#dennis can have a little delusion. as a treat
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plot structure? in my fic? rediculoush
i'm never going to finish this fic
#i love mundane ass shit#yesss king get annoyed at how fucking massive o'hare is and how goddamn far you have to run to catch your connecting flight#(had to do that last year after flying to LA)#90% of this fic is introspection and character analysis as dennis is raked over the coals and made absolutely miserable#the most fun thing is trying to have him rebuild his ego that was busted to shit by his time in north dakota. so like#each event can go one of two ways. and slowly he goes from this fucking disaster. season 12 vulnerable dennis. big feelings dennis.#to this. mix. we have now. shut off and snarky but significantly less deluded than pre s12 den. like the two halves joined#and he's slowly regaining the energy and confidence to put his guard up again#instead of being brutally exhaustingly honest to himself and to everyone else#dennis can have a little delusion. as a treat#otherwise he's stuck hiding under his blankets for the rest of his life#do i look foolish....?#ada speaks#i should probably post this and commit to a multichapter fic but#i have a very clear end point i want to work towards#i like going back to rewrite bits of this fic as i go to make it more cohesive though.#anyway re: the plot graph. lmao. not giving away the details ofc but i do be putting dennis into situations.#i almost feel bad about it#'hits rock bottom' is like. not even the half of it i just dont want to say what it is
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Concept: Mac, during a failed Project Badass, acquires a head injury that results in a cerebral lesion, and as a result, develops Capgras Syndrome (the delusion that a loved one has been replaced by an imposter). Mac is highly mistrusting of ‘Fake Dennis’, because he isn’t HIS Dennis. Dennis suddenly has Mac treating him extremely warily. But how can Dennis prove he’s the Real Dennis when he doesn’t even know who the Real Dennis is? Maybe Mac knows better than he does. Idek. Thoughts?
God this is just....the implications of this like....man when you let yourself think too much about it, it's so easy to spiral.
Mac...jesus Mac just waxing poetic about "His" Dennis and Dennis doesn't even know if that is or ever was him. He's got such a warped sense of self and after years (his whole life) of pretending to be someone else, trying to live up to everyone else's expectations, but hearing Mac talk about Dennis like that? Like he's not actually there?
Ugh and Dennis deciding to play into it a little, asking Mac more about himself because he wants to find this person in Mac's head.
But Mac's idea of who he is seems so unattainable. So out of reach. How does Mac have a better sense of Dennis's self, than Dennis?
"Mac, how do you just, know all of this? "
The same reason Mac knew he wanted an RPG for Valentine's Day.
Because what they have is so much stronger than just "best friends". They're blood brothers. They know more about each other than they know about themselves.
"Because I know you, man."
#sunny asks#MacDennis#im so sorry this sat for so long i have no excuses except for hockey#that's my bad that's on me#also like i said i totally like spiralled when i read this because just thinking about dennis not knowing who he really is anymore#ooof that hits man. cuts deep#but uh i love it?????#this is such a wild concept the potential is infinite#anon ur mind
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AT&T’s Mr. Mercedes Season 1, Episode 10: “Jibber-Jibber Chicken Dinner” Directed by Jack Bender Written by Dennis Lehane & Sophie Owens-Bender
* For a recap & review of the previous episode, “Ice Cream, You Scream, We All Scream” – click here * Recap-reviews of Season 2 to come on release, as it’s been confirmed the show’s renewed!
A different opener for the finale. Suddenly, in the dark, former Dt. Bill Hodges (Brendan Gleeson) wakes to “Danny Boy” playing. Nearby is a trail of blood smeared through the hallway, out into the kitchen, everywhere. The side of the house is covered in a streak of crimson. Outside is a wheelbarrow with an eviscerated corpse in it. In the trees, a bloody leg. The Mr. Friendly jingle plays. In the driveway, Bill sees his daughter as a girl, Holly (Justine Lupe), and Jerome (Jharrel Jerome) all eating ice cream with the ice cream man himself, Brady Hartsfield (Harry Treadaway) who greets him with a pleasant, sinister smile. Then there’s Ida Silver (Holland Taylor), she takes his gun, tells him to go “have some fun” while Mr. Mercedes serves him up his favourite fudge treat. But then his daughter’s taken by Brady. When he goes back inside, everybody in his life is dead, murdered brutally. He’s quickly attacked by a rabid, beast-like Brady who tears him apart, ripping his flesh, eating him. Terrifying fucking nightmare. Such a great contrast to the other episodes, all of those so similar, the same song, the record player, the breakfast. Now, we’ve come to the end of Season 1, and Bill’s in a vastly different, scarier headspace than he was before, worried for the safety of everyone near him. At the police station, Dt. Pete Dixon (Scott Lawrence), Dt. Izzy Torres (Nicole Barré), Captain Brooke Hockney (Debra Monk), and Bill watch the confessional tape Brady recorded before the supposed end. As he rants about his delusions of grandeur, his mom, the “lead boots” of conscience against which his life