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Top Tips for Writing Beautiful Dialogue
Read my top tips for writing dialogue in my new blog post here 👇 #amwriting #writing #fiction #writer
Dialogue is a critical part of any novel. Apart from the fact it makes up a monumental chunk of your overall word count, it can be a powerful tool for creating suspense, driving the plot and fleshing out your characters. Get it right, and you’re halfway towards writing a killer novel. Get it wrong, and you’re done for. If you really want to see a master of dialogue at work, you should read Hills…
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#advanced dialogue writing techniques#author#book#character development#character voice#comedy dialogue#creative writing#dialogue#dialogue editing#dialogue flow#dialogue for podcasts#dialogue for screenplays#dialogue for stage plays#dialogue for video games#dialogue punctuation#dialogue rhythm#dialogue tags#dramatic dialogue#fiction#fiction writing#how to write#mystery dialogue#novel#novel writing#realistic dialogue#romance dialogue#screenplay writing#speech#storytelling#subtext
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my new writing/editing hack (I'm sure everyone else figured this out years ago) is switching out my "for a moment" and other useless beat markers with just some description of the setting/other characters present. Retaining the right rhythm while throwing in some more sensory detail (something I can be a little sparse with). Anyway I'm a genius for this
#there's an extra beat so the ''pov'' character has time to notice things!!!!#they have time to notice things so therefore there must be an extra beat!!!#idk if other people think about it this way but conversational rhythm is like the most important thing to me in dialogue
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gotta love finding new ways to hate on cole /j (ramble thing about act 4 under the cut since ive been thinking about it lately)
im just extremely confused as to why cole just?? left??? or was about to leave middlesea, at least. i find it weird since he was so hellbent on visiting nicole in 2-X
but then he just. leaves
and nicole is the reason why he comes back so why didnt he just
not leave the hospital 💀
then theres also the whole thing with a big chunk of the post 1-XN dialogue being cut after act 5, and while nicoles line being cut out made me sad at first it makes sense because i wouldnt want to talk to cole too sorry </3
i dont think he even told her he was planning to leave which is. cole. girl what were you thinking 😭
edit: looked through the wiki again for more dialogue and yea i forgot about this
and the 2-X clear text makes me even more confused i HATE this man (/lh hes still one of my favorite characters unfortunately)
#rhythm doctor#chiimo art shenanigans#i dont remember if there was dialogue about his motive to leave so pls let me know if i missed anything#but i guesss he probably left since being cooped up in his room wasnt helping with his writers block (but his room is really nice tho ???)#and he didnt like the caffeine restrictions#which. doesnt even sound right because he said he could find inspiration without the caffeine#?????#welcome to todays episode of me overanalyzing silly pixel characters
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play it by ear dropout.tv is sosos so important to me when I'm high. that shit is genuine magic. how are they doing that.
#do you know how many skills you have to be doing all at the same time#in conjunction with other people#how the fck do you do that#you're coming up with a plot and dialogue at the same time live#and then making the dialogue a) rhyme b) have the right rhythm and melody#c) sound good along with the instrumentals someone else is improvising at the SAME TIME d) tell the story#and you're working with other people who are having to read your mind and work in an exact match of you#like. what.#play it by ear#dropout
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if you ask me Ian has a complicated thing going on with his gender but is so busy working on the rhythm defibrillator that he can't really unpack all of that yet. happy miku day
#rhythm doctor#miku day#ian rhythm doctor#hatsune miku#ada paige#intern rhythm doctor#the intern#internbot#polyrhythmcule#dialogue courtesy of my girlfriend#transfem ian#edith rhythm doctor
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One of my most deeply-held beliefs on culture is that somewhere out there there is a 27yo with a crinkled non-binary flag in the corner of their room, more mugs and dirty plates in their sink than bricks in the tower of Babel, less than 70 of god's own dollars in their bank account to finish the month and five dying plants on the windowsill, crusty stuff in the corner of their eyes, who has crafted a world of aching beauty Tolkien and Homer could only ever dream of, a vision that honours all that is noble and raw in the heart of Man, a vindication of existence and a balm to suffering, all for the benefit of a half-dozen harem pants wearers on a server named "Bingus' Grotto"
#To be clear this a love letter to my DM the elusive and recluse ''N''#who from the remote Galapagos Islands has been for the past three years guiding us in an adventure that mixes#the paintings of david caspar friedrich; the writings of jacques abeille; the visions of darwin; the zany adventures of oda#the rhythm and language of Juan José Saer; characters worthy of Dumas and Sfar; dialogue like Chandler...#and a million other influences converging on what I must admit#is the purest form of love I have experienced from someone who is neither a lover nor family#love you ''N''
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💖 💫 Muse Dash 💫 💖
#muse dash#aesthetic#the art style is *chef's kiss*#(some of the outfits and dialogue are sus but....#a solid cute rhythm game if you have anime bs tolerance)#hatsune miku#rhythm game
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Rhythm Thiefers... I have both a Japanese and English copy of Rhythm Thief... would anyone be interested if I transcribed all the dialogue from both versions...
