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elisajdb · 2 years ago

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Under the Waterfall

This story is for @happygochi winner of Favorite Sexy Times art for the @the-gochi-awards

“Remember this place?”

Goku looked at his wife wondering if she hit her head. “I showed you this place. I lived here for years before you.”

“Yeah, but you haven’t been here in a while.”

“My memory ain’t that bad, ChiChi, and it hasn’t been that long since I’ve been here.”

“Two years,” ChiChi told him. “Two long years.”

That Goku couldn’t disagree with except it had been three years. For a year, he was dead. When he returned, he went to the hospital and stayed a month before flying off into space. A trip Goku thought would be ten days turned into another year. When he finally came home, he had to begin training for a battle that will take place in three years. When he left Mount Paozu at twelve years old, he was gone for almost seven years. These last three years felt longer than the seven.

“It’s been a while but,” Goku secured an arm around ChiChi’s waist, “it’s good we’re back here again.”

It was great spending every day sparring with Gohan. He dreamt of this but Goku missed his wife, too. They’ve been intimate but they’ve not spent time alone as a couple since his return. He missed their walks and exploring Mount Paozu together. He missed sharing his thoughts with her and listening to ChiChi go on about things for the family.

He missed her.

And coming here, Goku thought was a great idea to recapture what they’ve missed.

They were enjoying a picnic in a closed-off area of Mount Paozu where the high mountains covered in thick, green moss acted as barriers to this tranquil world. Flowers with all colors of the rainbow decorated the entrance and created a path to streams leading to a large lake where loud, rushing water poured from sprouts in the mountains.

Goku loved his son and always wanted to be with him but he loved it when it was only him and ChiChi. Alone, he’s spoiled by his wife. She’d feed him, wipe crumbs off his face and slip in kisses between bites. She’d pamper him like she’d pamper Gohan when he was younger. “I remember the first time you brought me here.” Goku opened his mouth to be fed a spring roll. “It was a month after we married.”

ChiChi remembered that morning vividly. She noticed Goku staring at her all morning as she cleaned the breakfast dishes. The first time she caught him, Goku was so embarrassed, he fell out of bed and rambled he wasn’t doing anything. The staring was confusing but when ChiChi learned Goku never met a female until Bulma and how he was shot at and smacked by her and Blonde Lunch, ChiChi understood his curiosity to stare and worry about being caught.

That morning after countless minutes of staring, Goku approached her.

“ChiChi?”

“Yes, Goku?”

“After you finish, wanna walk with me? I…. wanna show ya somethin’.”

ChiChi noticed a pink blush on Goku’s cheeks. She only saw that when they were intimate or if she stood too close to him. Is he nervous? ChiChi didn’t think it was a big deal but understood this was the first time Goku asked her to do anything with him.

“Yes, Goku. I’d love to.”

“I was nervous,” Goku admitted. “I’ve asked my friends to do things with me. They said no. I didn’t mind, but I didn’t want you to say no.” Years of traveling the world caused some of Goku’s memories of Mount Paozu to fade. Some included memories of his beloved Grandpa. He remembered this spot and the fun he had with his Grandpa. He wanted to show it to ChiChi because he wanted to make fun memories with her.

“I can’t say no to you.” Even if she did, Goku always knew a way to turn her no into a yes. ChiChi looked up at the mountains. She smiled at a familiar sprout on one of them. “You convinced me to dive from that sprout.” She laughed remembering how loudly she screamed and how tightly she held onto Goku. “It must be over a hundred feet. I was so scared.”

“You weren’t scared.” Goku dipped a spring roll in sauce and rubbed it against ChiChi’s lips until her mouth opened to be fed. “You wanted to do it again.” Some of the sauce smeared around ChiChi’s lips but before ChiChi could use her tongue to wipe the sauce Goku licked the sweet sauce for her. “I knew then you were the wife for me.”

“Why? What happened?” ChiChi opened her mouth to be fed by Goku but he smeared her neck with sauce and wiped it clean with his tongue. Ooo. She felt his teeth nibble her neck and his hand squeezing a breast. Oh, he was in a mood today. Their picnics sometimes led to this but they haven’t finished lunch yet!

“You weren’t scared,” he whispered his hot breath against her neck. “You had a fearless drive in ya. You were different from other girls and I liked that.”

She was scared but after they splashed in the water, ChiChi was so exhilarated she wanted to do it again. “Maybe I enjoyed it. A little. Ooo,” she shivered as Goku smeared sauce on her neck. “Ah, Goku,” she moaned as she felt Goku suck her sauce-covered neck. ChiChi looked over at the rest of lunch. That will have to wait until after. When Goku got in the mood, he wanted it, and not even food could distract him. ChiChi was ready to submit herself to him as she tilted her neck to offer Goku better access. Her eyes looked down and saw Goku’s sauce-covered hands on breasts. “Ah, Goku!” She pushed him away to examine her dress. Sauce stains covered her breasts. “Oh, no.” She went to the lake and splattered water over her dress. “Oh, I hope I can get these stains out. I really like this dress.”

So did Goku. It looked pretty on ChiChi, but at the moment, he wanted it off and her underneath him. He wisely didn’t say that. Instead, he stood and shoved his hands in his pockets while watching ChiChi blot the sauce on her dress.

“Is it coming off?”

“Yeah,” ChiChi sounded relieved. “I think so.”

Goku noticed how wet ChiChi got the top of her dress. He licked his lips. If he plays his cards right…. “You’ll have to take that dress off so it can dry properly. “Wanna swim?” Goku suggested. “We can do that while your dress dries.”

The top of ChiChi’s dress was wet but it wasn’t so wet it needed to air dry in the sun. ChiChi looked at her husband, suspicious of his intentions. His eyes looked at her innocently but her instincts told ChiChi to not believe those innocent eyes peering at her. “I would but I didn’t bring my swimsuit.”

Goku kicked off his shoes and pushed down his pants. “You don’t need clothes to swim, ChiChi.” He pulled his shirt over his head. Still the same after all this time. Goku liked that. There had been so many changes in their lives lately, and Goku was happy some things have stayed the same. Years ago, ChiChi was shy to undress. They were newly married and ChiChi was still shy about those things. Over the years, that shyness faded but since he returned from Yardrat, it return. “We’re alone and I’ve seen you naked.”

