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#paw patrol#the season 11 style change is...something#like honestly everyone looks basically fine EXCEPT SKYE#bro who looked at this dog who consisted of light tan tan and brown and went#''you know what we need to do? crank the saturation up on JUST the tan''#it looks like so bad i can't describe it#anyone that had people tell them their ocs were badly colored needs an apology
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Out Of Time ~ 124
MASTERLIST
< previous chapter
Word Count: 7,320ish (I know... yikes)
Summary: Y/N tries to help Simmons and Daisy save Fitz, Mack, May, Director Mace, and Coulson. (Sorry, I hope it’s not too confusing as you read it. It’s a lot...)
“Okay… So… Let me get this straight…” Y/N’s mind was trying to comprehend everything that Simmons and Daisy had just told her. “Dr. Radcliffe created a Life Model Decoy—“
“LMD for short,” Simmons added.
“Right. He created an LMD of his computerized assistant… just saying that takes me back to Ultron.” A shiver went down her spine. “Anyway, and she went crazy, building more LMD’s to replace the team. She put those she replaced in what is called the Framework, some sort of computerized alternate universe where consciousnesses can live… Am I getting this right so far?”
“Yes,” Daisy nodded.
“And Aida, the crazy LMD, has replaced May, Coulson, Mack, the new Director, and Fitz. And to stop them, you blew up the base and now need to go into the Framework yourselves and pull the team out. Correct?”
“Basically.”
Y/N sighed, running a hand down her face. She was still dressed up for her date, standing in front of Simmons and Daisy who were both injured, with Yo-Yo standing beside them.
“Okay, where do you need me then?” Y/N asked.
“If we’re in there too long, our bodies will… give out,” Daisy said.
“Well, that’s the hypothesis,” Simmons clarified.
“You’ve got to be kidding me, right?” Y/N exclaimed. “You guys want to go in there knowing your bodies might give out?!”
“We have to get our team back,” Daisy stated.
“I know but just… I’m going in.”
“No. You need to stay about here and—“
“And what? Watch over your bodies with Yo-Yo? No thanks. You’ll have a better shot with me in there.”
“Yes, but we need you out here,” Simmons said. “The Government won’t be far behind looking for us and you can help stall them.”
“You realize I’m a fugitive of the law, right?”
“Do you realize we found you with Tony?” Daisy retorted. “Isn’t he suppose to arrest you on site?”
Y/N clenched her jaw with a huff. “Fine. I’ll stay in the Zephyr. When do you need to go?”
“Now,” Simmons answered.
Y/N watched as Daisy and Simmons set up everything and connected themselves to the needed equipment.
“Meet at the rendezvous right away,” Daisy told Simmons and they both laid down. “That’s where I programmed the backdoor to get out.”
Y/N stood in between the two beds. “Listen, you two,” she said, trying to hide her worry. “Living in there too long may kill you, but dying in there will definitely kill you, so… just be careful.”
“Remember, Y/N and Yo-Yo,” Simmons started, “even if our vitals are going haywire, do not—“
“Do not pull you out or wake you up,” Yo-Yo finished. “We know. It will cook your brains like huevos rotos.”
“Cause permanent damage to the cerebral cortex, test.”
“Just promise me you’ll get our guys back, okay?”
“I promise.”
Y/N watched with bated breath as they hooked themselves up and seemingly feel asleep. Feeling around in both their minds, Y/N could tell they were in the Framework though. Now it was only a matter of time.
~~~
“They missed you,” Yo-You said.
Y/N had changed and the two of them had been sitting in silence, watching their two friends, for who knows how long.
“I’ve missed them, too,” she replied. “I… I really didn’t want to leave.”
“They knew that. And they felt terrible for what had happened when you woke. They had many arguments with Director Mace about it.”
“I didn’t like that guy.”
“He grew on me,” Yo-Yo shrugged. She leaned back in her chair. “Where have you been?”
“I can’t say,” Y/N shook her head.
“Understandable. They never stopped searching, you know?”
“I figured.”
“They actually caught sight of you once. In South Africa, I think.”
“They wouldn’t be the only ones. I was stupid for staying too long in one spot.” Y/N silently watched her unconscious friends for a moment. “I was going to say that I can’t imagine what’s going on in there, but I kinda can. Falling asleep, walking up in a new world. It’s how I got here.”
“Except they’re walking up to a demon world.”
“Truth,” Y/N chuckled. “Very true… Do we have any idea where the others might be kept at?”
“No.”
Y/N let herself comb over Yo-Yo’s thoughts briefly. “You and Mack, huh? That’s…”
“Interesting?”
“I was going to say exciting. The height difference must be a real challenge though.”
Yo-Yo laughed. “I don’t let it stop me.”
“Never thought you did.”
“And you and Stark?”
“It’s complicated. Especially now.”
“I can imagine.”
“Honestly, Yo-Yo, I don’t know if you can."
~~~
“Agent Rodriguez!” A woman came jogging up to Yo-Yo and Y/N, who were still watching over their friends. “Agent—“ She came to a halt. “Agent Rogers? I thought—well, you should be—“
“On the run. I know,” Y/N responded. “You are?”
“Agent Piper, ma’am.”
“And what seems to be the problem, Agent Piper?”
“We’re running out of power. Keeping them plugged in is draining the Zephyr faster than we thought.”
“Are we cloaked?”
“Yes, ma’am.”
Y/N took a deep breath, thinking over the options. “It’s going to be risky but I need you to uncloak the Zephyr.”
“What?” Yo-Yo questioned. “You can’t be serious? They’ll see us.”
“Just trust me and do it, Agent Piper.”
“Yes, ma’am,” Agent Piper responded, heading back to the controls.
“And please stop with the ma’am, it’s annoying.”
“Are you sure about this?” Yo-Yo asked her.
“No. But if anyone tries to take this bird down, I’ll take them down first.”
~~~
“Zephyr’s got 24 hours till it runs out of power,” Agent Davis, a man, informed.
“We can’t wait anymore,” Agent Piper chimed in. “We need to touch down and refuel.”
“Let’s not have this conversation again,” Yo-Yo said.
“Okay, we don’t know who we can trust at SHIELD and, the government, Talbot’s been trying to reach us. Maybe it’s time we talk to him.”
“Not an option,” Y/N said. “You’ve seen what they’re saying in the news. We’re lucky they haven’t shot us out of the sky. Not to mention that I’m on board and that if they turn off the Framework—“
“That thing’s draining all our power,” Agent Davis stated.
“Might be time we figure out a way to wake up Daisy and Simmons,” Piper suggested.
“Again, not an option,” Y/N argued.
“We must find something else to turn off,” Yo-Yo said.
“We already shut off all non-essential functions,” Davis stated. “Including the heat and the cloaking.”
“Why haven’t they shot us from the sky yet?” Piper wondered. “We haven’t been cloaked for almost a day.”
“Because I’m cloaking us,” Y/N stated.
“What?” / “How?” / “You can do that?”
“I’ve never released the amount of power I’m releasing for this long of a time, so I really don’t know how much longer I can hold it for.” Y/N turned to Daisy and Simmons, nibbling at her thumb nail. “They’re taking too long though… I think I need to go in after them.”