#rhythm thief#asking because it would be incredibly time consuming#also idk how much dialogue (approximately) is in both games so if someone could let me know it would be much appreciated#also also if this has already been done please let me know
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ah yes it's my favorite song "HEY LAPIS ARE YOU OKAAAAYYYYY" "yeah" "ARE YOU SURE?" "yeah" ".. IM LEAVIN BUT ILL BE BACK" "okay" "DO YOU NEED ANYTHING?" "no" "....... WHAT SEASON IS THAT" "three"
#this dialogue exchange gets Stuck In My Head so easily#idk there's something so perfect about the rhythm of it#steven universe#su lapis#su peridot#lapidot
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#I WAS JUST DIGGING AROUND ON THE WIKI FOR FUN AND. HJJOIIHHGOHIFHKKL DIES#2-X'S PAGE IS FULL OF THIS DIALOGUE I NEVER KNEW ABOUT + I AM. EXPLODING. ONE THOUSAND TIMES#i am so normal <3#the filenames of all these screenshots are just incredibly excited keysmashes. yeag those are the noises i make when cocole#marie's musings#rhythm doctor#⛺🪲
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The Brothers Rico (1957)
"Okay, okay, so nobody's blaming you! Let's just say something happened way back, huh? So maybe I am gonna die. But, Eddie, you've got even bigger troubles. You're gonna live."
#the brothers rico#1957#film noir#american cinema#phil karlson#lewis meltzer#ben perry#georges simenon#richard conte#dianne foster#kathryn grant#larry gates#james darren#argentina brunetti#lamont johnson#paul picerni#harry bellaver#paul dubov#william phipps#richard bakalyan#mimi aguglia#US noir adaptation of a Simenon novel; i haven't read this one i dont think but I'd bet good money the book doesn't feature the same#syrupy sweet (and frankly quite implausible) ending. that aside‚ this is very decent stuff indeed. it's character led‚ rather than being#too plot heavy‚ allowing Conte (an old favourite of mine since he stole The Four Just Men tv series away from his international co stars)#to shine in his role as a former mob accountant gone straight but dragged‚ by younger brothers‚ back into the grist of it all#he's brilliant‚ particularly in the early domestic scenes with Foster which are genuinely very sweet and charming‚ with a realism and#natural rhythm that this kind of film so often fails to find in contrast to the stylized violence and hyper cool dialogue of the more macho#setpieces (not that i don't enjoy those too!). nor is Conte alone; this is a good film for actors‚ and every part down to the most minor of#middlemen‚ henchmen and goons (and there's a lot of those here) feels like a fully realised‚ honest creation by a talented actor#the melodrama comes a little thick in the back half and as said the very ending is.. far fetched. but definitely a superior whole of a film
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Here’s a quick little sketch I did a while ago of more Cole harassing people, this one based on dialogue from the janitor in game
Here’s the dialogue it’s based on if you’re curious:
#rhythm doctor#cole brew#Janitor#my art#I just love imagining Cole as mildly annoying to people#particularly to the janitor the insomniac and Lucky#this dialogue just reaffirms that headcanon#I need to draw more stuff related to the janitor dialogue though cause a lot of it is really entertaining#or really sweet in the case of the dialogue about Ada
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heres a treat for the three of you that follow me for voltron. remember that gravity falls au from a million years ago? probably not but here you are anyway!!
[ID: A six panel comic, drawn in a loose sketchy style that could resemble the Gravity Falls style if it were finished. The backgrounds are traced from shots of the gift shop of the Mystery Shack.
Panel 1: Lance leans over the register and hooks an arm around Pidge to see what book she's reading. Pidge looks disgruntled. Lance says, "Oh, Mothman? Are you into that cryptid hunting stuff?"
Panel 2: Lance squashes Pidge a bit so that he can make a frame with both his hands. Pidge protests "HEY". Lance continues, "Have you thought about investigating Keith?"
