To any and all who saw Incredibles 2 and also thought Helen and Evelyn had way more chemistry than she ever had with Bob and their marriage was unhealthy with the amount of fighting (but still want them all to be happy), have I got a story for you. I just started posting the first fanfic I've ever written and would love for Hevelyn fans to check it out!
I love constructive criticism and would appreciate any input on my writing, and also just let me know if you like it!
I have a thing on my server where we watch shitty hypnosis media (let’s face it, most of it is awful) and watched incredibles 2 and they did whiskey tomboy a dirty. Just kinda shoehorned in. Her 2 brain cell brother wasn’t even upset she was sent to prison RIP
I also like how her and Helen girl boss for an entire 5 SECONDS to one up the man.
Sometimes I think "was this shot really necessary" but then when I try to imagine it at a different angle it just looks more questionable every attempt
helen seems like the type to dwell on her worst thoughts instead of sleeping while evelyn seems like the type who avoids emotional conversations like the plague
This fic was originally supposed to be just around 5-7 chapters. But with life stuff happening, it's been some time since the last update. So, I need y'all to pick!!
Long Chapters
- Obviously takes a while to write
- Chapter 3 was 27k words. I'm tempted to write longer for this new chapter, but it'll take a long fucking time since the new school year is starting. And tbh, idk what possessed me to write like a lot back then
- Longer time between updates
Short Chapters
- Shorter time between updates, so... more frequent updates!
- Chapters will be around 10k to 15k words... or less. Depends on where I think the story would pause well