#i dont think alternating nee and nii works so it will not be staying for the final version of this fic
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hydrangeas (the name of my demon slayer fic!) snippet upon ye... since chapter 1 is like, insanely long, i can afford to give you guys a big snippet teehee. @soleillunne
“Onee-chan! Onii-chan, look!” the brighter of the twins, Muichiro, exclaimed as he ran up to them, stumbling cutely to a stop before thrusting his arm outwards and up towards them. In it, a little flower was clasped. “It’s for you!” Amusedly trailing behind the boy were both parents and his slightly older brother, whose hand was held only somewhat securely in his mother’s. They waved with a bright smile at their parents before turning their attention back to their brother and kneeling down. “Aw,” they cooed. “Thank you Mui. That’s really sweet.” “Yuichiro has one too, but he’s too shy to give it to you,” the boy commented as he gently, gingerly placed the flower behind their ear. “Oh?” they replied, a teasing lilt in their voice as they curiously shifted their gaze from the youngest twin to the eldest. Yuichiro puffed out his slightly flushed cheeks with childish irritation that they had to actively restrain themselves from cooing at. “Is that so?” “Don’t say that, Muichiro,” Yuichiro huffed, shaking his hand free of his mother’s grip and reluctantly shuffling over to them. “Here,” he murmured, tucking his flower behind their other ear. They stared. Yuichiro knew instantly that he was in trouble. ‘Trouble,’ of course, meaning nothing serious–only that they were going to relentlessly tease him until the event became overshadowed by other tease-worthy occurrences. “You know, that’s cute,” they teased, hands reaching out and gently patting each of their heads, “you guys are the cutest.”
#✧— aphe's snippets.#Theyar e literally the cutest i am going to cry#(i was literally the one who wrote this scene.)#/LH#endearing gender neutral sibling words..... Please.#there's a couple things i'm thinking of doing to fix that issue--the issue of gendered terms and whatnot#doesn't really matter what language i use for the honorific terms because neither languages have endearing gn terms#so.... shall i just have reader be referred to by their name?#either that or i have to pick ONE term to be used. and if i do that i will probably pick the fem terms hmm#i dont think alternating nee and nii works so it will not be staying for the final version of this fic#it's just like that while i figure out what to do#may just drop the honorific use as a whole?#some demon slayer fans like japanese honorifics for english fics and others dont#personally i dont care either way. BUT it may just be easier if i drop them as a whole?#since lord and lady would have the same effect in place of -sama. and lord feels very gender neutral imo HAHAH#though i'm sure i would encounter an issue later down the line with “mr.” and “ms.”#ah well. thats future me's problem LMAOOO
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