#fnaf: rewrite-l

[bonnielunkas]

they live rent free in my mind

( og post found here hehe )

[toothlesstdm]

Gonna ramble a bit more abt my SB rewrite actually :3 !!

Some screenshots ive already shared but im elaborating on more!

My friends and I talked about why Vanesa would be looking into Fazbear entertainment in the first place and I was thinking she was some sort of detective/investigator for a few years before quitting the job, though once she hears about the new VR game that was being developed on she got interested (+she had heard about the locations a lot when she was younger) & started looking into things which all led to her testing it out (this repeats a few things from the screenshots before but i elaborate on stuff further here;

(bit abt the mimic below)

------ which therefore leads the Mimic to learn and pick up on more things and . well. gestures at Ruin!! i'm still working on writing out stuff for Ruin so please bare with me haha :'D

(I'm settling with one of the two first options for the ending part!!)

WILL EDIT THIS MORE IN A BIT AS I GO BUT

[astramachina]

finishing a quick thing before i hop on a plane tomorrow and turns out i have written 19 whole fnaf fics....... i am flabbergasted. that is just one fic away from beating the sonic movie for most fics i've written for a single fandom........... help me

[strawbubbysugar]

I'm confused about the So(u)l rewrite a little bit, are you reworking it to be non-fanf? or just non-dca? Or is it to pitch as a publish-able work? If you're going that route will the original stay up when you're looking to publish or will it be deleted?

I’m reworking it to be it’s own original thing, no dca, no fnaf! To pitch as a publishable work, yes! :D

The original fanfiction will stay up, but the so(u)l rewrite will be deleted once it’s published (if I get that far hsfgs)

[charbles]

In your AU who is your all time favorite and why?

Anon, I've been thinking about this for hours, I'm NOT joking, This au has been around since 2018, its a very special thing to me, its gotten me personally through ALOT of shit, and its one of Me and Ricks (@galacticaldisaster) first au's/rewrites we've EVER done together, this au short is SO SO important to me which is why its SO HARD just to choose one character, you feel me? On top of that Rick and I try to implement literally EVERYONE into this au, we Cherry-pick from books, we include EVERYONE from AR, there are GENUINELY so many options!

My favorites bounce around alot due to whoever i'm focusing on developing and the likes but i think i've got a solid tie for #1! and ive got reasons for why its a tie :]!

Chris is my favorite out of all of the characters i've written purely because he makes me very sad, I think i did the best job writing him as a character, hes balanced in the sense that hes a heartbreaking character and yet i think he stays child-like in essence, hes got reason for what he does but he goes about it like a 6 year old would, a very scared 6 year old

Which brings me to my second favorite of all of the characters, Richie. Richie is this au's FNAF 3 Phone dude, I havent really talked about Richie too much, besides the mention from last night. But richie will ALWAYS be on top, mostly because he is the very first character i wrote for this au, WAAAYYY back when i was 15, the very first picture i EVER drew of this au was of Richie Scott, Age 17, Threatening to hit someone with a lightning mcqueen Croc. Richie and Phillip's (@galacticaldisaster s phone guy) whole concept came from a game of Garrys Mod where we were being little idiots and beating the shit out of eachother with fnaf character models! I also just think Richies silly :]

Legally i DO have to give you all my favorite of Ricks characters;

You all obviously know springtrap/william, absolute motherfucker, but RICK. RICK HAS THE AUDACITY, THE G A L L to both turn him into the saddest dad you've EVER met, and the scariest and i mean, SCARIEST William ive ever read. seriously, dudes believe me, Rick's writing for his devolve from a dad/ business man to murderous deranged killer is GENUINELY my favorite, I've seen alot of interps of william, and maybe im a bit biased, But Ricks is my favorite.