“No!” Yo-Yo exclaimed. “If you’re what’s keeping us safe, then we need you conscious.”
“It’s still only a matter of time before we have to land and I can’t hold it anymore. I can get in there and pull them out.”
“You don’t even know where the duplicate of you is.”
“What makes this world different, Yo-Yo? Why is it different than ours?”
“Simmons said something about taking a regret away.”
“So everyone has one regret taken away?” Yo-Yo nodded. “Then I have a pretty good guess where I’ll be.”
“You have no way of knowing if your powers will work.”
“If it’s basically a replica of our world, then I’m pretty sure they will. Besides, I’m not an inhuman, my powers are from sources much more powerful than some stupid computerized world. Now hook me up, we’re running out of time.”
~~~
Y/N gasped as she woke, immediately taking in her surroundings. She was in a casket, in the ground, inside of the Framework. She wasn’t surprised at all to find herself there, there was only two things she ever regretted. This regret Y/N had was one she always kept to herself, for reasons as to not hurt the ones she loved. She took a deep breath.
“Here goes nothing,” she whispered to herself.
She put her hands on the top of the casket and focused. The purple energy quickly glowed from her hands, blasting forward to free her from the ground. She crawled out of the hole, analyzing her surroundings. Arlington Cemetery in Virginia, just outside of Washington DC. Looking down, she realized she was in an old, warn out, military uniform. Out of the corner of her eye she saw the headstone. Turning to look at it she wasn’t shocked to see what it said:
Y/N Rogers
July 4th, 1918 to November 1945
A Hero Of World War 2
A Champion For Women
“Okay,” she whispered to herself as she stood up, brushing herself off, “If I were SHIELD, where would I be?”
Raking through her mind, it didn’t take long for her to come to a conclusion.
“The base.”
~~~
When Daisy woke up in the Framework, she was shocked to find out that here she was working for HYDRA, her powers weren’t active, she’s was still Skye, and that she was dating Grant Ward. HYDRA had taken over the world, SHIELD had fallen. Trying to find Simmons without the rest of HYDRA, she’s followed by Ward.
Simmons woke up in a mass grave of SHIELD agents, her Framework double having died in the fall of SHIELD. She eventually came across Coulson on her way to find Daisy. Here, Coulson’s a teacher teaching a HYDRA-approved curriculum that warns against the dangers of inhumans. Simmons tried to convince Coulson that he’s inside a virtual simulation, only to fail and have him call HYDRA on her.
When Daisy and Simmons finally met up, they tried to exit the Framework using a safeguard they created. They realized they were in over their heads in here and they needed back up. Unfortunately, Aida, the Director of HYDRA, blocked their way out. Ward then revealed himself to be a mole in HYDRA for the Resistance, out to protect Daisy since she’s inhuman.
On the run from a HYDRA attack, Simmons explains what happened with Coulson. This caused Daisy to go visit him, where he remembered her name. Ward took Simmons and Coulson to the Resistance, though he wasn’t so sure to believe the story Daisy and Simmons were telling. The Resistance is the remnants of SHIELD, led by inhuman Director Mace.
Daisy went back to HYDRA to find Radcliffe, hoping he could help them escape. But May, now a top HYDRA agent, gave her a new mission on the orders of Fitz, lead HYDRA scientist, and Aida, though she goes by Ophelia or Madame Hydra in the Framework. Daisy sent the information to Simmons on Radcliffe’s whereabouts before going with May to arrest Mack and his daughter Hope. May forced Mack to trick Daisy into confessing her true allegiance. Daisy gets placed in a cell and tortured. Mack, after him and his daughter are freed, joins the Resistance, having felt bad about what he did to Daisy.
Ward, Simmons, and Coulson find Radcliffe living in seclusion with Agnes Kitsworth, the woman he based Aida off of. Radcliffe explains that him and Agnes cannot leave the Framework since both of their real bodies have died. Fitz and Madame Hydra arrive. Radcliffe attempted to appeal to Fitz, though Fitz seemed to already know of the “other world” and believed that Radcliffe had enslaved Aida there. Fitz killed Agnes and takes Radcliffe as a prisoner, all while Ward, Simmons, and Coulson watch.
Ward, Mace, and Coulson then infiltrate a HYDRA “Enlightenment Camp” to free an undercover agent, Antione Triplett. They are tracked there by May, who uses a super serum to fight Mace. Coulson attempts to save one of his former students who he sees being held in the camp. Mace followed him into the building to help free all the other kids. HYDRA brings the building down with a missile. Entering the rubble to ensure Mace is dead, she finds him stopping debris from crushing a student, with Coulson and Tripp helping other children escape. May is horrified to find children being victimized by HYDRA. With the others having escaped to safety, Mace is crushed beneath the debris, dying in both worlds.
Through the vents of their holding cells, Daisy learns from Radcliffe about a backdoor he installed to escape that Aida is unable to disable. Turning on HYDRA, May sneaks a terrigen crystal into Daisy’s cell so she can gain her abilities within the Framework. The two women work together to escape HYDRA, with Daisy using her abilities to break Ophelia’s back.
Ophelia insists that Fitz, her lover, complete the work on their secret project, Looking Glass, after which her Framework body will no longer matter. Fitz then, with his very much alive father, becomes the head of HYDRA.
~~~
Y/N knew that it wouldn’t be smart to just appear in the base, so she showed up at a known SHIELD meeting spot. Appearing, she saw May and Daisy get out of an old car.
“I saw the building collapse on him,” May stated, getting out of the car. “I have the body-cam footage to prove it.”
“A building collapsed on who?” Y/N asked, worried.
Daisy spun around. “Y/N?” She questioned.
“You were taking too long.” The two women rushed into a hug.
“We tried to get back out to get your help, but Aida—“
“Stopped you. I got it.”
The three women pressed themselves up against a storage container.
“That’s not possible,” May whispered, staring at Y/N. “You’re Y/N Rogers. You died in World War 2, in the plane crash.”
“That, let me guess, my brother survived,” she responded.
They heard a security drone whirring near them and they pressed themselves up further against the storage container. May glanced around the corner to see the drone fly away.
“This is our window,” May stated.
The three then walked around the corner, Daisy leading the way. They were all on high alert, two of them now being considered terrorists. Daisy knocked on the red door of the building. A man quickly appeared, gun out.
“Get out of here,” he ordered.
“Hey! Hey,” Daisy exclaimed, hands up in surrender. “We are friends of the Resistance.”
“I know who you are. There’s chatter all over the police hand.” The man kept switching who his gun was pointed out.
“We weren’t followed. We were careful.” Then tires screeching were heard.
“Not careful enough,” May said.
Daisy and her quickly pulled out their guns. They took cover behind a trash can as those in the speeding car began shooting at them.
“Milkman, I have contact!” The man shouted into a walkie-talkie before getting shot down.
May and Daisy were firing back as Y/N pulled the man into the building.
“Come on!” She shouted. May followed.
“Incoming!” Daisy yelled, seeing a bomb thrown their way. She stood up and quaked it back into the car. She was shutting the door to the building as the car exploded.
“I’m going to be honest,” Y/N began, “I have not missed getting shot at.” Y/N began pushing large things in front of the door.
