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The Arsonist Theory, Part 4: Blame The Arson, Not The Fire
Part 1: Mandibles!
Part 2: We Get It, The Billboard Was A Metaphor
Part 3: Journey To The Vicious Spiral Nebula
Welcome to the end.
Before we start, I just want to shine a light on some interpretations of the billboard in relation to part 2 of the theory right here, and an observation about "Trust no one" that relates to the theory right here.
Once again, for those new to the theory: it proposes that Bill wasn't alone in destroying his dimension-- he had a partner, one that used him like he used Ford. The previous three posts are crucial to understanding where I'm coming from with this.
This post will mostly be some miscellaneous things that I think could support the overall theory, honestly. So I'm just gonna get started with it. And, as always:
MAJOR SPOILERS FOR THE BOOK OF BILL, INCLUDING CIPHERS
Let's finish this.
So, something that was in the original Arsonist Theory from years ago was that Bill, oddly enough, seemed afraid of his own fire powers. He never uses them in combat, even though it would be a major advantage to him to do so. In fact, he really only seems to use fire as little more than cosmetic flair, lighting his hand on fire to make deals and other situations like that. There are really only three times he uses his fire to directly effect the environment--
Ford's dream sequence, destroying the journals, and burning up the Cipher wheel in the finale.
It's a bit strange, though. All three of those times, he didn't use his signature blue flames. He used orange flames instead.
Another thing is, remember when he died? The second the room lit on fire, he panicked. He's a dream demon, he should have been able to get the hell out of there the second he realized something was wrong! He's not powerless in this situation, so why is he acting like he is? Unless, for some reason, something about the environment reminded him of a certain... other time he was surrounded by fire? A time where, unlike now, he was powerless? Curious!
That on its own doesn't support the theory directly, however it points to lingering trauma from the destruction of Euclidia regardless.
Now... I saw a theory that made an argument that the repeated motifs of "mandibles" points to the idea that Bill might have eaten his own family.
And honestly, I agree. But...
As another layer to it, we only know that Bill had a mutation that let him see the third dimension, along with most likely fire powers since birth. So where did this sudden interest in devouring people come from?
Maybe whoever was with him was the one that taught him it. The one that told him that consuming souls meant that you would never be alone, as they would always be inside of you forever. Because, to me, it seems like an odd leap from "wants to show everyone the third dimension" to "eating people as everything burns around him." So maybe, he was influenced by something? Someone?
And another thing: When Bill is dying, in the Book Of Bill, we see two ciphers on the page.
One of them is "AXOLOTL" over and over, as to be expected.
The other? "Just fit in."
That absolutely sounds like something Euclidia would have pushed upon him! Ergo, he was remembering Euclidia in that moment, ergo the fire did definitively remind him of Euclidia, ergo he seems to get flashbacks when he sees his own fire.
This next part is pure extrapolation, so bear with me here.
Bill, on one page, mentions a highlight of his glory days as being "disassociating, and waking up to find [he'd] conquered another dynasty." Score!
Except... disassociating? Think about it.
Bill had just made a mention to disassociation, implying that he knows that he does it and knows what it feels like for him when it happens.
But when he was talking about Euclidia... he says there's a "loud buzzing in [his] ears and [he] blacks out for 30 seconds."
If this was how his disassociation usually presented itself... wouldn't he just say so?
This doesn't sound like his usual denial, either. When Bill denies something, he remains perfectly cognizant of the events that occurred, merely twisting around some details and/or justifying it to himself.
...Remember back in part one, I said I'd discuss what Bill said about his weaknesses? About how he's been touchy about them ever since... something? And how the obvious interpretation is-- especially considering that he Gatsby's us after the memory gun is mentioned-- that he's touchy ever since the Pines defeated him?
Another thing this book teaches us is that multiple versions of the same object can exist. Mainly, there have been many different iterations of the portal over the centuries.
Perhaps... multiples of some other object can exist, and have existed, and have been used against Bill?
A loud buzzing in your ears. Do you know what makes a loud buzzing noise when it's used?
"No!" You're probably thinking.
"Yes," I say.
Okay, "Probably likely" I say, but that's not as good for dramatic flair.
Sure, the buzzing isn't that loud, but once it's up to your ear... it'd be plenty loud.
One of the ciphers regarding Bill says "EVEN HIS LIES ARE LIES." Meaning, there's a secret, deeper layer to even his lies. Maybe it's that, at least here, this isn't necessarily a lie, moreso that he's operating under missing information.
And furthermore- Bill remembers some parts of what happened, judging by the text that wasn't blocked out, which does line up with how the memory gun works-- at the end of the clip, McGucket makes a reference to Bill himself, the very thing he wanted to forget.
And wouldn't that be another instance of some kind of damaging cycle? Something took away Bill's memories, now Bill has stolen the memories of another? I know, I know, it's kind of a long shot.
But you have to admit, it is interesting to think about.
Now, there might be one final thing you might be wanting from me.
If Bill was someone's accomplice, who is the bigger fish?
And to that I say...
I have no fucking idea.
Not a single clue. Bill says on his "weaknesses" page that anyone whose figured out his weaknesses haven't lived to tell the tale, but that's already verifiably false with Stan still being alive, and with the added bonus of his memory possibly being tampered with... are we sure?
I'm... not sure if the thisisnotawabsitedotcom.com lost files will have anything to do with Euclidia or not. I'm not sure what they'll be at all, honestly.
But at the end of the day, I do think this theory holds some sort of ground and is an interesting angle (pun intended) of looking at Bill's past.
Hope you all liked the theorizing, folks! Let's all wait for that countdown!!
#bill cipher#gravity falls#gravity falls theory#gravity falls meta#bob spoilers#tbob spoilers#the book of bill#HHGHUDFIGFGFGUUHHHH DONE FINALLY#AAUHG
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some weird writing advice that i would give to new writers (that i still use).
(part two of ?/part one)
ā© being stuck
being stuck is another thing a lot of writers struggle with, and this problem has a tendency to pop out in the most random times. you could've written the most amazing scene you had ever written in your life but when you reread it to edit it, you realize that it's actually as flat as a burnt pancake. it's frustrating as hell, makes me want to punch the words then myself if i'm being honest, but then i started using this techniques and it actually helped me a lot:
forget you're writing a scene. imagine it in your head as a movie scene playing. jot down everything you can imagine; what expression does the character have? where are they standing? what sounds can be heard in the background? you're not writing a scene, you're watching a movie.
summarize. what happens next in the story? summarize it in brackets, like this:
' (they both started running and skidded under the closing door.) ā
ā ( she pulled out a gun and pointed at them. blood was flowing from the side of her forehead.) ā
ā (they fought. BAM BAM BAM BAM. then silence. someone screamed. the walls started closing.) ā
summarize p.2. this is the same thing as the above one, but in reverse. instead of summarising the situations in brackets, we're gonna be writing just dialogues. sometimes it happens that when you're writing, you can actually hear the characters speak in your mind but don't know how to describe the scene.
change perspectives. if your story is written in first person pov, change it to third person pov. if it's in third, change it to first. or, to spice things up, write from a side character's pov and how they see the mc (main character) deal with the situation.
being random. now, you'll see a lot of people saying to ākill one of your characters if youāre stuckā and it might work, but not every time and definitely not when it's not needed. throwing a plot twist in your book is one thing and breaking your reader's trust is another and there's a thin line between it. however, you can be random in some other aspects, like switching the narrator. or changing the weather (this one is so helpful!!). or adding in a small but fun and interesting side quest.
try something different. this could be something just for timepass but it would be fun. write a character sketch. build up backstories for your side characters. take buzzfed quizzes as your characters (this is honestly so fun). make a satire AITAH post inspired by something unhinged your character did, let the other characters decide if they're TAH or NTA.
read some fanfics. trust me on this, reading some poorly written fanfics is the best way to get out of a writing slump! the worse it is, the better chance you have of writing.
