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waterfall-ambience · 1 year ago

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reworking chapters 20 - 23 of perpetua rn. i'm still keeping the old versions around in a separate doc but the character development in those ones felt a little off. damien shrank back too quickly, the aquarium thing would be better material for arc 4, and luna's talk with avery was getting too long and complicated.

#perpetua progress notes #imo the kids feel more like themselves in the rewritten version. avery especially bc it's fun writing him being passionate about stuff #but also at this rate damien watching the owl house / atla and re-evaluating his self-worth might become an actual plot point????#i dont. i dont know.#fun fact the perpetua script hardly has a written outline apart from the main story beats of the ex plot #its just a game of connecting the dots and planning things in a way that hopefully makes sense while also being open to new stories #like idk luna having a parental relationship with avery was not something i initially had planned. esp not a year ago.#but its in there and here to stay bc i love the idea of luna being generally resigned to his fate until avery was born.#and suddenly he had someone he wanted to protect. not like 'the world' or 'future generations' or even the other members #(who chose to perform to entertain the gods even for a little while). but an actual person.#uh. about minerva and luna as avery's parents. i think even if luna is kind and easy to talk to minerva still plays a bigger role #in avery's personal life. rn he's trying to be independent so he talks more to luna but after losing damien he goes back to his mum #at least for a while. but its a long while.

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