That was true and it was feeling hot but not because of the weather.

Goku removed all his clothes and stood before ChiChi naked. He had his back to her which gave ChiChi a chance to be the one to stare at her husband without being watched. The changes his body underwent over nearly three years were massive. Goku always had a great body but when he died, it was as if Goku returned with a new body. Bigger and more durable.

With a wider chest and back, he had more room for muscles that were so swollen ChiChi nearly swooned when she first saw him undress. He was a buffet of muscles; big, strong and majestic. His pectorals were so big and firm that she slapped those pecs breaking out an ‘ooo’ from Goku and feasted on those large nipples with her teeth and lips strongly similar to how Goku sucked on hers.

Mine she once thought as she sucked that firm flesh with Goku panting and writhing under her.

His body was a perfect sculpture unreal to be true but the body was and it was hers. Her fingers, tongue and lips glazed over each contour and curve as the wife of Son Goku thought it was her duty to familiarize herself with this beautiful body again. Nothing outshined the other; each piece of his flesh got equal love. Nothing deserved special treatment or more of her love except for that ass.

Goku’s ass.

That juicy firm butt squeezed as if it knew ChiChi was watching it. Mesmerized, ChiChi’s mouth watered as her eyes wouldn’t leave the firm posterior of Goku’s backside. Oh, she could just bite it!

Again.

ChiChi was not one to fantasize or be obsessed with a particular body part of her husband. She loved all of him equally but there was something about Goku’s butt that did something to ChiChi. She wanted to get her hands on it and squeeze it. She wanted to smack it and often did when they were alone. She wanted to bite it and hear Goku groan her name on his lips. She wanted to stare at its perfection and fantasize about all the wicked things she wanted to do to it.

“ChiChi…. “ Goku was looking at her. When did he turn around? He had that wicked smirk on his face that read he knew what she was doing. “You’re looking.”

Ever since Goku learned of her obsession with his butt, he wouldn’t let it go and used it to his advantage. “I was thinking.”

Not a lie but not the full truth. “You were looking and since you were, don’t you think it’s fair you undress so I can look at you?”

Yes, but she wouldn’t tell him that. “No. It’s not appropriate.” Oh, boy. She shouldn’t have said that. That only made Goku determined and when Goku was determined, she lost.

“ChiChi, get undress.”

“I’m not getting undress.”

“Oh, yes, you are.”

“Oh, no I’m not.” He became so cocky. What happened on Namek and Yardrat that brought out this change in Goku? It was a hidden swagger about him that oozed with confidence that made her so….. so…..

So wet.

Oh, no. ChiChi saw Goku wiggle his nose. He smells her. Now he knew and that always spelled her end.

“You’re getting undressed or I’m taking your clothes off. Trust me…..” he lowered his voice to the raw deep tone he used with her when they were intimate. “You don’t want me to undress you.”

“Are you threatening me?”

He smiled at her and ChiChi felt her sex tingling. Ooo, it was starting to feel good down there and she hadn’t been touched. “What I’m suggesting isn’t a threat.”

It wasn’t a threat but ChiChi knew if Goku undressed her, she wouldn’t have any clothes to wear going home.

I could wear his.

But that would mean explaining to her six-year-old son why she is wearing Daddy’s shirt and what happened to her clothes. She couldn’t have that. Nor was she in the mood to see the disgust of his green babysitter who was catching on to the activities she did with Goku.

ChiChi stepped out of her shoes. She reached under her dress and removed her underwear. Goku frowned seeing the lace garment slide down ChiChi’s legs. That should be his hands doing that. Goku pouted. “You’re no fun.”

ChiChi frowned as she opened her dress. “I’m getting undressed.”

“Yeah.” His eyes were on her chest as her breasts bounced free from the confines of the soft garment. “But I wanted to do it.”

ChiChi folded her dress and neatly placed it on the grass. Naked, ChiChi shielded herself by covering her arms over her breasts. She lowered her eyes so she couldn’t see Goku looking at her.

That bothered Goku. Was ChiChi embarrassed?

Goku stepped into the lake near the waterfall where the water reached his knee. He waved her over. “Water’s perfect. Get in.”

Arms still covering herself, ChiChi got into deeper waters away from Goku until the water reached the tips of her breasts. It wasn’t the first time ChiChi was shy with him. He noticed since his return ChiChi has been shy with her body. Kissing was always welcomed but when he wanted more, ChiChi insist the lights be off. If there were daylight, she wanted him to close his eyes or they be intimate under the covers. This has caused accidents like Goku slipping and missing ChiChi in the shower and nearly cracking his head open.

Goku went to ChiChi and pulled her away until the water reached her stomach and her breasts were on display before him. “Don’t hide from me,” he gently told her. “I wanna see you.”

ChiChi looked away from Goku. She could feel her cheeks warming as she asked a serious question. “Goku, do you like what you see of me?”

“Huh?”

“Do you like my body? Does it make you happy?”

“Yeah. You think it doesn’t?” Goku didn’t think he gave ChiChi a reason to doubt his attractiveness to her. “I touch ya.”

“I know but you’re so different and I’m still the same.”

“So? I still like ya and I want ya.” Grabbing ChiChi’s hand, Goku placed it on his swollen penis. “Doesn’t that tell you how much I want ya?”

It should but ChiChi wasn’t sure. “It shows I’m attractive for you but maybe I’m not good enough for you and you’re settling because I’m your wife.”

“Huh?!”

Guess it was time to talk about it. ChiChi didn’t want to. She accepted it because she didn’t want to hear Goku confirm it, but now it’s out, he will be insistent she tell him what’s going on in her mind. “I never felt threatened by anyone on Earth but you were dead for a year and spent a year on other planets. You came back with a different body I made love to. You were bigger and stronger….. and not pleased with me.”

“Where did you get that idea?” Goku didn’t like being accused of something he didn’t do and he never told ChiChi he wasn’t pleased with her body.

