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IwaOi/Oiiwa Manga Valentine Special!
Happy Valentines Day, Everyone!! 💖💝💞 🎉✨
#iwaoi#oiiwa#my art#haikyuu!!#iwaizumi hajime#oikawa tooru#ayoko na#nagsasawa na ako sa pagmumukha ng mga bading na to *cries*#i was suffering#SUFFERING#idk how giustoart-san do this kinda things :(( HUGE SALUTE#I AM EXHAUSTED JUST BY DOING 7 PAGES OF MANGA#WILL I DIE IF I DID A WHOLE 30 PAGES OF ONE SHOT????#AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA#I need to complain on how many lifespan this thing took from me bec i deserve it#its not even clean LMAO#you guys can guess what page i lost my will power to clean my lineart#tho it adds it as its own charm ig (me trying to be positive)#like seriously i need a break from their faces#lmaaao tho i know i will be drawing them as soon as i thought of an iwaoi idea#mannnyyyyyy mistakes#writing. anatomy. grammar. background. you name it#tho the grammar might be a writing dialogue style choice (me when i lie)#lets just pretend it's a writing style#this is a “warm up” manga#that almost took my conscious and soul#HAPPY VALENTINES DAYY EVERYONEEE#whoever is reading this long rant tags (i know some certain people do) you will receive a HUGE love from me 🥺🥺#thank you for reading the manga as well! it makes me happy 🥰#Hope you all enjoyed them blushing like a tomatoooo! Happy Hearts Day everyone <3
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with the bit abt noelle mentioning berdly saying she should get a crt, berdly being a gamer and the thing abt crts being good for particular games, i could see later down the line susie mentioning offhandedly around berdly that she helped re-home kris's old crt tenna to mettaton and him immediately trying to get her help trying to convince mettaton to let them hang out and play games on it at some point. maybe if mettaton's got the confidence for it i bet it'd be interesting for berdly to drag susie, noelle, and kris over to play games on that crt for a little bit
#salty talks#deltarune#deltarune spoilers#like. gamer berdly with an interest in using crts for gaming purposes finding out that there is a crt in his town. that's something#if i werent busy with the oneshot and lacking in confidence in how to portray deltarune characters id consider writing a fic abt like#just berdly getting everyone together and susie convincing mettaton to let them hang and even play video games with him on that crt she#n kris gifted him. like. i honestly think susie would be kinda stoked at the idea of that even if it means putting up with berdly.#i cant remember if berdly remember the dark world stuff so i wonder if susie would pull him aside and be like yeah we're all calling the tv#mr tenna bc thats his name in the dark world we kinda met him n all that. he probably thinks its cool that you wanna play games w/ him btw#like. seeing mettaton's improvement and confidence gain + berdly (and noelle) getting into contact with this crt for gamin#and susie having an excuse to check up on tenna so to speak and like idk kris just. being there for the games and also since they figure#for old times sake tenna might like to see them again just for a bit. based on him recalling stuff b4 the fountain. do you see my vision#im still ill as fuck over that tv rn n i remembered th combo of gamer berdly + crts being in demand for some games + that noelle dialogue#idk how deltarunes story is gonna go in the future chapters but i kinda just thought abt this and like. yeah#someone handing mettaton a controller ajd teaching him how to play whatever game they’re on
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rewatching the entirety of bfdi and bubble is my new favorite character now along with leafy and im realizing now that im fucking obsessed with their dynamic & fucked up relationship . might be a little ooc but this is what they're like to Me
#leaf.art#i couldve given the background a slightly different color that fit better with the rest of the piece but ehhh what's done is done now#besides its meant to focus on the dialogue anyways#and speaking of holy shit it was both pretty goddamn difficult to get right but also SO SO fun to write too#i felt like i was trying to pry my way into bubble's head with this LMAO and in the end i think i succeeded .#some bits might still be a little wonky though so if you have any criticism on how i wrote her feel free to say it idm#bubble bfdi#bubeafy#bubbleafy#NOT tagging leafy bfdi or the main tag this is only for those who r as insane about bubble & bubbleafy as i am .#or that's my excuse the reality is that i'm frightened doing even this though HELP#ps. leafy is intentionally a little gray to look similar to her metal self
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I had a whole Magus & Crono mini essay written but now I need to rewrite the whole thing because of one specific line of dialogue I stumbled upon that I could’ve missed so easily. On the bright side this actually does give me way more to say I have lots of thoughts about this.
