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Writing Notes: Realistic Injuries
References (Minor Injuries; Head Injuries; Broken Bones; Dislocated Joints; Cutting & Piercing; Blood Loss; Blunt Trauma; Burns)
WHAT'S "NORMAL"
For a normal, reasonably healthy adult the following reading are ânormalâ. Some variation is usual and whatâs normal for one person may be abnormal for another.
Pulse Rate
Between 60-100 beats per minute
A fitter person will have a rate towards the slower end of the margin and a child or young person will have a naturally high rate.
Any drastic increase or decrease in pulse rate is cause for concern.
Blood Pressure
120-140 over 70-90
Can vary with the time of day, amount of stress and a number of other factors.
High blood pressure is not usually immediately dangerous but can cause long term damage.
Low blood pressure can cause faintness, dizziness and blackouts and is usually a sign that there is an underlying problem to be treated.
Body Temperature
36°C (98.6°F) to 37.5°C (99.5°F)
Relatively minor variations in temperature are cause for concern.
MINOR INJURIES
Bumps, bruises, cuts and grazes
All inconvenient.
But not incapacitating.
A blow to a bony part of a limb or to a joint
Hurts a lot at the time of impact (as anyone whoâs banged their shin will agree) and may swell and stiffen.
The impact may also have the effect of temporarily disrupting the âpower supplyâ to the limb meaning the person getting hit is likely to lose their grip on anything theyâre carrying and be unable to move the joint for a few minutes.
Bruises
Can take anything from a few seconds to over a day to appear and anything from a day to several weeks to fade away again.
Soft fleshy areas bruise much more colourfully.
Sprains and torn muscles/tendons etc.
Will stiffen, swell and become more painful after a few hours.
A bad sprain can be every bit as incapacitating as a broken bone.
HEAD INJURIES
Probably the most common injury in fiction.
From âletâs bash the bad guy over the head to stop him running after usâ to those scenes where everyone gets thrown all over the flight deck by the first bit of turbulence and bounce their heads off consoles.
Minor Head injuries
The human skull is pretty robust and designed to take a fair amount of punishment. Consequently the occasional bump wonât do all that much damage.
A minor bump on the head may leave a character feeling dazed and suffering from a headache, blurred vision and ringing ears but will clear within a few minutes.
Facial bruising - quite uncommon, it takes quite a hard blow or a blow that impacts with the soft tissue around the eyes to leave a mark.
Minor cuts and lacerations on the scalp and face will hurt and bleed out of all proportion to their seriousness. [NOTE: A âlacerationâ does not mean âa very bad cutâ â it is a term for a specific type of wound caused by the tearing rather than the slicing of the skin. Itâs the sort of cut you get from being hit with a blunt object (or a fist).]
Medium Head Injuries
A more forceful blow (equivalent to a fall of several feet) can lead to complications of the injury.
Concussion (damage to the brain tissue) is quite common after a hard blow to the head and is often accompanied by temporary unconsciousness. (And it should be very temporary if you donât want your character to be permanently damaged). This can also result in dizziness, nausea and, not surprisingly, a nasty headache.
Medium cuts and lacerations will be painful and messy but not dangerous. There may be scarring.
Severe Head Injuries
A blow to the head resulting in prolonged unconsciousness will almost certainly result in brain damage, possibly a fractured skull and bruising or bleeding within the brain itself. It can be fatal either straight away if the damage is extensive enough or later as the blood from the injury causes pressure to be put on the brain.
Severe cuts - can damage muscle and sinew and do permanent damage. The pain from such injuries would have most characters unable to concentrate on much else.
Concussion Symptoms
Confusion, disorientation, memory loss,
Dizziness, headache (lingering after the first few hours)
Nausea, vomiting,
Pupils uneven in size and/or reaction,
Sluggish reactions, sleepiness.
Any painkillers given to treat the headache must be non-narcotic and relatively mild. Otherwise it is difficult to tell if sleepiness is caused by a worsening of the injury or by the painkillers.
