#coffeebanana wips

[coffeebanana]

here, have a little snippet of mtl fic that nobody asked for because akjsfbkjsdbkj i need to motivate myself to finish the rest of the chapter somehow

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[heartfulselkie]

7+9 for the toxigriffe oneshot!!

Hello Kayla my love 🥰

7. What is your favorite scene you’ve written so far?

Hmm since it's a oneshot there's not a lot to choose from 😅 I do love them both trying to play it cool but they keep failing at keeping their eyes off each other for more than 0.5 seconds

But every now and then, their eyes would catch. Holding each other’s gaze had always been a stubborn act of wills between Toxinelle and Griffe Noir, but now they couldn’t look away fast enough. And it kept happening - a flicker of green meeting a flash of blue, only for them to dart away again. But their gaze was caught in each other’s orbit, and it was inevitable that they would steal another glance.

9. What is your favorite dialogue you’ve written so far?

jkdsjkf okay this was actually kind of hard because a lot of this oneshot is Emonette's inner monologue as she keeps being moody and emo over everything 😂

I'll cheat a bit a pick this section since it's Marinette dialogue vs Adrien lack of dialogue is where her status quo is starting to be challenged some:

Having wandered close to a window, Marinette came to a stop. Somewhere in the back of her mind, there was a piece of her still itching to transform and just leave. "So you wanted to mingle with the common folk?" she scoffed. "I had no idea you were such a noble fleabag." Adrien went silent then. It was strange. She was used to Griffe biting back. He always gave as good as he got from her. It was just how it was between them. Or how it had been between them.

wip ask game

[wield-the-mighty-pen]

1 for loveydrien and 11 for snekmouse!

Hi Kayla! 🩷 thank you for the ask! (the relief I felt when I saw that neither prompt required writing, so I can continue my procrastination fjaksjfdkljf)

1. Give a 5-word summary of this chapter/fic.

Adrien tries to transform. Fails.

2. What scene are you most hyped for this chapter/fic?

There's a scene that I keep picturing in my head where the two of them dance (maybe to a... familiar song 👀) that I am excited to write!

Thank you so much for the ask! <3

Ask game

[rosie-b]

gosh okay your wip titles are so INTRIGUING it was hard to choose just one but i'll go with "friends with tax benefits"

Thanks for the ask!

okay, so FWTB barely has anything written for it, but I really do love this idea. It's a post-Hawkmoth defeat prpr fic where Adrien and Marinette get married 'for tax benefits' and while silently pining after each other, they slowly figure out that they are actually both in love with each other and so technically they got married for real.

Granted, it's an idea that's been done in different ways before by many great writers, but I think that like other good ideas, this one deserves to exist in as many forms as possible!

(wip tag game)

[rosiesared]

so since i was a dumbass and accidentally pressed post too early on my last ask: @coffeebanana asked me to do 'eyes' or 'hand' for the wip ask game <3 hihi kayla imma do both of those <3 eyes:

Marinette knows that no one can see them, but it doesn’t stop her from crossing her arms over her chest, nonetheless, in an attempt to mimic the security her suit provides. 

The only thing keeping her from fleeing, eyes closed or not, is that, standing not even a metre away from her was Chat Noir, in the exact same situation. Her fingers tingle as she imagines running her hand across his, feeling the grooves and edges of a part of him that everyone in his life got to see - and taking it for herself. 

hand:

“Hello, Ladybug and Chat Noir, I have a really quick question: If you could go anywhere in the world, where would it be?”

[Ladybug] sees her partner’s hand shoot up out of the corner of her eye. “Ooh, milady, can I answer first?” He’s wriggling, like a small child who knows the answer to a question the teacher just asked.  The image of him in an écoles maternelles classroom, cat ears and all, surrounded by loud excitable toddlers comes to mind, and she has to stifle her laughter behind her hand. He would fit in perfectly.

the first ones from a wip i started after @bocadelicate told me that my discord status reminded her of ladynoir (for context it was a lyric from eyes closed by halsey <3) and the second ones from an old ladynoir fake dating wip that ive been looking over lately <3

send me a word (or multiple) and ill give you a sentence that its in in a wip <3

[mostmagical]

wip wednesday

thank you @topaz-carbuncle for the tag!!

