#haydenrp

[ccxhelps]

Hey! Could we please trouble you for a shout out? We're a brand new original character town roleplay about the aftermath of the disappearance of all the small Idaho town's children. Overnight, things have changed for these folks forever. Thank you so much in advance.

Check them out!

[badbloodtalks-blog]

Hey! Could we please trouble you for a shout out? We're a brand new original character and skeleton town roleplay about the aftermath of the disappearance of all the small Idaho town's children. Overnight, things have changed for these folks forever. Thank you so much in advance.

Shoutout!

[boofrp]

Hey! Could we please trouble you for a shout out? We're a brand new original character town roleplay about the aftermath of the disappearance of all the small Idaho town's children. Overnight, things have changed for these folks forever. Thank you so much in advance.

[emiliaofrps]

Hi, could we please bother you for an opinion? Thank you so much in advance.

Personally I am a huge fan of your graphics, they look so nice, but I'm not sure I like the actual theme itself. Your side plot is really good and gripping but I dislike that you've repeated it in the start of your plot as well. Despite that your plot is actually really interesting! I love the plot idea and would love ot see how you manage to make this unfold. I think the only problem would be that you'd be missing a lot of the teenage characters that most people tend to favour (due to it being children that disappeared), but other than that I can't see problems with this.

[sirenofrps-blog]

Hello, could we please bother you for a first look review? Thank you so much in advance.

Definitely, love! Thanks for asking. Please keep in mind that what’s under the cut is solely my opinion and there may be points where you disagree. If so, I still wish your roleplay the best of luck!

URL – It’s very short and sweet. I kinda like it, however such names like Hayden, Harley, etc (anything with an h tbh) have been overly used. Either way, I like it. Plus, your icon is very clever. Props!

FIRST GLANCE – Onto your page, I immediately expect a big theme with all those notifications all over but no, instead I get a nice and simple theme. Honestly, you made it work really well and I definitely like the ambiance. The banner is a little too simple for me but I definitely dig the reflection of the letters. Good job! The sidebar is legible. I read the summary part and I kinda get what the gist of it is so that’s always good. 

LINKS & NAVIGATION – The links on the sidebar are organized and legible (most important thing with a theme like this!) I love the nav, although the background is a little dark and has no color that goes with the actual color scheme. That’s a bit alarming. Otherwise, the pages are wonderful and the lengths are fair.

DETAILS – Again, I’d go back to the navigation page and change the background. Either lighten in and add some tints or gradient that has your color scheme of yellow and green, or get rid of the image together and find a new one.

OVERALL – I normally have trouble with role-plays that use themes like this but you somehow made it very unique and simple for your own roleplay purposes. I really dig that. 

Total score ( 7/10 ). 

[indiedump]

Hello, could we please bother you for an opinion? Thank you so much in advance.

sure thing!! the graphics are a bit underwhelming for me but kudos for the perfect reflection effect. the plot is a bit..cruel? i guess you can say. i mean, you don’t see a plot based around children drowning every day do ya? but i guess it’s the mystery of what happened that keeps it unique. not a fan of the navigation/character pages but there’s not doubt that it does go with the main theme. the character photos look a little odd to me and i can’t put my finger on it. i do like the trigger warning page but incest should not be on it as incest is gross and shouldn’t be allowed period. all in all, it’s a cute roleplay but there’s things you can fix to make it better.

[milestcllers]

Hello, could we please bother you for an opinion? Thank you so much in advance.

Of course you can get an opinion! I’m already intrigued by the icon because… I don’t know. And for some reason, I’m getting a small town vibe? Okay I was right, cool! But it’s hella sad, oh my god? Very interesting twist on it, I gotta say. Like honestly, this would make for a great book. Just from the plot, I’m gonna assume this is more of an older characters type of RP, which is definitely chill. Okay, so I’m reading the rules, which are all fine, but OOC blogs can be tricky. Just a fair warning. People tend to feel left out and it’s where cliques can start. So, if you’re gonna go through with this just be wary! Oh, and I really like the graphics, they’re extremely simple but I think it works with the roleplay, ya feel? I’m kinda confused with what the age range is because if all the children were killed, I feel like there should be an age range because it would odd if there was a random sixteen year old. Unless not all of them died…. But okay! The character graphics are also pretty solid. Okay, before I go off ranting, I think this RP has a lot of potential. Somethings need clarification, like age range and what not, unless I’m just not seeing the page… but I’m going to rec it! Good luck, babes!

[danielsphantom]

Hey, could we please get an opinion? Thank you so much in advance.

This sounds so interesting and creepy. It reminds me a lot of this creepypasta I read, actually. I’ll link you to it here, if you’d like to read it. I like your graphics and theme; simplicity is kind of nice sometimes and it works really well for the plot of your roleplay. There’s a lot of potential for character’s reactions to what happened and I really like that. It seems like kind of an… emotional (?? I can’t find the word I’m looking for specifically but it works well enough) plot, but I think if you have a good group of roleplayers it’ll be really great! Good luck!