#how does Rebecca go from ‘should I sell the club’ to ‘I sold half the club’ in a matter of days
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I have loved all the comments I’ve gotten on my post season three fic (like you don’t even know how much I have reread all of those bad boys they give me oxygen), but by far one of the most gratifying ones I’ve gotten has been:
“you made that last episode seem so much more reasonable”
THAT WAS THE GOAL
#laughing crying thank you so much whoever you are#achievement unlocked#this was my AGONY#the amount of notes I made the rewrites the editing#most of them centered around the question ‘but is this consistent?’#‘does it flow?’#‘have I given the characters a satisfying amount of internal consistency linking the events as they happen to the growth they have made?’#‘DOES IT ALL MAKE SENSE YET’#‘Roy relapsed’ even relapses have a progression. they tend to happen for a reason#also#why is there a cut on Roy’s head the night of their final practice but not even a scratch on game day?!#how does Rebecca go from ‘should I sell the club’ to ‘I sold half the club’ in a matter of days#why does Roy say ‘we have city on Saturday’ when the match is in fact the day after next#anyways#I have been biting my tongue the entire time I spent writing that chapter and now that I don’t have to anymore?#I’m definitely definitely gonna be talking about it#fic: oh god you’re gonna get it (you have not been given love)#self indulgent blogging about my own fic
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