using you to destress. It's real tough being in my shoes, you know? You have it easy!" The way he spoke sickened you.
It was as if he believed you were living the dream down here. You didn't have to go to work or school, so what was there to complain about? All you have to do is sit back and let Oikawa use you however and whenever he pleases.
Unfortunately, you were far too weak to fight back. Your body was scattered with bruises, scars, and love bites. He ruined you; you were a perfectly clean canvas before he painted you with bruises. All you could really do was beg. Beg like a pitiful puppy at the mercy of a cruel owner.
"Please, T-Tooru.." You knew how much he enjoyed hearing his name roll off of your tongue. "..Don't do this. I'm— I'm still sore from last night!" And you were. The previous night he had yanked your hair, slammed your face into the hard flooring, and fucked you from behind. All because you told him you missed your family.
A small chuckle sounded throughout the four walls of his room. What were you thinking? He couldn't care less about your wellbeing. "I will use you however I want to."
These were the last words that fell from his mouth before shoving you to the floor and placing a foot in between your breasts. "Beg me to stop." He looked down at you with a terrifying gleam in his eyes. One that told you that he could kill you if he wanted to.
"P-Please! I-" A fit of coughs erupted from your throat. "..can't breathe!" You felt as if you were about to lose consciousness when he finally stopped applying pressure and removed his foot. However, your torment didn't end there.
Dragging you up by your hair, Oikawa sent you a glare before giving you another command. "On your knees." Before you could receive another unethical punishment, you quickly obliged, getting into the said position. The position made you wince a little, thanks to the bruises that covered both of your knees.
Oikawa smirked at you before unbuckling his belt and pulling out his cock. "That's a good girl! Now, suck." He didn't even give you a chance to retaliate as he nudged the tip of his cock up against your lips. You reluctantly parted your lips, allowing him to push himself further into your mouth with ease.
Your pace was slow and lethargic whilst you uncoordinatedly swirled your tongue around the length of his cock, pumping whatever you couldn't fit into your mouth with your hand. Unfortunately for Oikawa, you had little to no energy, so you didn't put much effort into your movements.
This just wouldn't do. It felt like he was getting sucked off by a zombie. Letting out a dramatic huff, Oikawa gripped your hair with both of his hands, pushing your head down to the base of his cock. Your eyes had widened as you gagged, feeling the tip of his cock hitting the back of your throat. You couldn't throw up, especially not on his cock. He'd fucking kill you if you did. But god, his cock was making you gag like crazy. It'd be a miracle if he managed to cum without making you vomit.
Whenever he would pull your head away and give you a second to breathe, he'd immediately push you back down, thrusting into your mouth as if you were some sort of toy. Maybe he had forgotten that you were human, just like him. Hell, maybe you had too.
His hands mercilessly tugged at your hair, causing pain to course throughout your scalp. You let out a small whimper, sending vibrations through his cock. This action only caused him to pick up the pace of his thrusting. "Fuck, you really know how to turn a guy on, eh?"
His fingers crept up onto your head, purposefully digging his short nails into your scalp. He loved seeing the pained expressions you'd make at him as you gagged on his cock. "If only the school knew where you really were.." He grunted, temporarily pulling his cock out of your mouth to bask in your expression. It was perfect, he loved the way your pupils seemed to dilate ever so slightly at his taunting words.
"You're not dead! You're here with me, taking my cock like the slut you are— fuck!" Just degrading you like this really turned him on. His cock twitched inside of your mouth one last time before he shot his load into your mouth, filling your oral cavity with his semen.
"Don't even think about spitting it out. I'll just make you lick it off of the floor like the puppy that you are." You knew better than to disobey him. His threats weren't empty, and you'd prefer not to taste the floor; Oikawa was enough.
Pulling his lengthy cock out of the warmth of your mouth, Oikawa watched as you reluctantly swallowed his sickeningly salty semen. Not only was the flavor revolting, but the substance was thick and always stuck to your throat. It was gross.
Oikawa watched your face contort into a cringe as you finished swallowing his semen. God, this was a sight he'd never grow tired of. Crouching down to reach your height, he leaned down and pressed a chaste kiss to your forehead.
As he leaned away, his eyes made contact with yours. It was odd, the glare in his eyes had softened. Was he really going to act like he didn't just force you to down his cum just a minute ago?
Caressing your cheek with his hand, he let out a dreamy sigh. "You’re such an obedient little puppy.”
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translightyagami · 3 years ago
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💎 🎭 🎢 📜⭐  - a divine power
I just reread this again and I want you to know how much I still fucking LOVE it. And its not just the smut (which is perfect btw)! Like it's so self indulgent and out of left field AND it's just a dern good read. Funny and hot af and that's a rare gem to find.
💡💎 🎵 📜 ⭐ fantasy of a fantasy & possession <3
💎- What was your favorite part?
a divine power - my personal favorite part of the whole fic is the turn when Light finally gives in to L's "power." it took so long to figure out how best to write that slide into madness, and i'm rlly proud of how it came out.
fantasy of a fantasy - favorite part is when L imagines Light in front of him as part of Light's fantasy; its like a nesting doll of weird horny projections.
possession - the part when Light comes back to life and re-enacts the jennifer's body raw beef scene.
🎭- What was the feeling or mood you were going for?
a divine power - huh, this is a tough one to answer bc the real truth is so silly. i wanted to take a super over the top hentai device (the magic dick that makes someone fall in love) and write it as seriously as possible. the mood i wanted was, i guess, classed up porn? as classy as one can get.
🎢- Were there any scenes you were nervous about? For audience reception or otherwise?
a divine power - does my nervousness abt the entire fic's reception count? people were rlly rlly weird in the comments of that fic. like ... legit made me uncomfortable weird lol.
📜-Do you want to write something like this again in the future?
a divine power - like this? probably not. i don't think i'll be dropping this pure uncut smut ever again. tbh, smut gets low audience engagement, and unless i write in a very narrow window, most ppl never even read the stuff. so i will write this stuff, yeah, but i won't post it.
fantasy of a fantasy - sure. entwining character study with smut is the brand here.
possession - no, almost definitely not. i had fun writing this, but i don't think it fits in my fanfic ouvre super well.
⭐- What’s a scene/paragraph you’re proud of?
a divine power - the entire sex scene, plus the part i mentioned previously. i rlly had to work to get it to as clean a read as possible, and i'm proud of how it looks now.
fantasy of a fantasy - i really liked the paragraph where L is trying to figure out how much Light is in the closet. just some super smooth writing there. reads really nice.
possession - oh boy. i like the part where Light grabs L by the horns as they make out. its just hot, and i felt cool when i thought of that.
💡-What was the motivation behind the story?
fantasy of a fantasy - i wanted to write a fic abt L being horny over Light being horny over L. it was also going to be an omegaverse fic that would've delved into like what is acceptable for omega desires but i discarded that shit early bc its a hat on a hat.
possession - i was trawling the old dnkinkmeme on livejournal and there was a request for a fic where Light is sacrificed to L, who makes him his like bride or whatever. the fill was this (a little bit tortured) fantasy thing where L was a dragon, and i thought that the prompt might be better suited to more of a horror vibe. then the scene of Sayu finding Light in the kitchen eating raw meet came to me, and everything else flowed from there.
🎵- Did you have a playlist/piece of music that went with this story?
gonna answer this for all the fic i write, which is that most of the time I don't write with any music playing at all. i can't deal with the distraction. i would say these particular fics (fantasy of a fantasy and possession) don't have music associated with them. maybe living dead girl for possession.
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