#about 150 pages in and giiiiiirl. what

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just a testament to how poor the writing is 😭. that lightning thief echidna scene went SO HARD. this is pure shit. you could have made it hardcore. it was a direct parallel. it was RIIIIIGHT there for the taking. echidna dares percy to jump off the arch. she's responsible for nico getting dragged to tartarus. but the WRITING. Is PISS POOR