#he like *creates* reality around wu xie and xiaoge he gives them solid ground to stand on- their lives are already SO weird right?
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xcziel · 4 years ago
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Aaaaaa like, the very first line!!! it's so beautiful and perfect ...
With the gossamer shock of a bubble popping, Wu Xie burst from dawn-touched stillness into chaotic light and noise.
is it wrong to think someone is maybe getting a little into their pangzi-week feels?
Something in him settled with the touch, present and past realigning themselves with the smell of leather and the warmth of solid muscle. It was impossible to be lost in then around Pangzi, who was such an overwhelming force of now. 
this is such a relatable thing, am i comforting them or comforting myself that i'm at least offering *something*?
Wu Xie kept one hand on his shoulder, a useless comfort that probably did more for Wu Xie than for Huli. 
aaaand there goes the knife in right under the ribcage ...
Zhang Qiling finally met his eyes. The grief that lingered there was a well-worn thing by now, the edges rounded and softened by being passed between the three of them. "I don't have enough memories to get lost in."
!!!! iron triangle feels!!!!
We're going to fix it," he told him firmly, pushing the force of his certainty at him, because if Zhang Qiling was retribution, Pangzi was reckoning, and Wu Xie, of all roles, found himself forced to be their restraint"
god, so much of this i love to pieces but most especially the kind of hushed, intimate urgency of the little ... tableaus, i wanna say, where eveuthing is carrying on but the characters are carving out these little spaces in the narrative to communicate the really important things, it's such a physical feeling of a break in story i just... it's SO great
Intersection - Fox of Nine Tales
Chapter 17 is up at AO3!
#liu sang#dmbj#pingxiesang#ok so like i feel *almost* emotionally prepared to gush about this now? like i had my fave quotes in my drafts for a day#bc just the RELIEF of the tension i didn't even know i was holding like I FEEL U wu xie!! xiaoge is there and gravity works again!!!#and i feel sad that we don't get much of huli's interiority but then also i'm pretty cetain that after sharing all of those memories#with wu xie he's got to be a bit of a wreck internally and like has to take some time to draw back into his shell and like acclimate#to the fact that now someone knows him better than anyone ever before and the *vulnerability* of his position here like#not just emotionalky exposed to wu xie but also back in gao bai's presence? without the armor of even being able to truthfully#say he's doing his job? like wu xie could destroy him in SO MANY WAYS at this piint i would feel sick and want to sleep through#it TOO huli!!! and what's great is that the writing kind of mirrors that - like huli withdraws and the narration withdraws /from/ him#but then also the seven sentences things just killed me bc i LOVE all those bits - pangzi shaking crystal shards out of his hair like yes!!#all the stuff that makes it visceral is SO GOOD and just went back to look at the word count and omg i can't believe it's nearly#60000 words now??? and it doesn't feel like it at ALL it feels like barely any time has passed bc i'm so gripped like the pacing is so good#bc you have the big action moments but then these wonderful characterization scenes like pangzi taking huli's hand and that#description of the world just shifting a tiny bit with that simple action i just had like pangzi-focused chills bc he really does#he like *creates* reality around wu xie and xiaoge he gives them solid ground to stand on- their lives are already SO weird right?#'so much xiaoge and pangzi in this chapter' uh YEAH the breathlrss character moment where wu xie like reassures and then#immediately re-triggers xiaoge's protective instincts in just that quick stolen bit of time was devastating - just .. the urgency of it#and then both of them just wordlessly grasping wu xie's helpless fall for huli - the *understanding* between the three of them#and the way they can't argue bc they're equally horrified/angered at huli's situation bc maybe wu xie is the outward representation of#the iron triangle's morality but he *wouldn't be* the center if they weren't all in agreement in the essentials and it's so SATISFYING#that they make the jump to supporting huli as soon as they have the facts not just bc of wu xie's feelings - bc it's what's DECENT & RIGHT#and also not just bc they hate gao bai which would still be a valid reason but uggghh thinking about people taking huli's side#and anticipating how much that's gonna throw him OH MY GOD!!! and THEN!! wu-i-will-fucking-rain-hellfire-xie and his PLAN#i'm dying for his wide-eyed 'oh yes i know exactly what to do' gao bai you yappy-dog SUCKER!!!!#really he /still/ has NO IDEA who he's dealing with! if there is an additional wu xie characterization that i love it's that#'sweet smile that means people are going to die' - as a reader i enjoy anticipating the villain's comeuppance almost more than it happening#that lil interior squirm of like 'haHA you have no idea what's coming for you!' like narrative satisfaction is a real thing & it is THIS FI#i am trying not to pressure you but it's possible the end of this may literally derange! portions! of my brain! so ... fair warning 😘
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