“You didn’t say it but I saw it in your eyes,” she told him. “The first night we were intimate after you came back, you had this look in your eyes. You look stern, kind of annoyed like you were angry with something. I figured it was me. I wondered if you still thought I was attractive. I started wondering other things like your reason for refusing Porunga’s wish.”

“I told you I had to control being a Super Saiyan.”

Maybe if he hadn’t given her that look, she would believe him but she couldn’t and sought another reason for her husband’s delayed return. “I can compete with women on Earth but I’m not sure I can compete with beautiful dead women or alien women stronger than me.”

“Ya ain’t competing with anyone but you, ChiChi.” As for how he looked at ChiChi their first night together, there was a reason but Goku didn’t know he was doing it. He’ll have to explain that. “Is this the face you saw?”

ChiChi gazed at Goku and saw his face changing. He had that stern, annoyed look again. “That’s it.”

Dammit.

“It wasn’t because of you, ChiChi. It was because of me. When I came back, I thought I had my new powers under control. Then I tapped ya and learned I didn’t. When you let me touch ya, I realized I missed an area to control.”

He spoke in riddles. His eyes and voice were in pain. ChiChi reached out to gently touch his face. “What do you mean?”

Goku closed his eyes as he prepared to show ChiChi.

The lake shook as if suffering a small earthquake, but ChiChi didn’t move. She kept her hand on Goku’s face. She still didn’t move it despite feeling his skin heat up. She saw his hair flowing and his eyes flickering between the coal black she knew and the teal she didn’t know. She hadn’t meant to pull away but the sudden burst of light and explosion of heat bursting from Goku pushed her away. ChiChi shut her eyes from the blinding light before slowly opening one eye at a time.

She saw her husband glowing as bright as the sun. What the……?

“This…..” Goku gave her that same gaze she saw that night. “….is a Super Saiyan.”

ChiChi heard about it from Gohan but in her mind, she never thought of a physical change to Goku’s eyes and hair. She only thought it was a physical change with his body.

And oh, my did it swell!

“On Yardrat, I would suddenly change. A lot of times I was triggered by my fight with Freeza. I would get angry, lose control and cause damage until I got control of myself.”

From how he looked, ChiChi believed it. He looked so intense and raw with anger. “That’s why you didn’t come home.”

“Yeah. I thought I controlled it but when I saw you that night, I was triggered in a different way. I remembered what happened when I tapped ya so I thought if I blew up I could hurt you again.” He depowered to his base form. “So, when I looked like that, I was forcing myself to calm down. I’ve been working on it.”

“I see.” So, that was why. ChiChi couldn’t stop the smile from growing on her face. It wasn’t what she thought. She was so happy. ChiChi took Goku’s hands and moved them closer to the waterfall where the water reached their knees and Goku had a full view of ChiChi’s beautiful body. “Sorry, I almost cause you to blow up that night.”

“No, you’re not.” She was smirking at him! Now ChiChi knew she could make his body blow up into a lightbulb, Goku grinned knowing his wife’s ego will grow from this. Not that he minded. In terms of looks, his ego was big, too, thanks to ChiChi’s constant praise of him. “You’re feeling good, ain’t ya?”

ChiChi pressed her body against his. “I am.”

She was rubbing herself against him, deliberately stirring his body. “Ya gonna take advantage of this, too.”

ChiChi nodded as she raised herself to be kissed. “I will,” she promised.

“Good.” It was how he wanted it, too.

Goku kissed ChiChi without hiding how he felt for her. ChiChi opened her mouth and Goku gave her his tongue. There was a gentleness in his assault but undeniable need as he groaned low in his throat and swept his tongue past her teeth commanding her surrender.

Goku’s right hand pressed against ChiChi’s back while ChiChi’s fingers clamped tighter in Goku’s hair. He angled his head to one side for deeper contact and kept a firm grip on ChiChi’s leg that hooked on the left side of Goku’s waist. In return, ChiChi felt the hard length of Goku’s erection. Their tongues thrust together, hungry and needy for each other as blissful heat build in each other that even the cool waters lapping at their legs couldn’t cool them down.

Somehow ChiChi thought Goku felt hotter and bigger. This sudden heat sent pleasure to ChiChi’s center. Her sex tingled; her body trembled and she felt burned. In a good way. Opening an eye, ChiChi saw Goku glowing again. She smiled. She did have that effect on him.

While ChiChi grinned with glee, Goku worried. If he wasn’t careful, the raging inferno inside him will burst free and burn ChiChi. He didn’t want to hurt ChiChi or scare her from him in this condition.

As if sensing his dilemma, ChiChi broke the kiss but still held Goku close to her. He was worried; fearing he will harm her. She needed him to calm him. “Give me your heat, Goku. I’ll control it.”

What was she saying? She couldn’t control this. She wasn’t a Saiyan. “ChiChi…. I can’t.”

ChiChi wouldn’t take no for an answer. She rubbed her moistening sex against his stiff penis. Sensual friction. Intense pleasure spread into Goku. He groaned at the heady sensations ChiChi sparked in him. His body was getting hotter; the intensity of being a Super Saiyan was growing. “ChiChi…..” he groaned begging her. “Don’t.”

She kissed him again with her surprising assault taking over his mouth. “Give.”

“No.” Dammit. She was rubbing him faster, kissing him harder and oh no, her hand was sliding down his back to his weak spot. “ChiChi…..” her name ripped from his throat wanting ChiChi to keep going but also wanting her to stop for her safety. “Don’t.”

“Trust me,” she implored him as her fingers pressed that weak spot. Goku felt his body snapping and his control relinquishing to ChiChi. A calmness came over him as he felt ChiChi take over their lovemaking. His body was hot but not burning. He felt depowered but waffling between his base form and Super Saiyan. He didn’t worry about ChiChi being burned. Somehow she took his heat. Did she calm him or absorb some of his heat into herself? He wasn’t sure but when he opened his eyes he was shocked to see ChiChi’s hair still black but elevating.

Was she? Did she?

“Goku,” ChiChi murmured between their kisses.

That soft murmur spurned his body to prickle in delight and need for her. He returned to kissing her but his body wanted more of ChiChi. He still kept a hand on ChiChi’s thigh to hold her up but the hand on her back moved to knead a breast.