“He’s still breathing,” May said checking on the man. “But we’re gonna need to find another way to get out of here.”
“How long before HYDRA busts down the door?” Daisy asked.
“Not long. They’ll be following SOP for a hostile inhuman. Six teams to sweep the area. And if the hostile’s taken cover they’ll call in an air strike and sort through the rubble later.”
“Like what they did with the Patriot?”
“What I did. That air strike was on my order.”
“You didn’t know.”
“Doesn’t change what I did.”
“I’m sorry, who’s the Patriot?” Y/N asked.
“Director Mace,” Daisy answered.
“So, he’s…” Daisy nodded. “Oh, gosh.”
“May, you can’t blame yourself for their lies. Once you learned the truth, you fought back. That is what we need.”
“Daisy’s right. If more people see what you saw, they’ll probably start fighting back too.”
The three of you froze, hearing the HYDRA agents break down a door down the building. The three women hid, waiting for the agents to come to them. When they did, May jumped down on one from the ceiling, Daisy took one from the side, and Y/N appeared behind another, quickly knocking him out. The three HYDRA agents were quickly finished off.
“Three down,” Daisy whispered.
“Stop right there,” a HYDRA agent ordered, aiming at Daisy.
May and Daisy held their hands up, while Y/N’s hands slowly started glowing purple. Before any of them could do something, Mack showed up from the side, knocking the guy out with his guy.
“Mack?” Y/N and Daisy questioned. The three headed towards him only to freeze when he aimed his gun at May.
“Mack,” Daisy called.
“I’m here to help you,” Mack stated, “not the woman who held my daughter hostage.”
“May is the only reason I’m alive. She helped me escape. HYDRA messed with her head, but she’s fight back now.”
“How do you know she’s not lying?”
Coulson and a SHIELD agent ran in. Assessing the situation, Coulson stopped between May and Mack. Y/N was relieved to see her long time friend.
“Not a good time to be holding guns on our allies,” Coulson said.
“Alpha One, report in,” a HYDRA agent requested from outside. “What’s the situation down there?”
“We have to go, now.” Coulson slowly walked towards Mack. “Mack, I get it. These wounds don’t heal overnight. But for reasons I can’t fully explain, I trust this woman. And so should you.” Mack put the gun down.
“This place was originally build during the prohibition,” the SHIELD agent explained. “We have a secret tunnel out of here.”
“Lead the way,” Y/N said.
Mack grabbed the SHIELD agent from before and they all jogged towards the secret tunnel. Coulson moved so he was beside Y/N.
“Y/N? Right?” He questioned.
“You remember?” She asked.
“Little things. But you’re also known here. Not necessarily in a good light, but you are.”
“I’ve missed you, Phil.”
“Weirdly, I’ve missed you, too.”
“Y/N?” Daisy called. “Do you think you could just portal us there? It would be faster and safer.”
“And miss all this fun?” Y/N smirked. “You kidding?”
~~~
“Welcome to SHIELD,” Coulson said as the group walked into the base.
“So the secret base is the base,” Daisy said. “Probably should’ve guessed that.”
“I did,” Y/N said. “I just didn’t want to scare everyone.”
“Been looking for this place for years,” May said, looking around.
“I got to go find my little girl,” Mack stated, leaving.
“Thanks for your help,” Coulson said.
“Thank goodness you’re alright,” Ward said, coming towards them. “We’ve been combing the streets looking for you.” Y/N clenched her fists and they slowly began to glow purple.
“I can take care of myself,” Daisy responded.
“And you are?” Ward looked at you before noticing your hands. “And what are you doing?” He went to grab his gun but Daisy quickly stepped between the two of you.
“Woah, woah, woah.” She had her hands out. “Stop. Y/N,” she turned to her friend. “This is not the same Ward that shot you.”
“I shot you?” Ward repeated.
“Yeah,” Y/N responded. “I almost died.”
“That wasn’t me.”
“Y/N…” Daisy called. “Calm down.” Y/N looked at her friend and nodding, powering down. “Now, you want to explain the purple hands?”
“It’s complicated,” Y/N answered.
“How about we go take a look at that body-cam footage,” Coulson suggested. “Could really hep the cause.” May and Coulson left, leaving Ward, Daisy, and Y/N.
“Y/N and I are gonna go talk to Simmons,” Daisy said.
“She and, uh, Agent Triplett are on a recon mission,” Ward said, stopping them.
“Tripp?” Y/N repeated.
“Mm-hmm.”
“That’s the best news I’ve heard in weeks,” Daisy smiled.
“What’d you need to talk to her about?”
“It’s not exactly—“
“She told me about the other world.”
“Ah.” Daisy nodded. “Right.”
“Is that what you believe?”
“Yeah. And I need you to trust me. I know a way for us to get back home.”
“By ‘us’, you don’t mean me.” Y/N stepped back, feeling the tension. “I guess I was holding out hope that Simmons was wrong and that you’d still be… the girl I knew… I’m glad you’re safe, Daisy.” Ward walked away.
“Well that was…. Weird,” Y/N said. “Do you want to tell me—“
“Not really.”
“Okay.”
~~~
Y/N and Daisy walked in as Coulson, Ward, and May had just finished the body cam footage of Mace’s death.
“Getting this footage out isn’t enough to make up for what I did in HYDRA,” May spoke up. “But it’s a start.”
“Changing people’s hearts and minds is great,” Daisy said. “But I know a way to destroy HYDRA for good. Remember the place Simmons and I were trying to find? Radcliffe told me where to go, how to find it.”
“The way out of this?” Coulson asked.
“Yes. If we can get there, all of our problems go away. We just— we need all the help we can get.”
“I don’t know what you mean,” May stated. “THere’s no magic bullet against HYDRA.”
“Yeah,” Ward agreed. “This footage is a close as it comes. I mean, people will finally wake up.”
“No, you don’t understand,” Daisy said. “None of this will matter in the long run. It’s— it’s… Coulson, this is the only chance to actually wake people up.”
“Maybe the only way to solve our problem,” Coulson replied, “is to solve their problem.”
“What does that mean?”
“Getting to Radcliffe’s coordinates right now is next to impossible. We need a way to divide HYDRA’s forces.”
“To save ourselves, we need to save the world,” Y/N said. “Well, I’m in. But I guess none of us really have a choice, do we?”
~~~
Using both Y/N’s and Daisy’s powers, a small SHIELD team broke into HYDRA’s broadcasting center. All their people hand their hands held up. Bakshi was sitting at his news anchor desk. Coulson, May, Y/N, and Daisy walked up to it.
“Heard you were looking for some enemies of the state,” Coulson commented.
Y/N and Daisy looked at each other with small grins. Coulson would always be Coulson, even if he didn’t remember everything. With a nod from Coulson, Y/N controlled all the people to stay in their seats. Ward tied Bakshi to his chair.
“Stay quiet and we won’t have a problem,” Ward warned Bakshi.
“May and Coulson are getting everything set,” Daisy told Ward and Y/N.
“We’re good to go out here. No one’s putting up a fight.”
“That’s because I told them not to,” Y/N explained. Ward looked at her, confused. “I have a variety of abilities. Just don’t plan on crossing me.”
