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I think what bothers me most about this is that there's an adjacent argument to this, the "ok so what's the solution?" style of writing
making good hope-centric content basically DEMANDS you go through the hard task of actually showing a route to solving a social problem and building up communities, which crucially still requires acknowledging problems in the world as a starting point
You want to know what game has the vibes this poster wants and still does something material to solve a problem? Say No More!
It's a game about solving workplace disputes by telling coworkers and your bosses No and stay within your duties as a worker.
It's a shallow exploration of it, meant more for meme potential and Quirk:tm: factor, but fuck at least it's SOMETHING and provides actionable advice.
A game like this has to get you hyped up to do something good for the world, not soothe or settle you into inaction.
I hope the "What if Disco Elysium was about a witch finding her cat in the mountains" post never leaves the gaming discourse vernacular. It will never not be funny to me bc it's got all the Gamer Entitlementā¢ levels of CoD bros throwing hissy fits about "woke" shit but instead of being couched in far right reactionism it's the exact kind of "Kingdom of Conscience" style liberal outrage at anything with conviction and beliefs that DE waxed on about. Like even chuds who get mad that the game calls you out for being racist interact with the themes of DE better and understand them more than Cat Lady did.
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Vibrator!Anon you made me write this too for some reason lol. Not coherent but I figured Iād share it anyway. More random boys objectifying Art and him (and Patrick) losing his mind over it.
CW: 18+ !NSFW! Bimbofication
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The thing about Art that really drives Patrick crazy is how empty headed he gets when heās horny. Generally Art is a very smart and competent person but when his dick is hard itās like he goes brain dead. And suddenly heās silly, dumb, sluttystupid.
Once Patrick made him wear a bra under his uniform during their state doubles final.
āJust a training bra since youāre starting to blossom into such a beautiful girl,ā Patrick teased at breakfast. Art kicked him hard under the table scowling (which fair, but it wasnāt Patrickās fault he was bad at bowling).
The match goes well until midway through the second set when Patrick basically becomes the only functioning player. And Art for some (obvious) reason ends up in lala land. They still win. The other team didnāt really stand a chance.
The whole match Patrickās hard and itās fueling him. He doesnāt slow down for one second immediately after the match, when he shoves himself into the bathroom stall and jerks it so hard and fast that he gets light headed as he comes.
And then thereās Art.
The other guys on their team tease him for losing the bet. They lift his shirt to see the bra. Tell him his tits look good. One of them even goes as far as to push Art up against the locker and pretend to kiss him. And maybe Patrick never shouldāve blabbed about it to them. Heās only got his stupid big mouth to blame for why Artās all flushed as they tease him. Flustered and dizzy andā¦ horny. Patrick can read it all over him after countless nights in their dorm room āmessing around.ā
Art goes silly. Barely able to focus. Itās like heās drunk. Dropping things. Canāt find his towel, canāt find his phone, cant figure out how to re-wrap his racket. āI think I wanna shower at home.ā He says distractedly.
āYou should be in the girls locker room,ā one of their classmates teases and pinches his nipple even though heās not wearing the bra any more. āShuddup,ā Art says, pushing him off. The guy just laughs and tries to grab the other one.
Patrick knows Art is steps away from touching himself, the real reason he needs to go back to the dorm. Itās lucky he wore briefs or everyone would see it the way Patrick can. That he canāt stand still, canāt sit still.
Patrick has to do everything for him. Pack up his rackets, and his clothes, and all his gear. Everything. While he sits there, dumb pretty, eyes glassy, fingering the lace bra and flirting with their teammates as they objectify him.
The only openly gay kid on the team smirks at Patrick after he gets away with calling Art pretty, fingers tangled in his hair and Arts following the touch.
Patrick rolls his eyes. āCome on, letās go Art,ā he snaps, only mildly irritated at how fucking easy Art is right now.
āYeah letās go,ā Art says, getting to his feet. Eyes dilated, not a coherent thought in his head.
āPick up your bag,ā Patrick says, slowly like heās talking to a kindergartener.
āOh,ā Art laughs.
Hell Patrick even has to guide Art back to the room because Art has no idea where he is or whatās going on.
Itās not until heās fucking into Patricks fist up against their bedroom door that he feels like a real boy again. Whining and rambling that heās so sorry about how he played but itās all Patricks fault for making him wear lace. Because he couldnāt focus because of the way it moved over his nipples. And he didnāt know they were so sensitive. And honestly, neither did Patrick.
So Patrick starts licking, teasing, abusing them just to be rewarded with the prettiest sounds heās ever heard Art or anyone make.
And Art finishes sloppy in Patrickās hand, on the floor on Patrickās t-shirt. Desperate and panting. Mirroring what Patrick did in the bathroom stall right after the game.
āYou really do have the prettiest tits,ā Patrick teases, licking his fingers.
āām not doing that again,ā Art says, much more lucid.
Patrick smirks. āThen next time I guess you better win.ā
#artrick#challengers#challengers 2024#patrick zweig#art donaldson#challengers fic#challengers smut#art x patrick#anon ask#anon answered
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After I finish Veilguard I think I'm gonna play other RPGs rather than replaying this bc I miss having disparity in stories and good writing. It doesn't give me motivation to replay the game bc no matter what I choose a dialogue it will still have the same outcome.
#sorry but I have to agree with Luke Stephens. Veilguard is not an RPG but a friend group simulator#I STILL think the game is good but the WRITING IS SO BASIC and the story lacks disparity š#pat rambles#dragon age#dragon age the veilguard#datv#dav#da: the veilguard#veilguard critical
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I understand the miscommunication now. However, there is a difference between saying "I never played the 2000s games that gave closure to ShTH, and I like how SXSG handled things" and
I think what I appreciate most about Shadow Generations is just that it gives Shadow ACTUAL, CANON closure for his struggle between good and evil.
If you missed out on the games, fair enough, it happens. Personally, I played Heroes and ShTH some years before Adventure 2, and it shaped my perception of Shadow. But if you put it in an objective way, as in, "Shadow never got proper closure before", then I would say "no, he did, multiple times, here's proof - you may not like the writing, but it still happened".
I didn't even talk about '06 itself because I am not going to think about its place in the canon timeline lol. But in a meta sense, it counts for my point: we players experienced Shadow's story and how it precisely exists to show us "look, he has moved on, he can no longer be swayed or manipulated, he knows who he is and what he's fighting for". Sure, the events with Mephiles didn't happen or he forgot, but that game still counted as closure to us after playing ShTH.
I really like that Shadow Gens doesn't emphasize his promise to Maria - he's not doing this out of obligation, but because he chooses to.
It's true that Shadow doesn't talk about his old promise, it's good and shows that he has grown. To be fair, though, another reason for this could be that the story is much more focused on Shadow's biology and ties to Black Doom than his relationship with the world (plus, it wouldn't make sense for him to tell Maria he had promised her to make people happy when she hasn't died yet lol). And, this is an issue I have with the part where Shadow briefly contemplates to stop Rouge and use Chaos Control to freeze Maria and Gerald in White Space: the fact that he has to be told to let them go is still, conceptually, Shadow needing Maria as moral guidance.
As for the mandate bit, I'm aware Boom isn't canon and Forces shows Shadow cares about his team (shout out to their banter in Team Sonic Racing for backing it up as well); I was more referring to the general 2010's vibe. Once you get past 2010, Shadow appears in Generations, where he just wants to "finish" Sonicā¦ And then nothing until Forces, with everything extracurricular from Boom and IDW (while not being strictly canon) pointing to Sega and the writersā¦ not treating his character well.
I disagree. I don't think it makes sense to talk about "general vibe", when the list of Shadow's appearances in the 2010s is so small they can be dissected one by one. Once you remove Boom, which again doesn't count at all as Boom Shadow is a different character from main Shadow (or you might as well argue that the 2010s as a whole turned Knuckles into an illiterate Kronk-like idiot or Eggman into a softie who is frenemies with Sonic), his portrayals in the games are generally decent, with perhaps the one exception of Free Riders where everyone was a dick for no reason lol. Speaking of Gens, sure Shadow challenges Sonic out of nowhere, but then he cheers for him to defeat the Eggmen and then even sticks around for his birthday, so he's not just "the Vegeta" as he has been described since then.
We can argue that Shadow was used very sparingly in the 2010s, which is true. The 2010s were a response to the backlash of the 2000s, and one of the complaints was precisely that Shadow stole the spotlight, along with all the "shitty friends", so they all took several seats back. The reason I insisted that Boom and IDW don't count is that they aren't canon, they shouldn't be used as proof to talk about the character, and they aren't proof of how SEGA sees the character - although they certainly didn't have an iron grip on the external writers except for some basic guidelines, and maybe they should have. I think we are still feeling the consequences of the series stumbling 10 years ago (that 2013-2017 gap was painful), and the fandom growing sour because of it.
