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Contemplating on making another side blog for a rewrite of a specific show.... just for ideas, fun, and writing practice (bc the writing in that show makes me itchy 💀)
#its so bad. the writing is so lazy#so mamy opportunities. so many possibilities and NOTHING#hah yes girl give us nothing✨️ 😭#i wanna fix so many things it physically makes me itch akdhjfs#im so fr rn its bad. i have to look away from the screen just to breathe#and then complain to my friends so i wont start itching ASKSHFJDS#🕳️#no other show makes me this frustrated 🧍
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thinking about Jamie winning an award while he's at Richmond, and everyone on the team (coaches, players, etc.) attend the award ceremony to watch him receive it, right?
So the organizers of the event compile a bunch of videos of Jamie, like his career highlights since he first started playing and various interviews over the years about why Jamie enjoys playing football, who his role models are, who he thinks the greatest player of all time is, etc.
And without fail, in every single interview, Jamie finds some way to bring up Roy Kent.
Jamie, age 9: "I want to be just like Roy Kent when I grow up!"
Jamie, age 11: "Roy Kent is an incredible player, I really look up to him."
Jamie, age 15, in response to "Who do you think the greatest player of all time is?": "Uh, Roy Kent, obviously."
Cue Jamie (who is normally never embarrassed by ANYTHING) getting increasingly more red until eventually he just gives up and hides his face in his hands, meanwhile Roy is sitting next to him, grinning maniacally (+ the team is wolf-whistling the entire time) (they're never gonna let this go)
#jamie tartt#roy kent#royjamie#ted lasso#i want someone to write this so bad but I'm too lazy to do it myself#i can picture it now#roy would be so smug#and the team would literally never stop teasing Jamie about it#even Ted and Beard would join in#and it would be so funny bc its the only thing that makes Jamie shy#Jamie Tartt groupie agenda tbh
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This is an unlikely crossover! But one inspired by @volivolition I put our two blorbos together :)
#art#idk how to write for Voltion lol#or anything disco elysium for that case#and I’m decent at spamton speak#I still need to work on it but I got the vibe#my art#do I dare but this in the main tags?#I’ll at least tag the characters at least for me#spamton#Voltion#disco Elysium skills#NOOO I JUST REALIZED ITS PURPLE PEOPLE EATER NOT PUMPKI.#fuckkkk#it’s fine#imagine it’s spamtons error ok#I’m too lazy to fix it#why did I think pumpkin#I was thinking of the pumpkin eater#this will haunt me#also I’m so bad at sharp angles and stuff#that’s why I never draw Voltion lol pointy boi I can’t do it#my art is very round
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@fushiglow hmm….wonder who i’d draw this for all of a sudden and why… 🤔🤔
#your reblog surprised me#THREE BUNS SUGURU (STAR WARS ER JUST FOR YOU!)#theyre covering riko or smt and smuggling her places (??)#drawing this i was like ‘oh suguru’s curses in a star wars environment should be robots and stuff#so this suguru is a mecanic (he makes them from scrappy parts people have thrown out#and trash materials (and hard work 😎)#diy pokemon#because what is the cursed energy people are letting out if not junk theyre letting go of#so yeah ; basic geto takes shit and turns it useful#i do realise thats already very generic for star wars (junk robots junk robots!) but like. yknow. this guy takes shit people wouldnt bother#trying to sell. miam. junk of the junk. geto my favourite recycling bin you were designed for a luxurious lifestyle clearly (gege not me!)#(and stuff…………. but im lazy to put my vision in words rn hah..)#gojo’s probably a princess#(let’s not lie. hes basically a prince already (clan heir is a different look on him))#this made me want to write ?.??#problem is i dont remember much about star wars (watched it as a kid (we have the cds) appart from the very basic storyline… i forgot 😔#then theres the jawa’s first appearance cuz for some reason they scared me and i am marked for life (THEYRE JUST SILLY LITTLE GUYS 😭😭))#thankfully i lowkey want to rewatch everything so these issues can be fixed#(unthankfully either way the chance of me writing anything is very slim BUT WE NEVER KNOW RIGHT)#(hashtag diverging your attention from that other older post is it working /j/j)#omg glo i still didnt read balance (i think of it from time to time but im intimidated to read it because i know its right up my alley and#that i will love it and lately idk why but i need to ready myself emotionally to read peak fiction (this is so dumb but its true 😭😭))#my bad im rambling lol#WAIT FUCK SAME THING FOR BUNNY’S RECENT THINGY THAT GOT IN MY AO3 UPDATE MAIL#A LOVE STORY TOLD THROUGH THE LENS OF A THIRD PARTY MY BELOVED#(itsg ive searchef for these types of stories in advanced search before#AND NOW THAT I HAVE SOME BY AUTHORS I ALREADY ADORE .. IM- I SEE THEM BUT. THEIR CONTENTS STAY A MYSTERY. IS THIS MY BODY SUBCONSCIOUSLY FI#FIGHTING THE TEAR LOSS I WOULD GET??? IS THIS MFING [BALLING-MY-EYES-OUT] PREVENTION !? WITHOUT MY PERMISSION..!? TCH!)#my bad. ramble again o7 — see ya glo !#wip