#writers#creative wrting#writer#writing#dialogue writing#writing advice#writers on tumblr#writers of tumblr#writerscommunity#writers community#writers corner#writing stuff#writings#writing slump#writing struggles#fancition#fanfictions#how to improve#your writing
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i read ur recent shinaya future comics and like.. i can tell it seems theyre gonna get in a situationship and whatnot but also i think it would be really insane for shintaro to father ayano's baby without them ever getting together again (so he's like haha mission accomplished š) but ends up starting a thing with kano somehow instead (so then he's like mission compromisedš
š?). its crazy but it would make things more funny and convoluted when it's already super complicated. super ooc probably though LMFAO but if we want to be putting them in sitcom situations
no like. its DEFINITELY like this. i dont mind "spoiling" this because like, i have no clue how it ends and also, idk if I'll write more comics since it is all based on vibes and what i feel like drawing but im purposefully making it seem like ayano and shintaro will get together mostly bc i have. no idea where i could take it. i could take it a million different places. knowing me, kanoshin IS in the mix.
For one, if i make a next comic, it'll be a similar situation that it was in this part 2, but with ayano telling the mekatrio about it instead. and kano hmmm well he certainly! receives the information!
like ayano and shintaro... SURE they feel. a certain way towards each other. god knows what that "certain way" is. not... romance. but definitely not simply friendship. a secret third thing.
i definitely think they'd maybe kiss or something. and then look at each other like eugh why did we do that... i can even imagine them hooking up for real but its a one time thing and they both come out of it like EUUUGGHHH WHY DID WE DO THAT but get the babyš¶ im not even trying to be "sexual" or anything baby making is just annoyingly involved with this who would've guessedš and like itd be pretty funny if they make this huuuuuge deal out of the artificial insemination thing then. it happens normal style and they hated it and dont even get back together sorry its funny. sitcom situation worthy even
these two with such complicated feelings for each other getting in this family situation... yknow!! makes them reconsider feelings. its a classic! whether they come to the same conclusion from 10 years ago or not... depends i guess. but i definitely look at their specific relationship with aroace glasses i must admit lol
at the same time, in this "storyline" where shintaro and ayano dated then broke up, shintaro ALSO had a situationship with kano at some point, post shinaya breakup. LOL. like the kanoshin is ALREADY in there. but like... is the kanoshin past... or PRESENT?? *thunder* what if there is a reason kano reacts so strongly to ayano and shintaro suddenly getting in this weird family dynamic and now possible baby planning? and what if the reason ISNT out of his over protectiveness for ayano and the typical haha i hate shintaro? what if he's... DATING shintaro during these comics ive drawn? im not hinting at anything. im genuinely asking. like idk. why not. itd be funny for sure.
SO, despite it seems that way, IF i end up making more comics of this scenario. idk if ayano and shintaro would end up together, if they get baby normal style, if shintaro says ew no im not artificially inseminating you youre crazy, if shintaro says yaaay lets do it lets go to the doctor right now, if shintaro is actually also dating or gonna be dating kano. endless possibilities. i could write you 10 seasons with filler episodes if i wished (and i do)
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rating luke cards solely based on how handsome peanut looks in them
dear reader, come with me on this magical journey through a 1.6k word long post where i arbitrarily rank the visual renditions of tot's best character: peanut pearce the myna bird
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basic tier: he looks lovely, but there are things that could be improved
last CG of SSR Peaceful Place and the first two CGs of SSR Shape Of You: basic teardrop shape
these are good peanuts, but ive put them in this Basic Tier because they default to the Basic Teardrop shape of how birds look when theyre just chilling, wings closed and pose perched. the overall shape is also kept generally smooth without much texture.
essentially, to me, this is the bird equivalent of š§āāļø. nice to look at, but could definitely do with some flair, yknow?
first two CGs of SSR Under The Milky Way: now THIS is a basic pose with some FLAIR. alas, it's still basic tho
while hes still in the basic teardrop, thereās more Personality happening here: his body is angled in a way that shows his curious demeanor examining the tiny peanut blob handle luke made, the lighting and coloring shows off a more textured rendition of his plumage, his folded wings dont blend with the rest of his body thus giving him more depth.Ā
itās a GREAT basic pose!Ā
if the previous peanuts were like š§āāļø
this peanut is like āØš§āāļøāØ
third CG of SSR Twinkling Eyes: obscured by luke's (granted, beautiful) big head
i like how peanut looks here but it wouldve been nice if the fairy house window were just a bit bigger, or maybe the placement of all the things in this CG cld have been moved to allow peanut some more visibility, especially given how prominent peanutās Role is in the story of this card. as it is though, he still seems to be in a basic pose, but i like how the lighting differentiates the parts of his body instead of being just one big smooth black teardrop.Ā
also, this CG gets points here because peanut looks extra chunky.
and lastly a special case for this tier...
the third CG of SSR Perfect Partner: PEANUT IS THAT YOU??
originally, i wanted to put Perfect Partner-peanut in the Better Tier, because i really appreciate his fluffiness here, his open wings, and that the animation for this CG shows him flapping his wings. however, Perfect Partner-peanut is also very much a Proto-peanut.Ā
Perfect Partner is among the roster of regular banner SSRs, and thus one of the very first cards available in game and probably one of the very first ones illustrated, and it shows in peanut a lot. he looks different.
i figure the artists were still getting a feel of either 1) how to draw birds or 2) what Kind of myna bird they wanted peanut to be. there are a lot of kinds of mynas, with their defining characteristics usually in the shape of the yellow face markings and also other plumage colorings, like in the wings.
here, peanut is lacking his specific kind of signature yellow markings that he has in all the other cards, where the yellow is visible under the eye and then looping around the back of the head. Perfect Partner-peanut instead has his yellow marking Just on the nape. additionally, peanutās eyes here arent the beady little black we usually see, and are instead black with yellow lining. and lastly, all these factors make him look much wilder than the usual peanut we see in later cards.
usual peanut is rounder, a bit more simplified and smoother (in terms of texture), and all in all he just looks friendlier. Friend Shaped. meanwhile, Perfect Partner-peanut with his beak detail, feather coloring/texturing, open talons that are posed like hes gonna GETCHA make for a more intimidating look.
basically, Perfect Partner-peanut looks to me like beta design peanut. and thats alright! i still love him dearly! but it is jarring when you start to look at the details, and that unfamiliarity makes this peanut rendition one that still couldve had some improvement
peanut in all the other cards: who are you?
Perfect Partner-peanut: im you but i look like i could kill a man. or worseā¦a pigeon.
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better tier: NOW we're getting some good bird visuals
first two CGs of SSR Peaceful Place: VERY GOOD BASIC POSE
okay so if the first few basic peanuts were like š§āāļø
and then the Under The Milky Way basic peanut was like āØš§āāļøāØ
THIS basic peanut is like šāØš§āāļøāØš
ITāS ABOUT THE IRIDESCENCE!!!!!! his wings and body are still differentiated in the rendering, the lighting bounces off of his plumage in a very nice way, and hes FLUFFY LOOKING!!Ā
unseen in the above image is also how lovely peanutās animation is hereāwhich i didnt make into a GIF because im scared tumblr will eat this post for the 87494837568th time if i tried to put a GIF ināwhere peanutās head endearingly tilts and moves in a curious and interested-in-what-birddadluke-is-doing way. and the movement is really dang fluid too, who was the 2d rigger in charge of animating this peanut?? i hope they have a good day today. this is a really good peanut and i like him very much
both CGs of MR Entrusted Feelings: the real love interest is peanut
itās from here onwards that you may observe that ive got a bias for peanut renditions that have him with his wings open and flying. and im very right to have that bias cuz hes a BIRD OF FLIGHT, itās lovely to see him doing what birds of flight do best! FLYYYY!!! that being said, this peanut didnt get into the Best Tier because his fly animation is a tad too jelly-like for me; itās fluid and smooth but slightly off cuz it doesnt seem like his wings have uhā¦Bones. which is important for birds to have, if they wanna be doing stuff.
