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review-anon · 3 months ago
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I'd love for you to make your own version of the DT tier list. https://tiermaker.com/create/ultimate-danganronpa-and-fanganronpa-tier-list-565102
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This took so long to do but its here. Eternal Endings and Cartoons in Danganronpa are of course not on the list so I cannot list them.
Blowback and Re:Birth don't have strong opinions from me because its been so long since I last checked on them.
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review-anon · 1 month ago
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//My ability to inspire you to make art from my ramblings is unmatched.
//Granted its only happened twice so far, but still its so funny you took one look at when I mentioned the part where Nikei interrupted a Soruko moment in Chapter 4 because he wanted some action, and decided to make art from it.
//The funniest thing about this? This actually reminds me of a dream I had probably around the same time you were drawing this.
//So in this dream me and Nikei were exploring some cavern like system which looks a hella lot like the Cave of the Past from Earthbound expect without the creepyarse music and eldritch abomination waiting at the end. Because at the end of cave was a stone pedestal, with a book on it.
//And on said book was a single word; PAIN. This started a "friendly discussion" between me and Nikei (i.e. it was a full-blown argument) about what the book meant. He thought it was just something someone wrote as a prank to scare people into not reading it, and I thought that opening it would expose you to the worst most agonising pain ever. To try and prove me wrong, he decided to grab the book and open it despite my protests.
//Which upon one read of whatever was inside the book he collapsed to the ground wringing in pain like someone had ripped his heart out. Now you would think I would just put the book back and get the heck out of dodge. But apperantely my dream self has the same level of self-preservation as a slasher film character, and thus I open the book like a dumbarse.
//And yeah I experience agonising pain that was so severe I woke up from it. I don't what that was and I don't know what the meaning behind the dream was.
//But you might get a giggle out of this.
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Today i offer you all art that caters to me and to me only. Tomorrow, who knows
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Genuinely not joking when i say i'm never getting over the 4th island thing
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ahappydnp · 27 days ago
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hello ahappydnp
I wanted to complain about bad timing of things lol I’m in law school, my first semester, and I get my grades back on the 10th but dnp will prob be pajama week’d up, so parasocially I won’t have any fresh content to roomba up and distract me
congrats on finishing your first semester!!! i think you should reward yourself by having your own pajama week and rewatching a series you haven't seen in a long time like undertale orrr sap from the beginning (x) or if you want more chill vibes pick a year and watch all their old younow shows (x)(x) <33 those are always fun to revisit because you will ALWAYS find something that hits different now
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the-monkey-ruler · 7 months ago
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I know this has nothing to do with jttw, but, I have seen people say that the game Black myth Wukong should not be bought because it is made by bad people. However, there are people who say that these rumors are malicious, with the intention of damaging the reputation of the game. Do you think you could investigate the matter? However, I will understand if it is too much to ask.
I don’t think I have time to investigate the matter myself honestly, but I have heard other people talk about how these rumors have been spread as well.
Mostly coming from the devs saying that they did not want DEI consultants and want to stick solely to the Xiyouji script rather than add/subtract any more content that might make the game marketable to a wider audience rather than being so focus on only Chinese mythology. Also that IGN might be exaggerating the story because of this stance and hence giving the game a bed rep on purpose. I am not familiar with gaming consumption or the relationships between game critics and developers. But I do hope that perhaps IGN did embellish a lot of these takes and that the game devs where trying to come from a place of wanting to keep the game Xiyouji focus rather than a place of any discrimination.
But I would love to hear what other people have to say and if there’s any links or reported conversations of how these rumors could have gotten started. I know a lot of people are looking forward to these games and I do hope that if more information comes to life then there can be a reasonable discussion.
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mxtxfanatic · 4 months ago
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Have you ever read "The Shade of Old Trees" by Kryal on ao3?
I genuinely think you might enjoy it, the characterization is top tier and the author's notes go heavy into details on why they made this or that decision. It was all incredibly good, well thought out, well researched, and with not an ounce of fanon to find.
I’ve read it, and while I initially enjoyed the story and the long author’s notes, I found it very toothless in its critique of anything substantial despite the author bringing up major issues in the modern world, themself. It also felt like their understanding of China and its history came straight from one of those 5-minute info-videos that’s half American state propaganda and pretend like the history of modern China begins in 1949. Finally, they also fall into the trap of softening Jiang Cheng’s character in the final confrontation with the excuse that “jc wouldn’t actually want to kill wwx!” despite that being what he literally did and tried to do again in canon. I appreciate them writing through their logic, but that doesn’t mean I’ll agree with the leaps they take simply because they’ve explained why they’ve made them. Great start, weak finish.
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review-anon · 3 months ago
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Imagine doing a favourites list and then you end up creating an entire goddamn pantheon in the process.
Yeah that's me. Add that to the list of things me speaking my mind has changed the reality of Danganronpa askblogs for. And this has got me thinking about RA's position since well she was the janitor but now Freeze is doing so and I don't want to step on their toes.