Now Phillip is in the same vein of Richie, hes the phone guy and was made during a game of Gmod via rambling, but Phils character and story is genuinely very very :[ i love him, he is my favorite white boy, Phillip my beloved little corporate slave turned Man Fuck This Place >:,[ i wont talk about his story too much, but its sad, and i fucking adore him and will kill for him

an honorable mention for ricks, who i will not be sharing pictures of is Jeremy Fitzgerald, because rick is the ONLY person i know who has implemented the fact jeremy carved his fucking face off and also once again? i love him. hes a FUCKER.

HONORABLE MENTIONS BELOW CUT!!

my FAVORITE fucker to draw is malhare.

look at this fucking idiot, i love him, and yet he is ABSOLUTELY TERRIFYING. HE IS A MENACE. this guy and his bestie in au is ARE ABSOLUTE FREAKS. FUCK UP YOUR LIFE FLAVORED FREAKS!!

annnnndd currently my favorite character to write for is Vanny and the Tape girl (Delilah!) :]

i will not be giving context to this image :]

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[ponds-of-ink]

All right, cool.

*cracks knuckles* Here we go again. This is going to be more hypothetical (and rambling) character analysis more-so than a theory, but it’s what I’ve got. Buckle up, because I have many thoughts so this is gonna be l o n g and off-the-top of my head.

Older followers of my blog may remember that months before Security Breach was out, I was tossing around the idea that Glitchtrap and William were separate by the time of Help Wanted all the way to Security Breach. My reasoning back then was pretty much “oh well Golden Freddy/Cassidy is really determined to hold William back and Glitchtrap has a different voice according to the State of Play trailer. Ergo: they’re not the same person”. I even dubbed the theory “SplitWill” a la WillGrief and all that.

Older, … maybe “wiser”, and now realizing that OP’s official hypothesis might be correct (I can only hope), I think I need to rewrite my idea a little bit.

So, I’m going to backtrack to FNAF 6. Why? Because, unlike FNAF AR Springtrap, Scraptrap sounds much more hesitant. He’s ominous as all get out, yeah. Definitely wouldn’t trust this man to work my office shift at Freddy’s Pizza Place. But like… He’s more in the camp of “oh yes I’ll hurt you out of duty/reputation” more so that AR Springy’s “oh yes I am going to hurt you and enjoy shambling around your KO’d body”. Almost as if he’s starting to have second thoughts about the whole operation Scrap Baby/Liz and him have set up.

And then, after the smoke and dust from the sinkhole plummet clears, William’s doubts have definitely intensified thanks to UCN. Cassidy has made sure that he is not going to escape so easily. Chipping him away down there in that weird void place— wherever their souls are. “Night” by painstaking “night”, our Purple Guy’s soul has broken down from sheer unending stress and fear— A feeling we never get when playing UCN ourselves because we can l e a v e. The only reprieve he most likely got was whenever Cass went to Old Man Consequences for a fishing break, and even then he was screaming for Henry and Mike.

With that setup given, let’s go over our boi from Help Wanted real “quick”. During all the emotional breaking William’s still enduring, Glitchtrap is made through… some soul-splitting and/or agony-and-code hybrid stuff. Whatever he exactly is, one thing is clear: he’s “born” with only Afton’s malice and determination. He attacks anyone he doesn’t need/gets too close to his plan, if the therapy tapes later on are proof enough like I’m betting they are. He even belittles Vanny while at least Scraptrap was all “these guys are fascinating :0” with his own cohorts. This is, in short, the William everyone thinks of— Personality-wise, at least. Cold. Controlling. Only smiling when people he targets get hurt. So… Pretty much a parallel to Eleanor from Fazbear Frights, minus the Circus Baby-ish stuff.

