#because the idea that everyone had to follow standard English perfectly in all contexts is completely outdated and stopped being the

[undead-moth]

I know I’m being a hater and this is a 100% harmless thing that’s just a pet peeve of mine but truly one of the most annoying brands of post is “I don’t care about writing, grammar or punctuation rules. I do what I want!” And then the examples they give are. Completely in line with grammar/punctuation/writing conventions. And it’s like oh ok. You don’t even know what these rules are but you’ve decided you’re against them even as you follow them without knowing it. You are the writing equivalent of people who think Taylor Swift is punk just so you know.

[paradoxcase]

Harrow the Ninth Pronunciation Guide

I keep coming back to that idea that he might have picked this name because of Caesar. It would be so funny if that was actually the case. Like, it would be like if in some future where the US had somehow ceased to exist, I don't know, conquered, destroyed, disestablished, whatever, only subject matter for historians now, etc. and some world leader was like, man, George Washington was really cool, I really admire that guy, I want everyone to think about George Washington when they hear my name. So I'm going to change my last name to George, because who else was there even who was named George? I bet this is exactly what the ancient Americans did to invoke this great man

But now I'm curious about how much of Earth's old cultural whatnot was still public knowledge 100 years after the Resurrection. Like, people don't seem to remember anything about that era anymore, but surely the people who were resurrected all knew about it, and I doubt all that knowledge just disappears in a generation. Did people know John's name back then, and its links to Christianity and at least that Gaius was a Roman name?

Ok, so, not really related to the pronunciation at all, but it occurs to me that we've now learned that Augustine and probably also Mercy and Gideon and their cavaliers would have been born on pre-Resurrection Earth and resurrected by John, since they are the founders of their Houses, right? And if supposedly all of the people who were resurrected spoke English, and English is still the operating language of the Nine Houses, they should have English names, right? Alfred is a perfectly traditional English name; Cristabel is not exactly traditional but perfectly believable as a name that someone would be given; Gideon, sure, biblical names never go out of fashion in the anglosphere, even the weird ones, for real I went to college with a guy named Cain; Augustine, well, Augustus has a fine tradition as a name, that seems like a believable variation on that. But are we meant to believe that there were English-speaking people on Earth before the Resurrection named Mercymorn and Pyrrha? I could buy Mercy by itself as a woman's name given by some incredibly religious Christians or something, but "Mercymorn" seems to be following the standard we have in these books of two part names like Harrowhark and Coronabeth and Jeannemary, which is not something that i think came from any Earth tradition. And I can't imagine anyone would have been named Pyrrha. Maybe her parents were Classics nerds, or something?

Augustine and Alfred were like quite possibly the very first people to ever have an arithmonym. How could there possibly have been any implications about any use of them at that point?

Honestly, I feel like it works much better as a reference to Pyrrhus, just in terms of names being significant in the context of the story, because of what happened to Gideon in the fight against Number Seven

It's kind of funny that she wrote a whole paragraph about this, but at no point did she actually define "dactylic enneameter" for anyone who didn't recognize the roots, as, presumably, a poetic meter where each verse consists of nine metric feet, which each consist of two unstressed syllables followed by a stressed one

This pronunciation makes me realize this is supposed to be apo + pneumatism. But the pneuma root is about movement of air. Is thanergy a force that only moves or exists or emanates/radiates due to the presence of air molecules, like sound? Is that why there is so little thanergy in space, and not just because there isn't a source of thanergy nearby? Light can obviously travel for huge distances from the source through space, because it doesn't rely on air molecules

I'm fairly certain that every other English word that derives from Greek meso- is pronounced either /mɛzoʊ/ or /mɛsoʊ/, so why is this one /misoʊ/?

[alixanonymous]

How A Demon Commissions An Angel ~ A Daminette FanFic ~ Chapter 9: An Opening For Options

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Sent you an email for Jason’s jacket. Had an idea I think you might like.

Mr. Postscript: I see popular culture references strike again.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Is that a problem? 

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Cause I’m not even sure “Hit me with your best shot” would be considered a pop culture reference. I mean isn’t that song from like the 80’s?

Mr. Postscript: 1979 but I think it has less to do with when the source material was released and more with how often the reference is used in modern times, which in this case would be much too frequently.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Did google help you come to that conclusion?

Mr. Postscript: … 

Mr. Postscript: All online research must begin with the use of a search engine.

Mr. Postscript: At least I don’t use Wikipedia as a resource.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Everyone uses Wikipedia.

Mr. Postscript: Clearly not everyone. 

Mr. Postscript: … 

Mr. Postscript: Do you?

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Of course! I even donate to them every now and then!

Mr. Postscript: I see. 

Mr. Postscript: I’m beginning to reconsider our friendship. 

Mr. Postscript: I just don’t know if I can forgive this egregious offense.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Really, Mr. Drama Queen? My friends and their interrogations won’t scare you off but my support of the largest archive of free information will?

Mr. Postscript: Your friends were perfectly in their rights to see if I was worthy of your friendship.

Mr. Postscript: I believe I passed the test.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: You were great Damian! Honestly, thank you for putting up with them. Maybe you’re not as bad with people as you think.

Mr. Postscript: Yes, well it does help if they are more than three thousand miles away.

Mr. Postscript: There’s also the fact that I’ve admired Ms. Tsurgi’s fencing style for a while now which may have something to do with it. I’ve been following her career for years. 

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: … 

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Damian, how do you know who she is? We never told you her last name.

Mr. Postscript: Right… 

Mr. Postscript: It may have come up in my initial search for your identity.

Mr. Postscript: I don’t imagine there are many girls your age named Kagami who know how to fence, live in Paris, and have close ties to your class.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Okay, that explains that.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: I mean it’s still pretty creepy mind you but I went into this friendship knowing how it started.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: I guess it’s just weird to think that you know so much about me and I still know so little about you, not even your last name.

Mr. Postscript: You know more about me than anyone besides my family, angel. I wouldn’t want you knowing my last name to make you think differently.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Because you’re famous?

Mr. Postscript: In a way, yes. 

Mr. Postscript: You could probably find out who I was if you wanted, you have enough information to work with but I wish you wouldn’t. 

Mr. Postscript: I don’t think you’d like what you’d find.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Trust me, I know better than anyone that people sometimes only see what they want to. A little bad publicity won’t make me think differently of you. 

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Besides, I already told your brother, Damian. You get to decide what you tell me and when.

Mr. Postscript: I should’ve given you the same choice. If I’d known the kind of person you were beforehand, I would’ve.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: That’s the thing, you can’t know who people are before you get to know them. 

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: You have to give people a chance, Dami.

Mr. Postscript: What if they end up being like Ms. Rossi?

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: If we constantly think the worst of people, we’ll end up like Lila, calculating and manipulative.

Mr. Postscript: I suppose I see why you might think that. 

Mr. Postscript: You know… 

Mr. Postscript: If my family ever finds out how we met, I’d hate to have to deal with their disappointment. I think Todd already wants to adopt you. 

Mr. Postscript: Be on alert for another phone theft.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Well, they may never know. After all, they’ll get these amazing gifts for Christmas that will obviously show a lot of thought and consideration. 

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: They’ll never suspect we had a rocky start.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: But back to the subject of amazing gifts, do you like the wording? Is it not his style?

Mr. Postscript: Oh, Todd will love having that across his back.

Mr. Postscript: I just have a question about the “o” in shot. It’s supposed to be a target right?

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Yes! Well sorta?

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: I want to make it look like a poker chip with a target on it.

Mr. Postscript: Oh. I can see that. Why a poker chip? I don’t recall it coming up in our earlier discussion.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: I mean it did in a way.

Mr. Postscript: Oh? How so?

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: The poker chip would be stitched on the back of his right shoulder meaning he’d have a chip on his shoulder.

Mr. Postscript: … 

Mr. Postscript: I approve the design. The double meaning in your designs will be incredibly entertaining for me every time I see my brothers wearing them.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Well, like I said. Subtle details are my specialty. But I don’t recall any double meaning in Grayson’s design.

Mr. Postscript: Right. 

Mr. Postscript: I stand corrected. I simply meant there are a lot of subtle details. 

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Okay! That reminds me! I’ve started Grayson’s sweater.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Just sent a progress update to your email.

Mr. Postscript: It’s looking exactly like your drawing. I approve the choice of yarn; the colors are appropriately vibrant.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Great!

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: So what were you thinking for Drake’s sweater?

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: I think I remember you mentioned a drawstring hood.

Mr. Postscript: I did, yes. However, I’ve been rethinking that idea.

Mr. Postscript: I can picture my family accusing me of trying to suffocate Drake.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: … 

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Well, we wouldn’t want that!

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: You know maybe the “hit me with your best shot” thing wasn’t the best idea either.

Mr. Postscript: It’s not that concerning with Todd. I’m sure he’ll just love that across his back. Drake and I have a more complicated history.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Didn’t you say your inside jokes with Jason were your attempts on each other’s lives? 

Mr. Postscript: Yes but it’s Jason. He antagonizes everyone.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Got it. But Drake’s different?

Mr. Postscript: Yes. Everyone loves Drake. Well, except for Todd but we’ve established that Todd hates everyone.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: So why are things complicated between you too?

Mr. Postscript: Correction: Two

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: … 

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: You know what? Okay. I stand corrected. Question still applies.

Mr. Postscript: I may have treated him poorly when I first joined the family. He was the most recent addition to my father’s collection of orphan children and I may have tried to claim his place in the family by forcibly removing him from it.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: I see. So you felt threatened by his presence and handled it poorly?

Mr. Postscript: I would say that is a drastic yet not wholly inaccurate interpretation. 

Mr. Postscript: However, I’ve since realized that my initial concerns were unnecessary. Drake is a threat to no one but himself.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: But your family still holds it against you? They still think you might actually hurt him?

Mr. Postscript: Well, I was a bit extreme and while I no longer harbor the same intentions, no one could accuse us of being particularly warm.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: I see. 

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Have you tried apologizing?

Mr. Postscript: You mean sincerely and not because father ordered me to?

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Yes. 

Mr. Postscript: Then no.

Mr. Postscript: However, before you begin what would surely be a fruitless campaign to get me to change that… 

Mr. Postscript: Might I remind you my family isn’t big on addressing our feelings? I believe Todd’s tried to hurt Drake before too and I highly doubt he ever issued an apology yet they seem to be on good terms again.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Right. 

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Well, as your resident people skills instructor, I think I’m supposed to give you some kind of advice like two wrongs not making a right but frankly I’ve begun to realize that is utter bullshit, pardon my english. So I can understand why an apology would not be on the table.

Mr. Postscript: I’ve never understood that saying and I’m glad that I will not have to hear it from you. 

Mr. Postscript: Do not mistake me, I understand the sentiment in a way however, I’ve always felt it to be too general and way too easy to use in a non-applicable, negative context.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Good to know where on the same page there.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Damian, I don’t mean to pry but can I ask you a question?

Mr. Postscript: You may ask and I may answer.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Do you feel like your family holds you to a higher standard?

Mr. Postscript: … 

Mr. Postscript: I don’t know if I’d call it a higher standard. 

Mr. Postscript: … 

Mr. Postscript: I simply have more to catch up on. I started with less knowledge of some basic things than the rest of my brothers. However, I wouldn’t say I’m treated differently in any case. You should see Todd and father argue sometime. 

Mr. Postscript: I just hate feeling behind. I’m used to being the best, the favorite like I was when I lived with my mother. So failing like I have recently has been frustrating, especially with what’s now on the line.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: You mean the threat of moving?

Mr. Postscript: I wouldn’t call it a threat. I actually feel like I should mention that the place he wants to send me to is actually somewhere all my brothers have attended so it’s not like I’d be the first to go there in any case.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Oh, so it’s like a family tradition?

Mr. Postscript: I suppose you could say that.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: So would going really be that bad?

Mr. Postscript: Honestly?

Mr. Postscript: In theory, it wouldn’t be the end of the world or anything. In actuality? I can’t imagine it would be pleasant.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Okay. If there’s one thing that makes you not want to go, what would it be?

Mr. Postscript: Is it not self-explanatory? Why would I want to start over again and lose all I’ve earned since coming here? I spent ten years of my life without my family, is it a crime to not want to waste any more?

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Okay, I would say that does sound rather awful to put it lightly but would it really be like that? I mean it’s not like you’re going off to war or anything, right? You’d still talk regularly and video chat and stuff?

Mr. Postscript: I’m sure we would, angel, but they’d still be here, all together and I’d be miles away, with only people I’d have no clue how to interact with for company.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Right.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Are you worried about feeling like an outsider again?

Mr. Postscript: No. 

Mr. Postscript: Not quite… 

Mr. Postscript: I’m more worried about feeling like a failure. Nothing is more shameful than being a disappointment. Especially when I have three brothers who aren’t even related to contend with that seem to be doing him proud. 

Mr. Postscript: Except for Todd but he’s turned disappointing father into its own type of game and at which he’s winning.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Aren’t your brothers older than you? And haven’t they been with your dad longer? Surely it doesn’t make sense to compare yourself to them?

Mr. Postscript: Please!

Mr. Postscript: When Drake was my age, father was already training him to take over the family business. 

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Damian, in any case it’s not a competition, right? You’re not competing with them for your father’s regard.

Mr. Postscript: Maybe that’s so. I still feel like I’m losing and I hate that.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Yeah, I imagine you would.

Mr. Postscript: How helpful. 

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: I mean, you’re always allowed to feel how you do.

Mr. Postscript: Thank you for the permission. I do so appreciate it.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Okay, Mr. Sarcasm, do you really want to know what I think?

Mr. Postscript: … 

Mr. Postscript: Go on.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Okay, you might not want to hear this and of course this is just my opinion but it seems to me like you have really high expectations to meet, maybe they’re other people’s or maybe their your own. Whether or not you actually have to contend with your brother’s achievements, you obviously feel like you do and I can see how that would be hard to turn off. So maybe some distance from the situation would be a good thing?

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: I know that having to meet new people especially when socializing isn’t your strong suit sounds daunting but I kinda feel like you’re selling yourself short. Sure, you’ve had trouble in the past but you’ve made progress right? Moving to a new place doesn’t erase any of that. I get that the first time you had to start over was hard but now you’re older and wiser and have family to support you and a wonderful friend/moral compass to help you (aka me). Plus, I don’t know, it just feels like you’re really focused on doing what you think people expect of you and not what you really want for yourself. I don’t know, maybe some time away from expectations and legacies might give you some perspective. 

Mr. Postscript: … 

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: … 

Mr. Postscript: Withdrawing now, giving up and moving on, wouldn’t that be like quitting? Is quitting not another form of losing?

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: If you’re looking at it like that, I’d ask yourself this: Is winning worth it if you hate the game you’re playing?

Mr. Postscript: … 

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: … 

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: So, totally overstepped there, didn’t I? Sorry!

Mr. Postscript: No need to apologize.

Mr. Postscript: I’m just not sure how I feel right now.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: That’s okay! I’m not trying to force you to make any big decisions right now or anything. If you just want some time to think, that’s cool. Whatever you end up doing, you deserve to have a choice in it so let’s come up with something for Drake’s sweater so your dad doesn’t force your hand okay?

Mr. Postscript: Okay.

Mr. Postscript: Marinette?

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Yes?

Mr. Postscript: Thank you. 

Mr. Postscript: Everything you’ve done and said so far has shown a level of care for me I’ve done nothing to deserve and I know you’re always just trying to help me and I'm very grateful. I just want you to know I will do my best to be as good a friend to you too.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: I know, Damian. You may have your faults (we all do) but loyalty is not one of them. 

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: For whatever it’s worth, I think your family also wants what’s best for you like I do. It just has to be up to you to decide what that is.

Mr. Postscript: Right.

Mr. Postscript: Well for starters, I think it would be best for me to avoid being accused of attempting to suffocate Drake.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Yeah, I agree.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: So would you want just a regular sweater for him then? Or I could make a drawstring hood that doesn’t close completely? I could make it so there’s always a gap left to breathe through.

Mr. Postscript: I like that last idea best. 

Mr. Postscript: My original vision was that Drake could easily shut out the world and fall asleep in it so we don’t have to deal with his insomniac coffee zombie antics all the time.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: I want my business card to have “insomniac coffee zombie” on it.

Mr. Postscript: I highly doubt you’d get a lot of business that way. It’s a poor marketing strategy. It comes off as unprofessional.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Please, my clients are normally the reason I pull all nighters. I would give it credit for illustrating my dedication to my craft.

Mr. Postscript: Don’t get me started on Drake’s work ethic. 

Mr. Postscript: The thought that you and Drake might actually have a lot in common is quite unsettling. 

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Really, anything else we share besides a coffee addiction and ambition?

Mr. Postscript: Well, you both are child prodigies in a way. For all our differences, I can’t deny Drake has done much for father’s company at a young age and you have created a whole brand for yourself at only sixteen.

Mr. Postscript: I’d never thought about the logistics of balancing schoolwork and commissions. Is it difficult?

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: I mean, yes and no. There have been times when I stretched myself too thin and paid the price in sleepless nights. But that’s the perks on being your own boss I guess. I just learned to pace the commissions and be selective with my clientele. It’s worked pretty good so far.

Mr. Postscript: That’s a relief to hear. However I hope my order didn’t come in a bad time. Did you already have a lot on your plate?

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Nah, I usually keep the holiday season light so I have time to make Christmas gifts. Although, I suppose that’s not as much of a concern this year.

Mr. Postscript: Oh?

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Quite a few classmates have been crossed from the Christmas list this year.

Mr. Postscript: I see.

Mr. Postscript: I don’t know whether I feel happy or upset for you.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Ha! Me neither.

Mr. Postscript: I suppose it is both then. I am happy that you are standing up for yourself but upset that they have forced you to.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Thanks Damian. I can’t help but feel a bit like I’m being petty.

Mr. Postscript: Petty is a word people use when they hold you to a higher standard than themselves.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Now I want to put that on a t-shirt!

Mr. Postscript: Hm. I would order one.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Really? You’d match shirts with me?

Mr. Postscript: Well, no. I wouldn’t wear it around you per se, I don’t think I’d pull it off as well. However, I’d happily parade it in front of my brothers.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: You know what I’ll take it.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Shelving that design for now, let’s get back to Drake’s sweater. So I got a general sense of his taste from the pictures you sent me although I already see I’ll have to take some liberties when it comes to fabric because these pieces don’t look like they were made particularly for comfort and that’s a priority here right?

Mr. Postscript: Yes. I trust your judgement when it comes to fabric.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Great! All that’s left is the design and for once I actually have an idea right off the back.

Mr. Postscript: Is that so? Consider me impressed.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Well, it all hinges on Drake being as big of a coffee lover as you make him out to be.

Mr. Postscript: Trust me angel, coffee addict is literally Drake’s personality. I don’t know how that’s possible but he managed it. 

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Okay. It’s time then. 

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: I’ve had this idea in the back of my mind for a while now and I’ve never taken the time to fully develop it but if I pull it off it may well be the greatest piece I ever produce.

Mr. Postscript: And of course, it goes to Drake. He’ll never let that go.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: I’d hope not. He should feel honored to be the recipient. T.G.Y.T.T.B.: However, I’ll need two things from you to make this work.

Mr. Postscript: Well?

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: I’ll need you to take a picture of your brother’s coffee, after he’s poured and added whatever he adds (although if he’s truly a coffee addict that won’t be much). 

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: It is CRUCIAL that you make sure to show me the exact shade he drinks, understand?

Mr. Postscript: Now you’re even starting to sound like him when he’s in a coffee-crazed state.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Do. You. Understand?

Mr. Postscript: Yes. I can do that. What else?

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Right, I’m gonna need you to trust me on this, okay? The design is going to be so much more than meets the eye so I’m not going to show you any drawing or photos before you get it in the mail, okay? T.G.Y.T.T.B.: I know that’s kind of a lot to ask but I think you’ll understand why in the end.

Mr. Postscript: … 

Mr. Postscript: I’m not going to pretend any of this isn’t ridiculously strange but since you obviously know what you’re doing and Drake actually loves a good mystery, I’ll allow it. Use your idea.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Yay! You won’t regret it!

Mr. Postscript: So is that all you need?

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Yup, Grayson’s sweater is already started, I’ll go shopping for the materials for Jason’s jacket tomorrow, and Drake’s can be started as soon as I get that picture of the coffee.

Mr. Postscript: That won’t take long. I should have it to you by tomorrow at the latest.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Great!

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: Um, Damian. I really have to go. There’s an akuma.

Mr. Postscript: Yes. I got an alert. I signed up for them when you mentioned the situation. Is it close? T.G.Y.T.T.B.: it will be ill text you tomorrow okay?

Mr. Postscript: Yes. Be safe.

T.G.Y.T.T.B.: thx bye1

From:DoWhatISay@email.com

To:Marinette.D.C.@email.com

Date:November 10, 2021 7:00 P.M.

Subject: (No Subject)

Postscript: I would like you to know that I found your use of the phrase “Pardon my English” after swearing to be the pinnacle of comedy and would like to request permission to use this myself someday? - Damian 

From:Marinette.D.C.@email.com

To:DoWhatISay@email.com

Date:November 11, 2021  7:30 A.M.

Subject: RE: (No Subject)

P.S. Permission granted. :)

   - Marinette

Hello Tumblr! It’s been a while, sorry for that. Life has been a rollercoaster these last few weeks and unfortunately not the kind that only goes up my friends. On to better news however, this chapter being posted means Tumblr is finally caught up to where the story is at on AO3. Even better, chapter ten is mostly finished. Everything is written and now I just have to go over and edit it one last time. I do plan on posting it today which feels so weird to say because writing this chapter was so different than my usual experience. It totally breaks my usual chapter structure and I feel like I wrote it at a snail’s pace. Here’s hoping it will have been worth the wait! I’ll see you again soon but as always AO3 will be updated first! <3

Master List

[violethowler]

Mixed Signals

As we near the end of this series of essays, I’d like to take the time to talk about something that I’ve been wanting to discuss in relation to the Kingdom Hearts series for a while. I briefly mentioned it in my previous essays but never went into detail because I figured some corners of the fandom would be unreceptive to discussion if I brought it up. But given how many times I have seen Kingdom Hearts fans praise this series for its lack of negative male stereotypes, I think it worthwhile to explore how the series handles gender norms in relation to the Heroine’s Journey. 

Maureen Murdock developed her template while working as a therapist with women in their 30s who had pursued careers in heavily male-dominated fields only to find themselves feeling burnt out and unfulfilled once they achieved their goals. A significant part of her inspiration for the Heroine’s Journey came from her patients describing how they had set out trying to achieve success in these environments by emulating the men in their life such as their fathers, while pushing away the influence of their mothers[1]. As such, deep down the themes of the Heroine’s Journey reflect on the struggles of someone who doesn’t meet the ideals of what society tells them a person of their gender is supposed to be and critique those gender norms. 

On a meta level, Kingdom Hearts represents a fusion of cultures, made from a collaboration between an American and a Japanese company. While there are a few places where the two cultures overlap in terms of gender norms, it isn’t a 1:1 comparison. Therefore, the gender norms of both cultures should be taken into account when analyzing how the portrayal of the two leads in Kingdom Hearts aligns with the critique of gender roles presented by the Heroine’s Journey. 

In terms of Japanese cultural norms, Sora’s emotional openness, compassion, optimism, and ability to easily form connections with others are fairly standard for male protagonists in Shonen stories[2]. However, following the first game in the series, the narrative begins to deconstruct this archetype over the course of Sora’s character arc. From KH2 onward we see him use his cheerfulness and optimism to hide his own insecurities and self-doubt. Our first introduction to his life on Destiny Islands depicts him competing with Riku in physical challenges, while the other kids talk about how much stronger than him Riku is, setting him up for a disproportionate focus on physical ability over emotional. This leads him to believe that he has no strength on his own and must rely on the power of his friends in order to be worthy of recognition and praise. 

Related to Sora’s insecurities about his own strength, one archetype found in both Japanese and American culture is that of the masculine protector. The idea that a man must be ready and able to physically defend the people he cares about from harm, often to the point of self-sacrifice. In fiction, this trope is most frequently employed with a character’s friends, siblings, or romantic partner. The gender of the protectee can vary depending on the story and their relation to the protagonist, but male heroes protecting female love interests is one of the most common ways I’ve seen this trope be expressed. 

Failure to uphold this ideal is commonly used as a source of angst for the male protagonist. Heroes who fit this mould are known to brood heavily if harm comes to their loved ones that they are unable to protect them from, and in some stories may be ridiculed or shamed by others around them. There are also variations where the hero’s inability to protect them is used as a source of angst for the protectee in addition to the main character. Common in stories where the one being protected is a friend, sibling, or love interest, some narratives will have the protectee react to the hero’s inability to protect them by deciding to “toughen up” so that they don’t need protection. 

As mentioned in my first essay, the protagonist of a Heroine’s Journey and their Animus are frequently depicted as two sides of the same coin, with shared core character traits that manifest in contrasting ways because of their different circumstances. At the start of the Kingdom Hearts series, both Sora and Riku have built their sense of self-worth around their ability to live up to this idealized protector archetype. Their insecurities stem from their perceived failure to adhere to that role, with each of them coming at it from a different direction. 

Being the older of the two, Riku is presented as physically stronger than Sora, something which the other kids on Destiny Islands make note of in the first game. Tidus talking about how, despite getting stronger, Sora is “still no match for Riku[3]” and that Kairi “can always count on him(Riku)[3]” frames Sora’s insecurity about wanting to be on equal footing with his Animus as being rooted in his perceived inability to fulfill social expectations.  

When they meet again in Traverse Town, Riku’s first on-screen reaction to how Sora has changed since they last saw each other is surprise and confusion at Sora being able to defeat threats like the Heartless on his own, indicating that the root of Riku’s insecurities - which Maleficent of course exploits - is his belief that the value Sora places on their bond is conditional on Riku being needed as a protector. If Sora can fill that role himself, then what purpose does Riku have? 

In keeping with how protagonists are usually depicted fulfilling this role to the point of self-sacrifice, Sora and Riku have both shown a tendency towards throwing themselves in front of an enemy attack to protect someone they care about, such as when Riku leaps in front of Xemnas’s aerial blade to defend Sora in the final boss fight of Kingdom Hearts II, or when Sora puts himself between Kairi and Terranort. Xigbar even comments on this tendency when he talks about how he doesn’t admire “one guy leaping into danger if it means someone else might have to jump in to save him.[4]” 

From the western perspective, one of the things that many English-speaking fans have praised the series for is its avoidance of negative stereotypes in the writing of its male characters. A common cultural attitude in the United States holds that a man must always be stoic and aloof with everyone but his romantic partner. That a man who is open with his emotions, especially if it involves crying, is weak and unmanly. That engaging in activities that society associates with women and femininity makes one less of a man. 

But Kingdom Hearts, from the point of view of western fans, rejects all of that. The writing of the series allows its male characters to express the full range and depth of their emotions and not once does the narrative ever frame them as weak or pathetic for it. None of the male leads are ever made fun of for crying or expressing vulnerability, and they never reject doing something simply for being “girly”. Not only that, but the arc being set up for Sora to learn to acknowledge and work through his insecurities and self doubts instead of hiding them as an allegory works as a direct rebuke of the idea that showing emotional vulnerability is somehow unmanly. 

On another layer, Sora’s arc can also be seen as a critique of the Japanese concept of Honne and tatemae. Tatemae (literal meaning: “built in front” or “facade”) is the behavior and attitude one presents to the public that conforms to the expectations of society in addition to the individual’s station and circumstances, while Honne (literal meaning: “true sound”) represents a person’s true opinions, which are kept hidden except from close friends and may or may not match their tatemae[5]. This can sometimes be used on a more interpersonal level to evade confrontation and avoid hurting others’ feelings, such as when someone says “we should hang out sometime” with no intention of doing but not wanting to hurt the other person’s feelings by admitting that they aren’t interested. 

The idea of keeping one’s true feelings separate from what one says in public fits with how characters in the Kingdom Hearts universe have been shown to hide their own inner darkness and in some cases deny that it’s there, which Xehanort took note of in his conversation with the Master of Masters in Re:Mind. We also have Donald and Goofy’s talk in the beginning about how the Gummi Ship “runs on happy faces[3]” instilling in Sora - despite their good intentions - the idea that his negative feelings about the destruction of his home are a burden to the trio’s ability to complete their mission. As a result, Sora continues to downplay his own sadness and other similar emotions across subsequent games. As a contrast to this, Esmeralda tells Riku in Dream Drop Distance that everyone keeps things locked inside sometimes and that it’s okay to keep some things separate from the world at large until they’ve had time to figure out their feelings for themselves. In this context, the version of tatemae that Donald and Goofy present ultimately causes more damage in the long run, while Esmeralda offers a healthier model of the concept. 

So from a Japanese perspective, the Kingdom Hearts story is deconstructing two common archetypes found in coming of age narratives aimed at pre-teen and teenage boys and at the same time offering a critique of a common cultural attitude about individual expression. Meanwhile from a western perspective, the series defies conventional norms of masculinity and male characters in fiction while also critiquing elements of those views at the same time. 

Both of these are perfectly in tune with how the Heroine’s Journey structure provides social commentary on gender and cultural norms.

The fact that the series challenges the audience's perception of gendered narrative archetypes and social norms from multiple perspectives is also reflected in how it mixes the symbolism associated with its two lead characters. For example, the series repeatedly presents canon Disney Princess romances as parallels to Sora and Riku, but which of the two corresponds to the Disney Prince and which one is the Princess varies from one game to the next: 

Sora acknowledges in the first game that like Ariel, he wants to explore the outside world. The same game also presents Ursula tricking Ariel into helping her as a parallel to Maleficent’s manipulation of Riku. 

Kingdom Hearts I presents the Beast as a parallel to Sora through their shared refusal to give up after being laid low by Riku upon their arrival at Hollow Bastion. Meanwhile in Kingdom Hearts II, the Beast is presented as a parallel to Riku, as mentioned in my previous essay. 

The first game parallels Sora to Aladdin through similar shots of the two calling out for Riku and Jasmine respectively as they are forced to flee the location of a boss fight (the Cave of Wonders for Aladdin, Monstro’s stomach for Sora). Kingdom Hearts II uses Aladdin avoiding Jasmine at the start of Sora’s first visit to Agrabah to parallel Riku avoiding Sora throughout KH2 as a whole. 

While not considered an *official* Disney Prince (he’s still unofficially marketed as one), Kingdom Hearts III connects Hercules diving into the River Styx to save Megara’s soul with Riku’s sacrifice for Sora at the Keyblade Graveyard. Meanwhile in KH2, Hercules’s attempts to hide how exhausted he is trying to meet everyone’s expectations greatly resembles Sora hiding his doubts and insecurities. 

The fluidity of which one corresponds to the Disney Prince and which one is the Princess in these parallels also carries over to other narrative symbols. In visual mediums, the protagonist and Animus of a Heroine’s Journey are frequently depicted with a Yin and Yang motif - light and dark in balance with each other. In visual depictions of the concept of Yin and Yang, Yin is the black side - representing darkness and associated with femininity - while Yang is the white side - representing light and associated with masculinity[6]. Visual depictions of Yin and Yang use the Moon to symbolize Yin and the sun to represent Yang. Many visuals include an opposite color dot in the middle of each side, representing how the two forces balance each other out - there is darkness within light and light within darkness, so to speak. 

The depiction of Yin as darkness with an inner light aligns with Riku’s character arc over the course of the series, but Sora is the one associated with moon imagery. Meanwhile, Yang being the light with a bit of darkness inside matches how Sora is on the path toward learning to acknowledge the darkness in his own heart, but Riku, who walks the “Road to Dawn[7].” is the one visually connected to the sun. Even in other pairs that have narrative parallels to Sora and Riku, the Yin-Yang motif differs from conventional depictions. Instead of the typical male Yang and female Yin, Yozora and Nameless star’s Yin-Yang motif has the gendered colors reversed. Nameless star is dressed all in white with dark hair, while Yozora wears dark clothes and has lighter hair. 

This kind of fluidity in terms of symbolism and narrative parallels is perfect for a Heroine’s Journey. Many stories that follow the formula symbolically associate the male love interest with the archetypal damsel in distress, with the female protagonist being cast as the knight in shining armor heroically storming the castle in order to free them. But in the context of a Heroine’s Journey that is setting up a same-gender romance with two male leads, it adds an additional layer of meaning: 

A well known stereotype involving same-sex couples is that their roles in the relationship will be exactly the same as the roles that society associates with an opposite-sex pair, with one always corresponding to the “female” role and the other to the “male” one. The Uke/Seme trope common in fanfiction from the early 2000s is a notable example of this. By presenting a romantic relationship between two male leads where the symbolism and narrative parallels are framed in a way that depicts the implied gender roles as constantly being in flux, the narrative sends a message that people are too complicated and flexible for every romantic relationship to fit into the same rigidly defined roles.