still, i like this peanut enough to put it Better Tier because hes so adorable!! hes hovering, his body is beautifully rotund, and his Visage is so enrapturing that hes who mc is focusing on and looking at in this card! she isnt looking at luke, shes looking at PEANUT!Ā
you better watch out, lukeā¦ur bird might just get ur girlĀ
both CGs of R Gaze: šSTRUT! YOUR! STUFF! š
now, at first glance, this card seems to follow the basic teardrop pose again with no flairā¦.until you swap through both CGs of the card quickly. because not only does luke strike a pose in here, but pEANUT DOES TOO!!!!
literally just for that, this card ended up in the better tier. hes Feeling It.
both CGs of R Reunion: sorry my owner is a pathetic wet dog of a man
following the thread of R card peanuts that get so much better when you flip through the CGs, this is a good one. while the visuals are basic, the visual storytelling within it happening when u go through the CGs is IMMACULATE.
peanut looks like he was giving luke a peptalk so luke will stop being so nervous, like āget it together, dad, act cool,ā and then luke fails at acting cool so peanut looks into the camera like āyes i know hes still cringefail but hes cute, right? give him a chance!ā wonderful amazing never been done before. we love a bird that doubles as a wingman (pun INTENDED)Ā
first CG of R Partner: TAKE A GANDER AT THOSE WINGS!!!
weāre going to skip over CG 2 of this card because itās just another basic teardrop but
while this isnt my favorite depiction of peanut As A Whole, this is definitely my favorite depiction of his WINGSSSSSS
theyre so majestically and gorgeously spread out, the back wing is so beautifully articulated at the joints showing the Real shape of a wing (whereas a lot of visual renditions tend to treat wings as just this One Big Flappy Thing, instead of these cool foldable beauties we see here), the FLUFFINESS AND ROUNDNESS OF THE FEATHER EDGES, and how you can cleARLY see the layering of the feathers in the coloring, the primaries and secondaries clearly different from the coverts, ITāS ALL SO GOOD!!! literally the only reason why this isnt my top favorite is because we cant see his beautiful face. but please know that this one is SUCH a close second
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that leaves us to the last oneā¦and this last card is actually the reason i made this whole post in the first place. only one card managed to charm, bewitch, and beguile me, managed to delight everything i love to see in a visual rendition of a bird
best tier: second cg of R Following The Wind
even if this was the card that inspired me to make this post, i hadnt planned to make this my top fave. i saw this card and was struck by handsome he was and wanted to go through everything else and this one just so happened to STILL end up on top. Why?
full body seen and nothing is obscured from view, his cute little talons are spread out too
wonderful texturing and not just a single smooth black tear drop
wings spread out doing some Great flying AND the wings are articulated at the joints to show the lovely shape of how wings are
coloring on the feathers is clear in the different type of wing feathers present
AND
HES
CHONKY
so itās currently my top favest peanut-in-a-card of all time. THAT! IS! ALL!
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so there you have it. every luke card that has peanut in it ranked based on how much i enjoy how peanut looks in it. my concluding thought is that i hope we see peanut more, i never get enough of seeing that little guy.Ā
fly high, fellow peanut enjoyers.Ā
#tears of themis#do not take me as an expert. simply as an enthusiast. thank you for listening to my tedtalk#tot peanut#luke pearce
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post dgs2-2 comments/thoughts/theories (with some spoilers for what I believe is 2-3 or 2-4 at the latest)
first of all, the third part of the case kind of dragged for me bc by that point I'd basically figured the whole thing out already. however, it was EXTREMELY vindicating for me to get the fact that natsume was basically getting gas poisoned every night bc I made a joke after he said a guy was trying to kill him every night. Wrong! carbon monoxide poisoning.
secondly. wow it is really surprising to me that the masked disciple hasn't shown up yet I thought THAT was why sherlock/yuujin were trying to hide the case and I know he was in jp promo material ages ago so ?? assuming that's 2-3 just from the name of that case.
third:

it's not a huge level of vindication because I caught it from the flavor text that this would be important but still. Vindication.
fourthly:

a) i thought this was a human pet collar before i thought it was a belt.
b) this obviously fucking belongs to the van zieks family so I'm starting to get an inkling for why barok is...like that. which leads me to my next thing.
5. i don't know anything about the actual case of 2-4, but I DO know that it's called 'twisted karma and his last bow.' i don't fully know if the karma there is supposed to be the "his" in that sentence, but I do know one very specific thing that has been hammered home to me. the asougi family sword is the Karuma. im assuming what happened is that someone on the asougi side (not kazuma obviously but someone else) is the reason for barok hating japanese people...perhaps because one of them was his friend when he was younger and then said friend killed his (dad/older brother/insert important guy here). at the very least, I'm 80% sure that, if "karma" is not referring to a person, it ABSOLUTELY is referring to the sword, or they wouldn't make such a big deal about what the sword is called so much
6. which prompts the question...why the fuck would yuujin and sherlock not want that information to get out? i don't have a good idea on why not yet, but I definitely think that they're aware of barok's tragic backstory - especially sherlock, their court interactions proved that enough to me - but I don't have a good idea. the best that I have is that van zieks and sherlock know each other, and that watson and yuujin knew each other from when yuujin studied abroad, and then the 4 of them ended up knowing each other through sherlock and watson.
7. this doesn't help me at all with figuring out the bigger conspiracy w kazuma/gregson/watson/whoever A. Shin is yet, but I can't help but think it is at least tangentially relayed to the von zieks emblem belt....
8. Lighthearted note to end on. I think this guy is gonna come back again bc WHY DO YOU HAVE A FUCKING KNIFE

#aj plays dgs2#aj plays dgs#i gotta redo like half of 1-5 for an achievement >.> but ill be back to my bullshit in a few days#tag edit: nvm i got the achievement in approximately 2 seconds i didnt realize it was that easy LOL
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for the fic writers ask: 2, 14, 33, and 37! or any combination of those if you dont wanna do em all lol.
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2. Go to your AO3 āWorksā page, to the sidebar with all the filters, and click the drop-down arrow for āAdditional Tags.ā What are your top 3-5 most used tags? Do you think they accurately represent your writing habits?
okay, so my top-used five tags are POV Third Person, Angst, One-Shot, Not Beta Read, and Canon Compliant. I think they do explain my writing habits, because I really love getting into the implications of a story, and I am. bad. at waiting for betas sometimes, and not great at continuing a story for longer than a couple of thousand words.
14. Are there any tropes you would only read if written by a trusted friend or writer?
honestly, i'll read a lot, so nothing immediately comes to mind?
33. If you write chaptered fics, whatās your ideal chapter length to write? Is it different from your ideal chapter length to read?
stares at the WIPs I have not updated for nearly SIX MONTHS pas de masque, The Show Must Go On, I am so sorry. honestly, I really never plan out my chaptered fics, as the evidence shows - but a chaptered fic I'm recently proud of and that I actually finished was about three chapters, and 24k, so I'd say THAT was my ideal chapter length to write. so much fun. at some point, i need to reread my own fic. And I can and will devour 100k-300k worth of epics, even if I haven't been as good as doing that recently as when I was younger. shoutout to you, @acaciapines, whose TOH daemonverse fics are something i am SO excited for. you're gonna kill it.
37. Promote one of your own ādeep cutā fics (an underrated one, or one that never got as much traction as you think it deserves!). What do you like about it?
ohhhh okay, one of my favourite fics I ever wrote would be always be my favourite ghost, from Night in the Woods. It explored grieving Casey Hartley, and how at the end of it all, so much of his life was left unresolved. how he never even got a funeral. it tugged at my heartstrings, that part killed me. so i decided to write people holding one for him. i really loved getting to explore his relationships with those around him, even if he wasn't there. from bea barely knowing him but still being pissed that he'd been taken, from angus knowing that he deserved better, gregg losing his closest friend, and to mae knowing that she'd missed out on so much of his final years, and still missing him anyways. and to maybe, knowing that if she'd stayed, she could have fallen for him. (shoutout to @doyouhearthunder for inspiring that part, as I read all of his NITW fics and that definitely played a role there.) i think i explored grief well there - in a game that has such a bittersweet ending, there aren't many threads to resolve. but this was one i could resolve, and i don't have any regrets about how i handled it. in the end, casey hartley mattered to people, no matter what that cult thought. that wasn't something that could ever be taken away. and it never got much traction because i posted it in 2023, and the game came out in 2017. but i'm still glad i did. it turned out really well for a fic i wrote mostly on a red-eye flight at 1 am.
thanks so much for the ask!