“Yes, but we will,” Bakshi said. “If you think you can force me, Sunil Bakshi, to go on air and slander HYDRA, then you’re delusional. I am the most trusted voice in journalism—“ Daisy quaked him back so that he hit the wall behind him. “Just, uh, put it in the teleprompter, then.” Bakshi was scared.
“We don’t need you to say a damn thing,” Daisy said. “The facts will speak for themselves.”
~~~
Y/N waited by herself for Coulson to finishing filming his speech. She longed to know the truth about what happened to Steve, Bucky, and Tony in this Framework. She was just too afraid. With a sigh, she looked to the side and saw a HYDR computer. Y/N contemplated for a moment before finally giving in and searching.
Steven Grant Rogers
Born: July 4th, 1918
Died: December 6th, 2007
First super soldier created. Helped defeat HYDRA. After his sister, Y/N, crashed a plane in 1945, Rogers married Peggy Carter and helped found SHIELD.
James Buchanan Barnes
Born: March 10th, 1917
First HYDRA super soldier ever created. Alias is The Winter Soldier. Still in regular use. Currently under cryo.
Anthony Edward Stark
Born: May 29th, 1970
Died: dated unknown, during the fall of SHIELD
Former CEO of Stark Industries. Son of Howard and Maria Stark. Died trying to stop the fall of SHIELD.
After reading everything, Y/N quickly turned off the screen. She wanted it get out of this hell whole faster now. This was not the place she longed to be. She met up with Ward, May, and Daisy, right before Coulson entered the room.
“Well,” he began with a breath, “that’s that.”
“Let’s get out of here,” May stated.
Coulson noticed that Ward’s gun was on the table and he knew that Ward was planning on staying. “The Patriot would’ve been proud of what we did today.”
Ward and Coulson nodded to each other before Coulson walked out of the room, with Y/N following. May and Daisy were close behind. Ward began the broadcast, playing it on every screen.
~~~
Daisy stood by Y/N’s side as they watched the news from the base. Everyone in the room had their eyes on the screen. Madame Hydra had sent crews to take back control of the broadcast center. Y/N huffed as she watched people getting beat up by HYDRA agents.
“She’s not subtle, that Madama Hydra,” Daisy commented.
“Yeah, just look at her uniform,” an agent said from beside them. “It’s so crazy hot.” They both gave the guy a look. “I-I mean, if you’re into the whole ‘bad girl’ vibe. Not—not me. I’m just… making an observation.”
Just then, Tripp and Simmons walked into the room.
“Tripp,” both Daisy and Y/N gasped.
“It’s so good to see you!” Daisy laughed, pulling the man in for a hug.
“Hey… person I don’t know,” he said, hugging her back.
“Right.” Daisy immediately let go. “Yeah, sorry. I-I heard about your mission. Awesome job.”
“Thanks.” Tripp looked at Y/N, studying her. “I… do I know you.”
“You might have seen pictures,” Y/N responded, thinking back to the conversation she had with the real Tripp. That seemed like so long ago. “Y/N Rogers.” She held her hand out to shake his. “I worked with your Grandfather, Gabe. He was a—“
“Howling Commando.” He shook her hand. “I’m sorry, but shouldn’t you be dead?”
“Long story.” Y/N pulled her hand away.
“Tripp,” Simmons got his attention. “Do you mind if Daisy, Y/N, and I have a quick word?”
“Sure,” he agreed. He looked at Daisy. “You can finishing hugging me later.” He chuckled before walking away.
Simmons grabbed grabbed an arm from each of the other women, pulling them to the side.
“Aida’s building a body for herself in the real world,” Simmons stated quietly. “A human body.”
“She wants free will,” Daisy said.
“Which would allow her to unplug the Framework… killing us all.”
“Okay,” Daisy sighed. “We can still stop her. Radcliffe gave me the coordinates to the Framework’s back door.”
“Will it work?”
“According to him, all we have to do is pass through the exit point, and then our minds will disconnect from the Framework.”
“So we just need to get everyone there.”
“Which own’t be easy,” Y/N said, “with May and Mack having no idea what’s really happening.”
“Well, and Fitz had HYDRA guards around him at all times.” Y/N and Daisy shared a look. “What?”
“Simmons, we can’t reduce Fitz right now,” Daisy said. “There’s no time.”
“We can’t just leave him behind. He’s part of our team.”
“And the current head of HYDRA,” Y/N reminded them.
“The Fitz in this world wants all of us dead,” Daisy added.
“Guys—“
“I know that it’s not his fault, but that is the reality that we are living in. If we don’t get Coulson, May, and Mack out of here, Aida will kill all of them.”
“I can try to get Fitz, if the time is right,” Y/N offered. “But I can’t promise anything.” She shook her head slightly. “What I can promise is that we will find a way to get Fitz out once everyone’s safe. Okay?”
“Okay,” Simmons agreed quietly.
Daisy left quickly, realizing Mack was leaving. Y/N stayed by Simmons.
“When did you even get here?” Simmons asked.
“When May and Daisy were escaping HYDRA,” Y/N answered. “The Zephyr is almost dead. You guys were taking too long, draining the power. I had to jump in to see if I could help.”
“Thank you.”
~~~
Y/N found herself mindlessly watching Mack interact with Hope. She didn't even notice that she had been staring too long until Mack met her gaze. She looked away, trying to compose herself.
“Hey,” he greeted, walking up to her.
“Hey,” she replied. “Sorry about staring. I just… you two are a good pair.”
“Yeah.” He smiled softly, looking at Hope. “Have any kids of your own?”
“I… I should have… He… there was a big fight and I lost him before he was even born.”
“I’m sorry. I didn’t mean—“
“It’s no problem. Really.” She waved him off. “I’m… it’s still a little fresh.”
“Did you, uh, pick out a name?”
“Anthony James, or AJ for short.”
“That’s nice.”
“It is.” She nodded. She looked at Hope, thinking about how Mack will after to leave her soon. Even though she’s not real. “Just.. Mack, don’t wast any second. Every moment is precious.”
~~~
Y/N met up with Daisy and Tripp in the Director’s office. They were leaning over a map.
“Okay, so, Radcliffe’s coordinates should put it right about here,” Daisy stated, drawing a circle on the map. “DO you think you can fly us there?”
“No problem,” Tripp agreed.
“Great.”
“But what’s with this team of yours? A HYDRA agent, a school teacher, and a dad? Looks pretty bad news hears to me.”
“Trust us, I think they’re up to the task,” Y/N replied.
“Does this have anything to do with that other world Simmons was talking about?”
“She told you?” Daisy questioned.
“What can I say? I’m easy to confide in.”
“Okay. Yeah, you, May, Mack, and Coulson were all apart of our team in the other world.”
“So that’s why you were so happy to see me.” He smirked. “You and I,” he pointed between Daisy and himself, “we must’ve, uh, you know—
“Dated?”
“Sure. We’ll go with that.”
“Uh, no. Sorry.”
“Right. Me and Simmons, we probably—“
“Nope.”
“Agent May?” Daisy shook her head. “Y/N?”
“Sorry, Tripp,” Y/N smiled.
“Damn. And this is really a place you two want to go back to?”