Panel 3: Through Lance's hand frame, we see Keith, who is stocking shelves and not paying attention. Lance says, "I swear that guy's not human."
Panel 4: The same image as before, except now Keith is looking at Lance and flipping him the bird. Lance says, "I mean, just look at that mull-" but is cut off when Shiro says "Lance."
Panel 5: Shiro, who is also stocking shelves, looks very tired. He has a box of gnome statues tucked under his missing arm, and is holding one of the statues in his other arm. He says, "Just. Why."
Panel 6: Lance lifts his arms and smiles, saying, "Sorry Shiro!" He is still leaned most of the way across the register, but Pidge has escaped his grasp. She is frowning at him and holding her book protectively to her chest. End ID.]
#vld#lance mcclain#keith kogane#pidge gunderson#takashi shirogane#pidge holt#??? is that the one thats more popular???? i guess its more TRUE but its always pidge gunderson to me#no hunk sorry hunk#my art#was the tag for this just#gravity falls au#i have no idea its been so long#anyway im experimenting with actually formatting comics for scrolling on tumblr#i tend to format my comics as if they were pages but. they are not. so that sucks for people actually reading them#im actually pretty pleased with the dialogue#i feel like i hit the rhythms of the banter right. its got references to the show. its got dramatic irony
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thinking about it i absolutely like zelda fics that lean harder into the darker aspects of zelda and have a more serious tone but if i was playing say a zelda fangame i'd be incredibly picky about its tone and dialogue. it's part of the reason i've never played a fangame i just don't think people pay a lot of attention to how zelda dialogue is constructed and just how simplistic/silly it is so they wouldn't be able to recreate it
#i was watching cutscenes of the cdi zelda spiritual successor that was what prompted this#they're absolutely amazing but they're like. somewhat uncanny to me#they're perfectly fine as their own thing and since it is technically not a fangame i can appreciate its writing more#its very silly#but if it was trying to be zelda cdi then i would probably be a little weirded out#not because anyone is out of character but because the rhythm of the dialogue is just ever so slightly off#i think people really underestimate the importance of tone and dialogue#idk im getting very pedantic here#glider rambles
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Off-rhythm
sounders has a set schedule for himself and star not coming over to gossip to him is setting him off course
bonus
He isn’t the only one being thrown off
#my art#krokstar au#there was going to be two more instances of others on the nemesis realizing that they also have some sorta rhythm with ss#where he just interacts with them throughout the day at set times#but then they all make the same realization that krk being there is kinda pulling ss away from those set interactions#but I couldn’t think of the dialogue I wanted#kshbdbcjhbsdc#I got off work and did this#I’m tired
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The Philosophy of Jazz
The philosophy of jazz is a rich and complex topic that encompasses the cultural, social, and musical dimensions of jazz as an art form. Jazz is not only a genre of music but also a way of thinking and being, reflecting values such as spontaneity, creativity, individuality, and community. The philosophy of jazz explores these themes, often connecting them to broader philosophical questions about identity, freedom, expression, and the nature of art.
Key Themes in the Philosophy of Jazz:
Improvisation:
Spontaneity and Creativity: Improvisation is central to jazz, emphasizing the importance of spontaneous creation and the ability to express oneself in the moment. This process challenges traditional notions of composition and performance, highlighting the dynamic interplay between structure and freedom.
Philosophical Reflection: Improvisation in jazz can be seen as a metaphor for life itself, where individuals must navigate unpredictability, make decisions on the fly, and adapt to changing circumstances. It reflects a philosophy that values flexibility, responsiveness, and the capacity to create meaning in real-time.
Freedom and Expression:
Artistic Freedom: Jazz has often been associated with the idea of freedom, both musically and socially. Musicians are encouraged to express their unique voices, experimenting with form, harmony, and rhythm. This freedom of expression is a core philosophical value of jazz.
Social and Political Dimensions: Jazz has historically been a voice for marginalized communities, particularly African Americans. It has been a medium for expressing resistance, resilience, and the struggle for civil rights. The philosophy of jazz, therefore, often intersects with discussions of freedom, equality, and social justice.
Individuality and Community:
Balancing the Individual and the Collective: Jazz is both a highly individualistic and a deeply communal art form. While it celebrates the unique contributions of individual musicians, it also depends on the interaction and collaboration within the ensemble. This balance reflects a philosophy that values both personal expression and collective harmony.
