#finalcritiques

[hollyoxleylevel6]

Feedback from rich and dot

Need to use a more up to date tmblr that uses no glare.

Change craeft in body text to craft to make it looke less confusing.

Refine logo:

Letterform needs to be bolder ad it currently looks fragile. Pop of colour or highlight could make it more contemporary. Try with just blackletter. Could I use graphics like hand holding paintfrush behind logo? Stamp- use mockup to create the effect.

Make slogan big on screen. Could I use graphics like hand holding paintbrush behind logo?

No blue behind text as this is illedgible. Use it for buttons.

Need to make buttons closer to text to make it easy to see that they are connected. This will make hierarchy clearer.

I need to use a more up to date mockup. Rich and dot showed me some mockups that showcase the scrolling section of the screen, making it clearer that the stills are not serparate pages.

Make sure text is consistant and be careful about grammatical and spelling errores,

Experiment with using Tape png for photographs to add handrafted elements to website.

Look at screen lane, page collective or mobin to look at how online shops are laid out to make mine easier to use.

[pkennyartist]

First term final sculpture project at University of Ottawa. #art #ottawaart #sculpture #artproject #finalcritique #universityofottawa #pkennyartist #patriciakenny https://www.instagram.com/p/CmP96R3r8Zh/?igshid=NGJjMDIxMWI=

[beulah520]

When the cafeteria stars align for you to have ice cream and garlic bread for lunch. #artschool #artstudentlife #artstudentproblems #finals #finalsweeks #finalcrits #finalcritiques #icecream #carboloading #sugarfix #allnighters #slighltydelerious #whatarewedoing #whenisthisdue #whatisthissleepyouspeakof #runningoncoffee #runningonfumes

[bellemcdonaldart]

thank you <3

After the final crit, I was very reflective of how far I’ve come as a visual artist this semester. From mastering a various number of animation mediums, I definitely pushed myself to experiment and display work that meant something to me. My future plan is to continue bringing climate justice problems to film, ensuring the dehumanizing aspects of other mediums are removed from my practice. Art is required for change! I am very thankful for the critical and supportive comments from everyone in the class and Professor Ferro. At the beginning of the course, I would not consider myself someone who creates animations, but now, I cannot see a future where I didn’t include the medium in my artistic practice. Thanks everyone for a phenomenal learning experience!

[surfaceimaging]

MSSI SPRING 2019 CRITIQUE #MSSI #JEFFERSONSURFACEIMAGING #DIGITALPRINTING #FINALCRITIQUE #UVPRINT #LASERCUT #THERMOPLASTICS https://www.instagram.com/p/Bw3B-mZDaHN/?igshid=e3o440ctegp7

[lilcoastaldweller]

When your photography final is today so you try to look & smell extra nice in an attempt to distract from how nervous you are. #uvic #photography #school #finalcritique #imsonervousyall #art #ididathing #andnowabunchofpeoplearegoingtolookatit #thisishalfmyface (at University of Victoria)

[camilarochaartist]

Two ways how to fail in your final critique: ambitiously brave or cowardly weak. At least I can say I'm done! #finalcritiques

[hollyoxleylevel6]

Final Critique presentation

[beulah520]

Unwinding on a lunch break in the middle of a full day of crits. Am I enjoying some fine crackers and my own “spritzer” in a hand me down Santa mug I got from a school bartering event? You betcha. #dontjudge #artstudent #finalcritiques #finals #gatorade #red #teamfruitpunch #sprite #classy #nonalcholic #nosleep #artstudent #artschool #artstudentproblems (at Moore College of Art & Design)

[horacionieto]

Never stop learning and always share your experience and knowledge.... • • • • • • • • #ccad #finalcritique #columbus #downtown #fashionschool #dressform #college #designschool #advise #sewingmachine #dressforms #pgm #experience #sewingmachines #sewing #draping #construction #critique #serger #fashiondesigner #designer #learning #learningtools #fashionindustry #fashion (at Columbus College of Art & Design - CCAD) https://www.instagram.com/p/BrTpiNYAI0d/?utm_source=ig_tumblr_share&igshid=v5xxdt91e72s

[horacionieto]

It was a great feeling to be able to talk to the senior students today at @ccadedu and give them advise on their senior collections.... • • • • • • • • #ccad #finalcritique #columbus #downtown #fashionschool #dressform #college #designschool #advise #magnanni #mensshoes #sewing #draping #construction #critique #menssocks #styleformen #fashiondesigner #designer (at Columbus College of Art & Design - CCAD) https://www.instagram.com/p/BrRGPDmgZtK/?utm_source=ig_tumblr_share&igshid=xg2dj5eimp4o