“Easy, playboy. Right now, we have to round up Simmons and the rest of the team.”
“Doubt she’s back yet.”
“What are you talking about?”
“I thought you two knew. Simmons left base an hour ago.”
“Where was she going?” Daisy asked.
“I don’t know.”
“Let’s go ask Coulson and May,” Y/N suggested. “Maybe she told them.”
The two women rushed down to find May and Coulson walking the hallway.
“Do you know where Simmons went?” Daisy asked them.
“No, sorry,” Coulson responded.
“She went to find Alistair Fitz,” May replied, like it was no problem.
“What?” Daisy questioned. “Why didn’t you come and tell us?”
“Because I don’t answer to you. Not here or any other fantasy word you three might have cooked up.”
“You told her?” Y/N asked Coulson.
“It came up in conversation,” he shrugged.
“How does the existence of an alternate reality come up in a casual conversation?”
“I’d like to think it’s because we were bonding, though I don’t really want to speak for her.”
“You’re really not helping,” Daisy said.
“Don’t worry. Melinda here said she’d keep an open mind.” May sighed.
“We can’t leave without Simmons.”
“She knows how to stay off-radar,” May stated. “I’m sure everything’s fine.”
~~~
The small team packed up the quinjet. And now the only person they were waiting for was Simmons.
“Hey,” Daisy went up to Tripp in the pilot’s seat. “We all good?”
“Ready when you are,” he replied.
“Yeah. We just can’t leave without her.”
Y/N was waiting at the end of the ramp. She was the first to notice Simmons.
“Jemma!” She exclaimed rushing towards her friend. “You okay?”
“I was trying to save Fitz,” she answered, clearly shaken up.
Daisy noticed blood on Simmons jacket. “Please tell me that’s not his blood,” Daisy pled.
“No. It’s… It’s from his father. I—I killed him.”
“That’s—that’s okay. Fitz’s dad is just an avatar. You didn’t kill anyone. You just made some ones and zeroes disappear.”
“But Fitz won’t come with us now. We’ve lost him.”
“No, we haven’t,” Y/N said, shaking her head. She rested her hands on her friends shoulders. “We will figure something out. But first, we have to get back to the real world before Aida makes us disappear. Okay?”
“Okay.”
Y/N and Daisy guided Simmons into the quinjet and Tripp took off.
~~~
The quinjet landed on the roof of a steel mill. Everyone armed up and headed out, leaving Tripp with the quinjet. May led the way into the mill.
“Just up ahead,” she stated.
“Something doesn’t feel right,” Y/N said, cautiously surveying the area.
“Nothing about this disgusting world feels right,” Simmons stated. “It’s hell. A digital hell.”
“Radcliffe said the back door was in a public fountain, not some creepy steel mill.”
“If only the exit beacon I brought to this world worked, we wouldn’t be in this mess.”
“Yeah, well, if we’re gonna get out of here,” Y/N said, “this is our last chance.”
“Found the location,” Coulson called to them.
They quickly followed him. He led them to a pool of molten steel.
“This can’t be it,” Daisy said.
“Uh, the coordinates lead right there,” May replied.
“Into a pool of molten steel?” Coulson wondered. “You think Radcliffe gave us bad info?”
“Radcliffe’s a prisoner at HYDRA,” Daisy said. “He’s got no reason to lie.”
“Maybe someone else found it and took it,” May suggested, getting annoyed.
“The back door is part of the Framework’s digital infrastructure. It can’t be moved.”
“But it could be concealed,” Y/N spoke up. “What if Madame HYDRA discovered the back door and built this place as a way to prevent people from passing through?”
“Wait a minute,” Mack interrupted, confused. “What is this back door everyone keeps talking about? I thought we were here to take out Madame Hydra.”
“Let me guess,” May started, “no one told you about the other world.”
“The other world? What?”
“So what does this mean for us?” Coulson asked, ignoring Mack and May.
“It means Aida’s won,” Simmons stated.
“You seriously believe that there’s some magical back door that will transport us to another world?” May wondered.
“It’s not magic, May. It’s science.”
“Then where’s your proof?”
“We just have to trust Radcliffe,” Daisy said. “He said when a person passes through the back door—“
“That they wake up on the other side. This is what you really believe?” May asked Coulson.
“Admittedly, it doesn’t sound great when you say it like that,” Coulson admitted.
“You lied to me,” Mack said to Daisy.
“Mack—“
“No, don’t try to talk your way out of this. You’re a damn liar. My daughter looks up to you, and for what? SO you can bring me out here on some wild goose chase?”
“Daisy was only trying to help,” Simmons excused.
“How?” By taking me away from my kid? What the hell is wrong with you guys?” Mack pointed at Y/N. “And you? You’re willing to let me feel the pain you felt. That’s… that’s cruel.”
“Mack, you don’t understand,” Y/N began. “It’s different. So, diff—“
“No it isn’t.”
“Hey, guys, maybe we should start thinking about a plan b,” Coulson tried to cool everyone down.
“Glad you’ve finally come to your senses,” May said. “We need to get out of here.”
“Actually, I was thinking we might try to find another way through the back door. I still believe Daisy’s right.”
“Wake up!” Mack exclaimed. “There is no back door, just like she’s not Moses about to take you to the promised land."
“That’s it,” Y/N whispered. “Daisy, quake it.”
“What?” Daisy questioned. “What do you—“
“Quake the damn thing, Daisy!”
Daisy held out her hand and quaked the pool of molten steel. It revealing the backdoor beneath it.
“HYDRA!” May shouted, as bullets came at the group. “Take cover!”
The small team took cover. HYDRA started shooting more and Y/N caused them all to drop to the ground, unconscious. Daisy went back up to the platform and quaked the steel again, uncovering the backdoor.
“It’s real,” Coulson said.
“It could be a trap,” May suggested.
“The time for doubting’s over. We’re going back to our world.”
Coulson got up from where he was hiding, heading to the platform across from Y/N, Daisy, and Mack. Unknown to the team, HYDRA agents were below them. Shots were fired, hitting Coulson.
“Coulson!” Y/N screamed, quickly appearing at his side. She had watched him die once, she couldn’t bear to do it again. “We have to get you up.”
May and Mack began firing at the lower agents as Y/N helped hoist Coulson up.
“This feels oddly familiar,” Coulson grunted, blood covering up his chest.
“Sadly, it is,” Y/N replied.
“You were there… I think I remember that…”
“We need to get you patched up,” May said, coming from behind.
“No, it’s too late for that. Help me to the edge. It’s the only way.”
“Daisy!” Y/N shouted. “The door!”
“On it!” She replied, quaking the door open again. May and Y/N helped Coulson to the edge.
“Hey, come with me,” Coulson told May.
“How can you be sure it will work?” She asked.
“I can’t. Guess it’s gonna be a leap-of-faith type of thing.”
“It’s not that simple for me.”
“Yes, it is… Just follow my lead.”
Coulson pushed himself away from Y/N and May, falling back into the door. He disappeared, causing a wave to ripple out through the Framework, showing that it wasn’t real.
“They were right,” Mack whispered. “It’s not real.”
“Go May,” Y/N urged. “He’ll be right there when you wake. And we won’t be far behind… Go.”
