#just want to work on mq put more emotional scenes in this series

[coolgirlmind]

All I’m begging for right now is MQ destroy Brad Jo Ian and Poppy by having a huge argument all together and realising Ian and Jo should work together so Jo can start fresh new ideas and Poppy asks Brad to work together because, she sees Brad as a older brother who really does care about work and everyone can get their shit together. Plus Ian is being a lost cause since leaving MQ because he too busy with VR and trying get his ex wife back meanwhile Poppy is eating candy and working hard I mean Ian doesn’t need comment every single time Poppy eats candy because that just wasting time on that instead of working. I mean the parallel of Poppy being judged eating candy is like times Brad probably gets judged for drinking chocolate mochaccinos.

[coolgirlmind]

Scenes I wanted for Catch the mouse if I was involved with the episode writing

1 Poppy and Brad have some kinda interaction after Ian and Poppy basically screamed and yelled at each other like I want Brad be in the corner watching them argue and Brad helps Poppy out with her game.

2 Jo and Brad having a long conversation about how they feel working at MQ and really wanting to leave their jobs and have better positions in MQ company

3 David and Ian having conversation about Poppy but in the way see David giving Ian advice and then Ian goes to Brad more advice on how to learn from his mistakes.

4 I wanted Jo have some mention of her background story because Brad said something about the mouse and it made Jo really think about that thing Brad said to her

Last idea: Dana actually trying to realise that Ian is being a dick and Dana needs to understand that Poppy is doing most of the work for Hera and not Ian. I mean Poppy needs help to build her world and not Ian’s world. Plus kinda shows Poppy is always right and she just calls a therapist and see if she can have new ways to cope. Ian definitely need therapy because after he threw the chair just kinda him coping the understanding he has messed up and now he need to re start all over again because it the best way to do it.

Over all the episode was okay just wish we had more and then half of episode just made me cry for Poppy

[coolgirlmind]

Extra ideas:

Actually need Brad and Jo have exactly argument but really shows Brad and Jo have their trauma issues and they mask them underneath their mean and evil personality’s to show they are soft and just vulnerable.

Want Ian to have actual sit down conversation with Poppy for few hours and they basically have to talk about everything and not leave the room because, they can fully learn the truth about each other basically do 20 twenty questions with each other

Last idea Brad finally meets up with Zack and he admits that is older brother destroyed him and David gives support to Brad because, he finally reached to that point he has been hiding in plain sight until now and at the end he read the last part of CW letter again to remember MQ is his found family

Scenes I wanted for Catch the mouse if I was involved with the episode writing

1 Poppy and Brad have some kinda interaction after Ian and Poppy basically screamed and yelled at each other like I want Brad be in the corner watching them argue and Brad helps Poppy out with her game.

2 Jo and Brad having a long conversation about how they feel working at MQ and really wanting to leave their jobs and have better positions in MQ company

3 David and Ian having conversation about Poppy but in the way see David giving Ian advice and then Ian goes to Brad more advice on how to learn from his mistakes.

4 I wanted Jo have some mention of her background story because Brad said something about the mouse and it made Jo really think about that thing Brad said to her

Last idea: Dana actually trying to realise that Ian is being a dick and Dana needs to understand that Poppy is doing most of the work for Hera and not Ian. I mean Poppy needs help to build her world and not Ian’s world. Plus kinda shows Poppy is always right and she just calls a therapist and see if she can have new ways to cope. Ian definitely need therapy because after he threw the chair just kinda him coping the understanding he has messed up and now he need to re start all over again because it the best way to do it.

Over all the episode was okay just wish we had more and then half of episode just made me cry for Poppy