Dialogical Nature: The interplay between musicians in a jazz ensemble can be seen as a form of dialogue, where each musician responds to and builds upon the others' contributions. This dialogical aspect of jazz fosters a sense of community and mutual respect, where each voice is heard and valued.
Innovation and Tradition:
Respect for Tradition: Jazz has a deep respect for its roots and traditions, drawing on blues, gospel, and earlier jazz forms. Musicians often pay homage to past masters while exploring new directions, creating a dialogue between the old and the new.
Philosophy of Progress: At the same time, jazz is characterized by its constant innovation and evolution. The philosophy of jazz embraces change, experimentation, and the breaking of boundaries, reflecting a commitment to progress and the exploration of new possibilities.
The Blues Aesthetic:
Emotional Depth and Authenticity: The blues is foundational to jazz, bringing with it a philosophy that values emotional honesty, resilience, and the ability to find beauty in adversity. The blues aesthetic in jazz emphasizes the expression of deep, often painful emotions, and the transformation of those emotions into something meaningful and uplifting.
Existential Reflection: The blues, and by extension jazz, often grapples with existential themes such as suffering, loss, and the search for meaning. This reflects a philosophy that acknowledges the complexities of the human condition and the power of music to address and transcend those complexities.
Time and Rhythm:
Philosophy of Time: Jazz’s approach to time and rhythm, with its syncopation, swing, and complex rhythmic patterns, reflects a unique philosophy of time. Jazz often plays with the conventional understanding of time, stretching, compressing, and manipulating it in ways that challenge the listener's expectations.
Temporal Experience: This manipulation of time in jazz can be seen as a reflection on the fluidity of time itself, offering insights into how we experience and perceive time. It highlights the possibility of multiple temporalities coexisting, resonating with broader philosophical discussions about the nature of time.
Cultural Identity and Global Influence:
Jazz as a Cultural Expression: Jazz is deeply rooted in the African American experience, and its philosophy often engages with issues of cultural identity, heritage, and the diaspora. Jazz reflects the blending of African, European, and American musical traditions, creating a unique cultural expression that speaks to issues of identity and belonging.
Global Impact: Jazz has become a global phenomenon, influencing and being influenced by musical traditions around the world. The philosophy of jazz includes an appreciation of this cross-cultural exchange, recognizing the music's ability to transcend cultural boundaries and create a shared human experience.
Ethics and Aesthetics:
Moral Dimensions: The philosophy of jazz also includes ethical considerations, particularly regarding authenticity, integrity, and respect for the music and its practitioners. Issues such as cultural appropriation, commercialization, and the role of the artist in society are relevant to philosophical discussions about jazz.
Aesthetic Values: Jazz challenges traditional aesthetic values by embracing dissonance, irregularity, and complexity. It often defies conventional notions of beauty, proposing instead an aesthetic that values the raw, the real, and the unexpected.
Jazz and Existentialism:
Existential Themes: Jazz, particularly in its emphasis on freedom, individuality, and the search for meaning, shares affinities with existentialist philosophy. Both jazz and existentialism explore the human condition, the experience of alienation, and the quest for authenticity in an uncertain world.
Living Authentically: Just as existentialism advocates for living authentically in the face of an absurd or indifferent universe, jazz musicians often strive to find and express their authentic selves through their music, creating meaning through their art.
Jazz as a Way of Life:
Philosophy in Practice: For many musicians and fans, jazz is more than just a genre of music—it is a way of life, embodying a particular attitude toward life that values creativity, spontaneity, and the pursuit of excellence. This philosophy encourages living in the moment, embracing uncertainty, and finding joy in the process of creation.
The philosophy of jazz is multifaceted, touching on themes of freedom, individuality, community, creativity, and cultural identity. It reflects a way of thinking and being that is deeply intertwined with the music itself, offering insights into both the human experience and the nature of artistic expression. Jazz philosophy encourages an open, responsive, and innovative approach to life, celebrating the beauty of improvisation, the richness of diversity, and the power of music to connect, challenge, and inspire.
#philosophy#epistemology#knowledge#learning#education#chatgpt#ontology#Jazz#Improvisation#Artistic Freedom#Individuality#Community in Jazz#Jazz and Identity#Blues Aesthetic#Cultural Expression#Innovation in Jazz#Tradition in Jazz#Rhythm and Time#Jazz and Existentialism#Ethics of Jazz#Aesthetics of Jazz#Jazz Philosophy#Jazz as Dialogue#Cultural Identity#Global Influence of Jazz#Jazz and Social Justice#Authenticity in Jazz#Jazz as a Way of Life
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