I've been in a real ✨reading✨ mood this week so I haven't really been writing as much as I should be, but I have a little snippet from waiting room I've been excited for!! no pretty prose yet, it's mostly just dialogue but I've been looking forward to getting to this part

“How’re you doing, Shepard?” Wrex has always been brutally honest with Shepard, for as long as she’s known him. She figures she owes him as much to do the same, but that flicker of doubt is still there. That need to show strength despite hardship has always been one of her strongest urges, even now. So instead, “You gotta break me out of here,” she jokes. “I think I’m losing my mind.” “Ha! Nice try,” Wrex says, head thrown back in a laugh. He leans forward on his elbows, mouth twisting in another wide grin. “Even I can tell you’re not fit to fight. You know, humans don’t have redundant organs.” Shepard narrows her eyes. “I told you that, Wrex.” “Yeah, and I remembered. What? You think you get all the credit?”

no pressure tagging: @bittersweetresilience, @coffeebanana and anyone else who might want an excuse to share a wip!!

[kasienda]

Fanfiction Year in Review 2023

I fill this out every year. It’s become a bit of a tradition for me. Allows me to reflect on everything that I’ve written and kinda think about where I want to go next. And I like it better from the ask games because I don’t have to wait for asks to come in and can compare my answers from one year to the next. ^_^

1 List of fics completed this year in the order they were finished:

Displaced (Ladrien oneshot)

No Regrets (Ladynoir oneshot - smut)

You Don’t Have To Pretend With Me (Platonic Adrino oneshot)

Representation Reveal (S5 Adrinette oneshot)

Kisses in the Rain (S5 AU Love Square - technically multichapter, but it’s shorter than many of my one-shots)

Would Trust You With Everything (Adrino multichapter)

Just An Ordinary Girl (Marichat oneshot)

Love Remains (Ladynoir multichapter)

Spin the Bottle (OT4 with cour four - technically oneshot, but it’s longer than Kisses and has more kisses in it. Haha!)

2 Number of words written: 

Written: 166,114 words

Published: 151,018 words (more than twice 2022’s number!! Go me!!) 

Those numbers are incredibly close together because I haven’t been redrafting as much. Those numbers include six one shots, three completed multi chapters. And another four multi chapter WIPs saw at least one update.

And in another fun milestone! I broke a million words published on Ao3 just this last week!! (I've been writing fic since 2003 and everything I've ever written is on Ao3!)

3 Your most popular fic:

Not Part of the Plan - I suspect that this is mostly because being a teen pregnancy fic, it’s my most tropiest story this year. Haha! 

4 Your personal fav:

Aftermath - This story has usurped Right Behind You as my favorite. I’ve been able to connect to the raw hurt and grief in this story, and there’s something very raw and human about it that others seem to be able to connect to as well. I think it’s some of my best work, and that is also thanks to an amazing beta in @ladyofthenoodle who has lent her expertise in more than one way in making this one more true to lived experience. 

5 Your fav scene:

It’s so hard to pick a favorite!! I narrowed it down to my three favorites in no particular order. 

The last scene in Ch 5 Love Remains - Chat Noir give amnesiac Ladybug a geography lesson from space. It’s got Whole New World vibes, and I just loved the imagery of it.

Ch 4 of Aftermath - I’m particularly proud of Marinette’s panic attack when Adrien tells her she doesn’t have to keep coming over. Like it feels like it comes out of nowhere, but it just totally makes sense. And how it manifests and how she soothes herself (it’s not healthy, but it’s so GOOD!)

Ch 7 of Would Trust You With Everything - The scene where Chat Noir tries to tell Nino who he is, but inevitably doesn’t. And how Nino reassures him through all that. This scene feels so raw, but so heartwarming in light of Adrien’s fears. And I don’t know - it’s beautiful to me.

6 A fic or scene that challenged you:

I really struggled with Right Behind You this year, though it wasn’t for lack of trying! I had started out the year hoping to go back to an update a month here and I only updated it three times throughout 2023. 

This was incredibly frustrating because the initial drafts of scenes would come pretty easily, but I couldn’t seem to make them pop the way the earlier chapters did. The good news is I think I figured out what the issue was. Most of my writing this year has been speed writing. And a big part of that is just where I’ve been emotionally. I’m very very out of practice in editing and redrafting, which this story and Aftermath both definitely need. 

I’ve only been able to edit Aftermath because I’ve had a ton of help. (Thanks Noodles!) Sadly, it’s harder to find betas for rarepairs, but I have succeeded! (Thanks@coffeebanana!)

7 A line of writing you’re proud of: 

“She wanted to be there to see it. To see him.”