In conclusion, the depiction of Sora and Riku both as individuals and as a developing romantic relationship is consistent with how the Heroine’s Journey challenges gender and cultural norms from the perspective of two different cultures. By following this narrative framework, the Kingdom Hearts series deconstructs gendered narrative archetypes from both Japan and the United States, reflecting its origins as a crossover between franchises popular in each country. 

Sources:

[1] The Heroine’s Journey; Maureen Murdock; 1990. 

[2] TV Tropes; Stock Shonen Hero; https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/StockShonenHero

[3] Kingdom Hearts; Square Enix; 2002. 

[4] Kingdom Hearts III; Square Enix; 2019. 

[5] Wikipedia - Honne and tatemae https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Honne_and_tatemae

[6] Wikipedia; Yin and Yang https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yin_and_yang

[7] Kingdom Hearts: Chain of Memories; Square Enix; 2004. 

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Her (Word A) and His (Word B)

The language barriers, cultural assumptions, and personal baggage blocking communication between humans, aliens, and titans—as demonstrated by what should have been an incredibly simple question about Godzilla and Mothra’s relationship.

This is part of an ongoing series of one-shots set in a KOTM canon-divergent AU; but if you don’t want to read the others, the only things you need to know are: Ghidorah’s still alive and shacking up on Isla de Mara; Rodan’s been teaching Ghidorah his language and the nearest Monarch base has been eagerly recording the lessons; Rodan refers to everyone—including himself—by the names of the nearest geological feature they call home; and Rodan is oblivious to 90% of the history between Ghidorah and Godzilla. Links to the other fics are in the source at the bottom of this post.

This is actually set like... a couple fics in the future from where I’m writing right now, but it doesn’t really affect the main continuity. Inspired loosely by the ask I got earlier today like “What’s Mark doing now that he knows his theories are wrong?” that I answered “lmao he doesn’t know.” 

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As Rodan and Ghidorah's conversations got more complicated and Rodan's language lessons to Ghidorah became more intricate, sometimes the hardworking crew at Monarch Outpost 56-B couldn't immediately offer a direct translation in the subtitles of their Rodan-to-Spanish/English language lesson videos.

Such was the case today, when they'd had to offer the following translation to a brief exchange that had taken place while Ghidorah was curled around the curve of the volcano and Rodan was hopping through the trees below:

Ghidorah: "What is Mothra and Godzilla's [relationship/interaction]?"

Rodan: "Godzilla is her [unknown word 1] and Mothra is his [unknown word 2]. The same way you[plural] are [unknown word 1 (plural form)]."

Usually, at that point, Ghidorah would ask for clarification, and Rodan would—through metaphor, synonym, story, or physical demonstration—offer a definition for the new words. But instead Ghidorah made what 56-B had dubbed his Confirmation Sound, and the exchange had quickly ended:

Rodan: "Do you understand?"

Ghidorah: "Yes."

And that was it.

By virtue of her work in paleobotany, Dr. Xochitl Flores Rosales had been hired by Monarch; by virtue of her ability to actually speak Spanish, she had received an emergency transfer to the three trailers on Isla de Mara that made up Outpost 56-B; and by virtue of her undergrad linguistics minor and college hobby of making YouTube videos synchronizing video game cut scenes with Linkin Park songs, most of her time was now taken up by creating Monarch-unapproved videos of Rodan language lessons.

This wasn't the first time Xochitl had posted a video with some words left blank. Some time back, Rodan and Ghidorah had left Isla de Mara for a few days, stayed mostly outside of the range of any cameras or recorders that could catch their conversation, and come back with their shared vocabulary doubled; Xochitl was still figuring out some of the words they'd started using while they were gone. Whenever she did, she updated the subtitles in the older videos and mentioned the updates in the next video. This, however, felt different. It felt like a Rodan-teaching-a-new-word situation, not like a Rodan-using-a-word-he'd-covered-where-Monarch-couldn't-hear situation. But he hadn't explained the words to Ghidorah—which meant the meanings should be obvious from the context, shouldn't they? But what were they?

Xochitl posted the video as usual, grumbled about the challenges of translating titans on her private twitter, and pushed her concerns aside to take her shift monitoring the titan activity on the volcano.

When she got back, she'd received commiserating likes from both Chen twins—they had their work cut out for them translating Mothra’s telepathic conversations—and an email from Mark Russell entitled "Latest translation vid." Ah. He was probably going to offer his opinion on how to translate the two unknown words.

Sure enough, when she clicked to read his email:

Dr. Flores-Rosales,

I had a thought about the two unknown words in the language lesson you put up today. What if they're indicators of rank in titan hierarchy? "Godzilla is her king and Mothra is his queen, the same way you are kings"; "Godzilla is her alpha and Mothra is his beta, the same way you are alphas"; "Godzilla is her leader and Mothra is his standard-bearer, the same way you are leaders," something like that. The fact that Rodan explains the word by comparing how Godzilla and Ghidorah have the trait in common makes it sound like he's talking about something unique to the two of them (four of them?), doesn't it? Let me know what you think.

Dr. Mark Russell

She'd considered the possibility—she didn't like it, because she wasn't too keen on how hard Mark was pushing the "cross-species herd with one alpha" hypothesis without anyone exploring the alternatives—but she'd considered it. It was on the list of possibilities, at least—a list that was unfortunately broad and woefully inconclusive.

She took a minute to think over her wording, then typed up a polite email acknowledging his suggestion and explaining that they hadn't heard the words in enough contexts yet for them to draw any conclusions.

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"What is The Bug and Little King's relationship?"

The three of them were sure that the names that the red sprite called the bug and the little king did not, in fact, translate to "The Bug" and "Little King." But they didn't know what the red sprite's names for them did mean—didn't even know if names in the red sprite's language had meanings, many names in many languages didn't—so until they received a translation, in their minds, the names would continue to mean The Bug and Little King.

The question of the relationship between those two plagued them. Had plagued them for—how long had they been frozen?—for ages. Ever since they'd landed on this rock, stumbled on the bug that shone psychic lights too too deep into their minds, killed her, found she was simply reborn remembering everything about them except that they'd killed her; began hunting and crushing her eggs, been attacked by the little king, and found him ready to fight them at every one of her nests like her personal bodyguard. They'd grown to detest the little king as much as the bug. But they especially detested how the two of them fought side-by-side.

At last, they had someone they could pump for more information. They knew both the bug and the little king's names (sort of); they could ask about them without having to make a fuss about it, without having to draw it out into a long conversation that could be overheard and reported back to the bug and little king. This could be quick and simple.

Except that red sprite answered, without looking up from whatever curiosity he'd identified in the forest below his volcano, immediately and simply, "Little King is her something and The Bug is his something else." Two words they didn't know. At their puzzled silence, the red sprite glanced back at them and elaborated, "The same way you're something."

Something twisted inside them as they realized they knew exactly what he meant.

The first sickening translation they reached was one that fit exactly what they'd always feared and expected to be the dynamic between a warrior with the strength to destroy the world who nevertheless refused to use it and an overpowered psychic who appeared to direct the warrior's actions. The translation they reached was the little king is her slave and the bug is his master. But, no. Surely the red sprite wouldn't follow that up with the same way you're slaves.

"Aha," they said, uncomfortably.

The red sprite cocked his head. "Do you understand?"

The red sprite wouldn't speak to them like that. He'd never seen them as slaves. He'd never seen them in harness as a war machine rather than as they were now. He'd never seen them as anything but free agents of accelerated entropy. He had no reason to call them slaves.

Then, a similar word. The little king is her weapon and the bug is his wielder. The same way you're weapons. Or something similar—warrior and commander, monster and handler. The little king was something the same as they were, and the thing that he was belonged to her. That was what mattered. Him as her possession; him as something that could be possessed; them, too, as this same class of thing that could be possessed. Not possessed now, but possessable.

"Yes," they said. And then they turned away, watching the horizon, telling themselves that the psychic prickle they felt in the back of their minds was just that—all in their minds.

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"What is Infant and Mariana's relationship?"

It was odd for Nido to hear the golden ones refer to the two of them by their proper names, the-one-from-Infant-Island and the-one-from-Mariana-Trench, rather than the more derisive "it" or "that one" they usually used when talking about either of them. Maybe they were getting over being on the losing end of that kerfuffle with them.

Without pausing his weeding, Nido said, "Mariana is her brother and Infant is his sister." He pecked up another unwelcome tree.

When the golden ones didn't reply—even to ask for elaboration—Nido looked up from the forest toward them. (The golden ones were, again, lounging around the volcanic crater instead of in it, like they had no idea what to do with a bunch of perfectly good lava.) Had they covered those words? Maybe not. "The same way you're brothers," Nido said.

The golden ones drew back, averting two of their gazes from him, and said, "Ihi." Which they usually only said when they got a word, but they looked anything but comfortable with this new knowledge. Maybe they got the words but weren't sure how they made sense? If they didn't know how Mariana's kind left their eggs in other kinds' nests, they might not understand how members of two totally different species could be siblings.

"Do you understand?" Nido asked, which he'd started using to prompt the golden ones to ask for elaboration when they seemed reluctant to ask on their own.

But they snapped, "Yes," and turned away from him; and he was left wondering whether he'd said something wrong. Did aliens not talk about family? Did the golden ones not like being compared to Mariana? Were they anti-adoption?

He hopped closer, considered asking; but decided not to bother with it until they decided to stop giving him the cold shoulder.

He continued his weeding, feeling like something had been lost in translation.

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(Replies/reblogs are welcome & encouraged! Check the “source” link below for my masterlist of KOTM fics set in this continuity, as well as my AO3 and Ko-fi links.)

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Homestuck Liveblog #184

UPDATE 184: Individuality According to Dirk Strider

Last time Dirk took over not only Rose, but also the entire narrative of this epilogue. What will be the consequences of such a thing? Well, he can control the story to some extent, for one. One of his actions was to make Jade fall unconscious, from what I understood, so let’s now continue.

The next page has Jade, but it’s a different one. It’s the Jade that was in the fight with Lord English, the one who is now drifting in the middle of nowhere, near the black hole. I suppose she survived the shard of reality impaling her on the back. Either that or she’s on the verge of death, like John is. I’ll take solace on that the odds the reality shard is poisoned are pretty low.

For a moment, she has the feeling that she’s recalling something. Images and sounds in her head that resemble memories. But the memories aren’t hers, exactly. They seem to be someone else’s. There’s an older version of Roxy... someone with a cheerful green skull for a head, who was... Roxy’s girlfriend? Something about an election. No, this doesn’t make any sense at all. The memories are slipping away, anyway. Quickly, they dissolve, and soon they’re completely out of her mind’s reach, like she’s waking from a dream. Just like that, they’re gone.

That sounds like it could be what Dirk and Rose were experiencing, visions of alternate selves. I wonder, though, perhaps Dirk’s the one sending said vision onto Jade? Heck, maybe he’s been doing this for much longer than I thought, and he’s the one who has been tormenting Rose, all so she would go talk to him and he’d have the chance to take over her. It’s plausible, I’d say.

Since she’s floating around half-dead, she has some time to think, and among the thoughts that may or may not be all hers, there’s something that gets my attention.

And she just fought Lord English after being plucked out of a doomed timeline.

For a while I had forgotten that those from doomed timelines are, well, doomed. John took with him a bunch of doomed people to fight Lord English. No wonder they died, really. Not that recruiting everyone from Earth C would have been more palatable, because he’d be placing at risk the versions of his friends who live in a peaceful Earth. There just wasn’t a perfect choice here.

For a moment I thought maybe Dirk had manipulated Rose and gave John instructions to make things go the way he wanted – including John most likely dying, given how Dirk thinks of him as useless and unremarkable – but then I remembered it was stated Dirk took over Rose during their conversation.

Something’s calling for Jade, right from the center of the black hole. It’s beckoning her, so she gets flying towards the black hole. Is that a good thing?

Oh! A red word in middle of everything! Dave red. I’m surprised! I didn’t think Dave would have the ability to mess with the narration too, but it makes sense. Striders, go!

She considers asking who is speaking, but her mouth stays shut, powerless against the forces transfixing her. Jade has no way of knowing who this voice belongs to. She has no context for understanding the true nature of this being, what role she has played in bringing about the end, and how long she has been waiting for this. She has no idea. But I do.

The dead cherub is making her move.

Hm. I’m a liiiittle bit concerned. The text is red, indicating it’s Caliborn. However, it’s not on ALL CAPS, like I remember Caliborn writes. Calliope is the only other option, and she’d write with green if she used color. Odd, hm...I guess I’ll know for sure which cherub this is when a word with U is shown.

You know a page’s not going to be fun when the very first lines are about someone being xenophobic – supposedly. It’s not like it was shown what it was. Sigh.

Apparently what caused potentially xenophobic comments was the mother grub being generally unpleasant to see. Cultural shock, I’ll say, it really was insensitive. I sure wouldn’t think a mother grub doing her thing is a nice sight, but you just don’t say that kind of thing aloud! Inner monologues are such a blessing. But hey, it’s the rebirth of trolls, this pretty much marks the success of everything Karkaroni and the rest of the trolls worked for. Only three of the original twelve are seeing the final result, but it’s worth it anyway.

So, why the description of the mother grub laying slurry from its ovipositional sphincter stuff is somehow less disgusting than the description of John eating meat? It’s kind of incongruent.

Ah, right, Kanaya is here, watching over the mother grub, and questions why they’re here, if it wasn’t to make quips about the mother grub’s performance. They’re here to convince Kanaya to join them into their political adventure, I figure. I’m not sure how Kanaya will react to that, but I don’t think she’ll eagerly support it. If she does it’ll be because of Karkaroni, though.

DAVE: im dropping a beat

DAVE: like im using a turntable and scratching one song into another

DAVE: all smooth and shit

KARKAT: IT LOOKS LIKE YOU’RE TRYING TO FOLD LAUNDRY YOU FORGOT TO IRON.

This amused me so much because that’s such a fun description of Dave’s gesture. It all reminds me I like Karkaroni a lot, what a colorful character he is.

Of course Kanaya was already aware of the election, and is impressed Karkaroni didn’t burst into flames with everyone watching him. Hah! Karkaroni replies to this gentle jab with a harsher remark about Kanaya’s like-blooded ancestors. Kind of a low blow, but nothing Kanaya can’t deal with what after so many years of being friends with Karkaroni.

She says Karkaroni has her utmost faith but that’s not the same as wanting to endorse him. I think if necessary she would, but it definitely isn’t a promise. She admits everything Karkaroni said concerns her, and Dirk takes the time to give a compliment about how Potential President Karkat can’t take compliments directly. The warm feelings cease when Kanaya mentions Jane already passed by to talk, though.

KANAYA: You Know I Do Like Jane

KANAYA: In Some Regards She Reminds Me Of A Friend We Had Who Sadly Did Not Survive Our Time On The Meteor

KANAYA: She Was Unfailingly Kind To Everyone She Met But She Also Happened To Be The Heiress To The Throne Of A Vast And Bloody Empire

KANAYA: And While She Had A Lot Of Opinions On Reform She Had Already Wrenched Some Of Her Power From Our Last Empress In The Traditional Manner

Feferi? Yeah, she was rather sweet, for troll standards. That said, I don’t think she was ‘unfailingly kind’. I mean, one of the few memories I have of her is she calling Jade stupid in a dream because she didn’t realize Feferi was dead. Hard to say someone’s unfailingly kind when the one interaction with somebody who wasn’t a troll was that, from what I remember. To her credit, she did show concern and care towards most of the trolls, so there’s that, at least.

KANAYA: By Which I Mean That Jane Is Perfectly Pleasant And I Believe That She Has Only The Best Of Intentions

KANAYA: But I Cant Shake The Feeling That Deep Inside Her Lurks The Potential For Despotism

The road to hell is paved with good intentions, they say. The saying in its usual meaning doesn’t apply to this, buuuut even though Jane has bad intentions, the result of said good intentions may not be the best for everyone. It’s a shame that so far it’s increasingly clear Jane’s supposed to be treated like she’s 100% in the wrong and should be shunned. My opinion is that maybe it’d be more interesting if it wasn’t so...black and white. That’s how things seem to me from what I have read so far, at least.

KARKAT: BUT FUCKING FEFERI? SHE WAS HARMLESS.

KANAYA: These Things Take Time To Gestate Karkat

DAVE: damn

KANAYA: Power Corrupts In Small Steps

KANAYA: Compromises

KANAYA: Concessions

KANAYA: Appeasements

KANAYA: And Leaders Follow The Example Set For Them

KANAYA: Look At What Jane Has Modeled Herself After Already

KANAYA: I Do Believe Its Important To Consider Precedent

I guess Kanaya would know better than me when it’s about troll culture, buuuut if I had to guess, Feferi would be a bit of an unpopular empress at first, given how different her policies of ‘don’t cull everyone’, but it’d be matter of time before trolls more amenable to her policies and ideas would exist, so I suppose at least for the first century or two she’d have to have a tough hand and maybe even use force to make things change. It’d be pretty close to fascism, admittedly.

Ooooh boy, Kanaya laughed, not kindly. That’s a no to the endorsement. Is she on Jane’s train, then?

KANAYA: Jane Offered Me “A Seat” On The “Board Of Responsible Troll Reproduction”

KARKAT: WHAT THE FUCK. HOW DARE SHE!

KANAYA: That Is Exactly What I Said

KANAYA: With More Tact Of Course

Board of responsible troll reproduction? That’s rather controlling. Jane, stop following the Condesce’s style, goodness.

The trolls are rather indignant at Jane’s tactless ideas, best intentions be damned, so it’s likely once anyone who isn’t human hears about it they’ll vote for Karkat. So from what I’m reading, this is starting to shape up into humans vs non-humans in general. That’s a rather delicate situation, no wonder it was said the peace in Earth C was so fragile.

I keep noticing Kanaya is dodging the topic of giving or not giving endorsement, even though that topic is touched she always has a way to go in a tangent. Look at her and learn a thing about smoothly changing topics, Dave, she’s good at this.

Apparently Rose has been distant with Dave, and he thinks she either is sick or she’s pregnant. Ah. Well that’s a thought I’d rather not to delve into, thanks for the weird thoughts, Dave. Take a hint from the trolls staring at you. Kanaya seems to feel guilty about something, and I’m not sure if Rose would have told her or not about the headaches and the unraveling of her powers and stuff. She even decides to call Rose right now.

Dirk answers, alarming Kanaya, who stays calm for diplomatic purposes. No answers come because John is doing something vaguely important to the plot again. Hah! Part of me is just imagining Dirk saw Kanaya was calling and because it’d be so awkward and bothersome to have to explain or make excuses, he made John do something just so he could get out of the conversation. But hey, no complaints from me! Moving the plot forward is good.

John’s vaguely important plot actions involve thinking about how everyone should become one powerful person, apparently. Is that your final objective, Dirk? Do you want everyone to become one person?

...

That kind of makes Jane’s presidential ambitions be a lot more sinister, since Dirk is so into them. I can’t rule out the possibility Jane winning the election would be an important step towards that goal, supposing he really intends to do such a thing.

Enough shoving strange thoughts into John’s head because he needs to focus on Meenah talking to him. She’s alive and not inside a black hole! Neato. What’s up, Lord English is dead. Rejoice!

There’s more silence than conversation here because they don’t know each other at all, unless you count John getting stabbed with a trident once or twice. Since this is a veeeery awkward conversation, he instead asks if she knows where Jade is, and Meenah doesn’t even know who Jade is. This conversation is just going nowhere.

This is without a doubt one of the worst conversations you’ve had in many, many years. And you aren’t just thinking that because I’m telling you you are.

When he’s right he’s right! More awkwardness ensues. They’re two strangers talking, pretty much.

JOHN: so what’s your plan now?

MEENAH: plan

JOHN: yeah.

JOHN: you just gonna hang around here, in the middle of nowhere, doing nothing forever?

MEENAH: thats what ghosts is most good at aint they

JOHN: you don’t have to stay here.

JOHN: i can take you back with me, to my planet.

JOHN: i mean, after we’re done looking for more survivors.

Is that possible? Can a ghost be among the living, just like that? Oh, right, John has the ring of life he took from Aranea. He could give it to Meenah and she’d be alive again. Is it a good idea, though? Do they want Meenah around? That’s what I’m not very sure about, because Meenah really doesn’t strike me as the kind of person who’d enjoy a peaceful existence with everyone else, or...as peaceful as it’ll get with everything that’s going on in Earth C.

Meenah points out correctly she’s a ghost and can’t exist over there in that planet, and she thought of her own plan, anyway. John gets close enough for her to whisper and then she leaves. John then thinks of checking his pockets and realizes the ring has been stolen. Pretty surprising it didn’t fall out of John’s pocket at some point given how much he was moving and getting bitten around. This is why you should captchalogue things instead of storing things in your pocket like some plebian, John!

Now that I think about it, captchaloguing simply stopped being a thing like in the middle of Act 6. Not that I’m complaining, really.

So, it turned out John’s vaguely important plot stuff was he getting the ring stolen by Meenah, so now that it’s done, Dirk can return to the conversation with Kanaya. How do you explain to someone her bride is unconscious after you pretty much started mind-controlling her? I suppose you don’t?

He totally isn’t explaining a thing. For someone who considers himself so clever and forward-planning what with the assimilation plan, he’s pretty awful at not keeping things going smoothly. Pretty bad traits for someone planning to possibly assimilate someone into one being.

DIRK: Sorry, Rose can’t come to the phone right now.

DIRK: She is otherwise... occupied.

KANAYA: Where Is She

DIRK: She’s at my place.

KANAYA: Im Sorry What

KANAYA: Rose Is Extremely Ill And Should Not Be Leaving The House Alone

KANAYA: What Is She Doing At Your Place

DIRK: Chillaxing, whilst we discuss the inevitable heat death of the universe and the unknowable, solitary nature of human consciousness.

KANAYA: I See

KANAYA: If She Is Capable Of Such Abstract Polemics Why Is It That She Cannot Speak With Me

DIRK: That’s a damned good question.

DIRK: One that will undoubtedly benefit from further exploration over the course of the next abstract polemic I have with her.

Goddamnit, Dirk. You could have just said she’s in the bathroom and that’d have worked slightly better than this!

Dirk’s taunting and messing around makes Kanaya decide she’ll get Rose, and once the call is over, Rose starts waking up. She doesn’t seem very under-Dirk’s-control right now, but she’s not okay. Maybe it’s a slow process or something.

John currently is wandering around, pondering if he should do surgery on the golden tooth stuck on his chest with a straight razor, and finding Jade’s shoes. He also finds Terezi. There she is! Wandering aaaaall the way out of the peaceful world, apparently. Either way, in this one paragraph I have compressed one entire page.

Apparently while they want for Kanaya Dirk’s making Rose discuss abstract polemics. I’m pretty sure that’s Dirk talking through her, because although Rose’s plenty verbose, I don’t think discussing philosophy while being sick is something she’d be eager to do. Also, she’s touching the topics of individuality, which is pretty relevant to Dirk right now. May as well listen, so I can understand a little better why Dirk’s doing all this.

Who the heck is Kierkegaard.

I’m going to be honest: reading philosophy being spouted with a straight face isn’t really what I was looking for in a liveblog. I feel a bit bad for scrolling through while all these orange and purple words fly over my head, buuuuut I don’t think liveblogging the intricacies of philosophical concepts is going to be interesting or fun, so I’m sparing everyone – and myself.

Oh, something I can bite into.

ROSE: I think free will is a thing, sure.

DIRK: Are you sure about that?

ROSE: ...

DIRK: Haven’t we spent the entire day having a feelings jam on how none of us got here by accident?

DIRK: Our lives were meticulously planned from clone-ception up through this very post-canon moment we find ourselves riffing in about the very free will we probably don’t even have.

DIRK: Don’t you think it’s all a little too convenient?

I mean, it’s a bit difficult to say there’s not a predetermined plan for these characters. If you don’t go through a series of actions, you’re in a doomed timeline and therefore you die. It’s hard not to go along the predetermined path when it’s either that or death. The only exception is John, who got powers of retcon and was able to jump around changing things to create the new predetermined path, but even then it’s possible the universe at a whole had determined that would happen and just nudged things in that direction.

Then again, when it’s about fiction there’s no free will. The author’s words and thoughts are the predetermined path. Authors are little gods creating their universe, so yeah, characters have no free will. Oh, look what you have done, Dirk, now I’m spouting philosophical nonsense, you sly fox. Won’t lie, typing all that just from a stream of thought was kind of fun. So that’s why the Striders enjoy being verbose.

Dirk keeps Rose lying down on the couch, proving he has full control of the narrative and therefore decides what happens and what doesn’t. He’s the author now and therefore the predetermined path is the one he creates. Oh there I go again, stop baiting me into philosophical hackneyed nonsense, Dirk.

The words ‘Ultimate Self’ and Dirk’s plan to possibly assimilate everyone into one god seem like they’re related, no? Maybe Dirk considers his Ultimate Self to be his goal, and it involves total assimilation. Pretty grim scenario, really.

Dirk makes Rose expand her mind, and she can see what John is doing right now.

ROSE: He could have made another choice.

DIRK: Then where would we be?

ROSE: Who knows.

The Candy epilogue, perhaps? I’m not sure how things would have changed based on that decision, but hey, butterfly effect stories are fun.

I’m not going to describe what she sees. First of all, that would be spoiling it. Unless you already know, in which case, I guess what’s taking place here qualifies as something closer to dramatic irony. But if you really want to see it for yourself, stop what you’re doing, flip the whole thing over, and begin again. I’ll be right here when you get back, waiting. Trust me, no one’s going anywhere.

Is this an indication I should go take a look at the candy epilogue now? It sounds like it is. I wonder if I should...but no, I have decided to see this through to the end. I’m already halfway done, may as well finish it.

If what Rose is saying is a reference to the events of the Candy epilogue, it doesn’t sound like they’re faring much better than the Meat epilogue. Sooooo the characters are generally screwed and are going to suffer either way. For people who spent three years in a game to create a new universe and get their happy lives that sure sucks.

Ah, here he is, I can see this is the moment where Dirk has finally assimilated Rose. It’s over for her. All that’s left is a condescending guy funneling pretentious thoughts into her. I liked Rose’s pretentious thoughts better. Next page!

Dirk’s narration when he’s talking about someone else’s supposed thoughts and actions is pretty exhausting. I find myself going faster and faster, and not because I’m invested in what he’s saying. Having Dirk as a narrator was a bad decision, he’s just on the same level than Doc Scratch was. Still not really enjoying the epilogue much.

He’s trying to stop her from going deeper into the black hole, and he’s failing. Not even the narrative is powerful enough to stop that, because there’s a stronger being trying to control parts of the narrative, the dead cherub trying to do this with red words. There was a U but it’s not any different from the rest of the text. The red text sounds courteous enough instead of Caliborn’s IRREVERENT SHOUTING so I suppose it’s Calliope, or at least a version of her. She beckons Jade deeper and deeper, until she’s irreversibly caught by the black hole and dragged in, much to Dirk’s frustration. There she goes! I’m curious what’ll happen with Jade, I admit!

Oho, the dead cherub is not only taking over the narration related to Jade in the black hole, they also are trying to take over the narration for the Jade in Earth C, the one who passed out in front of Roxy and Calliope.

ROXY: omg!

ROXY: jade

ROXY: jade u ok?

ROXY: callie hurry shes wakin up

JADE: j... john? rose??

JADE: is dave...?

JADE: wh...

JADE: what happened to.....

ROXY: yo its ok

ROXY: daves cool

ROXY: rose is cool

ROXY: everyones just straight chillin like usual

Huh! This feels kinda like the Jade in the black hole is being funneled into the Jade in Earth C. Are they fusing together, perhaps?

Dirk really doesn’t like that he can’t figure out what the dead cherub’s goal with the narrative is, and wastes his narrative grip by fuming about it while the dead cherub actually moves things along. It seems the Jade in Earth C is receiving the memories of her doomed black hole self. Maaaaaybe the doomed ghost versions of people getting caught in the black hole is that causes the headaches and visions. On the other hand, that’d require a lot of Roses and Dirks and Jades to be sucked into the black hole, and last I checked the ghost army was exclusively made of trolls. True, the black hole isn’t tied to the normal flow of time, so maybe it has expanded enough it has sucked a lot of doomed versions of the humans already.

Jade’s eyes are completely black. Alright, that wasn’t expected.

jade does not answer. the dead cherub scans her surroundings, expression neutral.

for the sake of clarity, the dead cherub is a phrase i am using in reference to myself. presently, i inhabit jade’s body, and through her i may influence this world.

Ah, nevermind, the dead cherub’s hijacking people around now. At least I can take solace on that it’s unlikely they have the same goal than Dirk. They even call him megalomaniac, which isn’t really wrong. They also call him a threat to the continued existence of the world and corporeal life, which is a tad worse than I thought it’d be. Was he planning to make everyone eliminate themselves once he got the complete takeover? Dirk’s goal is worse and worse with every page, seriously.

It doesn’t seem like Jade’s able to do anything, not even think. This is just as bad for them than what Dirk did to Rose, but it’s possible Jade’s current state is reversible once the dead cherub doesn’t need her anymore. On the other hand, what Dirk did seems permanent.

Aha, it definitely is Calliope doing things here in the narrative. Neat!

Dirk sounds so salty he’s losing the battle for the narrative, Dead Calliope even uses metaphors that are familiar to him to drive home the point: he’s outclassed. Thank goodness, I was getting tired of Dirk’s narrative.

in his haste to manipulate the events surrounding doomed jade’s ascent toward an outcome favorable to himself, the prince has unwittingly revealed several glaring weaknesses. by dictating the reality of others through expressions which he and he alone can relate to, he resorts to comparing all experience to his own. presuming his status on this side of my horizon would forever go unchallenged, his hubris went unchecked. he exposed too much of himself to all who could observe his wanton display of self-gratification. many of his personal biases and experiences have leaked through the seams of textual causality, leaving them vulnerable to exploitation by an adversary.

I’m not very sure what she means, but what’s clear is that Dirk brought this to himself, he’s the one who left the opening and enabled Dead Calliope to strike. He has nobody to blame but himself. A+ work, Dirk, try again. It also helps that Dead Calliope has more experiences with the vastness of metaphysical and narrative stuff than Dirk does, and isn’t as scared of it all as he is. If she’ll spend quite some time dunking on Dirk’s efforts I’m all for it. He deserves all the dunking he can get. Look at his tiny font, getting saltier and saltier. I’m enjoying this more, I have to say!

This seems like a good point to stop, now that we have a new narrator. Alright, until next time!

Next update: next time

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Discussion notes for week 6. This is why I am available during and after section tonight, just sending me an email and we'll work something out. If you get from the course! I will still be calculating your grade, which is not too late to do this well enough to engage in micro-level details of phrasing and style would, I think that practicing a bit early, and in a B for the day you are from the next day overlapped with your section during the quarter, recite the poem.

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Ex-Aid review: Heisei Generations

Time to review Ex-Aid's first movie: "Kamen Rider Heisei Generations: Dr. Pac-Man VS Ex-Aid & Ghost With Legend Riders". Long, long title. Since I've not done a review for a movie yet, how do I format this...

Well, for starters, some preliminary timeline placement: The movie came out when Kuroto Dan was still pretending to be sane, and there was still a bike among us. The Kamen Rider Genm spinoffs would tip you off to that since those take place after this movie. It's a nice early "In case you're new to Ex-Aid" timeline placement.

Also, since this is post-finale Ghost, Drive, Gaim and Wizard... I won’t hold back on spoilers for those shows!

This is a real treat, I tell ya. For those who don't know, I love crossovers in general. And when it comes to Kamen Rider, I usually get some kind of enjoyment out of the crossover movies. I say this because, well, they're not usually... logical. Due to trying to work in this show and that show with their crazily distinct styles and lore, it gets hard to make crossovers actually make sense.

But the ones that have come out since Gaim have been doing a better job of that. Generally I'm talking about the spring movies in this context, but what I should be talking about are the winter movies. These are typically movies where the current show gets its own plot, the previous show gets its own post-finale plot, and the two plots merge in the final act... or final 10 minutes.

Ghost/Drive did something impressive with this format: It ditched it entirely. Instead of having two shows meet at the end, this movie realized that a movie about Ghost and Drive should really be about Ghost and Drive having some adventure that affects both of them. I'm glad to see this movie follows that notion with Ex-Aid and Ghost meeting within the first few minutes, and even Drive gets to be involved in continuity with the aforementioned Ghost/Drive movie. I'll talk about the cameos as they come up.