Someone suffering from a suspected head injury should be watched for at least 24 hours, and woken every few hours if theyâre asleep, to check for the above symptoms.
BROKEN BONES
In general they hurt. A lot. Any character with a broken bone (with the possible exception of the ribs) is going to know about it and not be very happy. It is possible that if there is no displacement they might not hurt much at all, and it may not be immediately obvious that the bone is actually broken.
The initial shock and pain is often enough to cause unconsciousness. Keeping the limb immobile will minimise the pain but any pressure or movement is going to be extremely unpleasant.
Severe breaks (compound fractures) can cause part of the bone to protrude through the skin, this will also cause blood loss, which can be severe enough to be dangerous. Nerves and blood vessels can also be permanently damaged.
Smaller bones are obviously more likely to break than larger ones but they hurt every bit as much.
Distinguishing between breaks/sprains is not always easy with just 'it hurts to go on but as a guide⊠Lots of pain but some movement is a relatively good thing -- it indicates 'just' a tear. Less pain but very limited movement is a worry, because it can mean you've snapped something, and the joint becomes useless without surgery.
Broken Ribs
All sorts of nasty complications can arise here. For a start, though a character who has just broken a rib will feel winded and uncomfortable, the initial discomfort will pass quickly and they may feel fine for some hours afterwards. Possibly they may not even realise that they had broken anything.
After a few hours it will start to hurt badly and breathing may be impaired and painful. Problems can occur when the injured person is breathing only shallowly because of the pain and not expanding their lungs fully, lungs can collapse as a result, causing pneumonia. Interesting in a morbid kind of way is that the breathing difficulties of a collapsed lung aren't what gets you - it's the air pressure that builds up in the chest cutting of the blood flow to the heart.
Broken ribs can also puncture a lung or even the heart with fatal results. A punctured lung would result in death within 3-15 minutes if untreated.
DISLOCATED JOINTS
Hurt just as much as broken bones.
Can be forced back into place without medical facilities but itâs not recommended and will hurt a lot, probably enough to cause unconsciousness. On-the-hoof treatment is the same as for broken bones â imobilise and support the limb.
There are a few dislocations which can be life-threatening -- the sterno-clavicular joint (where the collarbone joins the breastbone) is one. It requires a lot of force to pop it (most people's collarbones will break before the joint goes), and the collarbone usually goes outwards, but if it displaces inwards, it can compress the airways. This joint can dislocate if you get slammed very hard into something like a wall and take the impact on the point of the shoulder. I can also say it hurts very badly and for a very long time.
CUTTING & PIERCING
most human beings come equipped with a healthy set of defensive reflexes to avoid it. If at all possible they will try to put something else (like hands) in the way of the blow. Most people injured in a stabbing have injuries on their hands and arms as well from trying to ward off their assailant.
The severity of the injury depends a great deal on its location:
Limbs
The arms and legs are not protected by much flesh so even a shallow cut or piercing injury here may damage bone and muscle and render the limb effectively useless.
Severe blood loss can occur if the major blood vessels in the inside of the upper arm and inner thigh are damaged.
Abdomen
Piercing injuries will bleed a lot and can easily do fatal damage, although unless a main artery is hit then itâs not going to be a quick death. A piercing more than 2 inches deep starts to get dangerous.
If the main descending aorta is hit, the character has seconds to live.
The femoral or renal arteries will lose a fatal amount of blood in 2 â 3 minutes.
Injury to internal organs would cause bleeding, infections and a nasty slow death if left untreated. Bleeding from the spleen or liver would cause death within 20 minutes. Less major damage to internal organs would cause death either from blood loss over several hours or up to several days later from infection and other complications.