Given how I've given her a pocket dimension of sorts to be in (Let's face it while the Voidship is within the interdimensional void, its by all accounts a pocket dimension) I've decided to make it so that Review Anon is a drifter that visits each dimension where she's considered dead in. Not many characters can see her but she's there, always watching. She is basically the Watcher from the MCU. Though a tad more meddling then he is.
She's like this in DTFA, Survivor and A New Future. However her sightings are less in Survivor due to Steve being a thing and I don't want overstep him as he has seniorship. The only one she's unironically not allowed in is A Student Out of Time, because her original identity is alive and well there. Thus she becomes a normal Anon there. As Review Anon's death is due to the Tragedy, any askblog where the Tragedy hasn't occurred she is alive in.
So yeah you get some Review Anon lore.
//Okay, so I was chatting on Discord and we were talking about Review Anon ranking best parents so far on me and Mod Bubbles blogs which they made a comment about Ui giving RA some tips and then Honey spoke of how the after life theater works;
//Also I can't show images because image limit but we wrote this. ^^;
'Poi-Rozen — Today at 8:49 PM Yeah, while you can't hurt the shitty people there; you get to show them shitty films. xD
Captain Obvious — Today at 8:52 PM Yep xD
honeybeegirl94 — Today at 8:54 PM I’m in charge of the connection between the afterlife and the living. Mod Survivor’s in charge of punishing the sinners (Junko, Mukuro and Utsuro). Mod Freeze is the janitor. Mod Carol and Mod Aliza are in charge of the tickets. [8:55 PM] Send them that.'
//And we all agree, I'm the driver and I get to decide if they get reborn or get send to the ether. xD
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destinyc1020 · 6 months ago
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https://x.com/vickster51/status/1817672068218912996?s=46 this is nice
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Niiiiiice Anon 😊
I'm so glad whenever I read such great reviews for Tom's R&J play! 😊👏🏾
I definitely feel like this play helped to refine his acting skills more. I feel like theater/acting on stage helps ALL actors in their acting craft tbh. 😊
I can't wait to see which projects he takes on after this, and whether we'll notice a huge difference in his acting due to it. 🤔 I know Austin has always said that acting on the stage helped him to really hone his acting skills tremendously. 😊
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imaginespazzi · 5 days ago
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Chapter 13
I am so late with this but I have had an annoying busy day and writing reviews of your chapters is honestly so relaxing for me so I'm comin' in hot and late. Also I was re-reading and only remembered to start my review after the first flashback, so thats where this starts 🤷🏻‍♀️🤷🏻‍♀️🤷🏻‍♀️
June 2033 - crying in the club (locker room)
MY CLEMMY
ohhhh that would make Ps blood absolutely boil seeing her girls interact with Frenchie
THREE FUCKING WEEKS? Paige what the fuck are you doing. Get it together. I have no sympathy for you
“Aunty Chérie,” Stephie’s squeals echo clearly in Paige’s ears, despite the noise of the crowd surround her, “you played so good today.” -> Oh wow this is tantamount to stabbing Paige in the eye with a stale baguette 🥖🥖🥖
Instead she shoots the assistant an apologetic look, -> Ok when I first read this I was filled with dread that you were going to bring this assistant into their weird dynamic as a sex pawn to make Azzi jealous as payback for going to dinner with Clem. Glad your mind isn't as deranged as mine.
This is a cage of Paige’s own making and the key to open the lock rests in her own hands. -> Ya it does you dumb bitch!
“I forgot this so I uh- I came back to grab it.” -> lame 🤣
“she’s a decent player. But you’d never be in her shadow. Never be known as just her anything.” -> oh I kneeeeeeew that was part of the proposal rejection
“Nine years ago you said no-” -> queue meme of old lady from titanic being like "its been 84 years…."
“god Azzi- I’m trying so fucking hard baby but how do I know you won’t say no me -to us- again?” -> ohhh the use of 'baby' always CUTS TO THE CORE
"It’s Azzi’s turn to look guilty and Paige can almost see the memories of that night flashing in her mind" -> omg that flashback is going to be so painful to read
“don’t go to dinner with Clémence.” ….. “Don’t hold on to the deal with the Liberty,” -> Touche Fudd (French)
August 2032 - LETS PUT ANOTHER SHRIMP ON THE BARBIE (lets have another fight on a balcony)
Cam is always a minor side characters in future fics. She's everyone's second favourite blonde white gyal. Makes sense though I firmly believe she had to witness some teenage Pazzi angst/grope atrocities when they were on team USA. Poor girl.
“What?” Paige asks distractedly, her eyes narrowing when she notices a familiar French player inching towards the door for a hug of her own. -> tee hee
Marine and Clemmy in the same room? The time space continuum has collapsed.
The summer Olympics must be confusing in Australia because its winter for them. Do you think they resent Northern Hemisphere people for assuming the world runs on their seasonal calendar? I do.
"hoping she was being at least somewhat conspicuous- as Azzi had spun the little girl around." -> OK I'm not saying this is a plot hole (maybe I am) but this is like 6 months before they meet again at the Valks office there is no way Stephie and Paige wouldn't have already completely fallen in love at these Olympics.