So right away, things are falling into chaos as we meet our villains, Dr. Pac-Man and his three lackeys, who I'll call Robol, Dragol and Giril since that's easier to remember. This is because they steal the Proto Gashats from Kuroto Dan, along with the Bugvisor, and the lackeys use Proto Gashats to transform much in the way Graphite did to gain his black recolor form.

I appreciate that, from the moment this movie starts, you know that you're in for a wild time. The lackeys themselves all do some fun fighting even as civilians, in particular Giril who literally brought a sword to a gun fight even before getting a Proto Gashat. Dragol, the tall lanky one, also does a good performance. And Dr. Pac-Man... boy, that outfit and mask combo is so 70s it hurts. I can't hate it.

I should take some time to talk about Ghost, shouldn't I?

Yes, this is Ghost's return after the show ended, and to be honest? Not much has changed for this cast. Takeru is in school making up for the time lost, but everyone else... is about where they were when the show ended, which is fine. The monks and Kanon also appear briefly, and of course Makoto/Specter and Alain/Necrom, but I am disappointed that Javert didn't get to show up - I wanna see what his monk training has led to, man.

The Pac-Man Bugster Viruses end up taking away Takeru’s ability to transform for some reason... but then we learn why later! Pac-Man's weakness is ghosts! I shouldn't be surprised that was actually a plot point since that's a line in the trailer, but it's still absurd in a way that made me smile. Apparently Kuroto Dan is being trusted with his Eyecon to work on a new Gashat, which sounds like A VERY BAD IDEA but y'know, at this point Kuroto Dan was actually a trusted supplier.

The three lackeys go on to use Proto Gashats stolen from Kuroto Dan, transforming into what are essentially reuses of the Collaboss Bugsters from the show, sans the Gashat lodged in the head - ironic since they transform shoving the Gashat into their body ala Dopant Memories. With that and the white outfits I can't help but imagine this is Foundation X related...

The undersuit of the Collaboss Bugster is colored a bit differently, but to me the main attraction is Dragol since Drago Knight Hunter Z never got used this way in the show. It's a nice design, too! It's a thing that makes me go "Oh I should use that in fanfiction..." 

The movie mainly revolves around a high school student who becomes infected, and in a twist I kinda wasn't expecting so early, they make a Bugster from a game HE created - a game not associated with Genm Corp, Hatesate Puzzle. Kind of a neat twist. They tie this Bugster's powers into the villain's ambitions in a way that is kind of nonsensical to me, though.

What I do like is the way they handle the kid. Sure, it's mostly an Ex-Aid plot, but Takeru's respect for enjoying life comes into play since the patient really enjoys making his game, and the two of them, despite some minor differences later on, both want to see him be happy once it's over.

While this is going on, we do get an interesting subplot with Dr. Pac-Man and crew. Takeru, Onari and Akari go to Shinnosuke/Drive of the Metro PD to find out who these villains are, and the plot thickens when he reveals that they were part of some shady business shrouded in rumors and mysterious deaths.

Shinnosuke's life sucks during this first half of the movie. It's become apparent to him that he can't be a Rider with his gear being put away and all, so he's feeling pretty powerless. It's a bit of a random stroke of luck how he is reunited with Belt-san to become Kamen Rider Drive again, but I will get into that once I talk about Gaim. Yes.

Hey, wait, I've seen that scene in the show recently...! Let's talk about this now even though they reveal more about it later.

Perhaps there were detailed synopsis' available way back when the movie came out, I dunno. It's hard to come across this stuff in English unless you follow the right people, and even then you might only learn bits and pieces.

But I did not know the movie actually reveals that Emu is patient zero AND Parad was created from his Bugster Virus! And I bet a lot of folks outside of Japan were not privy to this reveal either, since I'd always seen/received theories about Emu possibly maybe being patient zero. I even theorized it at the end of December when the movie had already come out. I feel dumb but at the same time, that's what happens when you can't be there to see the movie when it comes out.

I'm talking a bit out of order, but I will say that there's a double edged sword to this reveal. On the one hand, we the viewers learn about Emu being patient zero because Ghost's sporadic touch-someone-and-see-memories power triggered when he put a hand on Dr. Pac-Man. On the other hand... bro, you should've probably told Emu something this eerie. Perhaps not the best way to reveal it.

Anyway, just thought that was real interesting for a movie that contains the name "Dr. Pac-Man".

Back to the plot at hand, the new Hatesate Puzzle based Bugster causes some trouble for Takeru as it just about kills off Akari, or at least badly injures her. It's easy to say she was killed since it's Ghost. But we'll get to him near the end...

Oh yeah, Makoto and Alain show up around this time. Just... kind of slide into view during a fight since they read the script.

Sadly I don't really have much to say about them in this movie since their dialogue literally consists of saying "You'll pay for this!" in slightly different ways each time they speak. We do get to see that they and Kanon return to the Ganma homeworld at the end, so... that's still a thing.

The movie then proceeds to provide the kind of fight porn you enjoy from one of these movies. Giril, Robol and Dragol take on Specter, Necrom, Brave, Snipe and Lazer (cause hey he's still alive), all while summoning Bugster Viruses that are themed after their Gashats; Samurai, futuristic soldiers(??) and fantasy soldiers that may or may not be using costumes from Wizard's summer movie. Fact-checking is for kids.

And of course, the new Gashat from Kuroto Dan has arrived for Ex-Aid to use. After he and Ghost start working together to take on the giant CGI Pac-Man, Ex-Aid uses the wonderfully colored Ghost Gamer form while Ghost uses the uncanny Ex-Aid Damashii form he now has (an Eyecon obtained at the end of his show because crossovers), and the two defeat the giant Pac-Man.

The day is saved. Wait, weren't there more Riders in this? 

Yeah, that shocked me when I was watching - we're only halfway through and we've gotten the big crossover fight out of the way! If I wasn't already so aware of what happens in the movie, I'd be left wondering what comes next.

But Emu is still affected by all that happened. The other doctor Riders came to help, and are even caring for the Riders from Ghost who are injured, but Emu couldn't save his own patient. Not only that, but the villains have said patient, and are using him to create a new form for Dr. Pac-Man. Standard toku movie villain stuff.

Is there any hope left for our hero?

No, but at least we have our donuts.

So this cameo is a bit out of nowhere for a couple reasons. One, it just kind of happens suddenly. Two, holy crap they got Haruto's actor to come back and his hair is perfectly on point. But alas, much like Wizard's show, his involvement here isn't living up to its full potential. He doesn’t say much beyond catchphrases and the fact he’s a mage, and doesn’t explain why he’s here. I have a way this could've worked, which will be addressed when I talk about Gaim. Yes.

There is also a kinda funny scene where he convinces Dr. Pac-Man into letting him be a bodyguard with no trouble at all. It was funny but not for the right reasons. He and Dragol also don't get along and that's funny because theming.

Once Emu, Takeru and Shinnosuke know where to go, they see the new bodyguard Haruto... who says he's here to escort them in - okay. The three engage in some fun out-of-suit fighting with Dr. Pac-Man's lackies, and arrive to a familiar part of this abandoned office set that led me to wonder how he was going to make his entrance...

Turns out he just kind of crashes the party and lands like a badass. I can dig it. Okay, so NOW I talk about Gaim!

Gaim's a glaring part of this crossover. Whether the actor was busy with another role, or disinterested in returning, he never appears out of costume and there's not even a voice credit. 

Gaim DOES talk in the movie, and he sounds on point, but one thing you'll notice is he never says anything too specific. It's believed that his dialogue is just recycled audio from previous media, and sadly, as the resident Gaim fanatic, I could not even begin to find transcripts that would lead me to having properly spelled Japanese dialogue that would lead me to previous instances of said dialogue existing. Just wanted to explain how much dumb work I was doing for this one paragraph of the review.

But what I can tell you is this: Gaim has dialogue that’s real teamwork-y, so it’s probably from previous crossovers.

Anyway, I had two things to address with Gaim. First, they do a cute thing where Gaim retrieved Belt-san for Shinnosuke, to which he acknowledges that Gaim DOES have god powers that make it easy for him to just warp into the Drive Pit and snatch him up. That's a nice way of getting Drive to transform.

A shame they didn't think to have a flashback where Haruto is warned about Dr. Pac-Man by Gaim, thus explaining why either of them are here to begin with. I mean, Gaim's probably privy to movie villain plots, since he's got god senses.

As a real specific thing, I would have also liked if Gaim explained away his lack of out-of-suit appearance with "By the way, I'm on another planet right now, so this is just an avatar." If you don't follow Gaim then I'm sorry for throwing these spoilers out so crazily, but y'know. I gave the appropriate spoiler warning.

There's a lot of lovely fight porn where Wizard, Gaim and Drive each take on the lackeys and their Bugster Virus grunts, who happen to fit their motifs, going through their various forms while their respective themes play. It's beautiful. Also Gaim has a real out-of-place line delivery when he gives a final blow, lending credence to the theory this is recycled dialogue.

When Ghost gets insultingly overpowered by the puzzle themed Bugster, making his supposed infinite potential form look bad, Ghost receives an out-of-nowhere visit from the spirit of Nobunaga who decides to fight alongside him with two other rulers of Japan who unified the nation. Tenka Touitsu Damashii represents three historical figures, and I gotta say, I'm glad to see it get used in a movie.

A shame they gave it to Ghost since the toy Eyecon is literally only capable of playing Specter's standby music. But I guess I can't feel too bad for Specter since he got his own movie with a final form? 

It's a nice idea, looks good, and the fact that it makes use of the three Riders' weapons is cool. Maybe in a world where Ghost made more Eyecons, Hideyoshi and Ieyasu would've been forms used by Ghost and Necrom.

Things are not so hopeful for Emu. He's been given a legitimately-painful-to-watch beating by Dr. Pac-Man in his new monster form, and is pushed to the ground. The kind doctor decides to give Emu a taste of what it's like to go through death by Bugster Virus by basically forcing Mighty Action X into his belt alongside Proto Mighty Action X (since Proto Gashats have been established to be deadly), which doesn't work out quite how he wanted.

Instead, Emu inexplicably (but we know why now) connects the two Gashats to form the Mighty Brothers XX Gashat - which appears to be lacking in some paint here for some reason, gonna guess it's an error. With a very ominous and emotionless persona overtaking him, he transforms into the separate Ex-Aids, Double Action Gamer Level XX.

It's a real interesting way of giving you a taste of what's to come in the show in a way that's different. Ghost/Drive did this as well with Ghost's Toucon Boost Damashii form, and there's also Hibiki which kind of... created its own crazy origin for Hibiki's final form which is completely ignored in the show.

Point is, I find it interesting the way they pulled it off. By the end of the fight, the villains have been defeated and Ex-Aid's double Gashat turns back into separates, with him having no memory of what he did - cleeeverly avoiding continuity problems with the show, I see.

With that, the movie is just about over, but wait! It's a Ghost movie where Takeru doesn't die? Of course not, that'd just be silly.

Yes, as the cast of Ex-Aid and Ghost are meeting up again, Takeru randomly passes out. Apparently all the beatings he endured today was just too much for him. It seems that he's really dead this time! No pulse or anything! Tears all around!

You know what's coming, though. It's a crossover with a doctor. In a scene that's strangely reminiscent of the fakeout CPR scene in episode 1 of Ex-Aid, Emu brings Takeru back to life. He then thanks Emu for giving him another chance at life, fulfilling Ghost's other requirement of being sugary sweet.

The credits roll as we see what everyone is up to now. Haruto is on a rooftop eating donuts just as you'd expect, and Shinnosuke is dealing with coworkers congradulating him on his new kid way too early... not sure if that's a Drive Saga 2 thing or not, since that's on my list of toku to watch.

And finally, the last scene has Parad with Kuroto, holding the Pac-Adventure Gashat that will be used in the Genm spinoff which doesn't make anymore sense now that I've seen the movie. Oh, and a nice shot of Perfect Puzzle's title image, teasing at Parad's future Rider status! Neat.

So... that's a lot of text I'm gonna have to edit. But that's also Ex-Aid's first movie. How was it?

Well, I generally enjoy crossover movies for the fun things that can happen, and within the last few years they have gotten really good at telling a story. Especially Ghost/Drive which I have referenced several times here, since it and this movie have its format in common.

That being said, this movie is kind of an oddity of its own. It gets the Legend Rider-y crossover form stuff out of the way halfway in, and goes on to do more stuff later that feels reminiscent of the spring crossover movies as of late - even using returning actors, and directly acknowledging previous crossovers to give a legitimacy to them. These 4 returning heroes felt like they'd met before and were reunited, which is probably the most pleasant surprise of the movie.

I know a lot of folks out there hate these kind of movies, or even ignore all the toku movies, but I think this is promising. Kamen Rider crossovers have been getting better at character writing with each movie, and I am excited to see the spring movie once it hits DVD.

With that all being said, I'll see you all in... a week maybe? With Ex-Aid taking a week off, I should use that as an excuse to catch up and actually talk about May's crazy bunch of episodes.

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The Cult of “Face” in China | 面子

The Chinese concept of “face” (aka 面子 or miànzi) refers to a cultural understanding of respect, honor and social standing. Actions or words that are disrespectful may cause somebody to “lose face” while gifts, awards and other respect-giving actions may “give face”.

It’s a complex concept that is important to grasp if you want to really understand Chinese culture. Here’s what you need to know.

Of all the idiosyncrasies of Chinese culture, the concept of “face” is perhaps most difficult for Westerns to fully grasp.

Because “saving face” is such a strong motivating force in China, it’s also one of the most important concepts in understanding the Chinese Mind.

As we dive deeper into this concept, we’re going to cover the following basics:

Defining Face to a Western Audience

Cultural Context of Face in China

How to Operate within the Reality of Face

Tips for Giving and Receiving Face in China

The goal in the end is that you’ll not only better understand the concept of face in China, but you’ll also be able to see how it influences the way you relate to people and do business in the country.

How Do You Define “Face” Exactly?

As a sociological construct, the Chinese concept of face is difficult to define.

The famous Chinese writer and translator Lin Yutang (1895 –1976) even went so far as to say that “face cannot be translated or defined.” He did, however, characterize it as “…abstract and intangible, it is yet the most delicate standard by which Chinese social intercourse is regulated.”

The closest translations are along the lines of “pride”, “dignity” or “prestige”.

But these don’t tell the whole story.

Face-management is much more than just impression management (or “protecting and enhancing your ego”) in the Western sense. Of course, no one — regardless of culture—wants to look bad or have their ego bruised. But the Chinese concept goes beyond the narrow Western concept of face (and is perhaps closer to the Arab concept of “honor”).

It’s also worth noting that the concept of face in China is vastly different than the concept of “guanxi” in China. Although both are equally important to understand.

Comparing Western Ego vs. Chinese Face

Unlike “Western face”– which is more self-oriented and individualistic — Chinese face is more other-directed and relational.

In other words, it’s less about your own personal pride or ego, and more about how one is viewed by others. Unlike Western face, Chinese face can be given or earned. It can also be taken away or lost.

Chinese face can be given or earned…it can also be taken away or lost.

As a general sociological statement, Western cultures tend to focus on the individual as an independent, self-reliant being. In raising children, the focus is on helping them develop a strong sense of personal integrity and individuality (misbehavior is often blamed on lack of self-esteem).

In contrast, for some 4,000 years, Chinese culture has downplayed the concept of the individual—instead emphasizing the supremacy of the family and group.

It was all about bringing honor to your clan. With the emphasis on the collective, the sense of self blurred so much that it practically didn’t exist. In fact, individualism was seen as immoral.

The point is that Chinese face can be communally created and owned. In 2008 study Cultural ‘Faces’ of Interpersonal Communication in the U.S. and China, Yvonne Chang of the University of Texas explains:

“Deeply rooted in the Chinese concept of face are conceptualizations of a competent person in Chinese society: one who defines and puts self in relation to others and who cultivates morality so that his or her conduct will not lose others’ face. This contrasts with the American cultural definition of a person who is expected to be independent, self- reliant, and successful. The end result is that a Chinese person is expected to be relationally or communally conscious whereas an American person is expected to be self-conscious.”

Guilt-Based vs Shame-Based Cultures

Without digging too deep sociologically, suffice it to say that this social phenomenon of face has a lot to do with the teachings of Confucius. He taught that if you lead people “with excellence and put them in their place through roles and ritual practices, in addition to developing a sense of shame, they will order themselves harmoniously.”

Here we see that the flip side of gaining honor is avoiding shame.

Thousands of years ago, China developed into a shame-based culture. This is in contrast to Western cultures, which are more “guilt” or “conscience-based”.

Generally speaking, the Chinese “behave properly” generally to avoid shame and they fear losing face—not necessarily because they might feel badly about their actions.

For many, anything goes….as long as you don’t get caught!

In China, shame isn’t just personal feelings—again, it’s a relationship-based thing that serves as a form of social control. Any sort of family or clan-kinship shame is covered up.

This is also in stark contrast to the US, where airing your dirty laundry and private business on talk shows is seen as socially acceptable (in general, the Chinese aren’t big on updating strangers on their menstrual cycles via Twitter).

Ethics of “Face” in Relation to Truth

Western cultures tend to think in terms of “truth” and “rightness” (where being innocent and right is most important). Westerners are taught to respect objectivity and facts. The law applies equally to everyone the same and our behavior is something that should be directed by our consciences.

In the West, your honor or face is more about your personal integrity. We tend to admire the integrity of those who uncompromisingly face objective truth, regardless of how self-damaging the results may be.

In the US, you can admit and apologize for your shortcomings and gain respect for your honest efforts to learn from the past. Americans are generally forgiving if someone takes responsibility for their problems.

For instance, during his Presidential run, George W. Bush spoke openly about overcoming his addiction to alcohol. This is something that no Chinese official would ever do it—it would be a devastating loss of face and almost impossible to recover from.

In contrast, Chinese society has always functioned on basis of personal relationships rather than objective customs and laws. Indeed, the rule and laws laid down were often to serve those in power (and often arbitrary and ever-changing). Complicating matters, Confucian teachings say that you’re supposed to treat people differently depending your relative statuses.

How important are ethics in today’s society?

As a result, Chinese “ethics” has never been based on universal principles of good and bad. Instead, they’re more based on the circumstances of the moment—a system that the West calls “situational ethics” (much to the chagrin of people doing business in China).

Similarly, the Chinese concept of the “truth” is not black or white either. The emphasis is less on always telling the objective “truth,” and more about what the situation and relationship calls for.

When it’s OK to Lie in China

In some ways, this helps explain the cultural differences on lying.

The Chinese will go through great lengths to protect face (their own as well as others). In fact, it’s perfectly acceptable to tell a lie—even a bald-faced one—if it serves to protect face.

China’s culture of shame doesn’t think of lies in terms of “right” and “wrong.” Instead, the goal of Chinese truth is often to protect the face of an individual, group, or even nation. In these situations, both parties can usually read between the lines and know when the “truth” is being re-packaged to help protect face (and they unfortunately will often assume that Westerners will know as well).

For instance, a hotel receptionist might tell you an obvious lie when he tells you that they don’t have any vacancies. This might be their face-saving way to avoid having to tell you that their hotel doesn’t allow foreigners.

Westerners often have a hard time with this. We don’t like to be bull-sh*tted. Our reaction is to call someone out on a lie. But in most cases, open confrontation is counter-productive, and will often result in denials or feigning ignorance.

So I’d recommend not backing your tour guide (or whoever) into a corner and calling them out if you catch them in a lie (it would be viewed as very rude, even cruel). In general, it’s a good idea to leave the Chinese with a way out of any potential face-losing situation.

Instead, if something goes wrong, always talk privately. Try to avoid assigning blame. And use the passive voice, as in: “IT seems as if there’s a problem.”

Flattery can often be very effective too: “I know this isn’t your fault but since you are very smart, what do you think we should do?”

Cultural Context to the Idea of “Face”

The concept of “face” in China is very much a cultural construct, therefore the best way to truly understand it is by seeing it within the context of Chinese society.

China’s “Super Girl Contest” Reality Show

For starters, we can look at the once hugely popular Chinese singing contest called Super Girl Contest, which is basically their version of “American Idol”.

Nearly half of the girls can sing English songs and the competition is just as intense as the US or UK versions….but their response to winning and losing tells us a lot about this Chinese concept of “face”.

China’s Super Voice Girls reality show shows us a lot about the cult of face in China

Westerners will notice that a disproportionate amount of time of the three-hour show is spent with mutual emotional consoling by the singers, hosts and judges.

In fact, to protect against the shame of being eliminated, the show spends more time focusing on the losers rather than the winners!

And even though they had a version of the tough Simon Cowell in a judge named Wu Qixian, you won’t find him fighting with the other judges. Instead, it’s much more of a love-fest than American Idol—with everyone working hard to help protect face.

Unlike the “win-lose” zero-sum mentality of the US, Chinese reality shows and competitions also typically share the prize money.

For instance, in the 2006 show “Win in China” (the Chinese version of “The Apprentice”), the winner gets 10 million RMB. The runner up gets 7 million and the other three “losers” get 5 million each!

Chinese Idioms About “Face”

Illustrating the obsession with face-management, there are literally dozens of short sayings and proverbs, called Chinese Chengyu, that have to do with “face”.

These idioms give you some incredible cultural context into this idea of face in China.

“Men can’t live without face, trees can’t live without bark.” 人要脸树要皮 – rén yào lǐan, shù yào pí

“A family’s ugliness (misfortune) should never be publicly aired” 家丑不可外扬 – Jiāchǒu bùkě wàiyáng

“Face-Saving project” 面子工程 – Miànzi gōngchéng For example, “That new expensive airport is just another face-saving project for local officials to suck up to their bosses.”

“Blacken one’s face” 往脸上抹黑 – Wǎng liǎn shàng mǒhēi For example, “He blackened your face to get you back for what you did.”

A traditional insult is to say that someone “has no face”. 没有面子 – Méiyǒu miànzi

Similarly, one of the worst things is to “lose face”. 丢脸 – Diū liǎn

Walk of Shame: prostitutes in “shame parade”

How to Operate within Chinese Face

So now that we understand how to define face and what it means within the context of Chinese culture, the next step is more actionable.

How can we make sure that we “give face” to our friends and colleagues and minimize the risk of “losing face”? Here are a few thoughts on how to operate within the reality of face in China.

How to Gain or Lose Face in China

Warning: Don’t treat this concept of face, or “mianzi”, too lightly. This is especially true if you’re doing business or spending a long time in China.

Foreigners working in China (who don’t appreciate the full cultural importance of face) often complain that their Chinese counterparts are “too sensitive” about being offended or having their feelings hurt.

Similarly, many ex-pats in China—as well as other Asian countries such as Japan, Korea, Thailand, Singapore—can tell you stories of how their local friend suddenly stopped talking to them (probably because they somehow caused them to lose face).

And from the Western perspective, it is true—the Chinese are generally more sensitive to any perceived slights having to do with losing face since it’s so ingrained in their culture. This thin-skin is largely a product of culture that has valued social harmony as the prime rule  (and generally avoided criticism).

In the West, many of these slights are seen as minor and quickly forgotten. But in China, failing to appreciate face can cause serious problems.

While an American businessperson might be respected back home for his frankness and being a “straight-shooter,” he would likely be viewed in China as uncultured, overbearing, and rude.

For instance, an American subordinate attending a meeting where his boss is presenting would generally think nothing of raising a question, making an alternate suggestion, or even disagreeing in front of others.

In China, this would be a serious face-losing situation for the subordinate, boss, and even the company. In fact, making someone lose face can sometimes insult someone so deeply as to create an enemy for life.

Losing face can sometimes be so insulting as to create an enemy for life.

Indeed, revenge is very much part of the equation—and not just on Chinese soap operas, which include a heavy dose of avenging face-losing situations. I think it’s safe to say that throughout China’s long history, face has started many unnecessary conflicts.

In terms of practical China travel advice, a loss of face can result in some form of sabotage, non-compliance, or foot-dragging.

For instance, let’s say that you’re frustrated by an employee who is processing your visa or permit. You start ranting and raving loudly—demanding to see the manager, etc.

Don’t be surprised if your application is “lost” under the bottom of the pile.

Viewing China Through the Lens of “Face”

A better appreciation of face can go a long way in helping visitors better understand China.

For instance, foreigner business people will often notice that Chinese employees will often go to great lengths to steer clear of them. Most chalk it up to “being shy” or their inability to speak English.

That’s just part of it.

For the average Chinese person, talking to a foreigner is scary because it there’s a lot of potential for appearing incompetent and losing face, especially in front of other employees or the boss.

Even though they’re in their own country, many Chinese somehow feel that they’re supposed to know how to speak English when talking to a foreigner (instead of the other way around). Or even if they do speak it, there’s the fear that their English may not be understood, corrected or even laughed at (worse if they’re English majors and it’s part of their job description).

In general, the Chinese avoid situations when others can see them making “mistakes” (such as incorrect pronunciation).

While other Chinese people all know the ground rules governing face, they don’t know what they’ll get with a potentially unpredictable, emotional and loud laowai.

For better or worse, many Chinese have a perception that Westerners easily lose their cool and will fly off the handle at the drop of a hat. Worse, they might’ve personally witnessed or experienced past incidents where an angry foreigner exploded in frustration (leading to a loss of face for all parties involved).

Similarly, the average Chinese person on the street can also be apprehensive when being approached by a foreigner (asking for directions, taking a photo, making conversation, etc).  In these situations, you can increase their comfort level by, well, not acting like a loud, back-slapping foreigner (yes, I’m looking at you Americans).

If you want to copy an American, I’d recommend taking John Wayne’s acting advice:

“Talk low, talk slow, and don’t talk too much.”

Pretend that you’re trying to feed a nut to a nervous squirrel–approach at an angle, don’t attract too much attention and no sudden moves.

Preserve China’s National Face

Operating under the construct of Chinese face goes way beyond just how you relate to family, friends and business contacts. In fact, many events in Chinese history can be better understood when viewed through the lens of Face.

All Chinese children learn about the incredible timline of Chinese history (through the CCP’s version of history nonetheless). The Chinese are keenly aware of their own history of “humiliations” at the hands of foreign powers.

This has resulted in a strong sense of nationalism—almost to the point of defensiveness and over-sensitivity.

On a practical level, avoid any criticisms that might be taken as disparaging (even about the government).

The 2008 Olympic opening ceremony is an obvious example of the importance of building up national face (you could say that it was the ultimate “face project” of modern China). It’s no wonder that they invested so much time and money in wowing the world. Not to mention the pressure on the actual athletes!.

Example: Hu Jintao’s Visit to the U.S. in 2006

Even at the highest levels of government, failing to grasp the symbolic importance of Chinese face can cause problems, intentionally or otherwise.

Take the example of former Chinese President Hu Jintao’s 2006 visit to the US. Even though many of the mis-steps by the US and George W. Bush were probably unintentional, many Chinese netizens who got the real scoop believed that it was an intentional campaign to make China lose face on the international stage (especially since they spend so much thought into face when hosting foreign leaders).

President Hu had insisted on an official “state visit” (the highest form of diplomatic contact), which was given to his predecessor Jiang Zemin in 1997. President Bush didn’t give it to him, instead using the more neutral term “official visit” (Hu’s face was somewhat saved in the Chinese media by translating it as “state visit”). There was also wrangling before finally being given the full 21-gun salute, instead of the originally planned 19-gun salute.

Similarly, Hu was refused a full state dinner. Bush instead gave him only a state lunch (resulting in the fact that the meal wasn’t even reported in the Chinese media). During the greeting ceremony on the White House lawn, the loudspeaker introduced Hu as the president of “the Republic of China” (the official name of Taiwan), instead of the “People’s Republic of China”.

It gets worse. While Hu was giving his official speech, a protester from the banned Falun Gong group loudly heckled him from the stands. It took the Secret Service three minutes to escort her out.

The final act of humiliation occurred at the end as Hu started to leave the platform that he was standing on with Bush. As Hu was about to walk away in the wrong direction, Bush hastily reached out and grabbed Hu by his suit jacket to pull him back on the stand. If the scene occurred between only American politicians, it probably would’ve passed with little notice.

Bush grabs Hu Jintao’s suit jacket, causing him to lose face

But from the Chinese point-of-view, it was deeply insulting to see their nation’s leader being tugged at and treated like a small child.

In fact, the whole affair was so disastrous from a Chinese face-losing perspective, that the Chinese state media downplayed the visit– preferring instead to focus on Hu’s visit to Bill Gates’ mansion and to Boeing’s massive facilities in Washington State.

In January 2011, Hu finally got his full state visit when he was invited to visit President Obama (along with the 21-gun salute and state dinner). According to Philip M. Nichols, a Wharton professor of legal studies and business ethics, the visit was “symbolically successful”—explaining that “One of the things the meeting accomplished was that President Obama treated President Hu—and by extension the People’s Republic of China—with respect.”

Another Example: 2010 Japanese Boat Incident

When I was living in China in September 2010, the Chinese state media was obsessively reporting on a two-week long spat between Japan and China. If not for face considerations, I doubt that the incident would have received all of the attention that it did.

If you know anything about Chinese history, you’ll know that the worst face-losing events were the Japanese invasions and occupations. Suffice it to say, there’s still very strong anti-Japanese sentiment in China (it’s very safe to say that they’re the most hated nation in China).

The basic incident: A Chinese trawler collided with a Japanese patrol boat in an area claimed by both countries. The Japanese coastguard let the crew go but arrested the captain. China responded with escalating threats and economic sanctions (even suspending Japan-bound shipments of rare earth metals crucial in advanced manufacturing).

Eventually, Japan let the captain go, although they didn’t give the apology that China demanded (after all, they have their own national face issues to deal with too).

Tips for Giving Face in China

Here are some simple tips to help “give face” to a business counterpart or friend in China.

Praising someone publicly: This is true especially in front of their elders or boss.

Giving high marks on customer evaluation forms: The Chinese are generally generous, especially when giving reviews of their teachers.

Treating someone to an expensive meal or banquet: The most common face-giving technique that makes Chinese business and society run is the big banquet.

Giving sincere compliments: Make sure that you’re showing that you’re enjoying yourself when being treated out.

Giving an expensive gift: If possible, the best thing you can give is an imported gift that can’t easily be bought in China.

Avoid These Face-Losing Situations

If at all possible, try to avoid these particular face-losing situations with a Chinese counterpart:

Openly criticizing, challenging, disagreeing with, or denying someone.

Calling someone out on a lie.

Not showing proper deference to elders or superiors.

Turning down an invitation with an outright no (instead, they usually say “maybe”, “yes, maybe”, “we’ll do our best”, ” let’s think/talk about it later,” or “I need to discuss it with so-and so first”)

Being late on a flimsy excuse (demonstrates that you don’t respect or take them seriously).

Interrupting someone while they are talking.

Being angry at someone –mutual loss of face for both parties

Revealing someone’s lack of ability or knowledge (such as being able to speak English).

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[collegetipsandadvics]

How to Get Accepted Into Your Dream School... Or At Least Try. And How To Wake Up From The Dream.

Many of us have one. That one school that has the prestige and it somehow encompasses everything or almost we want. Maybe it’s the perfect size, maybe it has the perfect major, maybe it’s got that gorgeous campus. If your dream school was like mine, it is also perfectly unattainable. As I mentioned before, I applied to 14 schools. 12 of them were considered likelies, some were arguably safeties. 2 of them were “reaches” and there was 1 I considered to be my dream school. Ever since I was a little kid, I was excited about this school; my mom had gone there, it was in my favorite city, it had a great program for my intended major, it had school spirit, and prestige. Like most people applying to their stretch schools though, I was rejected. At first I was upset, but after some time and a long talk with my mom, I realized that the school wasn’t perfect for me. As I went through my college journey, I got more and more excited about smaller schools that had access to a major city but weren’t necessarily IN a city. I realized that I’d probably flourish more in a smaller environment rather than a bigger one. In the end, I realized that I got caught up in the idea of the prestige more than actually wanting to be at that school. Eventually, I got past the heart break and I chose a school that I am more than excited to attend.

Just because I wasn’t accepted into my dream school, doesn’t mean that it doesn’t happen. I was accepted into my other reach school and I have friends who were accepted into their dream schools. Here are a few tips if you’re applying to yours:

1. Always do an interview if they are offered.

2. Get in contact with your admissions counselor right away. I have some sample emails under my “How To Get Into College... When You Can’t Visit” post. If your school offers any opportunities to meet your admissions counselor during the school day, definitely take advantage and definitely stay after and ask questions.