The moan that came from ChiChi had his thickening penis pressing tighter against ChiChi’s opened sex for some relief. The moisture pooling from between ChiChi’s legs drenched the head of his cock. He needed to get inside her. He needed to wrap himself in that warm, wet and tight heat.

Their kisses didn’t break as Goku grabbed ChiChi’s hips and hiked her feet over the water to dangle in the air. “Straddle me,” Goku commanded.

ChiChi obeyed settling her legs around Goku’s waist and placing the tip of his cock against her sex. The sensation of hard flesh against slick flesh rocked ChiChi. She wanted him in her as much as him but instead of plowing in her deep, Goku pushed her up until her breasts were perched above his hungry mouth. Still with black hair, Goku gazed his wicked teal eyes at ChiChi as he captured a nipple in his mouth. He sucked. He licked. He bit. He drove ChiChi mad with need, forcing her to ride against his cock without penetrating. She arched and strained against it, wanting, needing him inside her.

With wicked eyes, Goku captured her other breast and bestowed upon it the same treatment of sucks, licks and bites, leaving ChiChi to rub harder and faster against him. “Goku….” she whimpered against him. “Don’t tease…. Give….”

Her back arched and her words broke out in a cry as Goku suddenly slammed himself into ChiChi all the way to the hilt. No more foreplay was needed. No going slowly. They were both too far gone for that. What they wanted, what they needed was raw, hard and fast loving. Goku pulled out and pushed in. Hard. Over and over. In and out. They were kissing each other again with their tongues battling for dominance. Their nipples rubbed against each other’s chest in delicious friction. Their bodies were getting so hot. They were getting so close. Savoring Goku’s frantic thrust, ChiChi opened an eye. Because of her worries, they loved each other in the dark. She couldn’t see Goku or the emotions on his face as he made love to her. Now ChiChi wanted to see it. She wanted to watch his face; see his concentration of driving himself in her body; see the need and love in his eyes as he gave himself to her.

She saw a glimpse of the Super Saiyan in Goku. She saw his raw need and strength; glimpses of the beast he kept hidden. It excited ChiChi and sent her sexually stimulated body over the edge. She screamed his name as her sex squeezed Goku’s; her slick and heated nectar saturated his hard length, spasming until she pulled Goku with her.

“ChiChi….” Goku ground out as erupted inside her. He muffled his roar by clamping his mouth onto her neck and sunk his teeth into her skin as his twitching cock filled ChiChi’s with his potent, Saiyan cream.

Afterward, Goku maintained the strength to keep them upright. ChiChi slumped against Goku in pure satisfaction. Her face pressed against his shoulder and her eyes gaze lazily at the waterfall behind them. The coolness of the water was what her still-heated body needed.

“Wanna go for a real swim?”

“Mmm,” ChiChi shook her head and pressed a kiss against his mouthwatering chest. “I rather stay in your arms.”

“Hmm,” Goku murmured. ChiChi smiled when she felt Goku’s lips press against the top of her head. “ChiChi,” he spoke seriously, “this Super Saiyan may not be the only change I undergo. I may have more transformations in me but I’m gonna only want you. You got that?”

Oh, she got that. Never again would she doubt Goku’s feelings for her but soaking in her husband’s heat, having his strong arms hold her, ChiChi felt she needed another lesson of assurance. “Could you show me one more time?”

Goku grinned at his love. “I’ll show you ten more times if I have to.”

#Goku #ChiChi #GoChi #gochi awards 2023 #sexy times #happygochi #dragonball #Dragonball Z

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secretsofdbz · 2 years ago

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It's me again lol

For the character thing, Goku

Five hundred years later, but finally this is out of Draft Hell!!

Give me a character and I will answer:

Why I like them: Goku is a flawed protagonist with a simple but extremely effective mindset!

Why I don’t: His flaws aren't usually addressed, which is a shame.

Favorite episode (scene if movie): His observing skills when he trusts Tenshinhan will win against Tao Pai Pai in the 23rd!

Favorite season/movie: I love him in the 23rd Tenkaichi Budokai

Favorite line: "Kamiccolo-sama!"

Favorite outfit: 59 jacket my beloved

OTP: GoChi :D

Brotp: Krillin once more like Gohan, Goku and Krillin are just so good to one another.

Head Canon: Goku is smart but only for very specific things that matter to him.

Unpopular opinion: Goku isn't a good person, intrinsically.

A wish: let him retire as a protagonist!

An oh-god-please-dont-ever-happen: Showing up to save the day as the last and only option....

5 words to best describe them: fatherly, loving, martial arts genius, tough, reactive

My nickname for them: Monke!

#ask meme #goku #sorry it took me ages life happened lmao

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dragonballwish · 3 years ago

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She can’t actually sneak up on him, but Goku likes to let her come and mess with him

#skinship beloved #dragon ball #goku #chichi #gochi #novgochi #my art #art #wishpost #wishartstuff

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robynx · 2 years ago

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Love 💕

Just an oldie of my babies. ❤️

It’s been too long since I’ve shared art of them, I am working on some new stuff, but yet to finish them. New Year’s resolution? Finish them 🙈

#love love looooove #my beloveds <3 #look at those smiles #look at them #i love them #gochi #goku #son goku #chi chi #son chichi #dragon ball #dragon ball z

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dbzebra · 2 years ago

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Ship ask gochi ? ?? DID SOMEONE ELSE ASK FOR GOCHI ? If someone else already did then uhhhhh k18

i didnt get asked for either one so I wil do both!!

gochi-- I like it a lot. To be 100% its not my favorite, Im much more of a Goku fan than a Gochi fan, but its sweet. My favs are early/pre Z era and End of Z gochi. gimmmeTheir entire relationship is very very misunderstood and misrepresnted in this fandom (thanks large in part to Super) and its not fair because its a really nice ship. Goku very clearly loves her. and Chi-Chi is such a ride or die, I love that about her. Shes so loyal and devoted to him ad her boys, love them fr. also lowkey childhood friends to lovers which has my whole heart

K18- underrated gem!!!! beloved ship!!!! Seriously so sweet. I love how 18 is just smitten with him but acts all tsun about it. so so cute. Krillin is THE ride or die. Both romantic and platonic. I love Goku most but as a friend I want my man Krillin. ANYWAY they deserve each other (affectionate) 18 had her freedom taken from her when she became an Android, and i love that Krillin was the only one to show her kindness. like sure dude was horny af (lets be real who wouldnt be, 18 is a baddie) but still, the scene when he crushes the remote and tries saving her and 16 is so nice. for all of SUper's fault's, it gave us some great moments with them. Also FUUUUCK the fandom for how they treat this ship into some cheating shit. Legititmately the worst shit ever.

