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okamirayne · 1 year
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Karibi
Revisiting the series 💔 Got hit with the BtB OC feels. Karibi (sans her many piercings, as this zombie-brained muppet added the wrong / unfinished pic to video — insomnia = not firing on all cylinders 🤦🏻‍♀️)
Song: Not Gonna Die 😭
Artist: Skillet 🤘🏼
POV: Karibi’s words to Team Yokai…and definitely her POV after she feels/senses/believes Naoki ‘dies’ (KIA) after his faked death…💔
Lyrics/Chorus:
The last thing I heard was you whispering goodbye
And then I heard you flatline…
No, not gonna die tonight
We're gonna stand and fight forever
(Don't close your eyes)
No, not gonna die tonight
We're gonna fight for us together
No, we're not gonna die tonight
Don't you give up on me
You're everything I need
This is how it feels when you take your life back
This is how it feels when you fight back
No, not gonna die tonight
We're gonna stand and fight forever
(Don't close your eyes)
No, not gonna die tonight
We're gonna fight for us together
No, we're not gonna die tonight
No, we're not gonna die tonight
Not gonna die
(Not gonna die)
Not gonna die
(Not gonna die)
Not gonna die tonight.
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okamirayne · 1 year
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Do you have more photos of your btb OC's? i always found the way you describe them so fascinating and would love to see how you picture them drawn!
Hey there, my luv!
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Ah! Thanks so much for your kind words and your interest in my OCs 🙈🥰
I have a few pieces I’ve been working on. Will endeavour to upload Katsu next. Would love to try to conceptualise some of the others. 🥰
So far, along with Karibi, I’ve got my BtB OCs Naoki and Tsuno:
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Thanks for the ASK, Anon! 😘
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okamirayne · 4 months
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Still I Hear You Say…
Art by NYX
Really appreciate you giving me permission to go ahead and share this collab, NYX! It’s been a source of joy since 2023. You know how I feel! Thank you 😭
🥹😍💔❤️‍🩹 Kudos to NYX for turning a telepathic dialogue between these two into this gorgeous piece 😭 Respectfully (as promised) trying to contain myself 🫠🥹
Kōni means pixie / imp (and was Naoki’s nickname for Karibi)
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🎶 Song inspo for these two (and Genma) Never Too Late by Three Days Grace
“Even if I say, "It'll be all right" / Still I hear you say, you want to end your life / Now and again we try to just stay alive/ Maybe we'll turn it all around, 'cause it's not too late, it's never too late.” 💔
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Full Lyrics below
This world will never be what I expected
And if I don't belong, who would have guessed it?
I will not leave alone everything that I own
To make you feel like it's not too late, it's never too late
Even if I say, "It'll be all right"
Still I hear you say, you want to end your life
Now and again we try to just stay alive
Maybe we'll turn it all around, 'cause it's not too late, it's never too late
No one will ever see this side reflected
And if there's something wrong, who would have guessed it?
And I have left alone everything that I own
To make you feel like it's not too late, it's never too late
Even if I say, "It'll be all right"
Still I hear you say, you want to end your life
Now and again we try to just stay alive
Maybe we'll turn it all around, 'cause it's not too late, it's never too late
The world we knew won't come back
The time we've lost can't get back
The life we had won't be ours again
This world will never be what I expected
And if I don't belong
Even if I say, "It'll be all right"
Still I hear you say, you want to end your life
Now and again we try to just stay alive
Maybe we'll turn it all around, 'cause it's not too late, it's never too late
Maybe we'll turn it all around 'cause it's not too late, it's never too late
It's not too late, it's never too late.
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okamirayne · 1 year
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I finished the entire BtB series (and HHU) about a week ago and it hasn't left my mind even once.
I'm not quite sure how to put my thanks into words: You managed to make me feel so obsessed with reading like when I was a kid. I stayed up until 4 am, had to literally force myself to sleep because I was (am!) so incredibly invested. No other piece of literature has done that since like... 6 years? I cried, screamed, laughed, gasped, blushed at so many scenes - the heartache was genuinely so beautiful.
I know the first part of BtB is quite old and your writing has improved a lot since then but all the parts read incredibly seamlessly.