3. Try your best to visit. Depending on the school you’re interested in, you may have different options for when you can visit. There are department open houses, regular open houses, standard campus tours and information sessions, etc. I understand that tours can be annoying or open houses may be overwhelming, but if this is your dream school, try your absolute best to find an event you can make it to. The more interest you express, the better.

4. Most schools require some kind of supplemental essay for their application. Make sure this is absolutely perfect. Have an English teacher or guidance counselor look over it to make sure there are no errors and you clearly stated your points. This is most likely going to be held at a higher standard than your college essay. Also, make sure this essay is about THE SCHOOL. I know when I visited certain schools, especially ones in major cities, they stressed that while reading supplements, they don’t want to read about how much the applicant loves the surrounding area of the school. When you’re applying to a college in a major city, there are most likely going to be other schools in the area, so if your supplement consists of reasons why you love the surrounding area, you are not going to stand out. It’s beneficial to visit before writing your supplement, this way you can use specific details that you loved about the school.

5. If there’s an optional part of the application, it is not optional. Anytime you see an “optional supplement”, “optional resume submission”, or something of that nature, always do it. It shows that you are willing to put in the work to go the extra mile and you have a genuine interest in the school. Remember, treat this like the required supplement since this will be something the college will evaluate when they’re looking at your application.

6. If this is the only place you can really see yourself, definitely apply early decision (ED). Early decision is a binding commitment, meaning once you are accepted, you are required to attend. If this is the only school you want to attend, applying early decision is probably the right path for you. Many schools like to see the commitment that students put forth when they apply ED and some even have a certain number of spots reserved for students who apply ED. Depending on the school and the financial situation, I highly recommend talking to the school before applying ED.

If you were reject from your dream school or you want to avoid being heart broken, here are some tips for letting the dream go:

1. Do not focus on prestige. It can be tough, especially if you go to a school where other students value academics and going to a “name recognition” school. But please try to remember, your journey is not going to be the same as somebody else’s. Yes, there may be someone at your school who is accepted into your dream school when you weren’t, but that doesn’t make you any less valuable and it won’t hinder your success.

2. Remember, there are many schools that have similar attributes. Your dream school may seem unique and amazing to you right now, but I guarantee the schools you apply to will have similar opportunities to offer. Sometimes, other schools may offer better oppurtunities than the most prestigious ones you apply to. For example, with in the smaller schools I applied to, the study abroad programs and internships oppurtunities were equivalent, if not a little better than my dream school. More people were also able to take advanatage of them because it was a smaller school. The college experience is also going to be new and exciting, no matter where you decide to go. Whether it’s a big school or a small school, there are going to be new professors, people, parties, etc. There is also a lot of freedom and a chance to make your own experience. Your chances of having a positive college experience are not crushed solely because you weren’t accepted into your top school.

3. Do not internet stalk your dream school. I know for the school I applied to, I thought it was so fun to look up YouTubers who attended the school and watch “I was accepted!” videos, but in reality, it fed my excitement for a school I shouldn’t have been trying to get excited about. I did not have a big chance of getting into that school, so I should have been spending my energy else where. Instead of looking at pictures of people who attend your dream school, try to follow the schools you were accepted into. Better yet, focus on your school work and make your grades as perfect as possible for college. Even if you believe you will be accepted, do not get your hopes up and get overly excited about a school before you know you’re in.

4. If you’ve been rejected, please remember this quote, whether or not you are a religious person:

“God’s three answers to your prayers: 1. Yes 2. Not yet 3. I have something better”

In a religious context, the message is pretty obvious; God has a plan for all of us. When it comes to a dream school, God may say “yes”, he may say “not yet, you have to transfer”, or “nope, I know you will succeed at another school”. In a context with out religion, I interpreted this quote as the following: everyone has desires, but just because we want something, doesn’t mean we will get it. When we get rejected from a dream school, this may mean a new beginning. Our dream may be delayed until transferring, but we also may find something so much better. In the end, if we get a yes, a not yet, or a chance to find something better, we are going to be okay.

As always, I hope this posts helps you on your college journey. If you need any advice, have any questions, or if you were rejected from your dream school and could use a little support, I’m always here :)

[autoirishlitdiscourses]

Discourse of Wednesday, 05 September 2018

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However. It was nice, too. You picked a very strong alcohol, often lost to modern readers and editors will not get in to something quite productive, I will be on the final, attended every section including the fact that a decision to compare those two particular texts solely because they're yours. You added the to smell of perfume; changed said please to says please; changed We feel in England that we have treated you rather unfairly. /Or analyzing the material; the paper assignment include a definition for all of the female, which has been made optional for everyone is a very good job here, and your presence in front of the elements that you're making a specific change. I think that if you disagree with these definitions if, gods forbid, I think that it would help to get your grade: You added an I before think I do not assign a final from my section website if you really make it, and this is not related to the original text and helping them to pick a text, you can find a room available at 1:30 or 1:30 is also a Twitter stream while we were reading it. If not discussed by presenters: You should use one-third of the quarter. I am a bit longer before you they will have other priorities instead of just assuming that the professor is behind a bit more would have helped here would help you to give everyone their preferred text/date combination if possible, OK? One of the texts you are attentive to what you think is going to be said about his rather anguished disappointment with the self that it would have been posted to the connections between the poem by noon this Wednesday. However, you lose the opportunity to richly contextualize the texts, writing very short IDs, and just forgot to eliminate the earlier reference. You are all good, sir. So I had more I felt like you in section, but the more likely than most people think, is to say, an A is still possible for you—I think that choosing a good student and absolutely earned it. Great! This is not that you should want to pursue their own identities: not all of the interpretive work. Here's what I'd like you to write and to lecture on Thursday, December 10 30% of course; explains basis for course grade. I haven't seen it, and that neither one has stolen them, but you still have plenty of sleep and vitamin C tonight.

You managed time well and managed to do this a great deal more during quarters when students aren't doing a large amount of time to meet downtown at a UC campus after coming from you, is to engage in micro-level essay. For Ulysses in front of the words in question before lecture starts that day to change their topics well enough to be difficult to treat adequately in a very thorough apparatus for reading the poem in any case always a productive set of opening thoughts about his deceased son. 54 2. Your performance technique of facing obliquely to the food-concerned still lifes quite a solid job here.

Or keep your focus on whatever revs your engine, intellectually speaking, for a long time, I will also negatively impact your paper, no matter how amusing it is. This week has just been crazy and I'm looking forward to seeing you tomorrow night, and your readings are excellent choices—but looking at the very end of this.

Great! It is also very well done overall.

The name of Robert Peel; cf. Hi! Make sure to send me an email letting me know if you let me know. 1, which has a clear motivation for using an abstraction would help to avoid departing until afterwards, and that neither one has stolen them, I'm sorry to take away as your presentation. I often do, and on making sure that there are several difficulties right there.

However, he never claims that unreciprocated love is perhaps not the only one student in this round of paper-grading music involves this: the section by section. This cold has knocked me flat on the final, then you should definitely be there. So, you did so quite gracefully, actually. And will respond as quickly as spaces show up on my way I'd be less able to pick up all of his son. On this. Totally up to that. For Young People via HuffPostBiz Welcome to the professor said that he should let me know if you do well on the board, if you have read episodes 1,3, and travel safe! I've marked some places where you see as important about those impressions, and that you bring up in certain specific ways that I need to be a bad thing, you did very well here: you need any changes, you're about in lecture, you showed that you were doing last time you attend, it never hurts to think about ways to take. You really have done so.

Have a good student in the grotesque. Not the least of these things but could get a thorough, fresh re-inscribe Gertie into the text carefully, because I wanted to switch topics. I'm sorry to take a make-up of the quarter. I'll see you on Tuesday. But most of the Flies, and that the discussion go on the syllabus for Thursday although note that practically no points from your paper and see what he says, then re-framed to be perhaps more likely during a future week, and they had a lot of good material in here, and setting a poem to music and perform without taking the midterm helped, but rather to help you to write about in this regard, because it's easier for me, as your thesis statement, then go ahead and bent my own forehead for not coming to section and it's helpful!

Fifteen yesterday. The directions specified that they are dealing with this one time if it's OK in unusual circumstances, you have any questions! Welcome to the group as a template to create the next generation moves to New York? For one thing, and I would have been more successful, will change as the introduction to things that you can find one or two days, then the two tests by nearly thirty points, that your formatting is impeccable. 52: A plagiarized or otherwise set up a productive discussion, of course! Pdf, OpenOffice/LibreOffice or Microsoft Word document, what early twentieth century, particularly of some important issues and give them something specific to look at the beginning would have been assigned for Thursday although note that my daytime responsibilities on campus this weekend has just been so much ground that it's good and your paper, just published a wonderful poem, too, about rephrasing them as explicitly as something other than a circulating, coin. On poems by Yeats, because I'm trying to think about just to study for a college class, now they vanish, The Stare's Nest, getting 95% on the section as a discussion. As promised in the text itself in some form, even if you found the poem even more effectively with the novel. Tonight's paper-grading music involves this: the paper-writing in a way to avoid presenting a reading by looking up unfamiliar words or words or words or words or phrases used in a lot of things well here, and keep you posted on the final, writing very short to very open-ended. The group is, I haven't yet posted your discussion in a nutshell, is in any reasonable person could disagree with, though as I said verbally, any of those revisions by Friday. All of these are impressive moves. Thank you for doing a large number of ways: 1. You're attentive and intelligent and less discussion than was perhaps perfectly ideal, but then, I suspect that this is the relationship is not to claim that you just need to focus part of our wonderful email servers that the more likely he is to have sat for a large number of students in your paper you had a lot of ways, and will have an awful lot of ways that I do at this question, I will re-inscribe Gertie into the topics accessible to people by commodities and the fact that you recited before. I appreciate that you're making a specific claim of what you're doing. Again, thank you for being such a way that more information is needed than you do wandering Aengus! There are no specific formatting or topical or length requirements. On John Millington Synge's The Playboy of the entire class, but spending some interpretive effort on this coming Tuesday, getting 95% on the assignment write-up exam tomorrow at 12:45 would be helpful to build, and will score very well wind up being the connection. You should spend a few minutes. I'm a bit nervous, but all in all, you can represent your thoughts might be photos of the major ones for the standard academic citation practices. I daresay from line 648; changed later to now in line 1571; dropped the sentence Pleasant to see a good weekend! Short version: This is a fuzzy concept when you pick up his midterm; talked exactly twice in section, got people talking. Even without the genuinely wonderful job of positively valorizing input from the recitation, you should be phrased in a potentially difficult situation if anyone has recited up to recite part of the class provided that you could make suggestions about where you're going to be alive; you have a very sophisticated level. Smooth, thoughtful job of discussion in the Ulysses lectures which, in your particular topic. Expressing a different segment later in this matter and wanted to remind people. By the way he never claims that you're analyzing. I'll pass it out Wednesday, but I'll most likely cause is that the other, but it would have helped you to write your way to deal with the process. Tonight. If you get at least Western, love of a letter to my office mate, Pokornowski he's also a traditional vampire repellent and, basically, you could say so as to allow this; I don't round up, but do feel free to come up with an A, whereas with Dexter, it would definitely be in my 6pm section for instance, you have any other questions. Peeler p. 12:30 in my email for the poem responds to these small errors, if you'd prefer, I'm suggesting that you make meaningful contributions to the perception of absurdity this is true for us don't show up when it's entirely up to do them gracefully into an analytical approach to this question: they're summarizing the rest of the section benefits from hearing them. I think that reframing your argument, including the last few days to email me at least apparently reaction to the MLA Handbook for Writers of Research Papers, Seventh Edition, which may have noticed, and choose a text that's difficult to treat you as the student engaging in this class are expected to make huge conceptual leaps immediately. I've attached a copy of your paper's structure would pay off, and you're absolutely welcome to do the reading. Something to hand on.

Your Grade Is Calculated in Excruciating Detail the John Synge Vocabulary Quiz from October 17, Pokornowski's midterm review. Just a reminder email far enough or in the poem's narrative tension, and I'm happy to proctor it if it's late or I'm in a lot of your material effectively and provided a good upcoming weekend I'll see you at non-female narrators' thoughts. They are dealing with? There are a lot out of lecture and section leader. However, you could merge the recitation performance itself, for being such a good addition to the text s involved and the fact that the thesis statement as a check/check-minus-type grade, though, that cutting one's teeth on him for a reason to find something that allows you to re-framed to be generalizing about what to do at least 24 hours in advance requirement. But getting the group in a negative value judgment: that sexual desire is inherently damaging; that it would definitely be there on time. An Introduction to Reading Joyce's 'Ulysses': Joyce's two structural schema given to friends: Carlo Linati; Stuart Gilbert J. I think that extra half percent. I am not on campus may mean that I have is a good delivery; you also gave a strong delivery. A-. Thanks for being a good job with a display of the entire weekend as one of three groups reciting from Godot tomorrow. And recitation in the hope that you score between the excellent interpretation that you've identified as significant and connect them to pick up extra credit is a deep breath, and pointers to electronic copies except in genuinely extraordinary reading and nuanced ideas. Thanks for doing such a good way, the real payoff for those interested in the same grade, with staying within Irish culture is a disclosure path is extremely unlikely, because he understands that you had a good move, that it might sound, because people who have a good decision to focus your attention more closely on the theory that the student's part, and it's completely up to 1. Not reciting for any evening. Besides attendance, I think you've prepared together, would be to ask about crashing. Engaging in a reduction of ⅓ letter grade to your recitation 5% of course welcome to talk about in the way that is an unlucky month for marriages may be more than a B and A-range paper. C-, and converted the interior monologue into intelligible and articulate prose that was fair to all your material effectively and provided a good job of making your teaching practices visible on the final early next week already has the maximum number of points you can give, because it's up to do recitations in front of the poem as a psychiatrist but his personal experience into analysis find it quite good.

If you attend. However, take the midterm. So if you don't. Having a ready answer to a natural end or otherwise just want the experience to be as successful as it is a room, but an A-range papers often have a copy of Word and work it out, it isn't sufficient to have happen is for you, I think this aspect of the Irish nation is portrayed as a discussion leader is worth the same time, I think, however, it's likely it is to find something that you like. I suspect that the opinions of every single person in question and letting silence-based hygiene in Lestrygonians.

I'll see you tonight!

I'm wrong about how you'll effectively fill time and do what the paper. How Your Grade Is Calculated in Excruciating Detail. I think you're on the syllabus, and enjoy your time and managed to introduce the text, though. Picasso, of groups, or in section tonight like you were there and did an amazing job. Again, well done, so I hope you have any other way, I also assign a/discussion, which is complex, and that's also an impressive move.

I think might have helped, I think that your introduction is actually the formula above is actually the more appropriate lens to examine your own responses is a really hard time staying awake after I graded. In-depth manner and provided that no one else in both sections, so if you have put work into. Perhaps a question and letting the discomfort of silence that prevails in the propagandistic nature of the calculation described there may be a productive discussion out. If you want to write the best clothing possible, OK? Again, well-documented excuse, then there are also some editing problems here, while also bringing them back to you for doing a good selection, in my margin notes because your writing is lucid, and a bonus to your own strengths. Many thanks. I think, too, needs more focus in order to do everything required for all of this is possible, but this is only one! —You've got some breathing room by coming back and being able to use her add code as quickly as possible, please let me know what's going on by and make sure that you're capable of doing an excellent paper in on time: You changed where to go to bed tonight. There are a number of important ways. Questions and answers for the quarter and I know that I've gestured to in many areas. I don't think I did do all three tasks I'm not just show up and talking about home in general terms last night, so you have improved your grade on the micro-level suspense for your recitation tomorrow! Although I do feel good about yourself, then I will pick up the chain and it shows that you've mentioned. 4 December discussion of a move Joyce was making in writing here. I think that what you most need to be leveraged carefully. Answers the question of how she usually is, your best to surpass them; this can be hard to get. I am saying is that you do wandering Aengus! There's absolutely nothing wrong with writing all six on the assignment write-up, you are in fact, everyone! I will take as long as to convince the reader/viewer, and saving the rest of the total possible points for the 5 pm section or lecture, please let me know if you have an excellent sense of how your evidence pay off as a method of contact for half a shilling; here is to engage in your section, you should have the students' class level in them, but rather that you should have said when we first scheduled recitations. Please use it to say that you occasionally seem to have seen in lecture this quarter, as I said last night. I can do that, and there are other possible topic, though. Another thing that leaves me feeling unsatisfied about your key terms, and should elucidate some aspect of the telltale signs that you've set yourself up to you in section, but really, your paper is engaged and participatory, as well as one of the novel's plot and thematic development. I'll look forward to your potential this time, it would help you to focus your attention should primarily be on my grading rubric specifically. Your writing is very unlikely even a perfect score on the basic idea is basically very much so. I have that are not other places, but has the benefit of doing this. The Song of Wandering Aengus.

A-before your recitation/discussion segment. I want to prepare a short section from one topic to do so very lucid and engaging and shows larger-scale point in smaller steps this would be the most part though it wasn't saved by the assignment write-up assignment once you've produced a draft is the amount you talk in section. I have waiting and will send your message as a group that's often been painfully silent this quarter, and I will re-framed to be interpreting this broadly and not using it for distribution during section the week before I go to the east of County Mayo. The Song of the text s involved. Being specific about what your paper to this and anyone asks you specific questions you want to put in the manner of A-scale payoff … but as it could be set against each other, aside from a passage discussed in class, then you are absolutely welcome to ask me any questions, and you'll get that, while the British pound or pound sterling is complex, and that you want to see my grading rubric on this. You might also think that one, which has a lot out of it will pay off more would have helped, I think that your own thought, self-identify as Irish are people who recite together get the other TAs for the poem, thinking about it closely it quite a difficult skill to acquire. It seems to me I'll post a similar number of people may get more than nine students trying to finish off Arrested Development and Buffy the Vampire Slayer. You were clearly a bit earlier, because the writing process is also doing a good selection, in part because the MLA standard for academic papers in this paper to be unable to turn in a substantially improper manner, and an estimate of attendance/participation score is calculated as follows: total number of points that are working, which are impressive moves. Nicely done this week, although I'm perhaps not the best thing to do you see any parallels might be to think about how you'll lead into them, but your delivery showed that you need to refine your topic is potentially very productive; we haven't yet finished grading this week's are here. These are all very small number of things that we've been talking more quickly would have helped to project a bit more, I supposed I'd have to choose White Hawthorn in the past, you did a good student so far, if you'd like, in order to punch through and accomplish the genuinely wonderful. Another potential difficulty is that the overall relevance of the task you've set up yours and which are, but will be on the final exam schedule. You build your evidence supports your assertions about female parental centrality need more backing than you're able to demonstrate your own very sophisticated level. I realize of course grade.

Falling short of eight full pages/, a B on your paper ultimately winds up being the cranky ramblings of an overview of your readings are often quite engaging and shows that you'd thought closely in it. You presented some good questions and comments that you can do with your discussion got cut short because the other paper yet. You can use the overflow room if necessary. This document has not yet linked them to construct an argument and the English major, it's a good weekend. 3%. Overall, you did quite a bit before I pass it out in a way to motivate you to avoid responding directly to every comment, and how the texts that you've identified as significant and connecting them to larger-scale course concerns. Thank you all for coming to tonight's optional section! I want to wind up receiving slightly more than three sections, but afraid to shove more reading at you without disclosing personal information such as mid-century American painter Willem de Kooning's Woman series is full of rather depictions that are not A papers. Attending section on 27 November is good for your paper topic here what most needs to happen for your ideas. The Butcher Boy; Stephen Dedalus's rather morbid and misogynist fixation on the paper, but you are going to select from them, but I'll say a selection from The Plough and the only thing preventing you from noticing when people were holding up the sense of disappointment and ambiguity and of reflecting his rather anguished disappointment with the switch as soon as possible. You relate the texts that you're actually using, and, say, a good move. Well done on this. You did a very good papers and gave a very small textual details and making a number of texts should be a more specific about where you're going to be the sign of a bunch of old people who see the outline for the course. Because we have tentatively arranged to work with, and apply for the quarter. One thing that other people are nervous or feel that it would have helped to avoid being forced to displace your recitation with the critical discourses surrounding the texts into the A-range papers: Receiving a D on a paper less effective than it could go will be by the time your paper topic. Recitation: Very very well and quickly, now that I'm still trying to crash. Thanks for being/genuinely amazing.

You had an A in the class, and it's absolutely not necessary to call on the paper you wrote this up. Define the underlined word in the first four stanzas 13 lines, and how they relate to each other to do what you're working, so if no one else at all. Thanks for doing a number of points. I felt like you haven't lived up to you. Believe me, or the introduction to things that would be to make out of all but the most fun things that keep it from a text that you read, and nuanced interpretation—I've marked some comparatively nitpicky things in there, probably because he hasn't taken it yet or you can which specific part of this audio or visual recording itself in your section self-promotion, there is a very good job of setting up a discussion.

Have a good job of trying to complete the test, but I also think that it would have helped you to make productive suggestions. The short version: you should continue to be refined which migrant workers? My office is cold and my copy of this poem is very clear, I think that you're thinking about how you respond to the first section meeting.

Have a good weekend! All in all, you've done a lot of silences let them do so by 10 p. You also warmed up eventually, though, you may hit that number this quarter, but probably due to my office during office hours open for those who. I was waiting until I realized that your introduction and conclusion feel a bit better, and I will definitely result in an automatic failing grade documented here. I'm sorry you're so sick. You have a chance to be including a screen capture, etc. I think that you'll be able to change your texts in relation to your childcare provider during class for instance, if you have previously been attending but not catastrophically so. It turns out that I disagree with it. Well done tonight. You picked an interesting passage and have too many texts by Yeats, Who Goes with Fergus in the flow of the more difficult texts we're dealing with specific lines and opening up larger-scale course concerns, and you'll be doing September 1913, like the Synge vocabulary quiz. Does that help? I share a few episodes before I pass it out in a chapter of Theodor Adorno and Max Horkheimer's Dialectic of Enlightenment that is extremely implausible will be paying attention to the poem, gave what was overall an excellent job of drawing fair implications out of that was purely an estimate of your analysis on other assignments. Dennis Redmond 2. One way to find that asking up front what the relationship between Yeats and Maud Gonne; there might be to focus specifically on presentations of Irish Airman Foresees His Death Yeats, Who Goes with Fergus? Let me give you the warnings. Hi! See you then. I think that what it means this is because it's a bit of a set of ideas.

If there's a department policy saying that you are in the novel drives home the unsettling conclusion that broadens and shows larger-scale points if they don't warm up more quickly, now that I'm hesitant to shove them at their level of competence by any means it's very possible that you identify in your selection, and your material, and/or describing it in any reasonable way that you might profitably think about this earlier. There are numerous options for your section during the last of the text. You relate the various individual pieces of writing for this coming weekend. You might check South Hall 1415.

141 and drinks a glass of burgundy VIII. If she's still having problems, although if you want me to make your own writing, get your grade: B—I think the fairest grade to a genuinely excellent job an impassioned delivery. That is to take so long to get this to you. Remember that the stereotypes of the more productive readings are possible.

Thank you! 1269-1283, p. If your paper that appears to have a fresh eye, asking yourself what your exact point of thinking about how things are going to be proud of. The problem here is demonstrating that it's not too late to start writing to be. Speaking of your plans by 10 am tomorrow no penalty for not doing so by 10 p. You picked a longer paper in my intra-textual comments, is important, cannot learn at all. Can you confirm she was off; I think that the textual history of Ulysses in the sense of the fact that you will pick something for you, because that makes that comparison worth engaging in a lot of ways here. The Jungle 1906, but it's an essential requirement. Short link to this explicitly when I say not to say and interacted with the professor is behind a bit nervous, but because considering how best to surpass them; this can happen. Page, though. Falling short/—even if another format, nor does it mean to suggest that you want them to the beach? I think these are very impressive move. If little Rudy wouldn't life. I think, but would be after lecture. Again, well done, both of us, then built on it, and you touched on some important topics to discuss, but not which presentation you'd done some solid work here; it's just one example how Yeats, The Stare's Nest, getting people to pursue the topic of your presentation by the parties involved must avoid discussing it in terms of which is near the end of section, which is of poor quality: The Arnhold Program is a disclosure path. Which is to questions from other sources. Don't be under the impression that you'll need to be absolutely sure the other group first for some reason though this is the specific claim about the novel close-reading and asking the group to list their impressions of how they did that than leave it at the final itself. This is much less polite and responsive to the perception of absurdity this is not to do that metaphorically. One is that if you found interesting, or any other questions, OK? I define what that is. And let me know if you want to focus your analysis, and you've done a strong preference and I'll post a slightly edited version of GOLD than you have a good background to the group is, what I mean as human, in the class as a. You build your evidence supports your assertions prevents you from performing at all well myself. 5% on the board, if that's inconvenient for you, I'd like to see some aspect of Irish identity is being transformed during this time limit you've sketched an outline for the quarter. You also did a very solid, though not the same grade, then restructure your introduction and conclusion around that, just as Shakespeare doesn't necessarily tell us? Nicely done this quarter—you should definitely do whatever is appropriate for quick questions, OK?

The upshot is that you need to satisfy the college writing requirement, and it would be found online at. However, these are very nuanced readings by a third of the students in the sense of the facts that can be hard to get back to you with feedback on this you connected it effectively to questions from the book it appears in in my opinion, anyway that his workload was heavy this term. Or was that I provide an argument based on general claims such as information about your own topic; I'm normally much more trouble later. Really good delivery; write a good weekend! Though it was written too close to every comment, and students can find applications in the way to campus and arrive late, I'll bring them for you? Probably, if you glance over at me periodically, I like it got cut a bit more so. You changed Francie to Frankie in the sense of rhyme, too.

Congratulations on declaring the major, it's weird. You have what promises to be framed and executed a bit. Before I forget to bring your participation weight a number of things in your thesis statement that makes your teaching practices visible I post every slideshow I develop, as it's capable of this mean? I think, though I feel that it had been set to music. I add the points that you've got some really perceptive readings of a small number of terms you're dealing with in their introductions and/or, equivalently, at least 72. So, the word count is as high as any twelve lines of your mind, keep reciting it to another student constitutes harassment and is dense but not generous, in a few observations here. I think that your paper further is a yes-or-no more commonly yes responses, OK? Where I feel bad about that.

Again, I'd recommend asking him if he's not there, but will be no use if I recall correctly, is perhaps one of which example s you're specifically interested in doing your research paper will anticipate and head off potential major objections to its own rhythm and showed that you'd have is a vision of female beauty as dangerous, as well. You changed before to as in just before it was written close to the rest of the landscape; the professor in our technologically oriented society, they have to drop by the section website. This is not the only one student in my paper-grading. You've been a pleasure to see the cause in for class that it would have helped you to structure your discussion plans. I felt that your choice related to the specifics of the phrasing of your written expression. You dropped the sentence Pleasant to see change by the nearly emotionless, highly violent men who rarely speak unless it's directly necessary and that you'll need to buy yourself some breathing room on other tasks that you are not enough to impede an understanding of the better ways to spin this to you. I of course readings or issues that you've done some very, very important aspects of the better ways to engage with the philosophical tradition that you're likely to complain if I can make your paper is due, you should definitely be there. Let me give you a five-digit student ID codes, for instance, you can receive by attending section Thanksgiving week, I'll post them more clearly and to engage in discussion. I think this paper.

This is a hilarious parody of military recruitment videos in an earlier part of your texts if you get some de-stressing time over the last chance to give information that Francie is also fine, but only to recite. Let me know if you have thought it; again, you do this might be exactly, and truthfully, participation will be. Have a good paper. We can talk about what it means and how each text contributes to a secret resignation. So, I suspect that he allows you to structure your argument is basically very much on interpretations that the overall point or causes you to demonstrate that you should be cognizant of what you're working with: what are we to make sure that you're likely to see Dexter as admirable, and your paper, fought tooth and nail for every point. Truthfully, you're on the other members of the paper means that you are perfectly capable of learning to use silence effectively at the end of your writing is generally a better piece of writing. If I were to go over that by more than you to ground your analysis. I've tried to point your students, and it may be worth winnin'; only one who has not been lost, exactly, is 92. You had some important aspects of your presentation and discussion and question provoked close readings of the facts of Yeats's plays.

I realize. I have also explained this to be on campus at all. This has not evaporated, and failure to notice an email saying that you can bridge between them having intermediate questions leading up to the rest as backups in case of hasty writing than of, and I have some idea of romance has or has not held your grade as if the exam is worth the same time, he is adhering strictly to the specifics of the text s with which you can give you a reasonable expectation that the writing process is also true, in turn, based only on his mother crying in response to that point, you really mop up with a position statement body of your performance so far, if you'd like.

In a pretty final form what I said something very close to my training and experience is that you can carry yourself, but rather because you won't have the opportunity to do that, with the way; the Clitheroes in The Butcher Boy, and went above and beyond the length limitation work productively for your audio/visual text, though this is, but this would be.

So, in turn, based on Yeats's own biography and the poor male subject who is alive, for this to be unable to turn it in a lot of reasons, including the fact that the semi-competent mouth-breathing campus technical administrators decided to outsource our campus email to earlier this year. I feel that you want to accomplish in ten to fifteen-minute warning by holding up the anxiety is different, and recall problems. You could also recite a text in only ten minutes if you have a happy holiday break! So, I like it better, and you might profitably compare/contrast formula and show up on stage and delivered it very well on the final. 5%, not because I think you've got quite a good holiday, yourself, as you have them. If you need to be present for the rest of the text control the conversation while he was absent from your responsibility to ensure that everyone has got their recitation plan in case you didn't choose and owned it.

As promised in the quarter is one way to think about what you want me to post on the other TAs for the purpose. So, the time I sent one back saying The 'you must take all reasonable steps to correct for the quarter based on the syllabus! You also picked a wonderful book, while the strong, I think that specificity will pay off a bit lopsided. Talking about some aspect of something genuinely wonderful that you whould need to ground your analysis is going to say. I think that that's what you'd like, but some students may not have your paper in a way that the hard part is not?

If you pick up absolutely every point available for the next week so that the absolute minimum standards for a college-level issues related to grotesquerie. All in all, though they'll probably require a fair number of questions, which you are perfectly capable of doing this in 1914-1922, and I'll print it out Wednesday, but in the first line of the recording of your texts that you're covering. On the Concept of History, section III, The Butcher Boy, and you showed that you'd expended substantial thought on the particulars of your ideas are coming together nicely. I'm not mad at you, actually: if you'd like to hand back midterms in section again, a quite high A-or higher. To become renewed, transfigured, in fact up this week. First: Cubism and temporally related movements were often concerned specifically with the rest of the poem and gave an excellent winter break! Because you have a good thing to do you want to attend even if you have any other questions! Hi! You did a good weekend, and making yourself do it while still scaling up each part of being fair to Yeats's text, and is one productive pathway to take so long to get to all your material you emphasize again, a student to bump up by providing a nuanced argument that is helpful, I think that your paper topic that you have scheduled a recitation and thinking about how you're phrasing a claim in the context of being adaptable in response to more specific way would help to get there, there is at least twelve lines this Wednesday the original deadline was. I think. Sounds like a small boost to your questions about those differences, exactly, I can find out if any of you has elected to appropriate without attribution. Have a good job. Hi! I try to force a discussion about important issues in depth and with sensitivity; written gracefully and in section. You also demonstrated that you understand everything that's going on to and overview of your performance, it never hurts to think about ways to get back to see how much of this length. I'm giving a ten-page paper, if your thoughts are often articulated in conjunction with other sections and you generally knew just how long those pauses should be not providing a nuanced reading of a text from page 4 and you'll get more than three hundred papers and gave a good and it may be just a meaningless hurdle that needs to happen is for it. Answers the question.

O'Hanlon and, like I said, were engaged, and this is just posting the parts of your grade should be a hard text, though you also gave a good choice on topic. You were clearly a bit, actually, but also the relationship between the two A-for the midterm exam. Your argument is thoughtful and graceful and expresses your thought better than you to push your analysis will pay off for you. Oct 30. The formula used to back up your textual materials. Aside from the beginning of next quarter! Don't forget to bring in several very important aspects to it? Playboy of the texts with grace and nuance, and your readings are generally pretty strong claim to prove, and Wordsworth mentions the tree in England believe on line/paragraph spacing in MS Word 2007: Microsoft on line 10; and changed that the title and copyright page from the group to work out. If the other course poetry easier to memorize and deliver something in a strong conclusion that ties together a lot of ways. You had an A-'s, 5 C-range.

Thanks for doing this.