Relatively slight cuts to the stomach area would affect breathing and damage muscles, More major cuts to this area can damage nerves and muscles, meaning the injured character would have no control over their legs. Not nice, when youâre trying to get away from the nutter whoâs just sliced you up and suddenly your legs donât workâŠ
Extensive cuts here can also mean the insides are suddenly outside. Not pretty, not comfortable and, untreated, leaves the character with about 15 minutes to live and theyâre going to wish it was much less. Quite apart from the pain (which is pretty horrific) the sight of their own insides tends to make most people quite hysterical.
BLOOD LOSS
Major blood loss will result in a fast weak pulse and accelerated respiratory rate.
For an average healthy person about a litre of blood lost is enough for shock to set in.
Loss of approximately a litre and a half to two litres or more will require transfusion.
Loss of more than 2 and a half litres will probably result in unconsciousness and, if transfusion is not given, death.
Symptoms of Blood Loss
Blood loss in litres < 0.75 || 0.750-1.5 || 1.5-2.0 || > 2.0
Percentage of blood lost < 15% || 15-30% || 30-40% || > 40%
Blood pressure Normal || Normal || Reduced || Low
Pulse rate (beats per minute) < 100 || > 100 || > 120 || > 140
Pulse pressure Normal || Decreased || Decreased || Decreased
Respiratory rate (breaths/min) 14-20 || 20-30 || 30-40 || > 35
Mental state Alert || Anxious || Confused || Lethargic
State of extremities Normal || Pale || Pale/Cool || Pale/Clammy
Amount of blood loss by injury
Severe blood loss, as a wound larger than a fist or that caused by a compound fracture. All figures are approximate and somewhat variable. They are meant as a rough guide only.
SITE OF INJURY || NORMAL BLOOD LOSS (Litres / %) || SEVERE || MAXIMUM
Shoulder: 0.85 / 17% || 1.25 / 25% || 2.1 / 42%
Arm: 0.4 / 8% || 0.85 / 17% || 1.25 / 25%
Elbow: 0.4 / 8% || 0.85 / 17% || 1.65 / 33%
Forearm: 0.4 / 8% || 0.85 / 17% || 1.25 / 25%
Wrist: 0.2 / 4% || 0.6 / 12% || 0.85 / 17%
Chest: 1.25 / 25% || 1.65 / 33% || 5.0 / 100%
Spleen/Liver: 1.25 / 25% || 1.65 / 33% || 5.0 / 100%
Pelvis: 1.25 / 25% || 1.65 / 33% || 5.0 / 100%
Thigh: 1.25 / 25% || 1.65 / 33% || 2.9 / 58%
Leg: 0.85 / 17% || 1.25 / 25% || 2.1 / 42%
Ankle: 0.85 / 17% || 1.25 / 25% || 2.1 / 42%
BLUNT TRAUMA
Getting hitâŠ
Aside from the obvious risk of getting smacked upside the head or breaking bones (see above) there are assorted other injuries and complications which can arise.
Due to the elasticity of the ribcage getting smacked in the chest can cause a person to fly backwards some distance. Of course this means they can bounce off of something else and hurt themselves that way. At best theyâre going to be winded and have difficulty breathing, which causes a certain amount of panic in most people. And it looks rather alarming.
Heavy blows to the back can damage the spine resulting in possible paralysis and death. Kidney injuries are also common when someone is hit in the small of the back. They can bleed and may shut down altogether. Kidney failure means the body canât clear certain waste products from its system, if the waste products build up too far then coma and death can result.
Internal organs such as the liver and spleen can also be damaged by blunt trauma and bleed as detailed above. Other organs which may be injured are the pancreas and the intestines.
If the pancreas is damaged it may spill digestive enzymes which start to digest the personâs own insides. Obviously this is rather painful and unpleasant.
Damage to the intestines can result in blockages (causing pain, nausea and vomiting), bleeding, and the release of bacteria into the bloodstream resulting in septic shock (high fever followed by sudden drop in temperature and blood pressure â fatal if not treated) This can take 24 hours or more.
Usual treatment for internal injuries is IV feeding, antibiotics, painkillers and sometimes surgery.