This line is way better in context, but I’ve made myself cry about three times with it. And I refuse to explain it because that would give its power away. Guess you’ll just have to go read Aftermath. 

8 A comment that touched you: 

I can never answer this question without mentioning several!! 

Would Trust You With Everything - this story had a ton of enthusiastic followers - way more than rarepair work usually gets, and I wrote this story right after my life fell apart and all the commenters here made throwing this story together just that much more joyful during a time when I REALLY needed it. (I'm looking at you, @bittersweetresilience, @bbutterflies @flightfoot @coffeebanana and so many others that I don't know your tumblr name!!!) Not Part of the Plan Comments - I added sex ed lessons to the end of each chapter here because there’s so much about fertility and pregnancy that people don’t know if typical pregnancy fics are anything to go by, and this seemed to inspire so many people to share their pregnancy stories!!! And these have been so cool because I’ve learned that these stories just don’t often have an opportunity to be shared. And it’s neat that this story with its accompanying lessons could create a space for that!! Aftermath comments - lots of people who have really struggled with moderate to severe depression have apparently felt very seen by this fic. And that a story that is essentially about two characters who feel very alone and like no one can understand can help people feel LESS alone and MORE understood is simply amazing!! I love this story so much!! AHH!! Here's one from @neurovascular-entrapta that meant a lot to me.

9 Something that inspired your writing:

Grief and the need to feel things in a distant abstract-these-are-story-book-characters kind of way so I don’t have to feel my actual feelings as closely every moment of the day really kept me writing the whole year long.

10 Your proudest accomplishment (that one scene; finally finishing that one fic; posting your first fic; etc):

My writing has been really raw and messy this year, and I can’t keep tenses straight to save my life. But there’s something powerful about the rawness that I really like even as all the grammatical errors and the lack of effort on the technical side of most of my stories has driven me nuts. 

I am proud of myself for being able to get back into the big projects in these last few months after not being able to face them from April to October. And I’ve started participating in a few writing events here and there again in addition to working on my own pet projects. 

11 Do you have any writing goals for the next year?

Well, I wanted to finish Not Part of the Plan in 2023, which didn’t happen only barely! So hoping the last chapter and the epilogue make it out within the next month. Once that’s done I think I want to try and make Aftermath and Right Behind You my primary focus projects this year. And of course, I’m sure new plot bunnies and writing events will take over my brain on occasion. Last year, I said I wanted my writing to become a reliable mental health tool for me again, and I’m glad to say that it definitely was that for 2023. I hope I’m able to use my writing this year to continue my healing journey. 

And maybe go and proofread all of the fics I finished in 2023 to fix all the inconsistent tense issues to prepare them for being bound eventually!

12 Anyone you would like to thank?

SO MANY PEOPLE!

@jennagrinsoverml for being one of my oldest fandom friends! For becoming a real life friend for all that we haven't actually met in person. For all the times you vented to me and listened and sent me pictures of your family and gushed over pictures of mine. I'm lucky to know you!

@ladyofthenoodle - for showing up in my DMs, For being a most insightful beta, for dragging me into a larger community over and over again, for listening to both my real struggles and my first world problems, for being my friend!!

@thelibraryloser - I don't know how to put this into words. But I very much look up to you. For your resilience through difficult times - you are role-model for how to handle this world with grace and kindness. Thank you for your stories!

@coffeebanana - for being so enthusiastic in the creation process before and after! When I have a story that is getting no attention one comment from you makes it so it doesn't matter. You give me all I need.

@bittersweetresilience and @wackus-bonkus-maximus for just being so kind and enthusiastic and supportive of any idea I happen to be talking about in any given moment. I guess for enabling me. Haha!

@blur0se and @mila-beedoodling for sharing your ideas and inspiring me to create new things!!

@asukiess, @chocoluckchipz, @sariahsue, @miabrown007 for creating so many beautiful things and for being kind and engaging in so many conversations!

And now, I'm really nervous that I'm forgetting someone because this is the first time where I feel like I've had more than three fandom friends. Haha! It's a good problem to have I suppose. In general, thank you to the miraculous community for helping me to survive this year. <3 <3 <3

Happy New Year Everyone!!

I invite anyone who wants to, to fill this out! (Or something similar because I think it can be modified for artwork pretty easily). But if you do, please tag me, so I can be a cheerleader for all you've accomplished this year!