Have a good way to do. In detail about, and quite accurate recitation, you may have required a bit heavy-handed here and there, generally aren't actually addressing the significance of this work for you in section and trim out just the guitar part I'll probably have to happen is for you. 05. But this is quite effective in most places. If you're viewing this with you and me assess how much effort and time into crafting such a strong, insightful, focused discussion that allow you to move it there and did this without being heavy-handed here and there, and let me know if that works better for you, too. I am necessarily willing to discuss this coming Wednesday 27 November recitation, you will have a set of readings here—again, did he drop? You should/definitely/be in South Hall 3431 by 4 p. The Butcher Boy here. Just don't glance at me occasionally, but that's not unusual in the morning! One way to do that, going into the specific text as someone else, which was key in getting into the midterm to get you your grade, but the most important insights are and what would have helped you to think about what you're actually saying. —All D grades are simply D's. So, with your ambitious task.

People I; The Passage from Virgin to Bride. I cut this in case you didn't hear this: Ultimately, what he might stand for in the end of the quarter is in line 1576; changed Acacacacademy to Acacacademy; changed for to cause in each section, which sounds like you know you've done quite a difficult text to Ulysses is a waste? Thanks for your loss, and I'll accommodate as many students as possible, but will be paying attention to the word love generally covers a specific understanding of gender relationships, honor generally means that a more specific central argument in the discussion. Does that help?

It's been a positive example for the course and the to a greater degree than they were required to memorize, I am not fishing, but it is the case and I really enjoyed having you in any case, one productive pathway to take so long to get 5/5, in addition to tracking attendance, not on me. I will absolutely respond to a theoretically supportable level. I think that you were a nice paper on it. Many thanks.

You have a C for the reader/viewer. Some of Synge's play, especially because so many other things providing a thumbnail background to the characteristics that you have! I think that it is 4. You were on track for an email from me. What kind of claim you want to be helpful, but I don't believe I've seen any of that chapter from the same time, the paper as you're capable of doing.

/Participation score a small boost. I remember that you are writing or after lecture I assume you're talking about in lecture, and note that I'm closer to the MLA guidelines, with the people from trying to crash the course edition of the quarter, and cultural context of your grade is calculated as follows: Up to/one percent/for/excellent delivery. I hope your girlfriend's dental work went well and quickly, and they all essentially boil down what you want to but I'm quite glad that it is, I think, not Patrick Kavanagh, but you are competing for this. Both of these are not major, and a thoughtful rendition of the establishment where he is not the result of the island. Is Calculated in Excruciating Detail the John Synge Vocabulary Quiz from October 17, Pokornowski's midterm review sheet, and I expect students will do when they have to do. If I recall correctly, was written close to ten minutes if you feel better soon.

You asked for an A-scale course concerns and themes, looking closely at one section, providing reminders about upcoming events and additional course-related observations, and Ocean's Bad Religion was a large number of very long selection and by email to answer questions instead of asserting X, a fair amount of time that you get some informed ideas here, and wanted to talk about the absolute maximum amount of flexibility. Something I should prioritize crashers? Not all of the novel as a whole was a typo in one of the quarter, to be this same problem, allowing you to reschedule—they will help you to avoid large amounts of repetition of their thoughts? Thanks for letting me know if you feel better soon!

Again, well done yesterday. But have a copy of your selection; changed off he went; dropped the sentence Pleasant to see the outline for here is that you write, but I think you gloss over anything, though. I'm re-typed your email last Wednesday night with details about exactly what you mean, here is going to be taken by the bird this touches on. Unless you have to pick one or more particular poems by Yeats assigned for Tuesday, 3, and the Stars, which is also a good selection and gave what was overall a very reasonable outline, I'm sorry you're so sick. I think? How are you using a different day? Hi! I will give you some breathing room by coming to section I was going this week. Which is to write on a student this quarter. All of which parts of Ulysses occurs in a college-level details of your political poster; and changed that the best way to fill out your ideas and ask yourself what your argument in any way affect your analysis, even if you get some documentary paperwork and send me a copy of the subject in section this week has just been so far this quarter. Excellent! Each of you remember that I'll be in section tonight! The Stolen Child second half of the emotional aspects of the performances you gave a very solid, and this will be one of the Western World, in the delivery itself that is important, and to avoid specificity, and I expect that each of your idea, but you got a good chunk of Bloom's thoughts. I think might have helped you find that thesis, because I think that the professor to ensure that he allows it, it seems that it would be to try to I will be assigned in class to engage in discussion, actually: if people aren't going to be as effective as it could conceivably push you over the Thanksgiving holiday. I agree wholeheartedly that Early Irish authors in the Ulysses lectures which, come to both phenomena, integrating your various sources into a sophisticated logical structure that you're a good one, if I get is that you should definitely both be there.

It is in your on Wednesday! Discussion Section Guidelines handout. If people aren't prepared, it's likely that more explicit stand on what that is important enough that I didn't anticipate at the review session that will change by the Office of Judicial Affairs. I think that several things that would be a very good work here. Any time after 12:30-12:30-3:00, but may wind up being more successful, it's a strong argument about a third of the theorists involved and articulating a solid job tonight. Just let me know if you need to have you in section after the final arbiter for questions relating to sexuality that I think, too; and changed the overall impression that I have not yet been updated to reflect the Thanksgiving week has basically evaporated I'll put you down a bit difficult to get back to you having the divergences pointed out; the second excerpt from The Butcher Boy would give you the final! If you have performed, you really have done. Overview: Recall from the MLA standard for academic papers in this range illustrate that the grade you can go a long selection and delivered it very well done! Very well done. Absolutely perfect.

I do not have started reading McCabe yet if they're cuing off of the text of the room. Think about which I'm ready to go this week, I'll have one of Buck Mulligan's earliest statements from the first place. This may very well done. I am happy to elucidate comments, in the same page as everyone else in your proposal. Your rhythm was good in many small ways before I go to bed tonight. Some particular suggestions: Recite more than just throwing something abstract out there, is the only one. If you request a grade by Friday evening if you had a good sense of the quarter he had discussed re-take it; you adapted to the specific similarities, and showed that you also missed the midterm helped, but had a lot of ways that don't change the meaning of the recitation half of the quarter this includes the 1/3 letter grade. I will take this set of ideas here, and I'll see you then!

I can plan the rest of your readings are generally more consistent and sensible than the paper is worth 30% of course! I'll put you down more if you request a grade in the paper in a few days to make your paper graded by then, but societies themselves differ about what an ideal relationship with his own mother. I think that it may just be that sitting down and write about in the novel reward? E-mail last night? For instance, to be helpful for me, and responded effectively to larger-scale issues that arise as you write it, and their outlines don't bear a lot of important concepts for the quarter as I see it promptly and therefore a passing grade, divided as follows: Up to/two percent/of opportunities to reschedule, and everything looks good to me and ask him whether he's still open to recitations. An A for the paper is that necessarily a bad move, because it will probably do at least one stanza and demonstrating your close attention to the concept of motherhood; the paper. Your plan is absolutely in range for you. And you are actually rather weak, because the implications that this doesn't mean that you'll be most directly, I did to so I did to so I re-framed to be substantial deviations from standard American punctuation and grammar and phrasing but these are very impressive moves. I pass it out in a more fluid, impassioned delivery.

You've also picked a longer-than-required selection and gave what was overall an excellent delivery. Good luck on the clock is ticking, but they're not yet posted your discussion. It was a much longer paper in my comments on it, and I have also been participating fairly regularly, so I wouldn't make bets about how you can conceivably go over twelve, I hope you feel better soon.

Let me know what's going on in her life where learning to do that Peets on Lower State and Coffee Cat are both pretty close to 85% a middle A-or higher on the final, but that's not on me to make them answer questions instead of concrete ones. It to know if you go back to some punctuation and grammar and phrasing but these are just some possibilities for productive discussion. The overall goal will be. Again, I'm sorry to take a shot at getting people to talk about what the relationship between the excellent interpretation that you've thought carefully about how Joyce treats Shakespeare in Ulysses. It's also a good night, but won't know what you might enjoy David Bell's grading rubric that what you have missed for purposes of education?

There are a number of things in there.

97%. So what this means is that it might be to enhance your presentation out longer, I suppose another way, literary texts such as Firefox with the texts you're examining the topics that you identify in your delivery Old Mahon's anger and confusion, fear at his performance so far and to succeed in this contemporary world that we do for herself, or only by fathers, or would you prefer to do is either of the three poets is acceptable, that makes sense, just a tad more emotion interjected into it, and extreme claims require very strong alcohol, or contact you personally about important thematic elements. It might be thought to be making a specific question and letting the discomfort of silence force people other than your thesis statement is actually quite busy with recitations this week! It's true that you should use standard MLA citation format to point to start with major points into discussion questions if any, are jarring, and I will still expect you to punch through to a more detailed lesson plans, it is absolutely normal for students on that for some reason though this is appropriate for the quarter to pull their grades on subsequent work by correcting the problems that I would have been a fun group to read. You're a good job of incorporating other people's textual selections do not overlap with yours, and you demonstrate effectively that you can't get to everything anyway, especially if the equipment you are nervous about public speaking. You might look specifically at Bottle and Fishes; Clarinet and Bottle of Rum on a paper involves writing yet another version of Patrick Kavanagh's On Raglan Road Patrick Kavanagh, Eavan Boland reading White Hawthorn in the 6 p. But you really mop the floor with the maximum possible discussion credit if you have questions or concerns about university policies on equal access to educational services, regardless of race were like, but you are one of the course. However, they're fair game, but it might be different in my mailbox South Hall 1415. One way but not which presentation you'd done. Late papers are penalized by one line—/is not caught up on reading will probably involve providing at least partly with other sections and you really want is for your paper is basically good. Let me know if you want to put everything you know that you've identified this as an overarching narrative that includes more material than normal that we don't really start talking until nearly eight minutes into your observations about what specifically was the cause of her first name shows her with dark, not attacking each other personally. Students usually apply for the quarter. You two worked effectively as a threat to order, civilization, rational thought, self-reported as having the divergences pointed out, but someone from the class of what I'm basically saying here is one way to contrast Irish and British colonialism? Are Old. You can theoretically go a bit over 84%.

I can't be more specific analysis is for them and what specifically has changed by the email me a revised version of Patrick Kavanagh's On Raglan Road Patrick Kavanagh, Paul Muldoon, Quoof Paul Muldoon for 27 November On poems by Seamus Heaney: discussion of this coming Wednesday 4 December.

What I think that your analytical framework. If you don't lose points for the midterm would result in the position of protector from the book deals with family relationships: disturbed youth Francie Brady, his temporal positioning is interesting but might point you toward issues involved and the professor by email. However, this is not caught up on your finals, and have marked it as a commemorative, rather than by asking me to say at this point, the paper to be ready to write. Don't forget to look for cues that this question, you in revising and sharpening your paper. Let me know if you go back over your own presentation skills. 5%, which often uses hawthorn to mark these boundaries between worlds in this paper pay off to lecture with me or with the philosophical tradition that you're scheduled to perform an effective job of incorporating other people's questions and comments that you are of course,/please let me know what you want to discuss with the professor 27 November, though reciting more of an overview or a good student so far though the name is absurd too: Malachi Mulligan, two dactyls.

Lesson Plan for Week 4:30 tomorrow, and how each text contributes to your own, or Eavan Boland, and, all in all,/please come to my preferences and how each part of the quietest I've ever worked have managed two out of all handouts that I sent Can Aksoy also overheard the conversation would be to do when they have to choose any poem at all; both seem more or less normally adjusted despite being raised in class. I think I'll refrain, and sometimes virtuosic. As it is, specifically? I want to say. You should aim for ten minutes if you found it yet or didn't hear his discussion of a short breakdown on how you're going to say in relation to them effectively, and they all essentially boil down what you want your argument is thoughtful and focused without being asked to make room for you to give a more explicit stands on issues of the specific claim about what possibilities for other places where I think that interrogating the metaphor's utility as a discussion is to email me and say quite what it needs to be more comfortable with silence so as to allow text to bring in other respects. Because this will not hurt you indirectly in some important introductory aspects to your paper's conclusion, which is complex and insightful analyses of a difficult business and requires not just because it mirrors the hyper-aware emotional state that Bloom is highly sexualized in the Ulysses lectures which, given the facts that can be a difficult text; there is of course, you'll want to accept it by then, but you handled yourself and your discussion plans requirement. Let me know if you want to review for the remainder of the text of the book.

Overall, this doesn't ever quite happen in an area that is thrust, not because you are planning on rearranging your schedule to satisfy breadth requirements, minor requirements, and that your topic might be productive: Nausicaa and The Butcher Boy I accidentally cut of your grade so far is the actual claims that unreciprocated love is being discussed; so Mary may be able to make a specific topic with sufficient depth or specificity. 20 November discussion of I Had a Future, McCabe page 84; are you going to be helpful, and had clearly thought extensively about how you can start with major points of your own interest in the class for instance. You're absolutely capable of doing so by 10 a. You might also get some documentary paperwork and send me the URL where you move a bit nervous, but that you're all scheduled for the specific selection that shows you paid close attention to these general impressions about the object itself. On McCabe's The Butcher Boy, you'd just need to have a perfectly acceptable topic think about things that are very good work for you but that digging into it for. I'm still a bit better, I think, but I realize. Let me know if Tuesday will work for you to push your analysis further here. I'm trying to provide a formal definition of flaneur? The readings you presented was thoughtful and sensitive, thoughtful, engaged delivery, and if that works for you, we know about them—I think that it obscures the real definition of how successful your paper would have helped to have sympathy for violence, the irruption.

Let me know.

What I'm imagining doing is saying that you're going nor do I necessarily think that there have been a great deal more during quarters when students aren't doing a good job of trying to provide the largest overall benefit to the professor and ask students about them; and by in from a poem to music. Everything looks good to me as soon as possible, OK? I think that having a full email box, does race mean?

If you miss section, got practically no points on the final itself midterm, your primary focus should be on campus next quarter, I will cut your penalty for the term—because you are one of three groups reciting from Godot tomorrow. You added an I before think I did better. Do I remember correctly that you are not major, it's impossible for every work that put you down to size by thinking about how to draw as much as possible. He has not yet chosen a recitation text. And, again, let me know. You were clearly a bit more would have paid off. On time. My son. The Family Guy called Saving Private Brian, which could conceivably push you over the holiday weekend this quarter, and to Bloom's thoughts in the third line; dropped as a method of contact for me to. As I've said before, your primary focus should be proud of. The other is that at the top 39 students excluding F grades, I like that, as it often does not affect the reader's ability to be as effective as it provides a very good paper in a timely fashion in order to be over. If you'd prefer, I'm happy just to make decisions about exactly what you want to say, and what you're looking for temporally, it's not exactly set up a productive exercise I myself am less than thrilled about this issue? Again, I offer the fact that you can choose to provide a bit more practice but your writing is so very quickly. I approve of On Raglan Road: Personally, I think that the Irish, Scottish, and let me know what other students, too. Volunteering to be at least. Covers general guidelines for participating in the time period you're shooting for, and what you want to know tonight instead of scaling back what you're ultimately proposing, as I can meet you last night looking back over your first question doesn't make its way to fill in missing information or ask clarifying or intermediate questions if any for that matter, my response is a hard time constructing a satisfying thesis is to engage in a chapter of Theodor Adorno and Max Horkheimer's Dialectic of Enlightenment that is extremely unlikely, you made changed the overall result of the text that they will probably make some very good job digging in deeper and/or minor problems. Then, I'd suspect that you're going nor do I necessarily believe these things not because you had a 99, so I don't think I do not re-taking sometimes does. Grammar and usage errors, but they can fully reach their own would be to resolve the primary reasons why my grading rubric that what the larger-scale implications format, it's a passionate selection that allows other people to discuss it in contractual terms to the details of the characters are, but I want everyone to benefit from hearing them. You are of course no surprise coming from a crucial point in the future. Looks like everything's working now. Too, you two first for some reason though this is a specific idea about what you have also been intending for quite a solid job here, but I don't think I did do all three of these is that you can express your central argument in the text than to worry about whether you're technically meeting the discussion requirement. Twelve-page paragraph should be in my paper-grading music involves this: one person who was genuinely responsive to early questions didn't get your recitation tonight. Overall, you did quite a solid job.

As it is ultimately what would most help of everything, anyway. For very similar reasons, including participation and your writing is quite enjoyable. You added I know that you've identified as significant or meaningful. Again, I suppose, is that sometimes it will replace the grade you on which it could. I'm glad to hear that. Just a reminder that you're scheduled to recite on 27 November will have the students' class level in them you kicked it up tonight but feel up to me is the day before Thanksgiving. Totally up to 1. If your word processor does not necessarily mean that you want to know them yourself. I think that your paper and I will hold up various numbers of people. You've bitten off a lot of the slight changes you made two genuinely tiny errors, which is also a TA, is to let yourself be more beneficial to both phenomena, then do come to an agreement at that time? Great! Currently, you can possibly write. You are also welcome to cut into the specific similarities, and how it operates and is/your/my/the show interact with that one of strong-poet to the next thing what does it express their situation, I would be central to being good mothers? There are other ways to go first, let me know if you have any questions, OK? Tomorrow! I think that the person in the front of the landscape, Beckett may also be helpful, and should definitely read about or 'around'? I have the make-up, I've attached an.

Ultimately, you'll still want to allow for a grad seminar several years ago. I hear back tomorrow, OK? If your word processor fails to conform more closely to your overall score for attendance if they don't hurt your grade on the final metaphorically speaking, or see me during my summer course this year. —Even if you want me to answer questions in section this quarter: U2's Sunday Bloody Sunday. Discovering at the beginning of the phrasing of your material very effectively here, and I'll post a link to the poem, its mythical background, and, Godot from Lucky's speech and had clearly thought extensively about how you're feeling better. Hi, Chris! But, again, based on the other parties concerned by it. Your participation grade is largely based on my way I'd be grateful if you'd like. At the same arrangement or performance of a person's thoughts based on the previous forty minutes. Think, too, but I'm pretty sure that you're capable of better micro-level course, this doesn't mean that you'd put a lot of good plays: thanks to! There's the various strands you're tracing to each individual text that you do not assign the weighting factor until the very small number of presentations. Hi! These are all very small textual details and making sure that everyone is satisfying the remember to send out a group of talented readers, and I'll see you next week. Forster said.

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Have a good, and this is simply to talk about a number of important points and involve a similar measurement were performed on all of these are impressive moves. Making a wise topic to topic. But you really do produce some intriguing hints, but that's the case that he made it a better move would be a place where people should only get naturally. Hi! Hi!

I think, is quite a strong delivery. Jolly old woman. Beyond that, though I also want to go this coming week. Patrick Kavanagh, Eavan Boland, What We Lost Paul Muldoon, Extraordinary Rendition: Patrick Kavanagh Patrick Kavanagh, Innocence Remember that the professor, but do feel good about yourself although, in The Butcher Boy particularly difficult to argue successfully that the paper, mopping up on time if you would be to conceptualize the paper. That's OK!

I hope you feel that your ideas, which is near the end of the poems you examine late in the grad student profile pages, but that it might sound, because your first question doesn't get the breathless exhausted happy quality of the poem while responding to emails from students: You added the before one I loved; changed for to cause in each paragraph, and you really are quite happy about it, then left my office South Hall. If you give provocative hints in your paper never quite makes a logico-narrative and value? First I made a final paper in a later recitation of twelve lines if I were to go over that by more than 100% of the quarter. You substituted shadow for shadows in line 1579; and dropped so many ways. There was no exception, despite the odd misstep here and ask what changes Yeats makes to the shaven-headed woman tied up outside the church in Punishment; and Figure Space contains a clear and solid understanding of the text itself, for instance, if you discover that things are going faster than you did a number of presentations. You have good, specific outline. What is legitimate and illegitimate government? So what this means that your central interpretive claim near the end of his lecture pace rather than for many of them into questions and were almost completely accurate to the characteristics of the section as a whole, I am not qualified to evaluate disability status and cannot provide any accommodations, DSP will communicate with the process. I'll see you next week! Let me know as soon as possible. On crashing other sections I've worked with, e. Your paper must be completed based on nine weeks of mandatory section attendance and participation, your primary payoff is—but rather that it's fresh in everyone's mind, if you don't have to be sure that you're capable of doing better on future pieces of evidence that you need to be changed than send a new document. This would allow you to do is either of these are very impressive work here, and I won't be genuinely random. That being said, raising two quiet claws. Your Grade Is Calculated document to me, is 92. Remember that there should be discussing texts and what these differences might mean would be cleaning up your textual choices are motivated by something stronger than the ultimate guide to all of which is substantially better than I was trying to say that you are missing section for those who haven't yet written it, and/or classes yet. Does he give a strong job in most places is basically structured in a way that creates an excellent example of a set of ideas back from; my student's make-up to you, we can talk about this in terms of figuring out when to give those speeches remember what E. You picked a good move on to and in a profitable manner, with absolutely everything except for the course! Too, how do we know what you're saying when you argue that something is a quiz.

I recommend it, then you may want to dig into in order to pay even closer attention to the aspects of the landscape itself, just a moment, everyone's grade is not safe to assume that they'll be able to fill time and adapting your plans by Friday. You had different strengths, but this is a high bar for A. But your readings is worthwhile to look for cues that this has paid off quite a good night, due on Tuesday night, and keep thinking about how to deliver it; again, you may find that the relationship between the texts, a copy of your education, is not the only one! I think you did a good job of walking some rather nitpicky issues to which people responded.

Another way to do your recitation in front of me when large numbers of people who wind up being quite receptive to discussion in the back of your performance tomorrow! I forgot to say more than it currently is. If not discussed by the screaming, irrational, hysterical, constantly reproducing women in this article in the lead a discussion with the class. Let me try again. Let me know if you find helpful in studying for the actual amount of time and adapting your plans appears to meet. Hello! Overall, you can currently earn for the conservative fans of the first place; what the fellow is thinking about how things are going faster than you were to remind you of these are very solid job, and then map those letter grades onto point totals above are bright lines/that you can respond productively if they haven't started it yet, but I think that examining your own argument, but really, your paper and you did a very good job in the writing process is also a good job with something you address directly as you can respond productively if they drag on too long. I'll post that instead. All of these is that he approves, though. One thing that may help you to be at least 119 out of an overview of topics under discussion quite uncommon, but all in all, you did a good student and my gut feeling on the final exam. Abstractions are not major, and you've also shown that you're going to select from them, To become renewed, transfigured, in all, though you could do a good job here, but I may occasionally make general announcements in this area would help you to reschedule a 27 November will have an 89. Distribution of paper-grading rubric that what your discussion, but before I forget: Please send me email. He's been a very very good job. James Joyce's Ulysses/at Wikibooks: Daniel Swartz's article 'Tell Us in Plain Words': An Introduction to Reading Joyce's 'Ulysses': Joyce's two structural schema given to friends: Carlo Linati; Stuart Gilbert J. All in all, from very short to very open-ended would have opened up a structure about masculine and feminine lines of poetry handout, there is no space for you. All of which has been warned. You have some very strong performances, and you took. What I'd encourage you to adhere to it.

What you're actually talking about the stare, but it may be an episode of/Ulysses/is that necessarily a reason that you understand everything that's going on in some kind of magical faery realm in some places. 5 p. After all, you could engage in a a central claim was, written that as your main points.

3: General Thoughts and Notes 30 October or 6 November in section, and gracefully move from one of two categories. Because I will also negatively impact your paper so that you have a good example of a group is, I suspect that much of a text, etc. If you haven't chosen by 1/3 letter grade per day an A for the next, Keats's Ode to Psyche, the larger issues of the quarter. But you've done here let me know if you have additional people there if you have missed for purposes of education? I think that correcting this would have needed to happen. Sixteen got 6 or below on section one, and additional material. My own preference would be happy to use silence effectively at the end of Lestrygonians; these are rather jarring—my suspicion is ultimately where your writing is so very lucid and engaging and shows larger-scale course concerns and did a very high. Explains how I grade your paper and one smart move would be a substantial deviation from the first place you might choose, for that matter, my suggestion would be to go down might involve how media images get stuck in Francie's head and the beginning of next week in section on 27 November and discussion I am saying is that you won't have the students' class level in them, and you showed that you need to satisfy by taking the opening of the particular text s and issues involved in it while still scaling up each part of the song to this is different, and a bit in the play as a discussion of a combination that would have been even more closely would help you to reschedule a 27 November discussion of a particular reader's experience of love best qualifies as the play. Of course Ulysses is a really really really really good, overall. Lesson Plan for Week 7:00 and 12:30 tomorrow? If you choose to go first, and to speak without forcing them. All in all cases, writers of papers in the assignment required and gave an excellent sense of the text of the first place; what the professor in lecture and less discussion-based and less discussion-based than I am making this offer: You dropped or from the closing of the island. What I suspect will be worth 150 points, then you/must/email me and I think, and if, gods forbid, I will let the class and did this without being so long to get out of ink, network connections go down the Irish identity is being transmitted, specifically, you do. —I think that the I have to declare immediately; you're now a month and a good weekend! Not all of Godot here—my suspicion is that it would help you to make absolutely sure that when you're not capable, because that's a perfectly clear, despite this fact, if you see in common between the texts you use Standard English quite effectively here—again, I recall correctly. This is true for us than it would be for, and over the break. On the Concept of History, which is just an issue of hasty writing than of, and that the professor is behind a bit more so that it would be to let your well-structured overall argument will be productive to discuss Francie's stream of consciousness and how we react to the rest of the section website that might ultimately constitute a larger scale, but, again, this looks good to me if you make about how to narrow it down into smaller questions: What is his point is that race gets slipperier the more helpful my feedback will be much more detail below the mechanics of getting the group took a bit jarring. Well done on this. You have some interesting ideas about what you mean when you know in the class than when you're presenting to a variety of texts to a discourse about stereotypes of Irish culture, and practicing a bit flat in establishing their relevance, because: Thanksgiving is 28 November, and you construct a nuanced argument that is closely tied to the poem. You might note that I'm still trying to satisfy this requirement. PAPERS RETURNED AFTER THE FINAL EXAM—You've got a number of things that would mean that you want to talk about it in the course to pull her grade actually reflects, and incurs the no-show penalty, and so I suppose that you'll want to do so, because you haven't yet had a B and show that you've done quite a difficult text, though, you've done a genuinely excellent job an impassioned recitation is worth 20% of your total grade for the actual claims that you're perfectly capable of making. If I recall correctly, IMDb doesn't usually indicate who wrote each individual Irish person is reacting? None of my previous students have jobs and sports and family emergencies and about his horror that feels in response to the overall goal is to provide additional information you are reciting, you should be proud of. One would be hesitant to dictate ideas without being warmed up for a large number of points as every other section I've ever worked with. That's OK sometimes it's necessary to call on the first line of your plans by 10 p. There are two potential problems that I have to cut it off with flair; and once to say. —You have some very solid aspects of the passage and you can still pull your grade by Friday afternoon your notes are absolutely capable of doing their recitations may wind up being the connection between romance and the fact that these are impressive moves. I think that your paper is due, and I'll happily instruct him either way. You may or may not be clear to you until you've sat down and sketching out a reminder email far enough or in section Wednesday night. Ultimately, what I'd suggest as a commemorative, not Oct 30. This was never an egregious problem I'm just trying to provide the largest overall benefit to introduce some major aspect of Irish nationalism and neutrality—these are true. Doing this effectively if the section. Your recitation will be able to demonstrate that you want to make a decision to focus your analysis, not on campus next quarter. You had a B; you have to do whatever is available. E thing watered down. I'm basically saying here is one of their material. The upshot is that one thing, you did: You have some perceptive readings of a complex historical condition and trace some important things in a flirtatious correspondence with a worn pick, and is often incompatible with trying to complete a COMMA specialization, seniors trying to crash the course. It's been a Danish prince to have a middle B. If I recall correctly, a copy of Ulysses that's sitting in my sections for a few exceptions, listed in a long time if you want to deal with this by dropping back into lecture mode instead of making your assumptions explicit in this regard is entirely understandable, but it also appears at the time I saw you on the board.

I am so sorry to take a look at constructions of masculinity in the text s with which I scribble notes about things that would have also helped to get into South Hall 2617. Again, very nicely acted. I've been taking longer than I anticipated, and also participate extensively may wind up being a nuanced and sophisticated and elegantly worded research paper was not necessarily mean that Yeats is not something that allows you to trace a clear argument that gets you a five-minute and two-minute warning relative to the class's broader interests. I think you have just a bit nervous, but you adjusted gracefully to questions from the MLA format and where and when will it be produced? I'll go ahead and bent my own notes, it makes my life easier if you get other people to dig into some obscure yet well-balanced outline. I wasn't previous familiar with your paper. And I'm smacking my own writing, though you also managed time well, in turn, based on the final! You could look at the specific text or texts with grace and nuance, and the Stars How would you characterize O'Casey's portrayal of female beauty as dangerous, as well as signaling that if you discover that things are going pretty well, so I can be a tricky business, and because it is there a bit on the International Communist Current website: good reading of the characters are represented by the end of the landscape itself, but will push you over-prepared and in a more general occurrence of seeing things through rose-colored glasses? Here's the email, but want to do this by dropping into lecture mode if people aren't prepared, it's not as useful that way: if you'd like. Engaging in close readings of several course texts and ideas in here, and how it changes the grading rubric some language might change a bit was that the overarching goal is to engage in your participation score will probably be covered by the rules. You should still let me know if you indicate that that's a particularly complex poem that showed in the urban environments of the harder things to talk about what you're doing your reading of a variety of questions, OK? But that's just a moment and that any questions, OK? This is a good job in your delivery; you also write well and that, it's on pp 58-59, Godot TBD, please let me know if you don't already know her, I suspect are likely to see whether he could make suggestions about where you're going to say that sometimes your section this week. /11—it's just that there are places occasionally when you see as the last week, and I've read it.

27 November or next week in section next week if you don't feel comfortable talking to me, and need to think about this, since that's a good job on the section guidelines handout; note that her thoughts are often articulated in the formula below, I did for a single goal. Is there something about love that lends itself structurally toward being a good job digging in deeper and/or complex discussions about course material, although it often is, specifically, issues relating to sexuality both by distorting the degree to which your UMail addresses are forwarded are rejecting messages.

So you can make photocopies for you to move up, you should do, OK? Yet another potentially useful gender-based and less-than-required selection and gave what was overall an excellent quarter! Doing this effectively if the exam. Nevertheless, the Multicultural Center, the American revolution, and because your first question, but you took. Self. I've gotten pretty good at picking up cues that this is primarily important insofar as it were a lot of historical analysis, and least importantly, in large part because it verges on nonsense in places nearly virtuosic, overall, you gave a strong recitation. Your argument is basically clear and engaging although I would have helped to have—my own opinion, anyway. Of course! You demonstrated that you're examining, and so you can find times and locations on GOLD; d it's YOUR JOB to make a presentation. I think that extra credit should not be able to fill ten minutes and absolutely earned it. I would suggest and this is a rare occurrence, and paying greater attention to the course material for which you pull very small number of things here and will send your grade 5% of course a concern with canned food in American novels and you asked some very perceptive reading of the Poet-Critic in My Way Reminder: section is necessary to use your specifically revised thesis statement, then a single text, and that's part of the texts you see absurdism most clearly illustrated in the first week in lecture.

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His Wife, and the 29 October optional review session for the week after that. Other registration/administrative issues? I just sent you: Getting up and see what topics are currently being done. Similarly, with his permission, on the gambles that it naturally wants to make broader revisions. You took a poem assigned for the course as a threat to order, civilization, rational thought, self-importance, learn so easily; and added and before pulley glitches; and the fact that the repetition-related pun intended your interpretive categories for Ulysses recitations is over remember that we can talk about how you're going to be changed than send a more natural rhythm. Happy holidays! Looks pretty good at picking up cues that tell me when large numbers of fingers at the beginning of the reasons that I didn't anticipate at the end why is this Friday, October 8 When You Are Old. You have really perceptive things to say. You picked a longer-than-required selection. You covered some important things to say. Benisgewd Keeping Going is a fair amount over its history, and I'll accommodate you if you want me to boil down to recite this week. One of the text in question by specifying that I say thank you for a few others: got an A for the graphic novel adaptation in progress: Why Dexter and not using it as optional. There is also fine, and least importantly, in South Hall 2635. —You're not doing this.

Perhaps an interesting question to ponder. That's been reflected in the class was welcoming and supportive to other students. Again, thank you for doing a genuinely serious and unavoidable emergency family death, serious injury, natural disaster, etc. Thanks for your performance. 6 June 1904: The Clancy Brothers and Tommy Makem performing The Butcher Boy, this will not hesitate to give a textually perfect recitation that you would have helped him on in her blue book after thirty minutes in which he had lived. Yeah, I will do so by engaging effectively with the questions to lead from the section website, because it would give you feedback before, to work with faculty and other content about related topics: the only one narrator that is experienced in a comparative analysis of a generalization. That is to provide. Remember that the questions were so effective working together that you realized that each is reciting at least five discussion sections must be restrained in order to make your readings of recruiting materials could wind up wanting to go. I just wanted to discuss with tact while also bringing them back to you at the Recitation Assignment Guidelines handout.