I don't think SXSG is a bad game. I have a couple of complaints with Shadow's writing, but they mostly stem with how the story uses him, other than that I can see they tried to make him sound like he did in '06 and he works. My issue is wider: I would like these characters to move on and stop clinging onto games that are by now older than the average fan. We had Frontiers which mostly retreaded character arcs that we have seen in Sonic Adventure, way back in 1998; and now we got SXSG, which was a long, long way to tell us "hey remember ShTH? Now Shadow is tired of BD's shit. Here's a reminder of that game's twist regarding Shadow's biology, but he doesn't care. Also he still misses Maria." So I'm here like... the older games are there. Shadow's multi-game arc is there. Couldn't you have just re-released them? Couldn't you have announced a sale for SA2 on Steam? Or ported Heroes and ShTH, which would have been appreciated by a good chunk of the fandom? SXSG may be fun to play and a testament of ST learning lessons on level design and gameplay style, but the game itself was not the point of the experience, right? It's for newcomers attracted by the incoming movie to get an idea of who Shadow is. I understand and respect that I am not the target audience here. But that doesn't mean the older games are suddenly invalid or should be forgotten.
i guess tl;dr please port shth and battle and then let's write new scenarios for the cast
(Spoilers for Shadow Generations)
I think what I appreciate most about Shadow Generations is just that it gives Shadow ACTUAL, CANON closure for his struggle between good and evil.
By the end of Adventure 2, he remembered his promise to Maria and made his choice to save the world, but then he "dies".
When Heroes revives him, he doesn't remember any of that.
His namesake game (and I say this as gently as possible), as cool as the multiple endings were, feels so unsatisfying. We get to see Shadow's potential for good and evil, sure, but then the true canon ending comes, and it doesn't specify what he did (or even what exactly he remembered about his past) to get there, and then he just decides not to let his past control him. Which isn't a terrible direction on paper, but the symbolism of him literally throwing away a picture of his family just seems... Like the opposite of what made this character appealing in the first place?
And from there, the games kept giving mixed signals. Sonic '06 shows how deeply he and Team Dark come to care for each other, but then its events get literally removed from the timeline. Sega begins to pretend that Team Dark aren't even friends in their mandates for a while (despite the fact they clearly care for each others' wellbeing before anybody else's). Shadow becomes practically a popsicle stick puppet for "angry, serious, violent rival", and they never feel a need to explain his motivations or reactions beyond waving at that four word character description again.
Shadow's appeal (at least to me) was never that he was a character who didn't care about anything - it was that he cared very deeply, actually. (Someone who nearly lets the world be destroyed as revenge for losing his family is the exact opposite of someone who doesn't care!) He may not be cheerful, he may be quiet and stern, he may have a temper and be capable of terrible things if he isn't careful, but he isn't heartless.
And Shadow Generations FINALLY got it right, I feel.
There's now no doubt that he remembers his past, and that it did matter to him. It still does, in fact, and we're dropping the idea that he'll move on from it like it never happened. That's not how tragedy works.
But he will be able to move forward.
He has finally, WITHOUT GETTING AMNESIA, IN THE CANON TIMELINE, gotten to become the hero Maria wanted him to be.
That doesn't mean his story's over: I'm sure they can still find adventures to send him on. And that doesn't mean he needs any kind of complete personality overhaul, either. He can still be more aggressive than Team Sonic, and more stern, and maybe even more willing to resort to questionable methods to fight next week's bad guy.
But all of Team Dark has gotten to acknowledge that they do, in fact, care for each other, even if their attitudes aren't as chummy as Team Sonic.
Shadow has gotten to hear from his family that they are proud of him, weird alien DNA and all, and that even though he will have to go the rest of his long life without them, their love will always go with him, and give him the strength he needs to overcome any of his darker parts.
Shadow having a darker edge than Sonic and Shadow being a hero are things that can and SHOULD coexist, and I'm so glad we finally got to see it for him without it getting wiped from canon or his own memories again.
#sonic the hedgehog#long post#naturally nothing against you and i'm happy we can discuss civilly :)#i obv didn't mean to attack you or ruin your enjoyment for sxsg#i just noticed some things in your original post that made me go 'no wait this isn't right'#and i guess any occasion is a good occasion to gush about shth lol#i do wish they'd port the 2000s games now that the fandom is yearning for them#it's still clinging onto the past but it's different than going 'hey remember this? good times right?'#we went through the nostalgia era in the 2010s but for the classics c'mon
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My normal PSA:
I'm just posting my random poly relationship headcannons. I include MC, but I don't give many (if any) headcannons for MC due to the nature of the game being MC=you. These are just silly HC I thought of randomly. Hopefully you enjoy? I do occasionally swear in my Headcannons or make minor pop culture references. I also don't consider gender when using a gendered descriptor to get a silly point across (for example, Sylus is a wine Aunt. Aunt refers to a female individual, but used to portray a stereotype even though referring to a man). I think that really covers my headcannon style.
I do take requests, I will write for pretty much any lads ship, I will block underage accounts because I am an adult and I will post NSFW stuff.
Driving together/Who sits where? HC
Zayne:
- He is the driver... He knows he is the safest driver and will actually obey the street laws so he refuses to let anyone else drive when they are all traveling in a group.
- He is actually not a huge fan of driving, but he knows it's for the best if he drives
- kinda works out because he can get carsick, so having to focus on the road and driving helps him distract himself from the carsickness.
- buys a phone holder for his car because he can't trust Rafayel anymore to navigate.
- bought everyone phone charges that he keeps in the car
- "I'm the one always driving I get the final say in what car we buy" most interested in the actual specs of the car
- The few times he doesn't drive he and Sylus will swap and he will sit behind the driver seat.
- if he is not driving he will usually either be resting or watch Xavier play handheld games.
- he likes the windows cracked just a little bit
- keeps a spare blanket in the car for long trips
- phone is the second to die on a road trip, since now he has navigation pulled up the whole time
Rafayel:
- Passenger Princess. He sits front passenger side
- In exchange for the rights to the aux chord he has accepted his role as navigator. Although he is not good at it and it low-key drives Zayne crazy. He will pull Google maps up on his phone type in the address. Forget to start navigation before immediately going to his music app and plugging in the aux cord.
- mute Google maps so that it doesn't interrupt his music causing Zayne to miss the exit like 3 times
- but all is fixed now since Zayne got a phone holder.
- cannot sit normally in the car seat. Has the seatbelt tucked under is arm, leaning over the arm rest with one leg tucked under his butt. Or he is slouched so far down in the seat he can put his legs on the dash. Or he is leaning over the center console to talk to the boys in the back, fully twisted around basically not in his seat anymore with one leg fully on the seat propping him up over the center consult or the backrest FULLY turned around.
- constantly singing and dancing in his seat
- always showing Sylus and MC whatever dumb shit is on his phone (Xavier is usually asleep, when he isn't he will show Xavier)
- phone will always be the first to die on the car ride so he now just immediately plugs in when he gets in the car.
- only requirement for the car was heated seats
- usually the first person to get to the car and always has the car keys so he can just let himself in before giving the keys to Zayne when he gets to the car.
- he will leave his door open just so Sylus can shut it for him.
- Still calls "dibs" on front seat even though it's not a debate at this point.
- windows all the way down
Sylus:
- Sits behind Zayne on the driver side
- made sure that the car they got had a spacious back seat and cup holders. He was the second pickiest when choosing the car behind Zayne
- ended up buying a car for everyone because he can, and he wanted to appease everyone's desires
- Chats a lot with Rafayel since they are kiddy-corner from each other.
- will put his arm around Xavier so he can pull him over to his shoulder if he falls asleep so he doesn't slam into MC or crush MC
- sometimes it's just a sleep train MC on Xavier, Xavier on Sylus.
- The only one who can Sweet talk Zayne into switching so he can drive and give Zayne a break. "I promise I won't speed. Scouts honor. I'll be on my best behavior"
- holds the door open for the backseat crew and guides them in (like a gentleman), and closes the door for them when they settle in (he gets Rafayels door too) before he walks to the other side to get in himself.
- tinted windows all the way up, or maybe just a crack
- his phone will usually survive the trip unless he needs to make a lot of phone calls or watch a lot of secret camera footage that sent to his phone.
- casually just making huge moves in the the underground world on his phone. Like "oh yeah I just bought the whole stock of this underground auction." Just on a Tuesday afternoon car ride with the fam.
Xavier:
- He gets the back middle so if he falls asleep he can rest on Sylus or MC
- When he is not sleeping he will usually have some handheld game system he will play
- sometimes he gets a small headache which he can't ever tell if it is car sickness or if he is just dehydrated
- likes to look out the window sometimes and space out, so he is always waaaay in Sylus or MCs space
- tinted windows all the way up
- if he didn't bring a handheld game, he will play on his phone and his will be the third phone to die on the trip.
- the most chill passenger really. No notes.
MC:
- You get backseat behind Rafayel on the passenger side.
- You have full view of all your beautiful boys in this spot and you get to look out the window! Win-win
- it can get a little cramped if Xavier wants to look out the window or if he falls asleep.
- oftentimes Rafayel will turn all the way around in his seat just to talk to you.