raged, the lie that his mom died because she wanted to turn him in – he can’t even admit HE was the one who accidentally killed her, a pathetic human. He goes on about history as “scar tissue” and gobbles up a bottle of pills at the same time. Until it looks like he passes out, falling into the lens. Bill’s thanked afterwards by Capt. Hockney for his involvement, as well as tasked with helping out more while they check for bombs at his place, other places Brady might’ve left a bomb behind. They also get a bit of help from Lou Linklatter (Breeda Wool) concerning where Robi might be. At the electronics shop, corporate douche Josh (David Furr) realises the killer is the one who setup a display recently, to attract kids and their parents. Nothing’s found. However, better safe than sorry, right? Bill’s house is safe, too. He and Pete have a beer on the front step, chatting, the latter admitting they found an escape tunnel down in Brady’s lair. Quite possible he’s out, alive, plotting. And yes, he is, of course. Like we all knew. So sinister. He’s got another bomb, he’s putting the finishing touches on it. He has a wheelchair, as well. Underneath which is where the explosives are neatly hidden, nobody any the wiser about its capabilities. Oh, shit. Josh goes looking for Robi. When he notices his car’s there and nobody answering at home, he calls the cops again. Pete, Izzy, and Bill come to check the place. In the apartment they find no one, nothing. Although Josh notices after a moment there’s no rug near the kitchen like before. So Izzy begins doing minor forensics, spraying luminol around a few areas, locating the presence of some interesting fluids – a large splash on the wall, the floor, some reaching out to the kitchen cabinets. A macabre, fluorescent crime scene. This is when they call the morgue, to confirm the corpses, and discovering that most likely it was, indeed, Robi left in bed with Mama Hartsfield. So Cpt. Hockney and the rest try determining what Brady’s next move is, what to do in the preemptive hope they can combat the killer. Speaking of, Brady’s shaving his head, going with a new look. Is he planning on a suicide bombing mission in that wheelchair? Simultaneously, the cops are wondering which events might be targets, a gala, another career fair event, so on. Without a specific threat, they can’t cancel anything. So they add security, they’ll keep their eyes open. Problem is even the shaved head could throw them off his trail, for just enough time to detonate those explosives. Poor Bill’s haunted, seeing the images of his nightmare over and over. He also believes there’s no way Brady is going for another career fair, just as WE see the killer in his wheelchair, wearing glasses, bald head and a suit to boot. Brady’s at the gala, same place as Holly. Dear lord, no. Bill knows something bad will happen, he rushes for the gala, calls Ida and tells her to get someplace safe; our former detective knows the killer’s going for people he cares about. In a portable outhouse, Brady opens the wheelchair and produces the bomb. Out on a stage, a speech, a look at the Edmund Mills Art Center opening in the community. In the crowd Bill looks hard for his man, he stumbles onto Holly and asks her to get out of there fast. And Jerome, he’s there with his family. So many in peril. Lou’s also kicking around, having a drink. Near the bathrooms, she runs into none other than Brady in his disguise: “Should‘ve worn sunglasses,” he quips. He stabs her in the stomach before hopping back in his wheelchair. Right at the same time Jerome takes the stage, introduced for his achievements, his getting into an Ivy League college, as he himself introduces a young choir. THE TENSION IS KILLING ME! The killer doesn’t finish Lou off, so she shouts for help. Bill hears her calls, finding her, and getting somebody to call for an ambulance. She tells him about the disguise. And wheeling into the middle of the crowd Brady readies himself to detonate. Onstage, Jerome starts clearing people out after Holly alerts him. Bill points his gun into the crowd as they run, Brady holds the detonator ready. But before anything can happen, Holly cracks the killer in the face, beating him relentlessly, and Jerome grabs the device. All to “This Little Light of Mine” in the background. Amazing sequence.
In the aftermath, Holly and Jerome are heroes. Bill’s been vindicated already, as his hunches over the Mercedes Killer case turned out to be entirely warranted. Meanwhile, Brady’s a vegetable in the hospital, our former detectives goes to see him every day: “If he ever flatlines, I‘ll show up and cremate him myself.” He leaves the hospital after whispering into Brady’s ear, making clear he isn’t going anywhere no matter if the killer’s brain dead or what. There’s still a flicker. We can hear The Pixies “Here Comes Your Man” playing, the radio in his brain hanging on and on. I wonder… Loved this finale! Wow, just filled with atmosphere and suspense, tension to fill your boots. Season 2’s been announced already, so I’m very interested if they’ll take into account Finders Keepers, or if they’re going for a whole angle of their own. Exciting stuff to consider in the interim.
Mr. Mercedes – Season 1, Episode 10: “Jibber-Jibber Chicken Dinner” AT&T's Mr. Mercedes Season 1, Episode 10: "Jibber-Jibber Chicken Dinner" Directed by Jack Bender…
#Bomb#Brendan Gleeson#Danny Boy#Harry Treadaway#Mr. Friendly&039;s#Mr. Mercedes#Nightmare#Serial Killer
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