#as the Entity has tried to imply to Herman every now and then: I am not real
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To the anonymous commenter of Descent Into Folly Chapter 10
(Descent Into Folly spoilers)
[ID: screenshot of the first comments on Descent Into Folly Chapter 10
Box 1: comment by Anonymous, timestamped Sat 13 Feb 2021 11:27PM +08
“You’d think a doctor would know better than to use the pull out method. Wonder if there’s gonna be any complications / consequences for that. I know there’s not many chapters yet but something has to happen to explain her absence in the game. Lovely chapter as always and definitely worth the wait. But also very excited for more. One question: if Herman wanted to see her face during the act, why did he change to doggy style last second?“
Box 2: comment by Fishfootidentity (the author), timestamped Sun 14 Feb 2021 5:29PM +08
“1. He wants to demonstrate how much control he has over his body. It's a large part of how I've written him - or maybe I didn't emphasise that as much as I thought.
2. Sonya's absence? Other than the fact that she is a fan-made character and not from canon lore, answering this now would be spoiling the final four chapters.
3. I woke up deprived of sleep when I first read this comment, and if I had not seen the line just before, this last question made me feel like deleting my whole work. As mentioned in my pre-note, this was almost how I pictured the scene back in January 2020 when it came to me. + Don't people have random thoughts during sex that they end up not carrying out? Or is that only something that came up through my ADD-minded writing?”
Box 3: comment by Anonymous, timestamped Mon 15 Feb 2021 6:22AM +08
“I'm so sorry, I didn't mean to sound so critical. I'm just meant, even if he has control, there is some sperm in precum and you can still get STDs from the contact. I know she's not real but a girl can dream. I just mean that we know there's not a happy ending so something has to happen. I'm genuinely sorry, it is never my intention to make someone feel bad about their work, especially not an author whose work I admire. You write brilliantly, whether its smut of fluff or plot or character. Thank you for sharing your fic with us.“
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I got shot in the chest and taken away from Herman’s lab to the Entity’s realm. I imagine chances of conception are low considering the shock I entered, and I’ve never been to a gynecologist to confirm whether or not I have fertility issues.
Are you happy now, Anon? How do you think diseases work in the Entity’s realm? Unless they are the Plague’s infection, things like sore throat, fever, and high blood pressure are not conducive to Trials.
I am not the Entity, but I know the Entity is weird. It is more real than the Devil, I’d tell you that.
#Sonya Nourn#Descent Into Folly#as the Entity has tried to imply to Herman every now and then: I am not real#it's a fucking fanfiction not a sex ed guide#the author still cries every time they remember the first comment#long post#DIF spoilers
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