- You also get full view of Zaynes frustrations... Poor guy
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How could you pull off AiIchi??? This shocks me because you said once that you can't see them as anything but platonic. How would a relationship between them even work in your eyes? I'm intrigued. (my favourite ship is Koyonagi/Ichigo by the way, your OCs are just... impeccable. But I would forever and always read any ship you write.)
Tbf I said that back when I hadn't tried my hand at writing Aizen yet as anything more than the villain, cuz before that, Aizen basically only served as the major antagonist in every one of my Bleach fics lol. Also I think TYBW had just come out/I hadn't really looked that deeply into the plot, so I def couldn't see AiIchi working, romantically or platonically. The main reason I grew more interested in their dynamic was because of the character development Kubo gave Aizen in TYBW.
Like look at this beautiful scene:
I just feel like Aizen was both more human and a little humbled by the time TYBW rolled around, and it was Ichigo who changed his perspective. It's not like he's suddenly a good guy or anything, but I could see him and Ichigo slowly connecting with each other. And when it comes down to it, those two actually aren't so different.
And after I did get into TYBW, I wrote the Ichigo & Aizen TBTP time travel AU, and they are platonic there, and then I wrote the UraIchi + potential future UraIchiAi fic, so now I can probably swing it if the fic happens to develop that way.
But like I said for this AU, Aizen would need his future memories for it to be an AiIchi end game, esp since this is an AU where they had an extended Quincy War so they would've had like eight extra years fighting together. They weren't friends by the end of it but they had something of an understanding at least. As it is, I'm still not sure whether I want to make him an ally or just have Ichigo and Starrk kill him off. Like on one hand, he would be really useful against Yhwach, basically the three of them would be the major powerhouses in that conflict, but at the same time, idk how to get from current Point A to future Point B without the whole memories thing.
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YAPPING AHEAD !!
Hello mutual (on my main acc šš) I fucking agree with you. Horror isn't a good person (and also 'big axe guy'), which is why people might put him in along with the bad sanses. But I do agree he shouldn't be there. I HC he believes Nightmare is fucking stupid and he wouldn't benefit at all in a partnership with him.
Plus, his universe is still intact at all. And I think he has a strong sense of responsibility? I didn't know that much about his canon self. Either way, I've also heard somewhere he also has a very very high ego, and he's fucking bored. I think the only plausible reason for him to join Nightmare is either: 1. Nightmare offers him something good enough for his world, 2. Horror is just that bored; both of which were unlikely, because Horror might be too prideful to even work under someone like Nightmare.
But to Nightmare, Horror is just... Negativity fodder. Horror himself, we may argue, isn't as strong/'useful' as Dust and Killer. Nightmare might visit Horrortale a lot just to soak in the juicy negativity. But I don't think Nightmare feels like he would benefit from Horror.
As a Dust/Murder Sans fan who knows about his canon about 80% but base my entire interpretation of him from old fangamesā Would like to yap about it š
(note that everyone is iirc. Correct me if I'm wrong)
The thing about canon Murder is that he actually isn't interested in power, he's more interested in stopping the human (basically obsessed about it). Just it turns out that gaining power IS the way to stop the human; so he did what he did.
Murder is also, very emphasized, to only care about his world and his only. With this we can safely assume he doesn't give a fuck to other timelines that can diverge from his. And other alternate universes. He firmly believes in this one thingā that is his choice to become 'The Hero Of This World'. So he wouldn't be easily swayed nor bought. Like Horror, he also would refuse Nightmare immediately.
However that's canon Murder. I also like to say 'Fuck canon' (sorry canon-enjoyer mutuals). And this is my new opinion at Murder Sans:
Let's say he did managed to stop the human. What comes after? Is he just going to lay around miserably with no one to talk to but his own hallucinations? Or will he continue to kill? But there's nobody left to kill.
I'm implementing the player mindset on him. As an Undertale player (who beat genocide thrice, man, Murder would beat my ass), I kinda had this urge to 'Finish the job'. We're at LV10? Go to LV15. We're already at LV15? ...LV20, then. And I think that inherently Murder thinks like this is some big game to him. And the megalomaniac in him wants more LOVE.
Also this HC that he thinks strength is the utmost important. Without strength you cannot protect anything. Which might be a strong enough motive for him to join Nightmare. But that can only happen if, IF the human has been defeated. Because otherwise Murder has different priorities.
I wrote a (shitty) crossdust fic (which I don't like) but it does describe what I think Murder thinks about Nightmare and his motives to join the bad sanses:
"Murder is never interested in this fate, nor does he ever feel inclined to indulge in Nightmare's ludicrous fantasy and ambitions. He was only interested in the promises of LOVE; a small, miniscule part of his soul screamed for him to stop, but the megalomaniac heard the voices of his dead brother resonate in his skull (kill them all, like you killed all of us, he said, he repeated)."
Cringe writing I know. But that sums it up.
Okay I'm sorry for rambling. Bye bye bye šš
Why I think Horror shouldn't be part of the Bad Sanses
[cw: Long yapping, iām a mediocre fan of Horror and Dust, dadmare and bad sans poly fans this one isn't for you]
@howlsofbloodhounds @what-have-i-unleashed
note: If you disagree with me, feel free to discuss the matter! Just don't be rude and respect my views on this!
I might get torn apart by my mutuals for this, but... I don't think Horror should be part of the "Bad Sanses" (or the bad guys, as some people have referred to them), especially if we're talking about Nightmare as the āleaderā of the group (more like a cult leader but whatever).
I'll clear up any confusion about MTT choosing to work for Nightmare ā no, they wouldn't choose that. None of them would make such a foolish, dumb decision. They're all too clever to willingly serve someone as arrogant and cruel as Nightmare.
To support my point, Iād like to say that, in my opinion, it makes sense for both Killer and Dust to be manipulated by Nightmare. Killerās situation is pretty clear ā not only does his canon show that heās forced to work for Nightmare, but his whole history with Chara makes him the perfect victim for Nightmare to shape to his own will. That being said, I wonāt go into too much detail about their troubled and extremely toxic "relationship" (Iām using the word "relationship" here because thereās no better term for this situation that I can think of for now).
And what about Dust? Okay, confession time: Iāve never seen any canon facts about him. Donāt throw stones at me ā I know my charm is being a mediocre fan of these multiversal skeletons.
Unlike Killer, Dust probably didnāt even realize he was being manipulated by the devil. He already knew all the possibilities of a reset, all the choices the human could make ā so why not take the one time in life chance to escape that world and boost his LOVE? A little more LOVE would definitely put an end to the endless resets. With enough LOVE, the human could finally be defeated! All he needed to do was increase his LV just a bit more and then return to his world before the human reset.
But before he knew it, he was already trapped in Nightmareās filthy claws, unable to return to his world and stop the human from advancing through their endless genocidal routes. (Shoutout to my mutual @what-have-i-unleashed and their amazing post that I canāt seem to find, about the headcanon that Nightmare is a dream eater, and that itās by eating Dustās dreams that they end up meeting. [Iām not sure if thatās exactly what it was, but I trust my memory.]).
However, all he did was make it easier for Nightmare's sweet words to slip into his mind, twisting his thoughts into believing that Nightmare was a friend. My headcanon is that, after recruiting Killer, Nightmare chose to take a more āāāāpeacefulāāāā approach to "recruit" his next servants.
Now, the point that made me want to write this post: why the hell would Nightmare choose Horror? Killer and Dust's worlds are basically universes on the verge of collapse, with no real reason to keep going. But Horror? His universe isnāt even close to ending; a new chapter just began with the fall of a new human (something extremely rare when compared to other timelines). It wouldnāt make sense for Nightmare to want to recruit someone whoās so deeply rooted in a place ā and someone who would never abandon his brother to follow a cheap, terrifying version of himself.
Letās be honest, out of the three, Horror would probably be the first to turn down any deal Nightmare might offer ā both of them are way too manipulative to trust each other. And unlike Killer and Dust, Horror would definitely be unpredictable for Nightmare (he literally tortures Aliza just for fun! What wouldnāt he do to pass the time and be less bored?). Plus, he has no real use for Nightmare (ouch, sorry Horror fans).
His LOVE, no matter how high it is compared to the average Sans, still doesnāt come close to the extremely high LOVE that Killer and Dust possess. And while he might be bigger than other Sanses, he definitely has the most fragile, cracked, and scarred bones ā wounds that even the strongest healing magic canāt repair. For Nightmare, Horror is probably just a bucket of negative emotions ā his AU is merely a smorgasbord for Nightmare, nothing more.
#dsevalyappuccino#hcs#dust sans#bad sanses#yeah i rambled#i hope my thoughts came across properly#because im not good with organising them#either way#just for fun#put horror in the bad sanses there is nothing wrong with it#it sounds funny
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under the eclipse | 7dream
š¦¹Ā°ā§ pairing: read and find out! (or read the tags but it will spoil everything lol!)