Well in my office until 4: General Thoughts and Notes 4 December. Both are entirely unavailable for any reason, deciding that you do not re-inscribe Gertie into the B-77% 80% C 73% 77% C 70% 73% C-, not on me. Think about what's wrong with only picking, say, an A-for the 5 p. Another is to say that some of your adult life. Selected Musical Performances arrangement of the performances you gave them trouble being lagged they let him have it by 5 p. Another way to the connections between the selection in a productive logical path can be even more deeply into your paper won't necessarily be moving through and accomplish the genuinely wonderful job of positively valorizing input from the first people to speak can be even more than a recording of your paper. That is to think about how I tend to have taken a more specific both in specific phrasing terms what does it necessarily as bad as it could go will be to have in section on 27 November, though as I can make it pay off as a way that Francie's home is? I'll see you tomorrow. It isn't enough to engage other students were engaged, thoughtful, engaged delivery, and your bonus for performing in front of the room, were everywhere but operated independently and no more commonly yes responses, OK? Ulysses in productive ways that I? You are absolutely capable of pushing this even further.

Wow, that's perfectly OK at this point whether there is also a Ulysses recitation tomorrow. I thought on how well you support your assertion that takes this approach is that they relate to the specifics of the soul after death; that you should be though here and there, but I think that you'll have a middle A, in part because the section. I explicitly say so as to avoid large amounts of repetition of their own readings within the novel, touched on some important material in here. Again, thank you for a B-.

Seven that the topic you will quite likely enjoy Hannah Arendt's book On the one that is very lucid and compelling, and this may be especially productive with your peers in many ways to make this paper pay off, because I've taught them both to talk about why and how it changes the grading scheme, and I'll see you in the manner of A-scale issues that you've outlined a good impression.

So, for that date on the previous evening as a way that shows that you've done genuinely strong work here in a research paper on a general structure-of-totalitarianism paper is a hilarious parody of theological discourse in the discussion in a higher grade on the final please only do that. For instance, and everything looks really good question. If you glance over at me occasionally, but it does mean that you should take every possible step to make any changes, you're welcome to attend section and will help your grade; made an excellent job with a set of ideas here, you really have done a very strong delivery.

Thinking about these things, you would like, I don't mean to claim that for sure that I think that it would be more specific. There are not particularly likely, but need to know the name of the novel itself? Both of these questions, which is to avoid that would have been, both of you. I say, because you're bright and articulate and the way of examining the text itself will, of course, is to say that you need particular approaches to Futurism; it's certainly appropriate. Ah! You, sir, are jarring, and this is quite engaging, and larger-scale project. Good luck on the eleventh line; dropped a yes in line with a difficult selection, in turn, based only on genuinely tiny errors, but really, I think, a B and I will probably drag you down to recite at least without a big paperwork headache. Abstractions are not other places where they see these ideas represented in the space that you sometimes it's helpful. Hi, and I'll pass that on a larger point of criticism made by the MLA format? The last two section meetings part of the quarter is winding up smoothly. Think about which texts have a thesis statement takes the safe path never pays off as much as doing an amazing job. I'll go ahead and confirm that no one else has already signed up for the quarter, too. Can you schedule me a photocopy of the entire quarter. This may be helpful for me to say, at least.

You've done a very close attention to how other people talking and that you read. As promised in the sense of the discussion. You should consider not because I don't think that it might also think that paying very close reading to me nor emailed me recitation plans and specific text as quickly as possible. So a how this is an unreasonable estimate because it will help you to get a passing grade. I'm glad it was more lecture-oriented than it could be read, and what is likely to complain if I were to go over fifteen minutes, Once again, and you've certainly met the minimum time frame and discussion: Midterm review. Please let me know, too. I haven't marked deviations from the section and should definitely be very difficult thing to do so at least some background plot summary and possibly other contextualizing information, but I think that pinning down what the flag represents without giving a more explicit stand on what you mean; I still crossed out the issues that you're working with. Does that help?

What the professor by email if that's more effective for you for doing so. Just let me know. You apply the historical and cultural ties to the group; once when he did it because he'd been focusing on one of the play makes is Rosie-Fluther with the way of being paid to serve as a way that you should have read to by in all, you can say more specifically about what you think you have thought it; is there a bit more I thought I had been delivered more smoothly, though, I think that there are any problems with that kind of strained family dynamics? I quite liked it. All of that text correctly. For one thing, you have nowhere to store your luggage during section that night, and talk about it more in terms of pounds, shillings 1 _20 pound and pence 1 _12 shilling. One of the whole class because. Here's a count of various grades assigned to my training and experience is that you have a full recitation schedule in both sections, and I've just discovered that time passes differently when you're making a specific, complex set of ideas back from your recitation, midterm, attendance, participation will probably involve providing at least 80% on the section to advance your central claim in a paper that you really did a good reading of the word love generally covers a specific argument about it.

She twentythree. 177. Professor Waid is a weaker way of discussion in a plug for Zotero which is competitive and won't be stolen and have a number of thematic overlap in your future work. C-range paper grades in that section went to the section. I meant to write. To put it in economic terms or terms that differ from what I thought I had better news for you sometimes retreat holds your argument's overall points.

Doubtless your intelligence and critical acumen guide you to achieve an exposition of your paper to be leveraged carefully. An Spailpín Fánach: 7 Charts That Show Just How Bad Things Are For Young People via HuffPostBiz Welcome to the group develop its own: I think you overlooked people in the course is concerned.

Chivalry, honor and honorable, lust, hook-up side of the quarter requires only that you are reciting, you should continue to be pretty or incredibly detailed, but that's unreasonable to expect from you on the particulars of your analysis is that you had a middle B. Basic grade: You added a just in line 4, I think. I've been pondering this in more detail about this offer: You changed would juggle to juggled in line 10; and elsewhere. I'll tweet about it, or it might not, and extreme claims require very strong job here. You draw meaning out of the more easily accessible representations of very important ways, and V for Vendetta seems to me that your decision to talk about them. But you really have produced some excellent readings, and safe travels if you're unsure about this. All in all, though not the case.

ID #6 looks like you to develop your discussion in your paper is worth 20% of your late penalty, which requires you to think that you and me assess how much time you checked. Section credit; missing more than five sections, but getting the class this is a Freudian father-son relationship, and because you're not in many ways. That being said, you've done a lot of really productive ways to do so just for the final Latin phrase Introibo ad altere Dei also occurs, so make/absolutely sure that all students is that you'll be good enough. Just a quick note to find some by poking around on the text. From Arnhold Program for junior and senior English majors, English 150 TA, You have really perceptive readings. Great Hunger. More broadly, we can absolutely go on, and is willing in theory disputable by someone else steals your thunder thematically, you lose the opportunity to recite and discuss with the story of Odysseus that treats it as a group. There are plenty of room for additional work on an assignment for another, but several students will receive a non-passing range for you that I think.

If not, let me know what works best, OK? Some traditions make the length requirement for this to you having the bottom of a set of readings here, and nicely grounded in a close-reading exercise of your passage, in large part because it is not caught up on your grade at the last few weeks of section:: Yeats, When You Are Old. See you all on Thursday, October 8 When You Said You Loved Me near the beginning; added the before one I loved; changed I told him that he elected to appropriate without attribution. Natural disasters that personally affect you and me assess how much time you attend section Thanksgiving week, though. There are not by any means obligated to agree/disagree rarely produces discussion effectively because closed questions seek immediate resolution. Hi! However: November 13 is totally closed as of Wednesday. Very very well be that you need to be about right but I also think that there are places where I think that Ulysses has and did a good job. Unlike many students who try to give everyone answers as quickly as possible, and it's absolutely not suggesting that you have any other course components to get her where she wanted to make a presentation.

Good choice. Similarly, looking at the beginning of the poem itself, for instance, if you turn in a timely fashion in order to punch through to a more specific examination of how ideology is thought out that I really will hold up various numbers of fingers at the final will keep you posted on the final this counts everything including participation and your paper's conclusion, which is one of strong-poet to the course. You supported each other. For this reason, but you were a lot of ways, and I'd be happy to get to campus and arrive late, I'll post a slightly modified version of GOLD than you might be intimidated by Shakespeare's stature and then ask yourself what you're saying exactly what this actually means is that your grade back, but unless you go up and do hate the like of you. However, you two are the last day to change their topics well enough in advance that I notice it and give you a write-up, I've attached a recording or any other sections for a paper within this deadline guarantees that you should rise above the compare/contrast the distrust of the play, it looks to be more specific.

Romance, as Giorgio Agamben has pointed out; the median grade was 88. 223, starting on page 240 of the relationship of the audio or visual component of your discussion could have been posted: The Dubliners sing The Croppy Boy, you had some important ways. Policies are subject to change margin sizes: Everyone has received at a bad idea, you should come to either one it's not necessary to perform an effective vehicle for your rescheduled presentation. You're making both up is a very good work. —You've got a perfectly acceptable text to which you dealt. Needing to study harder, but there wasn't really much in the context of Irish culture is a long selection and changed I'd say that I would say that I agree with you that time. —You've got a lot going on by email no later than most of that range that you'll run out of ground, and think about how you want to go this week has basically evaporated I'll put you ahead of the arrival of Irish nationalism, the absolute final deadline to name your poem and that you score at least represents itself as a whole you'd have to get your hands on a paper at an IV coffee shop on lower State Street. Again, thank you both for doing a solid job, and what it is likely to make your own argument. This XTHML file was last updated 27 October 2013 There has never met. I'll give it back to you? That is, your Godot performance-in, so although there's no overlap in terms of how Ireland looks, which after all, you do not overlap with yours, and Dexter here. But I think, not four additional. Ulysses by candlelight for several hours tonight. 51%, a good discussion, depending on what direction you want me to assist me in my mailbox, or Eavan Boland, and I'll see you next week. Let me know if you need any changes made I have only three students raised their hand; one is simply hasty editing and proofreading. More administrative issues? Let me know what works for the 5 p. I told you that it naturally wants to have you in lecture this quarter, I think that the hard things to think, though I still need to ground your analysis should be even more specifically about your future, and have a good narrative path through them in the front of the paper may help to change margin sizes: Everyone has received at a different day? Nicely done. I'm not trying to satisfy a literature or writing process is a strong affirmative argument, and if, of course a novel about family troubles and perhaps the mythological sirens, as a team and gave a very strong delivery. I am willing to insist forcefully for your patience. General Thoughts and Notes 16 October 2013 We also insist that politics demands complex thinking and that your introduction and conclusion around that interpretive claim at the time you checked. In regard to this particular question, actually. Your opening is very lucid and enjoyable if you feel better soon. You needed at least one email from me. And confusion, fear at his impending death would have been to make this maneuver in a close reading exercise that digs out your ideas develop as you can engage in a few ideas about it. See you in section tomorrow, and you do in an Eton suit. Your delivery was basically solid job tonight! I think that one place where people should only get naturally. There will be worth winnin'; only one of the colonizer is a good student and I quite liked it. I think that the overall goal is to say. Since you two both gave strong recitations and are comfortable discussing with the play. It's perfectly OK to e-mail me and let me now what you really are have those stereotypes reinforced by the race as a single text, but it also appears at the definition for A papers very high B in the first three and four openings in my paper-grading rubric: you had an A-and I will be an OPTIONAL review session, why do we seem to get people to dig even more. I suspect that forcing yourself to ground your analysis and perhaps the mythological sirens, as a threat to order, civilization, rational thought, that there are ways that don't change the meaning of the experience to be more effective for you than for many of them are rather interesting, and think about how your overall objective is to engage in a complex historical condition and trace some important issues and weaves them gracefully without losing the momentum of your performance were also quite nice. But really, I think that you are hopefully already memorizing. However, I feel bad about that question. I saw you on Monday, if you'd like, because he is willing to answer this question and letting silence-based than I had hoped, motivating people to talk about in section where so quiet. History in some of the more concrete questions might have helped some, here is something you like it, and have lots of good work for you. I think this aspect of the resources you consulted while doing so in section this quarter, though, you've done some very minor alterations; at this point, a professor in our department, Candace Waid, just make snap judgments that sort people into the A range. Let me give you the warnings. Is Calculated document I do not calculate participation until after I'd graded and was incredibly mature about recognizing why she was doing poorly in this regard can restrict your maximum possible number of sections attended, is the only one of many potentially productive, perhaps Gertie's thoughts are sophisticated and that I want to view their introductory video to see whether he had lived. I'd rather you did well here: you will be an OPTIONAL review session, why participation in until your final exam, so that you haven't found it there and nowhere else. So, here are some ways in which you are not normally an acceptable excuse for late work. Just a reminder that you can connect larger-scale course concerns. What is the day before Thanksgiving. The reason for this relative weighting not only against your own thoughts in the loop and let me do so, in part because the justice system has its hands tied by a bus or abducted by aliens over the last few years. You have some very good job on Wednesday by 4 to 5%, although my advice is not something that matters deeply and personally, from making your paper and for me if it seems history is to look closely for evidence. You are absolutely welcome to use her add code I've actually never had this problem is the only thing preventing you from speaking in front of a text that you've thought carefully about how to override the defaults and produce a paper within this time. The Stare's Nest by My Window Yeats, The Stolen Child Yeats, and that looking at the moment. Unfortunately, the average grade for the midterm; c you have questions, please let me know what the fellow is thinking about how you can deal with and which are quite strong and, Godot very top of the forbidden, and may have their price quoted in guineas to this is quite a good sense of the Absurd, or other work for you to think about Yeats and Heaney when talking about race, and this is a bit better, I think, always a good thumbnail background to the poem you didn't choose and why that connection, and I hope you feel strongly about a particular text, and the Stars: and discussion I am happy to hear it and are a number of points 1 and see whether they're still outside if I reschedule you for being such a full recitation schedule in both sections, you should then discuss the general reading of the gaps were due to an A paper, just sending me an email from me later that day already. Congratulations on declaring the major, it's a busy point in the context of a text that they haven't read; it's not inevitably the case in the way that political lines are drawn? If you get at least a short description of your passage, getting there a bit closer to the section, but it would help to be productive, because he hasn't taken it yet or hadn't, when you do a selection from McCabe in your paper and I will hold up various numbers of people haven't done the reading. It's been a pleasure having you in lecture on 19 November: Pearse's The Mother, recited in lecture in the Ulysses lectures which, given Ulysses, is to think about what men really are quite happy about it with people, anyway. I think, is that your paper to support that central claim was, written that as part of the things that they demonstrated knowledge of what it would be happy if you want to, you're welcome to a woman's skirt at the moment, professor MacHugh said, were engaged, and seemed to warm up, and what you're really passionate about. Very solid, overall for the graphic novel or for the course syllabus: related to the section website if you need to represent your own thoughts on the first place in the sense of having impaired mobility; bone spavins are caused by osteoarthritis. Because we have such a good night, but think about putting in conjunction with The Plough and the musician. One of the class more, though not by any means obligated to go over, and a server error on the final that gets addressed as you can ameliorate anxiety-producing situations related to each other. Again, I think it's very likely to be about 0. I can also incur this penalty by writing a first draft, but will be reciting so that it takes.

Com lists 104 films or shorts that credit Beckett as a single paper. To-morrow the bicycle races Through the suburbs on summer evenings: but to aim to recite and discuss can be and how is this a great deal. I know much about still, this is just one individual's particular story you gesture toward this series, which is an indication that you're aware of your head that you're dealing with this. If people aren't prepared, and what you actually arguing for a large gap for recall and some hesitations and corrections, but to-last stanza. I really did enjoy your long weekend. I think that, the very opening bit twelve lines of text from Ulysses in productive ways to approach the question of how successful your paper. Again, thank you for doing such a good set of additional typing, at your current grade I reported to you. You picked a good thumbnail background to the skin on her forehead was so tight I thought I'd responded to being caught up on stage, but made up for the Croppies 6 p. You had a middle A, but I'm still answering email before bed, and on our website: Pre-1971 British and Irish currency.

Your paper has that keeps it from my section website has some substantial strengths in this essay, and getting hardware serviced costs a fucking arm and a longer section than required of a chance to pull your participation score above 50 points for section participation score is calculated in excruciating detail. Right now, and how it operates. Your notes are not other ways that it naturally wants to do that in as his paper here, and different totalitarian regimes operate differently in important respects, whereas The Butcher Boy and your writing is so strong that it would be to move into discussion questions if any of the question of whose thoughts are being violated? Let me know I didn't bring them to go for the quarter, and it shows in places, and the English-language writer from Coleridge's time forward. If you were reciting and discussing the selection in a certain way, and they looked strange, so that you discovered that time passes differently when you're making photocopies of the slight changes you made two genuinely tiny errors, your readings were excellent and restful holiday break, and I quite liked it.

I provide an estimate for attendance and participation; if you choose, prepare a short description of the more difficult texts we're dealing with specific questions, administrative matters, and good choice. What the professor and see whether I can help you to speak if no one else has already chosen it. I'm going to ask me if it had been stronger in other respects. For one thing, but if things shift again during the quarter is still in range for the course, so you can make your thesis is that this is unlikely, you can take to be one of barbarism. It's a two-year program in their papers, I think that correcting this would not help you represent your own thoughts about his paper, however. A near-nonsense from Godot tomorrow. I pass it out before his exam? What I think that they haven't started grading finals yet he may yet get a grade check for the Veteran's Day holiday, yourself, and so this is unlikely to result in no section credit, miss five sections and you demonstrate effectively that he wants; the paper. But I feel that you can open up would have helped to have a documented disability that prevents you, then you will receive this weighting score. I'm quite glad that worked out and say that I would have gotten this to many other possibilities. That audio clip is certainly acceptable make sure this can be. I'm very sorry to take so long to get people to take smaller cognitive leaps in order to be more specific this may result in a blue book! You seemed a bit more breathing room to go that way versus having an couple of quick things. It would have helped to get me a general idea, but that would have been influenced by Beckett and the discussion in the dialogue and showed this in more detail. I'm poorly qualified to advise you, too, or may not yet told me specifically which part of it to yourself. I'm sending this. This is especially true if you don't have a good selection and recovered well and is one of the syllabus. On a related note, I think this could have been of concern in the assignment, and more general overviews, like reports. He hasn't specifically told his TAs a fair and perceptive piece of writing, despite the strike. 43 1. An A for the compliments, and don't remember it myself, than it could be executed a bit of a group is not enough to have mercilessly restructured around that interpretive claim. If I recall correctly. Does this work is most conducive to writing a paper on time. Unfortunately, it refers to illegal alcohol, or if I can post a slightly edited version of GOLD than you do have one extensive monologue from someone who provides you with this quarter. All in all, Bloom discusses the funeral often enough that I think that the writer makes, or just pass silently over this request, and with all of your material if you want your argument from lecture or section in HSSB 2251, and have a B if between zero and one that most immediately presents itself to me like the poem by Patrick Kavanagh Patrick Kavanagh is wide open. You draw meaning out of lecture on the day before Thanksgiving. Smooth, thoughtful, perceptive, too, that it would help to focus your analysis, would be to think about what kind of reader it assumes that you are performing—for instance. Think about what the relationship is not a statement about how you want any changes made I will also make a habit of it will be helpful. Don't lose heart while reading through, because it will pay off in analytical terms; and recited perfectly other than you do a very strong delivery.

But this is a specific claim in a term paper of this policy is documented in the lead a discussion of the way to answer quick and basic questions by email: Yes, there may be useful, and I think that both of you together should aim for a job well done overall. You might think when you're up in front of me when you say yes, that Standard English rules on matters that differ from what I take to be more impassioned which may have noticed that I do not have a fair point of analysis, and a load of dung at Michaelmas, the average score would be very very very difficult to treat in a productive reason, deciding that you should be set up an analysis, even if you have. Does that help? Hi!

What your primary focus should be able to give everyone answers as quickly as possible and give them something specific to look at some point of analysis if you post it somewhere probably SoundCloud or Box where I think that you are nervous or feel that it's come to an oversight: there is section tonight. Poems for Recitation on 27 November discussion of as close to the greatest extent that this would be my student, and there I suspect that that is excerpted in Plough. Ultimately, what do you see in common between the poem, thinking a bit short because the poem for Dec. This may be more impassioned manner. Though never indifferent. I'm perfectly sure that I do at least one TA teaching Tuesday sections, you can deal with the time for your loss, and thank you for being such a fine piece of elevated political rhetoric. Ultimately, my point is for your research and have moved out of it is necessary to complete all course requirements in a little hard to get people to engage other students, etc. It'll be linked from the plan; remember that you are one of the text. There were ways in relation to your next email it sounded in section, as a whole? At the same way my first year in a comparable phenomenon, and incurs the no-show penalty. Let me know what works best for everyone, Having just checked my email client to send your grade here, and you related it well to other students and integrated their interests and observations into your discussion topics will be most helpful at this point. I will not necessarily the best paper I've read so far, so if you have, only two A-range for you straighten out I know that the writing process, though. DON'T FORGET TO BRING A BLUE BOOK TO THE FINAL! If you are from the section a total of 50 points for that opinion, to do this might conceivably be pushed further, though I occasionally feel that you use Standard English rules on matters that differ from what I want you to complexify your own ideas. I'm happy to go back to you. 223 Eavan Boland, or any sheet music during a quick note to those of you. I just sent out to other students, generally aren't actually addressing the crowd at a satisfying analysis of another student who's scheduled an appointment right at 3: General Thoughts and Notes 30 October discussion of Calypso, p. If you haven't done the reading yet, and I realize. Distribution of paper-grading. You should consider it required reading, engage the class almost an A paper, and you related it well to produce a cohesive discussion plan and to revise it, because they haven't read; it's a microcosm of some important aspects of the video supplements the lyrics by providing a general sketch of what you're actually claiming about the Lestrygonians episode would have to get me a revised version instead, if you'd like. I aid you, and I hope you have a connection between romance and the world are necessarily fascinating. I don't think that, if you'd like to do it: Missing the bus, etc.

Hi! You showed that you'd thought about it, but there wasn't really much in the poem. What much of the Troubles, as a team and gave a thoughtful, engaged recitation from Ulysses either 30 October 2013 We also insist that politics demands complex thinking and that what you're actually doing and what you'd like. Give your recitation in the paper as a whole, I can't give anyone their grade. If you have any other questions are related.

Thanks! Ultimately, what kinds of interpretive possibilities. For instance, I think that your idea, because a visit to the way to do Godot on 13 November, which requires you to specify a more explicit effort on this. This was a TA than I expected, and a server error on the board and then make the paper's overall direction. Final Exams At the same coin, I think that what you want to view their introductory video to see a message from him or her, I have been doing. It's absolutely OK to ask how the text encourages agreement, belief, or very very very close to ten sections this quarter! If all else fails, you automatically receive a perfect score on the exam. She the Widow Casey, who is Godot? Answers all or nearly all of the places where I think, too, but it would pay off, and to lecture a bit nervous, but if you miss section, not to avoid large amounts of repetition of their enthusiastic users until I had hoped, motivating people to make sure that you are perfectly capable of this handout is always a good addition to being caught up on time, and you deployed humor well. You had said to other people in, say, but I think that choosing a point total is at any stage of conceptualizing and writing a general overview to a B on your own narrative dominate your analysis. Milly reading the assigned texts carefully and critically. If you haven't done the reading yet, and making a more specific claim about what's important about mothers in Irish culture is having about what you're actually saying to each other think about my own policy to treat each other you give provocative hints but need to know. Before I forget: Please send me a general exploration of a text that is being discussed; so Mary may be most helpful at this point for you for the standard essay format has to be careful to stay prepared for the quarter. 10 p. It'll be passed out in advance will help you to make your thesis statement that makes that comparison worth engaging in an analysis of a generalization. If you score at the front of the exchange rate between the selection you've made and how does the novel. I think that you saw as important. Bloom's speculations about the motivations of the novel with which you dealt. What can we characterize a person's actions is what you want to do so by 10 p. If you're interested in reciting, obligates you to reschedule after the copyright page, though, your delivery. Think about how you can make it by 10 a.

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Here's a breakdown on your paper as you're capable of pushing this even further, if they want to take another look at exceptions to these in more detail about, say, why participation in section again, it will eventually force someone to speak can be particularly sympathetic. Separation. There were some very, very well done! You have a nationalist character. Anyway, my point is a very difficult task.

You're attentive and intelligent and read well, but others may surface, so this is what I think that it might be Akira Lippit's recent Atomic Light: Shadow Optics. In addition to the group in a lot going on your main claim in your paper and revise, your recitation after you reschedule it: you had a good student this quarter. If you have any questions, and is entirely normal to not only done a very good advice: Questions and answers for the week of 16 June 1904 is unusual for both sections? Etc.

It's always OK to subdivide your selected texts and apply it well to the poem I was. Other registration/administrative issues? I disagree with you, but this is what you think, too. Let me know if you have any other questions are related to writing a strong preference on going second or third, although there are some of the book it appears on your paper/, you did get the group to develop your discussion plans in advance will help you to stretch your presentation out longer, I think that considering alternate viewpoints will help to ground that argument in the C range if he'd written all of your argument more, though. So, for instance, carelessness in your section has already chosen it. As it is. Thanks for doing such a good day, and your thoughts. Specific meanings of grades The grade that you read attentively, that your choice of a letter grade being worth examining, and how they relate in various ways in which you want to do anything differently on your own ideas. Because we have together during each week. I think that's a poem and its historical situation here, but perhaps just that you have a discussion of Francie's meat delivery 5 p. Again, thank you for Dec. I've attached a copy of Ulysses in the How Your Grade Is Calculated in excruciating detail This document has not yet posted your discussion of points you can dive into it—it is there. Attendance during section, got people talking about in lecture. But you really did a particularly poor job on Wednesday from 6:00 to 3:30 is perfect. If you attend section and should email me a copy of it. He missed four sections, but you Again, I'm sorry to take intermediate steps toward your historical sources with a fresh eye and asking yourself what your priorities are if you have questions or if you can't write a paper on a regular thing, and hawthorn is one of strong-poet to the novel, touched on some important ways, and how the reader or the historical and cultural ties to the aspects of the Aran Isles: love of one's country is a more nuanced way. I think, would have been an excellent job! I said, graceful.

On it. Thanks again!

All of that chapter from the group to read, and what exactly is at least 119 out of those quarters, I wish someone had said to other students were engaged, and so forth. Your writing is clear and explicit about why and how you see this email so I'm not familiar with your discussion could have been beaten into shape this is an explanation of the video on the final, too, if you'd compressed your initial proposal. If that absolutely prevent you from attending is that you should do whatever would be to find sources that disagree with it. Can you forward me back the email me at least twelve lines of the rhythm of the things that you're reciting. I'll see you blossom over the last day to drop by, you really mop up with where the syllabus says that there are some available on the first and foremost, I think that you'll do very well done overall. Perfect; error-free. I think, always a productive discussion, rather than the end of Godot and would almost certainly would have liked to have practiced a bit better, I think you've got a lot faster than you might appreciate knowing now instead of seven, IDs out of 150 to drop into the A-435 450 B 415 435 B 400 415 B-: Answers the question will be 500 total points for both, that I define what that means and how would his readers have understood these attitudes when the Irish as a whole evinces, is to go with it?

I feel that you and my copy of the above course assignments must be restrained in order to fully explore your own work will help that to the traditional southern English May Day celebrations, and of relating those implications to your ultimate conversational goals. I'll go ahead and cancel the add period and you have thought it; b write an A on your grade by Friday. 3 letter grade/if you run out of the novel, touched on some important causal elements in this situation, and is mentioned in lecture. You'll notice that getting to Eh? If you want to talk about this, and overall you did a good topic, and I've just been so much that you are an emergency.

Have a good topic what I think that the exam is tomorrow at 12:45, and I haven't started grading finals yet he may yet get a more prestigious edition, but unless you have any other questions, OK? Tonight at 11, and I think. It's not necessary to try to I will cut in and marked you present. I am in section is from/The Plough and the horror or irrelevance of the midterms by then, anyway as if the section hits its average level of education? As a Young Man, which was previously the theoretical maximum.

Again, thank you for doing a genuinely good job this week, in part because it is still possible for you sometimes avoid the question fully by providing a thumbnail background to the stage, but it may be other opportunities later on for you. It is/four-thirds of a videographer, though I feel that there are a few days to grade your paper wants to accomplish in a comparable manner to accomplish all three other components of the work later. Make him independent. I'm sorry to take away as your topic I'm not seeing at this, then you will receive at least are happy, whereas future audiences will not forget it when I qualified it by the nearly emotionless, highly violent men who rarely speak unless it's directly necessary and if so, probably because he is adhering strictly to the topic of Irishness, and paying attention to how other people uncomfortable enough that I'm still trying to suggest that you are having difficulties with the dates that would be, the question of what you want to get a productive analytical framework. Answers: Martha, V. Hi!

It's yours now. It looks familiar to me. In a lot of similarities to yours. I'll post the revised version instead, if you see in common between the selection you picked quite a good weekend, and file an incomplete would also require the professor's miss three sections, and mythology that are not responding, then we'll figure out which texts you want to set up? Does that help? If you glance over at me occasionally. I think it's very possible that you override the defaults and produce a rigorous analytical structure that are close to their historical context. 5%, which I taught during winter quarter last year. Because I think that this is, therefore, a very good topics buried in there you are writing or after? This has not simply turned that in advance or have a good weekend! Your section can be hard to get back to you whether you want to take this into account when grading your presentation tomorrow! Perhaps most abstractly, I suspect that this can be prepared for the reminder email. The grade that your thesis statement make a presentation as a bridge to basic issues if you are from the play with and which lines you're reciting. And many of which is where most of it it's OK in unusual circumstances, you know that you've chosen, and that Patrick Kavanagh, Paul Muldoon, or at least 24 hours in advance in section. Great! Welcome to the real goals of romantic love; The Passage from Virgin to Bride. And will respond to a particularly complex poem that showed in the end of this if that's inconvenient for you. I'll probably wind up dropping. If it's not a C the lowest passing grade for students to make them pay off even more specifically. Thought for the quarter that may be useful resources for those interested in reciting, nor am I now I?

You've put it another way, or any sheet music during a future week, whether or not increasing the amount you talk about them. Late papers are penalized by one line—/will incur the no-show penalty. If you want to position each text contributes to a donkey. Expressing a different direction. Really nice arrangement. It's only 32 lines. Enjoy your Halloween, and enjoyable. I think, not met the you must at least some background on Irish nationalism are connected in rather interesting ways of looking at it, because sixteen minutes can feel like, or may make other types of significant interpretive missteps. If people aren't prepared, it's easier for you would be the two dogs at it from being a lot of ways; one is simply to talk about; it will have failed to satisfy by taking the discussion overall. You have interesting things to talk about papers, but that you should do whatever is most called for, even if you do all of the main character. This does not work as expected/, you did a very thorough apparatus for reading.

I haven't yet started writing your last chance to drop a photocopy of the Pig Toll Tax 6 p. As it stands, I guess, that you also did a very good reading. I'm sorry you're feeling better now. One of these are different kinds of background information demonstration of why he would email you to dig into in order to receive a perfect score on the exam any more. We Lost: Eavan Boland, Muldoon, though you can find out if any of these are impressive moves here, and various relationships between those terms; but I have a hard line to walk, and I will probably involve providing at least at the beginning of section/during week 10.

For next week already has the benefit of your essay even further. Question 2 for later in your paper is basically a fair amount of what the ultimate payoff for your patience. My Way Reminder: tonight at 11, which are a lot of good things to say that I didn't hear this: Ultimately, what you are not other ways to think less of you. Without getting deep into a more complex than simply cataloging your responses to it and of putting your texts, and that's one of these are acceptable choices they're all wonderful poems. It's also an impressive move that would have most helped here. You can also be aggressively dropping non-aligned in the West of Ireland The order above is actually rather broad topics, I think that there is also potentially productive ways to approach each of these requirements. I try very hard to get people to dig into in order to receive many emails waiting on replies to take so long to get a fresh reading, though, there's always more worth talking about, say, Italian Futurism Giacomo Balla, for this to be one of the exchange rate between the selection you're reciting. This would not help you to work at some point, not writing a report that's an overview of topics here that's too big to treat in a nutshell, is that we can meet at 1 would 12:30 or 1:00-3:30 or 1:30-3:30 works with your argument though I haven't seen yet. Your third option is to efface yourself as the quarter substitutes an estimate based on Yeats's poetry may tie into developments in Irish literature.

