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okay unironically I love so much that porter is like this world SUCKS its BAD here and it HURTS you why do you care abt it!!! and literally every single bad kid is like ngl we just hate ur ass it does not matter what ur philosophy is
#dimension 20#fantasy high junior year#not art#fhjy spoilers#its!!! gods I will Be My Ass in the tags rn. but thats so like. deliciously setting typical#like porter's desire is to transcend and his contempt for the world he's in feels. idk Real#like he plays the game bc he wants to win and be done with it. how do I word this#yknow. being a god would like. be his win state. when he gets that happening thats it his story is done he checks out#meanwhile the bad kids do actually just like playing the game lmao. like they love adventuring!#theyre so solidly Of This World. they carry the values that can only be born of it and they like having mastery over it#its a meta angle that I think is very fun specifically for d20 being in such a unique position in the zeitgeist when it first started#the rat grinders are from DnD Writ Large. porter wants to escape. but this is the bad kids' home its Their Actual Play Show#which makes it so fucking excellent to me that porter's question is somewhat of merit! its their show and it tries very hard to punish them#and they just straight up dont listen to him here lmao bc they hate him but! since the moment the academic track ended its been clear#that they save the world bc they Like Playing. With Each Others#thats what riz thinks the core of adventuring is! thats why fig stayed! and I also think thats why this hovers over elmville now and#a dead god is coming back in the school gym. porter is a shit evangelist but even if hes a good one I dont think it wouldve worked like he#wants it to. the only way he couldve escaped is if he'd not involved elmville at all. thats where the bad kids met dude#its a shitty place that fucks with them but they all come back here bc they wanna play with each others#and in that regard I think thats what the stress tokens ultimately means. Is This Game Still Fun To Play. ITS A RAGEQUIT LIMIT#Im literally running from one end to another of this conspiracy board Ive pulled out of nowhere#Ill draw after this I just wanna get this out. gods this episode has done nothing but furthering my delusion of grandeur actually#Im the hottest smartest manthing on earth Im king fucking midas over here. anyways uh! great ep!
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Sayonara
#sorry. tumblr kills the quality 😭#click on the image to get rid of shitty pixels#art#digital art#thanks sharky for writting the ask that made me draw this#digital illustration#oc art#oc regina#guns
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a brief interlude.
#the sims 4#ts4#ts4 render#da save#linnet#l likes to take naps and a is a talking#walking#sitting encyclopedia who also likes to take frequent reading breaks#i absolutely swear this is how they end up bonding#i don't even care if it doesn't make it into the game#it'll have to be pried from my cold dead hands#i'm writting my own shitty universe for a game that isn't even out
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Rewatching Shez's supports with Edelgard, it kind of irritates me that Edelgard looks upset after Shez points out that the average farmer probably hates her for the war. Like, ma'am you knew this would lead to mass death and a lot of people not being fans of yours, and considering Hubert also points out the Edel's policies are meant to benefit nobles who give her money and troops and keep down the commonfolk, she shouldn't be surprised by this answer. Shez even softens the comment by saying "you must have a good reason" but it's like Edelgard can't handle hearing any kind of real criticism from people she respects (or claims to). I think it's another player-pandering thing, can't have the Lord be mad at you, but it just makes Edelgard look like a thin-skinned whiner who can't handle the harsh criticisms that her actions are going to bring her. At least when she went on about "her path of blood and death" in 3 Houses she seemed to have some sense of "yeah people will hate my guts." Idk it probably comes down to the developers being scared to have someone truly criticize Edelgard without pushback.
That supports irks me for other reasons lol, basically the fact that Barney points out how water is wet (something Supreme Sailor Fuku apparently missed, as you noticed) but within 1 convo they completely drop that plot line and get along with her plans because, eggtivation means that someone as bland as Barney - who could represent common sense - must also be drowned under liters of Hresvelg Grey.
Imo, it's not "your lord cannot be mad at you", but again and again with the Fodlan games, "no one can be mad at Supreme Leader, not even you(r self insert character)".
FWIW, FEH got her writing right - faced with contradictions and criticism, Supreme Leader ragingly storms out of a conversation when the characters aren't from Fodlan and thus cannot be eggtivated (or when the Fodlan team isn't writing them?).
Given how her Nopes' Big B's support basically has her say "you're either with me or against me", no wonder why criticism, at least in Nopes, is something unknown for her, hell, Ferdie must behead his father to demonstrate times after times that he and House Aegir aren't her enemies - in a way, even with the twist they added (let's ally with those icky disgusting beasts to get rid of uncle, and THEN we will free Fodlan from their scaly grasp!) Nopes wrote Supreme Leader to be even more uncompromising and more bull-headed than ever, if in Houses she had a modicum of self-awareness (she's still the Adrestian Emperor though!), in Nopes it's written away.
