#like imagine he passes out like alwahs and whike he was passed oht the white star did somwthing...vthat woukd he interesting
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thinking about t/cf and how good the story is but how badly it suffers from the writing
#its such a fun premise that immediately becomes boring when you recognize#that every single arc is structured oh no we're aboht to loose -> let me use mg power up -> we won yippeeee#like#theres nothing bad about that being repeated but you literally finish one fight and gk straight ibto the next.#and it has the same premise#and there are 0 stakes ever. ron lost his arm and rhen 2 chapters later got it back#and there doesnt even have to be big stakes like death.... but there is never anything that negativeky impacts cale dor morw than like#5 chapters.#like imagine he passes out like alwahs and whike he was passed oht the white star did somwthing...vthat woukd he interesting#but instead its cale passes out the white star KNOWS hes passed out. and doesnt do anything.#the only time he does is when cale being passed out was a trick.... like...#its sk tragic#because the premise itself is really good and i really enjoy the characters and everything#but its also. so boring#sigh#also the manhwa designs feel incredibly racist#why do the dark elves who are described as having skin as black as the night have such a light skin tonr#and the people of the jungle are obviously meant to be black and they just look like they have an extreme tan#like .
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