#heisei umare

[resetmyfeelings]

[satalight]

[somanyants]

This one page is infinitely more horny than anything one of those artists who draw girls with basketball sized tits could ever hope to achieve.

[nightmarereverie]

“(Heisei Umare Character FuwaFuwa Heart Series) Charmmy Kitty strap” by Sanrio 🐰ྀི

[catboirights]

Perhaps this, too, is yuri

[nicomrade]

reposting cuz i dont wanna be a bitch in the ops notifs but this couldve easily been just 1 strip

i havent read this manga (heisei umare?) so maybe the pacing is very funny and works in the context of the manga but as it is OOC its something i kept seeing when reading 4koma recently (and garfield strips lol?) so im gonna use it as a jumping off point. no hate to it again i havent read it idk i might just adore it if i give it a try. but ok so look. (right strip 1st, left strip 2nd) the panels here go: setup blank blank punchline / punchline blank blank blank. now lets grab a page from azumanga diaoh and compare

it goes: setup development sensible-chuckle punchline / setup development sensible-chuckle awkward-silence-punchline. the "blank" does not have the same effect at all! you NEEEEEEED a punchline!!!! and you need the 3rd panel ("sensible chuckle") it preps the reader to laugh for real at the punchline, its warm-up!!!

poptepipi loves these mirror compositions- its repetition comedy!!!

this one reads more like setup / eh? / UH? / AHAH? (and also repetition comedy again yay!) i forgot what tezuka called the panels of a 4koma but thats the idea basically, each one has a function and youre free to do whatever you want with your jokes but then you have to find a rhythm thats also tailor-made for FOUR panels, not any less, not any more. a lot of garfie strips are just setup / blank / punchline or blank / blank / punchline and would work better as 2 panels or 1 panel gags like just get rid of the filler. this is the philosophy behind "2 panels ctrl alt del strips are funnier than the OG" too. but no matter what you do you still need a fucking punchline

w this in mind i reworked those first 2 strips like 3 different ways, u just swap the panels around and try to make them into setup development sensible-chuckle punchline. or whatever else pacing. its fun i encourage doing it i wont post mine here cuz its kind of disrespectful to the artist if i show em as a "heres how i fixed ur joke!!" but as an exercise in comedic timing its fun lol

[gokinjoworld]

Heisei Umare 2

[yuri-caps]

Heisei Umare probably doesn't count as a yuri manga but it's full of disaster lesbians and that's good enough for me.

i just read the first chapter and my official review is that it’s hilarious and everyone is Big Dumb

[obscure-manga-colourings]

[zdf]

[koholint]

[resetmyfeelings]

[flowerfuneral]

[nyrator]

this manga

Hatopopoko never disappoints

[nightmarereverie]

“(Heisei Umare Character FuwaFuwa Heart Series) Charmmy Kitty Plush” by Sanrio ౨ৎ

[catboirights]

While I'm at it here's some Heisei Umare strips