"we’ll get customized 5+35 Bueckers-Fudd jerseys for the Olympics" -> and when Paige gets a tiny one of these made with a Valks jersey when they are telling their family Azzi is pregnant? Then what! I cry?
“I can’t bel-ieve you went to another party without me Mama,” -> Wow they really owe Stephie a party at this point. Best to get married asap.
“Oh fuck you Paige,” Azzi snarls -> Mommy I'm scared
Aaliyah has had ENOUGH of her shit. Us Canadians are very sensible.
“Sorry but like,” Jana looks back and forth between Paige and Azzi, dropping her voice, “y’all fucked?” -> I actually find it so cute how Jana really does use the word ya'll. She will fit right in visiting Paige in Texas
“so- so what does that mean for the two of you? Are you- are y’all gonna get back together?” -> Oh Jana you sweet Naive Egyptian baby
“but maybe it could’ve meant something. If you’d stayed.” -> This is painful these two are so damn stupid
June 2033 - 911 Fudd fix my life
This is how I know things are about to resolve, a Fudd parent intervention and a mention of mint chocolate chip ice cream
Colleen has really been MIA. She got the hell out of dodge when she sensed things getting messy.
A premade dirty Shirley sounds truly heinous
“I’ll have you know this is a Macallan.” “You know that that means nothing to me right,” -> I actually feel Paige would force herself to get into brown liquor because she is a middle aged black man in her soul and would want to reflect that to the world with her alcohol choices
“It was a couple months into our relationship and Katie and I had a huge fight. It was about her not letting me make a decision about Azzi,” -> its wild to think that at a certain point Azzi's name was Azzi Jaslyn Smrcka-Duffy. A Hyphen is a horrible thing to do to a child.
Nivi this is a sad story within a sad story what are you doing to us
“Katie and Azzi, they’re mine but I think- I think if maybe someone else had gotten to them first -someone who loved them just as much as I do- maybe there’s a chance things would be different but Paige,” -> cut to Clem waiting in the wings holding a croissant with a crazy look in her eyes.
You just have to say you’ll stay. -> Dear god woman GO TO THEM As always this was spectacular give me 14 (3? 😢) more of 'em. 🤱🏻🤱🏻🤱🏻🤱🏻🤱🏻
I think mayhaps tumblr is being annoying with replying to longer asks cause 🤱🏻babes I can't seem to directly reply to your ask, but this was my reply lol.
Omg only a half a review? I'm disappointed. (jk jk I understand)
Clémence might be Paige's achilles heel and Stephie definitely uses it to her advantage
LMFAO babe you're sadistic cause lowkey that could've been hella entertaining but it would've definitely set them back another thousand years if Paige flirted with the assistant
Writing that flashback is gonna stress me out so bad
Death, taxes and a Cameron Brink cameo because she's just cutesie and I love her and blame Sella lol
#FreeAustralia from the seasonal norms lmao
Okay so I lowkey did think about that and it did feel a little bit like a plothole but I didn't want Stephie and Paige to have already been so attached and so my logic is that children at that age change so quickly and that 6 months is a lot of time for growth. And also I think the Olympics are so fast paced once you get there, that Stephie doesn't actually spend a lot of time with Azzi and therefore Paige which is also why Azzi is a tad bit guilty about not being with her.
I love Jana in this fic but #freeher from dealing with this gays
Where would Pazzi be without the Fudds fr fr
I think Paige puts up a show that she drinks brown liquor at parties but she's just a baby at heart who needs her sweet fruity drinks
My heart did hurt a little bit for baby Azzi while writing Tim narrating that story I can't lie
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fantasticalleigh · 1 year ago
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🖤🖤🖤🖤Another one for The Education of a Lady 🖤🖤🖤🖤
used this Pin as a reference
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review-anon · 3 months ago
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Thank you so much Bubbles! This will help me greatly! Also I was a dumbarse and turned Anon asks on for some reason but that is me.
Yes please do, because I’m probably gonna use Rebirth characters in my sketches in the future.
//Here you go ^^
//Before anyone asks, I got the more dynamic and expressive sprites off a Russian social media site a while back, but sadly the rest were deleted before I got them all. This is all I have ^^;
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review-anon · 2 months ago
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Oh, speaking of Ace, thoughts on him?
Ace Markely is a interesting one that's to be sure. At first glance he seemed to be a fusion of Kazuichi and Hiyoko, someone who talks tough, bullies others and is a coward. Yet Chapter 2 manages to deconstruct him a fair bit.
He goes through some negative character development, rather then become a better person, he becomes worse as his thanatophobia is so great that he is willing to kill to avoid death. He goes for Eden first because of how small and weak she is after but Arei moved up many people's tier lists, he switched targets and decided to go for her.
Ace is a deconstruct of the annoying coward nobody likes because the fact everyone thinks he's stupid, that he's a coward and nobody likes him, has pushed him into a massive corner. Nobody stopped to think he was okay, and the one person who did, was revealed to be a sociopath who never cared for Ace because he doesn't care for other people.
