#I had to fix a bit that was bugging me 🐛

[honeymoonbeams]

♥️ Oh Sunshine, look at you… ♥️

[stygiansun-totaleclipse]

Get ready for a longass ask. You did this to yourself.

I fucking loved every second of your writing. You are incredibly talented. I hate that you made me cry again because i had to start from the beginning 😭

It gets me everytime!

As for the update i should maybe be concerned because your sense of humor is ridiculous 🤣🤣🤣

I love it. I took screenshots of the... wood... dialog to my friend and was like why does this sound like some shit you'd say. I laughed so much seriously the banter between everyone is wonderful and the snap backs even more so.

I loved the ❤️ options too and i take back everything i said about Farah. She's just a sad little girl that's afraid of losing more than she ever actually should have in the first place.

I'm so obsessed with your world it's crazy.

Also... yeah really wonder just what our dearest advisor wants in the library after reading about our family history.... very curious indeed. 👀

I'm tryna keep things vague as to not spoil anything for anyone else because it really is an experience. And a great one. I did find one little bug I'll attach below and just crop as to not spoil once again.

You should really be proud fen because you truly create such an immersive reading experience, and i thank u for that! ❤️

Thank you so much!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️ I'm really happy you liked it!

Sorry (not) for making you cry again but at least I made you laugh to balance it out?? :D

As for the update i should maybe be concerned because your sense of humor is ridiculous 🤣🤣🤣

I literally keep an entire document in my notes on my phone full of possible stupid/deranged dialogue and interactions whenever I think of them so...yes you probably should be concerned lol

I took screenshots of the… wood… dialog to my friend and was like why does this sound like some shit you'd say.

Aurynn 🤝 your friend <- walking innuendos

putting the rest under a cut cuz I included some spoilers ->

I feel like Farah got a bad rep with a lot of people since a lot of context for her freak out was missing without part 2 so it came across as more brattish to some, but hopefully I was able to make it clearer why she reacted like that? :) she's young and lashed out bc she's terrified she's losing everyone. She spent years being largely alone with her siblings always away and her parents often too busy for her, and after losing 4 siblings to war, her mother to grief, her only friend to a fight, her father to work, and what she thought would be her remaining siblings, she got pretty hysterical. But she feels terrible about it and will want to make it up to mc. :)

Also… yeah really wonder just what our dearest advisor wants in the library after reading about our family history…. very curious indeed. 👀

Aurynn: "Purely coincidental. There are thousands of tomes sealed in that vault. Don't you think you're reading a bit too much into this? Like I said--I just wanted to look over their collection on deviant illusion magic. You'd be surprised how hard it is to find tomes on deviant magic. It's not all that common, you know?"

Also, that bug 🐛 should be fixed now--thanks for reporting it!

Thank you for playing through the update and taking the time to share your thoughts!! I really appreciate it and I'm glad you liked it!! ❤️❤️❤️ :D

[villainintern]

You land sprawling, teeth clacking together before you can even get out an "unhand me, fool!, shouldn’t it be Unhand me, fool? 

Peter straightens his tie, looking a little… evasive. "I'm with human resources."  what do u have to hide there Peter 

[ BUSTY TELEPATH KNOWS WHAT YOU LIKE <3 ]  oh my god, I NEED THIS IN MY LIFE ASAP

"What?[/i}", is the sharp response. "That can't- there's no hero on registry who can- okay, well don't do anything rash!", she orders. "I need to find the doctor. And don't let her leave! Do you hear me? Keep her there!" There's a clattering from her end of the line. 

Caroline pops her tongue. "Ladies," she sneers. "This stopped entertaining me fifteen years ago. I'll remind you both that I'm with HR. Let's avoid a writeup, hmm?"  Ladies?? Isn’t Dr Shrink a man tho???

"And of course, there's also a clear limit to the force {R_heshe}'s able to exert on objects. To compression, speed." She smiles. "If there wasn't, she could've blown a pair of balled-up socks right through your chest." all the bugs, one funny comment i had to share with u for now, i'll probably check the fight more closely SOONish

Bugs/grammar fixed!! THANK YOUU !!!! 🐛🐛 I would never spot these on my own so this is always super clutch. Laughing at ur commentss

The "ladies" bit is meant to be Caroline's sexist dig at Dr. Shrink, she means it in a belittling way. If it reads more like an error though I'll tweak it!