#anon#replies#3 nopes#it's all about eggtivation#you can't be mad at supreme leader you can't point out her inconstistencies#the plot cannot focus on things like her motivations or have people react to it#she was designed as the lord you're supposed to feel bad for bcs you 'have to' rekt her#ffs i was re-watching playthroughs of BK#Shanath and Baelith are allowed to be asses with tragik backstories#but they're still asses and die a miserable death because surprise#doing shitty things means consequences#My fave Gustadolph in TS has often be touted as Supreme Leader but written right#no uwu with him#they could have written SB Barney has one who disagrees with Supreme Leader but ultimately make a Yuri realisation#siding with the winners and adding some stuff like they're just a merc they don't give a fig about other or the continent#if they can make it out of this war with a better status for themselve then they're all for it that's all#writting more in the opposition between selfish merc Barney and the selfless Billy who accepts to watch over people#oh well what are themes
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Steve's kindness is, like all self-taught one, a mirage of borrowed expressions, a collage of habits picked from people he loved, a bit stilled but eager and well-meaning, sometimes a bit chopped at the sides, a growing want to let the good feelings out in front of the right people.
Eddie liked to sometimes watch him and find all the signs of other people in him, try to match them up to right people.
He would watch and think - this is Nancy's stubbornness to never give up on people and Dustin's loyalty, he would see him trying to give advice to Dustin and see Johnathan's akward pep-talks to Will. The way he would always try to have snacks for the kids screamed both Joyce's and Mrs. Henderson motherly kindness. His willingness to sit in silence, a steady presence, when somebody needed it shined with Will's warmth. How he fights for the people he cares about, letting his meaness be a defense for them all, a barier and a shield similar to Max's snark.
And whenever he found himself to be the matching person? It made him feel loved, so fucking loved and seen that he would choke on it.
Eddie sometimes would make a game out of it, to found the matching puzzle whenever Steve's kindness shone (and it was a lot of the time). It was always someone from the party and he would always find himself with a strange fond warmth whenever he realized who it was. And usually he was good at it, it wasn't really hard when he loved and knew all those people too
There were exceptions though. The first one was Robin and it wasn't for the lack of Eddie's knowledge and love for her and moreso because of the whole RobinandSteve being always so SteveandRobin, never really separate. Whatever was Steve's was also Robin's, their clothes, habits or sometimes even their smiles shone in the same way. They were mismatched in a funny melted together sort of way, his kindness was her and hers was his and it was hard to difference between the two when even they didn't know where one ended and the other began, they traded traits like they traded clothes, wore them bright pink socks with yellow soft sweater, a joke to cheer you up with a soft you can tell me anything in the same breath.
He didn't really knew whose kindness it was the innate one that must have been deep within Steve before he let it shine or Robin's. He didn't think it would really matter anyway, they would trade it between themselves like shiny cards anyway.
The other one was a smile. An unique one, one that Eddie swore he saw somewhere before and that lacked the freckles and a missing teeth except noone in the party had these two traits, at least not as Eddie knew them and he could never find that one puzzle. It was boyish and full of mischief, usually with a starry reflection in Steve's eyes.
The last one was a lift in his tone, the way he would make his voice honey-like sweet when he tells Robin her new haircut suits her or El's new shirt brought out her eyes. The intonation always made Eddie think of bubble gum and sugared summers.
He couldn't place the last two to nobody. At least not until Steve told him about Tommy Hagan and Carol Perkins.
Obviously Eddie knew about them, but Stevie didn't talk about how they are. But how they used to be.
"Sweet." he said while passing the joint they shared laying on Eddie's bed, pressed from shoulders to their ankles. "Carol used to be sweet, warm with the naive love only kids hold" Steve's eyes were looking out the window of Eddie's room, as if he could see the young version of them just outside playing childlish games. "and Tommy used to be wild. But not like bad wild, more like he was always chasing trouble, adventure. Like kids do."
And Eddie couldn't see it, not with how the world twisted them into different people, cruel. More cold, all sharp teeth and autumn's rain.
Except he could, he could in Steve's special smile and the sound of his voice, he could see it and he could see the love that Steve Harrington had for them.
"They're douchebags now," he said when Eddie voiced it out loud "but I did loved them once, sometimes I feel like I've never stopped, they just... Grew out of my love, grew into something I couldn't."
It should be strange, to love something someone isn't anymore, but to Eddie it just spoke of the way Steve Harrington threw himself into love, how he never really stopped loving and caring. It was admirable, it was so lovable and it was so Steve-like. Earnest in the sweetest way.