In addition his bullying of Nico, and I do wonder why because is it because Ace thinks they're pathetic? It isn't because they're an enby as the bullying started before Ace found out and all of all the things he could do, being a bigot isn't one of them. At least he has some standards. But he pushed Nico to their breaking point which is why they tried to kill him. And this convinced Ace, especially how apathatic everyone was to him almost dying, that he needed to kill. This was someone pushed into a corner and lashing out.
Veronika made a very good point and warning that Ace needed to tone down his behaviour but the problem is its Veronika, so she says it in a very creepy way which means the actual message doesn't come across.
He's also in the stereotype of not only a male athletic that kills but one that hates his talent as horses scare him and its the fear of them trampling him that drives him. We do find out the reason why he's so scared of dying is because he saw a friend of his die at a young age. But if we don't get confirmation on who that is or someone else I might do some tweaking of my own~
While Ace being the culprit kinda came out of nowhere the main fault was really how focused everyone was on the secrets. Believe me when Part 2 of my Chapter 2 Despair Time Review comes out, I will really rip the secrets apart as they are the worst part of the Chapter.
The big moment was ironically one of his last as when Teruko told him to destroy MonoTV and when it resulted in her being attacked, and Levi blocking the shot, Ace knew the only way to save Levi was for him to die, then the lifts could work and Levi could get medicial aid, and so he faces his death.
I saw a Ultimate Jockey execution when the victim was tied behind a horse and literally dragged behind it and torn to shreds and if that was where Ace was going I would have complianed massively but thankfully they focused on his character and his fear of death by having him face death scenario after death scenario until he literally has a fear induced heart attack and dies. This could actually happen irl and its why exposure therapy can be quite bad.
In addition I have some very interesting plans for Ace. But I am waiting for his bonus video to come out first since they could ruin my plans. Overall I feel like Ace is a compelling character and a harsh reminder why you shouldn't push someone to their limit.
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shallowseeker · 1 year ago
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My faves of yours this year were the car metas and how long cas was dead grief dean ones
I collected some of them and WOW, we really had a blast this year. I already forgot how much fun we had!!!!
I've seen performing!Dean talked about for ages, but for me performing!Rowena and performing!Sam (as high-falootin' high-class phonies) was particular good-tasting to me this year.
Some of the chatter around Lily Sundar episode as a "hidden Mad Men" type atmosphere with humans as the "hoes you shoudn't have emotions about" was great, and Cas a "exemplary high-performing man's man/angel's angel/results guy" was chef's kiss for me. I ate that like a barbarian.
Also, I adored the explorations about Jack's own performances too, or at least that people might entertain that his niceness and gentleness "golden child/good boy" thing is a little bit of an act to hide any darker feelings. He's brutal when it comes to protecting and has quite a temper (see: gas station worker getting choked out, all of Apocalypse Earth...)
CAR META
Dean tried to be the truck
Family cars and protecting the ones you love
Heaven is a truck, and the evolution of Cas as a truck guy
The date car that presided over the death of John...AND the death of Cas (also, PINTOS and family cars galore!)
The evolution of Cas from pimp-mobile to family truck guy
Cas + cars silly thoughts
GRIEF
The chair at the head of the table
Dean is the one crying in the soap opera and cas is the man with the bloody face
Dean's grief on speedrun / how long was cas dead anyway????
Dean looking for Cas during THEEEE PRAYER
Dean & the death of Jack
Don't make it real and permanent (And by Lucifer I mean Cas = And by Belphagor I mean Jack)
The everything he ever wanted
Sam doesn't grieve Jack and Rowena, he moves straight on the Eileen and berates Dean for moping
How Dean's rumination makes him seem guiltier
BOTH
I'm all out of love I'm SO LOST WITHOUT YOU (Don't grieve in front of me Dean it makes me feel uncomfortable and scared)
ADDITION: Here was the first uncomfortable Sam take
The grief ones also bring to mind the great convos we had this year about Sam Winchester, discomfort, and CLASS issues
Sam x Ph.D (Sam's personal OTP)
Rowena's class struggle aaaaaaaah
Rowena, unthawed
Dean x moving the lawn
Sam -> Campbells are "brawn," Winchesters are "brains"
Rowena & Crowley and the dream of upwards mobility + biting off more than they can chew
How Jack & Sam differ; Jack lacks SAMbition
Sam the pillar of the Lebanon community???? Nope
I have so much great Jack stuff but I suck at Tumblr tagging so I can't think of any to feature right now. The different between jack and Sam are great, because Sam got suckered into thinking he was special on borrowed powers. Jack's powers are his own. (Jack is an heir, Sam is a spare. Jack is like Dean in that he's heir to the family responsibilities.) Also, I did a lot of Dean-Mary-Jack posting this year that I just...honesly loved.
Some of my fave ones are from last year though (Like Jack is VARSITY) for this year...maybe Jack is THEEEE BOXER. Or TOYS TOYS TOYS. I think the Tombstone play by play was this year, too. How domains of the house emphasize different parenting styles in TFW. #spn parenting
My brain lives i all.