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Thinking about OOTS always makes me more sure I'm right to hate on dove/tiger a bit I will not lie to you. Their whole relationship in that arc was weird
Its so ???? he litro barely interacts with her on the mission and then is all "i'll miss you". dovepaw does go to try befriend Sedgewhisker and Petalfur after the patrol (shes lonely in thunderclan ig) but only Tigerheart is interested and even then its like so... rushed? They jump straight into secret meetings and "boundaries will never separate us...." shit. Also what was he doing on the ThunderClan border like... huh. The whole relationship is kinda weird.... its not even negative chemistry its just hollow. He also lacks a personality really, hes just mindlessly cheery and a bit empty headed. She then thinks he used her to get herbs for the clan which is like ??? big if true (the erins do nothing with this premise)
It is kinda interesting in the later books where its obvs (to me) that Dovewing leaves TC because her whole deal in oots is about lacking agency/a choice so her actions feel like an extension of that but but... leave for Tigerheart?? im a big fan of the old "dovewing shud have left the clans drama to be a kittypet" theory tho.
#ivypaw also being said to look for him in the DF and stuff??? weird#its just like. lazy writing. the relationships in this arc are all so contrived and shite tho dont get me started on the cinderheart drama#but tigerheart/dove ive never understood#tigerhearts shadow wud have been more interesting from dovewings pov....#i have a whole draft of my reread thoughts rn tho like some good mostly bad tho LMAAOOO
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Dave and Steven's relationship is so fucking mental literally THE toxicest of yaois 💥
#luly talks#like literally everything about them is insane. fact that dave says steven is of the few people who treated him like a human yet is willing#to just fuck him over and like basically kill him#fact that steven refuses to give purps to the authorities even when he knows he's the criminal and that he WILL keep killing#like its so funny bc usually its dave the one who refuses to leave a situation but this time its phoney whom has him leashed#and its mental cuz WHY I DONT GET IT#and he even lets him do fuck all too remember my post pointing out how this is the only place where dave steals from the prize corner?#when i replay dsaf 1 and the good ending from 3 imma write my essay on steven and their relationship#(<- empty promise bc im a lazy ass)#but seriously steven is such a speciment he's as toxic as it gets in every way possible#not even outright evil just. he's all fucked up man#like he had so many chances to do things right but he only did wrong again and again#also do you guys think dave knows he's steven?#i dont actually remember if there's mention of this on the flipside#and. do you guys think steven REMEMBERS dave?#he's a gen 2 according to himself i guess so he probably has some vague memory#i like to think that's why he's so... favorable to him#LIKE THAT'S THE THING EVEN IN THAT WAY HE'S SO MEAN TO HIM#but not as mean as he is to jack whom he regurlarly kills over nothing#jack and all thef ucking other employees he literally implies bad employees dont last
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I think what bugs me the most about the type of analysis that is common in this fandom is that sometimes people are obsessed with not actually looking at choices being made by characters and instead try to project extra-textual symbolism/parallels they pulled out of thin air or use essentialist arguments to predict a certain character’s trajectory. There is already a weird tendency to blame bloodlines instead of institutions, oppressive/destructive social constructs/systems, and abusive cycles. This series repeatedly deconstructs bio essentialist ideas in a multitude of ways. Characters being viewed as monsters for the way they are born is a concept that is repeatedly torn down. There is a combination of nature & nurture at play with these characters, I admit, but it is nuanced. Your environment and your nature are in constant