[bittersweetresilience]

writing game ✍️

In a new post, show the last line you wrote and tag as many people as there are words.

thank you @ninadove and @coffeebanana for the tags <3

Wanting to die is something that clings. It creeps up on you, waiting for the moment when it’s least expected to strike. Then it becomes a shadow, always following. Then it becomes a habit. It recognizes your scent, and it is always hungry. Sort of like a dog, really, which makes sense, because Félix is sort of like a dog too, and it’s a dog-eat-dog world, that’s what his father always told him.

this is not actually the last thing i wrote either time i was tagged but both times they were honkai star rail so i went back to find the last thing i wrote for miraculous which was this unedited phone written fragment of a sentitwin week wip which i started last wednesday and then didn't progress since. CLOSE ENOUGH WE'RE FINE

@hartwign can have the actual last line good morning hart i love you

and passing this game to @mostmagical @isabugs @bbutterflies @teafig and hmm @spoiledlbleach and @socialiseisnotinmyname <3

[milabeedoodling]

Last Line Tag Game

Thank you @celestialtitania for the tag!

Rules: In a new post, show the last line you wrote (or drew) and tag as many people as there are words (or as many as you feel like).

So last thing I've been working on is vampire!Adrien x human!Nino andddddddd babies the both of them

Still very much a WIP

Tagging @asukiess @coffeebanana @bittersweetresilience @torvalvt @victorian-platence @xhanisai @seas-of-silver @supergirl9130 and anyone that wants to participate! (Also i have no idea if anyone else was tagged)

[booksandpaperss]

Out of Context WIPs poll

Rules: Pick a bunch of your WIPs and summarize them as badly as possible, then ask your followers to vote on which one they'd be most likely to read. Multiple/all/none options are completely optional.

i saw one of my fave ml creators @coffeebanana do this and I figured it would be fun to bring it into my own circle of mutuals! also I’m mixing fics (from diff fandoms) and original works and I’m not saying which is which <3

see if u can tell which is which (but still just pick based on the description)! one is on my ao3 already lmao

no pressure tags: @oldfashionedmorphine @total-serene560 @sorry-i-panicked @parkitaco @cosmobrain00 @karenchildress @foodiewithdahoodie @bookinit02 @queerxqueen and @ anyone else who wants to do their own!

[coffeebanana]

when plagg crashes your ladrien hurt/comfort oneshot

[heartfulselkie]

Out of Context WIPs

Pick a bunch of your WIPs and summarize them as badly as possible, then ask your followers to vote on which one they'd be most likely to read. Multiple/all/none options are completely optional.

Thank you for the tag @bittersweetresilience! I think I did this not too long ago but these are always fun so here I go again!

No pressure tagging @trishacollins @ninadove @coffeebanana and anyone else who would like to do this!

[asukiess]

find the words

thank you @bittersweetresilience for the tag!! <3 sunny provided us with the following words: water, shadow, and yesterday. I believe we were just to find these in WIPs, so...!

water, from the loveywalker fic:

The skyline behind Loveybug is a roulette of colors, bokeh yellow streetlights and office harsh white fluorescence and flurries of red tail lights passing by this unassuming scene. Water laps at her smirk as she peers up at him, half-way beneath the iridescent pool waves. Each one overlapping the other, throwing rippled refractions of her pink suit across the pool. Oddly, Cat Walker remembers the first day he met her, how her suit seemed to him like cotton candy. Irrationally, he fears the more she swims, the more the water might dissolve her completely like candy, too, leaving him all alone on the roof.

shadow, from my flower is ephemeral (adrien dies!):

Protecting her for the last time. Chest heaving. His eyes fluttering like butterfly wings, persisting against that creeping shadow of death, until they submit under the weight and close, finally. “Alix,” she croaks, eyes glossed over, “Please let me forget.”

rose (reserve word!!! ty sunny), also from the loveywalker fic:

“What’s in a name?” she giggles, drinking in his stunned reaction. “A rose by any other name would smell just as sweet.”  Hooking her arms around him as he hoists them up, she leans into him.  “You can call me anything you want,” she croons. “Your partner, your girlfriend, the love of your life.” She arches herself to say into the blushing shell of his ear, “But the name’s Loveybug.”

I'll tag @coffeebanana & @blur0se & @monpetitchattriste if'n you want to do it :)

words: new, sunrise, cuddle

reserve words: father, sobbed, exhausted

[rosie-b]

WIP Reblog Game

Thank you for tagging me @coffeebanana! <3

List the titles your top five priorities for WIP updates (link your fics for new readers!)