#thank you for the ask!!!!#goku #chichi #gochi #krillin #android 18 #k18 #ship ask meme

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maiikawriter · 4 years ago

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1, 5, 10, 20, 30, and 40, for the ask :)

Thank you for the ask @dbzebra! ❤️

1) when did you start writing? My oldest fanfic dates back to 2014, but I’ve honestly been writing ever since I was a child

5) how many words do you write per day? About 3k? On days I’m not drawing. I’m usually finishing a first draft of a one shot or single chapter in one sitting

10) origin of your username? Maiika (まぁいいか) comes from Dragon Ball. If you feel like digging, I have a post on this blog that tells the whole story, but the short version is this Japanese expression for “whatever” encompasses Goku’s easygoing attitude I love about him so much

20) do you write in your native language? Yes. The furthest I’ve ever gone with trying another one is the Japanese I’m integrating into my Yakuza AU for the atmosphere

30) first fandom you write fiction for? Dragon Ball. Canon didn’t give me enough gochi, so I had to do it myself 😂

40) what do you think your writing speciality is? Alternate Universes and long plotted fics. I will never tire of finding ways to integrate beloved characters into different settings in ways that fit them and mirror a canon story

#asks #Dbzebra #FanFiction #my writing

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songochiox · 4 years ago

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late night sweet GoChi ❤️ to dream 😴 of my beloved

#goku chichi gochi 悟空　チチ　悟チチ　dragonball #ドラゴンボール #dragonballz #ドラゴンボールz #dragonballsuper #ドラゴンボール超

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oopsbirdficced · 7 years ago

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@de-gochy asked: Here are some, I hope you don't mind. 13. (“You can’t keep pretending it didn’t happen, cause guess what? It did!”) Aioria + Milo (brotp only) 20. (“I think you’re just afraid to be happy”) Camus/Milo 50. (“Oh god, I need a drink”) Camus + Hyôga

Featuring my Siberian Family!!! Camus is a deeply awkward man.

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“Oh god, I need a drink.” Camus slumps into an armchair in his grandmother’s living room. Aleksandra pats his hand, looking terribly amused.

“What did the little gremlins do this time?” She asks in a gently mocking tone.

“Baba,” he grumbles. Then he sighs. “They dyed the dogs. I think Milo gave them the dye. My sled team is now bright orange, Baba.” His dear, beloved Baba Sasha merely laughs at him. Cackles, more like. He sighs heavily. She pats his hand again and stands up.

“I'll make some tea. Are the gremlins here too?” She asks. Camus nods.

“They get to unhook the dogs,” he informs her. She nods approvingly.

“I'll put some vodka in your tea.” She tells him, and goes to prepare lunch. Camus is not allowed in Aleksandra’s kitchen when she is cooking, because he tries to help, and inevitably disaster strikes.

Presently a small blond head pokes around the corner, and Hyôga shyly comes in, twisting his fingers together. Isaac runs past in the hall, headed for the kitchen, predictably. Camus frowns at him, a little concerned. He thinks Hyôga might be having trouble adjusting, but he doesn't know how to ease that. He's only been with Camus for about four months now.

“Are you okay, Hyotchka?” He asks. Hyôga looks up through his eyelashes at him, biting his lip.

“Are you really mad about the dogs? Misha said it would be fun, and he made sure the dye was safe.” Hyôga says softly. Camus sighs softly. Hyôga sits in the corner of the couch, watching him with big, soulful blue-violet eyes.

“I'm not mad. It was a surprise, and I might have overreacted. I raised those dogs from puppies, I'm a bit protective of them. But I'm raising you now, too, so I'd be just as upset if someone dyed your hair without telling me first. I mean, you can dye your hair if you want, but you're a bit young for it.” Camus tries to explain. “Like I said, it was a surprise.” He says lamely. Hyôga nods quietly. Camus chews on his lip. “Listen, Hyotchka,” he says gently. “You don't have to stay here if you don't like it.”

“But I have nowhere else to go!” Hyôga’s eyes go wide and he looks panicky. “My father never acknowledged me! Mama’s dead at the bottom of the sea! Please don't send me away!” He's practically crying. This is why it was a terrible decision to put Camus in charge of children. He stands quickly and sits by Hyôga on the couch, cuddling him close a little awkwardly.

“I didn't mean it like that,” he rushes to explain. “I only meant, if you feel uncomfortable and you can't get over it, I can find you someone else to train under. I know many people, after all, and anyone would be lucky to have a dedicated boy like you as their apprentice.”

“Oh.” Hyôga thinks about that. “I do like it here, though. With you and Iska and Baba Sasha and cousin-Misha, and other-Misha, and Baba Masha and Baba Katya.” He says, naming Camus’s cousin Mikhail and his grandmother’s two best friends, Maria and Yekaterina. “Besides, you told me we're the same, right? Half and half.” Hyôga gently tugs on a lock of Camus’s red hair. “I'm half Japanese and half Russian, and you're half Russian and half French.”

“That's right. I just, ah, wanted to make sure you were still okay.” Camus says warmly, stroking Hyôga’s fluffy blond hair.

“I am, I promise!” Hyôga says, bright and determined.

“Come get some lunch!” Aleksandra calls from the kitchen, and Camus pulls himself to his feet and gives Hyôga a hand up.

“Come on, Hyôtchka. We can't keep her waiting!” He says lightly, and Hyôga nods, practically skipping to the kitchen as Camus ambled behind him, not even minding the orange-dyed dogs.