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The Magic Touch | Series Part 2
Series Summary: The soldier is finally free but he has one big problem, he can't finish. Until he meets a man called Steve who apparently has the magic touch.
Series Tags: Steve Rogers x Bucky Barnes | Rated E | Tags:Ā 18+ explicit smut,Ā Winter Soldier Bucky Barnes, Post-Hydra, Bucky Barnes Recovering, no refractory period
[Masterpost]
[PART 1]
The soldier is very grateful to Steve.
Steve made him come, finally. The only problem is it still doesn't work without him. After Steve leaves, the soldier tries again on his own, with just his hand. No luck. He tries the next morning, no luck again.
What did Steve do that made it work? He keeps trying until his dick chafes. Finally, he just calls the number written in his journal.
Steve arrives surprisingly fast. He was definitely lurking around his place, the soldier concludes. He would have figured that out sooner but he was too busy trying to rub one out all day. His many failed attempts mean he's insanely frustrated at this point, he wants an orgasm so bad he'd gladly pounce on the man and stick his dick into him himself. But the soldier maintains his vacant expression, his fists remain coiled by his sides and he waits very silently for Steve to approach him.
"I'm glad you called," Steve says.
Enough small talk, the soldier thinks. His eyes trail to Steve's crotch and he hopes the message is being received.
It's not. Steve steps to the table. He takes his time in removing his jacket and placing it on the back of a chair. Then he sits down.
"I was hoping we could talk first."
The soldier blows out a breath of impatience.
"Look, I don't want to take advantage of you. I know I got carried away yesterday. You just have no idea how long I've been looking for you and how long I've wanted..." Steve pauses looking conflicted. "I hope yesterday was okay."
"Do it again," the soldier speaks.
Steve looks up, his eyebrows raised.
"I'd like to but..."
The soldier steps forward and grabs Steve's hand. He pushes his palm against his crotch. Steve looks stupidly caught off guard. The soldier would tell him he's been hard all day, been feverishly trying for hours to feel as good as he did last night and couldn't. He needs Steve, he hates to admit that even to himself, but he needs this man's cock.
"Please," the soldier whispers.
In rare times, begging has sometimes worked in the past. When they punished him for too long, he'd finally get to the point where he would breathe the quietest please, and sometimes it was the thing that made them stop. Maybe this please will make Steve start.
Steve stands up, cups his hand around the soldier's bulge and squeezes. The soldier bites back a moan and quietly walks with Steve to the mattress. They lie down and both start unzipping their pants.
"If we're gonna do this, I wanna do it right," Steve says.
The soldier isn't sure what that means. The only thing he cares about is coming at the end of it. He decides to nod to give Steve some encouragement, whatever it takes to get this man to fuck him again.
Steve's smile looks pleased. "Good. You deserve a lot more than a quick fuck. I want to take my time. Make you feel as good I can, Buck."
The soldier nods again. Whatever.
Steve starts with one lubed finger, he begins by pumping it in and out of him, then pressing on that good spot. He doesn't stop until the soldier comes ā just from that.
The soldier's in shock, he breathes in harshly, staring at Steve in astonishment.
Steve smirks, sinfully, then adds a second finger and starts the pattern all over again.
The soldier comes again just on two fingers. Jesus, he hasn't come twice yet. And fuck, it's better than the first one. The first orgasm hadn't fully faded and now it's doubling over into the second.
The soldier sucks in another sharp breath, his hands gripping the mattress under him, as Steve shoves a third finger inside. By now, the soldier has gotten the message and he's very onboard with it. So much so he's actually overwhelmed. He wants it so bad, he feels unhinged, like he'd do anything to make Steve keep going. He feels addicted to the high, wants it over and over again ā as many times as Steve will give it to him. And because of this, he lets out his first moan.
Steve's hand stops. The soldier bites his lip so hard it nearly bleeds. No. He fucked up, he made a sound.
He watches Steve shift over him and the soldier's actually scared for a moment that Steve's really going to stop and take this away from him. But instead, Steve leans down and kisses him. It's more of a kiss than the ones he gave him yesterday. Steve really leans into it and when he pulls back he smiles.
"Yeah, Buck. Want you to enjoy this. Be as loud as you want."
The soldier blinks. He still doesn't know why the man keeps referring to him as Buck but currently, he's more fixated on the allowance to make noise.
He considers whether he wants to but right now all he can think about is how Steve's fingers aren't moving inside of him anymore.
"Please," the soldier repeats.
It's the only thing he knows will work. And it does. Steve gets back to work and when the soldier comes a third time, he feels his muscles spasm with his orgasm. The pleasure shooting through him is so intense, he could cry. But he makes it through without the tears. Then he feels Steve's fingers leave him.
He sits up in a panic, his head spins, he's so dazed at this point he's not sure how he even sat up. Steve smiles at him.
"Don't worry, sweetheart. We're not done yet."
Steve slides his pants off, coats his cock with more lube, and lines up. The soldier lies back down, breathless with anticipation. Steve pushes in and fills him nicely. He fucks the fourth orgasm out of him and the soldier shakes violently by the end of it. It's so good it keeps vibrating through him for several minutes even after Steve pulls out.
Steve holds him through it. Which is strangely nice especially when the pleasure wanes and the soldier can actually recognize the feeling of Steve's arms enveloping him. It feels warm. He allows them to stay like that.
Steve kisses his forehead after a while, then speaks softly into his hair.
"Thank you for that."
Steve only came once, the soldier thinks, what the hell is he thanking him for?
"You're welcome," the soldier decides to say anyway. Cause fuck it, if Steve wants to thank him, let him do whatever he wants. He just made him come four times.
"You should get cleaned up. Can I help?" Steve asks.
The soldier nods and he's surprised when Steve picks him up and stands with him in his arms like a damn bride-to-be. But he's happy to be carried to the bathroom. It's nice not to have to force his strength even when he feels depleted ā for once. Steve sets him down carefully and takes off the rest of his clothes, one article of clothing at a time.
It's in this moment, the soldier realizes he hasn't undressed for anyone since he's been free. No one's seen all of him since them. No one's even seen his arm.
He almost cowers away but he's learned not to hide himself. He used to be mocked for that. So he stands, bearing himself to Steve. At least Steve earned it, he thinks.
Steve stares at him with immense admiration. He meets the soldier's eyes.
"You're beautiful, Buck."
The soldier sits in an awkward beat of silence. He's not used to compliments like that.
"Why do you call me that?" the soldier asks.
"Buck... oh, do you not want to be called that?"
The soldier shrugs. He doesn't care much, he supposes it's better than soldat.
"It's fine," he tells Steve.
Steve nods, looking happy about the allowance. He turns to start the water and undresses himself. The blond man's body is big and hard. Muscles everywhere much like his own but with two flesh arms which the soldier is jealous of.
Steve steps into the shower and holds his hand out waiting for the soldier to take it. He does and they step in together. Under the stream, he lets Steve wash him. He's never had a nice shower with another person. Whenever someone had to watch him shower, it meant painfully cold water, hard pressure, and rough hands.
Steve is so gentle it hurts in a different way. Sometimes his hands are so light, the soldier barely feels them. When he massages shampoo into his hair it makes the soldier want to moan again. He holds the sound back and lets Steve finish.
After they're done washing, Steve grabs the towel. The soldier only has one so Steve dries the soldier off first, then uses the towel on himself. They walk back to the main room naked. The soldier stares at Steve and wonders excitedly if they will fuck again. The thought of coming a fifth time tonight is already making his cock fill out.
But then Steve picks up his clothes from the mattress and begins putting them on. The soldier lets out a low sigh of disappointment.
Steve holds out the soldier's clothes and waits. He walks over and takes the clothes, obediently dresses himself, then looks at Steve.