Giving Y/N one last look, May took that piece of faith and jumped. Y/N sighed in relief. Two down, just 5 more of them to get through.
“Simmons, you’re up!” Daisy shouted.
As Simmons headed towards the platform, a gun cocked behind her. She looked back to see Fitz pointing a gun at her. Radcliffe was handcuffed behind him.
“Hello, Jemma Simmons,” he greeted. “Seems you finally found me.”
“Fitz—“ She tried to rush towards him.
“You don’t get to say my name! Not after everything you’ve done.”
“It wasn’t supposed to be like this.” Simmons shook her head. “Aida, she took you from me, and I cam to rescue you.”
“So you kill my father? Right after he tells me that he loves me, you murder him in cold blood as I listen.”
“I am so sorry,” Simmons cried. “I was an accident.”
“Nothing that you’ve done has been an accident! You want to destroy this world! To destroy me! You want to destroy the woman that I love!”
“That woman is lying to you! None of this is real! She’s not real! Aida’s just a robot yo and Radcliffe created.”
Outside the small room Fitz-Simmons was in, Y/N was wondering what was happening. So she slowly walked over, ready to attack.
“Her name is Ophelia,” Fitz defended.
“It’s name is Aida,” Simmons responded. “Artificially Intelligent Digital Assistant. And stop making excuses for it!”
“She’s right, Fitz,” Y/N cut in, bringing the attention to her. “Radcliffe, Simmons, and Daisy have all told you the truth.”
“Y/N?” Radcliffe quietly wondered. “Wow, they really called in the big guns.”
“Please… Fitz,” Simmons pled. “You have to wake up.”
“Get on your knees,” Fitz ordered Simmons.
“No.” Fitz shot Simmons in the foot causing her to fall to the ground.
“You don’t get to touch her!” Y/N screamed freezing Fitz in place. “You don’t.”
“Let me go,” he growled.
“Fitz, listen to me,” Simmons begged. “I love you.”
“And you mean nothing to me.”
Suddenly there was a gun shot. Y/N turned to see that Radcliffe was out of handcuffs now and had shot the agent with them. He pointed his gun at Fitz and took Fitz’ gun away. Radcliffe looked at Y/N and she let her hold on him go. Radcliffe hit Fitz on the side of the face, pushing him towards the door and the platform.
“This was never my intention,” Radcliffe stated. Y/N quickly went to Simmons, helping her up. “The Darkhold corrupted my mind. Please, don’t blame yourself.”
“Go,” Simmons nodded at Daisy. Daisy quaked open the back door.
“It was all my fault.” Radcliffe pushed Fitz through the back door. Simmons caught Radcliffe before he fell in too. “Bringing Fitz here was the only way I could truly save him. I know I can’t make everything that happened in the Framework right, but at least— at least this way, Fitz gets to be his old self again.”
“Simmons,” Y/N called. “Go.”
Simmons nodded, limping forward and throwing herself through the doorway. That left Mack, Daisy, and Y/N.
“Now it’s your turn,” Daisy told Mack. “You said it yourself, this world is not real. And in the real world, you’re in danger right now.”
“What about Hope? Is she in danger?” He asked.
“No,” Y/N answered, appearing beside Daisy. “Things are different there.”
“Different? How?”
“Hope… she isn’t alive in our world. I’m so, so sorry. I… I don’t exactly know what happened. It’s not something you talk about.”
“No, no. That— on, the doesn’t make any sense. She’s alive here. Why would it be different there?”
“Aida,” Daisy answered. “She made changers in this world to keep us from fighting back. So fixed your biggest regret.”
“Then I’m staying.”
“Mack—“
“I don’t want to live in a world without Hope.”
“But it’s not real,” Y/N argued. “You saw it with your own eyes it’s a computer program. All of it. Even hope.”
“She laughs at my jokes. We watch movies together. And when she’s sad… when she’s sad, I hold her. So, she’s real to me.” Mack looked back in the eyes. “If you had the chance to be with AJ, would you stay?”
“I know the truth, Mack… And I know that AJ is safe where he is. Loved and protected. Here…. Here’s not that. Here’s not real.”
“I have to stay.”
“I understand,” Daisy replied. “And I know how hard this is, but you have people who really care about you,” she began crying, “who love you very much.”
“Tell them I’m sorry.”
“Mack, please… I don’t want to lose you.”
“Good luck. Both of you.”
With a deep inhale, the two women looked at each other, both shedding tears. They turned away from Mack. Not wanting to force him into anything. Daisy grabbed Y/N’s hand, quaking the door open as they jumped together.
next chapter >
I know I said that Agents of Shield would end with this chapter, but that ended up not being the case. We will see our Agents of Shield team for the last time in chapter 125 and Infinity War will start in chapter 126.
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What was the point of having Orion be injured & have issues with his motivation if we’re just gonna be captain in season 4 anyway? It’s basically just 2 seasons of the same thing except we have to navigate through being seeker too. But I doubt that part will get too much focus anyway, being captain is gonna take up most of the importance. Which is fine & it makes sense but it was still unnecessary to do that to Orion. They never even did anything with him anyway, it just seems unfair. Idk if MC being captain in season 4 was always the plan or if Orion was originally gonna go back to being captain after season 3 but it’s just stupid. At least we’ll have more of his support & guidance I guess not that it really makes up for it. He deserves the captain title but I guess he’s ready to pass it down to MC.
Oh man, can everyone remember a time when we looked forward to Season 3 with glee because it seems as though Orion was finally getting centerstage? Remember when all of us shamed Season 2? I know, I know, the Skye Show could be a drag to get through sometimes, but at least her character arc progressed forward. They're yanking Orion backward now, and he's my boy, my Sagely Bae, this cannot stand. I mean, I guess I won't complain about added screen-time for Orion, and if he is indeed ready to pass on the title...like, okay. If they manage to sell this with writing that gets me choked up, then I will be glad to eat my words. But Quidditch is such an unpredictable mess most of the time that I honestly have no clue what to think or expect.
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oh. oh. so that's how we're doing this? fine then. (I kid I love the excuse to send you LOTS) favorite character to write about this year? any new fics to start next year? events you participated in this year? fics you wanted to write but didn’t? a fic you read this year you would recommend everyone read?
spamming me is actually the way to my heart, this is facts
• favorite character to write about this year:
honestly i’m torn between ophelia and leopold (as in, framework fitz.) i loved exploring ophelia, giving her a backstory and developing her character (because ahem, canon failed to do so), putting her in different scenario/aus and just having fun with her in general. i tried to stick to the (brief) canonic characterisation of her in like, the first half of 4x21, before everything went to shit, and obviously the madame hydra characterisation as much as i could, but admittedly a lot of it was my own personal input/shared headcanons and i guess that’s what made it so fun. that’s not to say she’s a blank canvas, but because canon didn’t really expand on her character (she was human for like, what, less than a day?) a lot of it was down to personal interpretation to fill in the blanks. !always human ophelia, for example, would obviously be totally different to the canon enhanced/inhuman/freshly 3d printed version of her and so on. basically it was really fun to try and figure out what she’d be like had canon not done her so dirty.