conversation with each other. Certain environmental factors will worsen certain attributes, while repress others etc. Your blood is not evil, nor is it pure, it just is, and your nature will be affected by your rearing, tragedies you face, and the environment you live in. Monsters are created and developed, not born. This whole concept is apparent with all the siblings in the series. Dany & Viserys are drastically different people, and make different choices despite having similar experiences and the same blood. Same can be said for Joff, Myrcella, and Tommen. Another very good example are the Lannister siblings. The twins’ idea of “one soul in two bodies” is deconstructed, and they are faced with how dissimilar they actually are. All three siblings have differences in nature, as revealed by their behavior as young children & their current values and motivations, and they are all shaped very differently by their environment. Cersei is affected by the oppressive system of the patriarchy, Jaime by the trauma due to the violent construct of knighthood, and Tyrion by the rampant ableism of the world around him. Tywin also shapes them by giving each of them their own flavor of parental abuse based on the role he wants them to play in his legacy. It is so apparent just how these characters became what they are, and how they navigate their world as a result of a nuanced combination of nature and nurturer. But in the end, it comes down to choices that they keep making. Characters on the right path can also falter sometimes, weigh their values wrong, and make bad decisions at certain points. Not to mention how thoughts and words do not speak as much as actions and actual choices that are made do. You all take bio essentialist arguments that some characters in the text make at face value, even when it is obviously bullshit. Any analysis that hinges entirely on “this character is the son/daughter of this character”, or “this thing on the surface parallels this other thing from something I read/watched”, “this character is a dragon. Dragons plant no trees”, “this character is a monster”, “this character is from this house”, “this character is related to this character” etc instead of actually looking at what said characters do or try to do is gonna lead to unconvincing arguments that are antithetical to one of the main ideas that this series is built on. To me it feels like these books are communicating that in spite of your birth, your origin, your trauma, your prophecies, etc it is primarily your choices that lead you to where you are and the legacy that you create. Cersei’s prophecy will come true as a result of the choices she makes. Dany’s many prophecies are also as a result of choices she makes, she was not just gifted with everything that she has achieved, she is an active agent who makes choices that push her a certain direction. This is also why it is weird when everybody wants to make characters have a predetermined trajectory solely based on “what” they are, or who they are related to.
Not only does George say this in interviews, it is an explicit thesis statement in the text itself:
This is the concluding statement of Jaime’s ASoS arc. Like “The things I do for love”, “So many vows...”, and “The heroes […] the best and the worst, and those who were a bit of both”, as extremely relevant it is to him in specific, it is a major thesis statement for the series as whole, and overlaps with many characters, just like how other characters also have a bunch of these overlapping arc theses. So can we please primarily look at the choices characters make and what ultimately motivated them to make these choices rather than thinking their ending and what they “are” as characters is set in stone because of the reasons mentioned. I feel like how you all engage with some of these characters contradicts the deconstruction of this kind of essentialism that is so apparent in these books.
#asoiaf#valyrianscrolls#i started writing something big about the aerys cersei parallel#and cerseis trajectory as a whole#and the arguments made for it to be dany instead are kind of wild#its pretty much done but its way too long which is also y i made this post so i dont have to say all this in there#too lazy to add character tags plus this applies to like literally all of them#some more than others based on fandom convos but like#also when jaime writes his page#it is emphasized how awkward his hand writing is#these characters and their journeys are gonna be full of hindrances and complications#and some bad choices#but that does not mean their end is set in stone#it will be whatever they chose and keep choosing
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Melian reference!!! AND Morgoth!