š¦¹Ā°ā§ genre: angst! angst! did i say angst? yeah basically lots of drama
š¦¹Ā°ā§ word count: 15k šāāļø
š¦¹Ā°ā§ cw: infedelity!!, internalized homophobia, swearing, they will fight! a lot! so just know that, haechan really suck :(, jeno is not so kind :( yeah
- the story is clearly referring to the film āPerfect Strangersā directed by Paolo Genovese. i watched some nights ago and thought i couldnāt not write it with dreamies :) i just love drama. hope you enjoy it!
summary: a group of old friends gets together for dinner. one of them proposes a game, where everyone shares every text and call they receive during the day with each other, causing secrets to surface under the eclipse.
authorās note! this work is purely fiction and it isnāt meant to romanticize any of the thing it portrays. also I am not implying any likeness between the characterization here of the characters to their real life counterparts. all the rights goes to the author of the āperfect strangersā story, i just added my personal taste to it.
Mark adjusted the heat under the saucepan, stirring the sauce with slow, methodical movements. Across the kitchen island, Yunhee was slicing tomatoes with quiet focus, pausing now and then to glance up at him.
āLong day?ā she asked, brushing the diced tomatoes into a bowl.
Mark gave a short, dry laugh. āLong doesnāt begin to cover it. Three consultations back-to-back. Everyone seems to be preparing for the new year with a new face.ā He smirked, shaking his head. āI donāt think Iāll ever get used to the idea of people investing so much in a jawline.ā
Yunhee smiled, her gaze soft. āMaybe theyāre hoping a fresh face will mean a fresh start. Thereās a reason people obsess over appearances, you know.ā She leaned closer, a glint of curiosity in her eyes. āThey believe itās a fix for something deeper.ā
He set down the wooden spoon, his expression thoughtful. āDo you really think thatās what it is?ā
She nodded, her voice low, like she was sharing a secret. āI see it every day. People come to me believing thereās a magic answer to their unhappiness, and sometimes they think itās found in somethingāor someoneāoutside themselves. In a new face, or a new job, or a new relationship.ā
Mark watched her, feeling a familiar, quiet admiration. He stepped around the island and leaned in, pressing a gentle kiss to her forehead. She closed her eyes, savoring the touch, then looked up at him, and their eyes met.
āYou ever wonder if weāre justā¦ treating symptoms?ā he asked softly. āThat weāre both just polishing the surface?ā
Yunhee smiled, reaching up to brush her thumb along his cheek. āSometimes, yes. But sometimes, even the smallest shift can mean a lot to someone. We help them see themselves differently, in whatever way we can.ā
He pulled her in, their lips meeting in a slow, familiar kiss, the world outside the kitchen momentarily forgotten. When they finally pulled back, they lingered close, eyes locked.
They shared a warm smile, the familiarity of their daily banter wrapping around them. Yunhee took a sip of wine, leaning in a little closer as she asked, āAre you looking forward to tonight?ā
He shrugged, feigning nonchalance. āSure. Just hope everyoneās up for a good time. Chenle is also bringing is new girlfriend right? Thatās awesome. Hope we stay out of drama today, we need to make a good impression or sheāll ran away like the others.ā
She chuckled, nudging him with her elbow. āSince when have our friends ever managed a night without drama?ā
Mark laughed, opening his mouth to respond.
āIām afraid youāre rightā¦as always.ā
Chinsun balanced her phone between her shoulder and ear, rummaging through her purse with one hand while listening intently. āYes, Mrs. Kim, I understand. Keep Pepper calm, and try the ointment I recommended. If heās still limping tomorrow, call me first thing, okay?ā
Haechan watched her from across the room, a mischievous grin spreading over his face. He tiptoed over and wrapped his arms around her waist from behind, pressing his lips to her neck. She stifled a laugh, glancing back at him with a playful scowl.
āYes, I promise, itās perfectly safe for him. Justāoh!ā She clamped her mouth shut as Haechanās hands roamed up her waist, pulling her closer. āUh-huhā¦ yes, exactlyā¦ oh, stop!ā she whispered urgently, trying to wave him off, but she was already laughing.
Haechanās grin only widened as he leaned in, capturing her lips in a swift, playful kiss. With a sigh, Chinsun quickly wrapped up the call. āNo no,I wasnāt talking to you Mrs. Kimā¦call me tomorrow if anything changes, okay? Great. Bye!ā She hung up, spinning around to face him with an amused smile.
āCouldnāt resist me, huh?ā Haechan teased, raising an eyebrow.
Chinsun rolled her eyes, but her smile gave her away. āYouāre impossible, you know that?ā
āMaybe, but youāre too hot, I couldnāt stop myselfā he replied with a smirk, and before she could say anything more, he kissed her again, slow and lingering this time, the kind of kiss that blurred time and erased any thoughts of being anywhere else.
Moments later, Chinsunās laugh echoed through the room as he swept her into his arms, and their dinner were momentarily forgotten.
Some time passed before they were finally ready, a little flushed and breathless. She smoothed her dress, fixing her hair with a small, secret smile as they grabbed their things and headed for the door.
āWeāre definitely going to be lateā she murmured, glancing at him as they stepped outside.
Haechan just grinned, reaching for her hand. āIām so ready for the second course tho.ā
He said, earning a little smack on his shoulder.
āJaemin!ā Soyulās voice rang out from the bedroom as she hurriedly tossed through her jewelry box, searching for the bracelet she swore sheād set aside earlier. āDid you feed the cats yet?ā
Jaemin sighed, stifling a smile as he finished scooping cat food into two separate bowls. āAlready on it!ā he called back. āAnd donāt worryāMinhoās food is in his āexclusive dining area,ā just like you asked.ā He chuckled, glancing down as Minho, their older tabby, pawed at his bowl impatiently, while Luna, their younger, more mischievous cat, watched him with a sly look, clearly eyeing Minhoās food.
āThank you!ā she replied, sounding both grateful and a bit distracted as she continued the whirlwind search for her missing bracelet. A few seconds later, she darted out of the bedroom, one heel on, the other in her hand, a brush tangled in her hair, and a tube of mascara balanced between her lips.
Jaemin couldnāt help but laugh at the sight. āYouāre a one-woman hurricane tonight,ā he said, stepping over to her. Before she could protest, he gently took the brush from her hand and began working it through her hair, smoothing out the tangles with easy, familiar strokes. She gave a small sigh, visibly relaxing as she focused on finishing her mascara.
āYouāre a lifesaver,ā she murmured, finally setting her makeup down. āHow do you stay so calm all the time?ā
Jaemin smirked, tucking a loose strand of her hair behind her ear. āI have to be calm. Someone has to keep track of everything you loseā he teased. āBesides, I like seeing you a little flusteredākeeps things interesting.ā
Soyul shot him a playful look, nudging his shoulder. āWell, if youāre so organized, whereās my bracelet?ā
With a smirk, he reached into his pocket and pulled out the silver bracelet, holding it up with a satisfied grin. āRight where I found itāby the coffee machine.ā
She laughed, slipping the bracelet onto her wrist and giving him a grateful kiss on the cheek. āWhat would I do without you?ā
He pulled her close, his hand lingering at her waist while he started to leave soft kisses on his revealed shoulder.
Just as she leaned in for a kiss, a loud knock sounded at the door. They exchanged a quick, amused look before Jaemin pulled away to answer it.
At the door stood Jeno and Daeun, bundled in coats, with Jeno holding a bottle of wine in one hand and a casual grin on his face. āFinally! You two are slowpokes tonightā he teased, stepping in.
Daeun rolled her eyes, giving Jeno a playful nudge. āSays the guy who took twenty minutes deciding which wine to bring. Youāre the reason we almost missed them!ā
Jeno held up the bottle defensively. āHey, this isnāt just any wine. This is a classicāgoes perfectly with any dinner party. Mark and Yunhee are going to be impressed.ā
Daeun scoffed, raising an eyebrow. āClassic? You mean it was on sale, donāt you?ā
Soyul laughed, tugging on her second heel as she stepped over to them. āYou two really sound like an old married couple,ā she teased, exchanging a smile with Jaemin.
Jeno shot her a look. āBetter that than making everyone late because someone couldnāt find her braceletā he retorted, grinning as Soyul playfully slapped his arm.
āAlright, alrightā Daeun said with a laugh, hooking her arm through Jenoās. āLetās not turn this into a roast. We all know we canāt keep Mark and Yeeri waiting too long anywayātheyāve probably already started judging our punctuality.ā
With a shared laugh, the four of them gathered their coats, scarves, and the wine bottle before stepping outside into the cool evening air. They walked together, arms linked or hands clasped, a relaxed rhythm to their steps as they strolled toward Mark and Yeeriās place just a few blocks away.
As they walked, Daeun nudged Jenoās shoulder, a mischievous smile on her face. āSo, what other fancy items did you look at before you settled on that bottle?ā
Jeno rolled his eyes, pretending to think. āWell, I did consider that other āvintageā blendāsuper exclusive, and only double the price.ā
The group laughed, Jaemin shaking his head. āGuess we should be grateful we got a sale-priced classic instead. Maybe weāll get lucky and itāll actually taste good.ā
āHey!ā Jeno protested, putting on a wounded expression as they turned onto Mark and Yeeriās street. āOne day youāll all appreciate my refined taste.ā
With another round of laughter, the group finally arrived at the doorstep, feeling light and happy as they prepared for the night ahead.