#specifically the mini essay revolves around the idea of magus hating on Crono#or it DID#and maybe still does? but less severely. slash in a different direction.#and all of Crono and Magus’ parallels.#because my goodness. THE PARALLELS.#plus general character analysis of Magus’ haterism.#and some other stuff.#anyway. I’ll write it eventually.#whether I’ll be confident enough to post it is another story#chrono posting#crono#magus#I also might throw different characters in the mix and replay the scene to see what the other dialogue is… idk we’ll see.#that probably wouldn’t even change the opinion I’ve got going actually.
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"An Hour."
• Masterlist •
Warnings: Hospital settings, aftermath of captivity, mentioned death.
Medic, despite what their job would suggest, wasn't a caregiver. They were just a mechanic working on circuits, not who carefully kept the whole mechanism running. They could fix people, but it was that. Someone would have to take over the aftermath.
Much to Medic's relief, Leader was a caregiver. A good one, even.
Too good, they lately noticed. Too good that it was starting to make Medic worried. But just like every other day, Medic knocked the infirmary door in exactly same time, before opening it fully. Youngest was asleep in the hospital bed - Medic had said Leader that it was unnecessary, but Leader brought one anyway - and at last drops of their IV.
"An hour," Leader muttered. At this point it felt like a ritual. So, without a word, Medic moved and changed Youngest's IV to antibiotics as Leader deserted the room silently. Probably to sleep.
Good, Medic thought. Leader needed it.
Medic made their way to the armchair, only to see Leader's office keys on it. For a moment, they considered giving it back. They respected privacy, but they were also curious. For the last one month and a half, all Leader did was looking for Youngest, caring for Youngest or staying in their office. The first two was understandable, but the third...
Now Medic could learn whatever Leader was doing in their office.
Medic hesitated. They shouldn’t invade Leader’s privacy—Leader had done nothing to earn suspicion, at all. And Leader never broke anyone's boundries, so Medic doing it to them was just wrong. But something had been gnawing at the back of Medic’s mind for weeks now, something beyond the usual worry for Youngest. Leader’s behavior, so single-minded, so intense, felt wrong. So wrong for someone almost obsessed with making the future better. And if there was something in that office that could explain it...
Steeling themselves, Medic turned and walked down the hall to Leader’s office. The key slid into the lock with an ease that almost felt too simple. "Where's Leader?" Medic shouted. Leader's room was wide open and Leader wasn't there.
"Went for a quick walk," Right Hand shouted back.
Medic took a deep breath. "Okay," they muttered. With a simple twist, the door creaked open. Medic slipped inside, shutting it quietly behind them slowly. The room was dim, the only light filtering through the half-drawn blinds, casting long shadows across the walls. At first glance, it looked like any other office—neat, organized, professional. Just like how Leader liked to keep everything. Medic opened the lights.
Notes. Dozens of them, pinned to a board on the wall, scattered across the desk, and even taped to the edges of the bookshelves, almost creating a wallpaper. Most were in Leader’s precise handwriting, detailing locations, names, dates, and other pieces of information that, together, painted a picture out of a detective's office. Medic’s gaze was drawn to a map on the wall, marked with pins and red string connecting various points. They moved closer, recognizing the locations as places where incidents had occurred—break-ins, disappearances, attacks. All related to Youngest.
Their heart pounded as they picked up a file from the desk. It had a picture, the person's face partially obscured, but there was no mistaking who it was. Medic had seen that face around Whumper—one of the underlings of them. The person had been found dead two weeks ago, the cause still under investigation. There were detailed reports about them, autopsies, locations, biographies... informations that Medic doubted Leader had the authority to kno let alone storing.
They set the file down, their hands trembling slightly. Leader had been gathering evidence, but it wasn’t just about finding Youngest. It was about something more.
