#im doin the 2nd dune book
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men really gotta stop writing fictional excuses to put "worldy" "older" feminine minds/psyches into childrens bodies just so an old man can fuck them
#like its always annoyed me because i dont dislike the thought experiment that is old awarebess in a young body its a very fraught thing thus#fascinating and all#but like#im doin the 2nd dune book#and i dont think this author realizes all of the tiny threads he doesnt keep track of for one#but for two his grasp of narrative time for someone so preoccupied with a story based largely on future vision is...#either bad or just callously ignorant#but this part i dont think he didnt realize i think he was fully aware#that aliyah is only what? 16? 18 at most id believe since he last mentioned her age at 15?#and *he* has to be what? given the fatherly notions and his station when i think paul was 15... late twenties at least???? at LEAST.#thats gross herbert
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