#real im glad you like it chdjnd hahah

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Hey I just read the newest chapter for your found family fic

And damn you wrote that in one sitting?? It’s really good

I liked the fight scene cause I could actually visualize what it might’ve looked like. Fight scenes are only written good if your readers can see what you wrote down, and you did a great job with that

Also Hau and Alakazam taunting Iris and Salamance was funny. They’re adults but still so sibling coded

But the parallels with what Lysandre said to Diantha, with how the world shouldn’t change and stay how it is, and now to Diantha looking at Hau and Iris, and seeing that it’s alright for things to change because good can come out of it

Man, she’s just proud of her kids

Your honour, she's so proud of her kids🥹

She was supposed to have some sort of like inner thoughts tho abt that, like, if she could really get older still to watch her kids grow but I was running out of braincells and idk if it'd still fit w what I currently wrote in

There wasn't supposed to be a fight scene too hahah it was supposed to just be Diantha on a day out w Iris and Hau, but y'know, ig the fic needed smth more so why not a fight scene w the two of em trying to master Mega evo hahah

Im glad you think it's dope tho! Somehow pulled this one off in one go idk why considering how tired I was but then again it's probs me stress writing hahaha and just chdmnd only now did I realize how many mistakes I missed I'm just gonna fix that later since I just woke up too lmao

But oughghgh right chxmbx w Lysandre and Diantha, I had to watch pokemon evolutions again for her one dialogue abt how everything changes, and how she wants to live and change like that too, and now seeing Iris and Hau being all grown up, they lived and changed like that as well and your honour she makes me so sick hfndbd

Like yeah good things can come out of change and she sees that firsthand w Iris and Hau, and sometimes she can't help but think of how glad she is Lysandre didn't win bc he did, then she'll never get to see Iris and Hau grow up to be the champions that they are now, your honour pls bfnxnd