I'm sure there are some cool ones I missed. But.
Happy New Year and thanks for all the cool convos.
I'll try to get out and tell people which metas of theirs I liked too, but my mind magically goes blank when i try.
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itsgrimeytime · 9 months ago
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YOUR SMUT IS SO FINE IT DESERVES MORE RECOGNITION also as a rick' whore your account is a paradise
HIIIIII :)))))
So literally before this account, I have never written smut a day in my life so this means so much to me !!!
And I am so glad, I literally can't stop writing about him. It's an addiction.
Thank you <33333
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review-anon · 6 days ago
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//And here is the fanfic AU in question!
//Extremely chilling stuff indeed, as this captures how insidious and psychologically damaging the Void Juice Monsters are in their humanoid forms.
//Of course as we all know that Void Juice Monster has a second, more monsterous form when Xander and the others decide to tell it to get lost in kinetic fashion.
//Actually given that Aliza is a light user...wouldn't that make her monster be highly resistant to all forms of magic, and also be the first one to not get nuked to death by the Flashback Light?
//Yeah when that creature is showing up, not only is Aliza not waking up unless the Void Juice is purged, which due to it being resistant to light is much easier said then done but yeah...its a rough bad time all around.
//And something I'm noting for later use... You will see later~
//Either way excellent job on this Aliza and you better hope that AU ends well...but something tells me it won't.
Possessed…
I got inspired by the void juice situation so ye here’s a lil what if if it got to Aliza
also @review-anon here it is :D
(1/2)
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“Where is everyone..? It’s too quiet..” She’s walking down the hallway which is…oddly slient….too slient.
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“Did i took a wrong direction? I was heading to my room so i might have missed it..”
..aliza…
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“Huh?” She stopped walking and looks around
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“It’s probably just sleep getting to me..” she shook her head
…aliza…
this time she was getting scared no one is around and this seems so off
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“Okay..whatever you are.. come out! I’m afraid of you!”
“…are you sure..? I’m your worst nightmare..”
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“Oh yea? You don’t know anything about me!”
“…are you sure…?”
Something purple was in her sight and it transformed into something too recognizable and Aliza shouldn’t had said that…
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“….” A great replica of Aliza..almost..to her it’s her when she was in middle school..
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“!! I-…you…how…?”
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“Did you forget..? I’m your inner demon…the OLD you…the you in the past..”
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“I know what you love and what you despise..your regrets…the pain you went though…”
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“..no…no no..y-your not real…”
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“How much longer…?”
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“Huh?”
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“How much longer…till you end up alone again?”
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“W-…what are you talking about..? I-“
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“I won’t be alone again…right…?”
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“But remember the last few times you thought that?…You end up alone…”
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“B-but that was back at-“
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“At what…? Middle school? You remember what pain you went though…and your still going though it now.”
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“After all…you.. lost your sense of self…of who you are..”
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“!!”
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“…poor you…all you wanted was love…proof that you matter..but all you got back…was the opposite..”
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“Your….your wrong!”
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“Am i?…your parents care…but does your dad side of the family do? They hurt you..mentally…emotionally and physically…all to make you be the image of you they wanted..”
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“….t-that’s…”
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“And what about those on this ship? For all you know…they’re being nice out of pity…”
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“And what about Xander? He may love you but is it the false you or the real you or for a different reason. You dad’s side of the family always twist the reason of why anyone talked to you..”
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“….s-stop it…”
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“You know i’m right Aliza…that’s why..I’m willing to give you something ….”
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“.w-what…? B-but i…”
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a-student-out-of-time · 3 months ago
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At long last everyone its FINALLY here! Man this took way longer then I thought but I know why it took so long. Firstly, drawings and when you see how many there are you see why it took months. And secondly there was a section when I went into extreme detail about each team member…but decided it drained too much from me and it wasn’t up to my standards so I cut it out. Had I done that ages ago, this would have been out months ago, but hindsight is 20/20
Either way this my concept idea if ASOOT was made into a video game, I am not a programmer so this will never see the light of day but who knows? Someone might pick this up.
I hope everyone enjoys this and I wonder what you think of my drawings, please be kind to them I’m no Mod Poi or Carol.
What’s next, well when this gets uploaded I will add it to my blog and then since my blog is active I’m gonna do some general clean up and have a few surprises on there. You will see what I mean but after that my next goal with be to do the Valentine’s Day Arc review. That is gonna be a very good one since it will be good vibes all around.
Regards, see you see and let me know what your favorite drawings are! Don’t tell me which ones need work I know its the vehicle ones. - Review Anon
//The Pitch is complete!