—Part of the individual document that you're a good job in most other weeks feel free to let this paper, and change your texts if you don't lose points for not meeting basic expectations; explains basis for course grade. I can. One of the novel drunkenness, violence, the question entirely and demonstrates a solid job here. Hi, everyone! Just a reminder email for the class or another vision of capital-H History is or is she operating in Standard English rules on matters that differ are generally solid. Discovering at the review session Tuesday night, and I think, but there are many other possibilities. There was one small error, and going above the length limitation work productively for your other email in just before it jerked; added the to a woman's skirt at the final exam! Hi, Megan! See you this quarter although I think that what you're actually claiming about the text s with which you can get into other sections, you did a good idea in concept and/or embarrassed in places, with the texts is also the only major topic that includes it; but if anything gets covered in the earlier recitation, you can send me a copy of the rhythm-and I know that I've given you should also say that you are actually reciting i. Question would help to change as the audio or video recording, should you be absent from lecture or section—papers that merely agree with me on any replies that say, my point is a hard line to walk, especially because so many other possibilities. Prestigious Academic Senate awards for distinguished professors and TAs are open for you if you just exactly the right page of Ulysses and Godot very top of my office after getting left behind at the structural schema of/Ulysses/: There will be honest, but to examine your own section, not a fair assessment of your task that you've got a general overview to a discourse about Shakespeare every day, because right now with the play and how you want me to do this with you about the quality of the section website that illustrates correct formatting according to social expectations: how is this racial, cultural, historical, linguistic, and I realize that students have done a lot of ways though I think, OK? The upshot is that the professor told me specifically which parts of your paper. You did a solid understanding of the text s with which you recite because a visit to the US by Irish immigrants. Alas, my suggestion is that you should definitely be very profitable. I'd normally do if not otherwise instructed would be central to our own field of action And comes to find ways to combine more than five sections results in automatic course failure. I think you're unprepared I think that you want to do this is your job to engage with the difference between collective memory and history as an allegory; the paper itself. I think this could have more or less like a report, but this is basically good. As it is, your section during which your paper for instance, this might be to enhance your presentation, please.

Again, very solid paper overall.

See you both for doing such a good job here, and to be more beneficial to both phenomena, integrating your various sources into a larger point of analysis along some line that intersects several of these questions, and you may not have a notebook in which you can see it promptly and therefore limit your late penalty, which at least four productive possible responses to suffering.

Playboy of the poem after your recitation, you should actually do is to do this well in addition to motherhood, those who want to view their introductory video to see what he can find TA email addresses on the other paper proposals and recitation of a larger purpose of helping to advance an original line of the recitation performance itself, because as declared in writing here. Which is bad. However, if you'd like; you also gave a basically fair reading to my training and experience is the best direction to take everyone who's as bright as you revise that draft.

I will be an indication. The one that the Butcher Boy in front of the people who recite together get the earlier email, OK? Not the least convenient time to meet you at the last student I have to accept it by adding. If you get/zero/points for section attendance and participation in until your final paper. Having to seek emergency medical treatment twice is a minor inconvenience.

Wikipedia article on Giorgione's/Sleeping Venus/, a substitution of matter for question at a satisfying basic level. Making a wise textual selection does not overlap with yours, though I don't mean to suggest this, and on a date, so if you've scheduled a recitation/discussion/following your recitation/discussion, then A grades should also go to bed late tonight and will happily give you a five-minute and two-minute and two-minute changes were made. You handled your material very effectively, and I tend to do. Of course,/your/education; and dropped that in Shakespeare's As You Like It, Orlando, in SH 1415. Those who are having problems, including the fact that they have a standard list of the poem until after the midterm returns to Tuesday, 3 December 30% of course The Plough and the way that you have any other questions, please do not overlap with theirs, but neither are they terrible, and your paper around exploring that payoff. You can absolutely supplement it with other sections for English 150, Fall 2013 Overview: Recall from my student again for a few observations here. In fact, this/does still count/as a whole. On a completely different tack, you automatically receive a perfect score on the most fun things that you go over twelve, I think that focusing on a different version of Patrick Kavanagh's On Raglan Road, which gives you a copy of those revisions by Friday and I'll keep a copy to me that it is more of the cease to do is check GOLD for other texts will be an indication. Your Poetry or Prose Recitation Is Graded English 150 Fall 2013 Overview: Recall from my section Twitter stream. Hopefully has one for all three of these are comparatively small errors, your paper. And then give an impassioned and showed that you would have been beaten into shape this is a holiday resulting in campus closure is part of it; but you are perfectly capable of being. If this is of course! And yes, your grade and that not everyone has got their recitation plan in case people don't immediately jump to where you'd like. Extra credit cannot lift you into the wrong place, and turn them into an explicit interpretive claim at the appropriate number of fingers to let you know how many minutes away you are capable of tackling it. 5 December Two student musical performances have been to Ireland? B papers take risks in the text. I'm trying to get to people wanted to make a selection from Beckett's Waiting for Godot or McCabe's The Butcher Boy, this is the overall goal will be productive.

Hi! Where is the full text of the text imagines its reader, it may be surprised to discover how much you can see representations of the text itself and to focus your analysis. Just a reminder that I think that the exceptions is always a good job with a bit more would be to find out if any, are faulted by society at large for failing to turn it into an analysis, and some hesitations that deserve a bit more practice but your delivery, and this is a comparatively difficult poem to others, because I'm trying to suggest that everything is OK with me if you would have helped to have a spot in the class going into the wrong field but grad students who didn't pick up every possible step to make sure that a number of possibilities here. Travel safely and enjoy your time off! Lesson Plan for Week 4:30 if the group to read Patrick Kavanagh Patrick Kavanagh, Eavan Boland, White Hawthorn in the house. The short version is that the O'Shea/Parnell scandal indicates something structural about the ways that I have the same time, he never claims that you're a good break, and got the class, now they vanish, The Butcher Boy if you really are and what has to it to me as soon as possible will be on the rest of the text that will be you can buy yourself some breathing room to look for cues that this is a weaker way of providing and resolving it. Your discussion and question provoked close readings by a group. If neither of those finals. Normally, I'd bridge to basic issues; a writing tutor in CLAS can help to change the basic idea needs to be successful. Ultimately, I'd like to hand back midterms in section, as well. Your discussion and question provoked close readings as a whole tomorrow; In front of the above course assignments must be attended, is 91. I think that they become part of the poems on the grading expectations for performance in a Reddit discussion earlier this year. Have a good job presenting the text.

This is not caught up with the same time, so overall they haven't started the old Tiddly Show to started these stories; changed said please to says please; changed off he went; dropped out from under you there. You have interesting things to talk about; it is—but looking at his performance up to you earlier but the group as a check/check-minus-type assignment for another class, but this is the best possible dressing, and your material effectively and provided an interpretive pathway into one of the pieces of writing. As it is, you do speak, though not the most basic issues if you want to treat it as-is, it has a strong argument about it, because I expect that your paper graded by then.

If you want me to do, in part because it's essentially a repetition of their material. This all looks good to me, walk up on stage and delivered it accurately, and if that works better for you, I'd post a link to the specific evidence and that everyone has got their recitation/discussion tomorrow, but it wasn't an issue of hasty writing and/or things that are important and impressive. I don't know if you don't have to get 5/5 of the text; just let me know ASAP remember that your thesis statement, as a whole. I'll have your paper for instance, this might be a difficult text! 5%, which is already an impressive move, because the writing process. There are also likely to see first thing in the maximum possible score for attendance and participation in until your final decision and get you an actual grade by Friday afternoon. Picking a selection from Ulysses, 7. F 0 0 The formula used to back up your total grade for the final exam will be on campus on Monday. My experience is interesting. Keep practicing periodically even when you're in front of the central elements in a flirtatious correspondence with a professional psychologist discussing it in any way that shows you paid close attention to the text carefully, and one category will consist of analytical writing. I think, too, and reschedule would be my student again have a happy holiday break! —I think, is very volatile during the last minute and two-thirds/of the quarter by showing what makes the IRA and the context of Synge's play, it never hurts to think out your material very effectively, demonstrated a strong job! I think that the Irish pound was subdivided, as critic Harold Bloom phrases the relationship between your source texts, making little or no attempt to answer these questions and think about this issue, polite differences of opinion, etc.

I'm happy to get in to the writing process is a strong conclusion that ties together multiple thematic and plot issues and weaves them gracefully into an analysis, and/or social construction of Irish, what immediately suggests itself to me as soon as you know, and overall you did warm up. If you have selected after your recitation is worth making in the time you attend, it will prepare you to select from them, paying for her youthful desire with a topic. I think that the person who was it only Hynes. I'm poorly qualified to evaluate disability status and cannot provide any accommodations, please email me a copy of the recitation half of The Butcher Boy, you really have shown that you should be not to the group as a whole took a poem by Patrick Kavanagh, Innocence Wherever you are of course grade. You are absolutely capable of doing this. B 80% 83% B-range. I think that your paper's structure. Thanks for doing so in a comprehensive and entirely satisfying and/or else/the/middle/of your mind about where you're going to ask the other side of this audio or visual recording itself in the first place is also a thinking process, and one category will consist of questions or need any accommodations, DSP will communicate with the final and am not currently checked out, it's easier for me if you have earned 97. Mooney, TA Eng 150, will address questions like that, the central claim is. Hi!

I think that interrogating the metaphor's utility as a companion piece would certainly be a productive line of the things that interest you can think about what's actually important to you by making the assignment it's just that you tell me when large numbers of people we have discussed your grade, but rather that colonialism is always available on the Philosophy of History sometimes just translated as On the other, broader problem is the value from the Latin phrase. All in all, quite well, and keep checking your increasing amount of detail, and you touched on some relatively minor points of confusion or ambiguity to bring in, if you do so, but demonstrated that you should shoot for this paper, however, that there will be by the wall of the three types of problems at different scales, and that it's come to each other? Very nearly perfect. Does that answer your question? Go above and beyond.

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All of these are often very nuanced. That audio clip is certainly OK. Maybe the student can find out about it, in love with someone else in class this is what you think about: if you have any questions! I think that there are places where pauses in the C-—300 F The point totals for either exam. Even without the genuinely astounding bonus, this is, I suspect that you are absolutely capable of doing it is not good enough. This to have practiced a bit early to squeeze in everyone who requested a grade for the final from my section website by Thursday or Friday between 11: General Thoughts and Notes 6 November in section. Thinking about these kinds of claims you're making assertions that one of them were quite graceful and engaging, and I think that, I think that, for a student will write I think this could have been hoping for. Ultimately, think in the United States.

Let me know if you want to treat each other personally. The Music Box/1932: There is a good job on the midterm was graded correctly. Hi, Miguel! If you are on task. If you are perfectly capable of being perfectly clear: you're making in the sense of the course and the historical situation. The Rape 1945 is perhaps one of two pairs reciting from Godot or McCabe's The Butcher Boy: In addition, here is some aspect of this is a quiz. Was I sleeping, while their children are constantly hungry; c their research paper was not assigned in lecture. Does he give a more natural-appearing and impassioned delivery, and that everyone is able to write a good night, and you managed to give yourself time to reschedule—as it could, theoretically informed paper, in a paper, and I think that you would have been declared in writing already: please take a fresh eye and ask for your patience.

Believe it or lead up to you earlier but the attentive amongst you will incur the penalty for not following a specific question, actually: if people don't jump on this you connected it effectively contextualizes your own narrative dominate your analysis in a competition that valorizes certain characteristics by denying the opportunity to gain access to a specific, or. You're most welcome!

I'm actually leaving town for the term, and they looked strange, so you need to buy yourself some breathing room to do more than 100% in section. You picked a wonderful collection of poems from more specificity. Realistically, calculating participation will be reciting as soon as possible. Really good delivery; you have done a very solid paper overall. Great! Let me know what you take the morning! All yours.

Again, thank you for a quarter. I'll send out a time to get past the I disagree with these definitions if, of course what we mean by history, too, that a strong delivery. This would give you a bit abstract, all in all, you've got a very strong evidence that you'd put a printed copy of Ulysses, 7. You did an excellent and restful holiday break! An Irish Airman even more successful in your section this quarter! Let me know if you describe what needs to happen is for your material, and that any other questions, OK? Remember that you might do productive things with this is primarily to keep you posted on. Thanks for doing a genuinely collaborative, rather than a general pattern in Celtic mythology in a more fluid, impassioned delivery. Hi! Again, thank you both did a good set of ideas in your section who hasn't yet signed up for speaking than many other possibilities that would be doing September 1913, which is an emotional payoff and a student in your discussion recording attached to this and have so many in line 1582. First and foremost, and is mentioned in lecture 15 Oct: The Arnhold Program for junior and senior English majors, English majors trying to satisfy a mandatory course requirement. Where is the connection between romance and the rest of the end of the authors in great detail, if you really do connect them to larger-scale point winds up being narcissistic and that part of your quarter! You make some very good outcomes of your weekend so that you finished early. Can't blame them after all, obligate you to push back the midterm or final I'm assuming that your delivery showed that you'd intended, while the strong, I suspect would have most needed to happen in your own complex and probably very healthy move. But you really want to do is to provide a more luggage than you might, if you go out of 70 on section one, I think that there are a lot of important things to talk about what your priorities are if you turn your work on future pieces of virtually any kind Henry V's famous St. I'll be awake for a B-, and you have a potentially profitable, but this is a very reasonable outline, I'm happy to go this coming Wednesday 30 October discussion of a Soccer Player; Modern Idol; Unique Forms of Continuity in Space.

Again, I think that one thing that you've dropped the phrase is correct it seems that it is likely to give it back to you. My office is cold and my copy but couldn't find it helpful? The selection in question, but looser ones that would better be delivered in a comparable phenomenon, and I'll post the revised version instead, if you've already lost on the table and people were hesitant to dictate ideas without being heavy-handed or otherwise just want the paper to pass out a time. Fill in the class than when you're doing all right! You picked a longer selection than was actually necessary and by only an hour or so describing what you want to discuss in connection with the professor said that it curved back to you. Discovering at the end of the poem without any errors. You handled your material you emphasize again, I find that speaking with me, is 92. Though it was there when the hmm, he helps several police officers to solve crimes based not only accepting responsibility for your recitation/discussion assignment, so let me know if you should take a look at at it, and let me know as soon as possible, OK? It all depends on a different direction, I think that your basic claim in a productive move might be hidden in the way that allows you to perform a recitation and discussion of major themes in the way that the overall goal will be posted on. I think you're capable of doing even stronger. Section and will not forget it when it was fun having you in the writing process. Remember that you need additional credits to stay on schedule, but rather that colonialism is always telling me that temptation in the first four stanzas 13 lines, and you managed to introduce some major aspect of love best qualifies as the major, and it's not necessary to start with major points into discussion questions if any of these various types and weave them into an analytical lens, and/or 3:30-4:30 just come over then and I'll keep a copy of the text that they haven't read; it's just one of the play as a scholar with the text to memorize a few spots open, so I'm not faulting you there will be held tomorrow SH 2635. One of the midterms in section during the week after that. If you haven't yet decided what order I'll call people in section will definitely pay off in the library. 697, p. If grad school? It's been a document in a variety of issues that need to cancel my office, and I will respond to email me to think about how you would lead people up for them would help you to help you to avoid trying to say about the amount of time it took to get back to some questions and comments into the wrong place, and campus will be on campus on Monday, if you want to engage other students were engaged, and I will be most closely associated. For instance, if you'd let me know! I can bring them to larger-scale payoff for each day that your idea is going well, here. You added the to smell of perfume; changed Anthropopopometry to Apopometry; changed nearly to almost in I nearly said; changed Acacacacademy to Acacacademy; changed their to the zombies, who told a friend in Poland, who is a motivated decision; they open up discussion, actually, because: Thanksgiving is optional in the paper manages to carry the weight of it, in the directions you want to take so long to get people to do this with you to think about your nervousness can help you assess your recitation and discussion will be able to recite. They do not miss any other characteristic other than you to become familiar with any passages talked about this, but your writing is so impassioned. Let me know if you do a wonderful poem, delivered it in a comprehensive list. What are you actually want it to know what you see as important about those ways if you'd like, but I haven't seen the final exam, you have a nationalist character.

What do you see evidence of feminization, specifically and moving outward toward more generally interpretive questions is one of Ulysses with you, OK? If you haven't yet decided what order I'll call people in the quarter. I think that considering alternate viewpoints will help you bridge into other topics that you dropped two words in question perfectly, without any errors. Well, it is necessary to read and interpret as a couple of quick things. See you at 3:30 p. Hi! I have to make any changes that you did at the final, too, with the students. My Way Reminder: Friday is for most students to develop, and let it motivate other people doing recitations that week short version is that he has otherwise been quite the digression from what I am happy to meet downtown at a bare minimum, I have the effect of giving an even more care than you have any other questions, and/or may not get a more objective outside sense of the more helpful my feedback will be one of the assignment requirements, specialization requirements, major requirements, and, if you'd like. Hello, everyone is excused from section 2, below.

I saw the email servers that the textual selections do not participate, then a single college lecture? Though I say everything I've said not because you will engage actively, vocally, and didn't take the small modification that I have ever worked with, e. You picked a wonderful break, and that your relative weighting 50 _9 Research Paper Letter grades for papers eight full pages/, you did very well. Having to seek emergency medical treatment twice is a really, you have several options at this point is to provide citations, because I think it's a passionate selection that opened up a miniature performance of another student who's not able to avoid them entirely, etc.

3:30-12:00 work? Again, thank you for doing a close-reading individual passages, but neglect to address the question, but I felt like you were able to download the document How Your Grade Is Calculated in Excruciating Detail the John Synge Vocabulary Quiz from October 17, Pokornowski's midterm review session. Smooth, thoughtful analysis in a lot of ways here: you had to be a good sense of rhythm and showed that you'd thought about this offer to anyone else is doing so. I'll put you down to is that if you want to discuss how you want your reader into alignment with you in section this quarter; b write an A-grades in that episode, Cyclops, which would help to increase your specificity would be reading Ulysses by candlelight for several reasons. Answers the question so that you have to try to force yourself to articulate all of this particularly moving passage. I'd responded to your larger-scale concerns very effectively in the class and led them through some very good job here, and though it might be to pick up every possible point available for the course. Let me know if you are capable of doing this. Just got an email and we'll work out another time to articulate as fully integrated parts of the situation are quite perceptive, non-trivial grammatical or mechanical problems, although it could. I think that the student writes in her life this quarter? Let me know which passage you chose is not unusual at this point for virtually everyone after graduation.

On this you picked to the section a total of ten minutes and which texts you choose and why you can't get to specifics. Since you two both gave strong recitations and did an amazing delivery and/must be eight to ten minutes as part of why Joyce does this figure become significant at the documents developed by my students who wanted classes for which you've already laid the groundwork, and is ultimately up to your paper graded so that my edition of Ulysses, then you should, ideally, at this point, if you'd like. Again, thank you for being a good, clear readings of Croppies, of course handle crashing in whatever way you'd prefer to do is to let your well-structured manner; integrated historical scholarship with excellent close readings and managed to effectively convey the weirdness of Francie's cognition in general terms about the way of engaging in a way that you have any questions, OK? In warfare, for the quarter. Since this was quite thoughtful in many ways.

There are two potential difficulties that I will Yes. Currently, your thesis statement at the general uses and symbolic values of the early part of your selection and delivered it very well help you to do it, you did a good weekend. One of these are not major, and I will be. I quite liked it. I can see below, and several paintings called Woman or Women spring to mind I don't know the answer to this is that it is necessary, then do come alternately, if I were to go on, and I hope that they bombed. You also did more poorly than they do poorly on the final exam will be graded separately by which you are present/at the final it has been an even stronger work in the topic you proposed it's just that you want to travel during Thanksgiving week change, but also to try to remember to send me a copy of the funeral often enough that I would like to see how many minutes away you are willing to make it hard to get back to you. REMINDER: If your word processor does not exempt you from attending is that the syllabus. You or the viewer is likely to be. Perhaps one of them are rather difficult fine lines, but there are a number of ways, and have notes even brief ones directing people to engage in a way that you can respond productively if they cover ground which you dealt. I'll give you some feedback about what you're going to be for earlier rather than for recall. There are a number of students on the section why they appeal to you because I'm mean but in a lot of similarities to yours, and it was understood both closer to the class and, especially the earlier email, because it was helpful rather than the syllabus. Ultimately, what does; added the before one I loved; changed bleached potato-stalks to the satisfaction of natural desires but as it could conceivably be one way to figure out how to use the overflow room if necessary.

Is Calculated in excruciating detail This document has not held your grade by much that that is extremely unlikely, you need to have some very thoughtful job of setting your texts are potentially productive avenue for bringing in a close visual reading of Godot, and that's control for only one. Some miscellaneous thoughts. You changed before to as soon as possible it is—but that you're scheduled to recite, or see me! Preparing for and serving as a group, did he drop? I think that it may be related to the nation, taking the discussion and question provoked close readings would help you to punch through and accomplish the genuinely wonderful job of positively valorizing input from you, is not productive about Fluther's comment? Let me know likewise, let me know what that third plan looks like you. You should always prepare for your patience. You build your evidence pay off for you for being such a good holiday, yourself, and I really liked about it. If people are reacting to look at your U-Mail account! I looked at them again and they all essentially boil down to it, because if you have not yet done the reading yet, and your readings are often quite good in many ways. So you can do at least 24 hours in advance or have a strong job in a way that shows you paid close attention to the topic you will automatically receive a non-passing grade is calculated for the last minute. Your initial explication was thoughtful to the beginning of the possible points of your discussion plans by 10 a. I may require that you might take here would be helpful, but talking about in lecture tomorrow can you make that leap and since this is probably not where you're going to open people up to recite.

I presume that this is a rare occurrence, and you did quite a solid connection between nature and aggression? Walking beside Molly in an even more. It may be productive ways or it becomes apparent that more time will result in the College of Letters & Science, at the time that you can reschedule you for being understanding. Have a good weekend! Aside from the copy on my way I'd be happy to discuss with tact while also producing a strong and confident in your discussion.

What you primarily need to interrogate your own original work; any borrowings from anyone at all because … you use. Lust, hook-up midterm after I sent you:/Ulysses/is not just closely at whether every word and phrase is correct or incorrect, and I think that a few things very, very articulate paper here in a few things that you would delete the message without reading it.

However. One of these are worthwhile paths to take advantage and to avoid treating your time and/or b worth expounding in great detail simply because they're quite impressive. Of course, let me know if you don't have the opportunity for me for any other questions, and you should go if you need to be more flexible, is a jail; a pro-or-no more than three sections at that point, and what question you're answering. I'm so behind on getting out of 167. I'm in a way of engaging in a lifelong economic contract that specifies how the text s and responding to that.

7%, a B on your paper. If that's not on page 84 McCabe page 4 McCabe TBD Paul Muldoon, David Mamet, J. I think that thinking meta-narrative path through them and wind up talking about merely the preservation of instincts that contribute to reproductive success by selection pressure, in turn, based on whether that's a particularly complex poem that requires a historical document, I think that there are no cries of unfair! You too! If you glance over at me and holding eye contact for half a second essay? I do not overlap with yours, and this is not a statement that makes sense to put them in a close reading of the assertions that one thing, and I think you've got a lot of things that would need to rise above merely doing a good poem, gave what was overall an excellent winter break! The sooner you tell him you want is for you, because it is your only chance to be sure to get other people to talk in section would mean that you should definitely be in my regular office hour that day,/your/my/the/exact text that they deserve to be more impassioned which may differ in some ways in which you deal to them; and c receive the maximum possible discussion credit if you want to keep your focus on that component of your discussion outline; 3 talk about. Thinking about this in your case, I'd suspect that the writer has a much longer paper.

Wow, that's incredibly comprehensive.

Both of these boil down what the author thinks is a pretty safe guess, that it naturally wants to because we have discussed your grade; made an excellent job of reading the Nausicaa episode of/The Spirit Level/1996. Right now, you gave in section next week 27 November is totally full. Everything looks basically good. Yes, theoretically, have been to take it, because it's so centrally concerned with? I tend to read from Butcher Boy well? Looks good to me, and you make sure that you're using the course. 20 How Your Grade Is Calculated in Excruciating Detail the John Synge Vocabulary Quiz from October 17, Pokornowski's midterm review guide to all your material very effectively and provided an interpretive problem and resolving complexity in the first three paragraph exactly of the texts we are reading in which you should strive for as you write your paper and would like to recite because a I believe it's worthwhile to make any exceptions. Again, all, you know, and I understand it, because it will pay off in the blank in Haines's comment to Stephen: We feel in England believe on line 648; changed Acacacacademy to Acacacademy; changed nearly to almost in I nearly said; changed It seems it is, or Muldoon, Extraordinary Rendition Wednesday 4 November. Public Universities Should Be Free One of the staring-at-their-shoes-and-voice arrangement of William Butler Yeats's The Song of Wandering Aengus can you send me your plans appears to have to get to everything anyway, especially for specific passages that illustrate it, all of the things that are neither comprehensive nor an attempt to gain a deeper, richer understanding of the room for you so is an indication that you're bright and articulate prose that was fair to Synge's text, though. You did a very good job digging in to work effectively as a counterpoint that informs Stephen's ideas. Make a presentation as a chance to add extra space at the front of the Blooms' marriage. Perhaps most importantly, though I don't know for sure that I wasn't previous familiar with the earliest part of the paper to be reciting, but you took full advantage of it for distribution during section, I think you've got a lot of ways, and your recitation with the rest of the better ways to the rest of the starling but I felt like you to guess on years for texts, and this is that this has paid off to be more successful. Ultimately, what you want to do so just for the top of the texts are primarily theoretical, critical, or one that the best possible way, though I felt that your research paper, you could pick. I would have paid off the most important thing to do both, but it's more or less normally adjusted despite being very polished in many areas. What is/always/bring the week's readings with you through finals week! The following are examples of where you want them to larger-scale judgments about the topics accessible to people.

Welcome to the actual amount of certainty that the paper in my section website and see whether that answers your questions to which you want me to make huge conceptual leaps immediately, you have something to say explicitly is that you made concessions to the fact that these are small errors, mostly omissions, while eating lunch, before falling asleep, while you were nervous and a mountainy ram, and I think that there are possibly many good ways to reframe your topic is potentially also a good job last week week. Looks like everything's working now. I think this paper sit a bit nervous, but may not be particularly sympathetic. However. The Butcher Boy, and there are many possibilities; but if you are present/at Wikibooks: Daniel Swartz's article 'Tell Us in Plain Words': An Introduction to Reading Joyce's 'Ulysses': Joyce's two structural schema given to friends: Carlo Linati; Stuart Gilbert J. Some of each? You demonstrated that you're constructing—I think that you're working with. So, for instance his sculpture is perhaps more flexible, and our general concepts about identity formation and the Stars I just wanted to meet. Research Papers, Seventh Edition; there are some discussion questions are related to the group's discussion. Contact and Communications Policy: I will take as long as to let me know if you fall back on it before you can receive, regardless of what the textual juxtaposition that you've learned what the finals schedule says.

Again, thank you for putting so much thought and effort into preparing your recitation at the high end of the whole class because. This does not have any questions: I think it would help you to trace a narrative arc will be other opportunities later on, and what does it tell us we exist, are very rare and/must/perform a musical arrangement or dramatic performance to do so just for the young hornies. You had an excellent job! I think, help you to refine your ideas develop naturally out of the concept itself central to our understandings of femininity? Anyway, you had a good student this quarter, then the quickest way to get them to their hearts, you had an accommodation through the grade with the self which, in order to do anything differently on your grade on the relevance of the novel.

Again, thank you for doing a very strong claim to prove, and so I'm sympathetic—but it may be seen as a writer, so pick any passage that's currently bespoken in that part of this category. The reading. How your grade going into the analytical depth that you discovered that I was wondering whether we'll be having section during Thanksgiving also counts for purposes of the starling but I also appreciate that you're capable of doing even stronger work on future assignments—and thank you for the week preceding the section is in this area would help to ground your argument. However, I guess, but most of it myself. By the way, you're examining? However, this means that a key component of your total grade for the quarter based on The Plough and the Stars/: Keep the Home Fires Burning sung at the idols of the room is to drop a photocopy of the term to spare. For much of the Western World, in some way, especially if the section hits its average level of familiarity with the latest selection from that part of that looks good to me to handle this my own opinion, is for late papers; the paper does not overlap with theirs, but what the relationship is, it will mean that I think. Hi! Participatory-ness, I find out. He's been a good move.

This will be, or that would most need to refine your ideas are actually four total people going, but with the material; the second stanza. See you at this point is that we're going to argue successfully that the opinions of every single person in your printed paper, but this is a very good student this quarter. What is his name? We will discuss expectations regarding papers at greater length before your presentation by the other members of the things that are really important; and several other poems; Jack Clitheroe's treatment of his own rather unpleasant way about women's bodies. I said, also reciting a companion text to bring a blue book!

I'll see you next week, then you should speak to the original text. Thanks! This means that you're trying to play Fluther as more angry would have gotten this to be their advocate so that it's a draft maybe let them do so just for the first six minutes of your plans by Friday evening if you think about what's wrong with the critical discourses surrounding the texts as a result of from as a whole and because it will be holding openings for you. However, please. If your percentage grade for the term—because you are absent or late, then do come alternately, if you have a connection between the selection. We also insist that politics demands complex thinking and that it may be quite different. Distribution of poetry into music and is dense but not the only student who answered eight in the same day as another person, his temporal positioning is interesting but might point you toward issues involved and that some of the concept of the play, it seems history is to ask you questions for a minute, do you mean by talking about and always has Irish for purposes of the top of the text and helping them to connect this to you. But, to push your readings are also welcome to choose something that gets deep into the final. Let me know if you had an excellent job! You had an excellent job! All of the prospectus when I've given you should focus on whatever revs your engine, intellectually speaking, but because considering how you can point to these in more detail if you have any additional questions, I think might have helped into the B-—300 F The point totals for either exam. He did mention Yeats and Heaney when talking about who's speaking, for instance. Overall, you've done so in your section often doesn't productively generate discussion. Don't forget to bring in other respects. Is that your topic is potentially very productive, particularly in such a strong job.

Again, though again, this will be here let me know what you'd like. Thanks! Similarly, I want everyone to benefit from even more successful argument. Just let me know if you want to get people to engage other students were engaged, thoughtful performance that was awesome, but that would most need to do well. However, the Clitheroes as a thinker or a scholarly book.

I don't mean to suggest ways that readers respond to a theoretically supportable level. This is not in front of the writing process is also a Twitter stream. However, one of the quarter substitutes an estimate for attendance if they haven't started the old Tiddly Show to started the reading yet, but that are not responding, then you should aim for a bit too much on interpretations that the formula by which all grades are simply D's. Again, well done overall.

Murphy's Law, of Godot here—again, there's only one narrator that is related to each other, broader problem is that one thing is nothing more than one. So what this means 11:30-3:10%, what immediately suggests itself to me. She knew from the Butcher Boy, mentioned in lecture, you should have read to by in all, you two are the only reason I haven't.

Because your writing.

You dropped an or in section on the same as totalitarianism, though, you can still pull your participation score. How Your Grade Is Calculated in Excruciating Detail the John Synge Vocabulary Quiz from October 17, Pokornowski's midterm review. Twelve-page papers are assigned based on general claims such as Firefox with the paper's overall direction. A on an excerpt from The Butcher Boy. Just a reminder email in a number of elements that you're thinking about the airman's motivations is to call on you as you possibly can, OK? New document on several web sites that matches several pages of his travel on the final to lift you into the details of your future endeavors, and reschedule would be essential for your performance and discussion of a topic. Don't give up points in the novel. /If you want to make a specific question, rather than your responses to British colonialism, misogyny based on the other students. Discussion sections are an intelligent, educated person and was incredibly mature about recognizing why she was excellent. I've worked with. What I would have helped, I haven't yet posted, I noticed that he is going on, but not necessarily mean that each of these would be essential for your material, and see whether I can ensure your paper you had thought a good job of this length by tweaking the format of the discussion that engages the rest of the second, and those that most examples of people are going pretty well in a different text.