An upcoming scene, event, or detail in each fic that you're looking forward to writing

Bonus: make a poll for your followers to vote on which top 5 WIP they are most excited to see an update on!

Then tag 10 writer friends!

WIP TITLES

(I'm not sure if these wips are supposed to all be partially posted already or not, so here's a mix of fics with potential sequels and multichapter fics)

True Blue - enemies au + kwami swap (Marinette is the Peacock in this one) (it's been nearly a year since I posted the first chapter and I really thought it would be finished by now T^T)

Guilty by Association sequel (probably) - ladrien fake dating post-hawkmoth defeat

For the Sake of a Ring sequel (maybe) - lovesquare multiverse shenanigans before it was cool (unrelated to the paris special)

A Chat Walks Into an Office series (perhaps) - crack, ladrien, and gabriel realizing he's an idiot after an unexpected reveal

Growing Fangs (someday) - canon divergent future au centered on the next generation of heroes (the dupain-cheng kids) (it's been over a year since the last update bc i wrote myself into a ditch and can't get out of it hehe)

(As you might be able to tell, I don't leave most of my fics unfinished for long; I'm normally pretty good at leaving my ideas as oneshots or finishing them quickly.)

UPCOMING SECTIONS

The Gorizilla chapter!!!!! It's gonna be so fun (and an emotional roller coaster)

Ladrien with fake dating!!! The first fic was more-or-less a setup for this exact scenario. The problem: I have roughly no ideas for which direction to take this series atm

Ok, so this fic will be the battle scene from Adrien's pov, featuring many different universes' Ladybugs. I came up with one Marinette who is literally a rose and I love her so much so I'm most excited to try to incorporate her story (gonna be a challenge though)

Finishing the series. I might honestly end it where it is, but I do have a draft of Hawk Moth meeting Ladybug and explaining what happened (she doesn't believe him, of course, and she's very concerned for her partner)

Ok, after the decade-long timeskip, Chat and Ladybug will start off as the main heroes. However, they'll be forced to give their Miraculous to their kids for Reasons™, and I am very excited to get to that part and what happens afterwards (i swear i have a plan, it's just i keep getting sidetracked)

I get distracted by new ideas all the time, so the only 100% guaranteed updates are for True Blue (within a month) and Growing Fangs (before I die). BUT. I will be motivated to work on the other sequels if you guys vote for them or leave comments/tags saying you'd like to read them!

So:

10 new people to tag is a lot, so let's see: @lady-de-mon-coeur, @nemaliwrites, @marimbles, @chai-ki, @aidanchaser, @deinde-prandium, @ninadove, @fragileizy, and @hamsteriffic (no pressure, of course! and sorry if i re-tagged you)

[wackus-bonkus-maximus]

wip ask game

In a new post, list the names of all the files in your WIP folder, regardless of how non-descriptive or ridiculous. Let people send you an ask with the title that most intrigues them and then post a little snippet of it or tell them something about it! And then tag as many people as you have WIPs.

thank you @anna-scribbles, @lesbitorte, @kasienda, @heartfulselkie, @mozzygan, and @trishacollins for the tag! dusting off my wip titles (only some of which are the actual titles) to show you what i'm working on:

"platonic" ladynoir dancing around each other while adrinette's together

adrinette fake date AND ladynoir fake date

as yet the glass seems true

can you keep a secret au

feligami fake dating ryargos enemies au

feligami love is war au

feligami swan lake au

lies of attrition

marinette makes the wish to save adrien and chat noir disappears

matter of luck

mirror image

prpr but it's everyone else's pov

prpr but they don't know the other knows

spy x feligami

toxigriffe origins

loveybug akuma / loveygriffe antics

uncanny and chat noir chatting

omg i have so many.

anyways i don't care if @bittersweetresilience, @redundant-lava, @coffeebanana, @blur0se, @ck2k18, @ladyofthenoodle, @shortmexicangirl, @monpetitchattriste, @nemaliwrites, @mostmagical, @asukiess, @celestialtitania, @yunyin and @torvalvt have been tagged yet. now you guys are getting it from me 🥰

[mostmagical]

Out of Context WIPS

Pick a bunch of your WIPs and summarize them as badly as possible, then ask your followers to vote on which one they'd be most likely to read. Multiple/all/none options are completely optional.

thank you for tagging me @xhanisai and thank you @bittersweetresilience for reminder tagging me <333 WAH

tagging @coffeebanana, @rosie-b, @bbutterflies and @hueynomure to do or not do !! also tagging @blur0se to remind you 😌