Steve puts both hands on his face, framing it almost like a picture. He leans in and kisses him again. The soldier has yet to kiss him back but more and more he's starting to like the kissing. He didn't think he would.
Steve pulls back and smiles.
"Call me again?" he asks.
The soldier nods and then watches Steve show himself out.
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š ā»ļø š¤ š ā¤ļø late as hell but I only just saw the one you answered!
okay hopefully third timeās the charm cause tumblr has eaten two attempts now
šļø Post any sentence from your wip
āAt least Jace is sitting at the table instead of underneath it. Internally sighing he looks at the coffee mug sitting just out of reach, taunting him. He shouldāve known that was just wishful thinking.ā
ā»ļø A scrapped idea for your current wip
Jace was gonna see his father in coagc but I couldnāt figure out how to work that in with the way itās playing out so itās been scrapped. Who knows though it could still happen
š¤What's a story you'd love to write but haven't even started yet?
Letās Play Our Game is currently nothing more than a title, an empty doc, and a dream lol. But anyways so like itās victorian era and Porter is a sorta Doctor Frankenstein type character (this does not mean he is now smart and heās definitely not wise). Heās trying to revive Jace, who he killed on their wedding night. Iāve not decided if this is still gonna have magic or if it wonāt. If it does have magic then the clones are still clones. If it doesnāt then the clones are folks that just look remarkably like Jace that Porter has been coercing/kidnapping in order to do experiments on them to figure out a way to bring Jace back. At the time of the fic heās had j2 the longest, and j2ās brain is like fully cooked, broken, developed like stockholm syndrome. J3 was kidnapped not too long after j2 stopped showing any promise in the experimenting, heās fairly broken but heās not as far gone as Blue. J4 is Porterās most recent victim, sheās been fighting him every step of the way, sheās not reacting as badly to the experiments but itās not really going the way Porter wants either. Ellie is like fully trying to gain strength to break all of them out, even blue whoās like sorta become Porterās assistant, and kill Porter. Porter on the other hand is fascinated by Ellie, and how sheās not backing down or showing any signs of breaking. In some ways she reminds him of Jace and it both compels and infuriates him. Several several things happen, Jace is like haunting this narrative the whole way through. Itās very gothic horror vibes
š ļøis there a scene or anything in the wip you are struggling with right now?
Gods yeah Iām stuck on the connecting parts between what Iāve got written rn for the beginning and what happens later that night at the end for chapter 2. Itās been a lotta writing and deleting and rewriting and deleting and staring at bullet points that frankly are not helping out all that much rn lol
#it didnāt delete it!!! third time was the charm#i wanna start writing that mad scientist au so fucking badly but i wanna wait till coagc has progressed more#but like ugh itās just rotating in my mind#ask game#zukkacore
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I'm not gonna write an actual essay on this cause 1. I can't be bothered and 2. I suck at writing but I still want to post about it because I know that if I don't now I never will so here's:
Old stuff about the Pumpkin Timeline idea and how I think it relates to the CMYK colour model
What I'm getting at here is that since the A2 B1 and B2 timelines are associated with the RGB colour model and the beta kids then we can reverse it and do the same with the CMYK colour model and the alpha kids. Presuming that the Meat timeline = Magenta and Candy = Cyan (both coincidentally sound pretty similar too) there should be a third Yellow timeline we haven't seen yet, a Pumpkin Timeline (not even gonna consider the idea that it's any other food item I feel like it's insanely obvious that if there were another it'd be that). Following on with the aspects I've assigned the two timelines with based on the Candy and Meat epilogues themes + Dirk and Jane's importance in each it's obvious to me that the Yellow timeline would be one focused on Hope and subsequently, Jake.
My points in the image above also mention that I think it'll be (Candy) Jake directly creating a timeline using his hope powers (not Meat Jake because he hasn't shown any use of them productively at all and doesn't seem to be headed for anything narratively important in the story as of now) though I don't know exactly how that'd play out, I assume it'll either be through a merging of both timelines (not so sure of this one) or after / just before the destruction of both timelines via Alt Calliope's black hole. I'm heavily leaning towards the destruction of both = creation of another though, since the RGB model is about the reflection of light and the CMYK is about the absorption of it, and absorption is something the Candy timeline is currently threatened with thanks to the aforementioned black hole. I also assume it'll be after / before the timelines destruction because Jake's hope powers have been shown to work their best whenever he's desperate, and having everyone's lives threatened like that would make it the most likely time for him to intervene.
At first the whole idea of assigning the timelines to a colour model of all things felt kinda silly and baseless to me at first since there weren't any direct mentions of it in Homestuck that I could remember. I ended up rereading some parts and re-watched the Act 7 flash a while later though and noticed right when Alt Calliope created the black hole she summons 3 circles that then end up in the same positions as a colour model, with them switching colours between cyan, magenta, yellow and white. And I really don't think a recreation of the CMYK wheel was added just for the sake of making the creation sequence look a little cooler.
Besides that there's not much more to this 'theory'. It's mostly just me trying to prove that a third timeline is a definite using a colour model. I don't even know if this has been theorised before. If it has I'll stop posting out of embarrassment.
#Sorry if this is incoherent. I suck at putting my thoughts into a legible form#homestuck#homestuck 2#hs:bc#hs analysis#Serious HS stuff#ramblings
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Hi!! Yes, hello, I cried again, thank you for that. Even though you said we āshouldnāt expect too muchā, my heart is still very much cracked haha
ANYWAY, since the guessing game is still on, I was thinking a lot during this chapter. My guess is, either Raph has a really stupid idea that heās thinking through right now and thatās why heās been so quiet OR smth happens to the Hueso place and he like sacrifices himself to get his family to escape like idk maybe EPF or smth knocks at the door and he holds them off
And so I was wondering if you could tell us when this stupid thing is gonna happen, I have a feeling it might be like the book 2 finale or somewhere close to that??
ALSO, I was wondering how you organise your chapters and the plot you write about. Do you have like a pinboard and put the NYC map on it and connect the dots with red yarn? (Detective style) or do you use some program or are justā¦weird and memorise it all?
Maybe he hasn't actually had the stupid idea yet, but he's definitely ruminating on everything that eventually compels him to make that decision.
The stupid thing will be a direct consequence of the final climax, so it'll be coming up here soon. I'm going to put up a poll probably after the next chapter.
I'm giddy that we're getting there, honestly. There's a foreshadow I put in literally in the single-digit chapters of Book 1 and when I wrote that I couldn't imagine actually getting to that point. I always feel like I'm going to die or something before I finish stuff, like, I was shocked when I finished doth.
Oh my goooood I am so terrible about plotting and outlines and stuff. I always, always feel like I'm in elementary school filling out a worksheet. I am basically this guy

except there is no paper because I haven't written anything down I'm just sleep deprived and rambling and smoking copious amounts of weed. (I have never smoked weed)
I know generally how the plots go, and as chapters draw closer I start thinking more specifically about where parts should go and where they would fit best. The whole war kick-off thing, that originally was going to happen after the third reverse-kidnapping, (the mall with the mercenaries one) but Gale and Mikey were still having their library trips, and that just seemed like an...awkward thing to have hanging over them. And it just didn't have to be. I could have cut that arc short, delayed the third reverse-kidnapping until after after the library meetings were discovered, or I could push off the war. And the war didn't need to happen then-if anything, it complicated the other plot points that needed to happen. And I think it worked out for the better this way.
I'm not totally satisfied with this method though. When I was writing Book 1, I had probably about half the fic written before I started posting-it was all in one document, Donnie's scenes were all together and Leo's scenes were in some incomprehensible order and often unfinished because I wasn't expecting to post anything and would just stop when I felt like it, when I finally committed to putting it to order I think I had like eight documents open at one point and three different highlighter colors to denote what I'd done in the master document, it was an ORDEAL-but it meant that I could group scenes together based on what was most effective, move things around very easily. The fact that Leo and Donnie's chapters were pointedly not happening at the same time helped a lot too. In Book 2, I end up writing with two, maybe three chapters planned ahead in my brain, and I feel like that forces me to sometimes rely on short-term climaxes that add to the word count but don't really do much for the story overall, or put off certain things that I don't particularly feel like writing at the time or don't know would work there. Book 2 would probably be significantly shorter if I'd plotted it out the way I did Book 1.