BURNS
Burns are classified into degree by their seriousness.
1st degree burns â Red, sensitive skin, like a sunburn.
2nd degree burns â Blistering on the first layer of skin (the epidermis) only.
3rd degree burns â Damage to both the epidermis and dermis (the first two layers of skin), visible scars.
Burns over more than 70% of the body are life threatening due to dehydration and the risk of shock, kidney failure and infection.
Electrical shock
Physical marks can vary from none at all to severe tissue damage depending on the severity of the shock.
Internal damage can be done by electrical current traveling along the nerves and blood vessels.
Source: Leia Fee (with additions by Susannah Shepherd) Part 2 â Writing Resources PDFs
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Unlock the Secrets of Writing Realistic Fiction: Research Strategies for Authors
Understanding the Basics of Writing Realistic Fiction
Understanding the basics of writing realistic fiction is a key part of becoming a successful author. Realistic fiction is a genre of writing that strives to recreate the everyday realities of life as accurately and realistically as possible. It's often based on true-to-life characters and settings, and requires authors to draw on their own experiences and observations in order to create believable stories. To ensure that your writing is as realistic as possible, it is important to familiarize yourself with the genre, understand its core elements, and explore research strategies that can help you create realistic stories.
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Research is an important part of writing realistic fiction. It helps to ensure that your story is based in reality and believable to readers. In order to write realistic fiction, authors should use research strategies that will help them to create an accurate and believable story.
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Developing a Plotline that is Believable
Developing a plotline that is believable is essential for creating a successful piece of realistic fiction. Itâs important to ensure that the plot follows a logical sequence of events. It can be helpful to come up with a basic outline of the story and then brainstorm the details. Ask yourself questions about the characters and their motivations and then use this information to build the plot. A believable plot should also have a clear beginning, middle, and end with rising action towards a climax. Pay attention to the pace of the story and make sure that there are no gaps in logic. When crafting a plot, itâs important to consider both the external and internal conflicts of the characters. This will help to create a realistic storyline that resonates with readers.
Finding Inspiration for Writing Realistic Fiction
As an author of realistic fiction, itâs important to have a source of inspiration for your stories. Fortunately, there are numerous ways to find new ideas and inspiration for writing realistic fiction. One of the best ways is to use research strategies to explore different topics and ideas. Researching different cultural backgrounds, settings, and events can provide writers with insight into the world of realistic fiction. Additionally, authors can draw inspiration from their own personal lives and experiences, incorporating them into their stories. Finally, reading the works of other authors in the same genre can also be a great source of inspiration. By using these strategies, authors can find the inspiration they need to write believable and captivating stories.
Making the Most of Your Research Strategies for Writing Realistic Fiction
Conclusion
Once you have completed your research for your realistic fiction story, it is essential that you make the most of the information you have gathered. To do this, you should take the time to review your notes and highlight the key pieces of information that you will use in your writing. Think about how you can incorporate the details in a meaningful way that will bring your story to life. Additionally, consider how you can use your research to deepen your understanding of the topic and create a realistic and believable story. Finally, be sure to use the research strategies you have developed to keep your story on track and add authenticity to your writing. By doing this, you will be able to create a story that is unique and engaging.
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Just Roll with It by Veronica Agarwal
Summary: As long as Maggie rolls the right number, nothing can go wrong...right? Â Maggie just wants to get through her first year of middle school. But between finding the best after-school clubs, trying to make friends, and avoiding the rumored monster on school grounds, sheâs having a tough time...so she might need a little help from her twenty-sided dice. But what happens if Maggie rolls the wrong number? Â A touching middle-grade graphic novel that explores the complexity of anxiety, OCD, and learning to trust yourself and the world around you.
Genre: Realistic Fiction
Book Type: Graphic Novel
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yall know about that novel im writing?
if not: im writing a novel! its very much still in the works but ive been working on it for a while now. i realized i have free will to draw what i think the characters look like so; here they are
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I haven't heard about small things like these will be premier In Indonesia đ does anyone had clue !?