Another photo on the desk caught their eye. Medic took it, revealing more photos, more notes underneath. Some were crossed out, others highlighted. A list of names—people connected to the kidnapping—each one with a note beside it: confirmed dead, under surveillance, possible lead.
Some of these people were no longer a threat because they were dead. Was it coincidence, or had Leader...?
The sound of footsteps in the hallway snapped Medic out of their thoughts. They hurriedly closed the folder and placed thr picture back on the desk, glancing around to make sure everything was as they’d found it. The door clicked shut just as the office door opened.
Leader stepped inside, looking tired but alert. They froze for a moment, eyes narrowing as they stared in the sight of Medic standing in their office.
“What are you doing here?” Leader’s voice was calm, but there was an edge to it, a warning.
Medic tried to keep their expression neutral, forcing a casual shrug qs if they weren’t digging through the room for the last ten minutes. “You left your keys on the chair. Thought I’d drop them off.”
Leader’s gaze flicked to the keys in Medic’s hand, then back to their face. For a moment, neither of them moved. Then, slowly, Leader crossed the room, taking the keys with a nod.
“Thank you,” they said, their tone polite but distant. “Please wait for my return next time.”
Medic nodded, feeling the tension in the air like a physical weight. They turned to leave, but couldn’t help one last glance at the desk, at the folder now lying innocently on the surface.
Leader didn’t miss the look. “Is there something else?”
“No,” Medic replied quickly, shaking their head. “Just... take care of yourself, okay? You look like you haven’t slept in days.”
Leader’s expression relaxed, a smile so soft and tender taking over. “Don't worry. Byt you should get some rest too.”
How could Medic be suspicious of them when all Leader did was worrying and caring for the team? Shoving the guilt down, they forced a smile and left the office.
-•-
Later that day, Medic was in the break room when the news broke. The television mounted on the wall buzzed with static before the anchor’s voice cut in, somber and urgent.
“We interrupt this program with breaking news. Henchman, a key figure in the recent string of criminal activities linked to the late terrorist Whumper, was found dead earlier this evening. Authorities are investigating, but details remain scarce at this time.”
Medic’s blood ran cold. Henchman—another name on Leader’s list. Dead. Just like the others.
They stood frozen, the room spinning around them. The timeline didn’t add up. Leader couldn’t have done it—they had only left the office for ten minutes, not enough time to cross the city and back. But the coincidences were too many, too pointed.
When Medic next saw Leader, they couldn’t help but study their face, searching for anything. But Leader looked even more drained than the last time, still trying to hold it together desperately. When Medic mentioned the news, Leader’s response was calm, almost indifferent.
“Tragic, but not unexpected,” Leader muttered, shrugging slightly. They weren’t even focused— they looked like they could just collapse and take a twenty four hour nap. “Agency was after them. It was only a matter of time.”
Medic nodded slowly, but the uneasy feeling in their gut only grew. There was something, something that was beyond their understanding. But as Leader walked away, Medic knew one thing for certain— Leader was doing something wrong. It was either their sleeping habits or the team had a huge problem.
-•-
Soo, have another random one. This is standalone, but I wrote this with "A Score to Settle" in my mind. Not quite part two, but I began writing with that intention.
#whump#whump writing#hospital setting#aftermath of captivity#mentioned death#proofreaded but mught have typos#spoiler alert for the next tag >#implied murder#love me some overprotective leaders#have a dialogue that didn’t made into the piece:#“Do you think im capable? i failed. i failed to keep youngest safe.#And now im failing to take care of them. Do you truly believe i have the strength to go after the culprits?#yes i want to see all of them burn for what they did but look at me#all i can do is sit next to youngest and hope that i can lift some weight from their shoulders#because i'm not enough to do anything else#ive been never enough and now im paying for my shortcomings#now if youll be so kind i want to suffer alone#because im not even strong enough to stop myself from snapping at someone who did nothing but worry about me.“#and medic gets kicked out like that. just my brain decided to make a calmer leader so this doesnt fit anywhere#might use later in somewhere but just wanted to post#seriously someone stop me from posting at night or i ramble a lot in notes#anyway#im out#thanks for reading
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Angels can sense love (and other virtues), while demons can sense lust (and other vices).
