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fashionlandscapeblog · 4 months ago
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Jean Metzinger Nu couché, circa 1946-1947 Oil on canvas.
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thunderstruck9 · 2 months ago
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Jean Metzinger (French, 1883-1956), Chat et poisson [Cat and Fish], c.1950. Oil on canvas, 13 x 9½ in.
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literaryvein-reblogs · 3 months ago
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Writing Notes: Plot Holes & Other Structural Issues
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Create chapter maps to find the main issues within your manuscript.
This method is faster than reading through your entire manuscript without knowing what you’re looking for.
Examine your chapter maps for the following…
Plot Issues
Would these events really happen?
Does the inciting incident happen early enough to grab the reader?
Are there errors in the chronology of events?
Are you able to trace the plot arcs throughout the whole manuscript? For example, is there a storyline that just drops off mid-way through?
Can you follow all your subplots to the end?
Are the events well-linked? Are there any holes in the plot that need to be filled?
How is the manuscript structured? Chapters, parts, various different sections? Is it working in this format?
Can something be done to strengthen how it’s presented to the reader?
Is there enough conflict?
Have you made the stakes high enough?
Why are these events happening?
Have you adequately described what set them in motion?
Does each individual event progress the story?
Is the plot complicated enough to sustain the story until the last page?
Is the plot too complex?
Character Issues
Whose story is this? Who is telling it? Is it engaging enough?
Do you believe the characters’ motivations? Are these clear enough?
Are the support/minor characters sufficiently developed? Is there a character you’d like to see become more prominent? Is there room for a new subplot or point of view? How would this affect the current structure of your novel?
Is the development of your characters limited by the point of view you have chosen for your novel? For example, if you’ve used a child’s point of view but need to explain something complicated, how can you resolve this?
What are the reasons behind your protagonist’s decisions? Do these link back to their original motivations?
Do the characters talk in a believable way? Does this reflect their background?
Is the reader given enough reason early on to care about your characters and what happens to them later?
Do your characters change and develop in conjunction with their experiences?
Does the reader see your protagonist at their best and their worst?
Have you made your characters as in-depth as possible? Where could you add in more backstory?
Do the backstories of your characters affect the plot? How? Make sure this is worked in throughout the novel.
Do the relationships in the narrative progress realistically?
What else can you do to make things difficult for your protagonist?
Does the reader experience a range of authentic emotions due to the characters and their interactions?
Would the character really react in this way to an event?
Is each character the appropriate choice for the role they play in the narrative?
Do you have both likeable and unlikable characters?
Is your protagonist active enough?
Are the traits of your characters distinctive and consistent throughout the novel?
Are the descriptions of the characters consistent throughout? For example, you don’t want a character’s hair to be red in Chapter 1, but blonde in Chapter 11 without any reason.
Setting Issues
Is there a strong sense of place? Are there elements of history and culture? How can these factors be developed further?
Does the setting suit the events that are occurring?
Does the setting create a sense of intrigue? Enough that the reader wants to spend time here?
Are the settings described using multiple senses?
Do you favour one sense in particular? Make sure you even this out.
Are the settings logical in terms of their relation to one another?
Are the details of the setting such as climate and conditions realistic? Does more research need to be done?
Does the setting require fact-checking?
Would a different setting be more effective?
Are the settings consistent throughout the novel? Such as the number of rooms in a house, or the position of a window?
Pacing Issues
Consistency of pacing: do the subplots, climaxes, and tension work in the current order?
Is the speed at which events unfold suitable to your genre and target reader?
Are the major events in the novel given the weight they need and deserve?
Is there enough description in the manuscript that the reader feels grounded within your world?
Is there so much description that the story lags?
What are the turning points of the narrative?
How can the tension be built further in these sections?
Examine the beginning and end of the manuscript by themselves: are they gripping enough? Do they convey enough information without giving everything away? Are they effective in terms of the author’s intentions?
Are there too many action scenes in a row?
Are there passages bogged down by too much detail?
Other Issues
Is the story accessible to the reader? Can the reader relate?
Does each chapter start and end with a hook?
Are the tone, content and language appropriate for the target reader?
Is the point of view maintained throughout the various scenes? Is it consistent?
Is there one element of the story that overwhelms the rest? Try to even things out.
Are character thoughts, actions, and dialogue balanced out with setting and description?
Source ⚜ Writing Notes & References More: On Editing
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the-cricket-chirps · 1 year ago
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Jean Metzinger
Paysage aux deux Cyprés
1905
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topcat77 · 8 months ago
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Jean Metzinger 
La Femme et l'oiseau , 1925
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dozydawn · 2 months ago
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jean metzinger
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newsfromsomewhere · 2 months ago
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Jean Metzinger - "La Femme et l'oiseau" (1925) oil on canvas
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arinewman7 · 8 months ago
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La Femme et l'oiseau
Jean Metzinger
oil on canvas, 1925
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hitku · 9 months ago
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Knitting woman, by Jean Metzinger
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womblegrinch · 7 months ago
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Jean Metzinger (1883-1956) - Dame au décolleté (Madame Metzinger)
Oil on canvas. Painted c.1910-11.
28.75 x 22.25 inches, 72.8 x 56.2 cm. Estimate: US$200,000-300,000.
Sold Christie's, New York, 18 May 2024 for US$428,400 incl B.P.
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balkanparamo · 2 years ago
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Hora del Té, 1911 - Jean Metzinger
Museo de Arte de Filadelfia, Philadelphia, PA, USA
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fashionlandscapeblog · 3 months ago
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Jean Metzinger
Joueuses de cartes, circa 1947
Oil on canvas.
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thunderstruck9 · 9 months ago
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Jean Metzinger (French, 1883-1956), Nature morte à la pomme [Still Life with Apple], c.1921. Oil on canvas, 65.4 x 92 cm.
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justineportraits · 2 years ago
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Jean Metzinger La Jongleuse 1934
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the-cricket-chirps · 1 year ago
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Henri Matisse, Le bonheur de vivre, 1905-6
Jean Metzinger, Paysage coloré aux oiseaux aquatiques, 1907
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topcat77 · 11 months ago
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Jean Metzinger
NU A LA COIFFEUS
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