I could *hear* the characters voices in my head while reading, picture the scenes like a movie in my head. The attention to detail and the accuracy of the characters makes me so incredibly happy. Usually when reading, I notice every single distraction going on around me and it's so rare that something pulls me in to the point I just zero in on the story.
There's a lot of scenes that stuck in my mind and to my surprise, I resonated most with your characterisation of Genma. I went in a die-hard Neji fan (and still am) and came out with a deep appreciation for Shikamaru and Genma. (That being said, I also really love then way you portray the other characters, especially Hiashi and Ibiki who I really didn't like before.)
Genma's story just... God it has my heartstrings in a death grip. His never-ending jack-assery and dirty jokes and the way Raido sees right through it.
The fact he held onto items important to him and related to the people he loved most...
The way he handled Shikamaru and Asuma and Kurenai's baby while still insisting he doesn't do well with children.
The way he made Kakashi say what he feels near the end of UtS in an ass-backwards way but a way that didn't allow for deception and empty words.
But, I think the moment that made me sob and laugh and feel the most was when he said "You ruined it" - that fucking killed me right then and there.
When I first met Genma in your story I was really sceptical and suspicious of him, thinking he was somehow the bad guy. And then I grew to love him and hurt for him. That was so extremely well done.
I also have to get off my chest that I love, love, love the way you described his drug trips (and Kakashi's little endeavor with medicines) as well as dreams and flashbacks. I find that these things are mostly feelings and oh so confused and confusing that it's hard to put into words but you genuinely excel at it.
I also love the transitions of dreams back to reality. Keyword here being "back". God, nothing hurt me more than reading that word in HHU. I think you know which scene I mean.
I also read through old asks and found out more about Naoki and Karibi. I love these two so much as well. Karibi struck me as very interesting and I'm glad I got to find out how she lived and died. Especially because HHU kind of alluded to her commiting or attempting suicide.
Naoki... My heart hurts for him. This poor, poor man. I'm so fucking glad he didn't have to die alone. He was so strong for Genma though, building him up, putting him on the right path and giving him a verbal slap for being an addict, giving Kakashi and him his blessings eventhough he used to be so possessive and protective of Genma.
His story really is tragically beautiful and incredibly complex. I really wanted him to live but realistically I knew it wasn't going to happen.
How old were Karibi, Naoki and Genma when they joined Team Yokai? When Inoichi saw Genma and Naoki kiss and Genma talks about his Senbon hitting certain nerves (hehe), they're said to be about 17 and I remember it being mentioned that Naoki took a while to "bottom" in bed due to his childhood trauma.
Also can we talk about the Tsubomi poem? That is so *beautiful*. Did it come easy to you or was it hard to write? It fits so incredibly perfectly to Naoki and Ino.
One thing that confuses me about the storyline is the epilogue of Requiem, where Genma has a flashback(?) about Shuken holding Naoki hostage and making him reveal his name. Could you explain to a confused-maybe-stupid-me when that takes place and how Genma and Naoki escape from that situation?
I can't stop gushing about your story so i won't:
Shuken's character is also so well written. When we first meet him in Shikamarus flashbacks, I was also oddly intrigued eventhough I had an idea about what sort of fucked up things he'd done to Shikamaru. You wrote his seductiveness really well. And then he reveals his age and I got *deeply* disturbed and as we learn more I just got more and more disturbed. The progression was so well done, I felt like I was sort of experiencing what Shikamaru was going through. The use of "Shika" sent cold shivers down my spine.
I also really loved your wheels within wheels and walls within walls metaphor for the ANBU. It creates such an amazing mental image that can be played around with so creatively.
Aaa. Okay. I think I got most of my thoughts down so far. I'm sure I'll come back to gush some more, maybe ask some more.
Thank you so much for this amazing story and all the work and hours you put into it. I can't wait to read more from you 💙
My dear @sunlightrays 💙💙 Thank you so much for both your patience with me as I finally secure the time to respond, and of course, for the phenomenal feedback you've given me. As expressed in my private DM. It impacted me immensely...and I am still moved and altered by it -- thank you. I will endeavour in this reply to answer your Qs to the best of my ability, given that I do tend to revert back into a blob of incoherent feels every time I revisit this message...💙
I know the first part of BtB is quite old and your writing has improved a lot since then but all the parts read incredibly seamlessly.