#saint seiya #cdz #cygnus hyoga #aquarius camus #siberian family #dog sled team #they're samoyeds #white dogs are easy to dye?#fanfiction #fanfiction requests #drabble #drabble request #I love baba sasha #original characters #oc: baba sasha

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tigerlover16-uk · 7 years ago

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As someone who likes hearing your thoughts on DBSuper and anything DB related in general, how do you think Toyotaro's influence in the DB world will be remembered? Honestly the man has done nothing but disappoint by writing poor plot points while dissing many characters and putting Vegeta up on a pedestal. Granted, he's not the first writer to commit these mistakes, but if he keeps this up he'll never make it big in the manga world. Think he can make a comeback with the DBSuper manga?

It’s still strange to hear people actually have interest in what I have to say, but gratifying nonetheless. Thanks for that.

And honestly, God only knows on both accounts. Public opinion on things can radically alter within weeks, and greater time and reflection can give fans a lot of time to look deeper and re-evaluate their opinions on certain works, for better or worse.

Ken Penders was once a beloved writer for the Archie Sonic comics, with many of his stories being longstanding classics. Then his stupid lawsuit happened that resulted in all the characters he created being ripped out of the comic haphazardly, forced a reboot that nobody wanted, and was probably a factor in the recent unceremonious cancellation of the comic right before a 3-part story could be concluded and any kind of closure could be had on anything. So as soon as all that nonsense turned him into the anti-Christ for the Sonic fandom, people began re-reading his work now as more critical adults compared to as impressionable children and realizing that a lot of what he wrote, while there were definitely some merits (There’s a reason people were angry so many of his characters and ideas weren’t allowed to be used anymore), his writing actually had a ton of problems and some of his stories were outright stupid. Endgame gets the worst of it, going from a well regarded would-have-been ending for the comic that changed the series forever, to a subject of mockery for it’s numerous plot holes, weird character decisions and just overall messy story.

On the other hand, we have the Star Wars Prequels. People HATED those movies with a burning passion for years since The Phantom Menace proved a let down for many, and I mean they violently HATED everything about the movies and insisted they killed Star Wars as a whole.

Yet nowadays with the Force Awakens re-invigorating the franchise as a pop cultural juggernaut and yet splintering fan opinions further, many now admit that the outcry to the prequels was WAY overblown. While a lot of old school fans still hate them, many are now willing to admit they did have good ideas and moments and were more mediocre than bad, and there’s a generation of people who grew up on and love the movies more than the original trilogy (Myself included) that can more comfortably admit to liking them and discuss why out in the open without being attacked and ridiculed (Mostly).

The movies are still huge base breakers and will always have the reputation of being disappointing follow ups to the legendary original trilogy, but after Clone Wars proved to everyone that great things did and still are coming out of that era in the timeline, most are willing to admit that the movies weren’t as damaging as they once thought.

Both examples go to show that anything can happen with time. We can make predictions, but we don’t know for sure how something is going to be regarded five or ten or twenty years from now. Doctor Who was a complete joke after it’s initial cancellation and before the revival came around, now it’s a beloved mainstay of pop culture in and outside of my home country again. Even Dragon Ball GT, while not well regarded, is generally seen in a more forgiving light by more people now than it was for years after it’s initial airing here in the west.

Truth is for most of the time he’s been writing the manga, Toyotaro has actually been popular and liked by the fandom. Right up through the end of the Future Trunks saga portion of the manga, the man has had a swarm of Dragon Ball fans passionately insisting that his is the “True” canon of Super and superior to the anime in every way. There are still people that think that way.

It was only about the time he got to Goku Black’s first confrontation with Vegeta that a lot of people really started doubting him, thanks to how ill regarded manga Black is by most in the fandom, especially compared to how beloved he was in the anime even by people who don’t like the saga. And then came the revelation that Toyotaro re-used panels from his Dragon Ball AF fan manga for the series, and apparently incorporated some ideas from it, basically literally trying to canonize his fanfictions and apparently basing Goku Black’s personality on his OC Xicor (And as we’ve established, that worked out SO WELL for him), and suddenly a lot of people realized something was up.

Which paved the way for a lot of people that had been critical of the manga up to that point, such as @dragon-ball-meta here on tumblr, to shed some light on a lot of his questionable writing practises. His treatment of Goku in several instances that made him out to be more dismissive and in several cases annoyed with his children in particular starting to gain notoriety, which hit a breaking point when chapter 27 came out last month and caused an uproar over the “Goku didn’t know when Gohan was born and Vegeta called him a terrible father” nonsense that basically looked like it was canonizing the “lol, Goku’s a bad father” meme (The most disturbing part… Toyotaro has apparently said that Goku is his FAVOURITE character… yeah… let that sink in).

I think that was the final straw for many that basically turned the man into a joke for a huge portion of the fandom. It was one of the worst controversies I’ve seen in this fandom for quite some time, so naturally just about everyone was talking about it. The Japanese fandom I’ve heard was really ticked off about it especially, given Goku is still the most beloved character in the franchise over there, even being recently voted the most beloved anime hero by most age demographics in the country.

So, his reputation has already undergone a major shift since he started writing the manga. He still has his fans who will stick by him through thick and thin, but many people meet him and his work with a lot more scrutiny than they did before, and many people consider him a joke (Gochi fans especially).

If things continue the way they have been, I feel he’s likely to be regarded as “That fan artist that draws good stuff, but shouldn’t have been hired to write an official manga because while he had a few good ideas, he REALLY wasn’t up to the job” that’s what it’s looking like anyway.

Could he make a comeback? Who knows, despite my own outrage with the Goku moment last chapter and my issues with how the Zen Exhibition match is apparently being handled so far in the current chapter, the guy did have a good idea in giving us a more fleshed out introduction to the Gods of Destruction at the start of the Universe Survival saga. For all we know despite these issues, his handling of the rest of the story could actually turn out to be really great and people might prefer it over the anime. Anything’s possible, really. How many people thought My Little Pony’s latest iteration would become one of the most popular and talked about cartoons of the decade?