Early on, Crowley can sense Aziraphale's little spikes of lust towards him, and he maybe thinks a time or two about tempting the angel into a serious sin, maybe even something worth falling over...? But he also genuinely likes Aziraphale, more and more each time they meet, and so he holds back. Gets him to try some human food and think a little independently from Heaven's company line. Calls it a win just to have someone to talk to, to have someone who understands even a little, and even more a win when he gets Aziraphale to relax and enjoy himself once in a while.
And then, of course, that sense of lustful, covetous desire coming from the angel wanes and eventually vanishes altogether. Oh, he still senses it occasionally, especially when it comes to acquiring a particularly rare manuscript. But it's never directed towards Crowley anymore, hasn't been for decades, maybe even centuries if he thinks about it.
It's not disappointing. Not really. He wouldn't want to tempt Aziraphale into anything that could actually be harmful to him, after all. Hasn't wanted to do that since sometime back in the Old Testament times, to be honest. It was just... nice? (Ugh.) To know he was wanted, at least in that way. And now that's gone, apparently, Aziraphale's physical desire for him having cooled as they've become friends over the millennia.
(He's still got it, though, if his success inspiring lust and envy in humans when a job requires it is anything to go by. Just can't inspire it anymore in the one being he'd be particularly interested in exploring it with...)
What a shock it is, then, when Aziraphale asks quite desperately one day, after they're finished with Heaven and Hell and their attempts to wipe the Earth from existence, if he can make love to Crowley -- but then also rushes to assure Crowley that it's alright if the answer is no! That what they have now is absolutely perfect! It's only that Crowley is so beautiful, and Aziraphale feels he's half gone out of his mind at times through the long centuries trying to ignore how distractingly much he simply wants to touch him, hold him, caress him... And now that they're here, together, and trying to be honest with each other, trying for open communication, Aziraphale doesn't want to keep this to himself any longer, wants it all out in the open and to know Crowley's thoughts on the matter so that he shall know how to act going forward. It's an excited, blundering, mess of a confession, ending on a stiff-upper-lip determination that most people think is so very English but don't know that Aziraphale actually invented it and that the Brits have just been following his lead all this time.
And Crowley has no idea how to respond, questions getting caught in his throat, tangled around his forked tongue. Because, what? What?!
He watches his angel's face start to crumble as he struggles, and finally his protests take shape: He could sense when Aziraphale stopped wanting him like that! It's been years and years and years! Without a single whiff of lust coming off Aziraphale when he looks at Crowley!
Which, Aziraphale replies, is simply not possible. Because, honestly, he's only come to desire Crowley more over the years: sensually and sexually, yes, but also as a friend and confidante, also romantically. Tenderly. He quite desires Crowley in every way it is possible to do, he thinks.
And really, Aziraphale goes on, feathers a little ruffled now, Crowley needn't pretend or make excuses -- if he doesn't want to be with Aziraphale in that way, he will absolutely respect that. There's no reason to pretend he can't sense how Aziraphale feels, just as Aziraphale has been able to feel Crowley's love for him growing, starting with those bits of affection and interest all the way back in Eden, through to the very purest, most all-encompassing love he's been able to sense from him these last few years, after everything.
But demons can't sense love, Crowley has to remind him a bit tetchily, only vices! Things that lead to sin and degradation and unhappiness! So it's not actually the same at all!
And then he watches Aziraphale make a pretty perfect Shocked Pikachu Face, not that the angel would understand the reference if he told him.
But Aziraphale starts to smile after a moment, even if his eyes are shining with tears at the same time, and the angel breathes that it's not a vice to wish to be close to someone whom you love, and whom you know loves you in return.
The penny drops.
Aziraphale never stopped wanting him -- he just also started loving Crowley at some point.
#aziracrow#good omens#good omens fanfiction#ineffable husbands#this has surely been done before#not actually my usual headcanon but I had this thought#about them both thinking the other wasn't interested in sex even once they're together in most other ways#aziraphale bc crowley hasn't made a move and crowley bc he doesn't sense (sinful) lust from az anymore#...this is such a weird concept for me as an atheist. but this is the sandbox I have decided to make a home in lol#anyway#they have one braincell between them#but every now and then they might actually resolve some of their idiot issues#idk if I'll ever have the energy to actually write this into a real scene with like ~dialogue~#so have this little bit of ficcish writing anyway#my writing#my fics#fanfiction#short fiction#queer fiction#this needs more of an ending :P
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I think a part of this "problem" with the huge influx of trope-centric romances is that most people think the only way to be a writer is to write novels.