...What were we talking about? Oh! I do actually have a map of NYC open pretty much constantly in my fic window, it probably shows when they were driving around last chapter that I was literally going along the border with my pointer finger. But I'm terrible and I don't write any of this shit down. I usually remember, but there have been occasions where I've completely forgotten what I was going to do, and I think it was chapter 32 where I had pretty much finished the rest of the chapter and then realized I'd forgotten the final Leo scene-which was a pretty major scene. So I guess...yeah, weird and memorize sounds correct, but I don't actually do it that well.
#if you can parse anything here bless you#i wasn't planning on typing this much so it's very much stream of consciousness#doth asks
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To the Shadows that Cry Witch /// Chapter 12
Heyyy, so I know I keep posting a little late, but I'm gonna keep trying to post on time because I need to keep on top of things and not spiral into the unscheduledness like I did after I left school lol. ANYWAY, this chapter is the start of where things get interesting and it's hopefully going to be the last shorter chapter I do for a while - I'm going to try and make future chapters over 2-3k words so you guys have something longer to red each week. Enjoy! <3
Summary: Magic was real, but it came at a price. So when two girls end up in the one place they never thought they could reach, strange things began to happen. Good or bad? That's up to them to find out.
Tags: KĆli x oc/reader - FĆli x oc (POV to be written soon) - Thorin's company x ocs/reader (platonic) - fluff - angst - EXTREME slow burn - crack - Bagginshield
Word Count: 1262
Warnings: Mentions of Minor and Major Injuries from last chapter.
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SmultronstƤlle (Definition): A special place discovered for solace and relaxation. (Noun / Origin: Swedish / smUlĀ·tronĀ·āstelĀ·e)
Hobbiton, The Shire ā T.A. Mersday 29th September 2939 of the Third Age (1339 in Shire-reckoning)
āKate! What did I say about wearing your bandages?ā
I sheepishly turned around to face a weary Bilbo, a guilty smile on my face. Heaving a sigh, he marched over, pointing expectantly at the discarded bandage roll on the table next to me as he passed, continuing around the furniture to reach the stove across from where I was sitting.
āHow was the market?ā I asked him as I reached for the roll. Watching him heave a sack onto the table, I began wrapping the material around my right palm. Well, as best as I could with the splint on my left hand.
Erard had revisited the day after Bilbo had dragged him over to help us, slinging along with him a bag full of equipment he had curated from his medical supplies. He spent an hour or so kindly showing us what everything was and how to use it. I had received many bandages that now covered the majority of my skin that was visible, along with a splint he had fashioned out of small, thin planks of wood that he bound in place with yet more bandages around my damaged wrist. My ankle only received a wrap of some type of sturdy material, since Erard had considered it unnecessary for it to have a splint as well.
Kay received just as many bandages, along with one around her head for the large gash on her forehead. She definitely wasnāt a big fan of it, since it made her look as if she was wearing a white bald cap, which I of course kept cackling about, much to her dismay. According to her extreme annoyance, it was preventing the hot injured main character look she was trying to achieve, which obviously made me cackle harder. Finally, Erard had given us both a bag of herbal tea to help alleviate any aches, and each small pot of some type of salve, which he instructed us to use on any open wound, once a day.
Bilbo on the other hand, had spent that time preparing a hefty luncheon, as part of his thanks to Erard, making sure the doctor didnāt leave without a full belly of his best sandwiches and seed cake.
Now it had been three days since Erardās visit, and thanks to him, we were speedily on the mend. Fast enough to the point that I didnāt feel the need to wear my bandages as much (apart from the splint), much to Bilboās frustration. Though it was me forgetting to most of the time, living with an adhd brain and all. My small recollection of events was interrupted as Bilbo began answering my question:
āNot too bad.ā He said as he emptied the sack of its contents. āNot bad at all, in fact. The weather has improved tremendously since that nasty storm, not a cloud in the sky the entire time I was there!ā
I grimaced at Bilbo mentioning the storm, recalling the unfortunate events that Kay and I had endured. Though I quickly shoved them away as I focused on Bilbo as he rambled on about his experience at marketplace.
āā and got some tremendous pork from Barrowesā stall, fresh this morning. Should be perfect for this eveningās dinner!ā
āIt looks amazing.ā I commented as he unwrapped the large slab of meat from its casing of brown paper and twine. āWhat do you suppose would go with it?ā
Once again Bilbo went off on a tangent, this time about sides and vegetables. Getting up from my seat, I made sure to make responsive hums and small comments as the hobbit spoke. I picked up the bowl of buttermilk icing I had left on the windowsill earlier and brought it over to the kitchen table, placing it next to the now cool cakes. I had baked two Victoria sponge cakes that morning, deciding that as I healed, I would bake as part of my thanks to Bilbo for letting us stay, and to Erard for his kindness and help ā that is, as long as I could remember the recipes. Bilbo handed me a jar of freshly bought jam and I got to work slathering it on the cake halves along with a whipped cream I had made miraculously from scratch. I could see Bilbo eyeing up the cakes with a hungry look, so I made sure to speed up a little to make sure I was finished soon, so we could have it for pudding.
Bilbo and I were chatting away about different types of pastries when Kay ducked in through the doorway from the dining room. You couldnāt tell easily, but you could see a slight tension in the way she held her expression, giving me the impression that she was worried or very confused about something. I waited until she made eye contact with me, before tilting my head slightly in question. She darted her eyes at Bilbo, then back at me, indicating that she would talk to me later. I discreetly nodded my head in agreement and turned back to slathering my cake in an atrocious amount of icing, dropping the subject until later. Bilbo continued with his ramblings about dinner, and Kay soon joined in on helping him prepare it, the conversation turning to how to cook pork properly.
The cakes were a success. Bilbo and Kayās delicious dinner had filled us all and we finally moved on to trying one of my sponge cakes. By the time Kay and I had finished our slice, Bilbo was onto his third, any compliments practically turning to murmuring chants as he stuck another forkful in his mouth.Ā I snorted at the scene before me, thanking the now chipmunk-faced hobbit as I picked up some pots and took them to the sink. I also brought the second cake for Erard to the pantry, placing it on a plate with a large bowl on top to keep in the moisture. The next half hour whirled by as we washed everything up, Bilbo insisting that I only dried up to not soak my splint whilst in exchange I made him agree to leave some cake for tomorrow.
Laughing at whatever was said, Bilbo disappeared off to his wine cellar, and I quickly took this opportunity to interrogate Kay about earlier as I beckoned her towards me.
āWhatās going on? Are you ok?ā I whispered.
āYea course, Iām doing fine. Itās justā¦ā She trailed off, before silently signalling me to follow her. I did so, following behind as she led me from the kitchen through the parlour to the front entrance. āYou havenāt noticed anything strange appear in your room, have you?ā Bilboās whistling echoed through the house as she led me deeper into the oak hall. I shook my head in reply, saying that I hadnāt been in my room all day.
Bilbo had decided that, because we were supposedly staying a while, he would give us both our own privacy by lending me the guest bedroom we stayed in the first night and turning the spare room into guest bedroom No.2 for Kay, who was leading me there right now.
Opening the door, she waited for me to follow through before closing it. Leading me over to a chest, she hauled the wooden lid open and pointed inside. I leant over, only to see something I thought impossible. I looked at Kay with wide eyes, before reaching in and hauling it out onto the floor between us. We both stared incredulously until I spoke.