I kind of doubt that will happen. My problems I’ve already brought up aside, the manga cut out Krillin’s character arc, all of Gohan’s scenes, didn’t adapt the Resurrection F arc (Meaning it didn’t properly build up Frieza for his comeback here, so the manga can’t function as a self contained story with only the original Dragon Ball manga being necessary to understand things that happen in it), cut out the Hit two parter further building on his character and abilities, and further ironing out his rivalry and odd friendship with Goku, completely botched Frost’s character compared to the anime, while also screwing Piccolo over badly in their fight, as well as removing most moments featuring the supporting cast and even reducing Future Trunks to a foot note in a saga that was literally designed as an excuse to bring him back, and is known for rushing through the story compared to the anime in a bid to catch up considering how ridiculously behind Toyotaro has gotten thanks to the monthly schedule.

Which is an especially bad thing if he does that here, considering this saga has to accommodate the majority of the Z fighters getting character moments and good fights, including re-introducing Android 17 after a long absence, as well as introducing and fleshing out slews of new characters. And given his alterations to the Zen Exhibition match which really look like they’ll hamper Gohan’s role and screw Buu over completely, and his poor handling of the Super original characters that aren’t Beerus, Whis, Gowasu and Botamo in the last two sagas, I find it likely he’s not going to do a great job with most of them. Heck, I fully expect Krillin to get knocked out instantly as a joke rather than helping to knock out two opponents with Roshi and 18 and holding his own against Majora.

Again, I could be completely wrong and he could do a good job, and I’m just being judgemental and jumping to conclusions. But I’m finding it hard to be confident that he can make up for his set backs, even if he does end up doing some things better. Which isn’t saying much, his last two sagas he wrote did a few things better than the anime, and they were still worse stories overall.

If he does turn things around and actually writes a really good or even great saga and generally cleans up his act going forward, I could see Toyotaro making a comeback in the eyes of the fandom and being remembered in at least a more fond light than he is now. But if he screws up as badly as I fear he might and like he’s been doing lately, I can only imagine his standing in the fandom getting worse, and at best he’ll largely just be forgotten and ignored by most fans when Super finally concludes, or he’ll be a laughing stock. How that’ll effect his career in professional manga writing, I don’t know, but it likely won’t do him much good.

I guess this whole thing is a learning experience for fans wanting to start working on the actual properties they follow. Even if they’re extremely talented in one aspect (Toyotaro with his drawings) and have passion for what they’re doing, that doesn’t mean they’re guaranteed to do a good job if they’re on writing duties, and they better put their absolute best efforts into things and think things through clearly, because their contributions WILL be scrutinized and they will have a significant impact on the franchise in general.

A lot of fan artists and fanfiction writers do great stuff and deserve to be respected, I know people who have written stuff that’s better than professionally published stories and in some cases are better than parts of the series the fans were adapting from. But there’s a REASON why fanfiction writers aren’t usually hired to write for the works they follow, and why it’s often considered a bad idea. And Toyotaro in many cases has done a good job of proving that point.

I really don’t hate the guy, whatever you may get from how I talk about him. I just want to make that clear for everyone, especially anyone who likes his work reading this. I kind of envy him as a fellow fan for getting to work on writing an official Dragon Ball story, I’d die for that opportunity, and I will still give him credit wherever it’s rightfully due, especially with his art. I just wish he thought things through better and didn’t make as many questionable choices despite having so much more time and being in a better position to plan things out than the anime writers had.

Will Toyotaro make a comeback? Good question, probably not, but we’ll see. I’ll say this though, for all his problems his adaption and the things going on in and around it is at least interesting to talk about, and at least we’ll have some nice artwork and drawings of all our favourite characters to look at however things turn out.

#dragon ball super #dbs #dragon ball #dragon ball z #toyotaro #dragon ball gt #goku #dragon ball super manga #dbs manga

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saiyanprince541 · 8 years ago

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You’re my everything

Summary: After the defeat of Majin Buu, Goku vowed to return home and settle down with his family, once again. However, after seven long years without her husband, Chi-Chi has serious doubts about where his heart truly lies. Can Goku show his wife that he still loves her, just as deeply as ever and is here to stay, no matter what?

A/N: My submission for GoChi Week 2017, "Prompt 2: Longing" (read the fanfiction.net version here).

Surprise gift for my friend PrincessChiChi99 (slightly based on some of the discussions I've had with her, @saiyanb, @maiikawriter and a few others, in the past). The is my first attempt at a GoChi fic in two years, so please go easy xD. Also feel free to check out my other GoChi fic. :D

You're my everything:

Majin Buu was at last defeated, thanks to the combative calibre of Goku, the tactical prowess of Vegeta and the staunch bravery of Mr. Satan and the redeemed, rotund alter-ego of that pink fiend. More so, all the inhabitants of Earth and the planet Namek owed themselves a huge commendation, for having generously offered up a share of their Ki, in order to help vanquish the sinister being that threatened the entire cosmos. The world could take a deep, reposing breath and revel in the peace that it had finally earned.

A short while after the hard-fought victory, all the heroes who'd gathered together on Kami's lookout, returned home with their respective families, deciding to take the rest of the day to reorganize themselves, before the morrow's celebration. A lot of answers and explanations were due, by two hotheaded women in particular, namely, Chi-Chi and Bulma. Vegeta knew he'd be on the receiving end of a verbal whiplashing, from his shrewish wife, for the callous cruelty he'd exhibited, during the Martial-Arts tournament as well as the extenuating explosion that followed, in his first fight against Buu. Goku, on the other hand, was as clueless and complacent as always. However, hours later in his humble above of Mount Paozu, the rustic Saiyan felt increasingly perturbed. Though Chi-Chi was initially head-over-heels at the prospect of her husband returning home and settling down with her and the family, she barely knew how to act around him, once the early sense of excitement died down.

For seven-anguished years, the Ox Princess had to raise her children all by herself, longing for the presence of her beloved, while he was off larking in Otherworld. Such thoughts and misgivings flooded her mind, as she lay in bed, staring up at the ceiling, in contemplation.

"What's wrong, Chi-Chi?" Goku asked, concern and worry lacing his vividly dark irises, as he gazed upon his wife. Chi-Chi gave him a fleeting glance, before her eyes returned to the ceiling.

"It's just- I don't understand why you left me alone, for all those years." She muttered forlornly. "You're here now and I can't even begin describing how happy I am to have you back, but-"

She paused, a moment.