Now, what in the world does any of this have to do with OP’s point? Well, I say all this because Security Breach’s Burntrap pretty much acts like the Agony/“Trash Rabbit” from Fazbear Frights. He’s slow, s doesn’t move much, and gets defeated after a blow from a main character. We understand why Frights!William is kinda clunky, though. He’s clearly hanging on by a thread, most likely having to follow Eleanor’s orders until she ditches him. And, after that, he’s emotionally shattered… But, um, I’ve already covered that last part in a separate rant so I’m not gonna go over that again. Point is that Frights!William being so weak makes sense in hindsight, but not Burntrap. Why is that husk of a rabbit frail too?

Remember when I said a paragraph ago that Glitchtrap is a parallel to Eleanor? Wellllp, I’m going to say that the same situation that happened in Agony’s Epilogue is pretty much happening here too. Glitchtrap guides William along like Gregory’s other enemies, this time reminding him about who he’s supposed to be. Or, in William’s own mind, who he used to be. This is why Burntrap only reaches out a hand to Gregory before being snatched by the Blob. He’s just… going through the motions now, since he has nothing else he can do. He’s a pawn in his own complicated chess match thanks to this new complication.

And it’s not just a book parallel that I’m spitballing (it is, but I have a teensy bit of proof). In Security Breach’s own audio files for Burntrap’s fight, there are two sets of laughs. One, more human and pained— almost as if he’s going to cry [and I really do mean it this time this isn’t a possible reach like that Scraptrap line]. The other, much more monstrous and hoarse. Now, why would there need to be two sets of separate and distinct laughing sounds if the devs weren’t originally trying to tell us something with them? Like, say, William being as much as a Glitchtrap victim as Vanessa by now?

Time will tell if Ruin follows through with this premise or if both of us are completely wrong and William is completely “fine” as Glitchtrap. But, seeing that Steel Wool might bring Vanny back and Glitchtrap would need to be there for that to happen… Ohoho, am I pumped to see where this whole “William being a pawn” thing ends up this time. Will we have to save both Vanny and Will? Is Glitchtrap our new game-timeline villain since he’ll definitely have a vendetta against us, the player/the Ruin Girl? Or will this be the one where, besides a few stories in other SB DLCs explaining other aspects, everything wraps up? Again, time will tell.

Anyway, thanks for sticking with me if you’ve made it this far. I have no idea if I followed OP’s point or went off the rails. If it’s the latter, I’m deeply sorry.

So.... when do we get to talk about the Canon implications of unwilling participant Afton... when are we, as a fandom, going to discuss...

[bonnielunkas]

doodled the missing kids for rewrite!! specifically the missing kids from the 87 location ( yeah there were two incidents whoopsies )

okay so!!

gil is toy freddy

calem is toy bonnie

annie is toy chica

sylvia and albert are both mangle

[bonnielunkas]

they went to the aquarium :]

[bonnielunkas]

finished with the rewrite ref sheets!!

surprise!! the phone killed almost a dozen children <3

i was debating on letting people know if rodger was purple guy and eventually i just said fuck it, we're gonna be upfront about it

[lyssentome]

I have two main wips at the moment, so you're getting facts for both >:)

Heirs of Starlight

- it was the result of fifteen-year-old me being bored in class. It started out as little dialogue snippets in the margins of my notebooks lol

- this wip went through some WILD changes. Like it went from zombies and magic to magic royalty. Why? Well because I wrote the first edition on my old phone's notes app, and then that phone broke, so i lost all of that. I tried re-writing it as much as I can (which wasn't much) so it had a total rewrite.

- the title was supposed to be placeholder... but bro i don't think it's a placeholder anymore...

- i literally threw together all my favorite magic tropes and stirred it into a soup in this. Glowing eyes? Check! Emotion-controlled magic? Check! Psychic magic? Check! Horrific possible damages if one puts an effort into it? There's p l e n t y.

- there's some elements of technology infused with magic and mundane magic use and it's the sort of stuff that fascinates me for some reason.

Operation Defiance

- Ren Sims is a character born out of me having the thought of, "Hm.... what would it be like if I have a character with all my sisters' personality combined?" and I'd grown attached to them.