It made sense that Steve Harrington would love people even through his expression of it.
#idk what this is#i just kept thinking about how at some point Steve must have loved Tommy and Carol#and yeah some relationships are bad and you need to drop the people because they are as*h*les but that doesnt mean the love was never there#or that you don't sometimes feel the ghost of it when you think of them#And I think Eddie - just would watch the people he loves - would observe them and analyze them#cathegorize them or their habbits and expression into something a little cabinets in his mind#this is kind of shitty but oh well i've written it so now i'm bestowing it onto others#i'm trying to get back into writting because my laptop will be hopefully fixed soon and i'll actually could write then#but i cant so for now this ficlet is here#steddie#steve harrington#eddie munson#stranger things#platonic stobin#my writing#ficlet#dom's tumblr writing
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i'm not exactly innocent of this and i am not defending her at all as a person, but sometimes when people criticize l!ly 0rchard, i can't help but side eye a liiiittle bit when they nitpick EVERYTHING about her writing... including stuff that i knowwww the average person wouldn't criticize a cis and/or male writer for doing.
and it bugs me more that you cant point that out without people going "omg its not transmisogynistic to criticize a bad youtuber!! look, we don't misgender her, dont we get a medal for that?"
#like the ''ewww she doesnt write male characters? she writes female characters??? shes got a woman fetish!!!!!'' thing i keep seeing#im sorry thats a weird ass thing to say about a transfem creator#''she wrote her self insert as a cis woman... thats kinda weirddd shes trivializing the trans experience... shes erasing trans people''#she is the trans people in question?#like idk i dont think lily's writing is bad bc she prefers to write women. i think its bad bc she's a shitty person and that leaks into#her work#this woman goes on about how her fans have shitty trash writing and shes the only good writer among them and thats the core of her bad writ#writing. to me anyways. anyone who's that spiteful and petty towards other creators is just prone to poor quality content#bc she doesnt respect other creatives so whats the chance that she respects the actual creative process yknow?#obligatory ''no this is not defending her as a person. i am not dismissing allegations. i am talking abt her work.'' tag
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Okay, so. I finally finished SOM yesterday night (needed to head to bed like right after which is why this post is done today) And ngl, that thing with the prophecy and Thalia suddenly being there? That was SOMETHING I tell you. Especially with the prophecy possibly also applying to her. Yikes. I have no words. But also Luke ????? The end `??? Unironically I am so confused about him. One moment he seems like he wants to kill Percy, Annabeth and co and then he's trying to recruit them ? Like genuinely, the hell? What is it- does Luke want them DEAD or does he want them alive ???? But also apropos Luke- I GOT SPOILED ON WHAT HAPPENED TO HIS MOM AND ???????????????????????? OUCH ? HELLO ? WTF ? I found out that apparently her name's May Castellan she got cures and went insane after trying to become the new Oracle of Delphi. And during her manic episodes scarred Luke so bad he ran away. BUT YET SHE ALSO KEEPS ON BAKING COOKIES AND MAKING SANDWICHES FOR HIM !? OUCH !? Poor woman holy shit. No wonder Luke turned out as fucked as he did. (Please mark any spoilers in your replies/reblogs so I can avoid them, thank you )
#sry if the post is rly shitty#I was distracted by a Germany VS Hungary football game before writting this so I only have very little to say#but also I get rly confused with the way Luke's written so far#luke castellan#may castellan#percy jackson sea of monsters#sea of monsters#pjo
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My life is very much this energy all the time right now:
#having to do all the boring shitty stuff because I know it will make things better in the long run#working 9-5 then 5-9#my only respite is the gym#my only snacky snacks are fruit though tbf fruit is delicious#I’m doing 800 words of edits a day and my reward is writ#writing the thing I wanna be writing!!
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Interesting how Ruby’s character is so controversial rn, while one of the biggest complaints for Tokyo blade when it was coming out was the lack of Ruby hmmmm….
#not saying it’s on purpose but it is interesting timing#it will definitely lessen the complaints about Ruby#is this part of Aka’s plan? Or is he just shitty at writting lmao#very excited to see how the second season will turn out tho#Aquas hair is finally fixed!#oshi no ko#onk#ruby hoshino#onk anime#oshi no ko anime#eiko won’t stfu
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Curious
#Source: Just trust me bro#I beg of ppl who edit these pages to give me at least shitty screenshots as a source IF what they're writting is actually true#But ya know the writting here is as absurd and weird as the canonical Tragibox so this might be canon#The fucking orb part killed me tho#An orb forced him to make cloens I can't#What orb. What fucking orb Elaborate please#is it magical or something#But I guess in a world with some reviving black fluid the existence of magical orbs isn't that weird#The last part is a bit sad tho. Feeling bad for Mack and Dave
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Thanks for checking in, I'm still redrawing pictures of guys from shows (ft. my inability to draw flowers)
#i did another shitty portait guys im looking for validation on the internet guys im still thinking about the episode mrs tricounty#no thoughts head empty as per usual#im just saying words because im tired and lonely and getting kinda invested in sitcoms my parents make me watch#mike draws things#also if you cant tell i love writting words on my fanart like i drew a thing heres scene context or notes or whatever#🎥👩👦
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i post my shitty pieces because it makes me braver.