"But- what?" Goku pressed.

"I don't know, but for some reason, I can't help but think that if I stare at you for too long, you'll just disappear." She let out a dejected sigh. "It's weird, I know, but even then-"

"Hey, I'm not going anywhere." The burly Saiyan vowed, girding his sinewy arms around his wife. "I promise."

Chi-Chi was unable to suppress the distinct shudder of pleasure that escaped, as she found herself trapped within the loving clutches of her happy-go-lucky husband. All those doleful years, she'd yearned for this moment, to be held inside those strapping arms once more and now that it had finally arrived, she hardly knew what to do or how she could possibly handle it, if he decided to up-and-leave her, yet again. With a breath of surrender, she wiggled about in his grasp, till they were face to face.

"You say that now, but do you realize how difficult it's been for me, these last seven years?" She wound her slender arms, around his muscled neck, her lips quivering and eyes glistening, with unshed tears. "Sleeping on a cold, empty bed all by myself, every single night and watching Goten grow up, without his father? What made it even worse was that he looks just like you. Every time I saw him, he reminded me of you and everything you were missing. It broke my heart, knowing that you weren't there to see him come into this world, to hear his first words and to watch him, take his first steps. Heck, until recently, you weren't even aware of his existence. No matter how powerful you are, Goku, you can never bring back those moments. They're lost forever."

The Saiyan could only stare at her apologetically, as a minute of tense silence swam by.

"I- I never really thought about it that way, Chi-Chi." He confessed, eyes downcast in abjection, consumed by sheer remorse. "I- I thought I was protecting you."

"You thought wrong!" The raven-haired woman exclaimed, somewhat bitterly. "Hurting me was bad enough, but what about Gohan?! The poor kid spent a whole year, blaming himself for your stupid decisions! Do you even know just how much he looks up to you, how much he loves you?!"

Goku's heart sank to his stomach. He honestly hadn't expected such a strong reaction, from her.

"Are- are you upset that I decided to come back?" The Saiyan asked, in a defeated voice. At those words, Chi-Chi's expression instantly softened.

"No, of course not." She replied, placing a hand on his cheek and running her thumb along the hardened crook of his jawline. "What upsets me is that you left in the first place." She continued, more sombrely. "You say it won't happen again, but how can I believe that, after all this time?"

Another short pause followed, before Goku decided to say say his piece.

"Chi-Chi, I'll probably never understand how hard it was for you and looking back, I know that I definitely made the wrong decision."

"More like the worst decision." The Ox Princess rolled her eyes. "But, at least you admit it, so I guess that's a start."

"What I did wasn't to avoid you, it was to protect you, even if that meant giving you up." He earnestly stated. "Believe me when I say this, it was really hard for me too. You have no idea how much I missed both you and Gohan."

"How can you say that, when-"

"Please, Chi-Chi, just let me finish." The Saiyan went on. "At the time, I thought that by staying in Otherworld, villains would be less likely to attack the planet and in the off-chance that it did happen, Gohan would be strong enough to take care of it. But, I suppose coming back here and seeing things for myself, helped me realize just how badly I'd miscalculated."

"Oh?" Chi-Chi quirked a brow. "How so?"

"Well, despite his amazing potential, I see now, just how much Gohan hates fighting." He replied. "He just doesn't have the same passion for it that Vegeta and I do, for example. If he'd used these seven years to train, he'd easily be stronger than the both of us combined, but I understand now that he has other priorities and I shouldn't come in the way of that, nor should I expect him to fight the bad guys, while I'm off, having adventures in Otherworld. He doesn't need that burden on his shoulders, not when he has other dreams." The Ox-Princess couldn't help the smile that lit her face, at his acknowledgment. She'd never expected such words to escape his mouth, not ever. It made her heart radiate with joy. "It's my responsibility to protect you all and I know I can't do that, by being absent. I looked on from Otherworld, when Majin Buu killed you and afterwards, did the same thing to Krillin, Bulma and everyone else, all because I wasn't there to stop him." He grimaced at the horrendous memory. "I'm so sorry that it took so long for me to realize my mistakes, but that's why I'm here now, Chi-Chi. I know I don't say it very often, but I really do love you." Goku fastened his hold around her, as her smile grew bigger. "I'll always protect you, no matter what happens. You're everything to me."

"Oh, Goku." She cried, tightening her own hold around him, as she nuzzled her face in the recess of his neck and wept a stream of joyous tears. "I love you too."

"I know Chi-Chi, I know." He smiled broadly, rubbing her back up and down. Seconds later, she pulled back and pressed her lips against his. Eyes widening a moment, Goku chuckled and kissed back, re-familiarizing himself with the alluring process, before steadily slipping his tongue inside the warm caverns of her mouth and roving about, as he reveled in her fine, luscious taste. His hands roamed downwards, running along her soft, smooth contours of her thighs, before firmly grasping her rear end. Just as he was about to slide his fingers beneath her panties, however, Chi-Chi took hold of his wrist.

"Wait Goku, I-"

"What's wrong?" He asked. Usually it was her that initiated the "fun stuff" and she'd never rejected his advances, in the past.

"It's nothing, I just- I don't know, I just don't want to do this so soon." She said. "I'm still getting used to you being here, so let's not exceed second base, just yet. I wanna savor this and build slowly, till it feels right, know what I'm saying?"

"Okay sure, no problem hehe." The Saiyan let out a goofy laugh.

"That's my Goku." She smiled and captured his lips in another kiss. It would certainly take a great deal of effort to make up for all the lost time and memories and while it did sadden her that it took all these years for her husband to finally acknowledge the true depths of his blunders, she was glad he did and she truly hoped that it made him a better person.

A/N: Hope you guys enjoyed! Had a lot of fun, with this one!

I know there're a lot of contentions, with regards to whether or not Goku ever kissed Chi-Chi, but this is based primarily on the DBZ script, not DBS. In DBZ he does kiss Chi-Chi, off-screen, during the Androids saga, which is confirmed in Daizenshuu, so uh- yeah. Plus, I prefer it that way xD (what married couple doesn't kiss?). :D

Lastly, a big thanks to @redasuki and the others, for organizing this event! :D

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