Tropey fake kiss to hide the escape tool! (Phew!)
The dwarves showing they aren't mindless followers but a people of shrewd wisdom!
Adar grieving lost uruk! Uruk asking questions and treated as a people and not mindless slaves.
I was sad af about the horse; they really could have just glossed past it and not focused so much on making it so visual. But one thing I do really appreciate about this show is that it does the animals honor. (It even does the orcs honor. No one is simple fodder for death.) Elrond grieved his mount and took time to bid it farewell. In the first season, Adar's horse fell -- and they made a point of showing it getting back up.
Arondir's story came too far to wind up where it wound, so I hope there is something yet to be said for him.
And Sauron's showing that he's just as slimy in a 'fair form' as he was with no form at all.
I wish the archer had had some character development. That was an epic scene, but we had no emotional attachment to her.
#trop#trop spoilers#the rings of power#the rings of power spoilers#trop season 2#trop season 2 episode 7#listen I get really bored during battle scenes so this was actually a pretty tough episode for me#I also hate gore but this show is not bad at all with that. bless#like it is my least favorite episode but it had its moments that got me#like Galadriel's FACE after Elrond pulled that move omg#but also like she said Arondir's name out of the blue and it was just a moment of *shrug* “guess they know each other”#which feels like lazy storytelling to me#that episode count is really limiting the writing here#I wonder how much they had to cut#and how much more broadly they could tell the story if they didn't have to cram so much into so little#poppy and merimac had no development#just smooches#I almost wish they could pull a Disney + and make all the storylines separate shows until they come together
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I'm not sure which writing decision I hate Julian Fellowes more for: the rape of Anna at the hands of Green, which is a gruesome affair that happens only to spawn drama for a season and a half with no catharsis at the end as the plot just fizzles out after more and more and more time of Anna not looking for any help and not talking to her husband and not calling the police on Green and yet another fuck-stupid innocent-in-prison plot, and which feels like he introduced it only because thes Bates's have dared to be happy and unbothered for a few episodes...
...or the rape of Tom at the hands of Edna Braithwaite, which is never even acknowledged as a crime in-universe. In fact, while Anna got to be appropriately traumatized for long after the fact, showing me that Fellowes at least in theory understands that such a thing doesn't just blow over, in the case of Tom, it just kinda blows over. In fact, Tom gets to feel guilty about having "participated". In fact, Mrs Hughes, usually one of the most level-headed and humane characters of the show, thinks he's "also to blame" for what happened. Uh, Fellowes? TOM WAS BLACK-OUT DRUNK WHEN SHE HOPPED ON HIM! He was so damn near unconscious that he mistook her for his wife who's been dead for two years. And she made sure he would be beyond the capability of giving consent, because she saw that he was emotionally vulnerable and used the chance to get him drunk. For all I know, she roofied him. And yet this is never treated as though Edna violated Tom; it's treated as him having stepped out of line. Honestly, I find Fellowes' ability to write a female rapist combined with his complete inability to recognize a female rapist as such rather disconcerting.
#Downton Abbey#rape discussion#it's bad enough when it's lazy character writing which it might be with Anna because he can't allow her to be happy for long#and just has to squeeze every last ounce of drama out of a marriage that would be drama-free happy on its own#but what the fuck was the case with Tom?? if you wanted this to be a blunder on his part a stupid one night stand or smth#perhaps you shouldn't have made it so clear that he was far beyond consent
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look i know lots of people have said this but i think one thing that homestuck does well when it can be bothered to is allowing women to be fucked up and awful and complex and bizarre. like. even when they’re not the protagonists. even when they’re unsympathetic. even when they’re ambiguously the protagonists. even when they decide to make themselves the protagonists. yeah anyway this post is abt vris
#homestuck#jone.txt#saw another kipperlily post and like i think the reason why im not gripped by KL is that the narrative affords her zero sympathy or even#tolerance for wacky bullshit. like let her be a bit insane#d20 has a rly bad case of protagonist snydrome#and its even lampshaded by tectonya in the seven#so for them to never acknowledge it is like… just very poor writing on the whole#i like the bad kids just fine but in a story/genre that comments on itself reflexively#it only seems to do so when its convenient and the subject of a bit#making the story lack meaningful self awareness#characters only develop when the players interact with them due to the improvised nature/lazy writing#which means that npcs etc are generally not afforded complex inner worlds unless theyre player driven#its a pov lock without any cognisance of the implications of that pov lock#idk#ANYWAY sorry not to derail my homestuck post#im just thinking abt why KL is a vriska-like who fails at vriska-ness#like she hits the tumblr sexywoman of being controversy generating (read: due to misogyny plain and simple)#but not the vriska qualities of like. actually being afforded a complex inner world by the story#its not rly that the IH stomped on the values of the story its more like#the values of the story are bad. actually#flop!