#i dont think its a problem but i dont really have another english word for it#i mean more like i think the people writing these stories who see this mass internet trend of discouraging them from these stories#deserve and should create their art/writing in whatever way they want in a way that feels good to them and everyone else can deal with it#but also many writers who box themselves into just writing novels might be denying themselves a thriving screenplay or even a musical#every person has a unique voice and story that their writing can beautifully reflect but that writing isnt gonna be the same format#Many of these books actually have great dialogue! its why the readers skip everything else lol (kidding kidding)#but you know something that doesnt require much else but dialogue and some stage direction? a screenplay#have a vague plot and setting but not much else? write a dnd campaign!#have the voice and characterization down for only one character? join an rp!#everyone should do what they want forever and have fun writing#anyway#writeblr
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Fyi I've ended up rewriting a large majority of the plotline of Red red red, why am I not dead? during the hiatus, so there's a chance of some plot holes/inconsistencies between newer chapters and old ones that may happen due to this. :/
#Red red red#for example:#I'm still dealing with some of the consequences of my former beta reader writing alot of Jackson's dialogue in the first few chapters#even tho I've seen gone back and tweaked it a bit... I'm still not satisfied. feels wrong.#Also specimen 5 (another former beta contribution) might not appear much anymore since I'm not sure what to do with it#(it was originally created just for the beta to also play a monster: since the concept of this fic was originally a roleplay)#anyways I plan on delving much deeper into themes the original plot only brushed#more horrors#and for one key scene that will show up: not choosing the least interesting option. That lack of payoff killed some of the momentum#but most importantly: I'm giving Jackson the spine that he lacked. OG Jackson had a little too much sopping wet kitten disease.
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Thinking abt Sif Odile duo looping au again and I wanna be able to plot everything out more coherently but act 5 eternally looms overhead and boy I do not wanna look up
#rat rambles#stars posting#like I have a vague idea of some of the like themes I imagine being present late game but it doesnt change the fact that act 5 isnt very#duo looper au friendly especially in this case with most of the ideas I have#I rly want it to be both a breaking point for them as individuals and a breaking point for their relationship but idk how to go about that#fully taking the rest of the party into account especially since Im not even sure if I wanna give odile her own friendquests#like I Could but I also think it'd be fun for many reasons to not#and even if I Did itd be hard to justify having both be able to happen and go wrong in one loop#and theres not rly a good solution to that I think so my best bet is probably to just leave odile friendquestless#but Id rly like to still have odile quarrel with the rest of the party in a significant way#idk maybe it can be the scene where sif comes back to the lighthouse or smth?#like he comes back and odile just completely lashes out at him or smth and the others get rly upset with her#but then theres also the whole walk through the house that I have to figure out and Im also not set on how that should go#maybe it can be like reality almost splitting as they both try to use timecraft at the same time?#not sure how Id go about portraying that in story though since the rest of the party cant rly experience that I think#Im sure theres some way you could pull that off tho Im just too tired to have any good ideas atm#and then the biggest bastard comes in. mal moments.#like I cant just put them both there! that's not how that works!#and I dont wanna just leave them mostly vanilla thats boringgggg#but Id probably have to. alas.#afterwards is also a bit fuzzy but I have rhe general idea down#me and the bestie when we both made the same wish but dont know that and have both been falling into a spiral over it#(we dont even realize that the part of the wish that was the exact same was the core of the wish)#(we both just thought that we accidentally trapped the other with us in this hell)#(we also have been actively getting worse at communicating for months now so by the time the wishcraft stuff came up we were both deep in#the no feelings talky talk zone)#(we probably should have known smth was up when everyone started consistently thinking that we had a fight every loop)#(maybe we did but we just didnt want to admit they were right)#god I wish I was more confident with writing odile dialogue I wanna draw scenes from this au so bad#it doesnt help that I got too comfortable being into a media that had like 3 fans and now ppl might actually look at what I create