āWell, thatās not supposed to be here.ā
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Happy 1 year anniversary to the Rise Movie! I canāt believe itās only been oneā¦

But in honor of this historic day, I presentā¦ Things I would love to see in Rise season 3+:
Part 1 | Part 2
Some of these are kinda the obvious stuff but most are new ideas I really want to see
Neon Leon being leader obviously. What I really want to see is everyone's adjustment to that tho. The movie still gives me whiplash skipping over that since the series finale ends with his being named leader and then Leo still not even technically being the leader in the movie. (I know it was supposed to go down differently without that last line even happening and the whole co-leaders stuff but my brain still doesnāt adjust every time I watch the movie)
The second episode of that dentist guy who wanted Raph's snaggletooth. Apparently there was gonna be a Raph-Leo episode about it? It seems strange it wasn't going to be an episode with all of them trying to help, but honestly it would've been pretty cute to see Leo trying to protect and take care of Raph instead of Raph usually doing that for them. Maybe even some more of Leo doing more of the planning or them collaborating
Dr. Rude and whatever other personalities he Mikey came up with for himself. watch the video and tell me Dr Rude didn't derive from Dr. Delicate Touch š
Shelldon 3.0. give Donnie his baby boy back and make him officially part of the family
Piel and Hueso together again, we got two whole episodes but since they only made up at the end of the last one it'd be cool to see a third adventure of them doing something heroic as bros who get along again. And honestly after Leo helped get Huesoās name cleared and helped him restore his relationship with his brother I want to see how their relationship would progress
Cassandra (& now Casey ofc) being part of the Hamato clan. But seriously all the post-movie fics got me thinking about how we were also robbed of her entire reformation arc and having her on their side would've been so kickass. Especially since she and Draxum kind of bonded and were a good team together. And the relationship she formed with Splinter is so wholesome
Draxum possibly eventually moving in (and making up for dropping Leo off a roof.) He would have such a different relationship with each of the boys I just want to see how he would go about trying to gradually earn their favor once he completely committed to being part of the whole family unit. Only to come to Leo last and have the most difficult time trying to figure out how to make him trust him after the Roof Incident
Big Mamaās ending. Considering we now have two former villains turned good, I'm wondering if they were still going that same route with Big Mama. It very much seemed that way but atp doing it for a third character seems so redundant, not to mention there's still not much reason to trust her by the end of the show since she double crossed them again. I'm still surprised by the fact that splinter is so hung up on her after all the trauma fr. At this point what might be more interesting, realistic and believable would be splinter's journey in trying to trust her again but eventually coming to realize she'll never change, because not everyone does
I did get a response on the Twitter Q&A about it which was really exciting, so seeing this scenario below play out and then leaving it up in the air for whether she eventually chooses good or evil would be awesome to watch

Finding out the real prophecy of the destruction of yokai kind. Draxum said it must've actually been shredder but Shredder wasn't after the yokai so I wonder if it was something else. That could definitely be an opportunity for bishop if they take the 2003 route with him
Them using each other's weapons/powers. We got a very brief glimpse of this in 2012 but otherwise itās not something you see in Ninja Turtles. With Rise tho it would be even more so exciting to see them handle weapons other than their own. Donnie being a pyromaniac with Mikeyās kusari fundos (RIP bc I donāt think his nun chuks have that ability anymore?), Mikey being all stick happy with Donnieās staff and just smacking villains left and right, Raph figuring out how to make portals and how to utilize them physics of them in battle, Leo making a huge projection of himself or a dozen clones with raphās sais. That would a party of chaos
Also Raph dabbing just on principle he is literally the only turtle who hasn't done it, even Splinter got one in, let the man succumb to the cringe
Iām sure we might've seen a lot of this eventually since it was apparently supposed to have 7 seasons, so hereās hoping itās a possibility somewhere in the future š¤š½
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OOOH! Definitely interested in your wips. Would love to hear more about these in particular (whichever one(s) you feel like sharing)
(also yes definitely still happily stuck inside this fandom bubble)
will indulge!!! (This is long but it's good to organize my thoughts lol)
I straight up forgot to put the name of this one lol. Meliodas doing dangerous antics is part of my Through the Wall sequel fic, called "Stakeout" which is the one where I have him cooking. I tried to mix in some humor with the angst here. It's basically Stigma Meliodas if Nakaba didn't nerf his intellegence. This one, I'll be feeding you guys soon!! Because I plan to try to finish Through the Wall this Thanksgiving Break, since I started it last thanksgiving break (ambitious I know, but imagine the poetism if I pull it off!) and Stakeout is farther along in its completion than that one. Stakeout is about Meliodas looking out for the TC and his brother from the opposite of the war. The first part is him deciding to try to get them dinner after seeing how worn-down they are, and the second . . . well, he can't exactly leave Zeldris to watch over both the Vampire and Demon Realms all by his lonesome, right? I'm actually really excited for you and @7-ratsinatrenchcoat to see this one in particular when it's finished because I tried to channel the melizabeth energy I liked in your work
This one is named such not cause I wanna name it something bulky (it has a better name! that's the exclusive lore lol) but I'm commited not to spoiling the plot twists in this one. This is gonna be my main gift to this fandom, a spiced up psychological horror rewrite of the whole show with original elizabeths and original adventures for the first and second season (that one is a backstory with Liz!) Plot point collaboration welcome. A bunch of season one, and the plot tiwsts, I made with my good friend zeldriszezinho, and I'm pretty antsy and excited to finally get around to it and present him with the result of our hard work, haha. I actually have a lot of senarios planned both in detail and loosely, just not written down. I'm currently procrastinating on Season 1 Pt. 2 because it's literally 5 or so arcs of content, one for all the sins, and uh. mental energy. So I'm trying to finish up a lot of small projects first just so my mind isn't everywhere. I can't remember if you've seen what I've posted on it so far but here's the masterpost and season one part one! It's on tumblr too! but I went ahead and pressed the space bar like 4 times every indent so it would be normally formatted on A03 sooooo https://archiveofourown.org/works/48567730 https://archiveofourown.org/works/48611485/chapters/122618557
3. Ironically, think Rings was another one inspired by you - it's old, almost 8 months by now, and the only reason I haven't published it yet is the second ellie spiraled out of control into her own adventure and I haven't had the time because I've been word vomiting so many other projects into existence. it's half meme format, half usual writing. The second ellie's meme story is complete and the third's just needs its wrapping up of its actual plot, which is simple: an arrogant man thinks his bride is secretly a nutcase, but feels pressured into marrying her because medival times, because she's a sweet and intellegent woman running an orphanage all by herself, and technically he can't do better, and because it would look disasterously on the both of them and destroy his carefully crafted persona if they somehow couldn't make this community-arranged marriage work. So he's "putting up with her quirks." Including the ancient what-looks-like-wedding-rings she wears around her neck, and the fact she genuinely thinks her one-that-got-away lover sold a prized possession to demons. (the significance of these rings is in the stories of the previous two elizabeths). Well. Actually. He steals them while she's distracted with wedding planning. It doesn't go well for him from there.
Let me know your opinion: should I try finishing the third ellie and then publishing it? I can always go back and make a full story out of "purple ring" ellie + friends later.
Basically, the purple ring's story is as thus: Meliodas decides he needs to rest, "REALLY rest", since his emotional stress is beginning to affect his demon biology in a bad way, and voluntarily coma-tizes himself for a while. He wakes some time later only to find out Elizabeth and her new 'family' have been considering him as their good luck charm. (Maybe even more than one Elizabeth has passed by now. Probably the apothecary he visits figures out what Meliodas meant to do and goes to fetch him, too late, and looks after him . . . see, that could be a whole OTHER story in itself. anyway.) He's a "good luck charm" because his demon aura has been disgusing the magical signature of her druid family, not that they've figured this out. Meliodas tries to get up and run away with an injured Ellie but surprise surprise he hasn't quite recovered from what his body and mind has been through, and the combination of that and the drugs has left him critcially weakened. He actually collapses falls down a small cliff with her. Ellie assures him they've gotten far enough to shake off the people who are searching for her, that it's okay. Moreover, she understands more or less what he's going through, since she lost her leg a while back. They reuinte with Ellie's little "siblings," druid children the family has rescued along their journey.