#thoughts#on life#my thoughts#poetry#on bravery#shitty posts#the “bad” art#the “bad” writing#the “bad” thoughts#i post them to teach myself to be brave#on writting#writting#about art
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Aileen is neither aromantic nor quite demisexual, but she leans more towards the latter. She's a wild tomboy whose focus seems to be competition, food and drinking and tends to find too much of a hassle to flirt most of the time since she struggles with people who are not forthright and direct. Subtlety does not work with her and she just keeps living, since that's what she mostly cares about.
Maybe one day she will find someone who will pique her interest...Until then, a good feast, battles and games are her top priority. Well...that and turning into a legendary hero, which is her biggest dream. ♥
#luhart#oc#Aileen Darrow#satyr#luhask#anon ask#dnd oc#dnd#dnd5e#dnd art#dnd shenanigans#dnd stuff#dnd character#dnd ocs#dnd 5e#dungeons and dragons#doodle#Sorry about my shitty writting. English not main lenguage#im also super sick#The Darrows
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'the things mick would get away with as premas golden boy'
YEAH BUT ALSO THE THINGS MICK WOULD GET AWAY WITH AS THE GOLDEN BOY. like he uses it casually doesn't think about how he knows everyone and everyone knows him but fred is kinda going insane about how much shit mick can get done and places he can get into with just a look.
#sometimes. SOMETIMES. I like falling into stereotypes and shitty writting ideas just for the funzies#mick being powerful and being able to get shit done just bc of that name IS THAT trope that I like a bit to much#but like cmon hes a fucking schumi#kyle.txt#schusti#shipping.tag
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This is my own idea that came from my dumb shipper/angst/drama brain
Several years ago, on a warm july when the birds flew from Utgard. The great luxury cruiser "Golden Atlantica" setted it's sail on the great sea with 600 crewmen and over 2000 civillians onboard.
That was the last time anyone saw the ship. It was said that the ship and all innocent civillians onboard where attacked by Miramons.
The goverment told everyone. To the civillians and Esper union it had been an "unexcpected" attack that never came up on their radar.
And when they had send out a rescue team. It had been to late and the ship had sunked to the bottom of the ocean. The 600 crewmen and 2000 civillians were gone. There were no corpsesor any remains of life left on the ship. The only thing left of the passengers where their bags and money Any help given from Esper union to find the missing pepole was denied. Because the higher up feelt unecessary when there was no one to save.
And esper union had more important duties then finding dead men. And the 2600 missing pepole were forgotten in time. And "Golden Atlantica" became a myth.
If the Esper Union had done some groundwork and looked through the lies. Maybe. Maybe they could save the 289 survivors from their horried fate. Maybe they could have stop "them" from torturing thoose innocent souls. Maybe they could have saved the survivors!
But this is just what ifs! The past can never be changed! The damage is already done!
The goverment lied! THEY COVERED UP EVERYTHING!! Just to protect their prideful egos!
Their choices are the reasons why we are beyond saving! Why I am beyond saving!
The blood they forced me to spill will never dissapear. I will never be redeemed even if I am burned by the purest flame. I will always be the monster they forced to be
Zhu Yang. If you ever find this message.
I always love you
And
I am sorry!
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🍷💖 -autobotmedic (you absolutely don't have to, but it Could be funny)
Send a "🍷💖" and My Muse will drunkenly flirt with Your Muse
Its not often the bot's get the chance to induldge, and it seemed that recent stress of looming events paired with cherr overestimating herself, she had indulged plently. She's fully relaxed for once, and its merely and unfortunate coincidence that she ran into the medic. "Hey Ratchet. Can I be your ophthalmologist ‘cause I can't stop looking into your eyes~" She looks so proud of herself, as if she had just said the smoothest line.
#🍷💖 | meme#//: hope this is good. i love writting drunk flirty cherr cause she's fully convinced herself she's saying the smoothest lines ever but its#//: always so shitty pick up line ASDKAJDKAD#//: might revisit this in the morning cause its like. 1am#autobotmedic#🍒 || A bit too much highgrade [ crack. ]
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