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((I rewatched SW ep 3 in theaters with a friend and man, I forgot how good it is
#((like. there are moments of writing and dialogue that are a lil clunky and could've used some work#but overall i think it's good and Anak.in is genuinely tragic#and ughhhh self fulfilling prophecies are so good#also was i thinking about Gylfie during the movie? maybe fdshgkfdj#i wish i could do a sw verse or bring back a sw oc but i don't. want to interact with the fandom at all#not even with a ten foot pole#but i digress lol - I'll be around later tonight!#I'm gonna try to be on Carter's blog but i might mainly be with my ffxii muses#but i also might write Eight for a bit! regardless i should be here after i get home))
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fic talk in the tags 💝
#aaaaaaaa i have only 4 stores left to write for the advent calendar and then i'm done?! 😭#i can't believe it guys i might actually be able to pull this off 👀#i've literally just winged it day after day with minimal planning#and i haven't even had a breakdown once? gonna knock on wood here real quick lol#i've had so much fun writing all these little stories too 🥺 and i'm fairly satisfied with them as well! yes!! me!! my biggest critic!!#i'm not gonna be writing anything for a while after i get these last ones done though lol i've written SO MUCH during these past weeks#however i did write down a short piece of dialogue in finnish the other day 👀#like. literally 11 words and idk if i'm ever gonna write more but those words just...came to me so i had to write them down somewhere#(it has been peer-reviewed as 'perfect' (thanks eetu <3) and you can totally slide in my DMs if you're curious)#and the college/uni au i've been playing with practically all autumn is something i definitely want to give a try#(so far i only have some random notes and moodboards 😅)#but whatever i'll end up writing i'll do it because i want to and that's what's important 🤍#thank you so much everyone who has been reading these stories or any of my fics this year#i really am not expecting anyone to read my stories and i'm happy if even just one person does 🥺#okay sappy talk over now back to writing byeeeeee#*stories
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ughhh I wanna write something short so I can post writing but I am plagued by visions too long to be ficlets or even one shots.
#I’m still writing the Hetalia/wttt crossover but I want to get a couple chapters done before posting#I have some wttt stuff indibama#Some plat Michigan and Indiana perhaps#That floui fic that I’m missing 1 scene for#I watched some of Togo while doing hw earlier and now I’m even being plagued by Alaska thoughts#(Maine x Alaska thoughts specifically but shhh)#I have a silly Georgia thought that might work but idkkk it’s just one bit of dialogue rn
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This shit is so ass I just want it to be over
#the moment i saw it has FFX But From Wish.com my intelligence 100% just feels insulted#it was already boring this entire time but disrespecting X's point by turning it into a cheap commodity device is kicking my nuts#just spitting on Sakaguchi by trying to copy his homework in the hopes idiots will clap like seals bc they recognize the reference alone#but when hasn't msq's point been pushing out nostalgia and by the book trope slop for the sake of illiterate's money#gameplay and collectables is all this shit has ever had aside from the occasional side story or side character#i like the collectables. the gameplay is interesting enough. i have a story of my own at home.#they even ripped off IX for more HEY YOU REMEMBER FF9 RIGHT? BUY OUR GAME BC WE SAID ALEXANDRIA & MIMICKED SOME BUILDINGS#YOU'LL BUY IT AND LIKE IT JUST BC IT SAYS SOLUTION NINE LIKE ZIDANE EVEN WHEN IT HAS NOTHING IN LINE WITH FF9- YOU DUMB TOOL#the solution 9 plot is just the twist from ff9 but if it had nothing to do with anything aside from being one giant reference#it's never made to fit xiv itself and it only appears at literally the last quarter of the story with virtually zero mention of it before#and then to drag it out even more they added a sprinkle of ffx fayth but make them disconnected from the themes and have no personal connec#with the protagonist (s)#everything before this is pure seasonal anime lowest grade shounen tropes with no seasoning bc it's played so predictably flat and straight#zero novelty beyond fringe ideas that just get mentioned w/o much writing behind them which this game loves doing#they love mentioning shit just to postpone it to the last second when it's suddenly important despite having no depth attached before#saves money on actually having to write a complete story#they even got Wish.com Steiner in here lmao#if anything the time for them to rip off IX was in EW because those stories actually have themes in common to make some sense#also the way characters are expendable to the story in the sense the game forgets they exist after they play their role#is at the worst it's ever been- they drop even long time main characters like flies once their exposition is done#it's so abrupt too just when you think a character might contribute more they're already gone#this expac is everything bad about the game which makes it worse than bad- it's unbearably boring and tedious#even characters that were HYPED IN THE TRAILER literally only show up for a few lines of dialogue then leave