Mark stirred the sauce simmering on the stove, adding a pinch more basil as Yunhee sliced fresh herbs beside him. The kitchen was filled with the rich aromas of their cooking, and they exchanged small smiles as they worked in comfortable rhythm.
The doorbell rang, and Yunhee glanced at the clock. āSomeoneās earlyā she murmured, wiping her hands on a towel as she walked to the door.
She opened it to find Renjun standing there, a small box of pastries balanced in his hands and an easy smile on his face. āBrought dessertā he announced, stepping inside as she welcomed him with a warm hug.
āYouāre a lifesaverā she said, guiding him into the kitchen. āMark was worried I might have to make my own pastries, and we all know how that wouldāve turned out.ā
Mark raised his hands in mock defense. āHey, I was all for a backup plan. Just didnāt want the dessert to beā¦ a learning experience.ā
Renjun laughed, setting the pastries on the counter. āWell, Iām here to save the day.ā
Yunhee smirked, giving a glass of wine to the boy, catching Markās amused glance. āSoā¦Junnie, letās talk about you little love life mh? Iāve been trying to introduce you to my friend Hana, and you bailed out the last time I invited you two to coffee. Youāve got to give her a chanceāsheās perfect for you!ā
Renjun shook his head, chuckling. āPerfect, huh? Yunhee, i know sheās probably nice, but it justā¦ didnāt feel right. Plus, you know Iām terrible with setups. Iād rather meet someone by chance, not like itās an appointment.ā
Mark chuckled, nodding in agreement. āCāmon baby heās right, quit playing cupid and let him enjoy his freedom while he still canā
Yunhee raised her eyebrows looking at her fiancĆ©. āMarkie what do you mean by that mh?ā
The latter was quick to shake his head. āNothing, my love, of course.ā
The three of them started to laugh before Yunhee leaned back against the counter, smirking. āAlright, enough about Renjunās future. What do we think about Chenleās mystery date tonight? Heās been so secretive.ā
Mark raised his eyebrows. āIām betting sheās someone new around here. He wouldnāt give up any details, and itās strange, you know how he is- always yapping about everythingā
Renjun leaned against the counter too, thinking. āWell, if heās bringing her to meet everyone, sheās got to be someone special. Or at least, someone he thinks can handle this bunch.ā
Yunhee grinned. āWell, letās hope she knows what sheās getting into. I feel like if sheās too shy, she might just make a run for it.ā
At that moment, the doorbell rang, and Jaeminās voice called from the other side. āHellooo, are we still welcome?ā
Yunhee grinned, dashing over to let them in. Jaemin and Soyul, along with Jeno and Daeun, stood at the entrance, bundled in scarves and coats, with Jeno proudly holding the bottle of wine. They each gave hugs all around before peeling off layers, handing their coats to Yun.
āWe brought wine!ā Jeno announced, holding up the bottle like a prize.
āAnd he spent way too long picking it outā Daeun teased, giving him a playful nudge.
Jaemin smirked. āShould be glad itās not a box of cheap beer.ā
As they joined everyone in the kitchen, Soyul shot a curious look at the group. āSo, we were trying to guess, what kind of girl do you think Chenleās bringing?ā
Mark crossed his arms, sighing. āRenjun thinks sheās got to be special to handle us. Otherwise, Chenle wouldnāt bother even dare to introduce her.ā
Jeno shook his head, amused. āMaybe sheās just a decoyāheās bringing her in so we donāt bother him about settling down. You know how he likes to mess with us.ā
The room filled with laughter, just as another knock echoed from the door. Before Yunhee could answer, it swung open, and Haechan and Chinsun entered, both looking slightly flushed and disheveled. Haechan was grinning wide, while Chinsun scanned the room a bit embarassed before her gaze started lighting up the moment it fell on Renjun.
āRenjun!ā Chinsun exclaimed, her face brightening as she hurried over to him. She wrapped him in an warm hug, her laugh light as she pulled back. āI didnāt think youād get here before us! This is a rare sight.ā
Renjun returned her smile. āWell, I had to beat you to the food somehowā he teased, feeling the slight blush creeping into his cheeks.
āOh pleaseā she replied with a laugh, her hand lingering on his arm for just a moment longer than necessary.
Mark and Jaemin exchanged a quick, knowing glance, amused at Chinsunās enthusiasm. Haechan, meanwhile, raised an eyebrow at her, his usual playful smirk returning as he slipped an arm around her waist. āCareful, babyāyouāre making it sound like Renjunās your date.ā
Chinsun rolled her eyes. āOh, hush. Iām just happy to see everyone. Now, what were yāall were gossiping about?ā
Jaemin chuckled, nudging Haechanās shoulder. āWe were actually placing bets on whether youād show up at all. Or if youād just call it a night in the car.ā
Haechan feigned offense, crossing his arms. āExcuse me, weāre responsible adults. Weād never show up lateā¦ without a good reason.ā
Yunhee shot him a playful glare, giving him a light slap on the arm. āYouāre incorrigible, you know that?ā
Haechan grinned at her. āOh, come on, you wouldnāt love me any other way.ā
The group laughed, and as everyone settled into the cozy kitchen, the talk naturally returned to Chenleās mystery date.
āKnowing Chenle, heās probably picked someone who can throw some shade right back at him,ā Jaemin said thoughtfully. āHeād get bored with anyone who canāt keep up with his jokes.ā
Daeun raised her glass. āThatās why Iām hoping sheās someone whoāll make Chenle nervous for a change.ā
āOr someone whoāll give us a good story,ā Haechan added with a smirk. āI donāt know, Iām expecting something outrageous.ā
Yunhee raised an eyebrow at him. āBe nice. Donāt make her feel like sheās on trial.ā
Haechan grinned, unfazed. āCome on, Yunhee, weāre all curious. Besides, isnāt it what else are friends for?ā
With laughter and glasses raised, the group settled into the easy flow of conversation, waiting to see just what surprises the night would bring.
The kitchen buzzed with chatter as Mark, Yunhee and their friends huddled around, everyone passing theories back and forth about Chenleās mystery date. Glasses clinked as Haechan cracked one last joke.
Just then the doorbell rang, and in an instant, the group went quiet, eyes widening. Soyul clutched Jaeminās arm, and Daeun leaned forward, excitement lighting up her face.
āAlright, moment of truth!ā Jeno whispered.
Yunhee looked Mark. āWell, what are you waiting for? Go answer it!ā
With an amused grin, the said boy made his way to the door, the rest of the group following closely behind him, crowding together as if each wanted to be the first to lay eyes on Chenleās mystery girl. Mark took a deep breath, adding to the suspense, before pulling open the door with a dramatic flourish.
But standing on the doorstep, looking slightly taken aback by the crowd gathered in the doorway, there was Chenleācompletely and utterly alone, with only a bottle of whiskey in hand.
āHey, everyone!ā he said, smiling and giving a small wave.
