#but now that im like... Actually starting to branch out to weirder more interesting things

[stuck-in-the-ghost-zone]

as much as i love having a library card again and love going to the library.... it sucks so bad that the closest library to me is very small and does not partner with other libraries

[kyokyo866]

A-ah hi! i’m that anon! um well about that Au it’s a long explanation, one i’ll gladly tell you if you’re interested enough, but me and my friend call it Schizotalia! in short it’s where Germany tries to break up a fight with England and France only to get struck by a spell from England. things go on that i’ll explain if you wanna know more, but in short Germany starts acting super weird ( like talking to himself, and even grinning wickedly during some of the other meetings when people were fighting )  It was until a certain meeting brake everything crumbled down. As Italy talked with Japan,England and Prussia (who was here to drop off something to eat for Italy because he’s nice or what ever). They found themselves in a scary spot. Now i can’t go into details but just know blood gore and a dead kitty was involved :,(. Germany grinned like a psychopath saying “Italy was having fun playing with the kitty… so i killed it. Italy doesn’t need anyone or anything when he’s got me!”. After that things got even stranger. England in an attempted to get help from the other gathered the Nations and spoke out, saying how Germany was acting because of the spell. Most nations said England was insane and “magic isn’t real” , or worried about Germany.After a few nations came to help England,Japan and Italy out things got even worse. England,Italy Japan and Prussia went to question Germany, but all they got out of him was his big plan to ‘Rule the world like a god’ and ‘Saving Humanity!’ and 'And the world will be a better place for Italy to live in!’. After the four gave up with his nonsense, Germany went missing. later on after more junk happens they finally find Germany in England’s basement and he’s gotten a hold of a bag of some sort ( maybe a fight scene later ) Germany runs off again and they find him in front of a lake where they fight again and he uses England’s magic to make a vortex and disappear. There is so much more I wanna say but this is already way to long, but i’ll start talking about the other things. Once they are able to go after him they’re faced with this “England” but he’s dressed differently and missing his eyes after they exchange dialogue and fight ( i’ll talk about what was said if you wanna know ) when this voice stops them before they kill the “England" and in the confusion he get’s away. The voice begins to explain what was happening and that what they just seen was one his lord’s creations. once questioned about it the voice tells them about these things called elder futhark runes and how his lord or “Germany” has given them life to make his perfect world Norway goes into more detail over this. more things are said and when asked why he was telling them his the voice reply’s with “Our God is ill, his mind is scattered. I cannot bare to witness the monstrosity he has brought forth on our world” so he agrees to help them through the water realm/ mirror world ( England explains why it’s called that because water reflects objects on the surface )

there’s more but this is so long of an summary and my thing is if you could help me with ideas on it it would be so great! the runes are the countries! that England was called lugaz if you look that up it’ll tell you what it means but if it’s reversed it means bag things so me and my friend thought that they could represent the countries dark side or negative thoughts like Italy’s is mannaz and when he’d introduced his story will be the kind like you read in the diary entries like he fakes a smile and stuff like that.

So if you wanna know more about it and get a better ( but longer summary of it ) i’ll gladly tell you! ( I love talking about it xD ) but all in all i’d love and I mean LOVE if you could give me some plot ideas and character design ideas! ( i’m so SO sorry it’s so long! ) 

*blinks*

go od n e ss

*taps fingers together*

well, first of all it doesnt really sound so much of an au as it does a fanfic/game idea. Tho i supposer the ‘au’ part of it is more for the other world and such but the main difference between an au and a fic is that if you remove the plot would the world itself be able to branch off stories from it. Like Bad God Au for example, yes there is a plot within the main party however, if you remvoed vanya, nevo and the lambs stories and interactions so it was just the god, the shepherd and the lambs, stories can still exist of how the world exists. However with this if you removed the main plot, theres no other stories/oneshots in this setting really. So it sounds more like a large scale rpgesque sorta tale rather than an au

anyway, i digress

so in short if im getting the jist of it here, germany seems to be possessed by a demon/evil spirit and had him get a god complex, gets sent to another world where he do his evil things and the nations go to get him and fight off the more darker sides of the countries as they go along tooo snap him out of whatevers gotten ahold of him and so on.

I feel like this could possibly work if you work SUPER. REALLY. HARD. on the context of all of the things, the world, the creature, the spell, like how did a misfire to france get germany to this state, if france was hit would he have had the demon instead? Germany himself seems mmmm off, like yea thats the whole point of strict quiet germany being evil and gory but it seems almost…cliche? like having the evil side being almost not noticed would probably freak people out more. Like that kitty thing, instead of him smiling wicked, wouldnt it be weirder if he said “Oh yea that, Italy was having fun with it, so I killed it” then he just drinks his coffee. Whoeever heard that would double take being like “wait what the fuck did you just say????” “you heard me.”

In this day and age crazy psycho insane kinda villains can be really uuuh not mishandled not misguided uuuh, overused. Theyre kinda seen as meh so if you want to go down that route you need to make sure theres good reason and good material for them to actually be there.

though one last thing for this intial post… why call it schizotalia? I mean, yea germanys hearing voices and stuff but thats kiiiiinda offensive not gonna lie. It doesnt really some much of  the mental illness as it is just an excuse to make it sound edgey so theres probably a lot better things to call it like runetalia or something.

if anyone else wants to add things to this, ya can hmu