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kquil · 21 days ago
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Hey pookie kquil, I hope you had a great time during the holidays! How’s your health been? I’ve been quite busy during the holidays myself, so I didn’t get the time to send a review on chapter 7 of DOB but I finally got the chance woohoo! (˶ˆᗜˆ˵)
here it is:
Remus will always be grateful for their efforts and unwavering love for him but the situation is bleak. It’s hard to escape the nasty whispers and unsavoury gossip that go around about his kind — not that he wanted to be a werewolf in the first place… 
Remus, I shall avenge you <(ꐦㅍ _ㅍ)> *creates a portal and pretends to be a deity that specifically punishes those who speak awfully of lycanthropes by associating the victims with predators like greyback. MATTER OF FACT GREYBACK IS GON GET THROWN INTO AN ISOLATED, SENSORY-DEPRIVED CELL IN FULL MANACLED FASHION THAT HERMIONE ENDURED (just in case you don’t know it’s a fanfic on ao3—going to be removed soon)*
He’s lucky enough to be accepted into the greatest wizarding school in Britain by Albus Dumbledore.
Dumbledore is full of surprises that could vary on the scale of positivity. This is a 10/10 ٩(^ᗜ^ )و ´-
Everything was taken care of and Remus, in his relief, was free to feel the excitement of every other student invited to attend Hogwarts.  
I hope anyone with a disability or chronic illness or a similar situation is able to enjoy free education like Remus could with the care and encouragement they need.
Their friendship was fairly new but there was already a brotherhood there that was undeniable and hard to suppress.
I love friendships AHHHHHHHHHHH 
He wonders why their ‘private’ conversation was being done in the eyes of so many other people, when she first approached him for a quick but discreet talk, he expected her to take him someplace private too but that wasn’t the case.
This made me laugh so hard. Why is it that adults often make this mistake like?! "( – ⌓ – )
“…I don’t feel good. I never feel good,” he bites his lip in an attempt to keep his shaky voice steady and looks to the ground to disguise his watery eyes.
The laughter disappeared and nowy eyes are clouded with teary, only tiktok has ever made me both laugh and cry within a few seconds (and maybe a few other books…)
James and Sirius were strong protestors, blocking his way when he tried to swiftly slip away……Remus continued to hear his friend’s protests even through the door he softly closed shut behind him and began his search for the school matron.
James listening to Peter and holding back Sirius after the both of them were protesting is so funny. Sirius probably protested harder and furiously glared at the both of them as James held him back. 
Meeting Madam Pomfrey for the first time was nerve-wracking. Remus had made a point of seeking her out on their first-day tour of Hogwarts…….He will remember that day, her acceptance, forever; he believed only his parents had the capacity to care for a monster like him but she refuted that without a single word.
Baby Remus realising there’s someone else who accepts him as he is and treating him so gently makes me wanna bawl my eyes out. THATS A CHILD HOW CAN ONE HATE ON A CHILD SUFFERING WITH LYCANTHROPY??
“I apologise for its sorry state, Remus” Pomfrey sighs in disappointment, her frown remaining despite his words of assurance.
Thank you for including the awful state of the shack Remus had to face alone at the beginning of Hogwarts. We often overlook how scary it must have been.
“It’s okay, really,” Remus musters a small smile and assures her again, unaware of how he makes her heart clench painfully…..Lyall Lupin will regret that fateful day until his last breath. Not a day goes by that he doesn’t blame himself for his son’s mistreatment and lycanthropy. 
I absolutely love how you treat the side characters in your series. Usually they’re overlooked or not much is said about them, BUT I AM ABSOLUTELY LOVING THE WAY YOU WRITE THEM! I love Madame Pomfrey’s nature, and Lyall blaming himself for his son’s condition is heartbreaking. Remus thoughts of himself are just as heartbreaking AHH (╥﹏╥)
“Are you sure I won’t be able to hurt anyone in here?” Remus asks before Pomfrey can say much else. And, again, the matron is astounded at the child’s strong character……Outside the willow comes to life again, swaying against the push of the wind and sensitive to the presence of unwanted strangers. 
We listen and we don’t judge:
I’m going to imagine myself as Madame Pomfrey too 🧍‍♀️
…..Like some sort of haunted picture, the full moon hangs suspended in the night sky, laying claim to its dominance over the vast expanse of space, outshining the stars and ousting all clouds that still linger. It glowed like the many poltergeists that roam Hogwarts’ halls but the moon’s presence was incomparably menacing.
idk how to explain it but the way you described the night sky was hauntingly beautiful and built a sense of dread at the same time
“I like your thinking, James old chap!” Sirius jests and slips beneath the invisibility cloak with him. 
This type of lingo used by kids is so funny to me 
He enjoys having friends of the same age and not being weighed down by responsibilities or a pressing urge to protect them
perfectly described an older sibling’s life
“Damn it, I think it was left after all,” James curses and steers all three of them back the way they came…“Yeah but, next time, we should go where I say first,” Sirius cheekily comments, getting a light shove from Peter and chuckles lightly. 
Love this dialogue shared between them
“Making sure I don’t get behind on work and doing them in the hospital wing,” their jaws drop at his level of studiousness, “yeah, I asked Madam Pomfrey to get the assigned work from classes so I can do them without getting behind,” 
I think I just got convicted by a child. Time to turn into an academic weapon or whatever it was called 
Your baby flushed a soft pink and immediately moved the topic forward, making you giggle. He’s such an upright gentleman, trying to keep the subject off unsavoury matters, especially over the dinner table. Conversation flows naturally and there are brief pauses where you both focus on your plates, providing the perfect opportunity for your mind to wander. 