Oh dear lord...that first installment....*cringes* oh the temptation to rewrite it, luv...THE TEMPTATION....(aww, thank you though, I appreciate that you felt it all flowed together).
There's a lot of scenes that stuck in my mind and to my surprise, I resonated most with your characterisation of Genma. [...] Genma's story just... God it has my heartstrings in a death grip. His never-ending jack-assery and dirty jokes and the way Raido sees right through it.
Oh, luv, I do so love writing Genma and his respective relationships, whether platonic or romantic.
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I'm so freaking happy you took a shine to his portrayal in BtB! The feedback you have given me with WHY and WHAT you loved about Genma's portrayal and story was just...I can't even begin to describe how nourishing that was to my writer's soul. If every writer were to receive this kind of feedback, I can see their proverbial cups running over with gratitude and inspiration. Thank you so, so much.
I also love the transitions of dreams back to reality. Keyword here being "back". God, nothing hurt me more than reading that word in HHU. I think you know which scene I mean.
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Ah god damn, but you hit me hard with the love you showed my OCs. Thank you so, so much for that and for sharing what it was that drew you in -- especially with Naoki. 💗💗💗 (Even Shuken, dare I say)
How old were Karibi, Naoki and Genma when they joined Team Yokai?
13 to 14 years old. Naoki joined when he was 13, Karibi and Genma at 14. By the time they were assigned to Team Yokai, they were all 16.
When Inoichi saw Genma and Naoki kiss and Genma talks about his Senbon hitting certain nerves (hehe), they're said to be about 17 and I remember it being mentioned that Naoki took a while to "bottom" in bed due to his childhood trauma.
Correct! They'd have been 17/18 years old at that time. Age 19 is when Naoki tragically accepted Danzo's offer and was listed as KIA after his 'fake death'.
Re: intimacy issues. Right you are. Due to his childhood abuse, Naoki refused to "bottom" for the longest time. It took a hell of a lot for Genma to work through that with him. Karibi helped with this too.
Also can we talk about the Tsubomi poem? That is so *beautiful*. Did it come easy to you or was it hard to write? It fits so incredibly perfectly to Naoki and Ino.
Aww....I'm so touched you felt that way about Naoki's poem for Ino. It's such a tough question to answer. Anything that is deeply personal or painful for the characters always twinges my heartstrings when writing...but for Naoki, his guarded emotions came out in his seldom seen/heard creativity / art, so writing it was easy in the sense that it flowed into my head easily from the character, but it was hard in the sense that it reflected so much of Naoki's pain as well as his love.
One thing that confuses me about the storyline is the epilogue of Requiem, where Genma has a flashback(?) about Shuken holding Naoki hostage and making him reveal his name. Could you explain to a confused-maybe-stupid-me when that takes place and how Genma and Naoki escape from that situation?
Oh my dearest, YOU are in no way the confused-maybe-stupid party in this. In fact, "I" am the idiot who cut a LOT of scenes surrounding Naoki's torture at Shuken's hands and the escape situation *epic facepalm* In hindsight, I would love to go back and edit that by re-writing/editing and INCLUDING those scenes. I can see the holes there from the reader's perspective, and if I hadn't been operating like a runaway train at the time, I'd have slowed down to correct that error.
So, that scene where Genma has the nightmare flashback of Shuken holding Naoki hostage. Let me do a breakdown chronology as it's the easiest way my fucked-up spiderweb mind-map can be translated into a linear sequence....
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Naoki gets stabby-happy with Shuken (plunges that needle into his neck) and fucks up his ROOT mission, but prioritises saving Shikamaru
Naoki needs Genma to "buy him time" while he tries to fix the trauma and everything coming undone in Shikamaru's head
So Genma goes happy-hunting on the Freak Show as Naoki deep dives into Shikamaru's brainpan
(DELETED SCENE) Naoki stablisies Shuken so the natural energy doesn't kill him. Then Naoki deep-dives into Shikamaru's brainpan and meets with some complications because of the natural energy swimming around inside him.
