#mary jo fazbear frights

[kimaratomoya]

yeah and yeah, just curious

Alr slay

Saddest character I've written for Ghosts in the Pizzaplex.

That's a hard one.

The most obvious answer is Toby. He's had so much happen to him in canon.and I've continued off of that and traumatised the poor kid more.

Mary Jo is another obvious answer. She has a canonical sad backstory and how she speaks about in the fic is casual, even though she definitely understands the gravity of the situation.

Delilah and Hudson both have their issues but aren't necessarily sad, more just tired of getting hit in the face by life and death.

Jeremiah might have to be the saddest. His canon was atrocious and I took it a bit far with the backstory arc with Laurence, and especially now that he's back, he's often forgotten or left out since newer ghosts show up. (My fault BC I forget abt him sometimes, but y'know).

Does that answer your question? Also you're welcome to not anonymous yourself. I love knowing who reads and enjoys the fic, and feel free to ask more questions about it. Maybe just make sure to add a bit like "For Ghosts in the Pizzaplex" so I know what you're talking about lol.

[gamerswag39]

re reading find player two killed me emotionally Mary jo waz zo zilly and i really like Aimee def gonna read it again

[fazfrightsquotes]

Aimee: You shouldn't be using a straw.

Mary Jo: I know, I know, it's bad for the environment and stuff.

Aimee: Yeah, but I mean... it's a weird way to eat spaghetti.

[cherrytimemachine]

The Midnight Motorist Family is Not Who You Think

I noticed a pattern when looking at the depictions of the Missing Children in the FNAF games.

FFPS starts this trend with introducing Charlie and Susie, then we see how Gabriel was stuffed during the first ending of Help Wanted, and we might be heading in the direction of seeing Jeremy's story with HW2, and I'm sure Cassidy's will be the last. These depictions actually follow the order that the children were killed, according to their gravestones, except for one. What about Fritz?

Unlike the other children, there isn't much of an illusion to him alone outside of the MCI as a whole, while each individual child is getting their own focus. Now, this might seem like a stretch at first, but hear me out.

What if the family in Midnight Motorist was the family of Fritz?

Let's start from the beginning. Charlie and Susie both get their own minigames in FFPS, but then we assume Midnight Motorist is a complete shift from that and somehow portrays the Aftons for some reason, which breaks the theme of the "tying up loose ends" Scott was going for, and it breaks the formula of the stories of the MCI. But this isn't the only time we see a family like the one in Midnight Motorist with a parent who was mistaken for William Afton.

I the Fazbear Frights story Find Player Two, there's a man named Emmett Tucker, who is described as looming creepily inside of Freddy's arcade when Aimee and Mary Jo are going to play there, which happens to be the same day Mary Jo disappeared and was never found, leading Aimee to suspect that Emmett was responsible for her disappearance. He tells her that he wasn’t responsible for the kidnapping, and he was there because he was looking for his daughter, who used to go to Freddy’s, and he was trying to find her because he lost custody of her in his divorce.

Now, that might sound coincidental, but who else has been shown to be a not great father of a child who is implied to run off to Freddy’s, and also has a connection to a child kidnapping case? Specifically, Emmett was released from prison and maintains his innocence, which could imply that he was arrested for the MCI and was released years later after he was proven innocent. That would make sense as to why the car in Midnight Motorist is purple, it’s tying a link between the man and William, and how he was mistaken for being the killer.

In both the novel series and Fazbear Frights, the person originally suspected of the MCI was a father whose own child seemed to be a victim. In the novels it was Henry, and in FF it was Emmett.

Now, let’s set the stage here. After Susie was kidnapped, Fritz is the next victim. He’s got an abusive father who is difficult to live with, even when his other unidentified family member tries to calm the dad’s temper. Fritz has a history of running off to Freddy’s and that’s why his dad doesn’t question it when the window is broken. Whether the child willingly followed the Yellow Rabbit when he came, or he was trying to escape the pizzeria and the rabbit came after him is unclear, but Fritz is taken that night.

The name for the minigame in the files seems like it’s taking place after the death of Charlie, with the rain pouring down and the title “Later That Night”, but I suggest that it’s actually later the same day Susie was kidnapped. And from there, we get our tie in to the newspaper from FNAF 1, where one of the kidnappings was said to be a case of two children taken at the same time. This day is our one case of two, with both children being taken not at the same exact time, but the same exact day.

And there you have it, the solution to Midnight Motorist. I’m curious to hear what people think about this theory.