An exaggerated groan came from Haechan as he dramatically slapped his forehead. āChenle, are you serious? Iāve been holding my breath here!ā
Daeun put her hands on her hips, her expression somewhere between exasperation and amusement. āJust you?ā
Chenle looked around, his gaze moving from one disappointed face to another. āWhoa, did I walk into some kind of intervention? Whatās with the whole welcoming committee?ā
Yunhee stepped forward, unable to hold back a chuckle. She gave him a warm hug, patting his back with a sigh. āWe thought youād be bringing someone special! Donāt tell me you left us hanging on purpose?ā
Chenle chuckled, hugging her back. āHey, itās not like I planned this just to mess with you all!ā
āCouldāve fooled usā Jaemin teased, crossing his arms. āWith all that build-up, we thought you were finally bringing your big mystery girl.ā
Chenle sighed, rubbing the back of his neck. āAlright, alrightālet me explain. I was supposed to bring someone. Her nameās Jiul, but she came down with a fever this afternoon. She really wanted to come, but she could barely get out of bed.ā
āRightā¦ā Haechan raised an eyebrow, shooting him a skeptical look. āAnd Iām supposed to believe youāre not just making up some imaginary girlfriend because you love a good mystery?ā
Chenle snorted, rolling his eyes. āI swear, Haechan, sheās not imaginary. I might be dramatic, but even I wouldnāt go that far!ā
Daeun let out a soft laugh and stepped forward, giving him a playful punch on the arm. āWe were all looking forward to meeting her, you know. Poor girlāshe doesnāt know what sheās in for if sheās dating you.ā
Chenle shrugged, giving her a grin. āWell, youāll meet her soon enough. Trust me, if sheād known you were all waiting at the door like this, she mightāve dragged herself over just to avoid becoming a ghost story.ā
āNext time, Chenle,ā Soyul added, giving him a quick, warm hug. āYouāre bringing her, no excuses.ā
Chenle raised his hands in surrender. āDeal, deal! Iāll bring her next time. Just donāt scare her off before I get the chance to introduce her, okay?ā
Finally stepping aside from the crowd Mark took the bottle of whiskey, reading the label with an approving nod. āThis, at least, is impressive. Itās like you read my mind.ā
āWell, figured Iād make up for the lack of a plus-one,ā Chenle said with a shrug, grinning as he accepted a glass from Yunhee. āBesides, you all donāt need my dating life as your only form of entertainment. Iām sure Haechanās got plenty of wild stories to share tonight.ā
The group laughed, and Haechan flashed a cocky grin. āI always bring the entertainment, Chenle. But Iāll give you a breakāthis time.ā
Once the group had gathered back in the kitchen, Haechan leaning comfortably against the counter, Jaemin shot Chenle a curious look. āAlright, now that youāre here and Jiulās off the hook for tonight, youāve got to tell us a bit more about her.ā
āYeah,ā Mark chimed in, raising an eyebrow with a half-smile. āYouāve been suspiciously quiet about this girl.ā
Chenle leaned against the counter, a smirk playing on his lips as he took a sip of his drink. āWell, you all know how I like to keep things interesting. But letās just say Jiulāsā¦ different. Sheās got this thing where she somehow manages to keep up with my jokes, even throw them back at me. Thatās rare.ā
Jaemin raised his glass, nodding. āSounds like sheās got your number already.ā
āOh, trust me,ā Chenle said with a chuckle. āSheās more than capable of keeping me on my toes. Sheās a bit quiet at first, but once she opens upā¦ā He paused, shaking his head with a smile. āYeah, sheās something else.ā
Mark leaned back, folding his arms. āQuiet, huh? Think sheāll be able to handle this crew?ā
Chenle shrugged, his grin widening. āGuess weāll have to find out. But if she can survive meeting all of you, Iāll take it as a good sign.ā
Haechan snorted, looking amused. āWell, as long as she knows sheās dating the most mysterious guy in town.ā
Chenle chuckled, rolling his eyes. āAlright, alrightākeep the mystery jokes coming. But Iām serious, youāll all meet her soon enough.ā
Just then, Yunhee lifted her glass. āTo Jiulās speedy recovery. And to finally meeting the mystery woman next time!ā
The group slowly moved toward the dining table, carrying their drinks and chatting animatedly. Haechan, true to form, was already throwing out playful remarks as he trailed behind Chinsun, who was straightening her hair after the rush to get there.
āAlright, everyone, letās get this dinner started before Soyulās cats call animal services on Jaemin for neglectā he teased, earning a laugh from Soyul and a glare from Jaemin.
Jaemin waved him off, grumbling under his breath. āTheyāre perfectly fine. And unlike you, Haechan, they actually like me.ā
āAre you sure about that?ā Haechan fired back with a smirk as he pulled out a chair for Chinsun, who patted his cheek as if rewarding a child for good behavior.
āSit down and behave,ā she said lightly, though her grin gave away her amusement.
Once everyone was seated, the conversation shifted to updates on their lives.
āHowās the clinic been, Chinsun?ā Yunhee asked, passing the bread basket.
āBusy but goodā Chinsun replied. āWeāve had a lot of emergency cases this weekāmostly dogs who think eating socks is a fun challenge.ā
āThatās because it isā Haechan quipped. āIf I were a dog, Iād totally try it.ā
Renjun shook his head with a laugh. āYouāve got the mindset for it, Iāll give you that.ā
āWhat about you, Mark?ā Jeno asked. āStill reshaping faces for a living?ā
Mark chuckled. āYeah, the clinicās been crazy. But youād be surprised how many people donāt realize they canāt heal overnight. I had a patient last week who wanted to run a marathon a day after rhinoplasty.ā
āShe didnāt!ā Soyul gasped.
āOh, she didā Mark said, nodding solemnly. āWe had to convince her that, no, her nose would not stay on her face if she ran 42 kilometers.ā
The group burst into laughter, and Daeun added, āI feel like your job is part surgery, part babysitting.ā
Yunhee smiled knowingly. āItās pretty similar to therapy sometimes, too. People want a quick fix without doing the real work.ā
As the laughter ebbed, Renjun glanced at the clock on the wall. āBy the way, is anyone planning to watch the eclipse tonight? Itās supposed to peak in an hour or so.ā
Yunheeās face lit up. āThatās the whole point of tonightās dinner! Mark and I thought itād be nice to make an event of it. Food, drinks, and a cosmic show.ā
Jaemin raised a hand as if in mock protest. āWait, I thought Chenleās mystery girlfriend was the real purpose of tonight.ā
The table broke into another round of laughter as Chenle groaned, sinking dramatically in his chair. āIāll never live this down, will I?ā
āNot a chanceā Daeun replied with a grin.
Chinsun leaned forward, seizing the moment to ask ā So, Soyul, how are the cats doing? I saw your latest post, and they looked so adorable!ā Chinsun asked with genuine excitement, clasping her hands together.
Soyulās face lit up. āOh, theyāre doing amazing! Luna just learned how to open the treat drawer, so Iāve basically lost control of my kitchen. And Minhoāwell, heās still his lazy self, lounging around like heās royalty.ā
Jaemin groaned, leaning back in his chair. āI swear, those two get more attention than I do.ā
āYouāre not wrongā Soyul teased, her grin widening. āBut can you blame me? Theyāre perfect.ā
āPerfectly spoiledā Jaemin muttered, though his soft smile betrayed his playful jealousy.
āTheyāre basically your childrenā Chinsun said, leaning forward eagerly. āItās like having babies, isnāt it? You feed them, you worry about them, and they even wake you up in the middle of the night!ā
Soyul nodded enthusiastically. āExactly! Theyāre like little furry toddlers.ā
Yunhee chimed in, her tone reflective. āAnimals really are like kids. They depend on you completely, and you get so attached. Sometimes I think having a pet is good practice for when youāre ready for the real thing.ā
This comment shifted the energy at the table. A pause hung in the air before Haechan, never one to let things get too serious, leaned forward with a smirk. āSpeaking of kidsāhow many of you are planning on having them?ā
Jaemin and Jeno exchanged a quick, almost imperceptible glance before Jaemin replied, āNot us. At least, not anytime soon.ā
Jeno nodded in agreement. āYeah, same here. Weāre justā¦ not really into the idea right now.ā
Daeun looked at Jeno, her brows furrowing slightly. āI didnāt know you felt that way. Weāve never really talked about it.ā
Soyul glanced at Jaemin, her lips pressing into a line. āYeahā¦ same here.ā
Sensing the tension creeping in, Mark cleared his throat. āIāve always wanted kids. Itās just a matter of timing, I guess.ā
āSameā Haechan said with a grin, reaching over to take Chinsunās hand. āAnd, for the record, I think Chinsun would look absolutely stunning with a little baby bump. I mean, imagineāsheād be the cutest mom ever.ā
Chinsunās cheeks flushed as she swatted him lightly. āHaechan! Donāt start embarrassing me.ā
āIām just speaking the truthā Haechan said, leaning back smugly. āYouād glow, babe. Like, literally.ā
The group laughed, the tension easing as the conversation drifted back into lighter territory.
āYouād glow because youād be sweating from how much work it is,ā Chenle quipped, leaning back with a smug grin. āHonestly, I donāt get the whole āhaving kidsā thing. Everyone acts like itās the ultimate goal, but letās be realāitās not like having a child completes your life or anything.ā
His comment drew a mix of reactions. Haechan raised an eyebrow, clearly amused, while Yunheeās eyes narrowed slightly in curiosity. Soyul and Daeun exchanged surprised glances, and Mark simply sipped his wine, waiting to see where the conversation would go.
It was Renjun who spoke first, his voice calm but firm. āThatās a bit harsh, donāt you think? Just because itās not something you want doesnāt mean itās not meaningful for other people.ā
Chenle shrugged. āIām not saying people shouldnāt have kids. Iām just saying the idea that you need them to live a fulfilling life is outdated. Look at meāIām perfectly happy without any of that responsibility weighing me down.ā
Renjun leaned forward, his expression thoughtful. āBut donāt you think thereās value in building something that lasts? Kids arenāt just about fulfilling some societal expectationātheyāre about connection, legacy, and love.ā
Chenle raised an eyebrow. āLegacy? Love? I donāt need a tiny version of me running around to prove I can leave a mark on the world.ā
āMaybe,ā Renjun countered, his tone softening slightly, ābut having a child isnāt just about leaving a mark. Itās about giving a piece of yourself to someone else and watching them grow into their own person. Itās about creating a bond thatās unlike anything else.ā
Chinsun nodded in agreement, her expression warm as she looked at Renjun. āThatās a beautiful way to put it. Iāve always thought that raising a child could be one of the most rewarding things you can do.ā
āExactly,ā Renjun said, his gaze still on Chenle. āItās not for everyone, sure. But itās not just about completing your lifeāitās about enriching theirs, too.ā
Chenle rolled his eyes but smiled faintly. āAlright, alright, Mr. Philosopher. Youāve made your point. But Iām sticking to my no-kid policy, thanks.ā
āWowā Yunhee said, glancing at Chenle with mock disapproval. āRemind me not to leave you alone with my hypothetical children.ā
āDonāt worry, you wonāt have toā Chenle said with a grin.