(cont. DELETED SCENE) Naoki tries to stabilise Shikamaru too, but gets interrupted mid-brain-and-body-fix by more Freak Show cross-breeds looking for bossman Shuken. Naoki can't complete what he's doing with Shikamaru and needs more time. He hides Shikamaru and takes out the opponents interrupting him before rushing to assist Genma
He assists Genma lol -- ends up getting injured (takes a nasty blow to his hip, if I recall)
He tells Genma he needs more time with Shikamaru to fix the kid
Genma is too busy freaking out about Naoki stabbing his mark/Shuken in the neck and the consequences of this action
They get interrupted by more Freak Show mutants, which sabotages Naoki's plan to regroup with Shikamaru and use the Nagu blood vial to get them the hell out
Naoki opts to stay behind to distract the Freak Show and give Genma time to get Shikamaru out, so he kisses Genma in a heated moment to shut him up and save time by connecting their minds where he " communicated in seconds what would've taken minutes to put into words; why Tenka had killed those children; where he'd hidden Shikamaru; what he'd tried to do to fix him; the secret route he planned to use to get them out; and lastly, what he was asking Genma to do – no, ordering him to do." -UtS
He tells Genma to get Shikamaru out, basically, even though he hasn't finished 'fixing' the kid. Naoki gets caught (DELETED SCENE)
Genma does as he's ordered, only he can't bring himself to leave Naoki behind again so after crossing through the portal so Shuken can't reach the kid, he hides and secures Shikamaru (DELETED SCENE) and returns to go and help Naoki, letting himself get caught in the process
Naoki in the meantime has been at Shuken's mercy (or lack thereof) and is receiving a traitor's punishment (DELETED SCENE) -- it is at this point that Genma's flashback dream comes into play where Shuken is starting to shown signs of transmogrification due to the natural energy in his system (think Sound Four on steroids) and wants to know Genma's name and where he stashed Shikamaru
(LONG DELETED SCENE) Meanwhile, Kurayami is borne in Shikamaru's consciousness and THAT is the person that wakes up when Shikamaru finally comes to. He secures himself some Nagu blood, re-enters the portal and goes on the hunt for Shuken
(HUGE DELETED SCENE - hinted at in Genma's memories when he's talking to Tsunade) Shikamaru/Kurayami finds Shuken. He goes for Shuken like a heat-seeking missile, taking out mutants as he goes, unintentionally freeing Genma in the process, his shadows bringing chaos. He does damage. A lot of it. But in the last minute Naoki comes between Shuken and Shikamaru and gets Shuken's knife in the back. Shuken is out for the count after that. Naoki, knife in back, prioritises clamping his hands to Shikamaru's head, trying to shut down Kurayami and lock the alter away, as the whole building is coming down.
This was Naoki's last bid effort to try to save Shikamaru's mind by sealing off all the alters, knowing he didn't have time to integrate them.
Shocked Genma snaps into Kaika mode and gets his shit together, scooping up unconscious Shikamaru and running like a mo-fo with Naoki in tow
Naoki can't run any further, he falls and is bleeding out, tells Genma to run one last time and get the kid to safety, reminding him that Shikamaru can't be allowed to remember etc. Makes Genma swear an oath to him.
Though it costs him his heart, Genma does as he's told one final time. And it's too late to go back again after getting Shikamaru to safety at last. He believes Naoki is dead.
Phew! Sorry for that LONG list. I hope it clarifies for you those missing/deleted scenes, sweetie? Sorry again for any confusion. I own that as a big mistake on my part; sadly at the time, the mammoth wordcount and my runaway brain steamrolled ahead. In hindsight, I'd absolutely fix those gaps upon revision.
Aaa. Okay. I think I got most of my thoughts down so far. I'm sure I'll come back to gush some more, maybe ask some more.
You are most welcome to, luv. I am delighted and humbled by your interest and your huge support for my fic. Thank you for your patience with my response and thank you again, so, SO much for such an outstanding response to my insane contribution to the Naruto fandom.
I am grateful beyond measure and meant every single word I wrote you in that DM. I repeatedly revisit this review and I shall for as long as I write. 💗💗💗 Thank you.
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okamirayne · 17 days
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What inspired Genma and Shikamaru's backstories and the use of DID in your story???
Heya Anon! Thanks for your patience as I get round to answering ASKS. I'm playing catch up. 😅 Great to be able to steal some time.
Ooh! Interesting questions.
Firstly, Genma.