[tobymybaby]

How old I think each of the fazbear frights kids are(including the 18 year olds)

Oswald- 10(canon)

Sarah- 15-16

Millie- 14-15

Greg- 14-15

Alec- 15(canon)

Oscar- 14-15

Devon- 14(canon)

Pete- 16

Susie- 7-8

Jake- 9 (canon)

Toby- 16

Reed- 14-15

Chris - 13

Angel- 18(canon)

Colton - 13

Payton- 13-14

Edward- 13

Mott- 13(canon)

Jessica- 15-17

Joel- 18(canon)

Mary Jo- 10-11

Correct me if any of these charaters have a canon age

[william-ba]

Prankster Review

We've reached the end! I have been slowly reviewing all of the Fazbear Frights stories I don’t already have a separate review for, and we've finally made it to Prankster! Overall, as the final book in the Fazbear Frights series, Prankster is a disappointment.

While this does mark the end of my catch-up reviews, I finished Felix the Shark while posting these, so expect a review really soon! For my previous Friendly Face review, go here! If you want to read these in order, go here!

For the rest of the review, keep reading!

Prankster - It was mediocre. I thought the Help Wanted parallels were cool, although I think In the Flesh surprisingly handled the FNaF VR development aspect better, and when the story gets to Jeremiah’s birthday it’s sorta fun, but besides that the rest of the story is unremarkable. Glitchtrap is very obviously involved but the story makes no effort to show that off other than two scenes, one of which is joked to be a sex scene. Tape Girl makes it clear Jeremy wasn’t the same upon seeing him, why do Hope and Parker act normal? As for the ending, I think it’s very obvious that Parker is the one in the closet, but I still wanna know who the Gamemaster is. Also, what happened to Hope? It just feels unfinished and leaves you wanting more.

Kids at Play - This was bad. This story is literally the embodiment of the joke that Fazbear Entertainment is just smacked on random shit to make the story FNaF related, and while I mainly don’t rate these stories too much on their relation to FNaF, in this case it actively hurts the story. By making it clear the Kids at Play figures are made by FE, more questions are raised than answered. As for the characters, the entire D’Agostino family is flawed and it’s impossible for me to like any of them, we are given no reason to care about Caleb Bell other than the fact that he’s a kid who was hurt, Chief Montgomery is alright, and surprisingly I liked Joel’s band members the most out of this story, which isn’t really a good thing.

Find Player Two! - This story has a very simple concept: Best friend goes missing, and years later the protagonist sets out to avenge them. And yet, Aimee is a vile, horrible human being. She doesn't care for Mary Jo. Even when Mary Jo opened up to Aimee and made it clear how much she trusted her, Aimee still actively pushes her aside and treats her poorly. And when she goes missing years later, Aimee and her friend Greta dare to claim Mary Jo was the bad friend. And I've been in Mary Jo's shoes too. I knew my "friends" didn't actually care or respect me, but I was in a situation where they were the only friends left and I was too scared to end the friendship and be left alone. And what does the story do? Try to make Aimee out as a hero, making her death and what would be a punishment feel less like a punishment and more like a stupid twist. As for the rest plot, Emmett Tucker having a near identical description to Dave Miller felt like a punch in the face and the twist ending felt rather predictable once Emmett proved innocent.

[kimaratomoya]

What are your Julius headcannons and Also does something bad happen to Julius in the tales from th pizzaplex and aldo does he get redemption arc!?

Hello viviliqu I know it's you lol.

I don't think abt him too often but ig here we go.

Headcanons for Julius:

- keeps his hair long to defy his parents

- does not have a good relationship with them (I do think this is mentioned in the book but I don't feel like checking)

- absolutely cracked at first person shooters games

- did drama for 1 year and secretly enjoyed it but never speaks about it

- Not LGBTQ+ (as a lot of people think he is) but isn't gonna beat you up if you are gay (unless you're Reed ofc, but that's not BC he's gay)

- was severely jealous of Reed and that's why he targetted him a lot (I want to say this is also briefly mentioned but I can't remember)

- like Alec, didn't understand what "bad" was until people started to call him it when he acted up

- anger management issues (womp womp)

Does something bad happen to him in my fic (Ghosts in the Pizzaplex)?

Not yet, but I only have chunks planned so it may change in the future. To be honest I think he already got his punishment and deserves a second chance, but how a lot of people give him that second chance I dislike so I'm doing it a different way. He does however get involved in the issues to come and may get damaged, but nothing permanent planned.

Does Julius get a redemption arc in said fic?

He does and you can see it slowly happening after he is forcibly befriended by Mary Jo. It's small at first but I am planning on a mostly full recovery towards the end and him trying to make things up to the people he's hurt/annoyed/caused issues for (Reed, Delilah, Dirk, Monty, Vanessa, etc).

Lmao feel free to keep asking things about the other characters too, or about specific things that have happened if you want to. I enjoy talking abt it lol.

And a fun little bonus!!! ✨✨✨

Art I made of them a little bit ago. Can't remember if I posted it lol so here it is.

I was sleep deprived when I started it and just went with it lol.

[fazfrightsquotes]

Aimee: I literally cannot believe I let you talk me into this.

Mary Jo: I literally said “I have an idea,” and you just went along with it without question.