The laughter around the table eventually simmered as the conversation drifted into quieter territory. It was Renjun who broke the lull with a sigh. āDid anyone hear about Jaehyun? Poor guyās been through it lately.ā
Mark glanced up from his drink, frowning. āYeah, I did. He found out his girlfriend was cheating, right?ā
āFound out by accident, tooā Renjun added. āApparently, he glanced at her phone while she was showing him something, and bamātexts from another guy. Can you imagine?ā
āHonestly, thatās the worst,ā Daeun said, shaking her head. āNot just the cheating but finding out like that. It mustāve been a punch to the gut.ā
Chenle leaned back with a sympathetic smirk. āItās like phones have become the black box of our lives. They hold all the secrets, good and bad.ā
Mark nodded thoughtfully, swirling his wine glass. āItās true, though. Our phones probably know more about us than the people closest to us. Messages, emails, photos, bank detailsā¦ even things we donāt consciously remember. Itās like a digital diary we forget to lock.ā
āOr a digital Pandoraās boxā Jaemin said, earning murmurs of agreement around the table.
Yunhee, who had been listening intently, suddenly leaned forward with a mischievous glint in her eye. āYou knowā¦ this reminds me of something I saw in a movie recently. What if we played a game?ā
The table perked up at the word game.
āWhat kind of game?ā Haechan asked, narrowing his eyes suspiciously.
Yunhee grinned. āEveryone puts their phones on the table for the entire night. Any texts, calls, or notifications that come ināwe share them with the group. We read the messages aloud, listen to the calls on speaker, everything. Total transparency.ā
The room fell silent for a moment, the idea hanging in the air like an unspoken dare.
āThat soundsā¦ā Jeno began, his brow furrowing. āā¦ invasive.ā
āAnd unnecessaryā Mark added quickly, his discomfort evident.
Haechan laughed nervously, scratching the back of his neck. āYeah, uh, Iām not sure Iām on board with that. Itās not that I have anything to hide, butā¦ā
āBut what?ā Chinsun cut in, her tone teasing as she raised an eyebrow. āAfraid weāll find out about your secret second family or something?ā
Haechan pointed a finger at her, feigning offense. āDonāt start, babe. My lifeās an open book. Itās justādo we really need to dig into each otherās phones to have a good time?ā
āI agreeā Jeno said, leaning back in his chair. āPrivacy is important. Itās not about having secretsāitās about boundaries.ā
Jaemin, however, couldnāt resist poking fun at his friend. āSounds like youāve got something to hide, Jeno. Whatās in there? A secret Candy Crush addiction?ā
Jeno shot him a look, his jaw tightening. āDonāt start, Jaemin. Unlike you, I donāt feel the need to broadcast my entire life to everyone.ā
The tension between them sparked briefly before Renjun jumped in with a soothing tone. āCome on, itās just a game. It doesnāt have to mean anything. If weāre all good friends, whatās there to worry about? Itās not like anyone here is hiding anything seriousā¦ right?ā
Renjunās words hung in the air, and one by one, the group exchanged hesitant glances.
āFineā Mark sighed, clearly resigned. āIf everyoneās doing it, Iāll do it too.ā
Haechan groaned dramatically. āThis is peer pressure. I hope you all know that.ā
āIāll take that as a yesā Chinsun said with a grin, sliding her phone onto the table.
Jeno hesitated, his lips pressed into a thin line, but Daeun nudged him playfully. āCome on, Jeno. Live a little.ļæ½ļæ½ļæ½
With a resigned huff, Jeno placed his phone down next to Chinsunās, muttering something under his breath about regretting this later.
Finally, one by one, everyone added their phones to the pile in the center of the table.
āThereā Yunhee said with a satisfied smile. āNow weāre all on equal footing. Letās see whoās brave enough to go first when something comes in.ā
Before anyone could respond, Soyul glanced toward the window, her eyes widening. āHey! The eclipse is starting!ā
The group immediately stood, wine glasses in hand, and moved to the balcony to watch the celestial event unfold.
The moon hung low in the sky, its bright silver glow slowly dimming as the Earthās shadow crept across its surface. The conversation quieted as they all gazed upward, the air filled with a rare sense of awe and tranquility.
āIs it just me, or does everything feelā¦ surreal right now?ā Daeun murmured, leaning against Jeno.
āItās not just you,ā Jaemin replied, his voice softer than usual.
As the shadow consumed more of the moon, Haechan broke the silence with a playful nudge at Chenle. āSo, Chenle, is this where your mystery girlfriend was supposed to make a grand entrance? Under the moonlight?ā
Chenle rolled his eyes, but his smirk betrayed his amusement. āVery funny. I think Iāll enjoy the moon more without any distractions, thanks.ā
Mark chuckled. āLetās just hope this night doesnāt turn into an eclipse of our friendships once the phones start buzzing.ā
The group laughed lightly, the tension from earlier melting into the cool night air.
The group slowly made their way back to the dining room, the warm light inside contrasting with the cool, dark night outside. They settled into their seats once again, still buzzing from the beauty of the eclipse. Glasses were refilled, and the conversation naturally shifted to lighter, nostalgic topics as they relaxed into the evening.
āYou know,ā Haechan began, leaning back in his chair with a smug grin, āweāve all grown up so much, but letās not forgetāI used to be the king of our little circle back in the day.ā
āOh, here we goā Mark muttered, rolling his eyes with a smile.
āNo, no, let him cook.ā Jaemin said, laughing as he folded his arms. āI wanna hear this version of history.ā
āI was the guyā Haechan continued dramatically, ignoring the interruptions. āThe life of every party. The charmer. Theāā
āThe biggest headacheā Mark interjected with a snort.
āThat, too.ā Renjun chimed in, grinning. āRemember how many times we had to cover for you when youād ghost some poor girl at a party?ā
Haechan feigned offense, placing a hand on his chest. āExcuse me, ghosting is such a strong word. I simplyā¦ diversified my options.ā
āDiversified?ā Chinsun repeated with a raised eyebrow. āAnd yet, here you are, stuck with me.ā
āāStuckā is the wrong wordā Haechan said smoothly, slipping his arm around her. āIād say I retired from the game because I found my MVP.ā
The table groaned collectively at his cheesy line, but Chinsun blushed nonetheless.
āYou werenāt the only one with āgame,ā thoughā Renjun said, turning to Jaemin. āMr. Cool over here wasnāt too bad himself.ā
Jaemin smirked, shrugging casually. āWhat can I say? Some of us donāt need to try too hard.ā
āPleaseā Jeno scoffed, shaking his head. āThe only reason you didnāt need to try too hard was because I was always stuck as your wingman. And let me tell you, your success came at my expense more times than I can count.ā
Jaemin laughed, holding up his hands in mock surrender. āOkay, okay, thatās fair. But hey, it all worked out, right? We ended up with the two best friends. Perfect symmetry.ā
Soyul and Daeun exchanged a knowing glance, their eyebrows raised. āAnd you two donāt find that a little suspicious?ā Soyul teased.
āNot at allā Jaemin said confidently, draping an arm around Soyulās chair. āItās destiny. A natural alignment of the stars.ā
āYou mean of the drinksā Daeun joked, nudging Jeno playfully. āIām pretty sure destiny was just a lot of late-night outings and bad pick-up lines.ā
āYou wound meā Jeno said, placing a hand over his heart in mock pain.
āAnd then thereās Mark and Renjunā Haechan said, pointing his fork at them with a mischievous grin. āOur very own nerd squad.ā
āHey!ā Mark and Renjun protested in unison, drawing laughter from everyone else.
āItās trueā Haechan insisted, leaning forward. āThese two were impossible to drag out. Mark was always studying or working on some project, and Renjun was, what, painting or reading about obscure history?ā
āExcuse meā Renjun said with mock indignation, āI had a social life.ā
āSureā Haechan teased, āas long as it involved trivia nights or art galleries.ā
Mark laughed, shaking his head. āOkay, fine, we werenāt exactly the party animals of the group. But we had our moments.ā
āāMoments,āā Haechan echoed, grinning. āLike when I had to physically drag you to that one party because you refused to leave your textbook?ā
āThat wasnāt my fault!ā Mark protested. āIt was finals week, and you wouldnāt take no for an answer.ā
āThatās because Yunhee begged me to bring you outā Haechan said, smirking. āShe had the biggest crush on you.ā
Yunhee blushed, narrowing her eyes at him. āDid you have to tell everyone that?ā
āCome on, itās cute!ā Haechan said, laughing.