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Genma's backstory (and self-deprecating attitude lol) was fundamentally inspired by an OC of mine. So Genma's backstory is a mish-mash of OC stories, built on his own unique organic arc and journey through BtB. He's an offshoot, in that respect. Though he's very much his own character, his backstory origins (especially in relation to Naoki and Karibi) are thanks to my OCs. That'll probably be evident when I get my original works out into the world. As a sidenote, Genma's backstory has deepened further in HHU, as he's taken me further back into childhood memories, which I did not expect when writing him and that is very much inspired by nothing other than his unique formation in the BtB-verse. Certain things aren't planned, they just play out - and I really love when that happens.
Secondly, Shikamaru
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Shikamaru's backstory unfolded pretty organically, based on feeling into his character as he developed in BtB. As for the DID element, this is something I tackle in my original works, so it was an opportunity to use it, but only because it fit with Shikamaru's mind and how I write him in the BtB-verse. With a brain like his, it clicked, given his trauma.
Thanks for the questions, Anon! 💕 
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okamirayne · 4 years
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Hi Rayne!! Just finished (yet another) re-read of BtB, and I don't think I've cried this hard in a long, long time - it was very cathartic. But, feels aside, I was wondering if you could tell us a bit more about Karibi? She's fascinating and I'm just dying to know more! (Sorry if this has been asked before!!)
Hi there, my lovely Anon!
Apologies for the delayed response. Aw, luv.  Always so, so chuffed to learn someone has revisited the series and even more touched to know it hits you in the feels <3.
But, feels aside, I was wondering if you could tell us a bit more about Karibi? She's fascinating and I'm just dying to know more! (Sorry if this has been asked before!!)
Karibi! <3 Firstly, no, this hasn’t been asked before, so imagine my excitement regarding an OC ASK -- can you picture it? TREBLE IT. XD 
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Another dear Anon asked about Naoki in a previous ASK and I thank you for your expressed interest in Karibi! It’s a funny one because I have two Karibi OCs -- the edited version I inserted into BtB and the original, original version. Given that we’re talking about BtB Karibi...let me rewire my character brain a moment and firmly draw a line or two...or twelve....
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Right! A Third War orphan, Karibi grew up in the orphanage outside of Konoha and proved to be quite a handful over the years given her feisty nature, constant escape-attempts, insistence on dressing and behaving like a boy (for which she earned consistent bullying and beatings), and her rough-housing free-for-all scraps with other kids -- as well as her routine habit of stealing food from the kitchens to give to a stray dog who constantly hung around the outskirts of the orphanage. It was easier for her to attach herself this dog than other kids who came and went, just like the voluntary care-givers. Her mischief-making, stealthy tactics, “never stay down” stubbornness and streetwise attitude soon caught the attention of a retired Konoha ANBU veteran (a patron of the orphanage) who interrupted a violent fight between Karibi and a group of local boys who’d stoned the dog to death. Observing how fiercely she fought (always getting up when knocked down) despite being outnumbered and beaten, the ANBU veteran recognized her potential, promptly adopted her, and trained her in ninjutsu, genjutsu and chakra control.
Their relationship was close, until it wasn’t.
Advancing quickly through the academy and ranks – winning zero friends along the way – she was soon put forward for ANBU by her adopted father, who immediately cut his ties to her, damaging an already tentative trust. Intended as a solo agent, she was immediately assigned to a 3-team ANBU unit named Team Yokai consisting of herself, Genma, and Naoki (Captain).
Enter in, bonding.
It was here, after a lot of boundary testing and testosterone busting, that she finally formed some hard-won emotional attachments after beating Genma and Naoki bloody in taijutsu combat – taunting them constantly to get up (“seven times down, eight times up”). While she was promptly one-upped by both in ninjutsu, her genjutsu prowess brought her right back onto an even keel with them both. Perfectly balanced, respect began to form between them – then friendship – which later led to a lover’s trine between the three of them. This was intense but short-lived; Karibi soon recognised that though she loved them both, she preferred women and also realised Genma and Naoki’s feelings for each other went a hell of a lot deeper than ‘close friends with benefits’. She knew they’d fallen for each other before either admitted it to themselves, let alone each other.
The three of them were inseparably close.
They were more than her friends or comrades – they were her family.