and, of course, leopold. it’s true that watching/writing/reading about villains is often more fascinating than focusing on the protagonist. i stand by what i’ve said before - he is my favourite aos character. yeah, he was in four episodes, and yeah he’s technically not a separate character at all - but it feels like he is and that’s basically the interpretation i ran with most of the time, treating the framework as an alternate, separate universe as opposed to a virtual reality. hell, even within that virtual reality, he’s just so vastly different, so deliciously depraved that it makes it super fun to explore his character further. there’s just so much more to him than meets the eye and i fondly remember all the days i spent over the summer just coming up with and discussing headcanons about his upbringing, his father and mother, his academy years and rise to power at hydra. that’s the great thing about the framework - the parts it gives you are fantastic, but the parts it doesn’t give you are even better. so a lot of it was exploring his past and his future (babiesssss. !dad leopold might just be my favourite thing, like, ever. the mad, scary doctor caring for a baby. it kills me. him worrying that he’s going to let his child down and become just like his father. the angsssst). he’s so complex and so evidently deeply troubled and absolutely tragic and i love it. he’s not a black and white, “he’s evil and that’s it” kind of character. he’s passionate and determined; he wants to love and be loved, but because of the constant pressure via his father and the absence of his mother, he’s not quite sure how to go about showing it. it’s so fun to explore his voice because he’s canonically savage and just so… like, there’s something so chilling about his stoic demeanor (notice how he only has angry outbursts in private.) i can’t begin to explain how fun it is to poke around his head and explore why he does what he does - he’s convinced he’s saving people, okay, he literally believes that - and how he deals with the complications that arise (inhuman baby, that will be all.)
tl;dr: leopold “the doctor” fitz is fucked up and i absolutely love it.
any new fics to start next year?
not entirely sure if this is a fic rec or a wip question tbh, so i’m basically gonna give a brief run-down of my fic to-do-list: okay, so i have like three fitz/skye fics i still need to write (as in, plot bunnies that will literally keep driving me insane until i finally get my shit together and get them down on virtual paper). the first one is a (late) christmas-based fic where they’re both working at hydra and he’s her scrouge-like boss who, outwardly, hates joy and love and christmas. one day, after a phone call from his mother, he tells skye he’s got a proposal for her (literally and figuratively speaking). cue a fake-dating trope fic with christmas fluff and a scottish backdrop. basically “the proposal” but with less deportation and more christmas.
the second one is the framework fitz/skye post-revolution prison au (totally inspired by your three sentence prompt fill, which i love.) listen, i love torturing him and the entire prison sequence from 5x05 stole my heart, depression prison beard and all. so, it’s more of that, plus a lot of healing in a motel room.
and the third one, which is less of a solid idea and more of a vague outline in my head: a lowkey star wars au. well. a part of it. soulbond i guess? whatever you want to call it. basically i can’t stop thinking about the two of them being psychically linked and appearing to each other at the most inconvenient of times and falling in love like idiots despite the fact that he’s the literal actual head of hydra and she’s a newly-turned-inhuman and, you know, a devoted resistance member. basically, she’s his redemption arc.
also i’m gonna try and finally fill the prompts in my inbox, because i’m always yelling for more and then they just sit there and i end up hoarding.
events you participated in this year?
i really started writing proper aos fic in the second half of the year, so i didn’t get a chance to join all that many, but hopefully i’ll join more of these in 2018.
• fitzsimmonsnetwork secret santa 2017• aospositivitynet secret santa 2017• skyeward big bang(because i like to mix it up a little. also because like no aos fic writing event accounts for my fav aos ship, rip)
fics you wanted to write but didn’t?
SO. MANY. too many arguably. like, i’m so bad. i’ll probably update this post if/when i upload an actual unfinished fic dump 2017 part II, because tbh i’ve been toying with the idea for a while.
okay, so there’s:
1. the literal very first aos fic i started writing, a direct result of all my pent-up anger and frustration at that lame-ass finale. i decided a fix-it fic was in order, where it basically diverges from canon around halfway through 4x21 (before that scene) and ophelia’s pardoned and allowed to stay, albeit under close surveillance and basically locked up in the containment module and the team has to learn to deal with it and accept her while fitz helps her come to terms with what it really means to be human. also, feelings don’t just get thrown away instead of being properly addressed because that’s lazy writing and you can love more than one person at a time, god fucking damn it). while this is still unfinished, it admittedly later evolved into a broader collab verse known as “team au.”
2. fitz/ophelia ‘we kind of broke up because you chose jemma and now we’re meeting again years later in new york and i never realised how much i missed you until you started chasing me down the street’ au.
3. this one canon-divergence (though canon can’t prove me wrong, so technically…) au where the framework is still the framework and everything is pretty much the same except ophelia’s pregnant (look, in 4x16 when he’s getting all worked up about “i have to protect you, i have to…” and she grabs his hand i literally thought for a moment that she was going to place it against her stomach and they’d do an oh-my-god-baby reveal, but they’re not ballsy enough to go there, so it’s mostly just wishful thinking BUT STILL) so when daisy quakes her out the window, well. in other words: ANGST.
4. this one fic where fitz and ophelia went to high school together but never really interacted until one party during the summer of their freshman year of college, realise they have feelings for each other and sleep together literally under the stars before he moves across the country because of college and a prestigious internship. shortly after term starts, ophelia realises she’s pregnant. cue long-distance internet pining, several failed attempts to confess/meet up in person, and and lots of hurt/comfort as ophelia slowly learns to accept her situation and make the best of it. plus some father-daughter bonding. it sounds really lame now i guess, but it’s really an idea that’s been with me for a long time and i’ve plotted and planned it and thought about it a lot so i would really love to push myself to just sit down and word vomit it out at some point. i promised myself i’d do in december/over christmas, but of course that didn’t happen, so hopefully sometime in january. it’s kind of a pet project of mine so i’ll be really disappointed in myself if i just let it go, even though the fitz/ophelia ship is as good as dead by now and i’d probably just be writing it for myself more so than for any real kind of audience. (yeah, i still have a soft spot for this ship, mostly because of the chest-tightening nostalgia i get whenever i think about it and the literal hours i’d spent being so completely invested in it over the summer. will i ever get over it? probably not.)
there’s a bunch of other stuff i always wanted to explore (leopold backstory, framework-canon hydra uprising, framework post-canon revolution, etc.) but never really got far enough in any other stuff to go into detail about them here (i really have to properly sift through my docs at some point, it’s literally a fic dump of headcanons/ideas from like, three months of hardcore obsessing all summer) but i guess one simple conclusion can be drawn from all this: i have a thing for angst, redemption arcs and pregnancy/baby fic, not necessarily in that order.
a fic you read this year you would recommend everyone read?
this is such a hard question because 1. i’ve read a lot of stuff from like, a weird mix of different fandoms, 2. with my ‘unfortunate/problematic’ choice of ships/favourite characters it’s hard to pick something everyone would enjoy. however:
for this empire, after night - i know the kylo ren/rey pairing isn’t for everyone (see above), but in my defense this isn’t really a shippy fic at all. it may, however, be one of the damn most beautiful things i’ve read in a long, long time. the descriptions, the imagery. it’s breathtaking (and really puts my own miserable scribbling into perspective)
#replies#ilosttrackofthings#as per usual this got away from me#it's basically a meta or something welp#writing#fic tag#long post
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Chapter Reviews: April 1-5, 2019
Desire & Decorum Chapter 15:
Ugh! I hate seeing my MC being forced to wear the dress Duke Richards gave her and having to pay diamonds to get the Edgewater one. And what's with the option to have intimate moments with the other love interests? I'd stick with Hamid any day.
