#one sentence is literally 'even if the attendees at the attendees further back couldn't understand him'
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note to self: in the future, do not wait half a year to look at your first draft again
#some of the things in there are truly incomprehensible#one of my notes is 'do not mention x's last name until here' (when we meet his mom)#and i'm just sitting here like why not past me???#the name is already mentioned like five times before that and i can't think of a single reason why it wouldn't be#another note is just IMPORTANT!!#very good past me now WHAT was important about that?#one guy just casually drops that he's part of the Nine Families like that means something#(this is the only time nine families are mentioned in ALL of my notes)#so many switched up names and terms#one sentence is literally 'even if the attendees at the attendees further back couldn't understand him'#so i guess those were supposed to be tables?#nano sure made me write a whole lot but also a whole lot of shit#fabi's foolishness#about my writing
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