They kept each other going.
Karibi allowed Naoki to establish a permanent telepathic link with her whereas Genma only allowed it during missions and in the bedroom. Karibi kept her mind open to Naoki always, though he never intruded until years later after being listed as Killed In Action.
His death blew a hole in their world.
Their team was dismantled.
They would not accept another Captain.
To make matters worse, due to the unbroken telepathic link and the resulting ghost of Naoki’s presence in her head, Karibi never truly believed Naoki had died and her adamant ‘denial’ of this ‘fact’ created a heart-breaking rift between her and Genma.
This rift between them grew darker and wider as Genma turned to solo deep-cover missions and Karibi turned to drink when she wasn’t neck-deep in assassinations and a failed “could’ve been” relationship. And then one day the edge of all the smashed glass bottles in her life looked very, very tempting.
Genma found her, just in time – the first time at least.
Treated and cleared of suicide risk, Karibi was soon diagnosed as schizophrenic given the “voice” of her dead Captain in her head and this threatened her position in the ANBU – but her brokenness caught Danzō’s interest.
After a failed attempt to recover her relationship with her civilian lover and unable to mend the rift between herself and Genma, she signed on for a ROOT initiation mission – which sadly finished what she’d started with the bottle – though it was an impulsive and sudden decision rather than a deeply pre-meditated one. She disobeyed orders when sent into a child-trafficking operation being run out of an orphanage. This was a trigger for her. Rather than complete the ROOT mission of kidnapping a couple of kids for ROOT grooming, she murdered her ROOT partner and slaughtered the “nuns” who were supposed to be taking care of the children rather than indenturing them into the sex-trade to raise funds. When the ninja traffickers showed up, she lit the building on fire, and while the children escaped she made damned sure not one “piece of trash” running the trafficking ring got out alive.
She went down fighting in flames.
Her death was the final crippling blow to Genma. He went to Mizugumo immediately after that. Then he went to his own personal hell before Kakashi met him there in ANBU’s gutter and helped drag him out of it years later, saving him from the same fate as Karibi when he almost identically mirrored the blaze of glory tragedy with his suicide attempt in Tanzaku years later.
Random Trivia:
Karibi loved dogs and often kept an eye out for Inuzuka women looking for a bit of rough and tumble.
She dealt with a lot of possessive shit from Naoki. He was very possessive of his family/lovers and was only just about able to accept Karibi being intimate with others, even after he’d stopped sleeping with her. Genma always joked that Naoki only accepted her activities because her preference was for women, not men.
Karibi, like Naoki, felt strongly about the abuse of children, given certain illicit incidents she’d witnessed at the orphanage -- she and Genma understood Naoki’s childhood trauma and were the only ones who could handle him when he flew into a rare rage
Her favourite catchphrase was “seven times down, eight times up” (“Nana korobi, ya oki” which means “Fall down seven times, stand up eight.” It means choosing to never give up hope, and to always strive for more.)
While her ANBU step-parent/mentor abandoned her in the end, she retained the green knit scarf he gifted her (the only gift she’d ever received from him other than her training and removal from the orphanage)
She began to fall for a civilian woman -- the scariest thing for her, other than losing her teammates.
Karibi’s top value was “resilience” and never giving up – which made her suicide attempt so painful for Genma to accept
She turned to Naoki for help retrieving memories about her parents – this enabled him to perfect his own kinjutsu to reverse memory erasure
She had a plethora of ear piercings and a tattoo Naoki inked on her hip
She loved various green teas
She had a crush on Kurenai – round about the same time Genma did, which made for an interesting competition between them….and a somewhat unfair irritation towards Asuma.
She was a bit of magpie in the ANBU and stole items on missions, donating them privately to the orphanage
She loved berry-picking and was very well-versed with poisons
Genma gave her chickenpox and she gave him hell for it
She almost managed to shove a spinning top up Genma’s ass – almost.
Genma accidentally broke her baby finger playing “thumb wars” and it never set properly on the joint, causing her to have a crooked little finger
Most of her illusion/genjutsu techniques focus around folklore creatures and light, which came in handy on missions dealing with highly suspicious village folk
Her dream goal was to one day be Goei Shotai to a female Hokage – a dream Genma later lived out for her when Tsunade came into power
Naoki was with her telepahtically when she died, as Genma was with Naoki when he died -- in that way, Karibi was not as alone in death as Genma always feared.