Crap! I didn't pick Edmund to walk down the aisle with me. Well, at least Bartholomew Chambers is good enough.
About time Viscount Westonly's mishearing comes in handy. Dragging him closer to the altar is a good way to delay the wedding vows further, though I'm sore at Hamid not objecting to the wedding.
At long last I get to reject Duke Richards during the wedding day itself. And it was a pleasant surprise to see Dominique and the queen stopping the wedding. About time the story goes somewhere. Now time for the showdown.
Across the Void Chapter 16:
The Jura general is one callous b***h. I swear, Pax needs to ditch the Jura, who comes across as moronic as the Vanguard. Just look at my precious Atlas sustaining major damage. At least the passangers are still cheerful, even though most of them except Lyra and Barlow are worthless.
Anyway, my MC and Sol got to prepare the Equinox for Barlow, and the scene is okay, though Sol's mention of his home planet just makes me think he could've been a great character while not hogging the spotlight. He's wasted potential, like the other love interests.
High School Story: Class Act Chapter 8:
I'm sick of the presidential election story sidelining my MC and Skye. Not to mention the twin's so immature for thinking it's serious business. Even their pro-sports platform is ridiculous because it's already the most supported program.
Super sad that I have to pay diamonds ro see my old MC and his friends. If I ever replay this book, I better pick that option. I heard it's also a good moment to see him and Aiden together.
As for the winter festival, I think there will be unnecessary drama, which has become the same old, same old.
Passport to Romance Chapter 4:
Honestly, Elliot's behaving like a manchild for playing around Marie Antoinette's bed. That guy shouldn't be on the MC's vlog. But then again, the MC is such a dimwit for getting basic history facts wrong. At least there's Sumire to provide insightful takes on Versailles.
Ahmed's change in demeanor isn't endearing me to him. His disdain for such opulence because it reminds him of the common man's plight is starting to make him act like a stereotypical social justice warrior. It would've made sense if he was raised rather poor, but he mentioned being in his family's home videos a lot, so probably not.
Anyway, I feel bad for Marisa having to deal with her boyfriend not seeing her again. Honestly, she better ditch him soon, just like Lily Spencer ditched Melanie early on.
America's Most Eligible Chapter 12:
Omar warning my MC to stay away from Jen just because he thought they're romantically involved doesn't make sense in this playthrough. Sure I like Jen, and my MC regards her as his friend, but not once did they do anything romantic. I mean, I roleplay my MC as gay, so...
I like how stylish Adam, Derek, Mackenzie, and Jen look in winter clothing. It's a pity the MC is never provided any. At least most of the activity is done indoors.
I'm starting to think Vince is getting the Ivy treatment. The narrative encourages me to hate him by giving me premium options to sabotage his food. It reminds me of the premium options to make the skit scene with Ivy look dramatic.
Dang, Heath and Slater giving me the cold shoulder is a reminder that I eliminated them. The irony is that Slater's still close with me. At least there's Bianca to vouch for me, and Ronan and Yvette seem to be fine with me.
Open Heart Chapter 8:
When Ethan told me to keep Naveen being Patient X a secret, I chose to keep it a promise, even when the MC's friends are asking him. Look, I know not everyone likes him, but I have to respect his privacy. Not to mention that I felt bad for him when he said he felt powerless when it comes to his seeming inability to treat Naveen, especially since he already lost Dolores.
I'm starting to respect Elijah more for his desire to save lives after a doctor saved his. I feel bad for him struggling with chronic spinal cord damage and his family's subsequent bankruptcy after paying for a surgery that saved his life. Even more so when he felt guilty for his family's ordeal even though it was never his fault to begin with. What ultimately made him earn my respect, however, was that decision to become a doctor alone after feeling inspired by the doctor who saved his.
So, the bachelorette party my MC and Bryce attended has three recycled models. Honestly, I understand that PB needs to save time, resources, and effort, but choosing already prominent characters like Scarlett Emerson? That's just bizarre. Still less bizarre compared to Nikolai Petrov's model reused in RoD even though his model, particularly the octopus tattoo, plays an integral role in VoS's story.
Ride or Die Chapter 12:
Toby should just quit the Mercy Park Crew and start a new life. Maybe a career in car painting. After all, it's an honest job.
Colt has gone the deep end, hasn't he? I never fully trusted him in the beginning, and seeing him proceeding with his job just proves his ruthlessness, even when it comes to the MC. To think of it, he's shaping to be like Icarus, who flew too close to the sun that the wax on his fake wings melted, causing him to fall to his death in the sea. I guess he'll perform an extremely risky move that it will be his downfall, all because of his pride.
So... Jason is part of the Brotherhood after all. Well, I guess you could call me foolish for underestimating the theory that he's a member of the Brotherhood and cooperating with him. After all, he's shady, and the reveal's predictable. The Brotherhood informant Foley being part of his task force is no surprise because of his character model. What kinda shocked me, however, was that Jason's entire task force are members of the Brotherhood, and the ending depends on whether MC sent info to Jason or not. Nevertheless, I find all od them except Jason rather bland because I only know that they could be worse than the Mercy Park Crew without being shown why.
After seeing people saying that Jason killed Foley, and they and their MC got trapped in the vault by the MPC, I gotta say that I'm impressed choices do matter. One thing I noticed is that consistently helping Jason (which is what I did) has him freeing Foley instead of killing him, restraining him, and telling him that MC saved their lives.
At this point, I'm going to say that as much as I hate this story for its clichés, overt focus on Logan, bland protagonist, and the predictable reveal on Jason, I begrudgingly concede that there are some parts I like. Among them are Colt and Teppei's characterization and this chapter's outcome depending on player choices.
The Elementalists Chapter 4:
The premium scene where Beckett experiments on the elements got me intrigued on how elements work in the story. I feel like it's about time I learn about the combos of the elements leading to a "higher" one (e.g. water + air = wood). Nevertheless, it would've been much better if this is free, as it reveals a bit about the plot and setting.
Man, Aster is someone who needs a big hug after her dad calls her out for mingling with humans. Seeing her and her species reeling from the outcome of the Wand Wars got me thinking this will lead to an important story arc that needs a satisfying conclusion. After all, the sour relations between humans and wood nymphs is a good way to show the gray elements in the setting. I also wasted no time cheering her up by helping her at her shop.
After the appearance of the caped lady who called herself the Blood Source, that got me even more excited on how the elements came into being. Seeing that blood is at the top of the pyramid, I think the lady is the first one created, followed by sun and moon, then wood and metal, and finally the other four, including Kane.
Speaking of Kane, as much as I like him, his behavior in this chapter is a somber reminder of the danger he poses. I like his playfulness and friendly demeanor towards the MC, but him suffocating the school staff shows his disregard for life.
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