I laughed so hard and regulus is such a cutie stop, I want to shower him in love and pinch his cheeks!
⸜(。˃ ᵕ ˂ )⸝♡
…The relationship between you was much better now, brighter and warmer, it hurts too much to think of the past and it would be best to only look forward from here.
AHH WALBURGA NEEDS TO GET BONKED ⁽⁽(੭ꐦ •̀Д•́ )੭*⁾⁾ also Regulus’ little heart 
Later that night, you ask Kreacher for more information. The topic clearly made Regulus uncomfortable and you didn’t want him to do anything he wasn’t comfortable with, which is why you didn’t ask any further questions, especially at the dinner table where the atmosphere should be lighter. Hopefully, you can fully dismiss all tensions from dinner when you tuck him into bed later on. 
I love it when adults are considerate of children’s feelings, even though it’s the bare minimum—you just don’t see it often you know? (∗˃̶ ᵕ ˂̶∗)
“Yes, I was wondering if the house had any secret rooms, perhaps down the hall from the library,” Kreacher gives you a sceptical look, one that was doused with suspicions you immediately set about diffusing,…Kreacher takes a moment to catch his breath and flush away his anxiety before answering, “Ladies of the noble and most ancient house of Black were the only ones, Mistress, they be the only ones allowed into the parlour,”
I’m glad to see Kreacher’s character development. Besides him being loyal to the Black Matriarch, his attitude seems to be better towards both of the black sons and not just regulus. That says a lot about how much the reader has had an impact in their home. Over the past few chapters he has really grown!! His anxious personality still remains, but he seems to have been doing better due to Reader’s care. It also seems like Walburga trusted him quite a lot since he’s aware of such a secret.
‘YOU WORTHLESS, GOOD-FOR-NOTHING MUGGLE!’ Walburga shrieks in her offence, triggering yet another skull-fracturing migraine, ‘YOU ARE NOT PERMITTED TO GO SEARCHING FOR THE PARLOUR! SOMEONE LIKE YOU IS NOT ALLOWED! I CAN HARDLY BELIEVE YOU WERE ABLE TO SEE THE INK! NOBODY SEES THE INK BUT ME!’
I wonder what you’re cooking pookie ( ≖‿ ≖ )
…When you finally look down to see the source, your face blooms into a warm smile and you have to keep yourself from cooing aloud. Cuddled up into your side was Regulus. He lay atop the blankets with another blanket to keep him warm….
STOP IM COOING AWW (ෆ˙ᵕ˙ෆ)♡
“Mistress must drink her healing potion, now,” Kreacher urges in a slightly shaking voice. You hesitate, “for Kreacher? Please?” at that, you finally drink the potion you hate so much, muttering a vow to never drink something so disgusting again…He was taught this alongside the two young masters after your great fainting spell and change in demeanour. Kreacher learns a lot of new things from his Mistress every day and he finds that he enjoys it a lot. Unlike his Master Orion…
PLEASE I LOVE THEIR RELATIONSHIP SO MUCH. Their relationship is so sweet!! The way reader handles Kreacher’s panicking and outbursts is so AHSISKDJDJ (๑'ᵕ'๑)⸝*♡
Pink in the cheeks, Regulus shrugs nonchalantly, “It’s okay…everyone deserves kindness, right Mother?” his words were from one of the last lessons you had given the brothers before Sirius had to leave for his first year and now, although Orion is the least deserving person, you’re still so proud of your baby for remembering your wisdom. 
the way both Sirius and regulus seem to remember her wisdom and lessons ⸜(。˃ ᵕ ˂)⸝♡
Opening the letter, you begin to read dismissively but your eagerness spikes when your wandering eyes glimpse the signed name at the bottom: Alphard Black. 
OOOOOOOOOOO ( • ̀ω•́ )✧
It was a comforting thought, somewhat, that there was a sisterhood amongst the family. It makes you wonder how long the tradition has been taking place. Perhaps it wasn’t entirely for ill-intentioned meetings for dark magic. The optimistic part of you imagines the women of the Black family aching for a private room away from the men in their lives just to share a cup of tea and relax. Maybe meetings were held in contented silence, relishing in the calm and savouring the safety of the cliquish room. 
love this thought (ㅅ´ ˘ `)
…It all ends with an image of a heavy truck barrelling straight towards you and then you’re consumed by darkness.
ma’am I—did I just get hit by a truck AGAIN? Okay so clearly you’re cooking something and we are barely able to identify the smell.