Wow, that was LONG.  Sorry, Anon! I absolutely love character-writing and development....I get carried away even if most of their story never makes it into the actual written piece. Thank you for asking about Karibi, I hope this insight gives you some answers! <3
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okamirayne · 3 years
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Realized recently that Genma didnt make too much appearance in the anime. How did you actually come up with his personality and his relationships in BtB? Do you have any inspiration? or did you base it off of his few appearances? Because I feel like Genma's personality I came to know in BtB is very complex and Im glad that it's well written. How raw his emotions were and his internal dialogues are a few of the things I loved the most. Thank you for your hard work~~~
Hey there Anon!
Thanks for the ASK!
Realized recently that Genma didnt make too much appearance in the anime. How did you actually come up with his personality and his relationships in BtB? Do you have any inspiration? or did you base it off of his few appearances?
Great question. Genma’s relationships were based very loosely off an original trine of characters which manifested in the BtB series as Naoki, Karibi, and Genma himself. While Genma bears similarities to my OC (the drug issues and the past trauma with a healthy dose of smartassery), they are worlds apart in many ways. I delved into Genma’s canon trivia (what is available to source; his jutsu, the meaning of his clan name, his love of pumpkin soup/broth and his motto of ‘ no words but action’) These titbits were good fun to explore and flesh out and enabled me to add onto existing dimensions.
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Another e.g. would be his senbon chewing -- which manifested as a mild masochistic tendency. Plus, his partnership with Raidou, his rank as Goei Shotai etc. If a character has a rank, habit, behaviour, or insecurity, I want to know the origin and that invariably leads me into an organic development as I write them. Same goes for other characters like Ibiki.
As with all Kishimoto’s underdeveloped or side-line characters I take the bare bones from their trivia and anime-screen time and build something original but hopefully canon-worthy from there.
Sometimes I had no idea what was going to come out of Genma’s mouth until I was writing the scene -- but then again, it’s like that with most scenes insofar as dialogue, even if I have a general idea of where the scene is heading action-wise/plot-wise.
Because I feel like Genma's personality I came to know in BtB is very complex and Im glad that it's well written. How raw his emotions were and his internal dialogues are a few of the things I loved the most. Thank you for your hard work
How awesome to learn this. That means a great deal to me, Anon. I adore when readers connect with the characters. Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know what you enjoyed and why. <3 I’m so happy to know you engaged with his portrayal! <3
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okamirayne · 3 years
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Hii Rayne! Sorry for popping up, buuut this Q&A thingy got to me too. By any chance, could you do that as Naoki as well? I'm dying to know, my love for him will be the death of me. xDD
Of course, It's totally okay if you don't want to do a chain of characters after Genma, I'll totally understand. (=^・ω・^=)
I'm still so happy you answered my Naoki & Shuken life+trivia asks before. I screeched from happiness like a madwoman. xD
As always, I enjoy the hell out of the yearly BtB series rereads. I can just play burrito with a blanket and squirm and scream in it my overwhelming feelings for the whole series. It gets better and better every time, and I absolutely feeling Naoki like holy hell, whyyyy? ╥﹏╥ He deserved the world with Genma. They never fail to make me cry.
Have a good night and I hope your burnout will get better soon. ♥ I love you and your mind. ♥ Take care for both. (*^ω^*)
And sorry for my english, I'm not a native speaker. (=^・ω・^=)
Hey there, sweetie!
Aw, @serawinterra it’s so wonderful to hear from you again!! And my gods, hitting me right in the mushy centre by asking about Naoki’s responses. 😭💜
I don’t have words for how much your words mean to me as well as your love and support for the series — especially your interest in the OCs. Bless you 🙏🏼💜 You’ve made my sad writer’s heart sing!!! Thank you for revisiting the series and for being so phenomenally kind. Love and hugs coming at you — and huge respect and gratitude for bridging the language barrier for my limitations🙏🏼 Thank you!
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Ah, now onto Naoki’s responses!
1 - thunderstorms or rainbows?: Thunderstorms. They resonate.
2 - books or movies? Books…mainly because they don’t come with the smartass running commentaries Genma hands out when watching movies.
