#ie in the original zoes sightlines were working against the flow and also pointed away from the following panels showing
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[comic page. Zoe (Black girl in a yellow sleeveless flight suit and pigtails) looks down in awe at a large glowing blue crystal, flecks of light swirling around her. She stumbles back as the crystal shoots a beam of light into the sky, blasting away the clouds overhead]
#the surface#zoe z#zoi#comic#comics#redraw#crystal#??#im not linking the original page but one of the main things i wanted to fix was the flow of the page#ie in the original zoes sightlines were working against the flow and also pointed away from the following panels showing#what she was supposed to be looking at#so here i combined those 4 panels into 2#which is showing the scene better than the close crop on her face#oooonly thing is in the context of the whole story i might want to put more focus on the clouds dissapating#but if i was redoing everything i would just like....make the next page a splash from birds eye above the floating city#the clouds dissapating more etc even showing the land below#2023#first post of 2023!#digital art#image described#character design
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