Did Walburga accidentally opened some multiverse portal and reader dropped in? And if that’s the case…why is she stuck in her head? Are there two souls in one body or one soul and two minds? Or smth like that— WHAAAAA
ALSO we love your over 10k chapters (at least I do 🙂‍↕️)
YOUVE LEFT ME WITH MORE QUESTIONS NOW MISS KQUIL HAHAHA
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My love! Thank you so much, I had a wonderful time this holiday season, and I hope you did too ⸜(。˃ ᵕ ˂ )⸝♡ and health-wise, I’m doing good! No seasonal cold here~ I hope you’re also doing well — you’re such a sweetheart for doing that despite the busy holiday season, thank you so much, my love, your messages always make me so happy ♡(˃͈ દ ˂͈ ༶ )
Much avenging will be happening for Remus in this series, my love, there's no need to worry (⸝⸝> ᴗ•⸝⸝) I will make sure our Reader/MC will take care of everything — this will also include Greyback! ᕙ(⇀‸↼‶)ᕗ
Yes, yes he can and I’m taking full advantage of that — I just don’t appreciate his switch-up when it comes to prophecies (¬⤙¬ )
Very true, I honestly cannot fathom that that isn’t the norm ( ,,⩌'︿'⩌,,)
FRIENDSHIPS FOR THE WIN!!! ✧。٩(ˊᗜˋ)و✧*。
RIGHT?! I swear they have no awareness when it comes to those sorts of things; yeah, for sure, let’s air out my ‘private’ business in front of everyone ૮(˶╥︿╥)ა
I will take that as a compliment, though I am sorry I made you teary-eyed, my darling, you don’t deserve to get upset — the fact that you got upset for Remus though only shows how big your heart is, and it makes me appreciate you more (づ> v <)づ♡
Lol James’ switch-up was only because he knew he could sneak out to find Remus with his secret weapon: the invisibility cloak (๑˃́ꇴ˂̀๑)
Baby Remus needed to have that realisation and I’m making sure Madam Pomfrey and the Marauders make sure he never forgets it! ৻(  •̀ ᗜ •́  ৻)
God! If it was up to me, that dilapidated Shack would become a cosy-ass cottage/boy den for the Marauders!… (˵ ¬ᴗ¬˵) Oh Yeah! It IS up to me hehe~ 
Awww~ Thank you so much for the appreciation, my darling! I promise to continue doing my best at doing these minor characters justice! Madam Pomfrey, Lyall and Hope Lupin, I’m sure you’ll be happy to know, will soon become as prominent as Damocles and Ruth Belby ৻(  •̀ ᗜ •́  ৻) (Fleamont and Euphemia too~ \(^ω^\ )) God, I’m so excited to write for so many other minor characters too! 
You are so valid for that, my love! ( ≧ᗜ≦) Feel free to imagine yourself as anyone you want! No judgement here!
Good good, that’s exactly how I wanted you to feel about the full moon, I’m making sure Remus’ screams are going pull everyone else into the same horror and dread he feels every full moon! (っ˃̣̣̥ -˂̣̣̥ς) 
I find it hilarious too! I just HAD to make Sirius talk like that hehe~
Older siblings deserve more credit, and I say this as a younger sibling 
Dialogue is something I’m always very nervous about but I’m so happy you enjoy what I end up writing, it’s such a relief! (ㅅ´ ˘ `) ♡
Lol Remus has that effect on all of us — And I believe in you wholeheartedly, my love! You’ve got this! ദ്ദി ˉ͈̀꒳ˉ͈́ )✧ You’ll be the most powerful academic weapon ever! 
And THIS is why I love writing Regulus getting the childhood love and care he deserves! He’s such a cutie and deserves to be appreciated as such! I love cold, stoic Regulus but I love him like this too! ( ˘͈ ᵕ ˘͈♡)
Walburga will get her comeuppance soon enough, my love! I promise! 
I appreciate that too! I really want to be a mother one day, so writing good adult characters is my way of getting a little practice in (*ᴗ͈ˬᴗ͈)ꕤ*.゚
Kreacher’s character development is something I didn’t know I would enjoy writing so much so I’m happy you’re rooting for him too — I love him as a grumpy elf but he can do without the bigotry and deserves to be treasured the way Regulus treasured him by more people 
hehe~ I’m cooking a lot of things, my love, and I promise it will taste delicious when things eventually come out! (๑>؂•̀๑)
Baby Reggie is too precious! Even I’m cooing as I write for him! 
Yes! I love Reader and Kreacher’s relationship too! I really didn’t know I would enjoy writing about their development so much but I’m so happy it flourished the way it did! 
Reader/MC is just an amazing mother, what can I say? She’s the mother they deserve, naturally, they heed her words! (๑>◡<๑) 
NEW CHARACTER UNLOCKED! I can’t wait to write him too! ヾ(。✪ω✪。)シ
I love writing about sisterhoods and all sorts of unities like this, even for a bigoted family like the Black Family
I’m cooking multiple things at once and all will be served/revealed in due time and all your questions will be answered!  (˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧ And thanks for letting me know, I’ll see if I can make that a benchmark for chapters
Thank you so much, once again, for taking the time to give such a fun and thoughtful review! I will never get tired of reading your comments and thoughts on the happenings! Mwah mwah mwah! I adore you! ( ˶˘ ³˘(ˊᗜˋ*)!♡
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