- Confession: this series is partially inspired by late/new-fnaf era... please don't judge me.

- I made a riddle mini-game as the hacking mechanism in this IF. It's not easy but the satisfaction that overcomes me when everything works is insane

- Most of the advanced technology present in this story is eco-friendly. Solar and kinetic energy are especially commonplace.

Hey everyone!

I’d love to learn more about everyone’s stories! So let’s chat a bit!

If you want, come and tell me your favorite fact about your wip! Or if you can’t possibly decide on that like me, just any random fact(s) about your world/story you’d like to share!

You can either reblog this post or send an ask, both are fine for me!

[bonnielunkas]

back at it w some more rewrite art!! this time the phone dude, jacob scott, and some minigame-y sprites for everyone!! ( including characters i have yet to make refs for, yippee!! )

( for reference ; rodger is phone guy!! penelope and ceaser are two of jeremy and fritz's coworkers!! penelope is also jeremy's big sister :] )

[bonnielunkas]

say hi to the main rewrite boys; jeremy, fritz, and mike!! :D

( for clarification on mike, he comes into town and meets the other two boys in the 80's and then works at freddy's in the 90's )

also in 1993 jeremy and fritz are 24 and 25 respectively, jeremy keeps working for freddy's while fritz quits )

[bonnielunkas]

Maybe 🐓 or 💖?

okay!! imma do both :]

🐓 :

this one has. multiple answers so i'm just gonna talk about all the aus the animatronic thing applies to, hope that's okay :]

so in lp and rewrite, for the core 5, it's ( mostly ) the usual. gabriel is freddy, susie is chica, jeremy is bonnie, fritz is foxy, etc etc. and then it deviates when you get to golden freddy.

in lp, it's cassidy and evan, like it is ( presumably ) in canon. meanwhile, in rewrite, golden freddy is andrew and kelsey ( the latter of which wasn't killed by rodger but shhh )!! andrew doesn't stick to golden freddy often, if at all, but kelsey does cuz it's part of their whole deal

and then in terms of the puppet, charlie is puppet in lp, and cassidy is puppet in rewrite.

and then in rewrite, the toys are also possessed!! there's a post about them somewhere on my blog, but to summarize ; gilbert is toy freddy, annie is toy chica, calem is toy bonnie, and albert and sylvia are mangle.

and then in most of my other aus it's either the animatronics aren't haunted ( restless + sitcom ( sitcom doesn't even have animatronics ) ) or it's just taking from rewrite ( anything hpsverse ( hps, top, eftp. etc ) )

💖 :

hpsverse has. a lot, since there's a MUCH larger cast compared to most of my other aus. i'm just gonna go over the more important ones ( aka hps and b-team, but other characters will probably be brought up as i see fit lmao )

also i'll be covering all different kinds of relationships :]

romantic : toby and pete / sportsmix, obviously. and then of course we also have sarah and millie, hudson and stanley / hudstan, and reed and shelly!! and while they aren't as important to the story here, micheal and jeremy :]

platonic : oh god where do i begin.

so, of course we have bteam!! but there's also;

julius, sarah and abby

julius and pete

toby, reed and tabitha

reed and pickle ( which is just canon but shhh )

devon and oscar

kelsey and andrew

oswald, gregory, cassie, chuck and mott

whatever toby and literally everyone he works with got going on

likely more i'm forgetting

and then in terms of family ;

the afton-fitzgerald-thomas family ( micheal and jeremy are the parents, with their kids being gregory, cassie and patrick. eggs is there too, he's their uncle, and he's got mina :] )

evan afton and jake, making jake part of the afton family

devon and mott being bio siblings that got separated and adopted by two different families

mick and sarah being cousins

julius, alec and hazel

reed, alexa and oswald

the canon siblings of course, toby and connor / pete and chuck

kelsey and their alive family ( stacy and kyle )

[bonnielunkas]

sins of the father.

[bonnielunkas]

get weezer'd