Later ~ the main organizers of their group are shocked to return to their isolated cabin to find that not only have all the children survived the winter, and possible clashes with whoever's been hunting them for decades, but there's one extra child! And a talking cow. (I haven't decided whether some of these people are semi-antagonsists.) Meliodas's condition never improves (angst angst <3) but he takes up the task of looking after the kids alongside Elizabeth anyway- especially when she and the others are gone, working or otherwise. Oftentimes he and the spunky talking cow go on adventures in the forest or in town, collecting herbs or materials for crafts and toys. She carries him, Hawk-style. I can't remember her name but it was a silly one, and he saves her life once with his wings. He's also fought away intruders once while the 'adults' weren't home with Full Counter, being able to stand for long enough to use it before collapsing.
In this iteration, Meliodas recieves his ring from his new 'siblings' as they say that "it's the same color as the magic you used to protect us." Referring to the times he's used his demon magic around the house, and, unknowingly, to the fact his very presence has been the only thing keeping them safe from raiders on more than one occasion. Throughout it all Meliodas struggles with having to be the one cared for for once, and not being able to be the muscle of this group that so clearly would benefit from him being his 'usual' self. While his siblings think he's a genuine gift from God, and are more than happy to look after him as he does them, trading stories between them and cuddling up like he truly belongs, adult members of the family never take a shine to him and resent him somewhat, even perrfering when he was comatose. There's more (and more angst) but I should probably say less.
4. (TW: this one gets DARK with the demon brothers angst) modern fantasy ireland boarding school au" is actually another gift for @gh0stofyesterday, who can't escape me, from back in like feburary or something lol. It's an angsty modern-day genderqueer demon brothers and genderqueer elizabeth. Basically Meliodas tricks his snooty father into letting him and his brother (who's not technically old enough but academically girlboss yourself outta that condundrum zeldris) go to boarding school in his deceased mother's home country, where Meliodas plans to study interior design (he's gonna design the boar hat himself <3) and, against his father's wishes, join the gymnastic team. Little does he know that his online friends in his tween gymnastics discord server or whatever (The TC) are also going to end up there. ( I have the scene where they realize he's not the snooty daughter of the DK ceo and actually their Captain planned out already actually. they realize it when he beats the snot out of some guy that chases zeldris through the gymnasium lol).
Other plot points include! Elizabeth and Meliodas have a secret online romance as "Study buddies" and plan to perform a ceremony to use whatever their magic is unsealed to share a bit of that magic with each other, as a kind of marriage ceremony (peak 14 year old romance lol). Meliodas and Zeldris learn (originally Irish) sign language in order to communicate without their father snooping. Cusack and Chandler deal with being technical slaves to the Demon King and attempt to parent their protegees in more important ways than teaching them fencing, keeping their secrets, and buying them things. Gelda explains she never cuddles with her sisters for emotional support, Zel and Mel feel sorry for her . . . then figure out they are touch-starved and probably need therapy for that too. Hot springs date. Zel discovers Mel has been cuddling him while laying on his side specifically because there are fresh child abuse wounds across his back. Meliodas commandeers his gymnastics coach's coaching authority and starts an underground fencing ring upon being told he can't do that (we go to school in a castle! c'mon!). Zeldris tries to deal with a ginger-haired kid who seems equally hellbent on being his friend as he is his school rival. Depending on how dark I'm gonna make this, you might even get to see a prolouge where Zeldris forgoes a plan to murder - suicide his brother following his mother's funeral after meeting a small Gelda at the playground. Oh, and the DK having to fidgit uncomfortably in court. This one is basically a for-fun daydream, but a pal volunteed to beta it for me so it will eventually get written up for you all!
#this is fun!#can you tell I take notes when I read y'alls angst?#rings includes a pretty sweet meliodas death scene but I should probabaly like shut up and actually write and not just talk about it cause#my summaries aren't as good as the real thing i think#and are five hundred pages long. you should see what my english teachers have had to put up with.#book report? yes sir here's three thousand words what do you mean that's too long WHAT DID YOU WANT ME TO DO LEAVE OUT THE IMPORTANT STUFF#beginning to think a little horror goes into everything I write but. i mean. spice. plus everyone clearly loves torturing these characters#what's more torturous than not being able to protect the ones you love cause you c a n ' t#it's three am and I'm wondering how I got so obsessed with these characters. Oops? anyway good writing practice
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September '23 SteveTony Fics Recap
Forgot to do this earlier, uh, mostly, cause...I only wrote one fic...most of one fic really...3/4 chapters...uh. Let's just debrief quickly.
3/4 chapters turned out to be 22,081 words which is still a solid chunk of words. I guess that makes up for it only coming from one fic?
Fanfics (in order of existence):
Though I only wrote 3/4 chapters in September, the fic is actually complete now so I'm going to just do the overall summary, sweet, you got it? sweet x 2.
"Only Natural to Harden Up" | 33,574 | E | 19 Sep-4 Oct '23
As they're settling into their new relationship, Steve opens up to Tony about a fantasy he's long had of Tony in lingerie. This awakens some new insecurities in Tony, and he's left weighing how to indulge Steve's interest without ruining their hard-earned intimacy. (Post-Endgame, Everyone-Lives-AU; established but developing relationship.)
Hey, if you haven't read this fic yet, give it a go! I didn't put my heart and soul into it but I definitely lost some kinda organ during the process so your interaction and (hopefully) enjoyment would fill the gaping, asymmetrical hole that writing this left in me. Again, not sure which organ I lost. Definitely lost something.
ALSO shout out, of course, forever and always, to Ev for the prompt. Not gonna tag the cowboy because I'm sure at this point they're blawdy sick of being tagged in relation to this fic but if you've gotten to this part of the post, pls. salute your local horsegirl. Thanks <3
Anyway, spooky-tober and what not ahead. Or here. A third of the way through already. Gawly. I should write something. Maybe I will.
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Since we're now in the final twelve hours for submissions, I want to know what your plan is. How exactly are you gonna organize everybody?
Alright, here is my plan (under the cut because this is a bit longer than my other posts):
First step: Separate everyone by number of submissions. It's a good enough way of determining which characters are more popular. Or, even, who at least have fans who might be capable of convincing others to vote for them. (This is also why submitting the same character more than once yourself is not advised. There is no point in getting, as a hypothetical example, a guy from some obscure manga a high number of submissions if he's just gonna end up against vastly more popular characters.) (As for characters entered by my mod powers*, they'll be considered as basically 0 submissions.)
Second step: Within those submission number splits, separate by source material type. So, Anime & Manga characters are grouped together, while tokusatsu characters are also grouped together. Same thing for western cartoons, webcomics, video games, western live action, etc. These source material types would also be ordered based on how popular the overall category would be.
Third step: Characters from the same series get grouped together as well. That way, it avoids more popular franchises from dominating all matches for a while. And for franchises like Kamen Rider and Super Sentai, I also group them up based on what season they come from, since there are definitely seasons that are more popular than others.
Fourth step: Organise characters by alphabetical order (going by 'first name, last name'), and then tweaking anything I feel like. For example, if I got an even number of characters for a series, I'd make sure all of them are going up against each other round 1. (Not much I can do with an odd number of characters, though.) I might also try to spot any instances where a character from an extremely popular series is up against a pretty obscure one, and try my best to find different matches from them without breaking too many of the other organisation rules. I might also pair up super sentai characters against their power rangers counterparts just because I think it's funny.
Of course, there are cases where I won't be able to make matches as fair as I'd hope. But that is again part of the reason why the loser's bracket is there.
*On characters entered by my mod powers: As I said on a previous ask, there are two characters I was gonna add to the bracket anyway because they are two of my faves and already didn't expect them to get submitted by anyone. But there are also a few other characters I've picked to fill out empty spaces, since there are definitely some submissions I've rejected. For picking those other extra characters, my criteria was either 1) if a series I know doesn't seem like it will get any submissions, I try to get at least one character from it in there just to make sure it has someone there to represent it. And also 2) If almost every character from a series was submitted, except for 1 or 2. Then I'll add those 1 or 2 characters myself because, to me, it feels kinda wrong to exclude them. (Of course, this requires me to be familiar with a series to begin with.)
There ARE also characters I pick slightly at random just because there is still some empty space. But for those I've been removing them from my current list as I get new valid characters.
I hope this was clear enough to understand. But even then, hopefully once the bracket is out it'll be easier to understand what I'm doing!
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