3 - hoodies or denim jackets? Hoodies.
4 - city or countryside? Countryside. Less people. Quieter.
5 - achieve world peace or end world hunger? Peace…? I’m starting to think we weren’t built for that. Feeding the hungry sounds more plausible.
6 - pop or rock?: whatever Genma or Karibi inflict. I’m easy with music.
7 - many acquaintances or a few close friends? My people, always.
8 - cats or dogs? Dogs. Loyal.
9 - antiheroes or sympathetic villains? Antiheroes…they live in the grey…our world is never black or white.
10 - catchy beat or deep lyrics?: deep lyrics, unless I’m “Tenka”.
11 - bright colours or pastels?: in what? In art? Depends on the piece. Same holds true for most things…
12 - greek or roman mythology? Genma already ran head-first into this fourth wall. (Genma: paving the way like a god damn hero)
13 - coffee or tea?: both. Tea is rarer.
14 - sweet or savoury? Sweet
15 - reading or writing? Reading. I’m not good with words.
16 - summer or winter? Winter
17 - autumn or spring? Autumn
18 - strawberry or mango? Mango
19 - friendship or romance? …I had both with my team. Two sides of a coin. I can’t separate that.
20 - headphones or earbuds? Headphones. Better noise-cancelling.
21 - rom-coms or horror? Historical (Genma: that’s not an option) It is now.
22 - morning person or night owl? Night owl. Though ANBU knows no standard hours.
23 - dark or brightly coloured clothes? Dark. Easier. Better. Safer.
24 - easter or halloween? Halloween… always.
25 - metal or rap? Whatever mood takes me. No preference.
Voilà! There we have it. Thank you again for your interest in Naoki! I too weep for him and Genma’s painful sorry💔. But Thank you for allowing Naoki to live again through this Q&A! 😘 💜 Stay safe, sweetie.
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okamirayne · 4 years
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Hi! Q: Do you have any discarded scenes/storylines/projects? (Re: BtB!)
Hey there Anon!
Indeed I do. I’d need to sift through my BtB drafts folder.... but off the top of my head?
BtB Scenes:
Sasuke cameo in UtS
Genma flashbacks with Naoki and Karibi
Hizashi and Shikaku flashback
Hitaro scene or two
Inoichi and Sayuri meeting
Hibari and Sakura Oneshot though their dynamic concludes in HHU
Itachi and Kakashi flashback
Asuma, Genma and Kakashi scene
Naoki, Genma and Shuken
Ibiki and Hayate hospital scene
Few shikaneji ones
Edo Tensei scenes
I’m sure there are others in that folder as I was always adding to them.
Discarded projects?
An AMV. BtB related. Some art pieces to compliment the stories.
Discarded Storylines?
Do most of the secondary characters count? They are all MCs in their own perspectives. 💗
Itachi’s storyline for sure
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Thanks for the ASK, my luv! 💗
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okamirayne · 6 years
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Hey! I read in one of your posts that some characters in BtB got some of their quirks and stuff from your OCs. Like Genma etc. were there any other little bits that were inspired by your OCs? Hope the original wrks are going well! x
Hey there, Anon!
Thanks for the well-wishes regarding my original works. Slow and steady wins the race…I hope!
[..] were there any other little bits that were inspired by your OCs?
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Yes, indeed. Kiba calling Naruto “lovebird” is actually one such example. I have an original character who obnoxiously calls a comrade that. While the context for the “petname/insult” is different, I couldn’t resist the temptation to throw that into BtB in lieu of creating another Hanegakure character.
The Naoki-Karibi-Genma trine is based off three original characters - at least insofar as their dynamic. Naturally when writing BtB I took/take on the existing dimensions of the canon characters by researching as much about them as possible and mostly sticking true to their original form (at least as closely as possible with a lot of leeway for adding layers, changing sexual preferences, developing their character arcs and backstory etc.)
Other than the odd quirks, characters such as Mizugumo, Katsu, the Nagu, Nogusa, Shuken & Kali, the Bankon Council and all Tsubasa characters in BtB etc. are drawn directly from my original works creations - just very watered down and altered to fit the BtB fanfic and not distract too much from the story.
Thanks for the question, luv!
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