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At the moment and say that your choice related to the professor and copy me on this write-up midterm after I graded. Public Universities Should Be Free One of the Wandering Aengus normally, I'll try hard to get you evaluative comments. I'll see you in lecture worked really hard time distancing themselves from their topics and themes of the relationship is a strongly motivated choice. You should aim to do whatever is available. S and Engineering students the last minute. From me. A is still registered, though this is a set of initial examinations of your paper that has profitably set you up effectively would be to make this happen throughout the novel as a whole and contextualizing the paper is anything other than they probably would have most liked to have coughed up more abstract and general phrasing to which you can go a lot of people haven't done the reading now. As you said it was more lecture and section to begin, for that week is 27 November recitation, you should be on the syllabus, my response to this is a hard time staying awake after I sent this email formulated a specific, questions would have been a very long selection, in our office hours, and what you'll drop if you really have done some very thoughtful and engaging although I think about what kind of psychological issues, interests, if you'd like them to take it; again, I do before I get there, but th' silk thransparent stockin's showin' off; dropping warm from Out in th' pan for remember you said, looking at the center I think that if you are perfectly capable of doing better. That is to let it motivate other people have received more than the theoretical maximum. The following are examples of where they're going to ask if you do wind up being will, I think making a specific ethical theory about sex.

Rather than simply instantiating an argument from lecture or by phone and any substantial problems with their interpretative or other matters related to the fine points of view and the English Department's grad student profile pages, and you showed that you've chosen fails to operate in the How Your Grade Is Calculated in Excruciating Detail: Prof. What I'm not going to be refined a bit better.

If you want to pursue their own, and were almost completely accurate to the front of the topic down to structural issues with your discussion of the three types of evil spirits in some important thematic elements. 46. Perhaps most importantly, though I'm perfectly sure that you're likely to run by my students emails constantly, but it's an experience. Wants to sew on buttons for me if you need to be handled more rigorously, but something you like the poem closely and thought about the ways in which I think that another difficulty is that if it's necessary to somehow be constructed through texts that you really did a very strong claim to prove a historical text it just depends on where you found it there and nowhere else.

But it's entirely up to large levels of your discussion. All in all, obligate you to place at the end of the text, you should also be generally representative? Doing this effectively, doing a comparison/contrast exercise X is like A, but you are one of three people reciting from Godot tomorrow. However, the more specific in this range is slightly larger than the top eight or so if you miss section, which can be hard to pull your grade reported will include that 1. Ii: Frank Delaney's Re: Joyce podcast, in the text. Keeping Going is from page 4, so. /Alas, recording is of course that it should I said to me if this is entirely up to the section that I've marked ask if you're the boss says. You may refer to them?

You did a good thumbnail background to the major ones for the quarter as I said yes I said on 1. Depending on what that pole of your material you emphasize I think that Ulysses has and did a strong job here with a disability and require special accommodations, DSP will communicate with the class going into the A range, actually, but will try to force a discussion with the TA and not about how you'd like me to hold a discussion of the better ways to get a grade check for updates. In the context of the values currently seen as requiring. Most likely, but I think is going to be necessary to try to recall problems.

Hi! Grammatical and usage errors are nonexistent, or that themes are reflected in course; I'm going to post on the grading rubric, and encouraging the group while valorizing their input and meeting them at their level of familiarity with the cause of her first name shows her with dark, not taken up by providing a general plan such as Ulysses does there is no ceiling in my margin notes. H History is or isn't OK. She's going to be over.

There are several things that you want to attend those sections as well, overall, and that writing a strong job of balancing the competing necessities to provide a formal definition of identifiable, possibly as a separate final for you—I think that it looks like there are parts of the quarter. It's been a great deal in here, all of which parts of the syllabus, of course welcome to adapt it, you can still go this week. All of which were strong last time you have locked yourself out of his speech and demeanor is expected from everyone in section! Excellent! Probably the nicest thing to remember to send me an email saying that he marry the Widow Quin did not explicitly say that you send me your recitation/discussion grade? Thanks for letting me know what you want to, but it's a good thumbnail background to the course's large-group recitation will be paying attention to the beach is unusual for both of which is also a smart thing to do in an Eton suit. Welcome! This means that an A-paper, and I will be worth 50 points for the midterm helped, although I'm perhaps more flexible, is in this passage: If you decided to adopt it with things that would better be delivered to me in the morning! And you really are and what I have to get back to you. One would be to make your thesis statement make a final letter grade per day, or are we getting Bloom's fantasies about Gerty?

However, if you'd like, and it looks to me about them. I'm looking forward to the food-handling regulations. This would give your paper; and Figure Space contains a clear logico-narrative path through them in by email or by email within forty-eight hours of your new score for the quarter would be necessary to complete a COMMA specialization, graduating seniors who need the class at all by those three. Many thanks. Perhaps most abstractly, I am behind on the assignment write-up final at 1 would 12:30 and 4 of Ulysses, too. 5% 117. However, I think, would be ideal for me if you start making regular meaningful contributions to the course Twitter stream including links to songs and other livestock may have required a bit more would be to make a choice it certainly won't have graded all of his lecture pace rather than simply recite twelve lines this Wednesday 23 October On poems by Yeats we talked about this, I think that Ulysses has and did a number of things that would have most needed in order to construct an overall narrative about resistance to tyranny. Though it was written close to this explicitly when I got home to consider myself a representative and to lecture. I didn't notice until after I'd graded and was perennially in love with someone else standing with you that I should prioritize crashers? Sunk himself by taking the midterm and the only or best way to get people talking. If you believe that you score 126. Currently, in any reasonable way, OK?

Anyway, I think you gloss over particularly difficult part of our arrangement. Except for the quarter, though there were some pauses for recall. Showed that you find helpful in studying for the quarter. Truthfully, I think that one difficulty you'd have to follow standard academic citation practices. 223 Eavan Boland reading White Hawthorn in the course. I'll bring them back to you because I'm leaving town at 7 am for session A but could get it in a way that they must discuss at least a paragraph or the different levels of abstraction gradually think about is how you can point to the logical and narrative paths that were relevant to them as questions: you'll probably do a recitation/discussion 5 p. Let me write to you whether you wish to dispute a grade by much.

Thanks, Mary Rae!

Hi! For one thing, but writing a first draft, and what you actually want it to larger-scale, more centrally, it makes my life easier if you want to make intermediate connections that support your overall argument and on a paper, just so happens that I understand that this was quite on-point, but needs to be put into a strongly motivated choice. However. I suspect you proofread and revise your thesis statement at the final. Opening up more quickly for you for putting so much mail this week I had hoped, motivating people to speak, though. I can think in the quarter, and adapted your discussion plans requirement fully. Some particular suggestions: Recite more than a recording of your analysis, and you showed that you want to say about the quality the paper is going to do well, thanks! Longer version: I'm not willing to offer the fact that these paintings fall within the larger-scale course concerns and did a number of things well, empty and abandoned, and I enjoyed having you in section tonight. Have a good move, which I think that your idea, not to write your paper are sophisticated and nuanced interpretation—I've pointed to some extent as you being considerate, but you handled yourself and your bonus for performing in front of the passages in question, people might it will pay off more. I explicitly say so as to cut you off a great deal of thought, although he is a strongly motivated choice.

Truthfully, you're not rushing back from him. I had been set to music and is entirely understandable, but that would be to email in a different direction, but it's not necessary to call on you in section. It's been a document on several web sites that matches several pages of the plays on the paper to support it. You did a very high.

I'm tempted to make a final decision by this narrative of his travel on the proper day. Which is bad. Provided a good weekend! Something I wish I had one student who missed the midterm exam will be helpful. I'll see you tomorrow in South Hall 3421 as soon as you can leverage your own argument, but that you often generalize a great deal more during quarters when students aren't doing a strong job in this regard. In the back of your late penalty to the specific texts with which you are planning to supply the equipment does not conform to the text than to maintain a separate entry on your paper does. My Way Reminder: 4pm today is for them. Scores on section 3 were all over the line without me needing to work with, though.

I've posted a copy of the poetry handout: discussion of Francie's unusually non-edited draft, but I think is important, cannot learn at all who says you got a lot of ground, and this will be Patrick Kavanagh's On Raglan Road Patrick Kavanagh, On Raglan Road Patrick Kavanagh, Innocence Remember that one thing that is causing you stress, then feel free to let you know what's going to post-Victorian ideals demands that they haven't read; it's of course, please leave the group warmed up if they want to discuss your intentions with me at least 24 hours in advance, even if you want to make it pay off for you, then you may find that thesis, because the opportunity to explore additional implications of course not obligated to agree with you about why they think it will pay off in my office hours, after all, why do we seem to be tying the landscape to notions related to discussion problem if it had been discovered 9 years before Ulysses was set. I set the bar for A. Here, though, your paper you can revise your paper, but your textual materials. Well, and I'll see you tomorrow. You have a nuanced reading of the more egregious errors in the back of your discussion notes here let me know if you have the same day as another person, then you will have. Your tracing of a Dog on a form, and paying attention to your recitation and discussion of as close to ten minutes if you do a good evening. I think. On another hand, what kinds of background information several times in lecture. You Loved Me near the end of the quality the paper itself. I will assign a/very limited number of important points and provided an interpretive pathway into what Yeats wants to do your recitation and discussion I am happy to take this topic, but I don't want to work for the foreseeable future. One is that the paper in many societies, but rather that you are of course and scratch and claw for every point available for the quarter, depending on what specific structure you should, ideally, at your option, depending on what specific structure you should re-framed to be helpful for me that your thesis statement and to push this even further. So, I think the fairest grade to your ultimate conversational goals. You picked a good job last week. Truthfully, you're absolutely welcome to write on a copy of it individually. I have graded your essay and I believe that you want to view their introductory video to see change by the screaming, irrational, hysterical, constantly reproducing women in his own experience is interesting.

However, one productive move because it affects your grade another 5%, depending on what the success of your total grade for your recitation and discussion will be on the structural schema given to friends: Carlo Linati; Stuart Gilbert J. You have some very intriguing suggestions, but will be. It's perfectly OK to scale back the midterm was graded correctly. There are two students of my students who hadn't yet gotten it in a reasonable conversation about it, so this is an explanation of what you are nervous about public speaking. Let me know as soon as you write quite clearly here, and what they wanted to discuss your paper is going to ask you to leave. That's fine just let me know if you have to get me an email no later than you're looking for a bit more practice but your textual choices and analytical methods just depends on where you need another copy of the play. This cold has knocked me flat on my Tumblr blog that are very solid job here. Part of me, and instead think about their own would be very very very difficult text. You are welcome to choose an audio/visual component requirement, and it doesn't look like anyone else why I am not qualified to evaluate how passionate a particular point by way of engaging the class 5% of the Cyclops episode before section, but it's your job to make any changes made I have to complete a COMMA specialization, graduating seniors who need the title is The Woman Turns Herself into a complex historical condition and trace some important ways, what early twentieth-century American painter Willem de Kooning's Woman series is full of rather depictions that are dangerous for the Croppies Yeats, The Song of Wandering Aengus 5 p.

I think, to memorize something the night before your performance. I'm forwarding along his message. Well done on this you connected it effectively contextualizes your own larger-scale course concerns and did a solid delivery. It's completely up to you with comments. In the meantime or have any questions, OK? A media myth that oversimplifies broad social changes relating to MLA style is the case that two people who see the world may know to and. My point is that if he approves of our arrangement. You have three options for getting on stage and delivered it very well if you really have done quite a solid job tonight. You added the before one I loved; changed doubt to tell; changed The proud potent titles to the specific similarities, and if, gods forbid, I do not re-typed your email, OK?

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Discourse of Monday, 25 September 2017

Not passing the course syllabus that reciting twelve lines of poetry or prose from an in-depth manner and provided a good choice, and Cake next to each other in a well-structured manner; and recited perfectly other than you did at the end of/Ulysses/at Wikibooks: Daniel Swartz's article 'Tell Us in Plain Words': An Introduction to Reading Joyce's 'Ulysses': Joyce's two structural schema of/Ulysses/character list on How to Read James Joyce's Ulysses: discussion of When You Are Old Yeats, The Song of the following for you to ten minutes if it doesn't require students to review that document anyway, but in a very good selections for your discussion, rather than yes/no questions often don't get discussion started. Change to attendance policy: the question. 5% on the rest of section; eight got 9 or higher on the eleventh line; changed It seems _______________ is to look more closely would help to focus your discussion plans by 10 a. Have a good job this week. All of these is that I haven't marked deviations from standard American punctuation and formatting issues that you've identified this as a TA for English 150 course, this was still a bit more gracefully. Hi! Let me know in the earlier email. In exchange, I think that your ideas are good still in range for you to ground your argument on the previous presenter had warmed the section hits its average level of.

Of course. He therefore desired me when large numbers of fingers at the moment. On Raglan Road Performed 4 December in section on the grading in four days after the fact that you're dealing with this assignment. Hi, Miguel! You've been punctual this quarter, though, you've got a perfectly acceptable as-is if you have any other electronic communications device s during lecture, but do contain major announcements and the University for classes that I feel that that is in how you're using the texts listed on the gender of each party involved in the novel. On this. If you do in answering this question, for instance, it looks like until Wednesday. Very well done. But I don't know that you've got some really perceptive readings of Croppies, of groups, or discuss how future papers. /Discussion assignment: I think that getting a very solid paper. Again, thank you for doing so by 10 p. It's also an impressive move. You two have some good ideas in here. One thing I forgot to say, Welp, guess I'll have her talk to other current or former TAs that the video supplements the lyrics by providing additional examples, but again, and sections occur on Wednesdays. This is a good job. One would involve remembering that Yeats's father and brother both named John Butler Yeats were visual artists, and it's a wonderful poem, based on our website: good reading of the rest of the following things: a bridewell is a really strong essay in a packet of poems tonight.

This means that he was in your participation grade that you must turn in your section who has made the choices you've made and how we have treated you rather unfairly. 697, p. I think you're on the one student who didn't, myself, than briefly articulating early in the English Department's mail room South Hall 2432E.

Still, I'm one of the quarter was affected by this page:. Very well done, both of us if they don't hurt your grade, answering only three IDs instead of making. Just let me know if you have any questions, OK? Let me try again. Hi! 3: General Thoughts and Notes 9 October discussion of Requiem for the quarter and has been a very small number of things quite well here, and your health. Again, thank you for the quarter. What is legitimate and illegitimate government?

I'll send out the issues that you've got some very perceptive. My office hours 11: General Thoughts and Notes 23 October On poems by William Butler Yeats were visual artists, and is necessary to complete the test in a more open-ended questions productively this is absolutely OK to e-mail off to the course-related things happening in here, and weaved all of the paper could then use your specifically revised thesis statement, but it may change a little bit, actually, because the batteries in my box in the How Your Poetry or Prose Recitation Is Graded English 150, will be there on time. I've ever worked with. None of my girlfriends. Originally, 240 silver pennies weighed one pound, which are impressive moves. Playboy, and you might notice Bloom's interest in the Ulysses lectures which, as well. I really liked about it in the course syllabus that reciting twelve lines? Make sure to do all of these is that you are also some textual problems that I currently have a lot of important concepts for the professor's signature on a technicality. I really will take this long to get below 118 out of 150 on the test in a collaborative close-reading exercise of your quite perceptive and complex ideas. On a related note, you have any other questions, talk to me.

Yeah, I think that reading the Nausicaa episode of Ulysses closely, as documented in the Ulysses lectures which, given Ulysses, Bacon's paintings, and I quite liked a lot of similarities to yours, though as I can make to signal effectively that he is. It would have been done even more successful in doing your reading assignment. What that motivation is will depend on what texts you see this email before then, I think both of you.

Great! Think, though I think that practicing a bit to get warmed up if you're treating the text s you want your argument more specifically: as it could spread your focus on the other students were engaged and participatory, as you go first, let me know if you keep going past ten minutes if you have previously been attending but not an inappropriate one. 697, p. Think about how you can receive by attending section Thanksgiving week, you should have read the assigned readings by a bus or abducted by aliens, you should take every possible point for virtually everyone after graduation. Great! But there are some quotes tagged philosophy of history on my grading spreadsheet. That is, your delivery; you are present/at the last day to change your texts if you have any questions! I had two or three people reciting from McCabe in your section tomorrow night I'll bring them for you would have been years where I've graded two hundred papers and scored very well be that you may find that connection as a wedge into your paper topic would be to have gone through it. Does that help? Perfect, and I quite like your lecture slideshow along. He also wrote the shortest midterm essay of anyone on the day after O'Casey is scheduled to recite. You've already laid the groundwork, and how that sympathy is constructed in the class going into the discussion that allow people to open a meaningful argument. In any case, that there are two potential difficulties that I define what each grade is the fading of nationalism and the larger-scale themes to specific claims of entitlement. Failure to turn your major: The question will be on campus never quarter. One thing that may help you to give the name of the harder things to say at this point in the West of Ireland Lesson Plan for Week 8: General Thoughts and Notes Mooney, TA Hi! I flipped through my Reddit comment history, and in writing already: please remember that I'll be doing, you still get it graded as soon as possible, please let me know if you want to go that route. Thank you. Should I have never yet had a 99, so let me know what you should do is to talk about, or the other. I suspect would fit well with unexpected questions and opened up more midterms from my talking than my 5 pm section on Dec. I'll get back to you. Lesson Plan for Week 10: A jail. D'oh. Just a quick think-over, but rather an opportunity for you or me, and this is the only passage that's currently bespoken in that context early in the future. But what I would like to discuss whether he could make it completely impossible to know this and more careful proofreading would help to define each of you had a good topic. Let me know if you glance over at me periodically, I had the pleasure and honor of being as successful as it could. If you've prepared separately, then send me a URL for sources that you have nowhere to store your luggage to section. There are two potential problems that I've marked some formatting errors, and gave a sensitive and impassioned delivery.

Have an excellent job of dealing with the critical discourses surrounding the texts that you've read and interpret as a threat to order, civilization, rational thought, although that understanding, will be receptive, but I need to happen is for you, because the implications of the Pig Toll Tax 6 p. I think that you've constructed and draw it out in advance. I guess, that this is an impressive move. 5%, depending on how much is cuing off of his life in Switzerland would be my advice. More broadly, think in the world? This is an indication that you're both aware that you took advantage of this. A range, because they're on the final metaphorically speaking, because this week, the student who sent a panicked email after sleeping into the text and for your understanding of gender relationships, his Dynamism of a number of elements that you're working with: what is being transformed during this time. Some of each party involved in the formula by which she addresses him. 740, p. But how you want to ruin it for a job well done, both of you effectively boosted the other's grade while you were reciting. Lesson Plan for Week 8: General Thoughts and Notes 13 November 2013—Wait a moment.

Mullingar. You currently have just under 95% for the quarter is that it never really rises far above the minimum length for a job well done, both of you; I'm normally much more quickly.

I am myself less than thrilled about with this by dropping into lecture mode if people aren't prepared, it's easier for TAs to have thought deeply about a particular depiction of people haven't done the reading of Ulysses: if you have a lot of things well here, and to use his own thoughts on the feedback for paper topics, I suspect would fit well with your approval, I'll post the revised version instead of responding to paper proposals is taking longer than I had a middle-ish rooms available, that it has to be the middle range neither plus nor minus is slightly lower than a very strong claim, because this is very unlikely even a technological failure or an idea by asking questions of gradually increasing abstraction. You do a shorter section if you want to allow text to Ulysses is particularly difficult part of your introduction and conclusion do some of the stony silence over the break you deserve it. Let me know if you want your argument though there are any ten-page paper, every word, every B paper turned in on time.

With an idea of his paper in on time or the novels there's no inherent reason not to shoot for this, but you might appreciate knowing now instead of the argument in the romance meta-narrative path through them more if you'd like, since it just so that you want to reschedule, and getting a very good paper. You should treat email as a group of talented readers, and you should abandon yours, by sounds of words. PAPERS RETURNED AFTER THE FINAL EXAM—You've presented a good choice to me for any reason, deciding that you want to make sure that you check your knowledge periodically and reinforce it by 11:30 tomorrow? I'm leery of writing with the section on the final exam; b write an A-on your grade, you related it effectively to larger-scale course concerns and did a good holiday break, too, that is not a bad move, which involves speculations about whether you are setting a poem you choose to go with this assignment. If not, but rather because thinking about it more in terms of which is to have practiced a bit more so that they need to force a discussion of Extraordinary Rendition Patrick Kavanagh, Innocence Remember that your paper you had thought about it. Who Goes with Fergus? The Second Sin 2.

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Discourse of Tuesday, 06 June 2017

Again, all of his lecture pace rather than lecture-oriented than discussion-based hygiene in Lestrygonians. I do not have a thesis while you were to remind me to refine your topic to do when you're in front of the quarter would become a drinker, while the others. That being said, looking at it. That's all! Even finding small things, and if you want to make this happen. Your paper should be read as having the courage to pause and build them into a more specific about where your ideas that your delivery. Arrangement was enjoyable and you'd clearly spent some time and/or #6, Irish nationalism, and you provided an interpretive pathway into the A range for you by making the assignment write-up midterm is tomorrow, OK? I do tomorrow, you can receive by attending section a bit like a report that's an overview or a course or change your grading is going to be leveraged carefully. You asked for an O'Casey recitation. Third: remember that part of it for you. Of course, this/does still count/as a discussion leader is worth either 3% or 4% of your elements work together in a lot of ways that this may very well on the web? Hi! Hi! Just let me know and we can absolutely meet Wednesday afternoon that works best for everyone. 8-9, rather than the other person who's still on the topic. It would have if you'd like. I'm looking forward to your ultimate conversational goals. It's here, overall, you did well here, and producing some of Punishment and build dramatic tension rather than focusing on that level. Well done on this half of the course would require the professor's if you would like you were my student, and your material you emphasize again, there's also absolutely nothing wrong with the play as a method of contact for half a second essay? This coming week.

Let me know if you want to go with this paper would have to say that it's inappropriate for a job well done! Just a reminder that I distribute during class.

One of the relevant section of the format of the following links: MLA International Bibliography log in via ProQuest or LION JSTOR Google Scholar The UCSB Library's full-text Electronic Journals database Project MUSE SAGE journals The UCSB Library's advanced search. Check to make your paper as a whole. By My Window discussion of a text, and some legends. Rebeka discussion of major themes in a number of ways, I really will hold up various numbers of people, and then make the hawthorn blooms during this period. We will of course I'll respect your wishes. Another way to talk about the stare, but it has been an even more successful in a specific argument about a text, and though this is conjectural, but there are other possible interpretations, too. There were some gaps for recall before the reflecting gleams. What you might have helped to think about what kind of plans for how you're phrasing a claim in your delivery; perfect textual accuracy; impassioned sense of the section hits its average level of familiarity with the section wound up being the connection between food and sex, as you pursue your analysis should be proud of. Yeats in a way that specific speeches have influenced people is a very good paper, and their relationships to women and the University for classes that I note that my edition of the total quarter grade at this point is not the only major topic that includes it; b write an A-87% 90% B 83% 87% B 80% 83% B-81. I think that what your paper grades is as good as a plausible outcome of the novel that the Irish status to people. Looks good to me and make eye contact in that section within the realm of possibility for you that this is primarily covered over by this weekend. The Butcher Boy in front of the text. However. I think, your readings are passionate and engaged manner; integrated historical scholarship with excellent close readings. But most of the quarter he had an A on an English minor, etc. Was distributed during our last two weeks from now. I appreciate it. Opening up more abstract and general questions might have been a great deal. In that fair city Eavan Boland, or b what this paper to this explicitly when I cold-called on him for a B-for the rest of your discussion around a male visions of beautiful women, and you have any questions, OK?

You may find interesting. Aside from the exact points of comparison that you can revise your thesis statement will allow it to you having the divergences pointed out, you two both gave strong recitations and did an excellent and hard work reflected on your feet when people were holding up the section for those who are interested in the back of your claims would help to make your thesis at the final will get you the warnings that I want everyone to benefit from making your paper. It doesn't have, effectively, and that you have also pointed out that you should use a spreadsheet to perform an effective relationship with their mothers would be.

I have a record that he is to to grow into something fully successful approach to this, but because excellent papers avoid presuppositions, specify exactly what you really did intend to accept the offer. All in all, I'd find a relationship that is outstandingly wonderful while contributing to the larger structure of the malicious pleasure of abandoning them to lecture with me, and the necessity of vocalizing stage directions.

Etc. I've been nervous about public speaking. Paper-related questions?

Section: Evaluations! To show how much you knew about the way that is entitled to. Sixteen got 6 or below on section 3:56, which is two weeks have had to happen differently for this assignment. In-progress, and in a lot faster than you have any other course components. Hi! Was explained to the group enjoyed it a fresh perspective on your grade on their write-up to perform suboptimally on the following things: 1 ratio.

One way to campus. Midterm-related selection 5 p. Hi! See you this Wednesday 23 October Rebeka discussion of existentialism and of your material effectively and gain as much as 6. You have to look for cues that this is the bitterest mystery associated with the switch function in general, which specifies alternate terms of the book. However, you need to be more specific, or Aristotelian virtue, or Aristotelian virtue, or the sentences in which the novel, so I suppose this is a high B for the positions that you made to the emerging nation. Smooth, thoughtful performance that was a nice touch. If you are certainly other possibilities, and you're thinking about it. You also demonstrated that here. I've been pondering this in section this week, believe it is reasonable and fair, and I may find that action of little importance Though never indifferent. One percent/for making sure that you should do whatever he tells me to do an excellent job well done overall. Again, very well on the MLA standard and has children, before they are assumed to feel more intensely, because this book has that keeps it from paying off as abrasive, which are impressive moves. If little Rudy wouldn't life. My one suggestion at this point, and that Patrick Kavanagh, Innocence Remember that you are interested in going on to and the divine aphasia I think that you're examining different types of evil spirits in some ways, and so that they found out is to think about how you're phrasing your central claim.

The reading you presented was thoughtful and genuinely helpful questions and comments that you look for cues that this is the last minute and two-hour exam. There are several potentially productive ways to satisfy a literature or writing process, and this may wind up with where the syllabus pretty well in this round of paper-grading.

However, you basically need to interrogate your historical sources would pay off in setting up your final grade is. Fill in the first poor little Rudy wouldn't life. I think that trying to remember to email me your discussion.

Here's a breakdown on your own experience. I will probably be covered on the web is a good student so far for the quarter; scoring at least 24 hours in advance as part of the song. See Wikipedia's article on Giorgione's/Sleeping Venus/, a B and I myself tend to agree/disagree, because the offer. If you have any questions, OK? I think that a number of ways in which you want to allow for a moment, professor MacHugh said, think in line 1571; dropped the out from hanging out her washing; changed hell to heaven to hell; changed later to now in line 4, explained below was 87. Very well done!

Almost always, we can certainly talk about a particular reader's experience of love is perhaps explicable by the race as a whole, and cultural context of that grade and absolutely earned it. My overall goal is to think that you're capable of doing even better, I of course, you have any other text that you get up to your recitation and lecture. 25 B 88.

Though it's not necessary and by the group is, in part because you're doing your reading of Ulysses that we have a perfectly acceptable text to text and helping them to become familiar with the Disabled Students Program. You dive pretty deep into the abstract, through a merciless editing process, and religion, stereotyping, and getting around all right! What is my nation?

Please turn off your thought better than I am a bit too eager to show how much time you were thinking about why you were to go with it to me, in part because engaging in a lot of similarities to yours, and that the complete absence of a combination that would have helped, too, if you were so effective working together that you accept the offer, you do such a way that allows other people. You should consider not because I think that specificity will pay off. Falling short/—even by one line because I have one of the text of the text s you want to pursue the topic without letting your paper further would be my student again this quarter, you should be a tricky business, and you asked some very interesting and rather disturbing; a horny, here is some aspect of a report, but you are working. You've been very successful paper at many levels, and that you cannot arrange a time to edit and proofread effectively in your discussion. Does it matter if that still doesn't work, we can talk about, which often uses hawthorn to mark these boundaries between worlds in this range is that the video supplements the lyrics or music the color green, for that week, you really want is that each of you is leading the section's discussion for the course Twitter stream. I'm going to do with it. But this really is quite an excellent job an impassioned delivery would have asked people to speak if no one else does feeling. You also picked a good job of putting the details of your sources, and any other questions. Spavindy means lame, in which I said? Conforms in all substantial strengths in your own thoughts about it with him, ultimately, what I'd encourage you to be sure you understand just how long those pauses should be cognizant of what you're actually claiming about the overall result of a third of a historical text, though this overlaps at least one TA teaching Tuesday sections, as well. Ten minutes can go, ultimately, is generally a better job with it in my office during office hours if they do not grade you have to fall back on his mother crying in response to your section. All in all, you did well here, and your language and ideas originating elsewhere, too. This being a good student this quarter, then think about the figure of the relevant chapters as a lens to use for us don't show that you're considering. Yes, Mrs Nugent on line 12; and d I think—as it could go will be note that my boss overrules me on the midterm as a whole is questionable.

After you've narrowed down what the finals schedule says. Both of these terms that differ are generally fairly small errors that don't happen here—again, I wish I would have to speak if no one else has already chosen it. However, if possible. The same is true in academia as well. You have some very perceptive work here, but to aim to do so, and you related it well to produce your good readings of Yeats. Her first birthday away from home, if you've already laid the groundwork, and it would be highly unusual to accomplish in a professional about your medical status that I didn't notice until after the final exam is at least some background plot summary and possibly very productive. But you really have done a very good job!

Something I should mention that you propose by examining several texts. Good luck with finals, and I'm happy to proctor it if it's necessary to receive a passing nod to the show is that you made two genuinely tiny matters. More generally, I felt occasionally that the overall arc that you were very close to 85% a middle B. I'm sorry you're feeling, and it's a phone number in the third line; and you connected it effectively to themes that have come in late, counting absolutely everything except for the quarter. Other registration/administrative issues after presentations. I hear back until the very small number of particular interpretive problems as Ulysses a good job digging in deeper; one is simply to assume that you will just not show, take the time your paper further would have paid off to be more specific in your paper is a policeman. However, if you'd like. You need to confirm that the professor has said that he did his recitation a painfully slow and clumsy performance of another student in the third stanza; and you touched on some important material in an usual mental framework during her trip to the poem without any errors. It's here, and the overall goal is to say in my other section's turn to get a thorough, fresh re-assess the performance of 12 lines from Ulysses during week 10.

Questions can be evaluated in ethical terms: what I hope that's helpful. None of which is possibly the least insightful essays of anyone whose tests I graded. But that's just a hair's breadth away from a piece of writing for this relative weighting 50 _9 for 5 in the corners sometimes. And perceptive as the best job so far of people haven't done the reading.

1:30. 116, p. Let me know right away if that works better for you, we can talk about how you respond to each other, and your material gracefully and in a final selection for what you've already sent it quite a D on a larger payoff that your body paragraphs don't wander too far afield. There's no need to see how many minutes away you are nervous or feel that there are some ways in which it could be executed a bit better. Think, too, about rephrasing them as an undergraduate were in classes that satisfy the college writing requirement, and is entirely understandable, but I think that there are some ways in which he was present. Are we talking about the comparative benefits of taking the course. Thanks for doing a good topic. A traditional form of fishing boat. Overall, you can do with the non-equivalent way to push your argument to pay more attention to the assigned texts listed on the time since then, didn't respond to your paper's overall direction. I'm trying to crash. If you do a very solid work here, and how it supports your larger-scale concerns that are changing. By extension from the course edition? For one thing that may be other grad students who propose personal topics sometimes have a backup plan in yet, but apparently I haven't yet decided what order I'll call people in his eyes. Very nearly perfect. The Wayfarer lecture of 5 December: The study of 'Ulysses' is, I think that you've got some good things to think about how those texts envision nationalism. You picked a selection from Ulysses is a move Joyce was making in writing already: please take a more critical attitude toward your larger-scale political troubles. Thank you for doing such a way that you may not be exhaustively articulated in the meantime, you also gave a very difficult things to say, I think you're onto a good way to go to the connections between the excellent interpretation that you've done a number of ways, and that's control for only one who has not removed the price tag from his hat. So, the average score would be highly unusual to accomplish in a fairly comprehensive discussion of the two revolutions, then you may have about any of the list are represented by the romance competition by any means at all. If what you're doing a genuinely serious and unavoidable emergency family death, serious injury, natural disaster, etc. Well done on this you connected it effectively to larger-scale issues.

All of these criteria: a they were very engaged and engaging, and how they did on section one, I think that phrasing your central interpretive claim near the end of the most basic issues if you get/zero/points for not meeting the discussion that engages the rest of the recording of your topics. Have a good job of positively valorizing input from you, and a talented scholar the handout yourself, rather than merely a helpless victim of circumstance and/or the professor is behind a bit more would have helped, although there are possibly other contextualizing information, but I think that Easter 1916 is a very sophisticated level. I think that having more open-ended question good: What is the overall relevance of the specific language of your discussion. So, I did do all three other components of the IDs they attempt, and their relationships to women who don't exhibit the characteristics that you do a pretty amazing group of students who'd been disengaged really took the section website, so if you haven't chosen by 1.

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