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Apparently I can meet my goal of roughly 400,000 words in 6 months if I just somehow write at least 2,200 words a day ghbjh... Almost 2,500 today... huzzah...
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hot take but I think a lot of current fantasy has lost the "what the heck" nonsensical vibes and that's why a lot of it is so bad
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Writing Notes: Realistic Injuries (pt. 4)
The Mechanism of Injury
Assists in establishing both the safety of the scene and guides the remainder of the primary survey.
The seriousness of the mechanism of injury is a significant clue as to the potential seriousness of the patient's actual injuries, be they external or internal.
Relaying the mechanism of injury to downstream care providers early in the course of transport helps them be better prepared and have the necessary resources available for when they are treating the patient in the near future.
A patient with a severe mechanism of injury (MOI) warns providers that they may have a patient who requires many hands/tools/teams for treatment.
Getting those people alerted and organized is a great head start for the patient.
MOIs can be divided into 2 broad categories:
Significant Injuries. Some examples:
Ejection from a vehicle.
Prolonged extrication time.
Multi-system trauma.
Motor vehicle-pedestrian/biker accidents.
Motor vehicle accidents where any occupant of the vehicle was killed.
Any fall over 3 times the patient's height.
Insignificant Injuries. Some examples:
Fights or physical altercations without loss of consciousness.
Minor injuries to isolated body parts.
Car accidents without injury or symptoms of injury to any occupant.
The division between these groups is nothing more than the likelihood that a patient with a certain MOI will present with trauma requiring intensive care. Not all patients with an insignificant MOI are free from severe injuries and vice versa.
More Mechanisms of Injury Categories used to Classify Narratives
Caught accidentally in or between objects
Drowning
Electric currents
Explosive material
Exposure to radiation
Fall
Firearm
Overexertion
Poisoning
Suffocation
Head-on collision frequently results in the rider ejecting or partially ejecting over the handlebars. Common injuries include:
Head and neck injury if no helmet in place
Thoracoabdominal injury from handlebar impact (common in children)
âOpen bookâ pelvic fractureâa splaying open (like a book) of the anterior and posterior pelvis from striking the handlebars
Bilateral femur fracture
Skin abrasions, lacerations
Injuries are decreased when a helmet is in place in proper position and if protective clothing is worn.
Gunshot wounds (GSW) are usually intentional (suicide, homicide) but can be unintentional (hunting, gun not in holster, gun cleaning).
Some mechanisms at work with gunshots include:
Yaw: vertical and horizontal oscillation about the axis of the bullet; can result in a larger surface area on impact with the body depending on the position of the bullet on the axis at time of impact.
Tumbling: rotation of the bullet upon impact resulting in some parts of the cavity larger than others as the bullet rotates along the path.
Rifling: spiraling grooves within the barrel of the weapon put spin on the bullet as it exits the barrel; provides stability in flight along the axis.
Hollow-point bullets: deform on impact causing a larger surface area to inflict damage.
Shotgun: multiple pellets within the cartridge; also possible to have one large projectile, such as a âpumpkin ball,â both air resistance and gravity spread the pellets over distance; closer shotgun wounds result in serious large wounds as the pellets remain clumped together.
The bullet does not usually travel in a straight path. This results in the need for exploration as multiple injuries can occur although the path appears to be in a straight line. Intentional injuries may require either psychiatric support (suicide attempts) or safety (homicide attempts).
Stabbings are also usually intentional (suicide, homicide) but can be unintentional, (eg, a slip on wet floor and landing on open dishwasher with knives pointing upward). A stabbing most often:
follows a direct path,
is low velocity resulting mostly in damage along the line of the path itself, and
are of varying depth.
The type of blade affects the wound inflicted, such as straight blade versus a serrated edge.