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Thinking about a time I wrote a 7 paragraph long post analysing Walter and Skylar's relationship back in 2022 and somehow it got deleted and I was so devastated and I felt so silly and useless and I stopped posting altogether.
#you know what shatters me the most#rn in 2024 i don't even remember what it was about them that i was writing about even though back then i was so passionate to say it#i had shit to say#i always did#but the truth is i was and am still going through some of the most depressing times of my life and this small blow#that is losing just TEXT of what i was thinking#something that i could have rewritten#or something that i could have taken in stride and kept on posting#was enough to discourage me from wanting to do anything#and i can't even explain it ig ik it sounds pathetic and lazy and maybe doesn't make sense#but it felt like such a blow (ik its not that big a deal but maybe it was my mental state but thats how it felt to my brain)#i want to do so much and its like my brain just keeps standing in the way and i cant tell anyone cause i know how pathetic this sounds#but goddamn i really love breaking bad so much i do#breaking bad#jesse pinkman#better call saul#walter white#saul goodman#also fuck walter white you bitch
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Does Angel Dust Have backpain from being so tall?
I imagine so, yeah. With the rest of the poor souls that arrive to Hell with less human like traits than others- like with multiple sets of limbs or other similar body extensions like longer/elongated limbs/wings/others but my brains not working at full speed
Angel Dust definitely has back pain, and honestly probably just physical pain all around both from physical and mental strain from work AND... also his Unfortunate Long Limbs and Unsupportive Back and REALLY messy Muscle/Internal Composition , Probably.
Everyones design intrigues me and its so fun to dissect... I need to draw angel some time he's so good but the extra arms.... shudders
#kinda reserved response bc hotel gang hcs are coming up im just soo lazy with writing recently its so bad#in a /j way. sinners are like horses to me#their bodies can be so fucked and maybe. maybe let an angel spear finish the job itd be less cruel than trying to fix them#ask#anon#angel dust#hazbin headcanons#hazbin hotel
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So mad about me just realizing the color pallet despite being in Sonic mode for the past like week
#I’ll repost this w/ the doodle dump later#but also feel free 2 rb now#if u want#I’m just too lazy to tag#I’ve been mostly thinking about fucking Sonic underground.#which is worse than danny phantom but for sure in the category of#’’has enough missed potential that I go insane’’ y/k?#triplets r fucking born man#plus what’s known about the production makes me want to find the asshole who ordered a 40 episode single season in 1997#expecting it to be fucking done in 1998#INSANE#it missed that deadline and didn’t come out til early ‘99 which is still CRAZY for a first season#like they were writing 2 22 minute scripts a week it was fucking bad#like u have to do so much production shit that most shows take 2 1/2 or more years for a 26 episode order#DiC sucked dick man#plus production seemed to think they were making a don bluth movie which is NOT the kind of designs u wanna be getting for tv animation#when u have about 2 1/2 weeks per episode (NOTE: NOT ACTUALLY HOW PRODUCTION WORKS. ITS MULTIPLE STAGES HAPPENING SIMULTANEOUSLY LOL)#ok I’m gonna stop bc I’m gonna try to do an underground doodle dump too and if I do I can talk there#where it’s relevant
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Finally made a Tav meetup image to match my Durge one, also after finally resolving my lag issues i could play a little farther into my Misfortune save (one day i will finish Act 3. It's just so much) which led to us finally being able to break Wyll's pact (yay!) but it also illustrated just how much Mizora gets bullied on her save. I imagine she absolutely loathes appearing in camp because of it.