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I get two fucking sentences in on every new draft for every new idea lately, and then my brain goes 'hm, no, actually that's stupid/boring/cloying/not going to be something you can write at your current ability'
I am. vibrating with rage at my brain rn over this bout of writer's block. Bro we literally want to die whenever I go longer than like. a fucking week without writing SOMETHING; why the fuck are you making this harder!!!!!! Just let me write a full fucking thing even if it sucks!!! but i literally physically start to feel sick and can't push myself to keep typing as soon as the above thoughts hit. I have a stupid number of untitled, barely started to almost completely done drafts, for multiple fandoms (mostly our flag tho admittedly lmao), all of which have been started within the last maybe fourteen days.
i wanna scratch my brain out of my fucking skull lmao. free to a good home after i get it out, if anyone else wants to try and rehabilitate it
#text post#everyone tells me i should be grateful that writing comes to me naturally and I am! but also sometimes it does This to me#and the longer it goes on the worse it gets#and affects the rest of my mental health on top of it all#brain pls some of these ideas are cute!!! fun even!!! others are gonna be heavier pieces but they might turn out okay!!#but we don't know if they'll turn out okay or not IF WE DON'T FUCKING FINISH THEM#god. sorry y'all just. pls know if ur waiting on me to finish something in progress ive posted or want to see something new from me#and are upset abt the current lack of stuff. i am also upset abt it and i am working on it i swear#also i need to address this bc im running out of storage space on gdocs with all of these#so they gotta either be written and posted or given up on and deleted for space fdlkafjlasdjf#it's nearly one thirty in the morning. i should probably just go shower#aka the place where my brain immediately gives me perfect fucking dialogue like last night THAT I FUCKIN FORGET BEFORE I CAN WRITE IT DOWN#it's fine. it was some of the best dialogue and most in character i felt id ever thought of. and i can't remember it and it's gone forever.#it's fine
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Genshin (schrodinger's) hot take, it might be, it might be not
The world NPCs have a much stronger and eccentric character voice in their spanish translations, even without voicelines, than in english. I found out that so many of the weirdos I love sound bland otherwise.
You guys might be missing out.
#i've thought about it a lot#and then it hit me how written dialogue expresses a character#believe me when i tell you so many of them sound really loud without voicelines#i think it might have also happened in hsr#if it's an exclusive feature of the spanish language i don't know#but regional accents are easier to write about in english#so it may be a case of “you win some you lose some”#the npcs i liked the most are already huge eccentrics even in english and they stand out#but even the quiet stoic or shy ones make their presence loudly known in spanish even when they aren't screaming#that's all for today#genshin impact
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Nothing will ever be as painful as seeing something tagged "[character x] is scottish" and thinking "oh cool, that's exactly my headcanon", only to start reading it and immediately realise that the person who wrote it has never spoken to a Scottish person ever in their life
#just. an endless sea of och ayes and dinnae kens in place of actual dialogue#that might actually be too generous a lot of them probably arent even familiar with dinnae ken#this is a psa - if you're writing a scottish character and want to 'write in the accent'#first. maybe don't?#second please know it's not an accent scots is its own language that just happens to be mostly mutually intelligible with english#third please please please get a scottish person to look over it before you post it#hell i offer my own services i don't care if it's something I'm not familiar with or what the actual subject matter is#I'd rather beta read 10000 fics i would otherwise never touch to make sure they use scots properly#than have 1 i think sounds super cool have some of the nonsense youse seem to think is scots
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