From a forensic medicine perspective, a stab is deeper than it is long and a cut is longer than deep.
A cut differs from a blunt laceration in that the edges are clean and the direction of the wound inflicted indicates the direction of the force.
Stabs to the chest and abdomen are particularly important to investigate as the angle of the penetration may indicate that the wound crosses both cavities injuring the diaphragm in between the two.
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Slow Dance: A Novel By Rainbow Rowell

I had this book in my cart since it became available for pre-order. I went to the bookstore last Saturday to gift my mom a book of her choosing. I saw this book on display and with no hesitation, I took a copy for me. I could have finished this book in two or three days of non stop reading. But I wanted to make it last, I didn't want it to end too soon. I finished it an hour or so ago. This has become one of my contemporary romance favorite stories. It is relatable. It felt so real. . . I loved the story, the characters. . .
Rainbow Rowell nailed it again.
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just showed the first small draft of my br regency story to my teacher and he said: âwell i think you need to reforce how problematic slavery is more oftenâ. hello???? one would think the reader knows that slavery and sexism and racism and ableism are bad without the author having to tell them again and again! omg
#(have to specify itâs brazilian regency bc of the anglosâŠ..)#also something about the gay experience not being realisticâŠ.. girl the is a lower class black gay man in 1830s brazil. i canât possibly-#use modern understandings of sexuality with him hello!!!#this is the problem w writing historical fiction while your advisor (is that the right word?) knows shit about history tbh#basically he wants me to write a contemporary novel with contemporary characters (w contemporary ideas) that just coincidentally takes-#-place in the 1830s. the bridgertonification of it all#(something something itâs impossible that all the (usually wealthy) characters in your historical novel have perfect progressive opinions-#that never offend contemporary sensibilities. that would be like someone 200 years from now writing a book in which everyone is a radical-#-communist. it just doesnât make sense. brazil was reactionaryland in the 1830s. youâd get called a jacobin for being a constitutionalist)
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2024 Reads:

Greenglass House by Kate Milford Past Reads This Year:
Turning Twelve by Kathryn Ormsbee (4.5 Stars)
Aggie Morton Mystery Queen: The Body Under the Piano by Marthe Jocelyn (5 Stars)
Primer by Jennifer Muro and Thomas Krajewski (4.5 Stars)
The Unexplainable Disappearance of Mats Patel by Sheela Chari (4.5 stars)
Frostheart by Jamie Littler (4.5 stars)
Maybe a Mermaid by Josephine Cameron (4 stars)
Front Desk by Kelly Yang (5 stars)
Almost There (A Twisted Tale) by Farrah Rochon (4 stars)
Emily Windsnap Book 4: The Sirens Secret by Liz Kessler (4.5 Stars)
The Sun and the Star by Rick Riordan (4 Stars)
Emily Windsnap Book 3: The Castle in the Mist by Liz Kessler (4 Stars)
Emily Windsnap Book 2: The Monster in the Deep by Liz Kessler (4 Stars)
Straight on till Morning (A Twisted Tale) by Liz Braswell (4.5 Stars)
The Cursed Carnival and Other Calamities by Rick Riordan Presents (4.5 Stars)
The Tail of Emily Windsnap by Liz Kessler (4 Stars)
Stars Above: A Lunar Chronicles Quintet by Marissa Meyer (4.5 Stars)
When Life Gives You Mangos by Keeren Getten (5 Stars)
The Tea Dragon Society by Kay OâNeill (4 Stars)
Magical Boy: Volume 1 by The Kao (4.5 Stars)
Jujistsu Kaisen 0 by Gege Akutami (5 Stars)
Jessiâs Secret Language (Graphic Novel) by Ann M. Martin (4 Stars)
Aru Shah and the End of Time by Roshani Chokshi (4.5 Stars)
Goldilocks: Wanted Dead or Alive by Chris Colfer (3.5 Stars)
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Orv killed many people (me and lock included)
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Kdj included
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