#and realised that the goddamn Amazon horse technically counts as a temporary external narrator. who kicks your ass.
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Underrated thing in fiction is the narrator being an external entity who decides to absolutely kick your sorry ass into the curb. Alternatively, you kick the narrator's ass.
#doesn't need to be external for the whole duration of the story#like usually if the narrator is a separate thing then it IS present in that form from the beginning to the end#think Stan//ley Parab//le; Sl//ay Th//e Prin//cess; DS//AF; technically Cupid (though this is like... questionable#since yes the narrator is a whole other person but it is 1) YOU 2) a person technically present in the narrative as opposed to literally#being The Narrator#but anyway I wrote this post literally just because I thought about the fucked up voiced 'Poor you! Caged and misunderstood!'#and realised that the goddamn Amazon horse technically counts as a temporary external narrator. who kicks your ass.#or like. that's the thing. NOT technically. more like vibe-wise. the horse is not a narrator. there is no narrator who is its own#entity. but for a short duration of time the horse almost feels like it. the horse has every mark of a narrative entity coming down from the#heavens to tell your sorry ass that you suck shit and that they aren't paid enough for this
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