I also finally get to introduce you to Baphomet! My third Dark Urge whom you might have seen before as a cameo in my Durge meetup art. For the longest time i barely had any art of her, but i've caught the bug i'm afraid so even if it's not a lot it's still enough for an introduction! (And more is certainly on the way)
(Can you tell i have a lot of difficulty drawing her? Because i do.)
Baphomet is a Way of the Four Elements (Fire spells only) Monk good Durge who is, on the surface, the most normal one out of the three. She was raised in a Lathandarian monastery as a star novice, the balance she was taught was what kept the Urges at bay for an unusually long time. This, however, was a double edged sword as when she finally snapped as a full-fledged Monk she was ten times more dangerous. Her killing of a Dawnmaster and several other novices led to her being banished from the monastery, and that's when she set off for the Temple of Bhaal. Yadda yadda main story stuff happens.
As a person Baphy is very stoic, being even less expressive than Tav; she's quiet and generally regarded as almost unreadable by her companions and instead lets her good actions speak for her. Internally there are a lot of things going on in her head though, most of them being her trying to grapple with The Urge. She's a very considerate person and tries to pass fair judgement to everyone, though can be lenient on those that show her kindness. She may not be good with words but she will do all in her power to support you.
#my art#bg3#bg3 tav#bg3 durge#tav: tav#tav: misfortune#tav:lawine#npc: fortune#durge: baphomet#karlach#wyll#mizora#orin#gortash#modern au#because i cant stop drawing these bitches in modern clothes when im too lazy to draw the armor#i feel like ive gotten better with writing lately so my bios are a lot better :) happy about it#i just realized i havent even introduced tav my main tav yet. i promise i love them i love them so bad they just have very little art#because i haaaate drawing the crackles. i know thats my own fault but surely you understand#IF YOURE WONDERING WHY SO MUCH BAPHY ART IS TRANS JOKES: when i was concepting her with friends i went hey#wouldnt it be really fucking funny if baphy woke up on the nautiloid as trans.#like “im probably a trans woman but i have to serve father so idrc about that rn”#and then she just woke up with her preferred name and pronouns being the only thing she remembers. and she has no idea shes trans#so a lot of her shitpost art is just trans related jokes because we all think its really fucking funny.#durgetash is only real for the bit btw its not something serious. once again the bit is important here
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So I have this timeloop omori au that I was planning to write for its anniversary last year but the Horrors got me so I never got to continue planning it and now that I'm into isat too, I'm thinking of either repurposing the au or just-- keeping it while also giving it to isat.
#aria rants#the Horrors of: procrastination. laziness. and the fact that it took MONTHS for my phone to be repaired#that it turned out i was more stressed out bout that than i initially thought so i couldnt get much progress on planning#the plan for the omori au was to write 6 main chapters and 1 epilogue thatd count down to the anni date#like how i did with mim but more planning cuz the au is based off of the bad end night series vocaloid song#since the bad end night series are songs with themes of timeloop and theater its REALLY fitting for isat#so i miiiight just do it for an isat au fic to be written for its anni but i might also just proceed with it too for omori#cuz even if its based off of the same song. i have different scenario plans for both of em anyway so it might work to keep both???
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Thinking about the Oldest Dream!!
Like... what are you LOL. Are you living in your new story without your mom? Do you just accept that she's gone? Do you even remember her, or did you just get kidnapped by the characters from your fav webnovel?
KDJ seems to think there's more to him than just what he seems to be. He uses language like "presumably my younger self" and "acted like a constellation" and I think 'mass of subconsciousness' was thrown in there to describe him too.
#I have thoughts!!#Many many thoughts about this#there could be more to the OD than just that and it would fit the narrative lol#but too bad so sad#its just a big hole for us to fill#SS your lazy writing will never cease to infuriate me#fml#orv#orv spoilers#omniscient reader's viewpoint#oldest dream#lialox writes#apostrophe
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