āIt was also embarrassing,ā Yunhee admitted, shaking her head. āI was into this guy who barely noticed me unless we were talking about something academic. And when he did come to parties, he just stood in the corner with a drink, looking like he wanted to go home.ā
Mark chuckled sheepishly. āI wasnāt exactly the most social person back then.ā
āYou werenāt social at all,ā Yunhee teased. āBut I guess it worked out in the end.ā
āMeanwhile,ā Chenle cut in, grinning, āI was the reason we even had parties to talk about. Admit itāmy house was the spot.ā
āOh, absolutelyā Jaemin said. āYour parties were legendary.ā
āLegendary is putting it lightlyā Renjun added. āRemember that Halloween party where someone brought a fog machine and accidentally set off the fire alarm?ā
Chenle laughed, his eyes lighting up at the memory. āYeah, and we all had to evacuate in full costumes. Iāll never forget Haechan running outside in his inflatable dinosaur suit.ā
āIt was the look of the night.ā Haechan said proudly.
The girls listened intently as the guys reminisced, chiming in occasionally with laughter or disbelief.
āAnd the Christmas party where Mark fell asleep on the couch because he had too much of Chenleās grandpa gin?ā Jaemin added.
āClassicā Haechan said, shaking his head.
āI was tiredā Mark defended, though his grin gave him away.
The stories flowed easily, filling the room with warmth and nostalgia as they recounted their wild, carefree days. Each memory was met with laughter, teasing, and the occasional exaggerated retelling, the bonds between them growing all the more evident with every shared anecdote.
As the laughter from their previous conversation subsided, a distinct ping rang out in the room, drawing everyoneās attention.
āWhoās the lucky first?ā Haechan asked, grinning mischievously as he leaned forward.
Renjun, sitting at the far end of the table, pulled out his phone and glanced at the screen. His expression didnāt change much, but the way he hesitated to speak piqued everyoneās curiosity.
āWell?ā Yunhee prompted, her eyes narrowing playfully. āWhat is it? Donāt keep us in suspense.ā
āItās nothingā Renjun said, placing his phone face down on the table.
āOh no, you donāt get to say ānothing,āā Haechan teased, reaching across the table as though to snatch the phone. Renjun was faster, pulling it away with a smirk.
āItās not even interestingā Renjun assured them. āJust some random promotion for the bar under my apartment.ā
The table erupted into groans and laughter, with Haechan being the loudest. āA bar promotion? Thatās the first notification of the night? Renjun, man, youāre supposed to give us something juicy!ā
āWhat do you want me to do?!ā Renjun said, feigning indignation. āItās not like I control who texts me. And besides, maybe this is a sign I need to go out more.ā
āOr,ā Haechan said, leaning back with a grin, āitās a sign that the highlight of your social life is your landlordās weekly happy hour.ā
Renjun threw a balled-up napkin at him, which Haechan caught midair. āBetter a bar promotion than whatever spam texts youāre probably gettingā Renjun retorted.
āTouchĆ©ā Haechan admitted, laughing.
The conversation resumed, glasses were raised, and a few jokes flew across the table. Just as things began to settle, though, a chorus of pings echoed through the room, drawing everyoneās attention again.
This time, it wasnāt just one phone.
Mark, Jeno, Chenle, Renjun and Haechan all glanced down at their screens at the same time.
āOkay, what the hell?ā Jaemin asked, his tone half-joking but tinged with genuine confusion. āIs there some group chat Iām not part of?ā
āNoā Mark said quickly, his brow furrowing as he read his message. āItās just a basketball thing.ā
āYeahā Jeno added, glancing at Jaemin with a sheepish smile. āJohnnyās organizing a game next weekend.ā
āBasketball?ā Jaemin repeated, his voice rising slightly. āWhy didnāt I get this message?ā
The other guys exchanged quick, awkward looks. āItās not a big dealā Chenle said, shrugging. āMaybe Johnny forgot to add you?ā
āForgot?ā Jaemin said, his eyebrows shooting up. āI mean, I get itāIām not the greatest player. But even Renjun was invited! And he doesnāt even play!ā
Renjun, who had been quietly sipping his drink, nearly choked. āHey, whatās that supposed to mean?ā
āExactly what it sounds likeā Jaemin shot back, his arms crossed. āYouāve never even held a basketball, and somehow, you get an invite over me?ā
āOkay, first of allā Renjun said, setting his glass down, āyou donāt have to attack me just because Johnny doesnāt think you can dunk.ā
The table broke into laughter, though Jaemin didnāt look entirely amused.
āCome on, Jaemā Haechan said, clapping his hands. āItās not personal. Maybe Johnny just assumed youād be busy or something.ā
āYeahā Mark added, though his voice lacked conviction. āItās probably just an oversight.ā
āAn oversightā Jaemin repeated flatly, leaning back in his chair. āRight.ā
Sensing the tension, Soyul reached over and placed a hand on his arm. āItās okay, Jaemin. You donāt even like playing basketball that much.ā
āThatās not the pointā Jaemin muttered, moving away from her touch.
Daeun nodded in agreement, her voice soothing. āMaybe itās just a misunderstanding. Why donāt you talk to Johnny about it? Iām sure he didnāt mean to exclude you.ā
Jaemin exhaled sharply but nodded. āYeah, maybe.ā
Jeno, who had been unusually quiet, cleared his throat. āHey, Jaem. Shall we go get that my bottle of wine?ā
Jaemin glanced at him, confused about the timing, then shrugged. āSure.ā
The two of them got up and moved to the kitchen, leaving the others to continue chatting.
Jeno hesitated before speaking, scratching the back of his neck. āLook, about the basketball thingā¦ it wasnāt really my call. Johnnyās the one who made the list.ā
āJohnny,ā Jaemin repeated, his tone skeptical.
āYeahā Jeno said quickly. āI swear, I didnāt even know he was putting it together until I got the text. If Iād known, I wouldāve made sure you were invited.ā
Jaemin stared at him for a moment, then sighed. āItās not that big of a deal, I guess. Itās justāā
āYou feel left outā Jeno finished for him, his voice soft.
Jaemin nodded, his posture relaxing slightly. āYeah. I mean, weāre supposed to be friends, right?ā
āOf course we are.ā Jeno said firmly. āAnd Iāll talk to Johnny about it, okay? You shouldāve been on that list, no question.ā
Jaemin looked at him for a moment longer, then smiled. āThanks, man, you know me better than anyone.ā
āOf course.ā Jeno said, clapping him on the shoulder.
The two of them returned to the table, the tension already resolved. As they sat down, Chenle was in the middle of recounting one of his party stories, the laughter and energy of the group pulling them back into the warmth of the evening.
The conversation inside the house had mellowed into a cozy rhythm, everyone sharing their thoughts on recent movies and books.
āDid anyone see that new space thriller? The one with the impossible black hole scene?ā Renjun asked, setting his glass down.
āYeah, and it was painfully unrealistic,ā Jeno said, shaking his head. āThey really expect us to believe the ship survived that?ā
āItās science fictionā Soyul chimed in. āYouāre supposed to suspend disbelief. Besides, the emotional storyline carried it.ā
āEmotional?ā Haechan leaned back in his chair. āYouāre telling me crying in zero gravity makes up for ignoring basic physics?ā
āOnly you would care about physics in a movieā Daeun teased.
āFine, maybe itās not for meā Haechan replied with mock offense. He finished his drink and stood up with a stretch. āOn that note, Iām calling a cigarette break. Chenle?ā
āYeah, why notā Chenle said, getting up as well.
The two exited to the balcony, Haechan sliding the glass door shut behind them. The cold air hit them immediately, but Haechan seemed unbothered as he pulled out a cigarette and lit it. After taking a long drag, he passed the lighter to Chenle, who mirrored his actions.
For a moment, they stood in silence, looking out at the city lights.
Chenle broke the quiet. āAlright, youāre acting weird. Whatās up?ā
Haechan hesitated, flicking ash off the edge of the balcony. āI need a favorā he finally said.
Chenle turned to him, raising an eyebrow. āFrom me? Thatās rare. What kind of favor?ā
Haechan glanced at the door to ensure no one was listening. āI need to switch phones with you. Just for a little while.ā
Chenle blinked, taken aback. āWhat? Why?ā
āBecauseā Haechan said, lowering his voice further, āsomeoneās going to send me a picture in about half an hour, andā¦ letās just say itās better if Chinsun doesnāt see it.ā
Chenle stared at him, cigarette paused mid-air. āYouāre serious?ā
āDead serious.ā Haechan replied, taking another drag.
Chenle leaned against the railing, his expression growing more incredulous by the second. āWhat kind of picture are we talking about here?ā
āYou know.ā Haechan said, his tone evasive.
Chenle gave him a flat look. āHaechan. What kind of picture?ā
āAā¦ personal one,ā Haechan muttered, his gaze fixed on the glowing tip of his cigarette.
Chenle groaned, rubbing his temple. āYouāve got to be kidding me. Youāre risking everything with that girl over nudes?ā
āShhh!ā Haechan hissed, waving his hands in panic. āKeep your voice down!ā
Chenle sighed, exhaling a puff of smoke. āUnbelievable. Who is she?ā
Haechan hesitated again, shifting uncomfortably.
āDonāt tell meā¦ā Chenle said, his tone sharpening as realization dawned. āItās Markās sister, isnāt it?ā
Haechan didnāt respond immediately, but the small, mischievous grin that crept onto his face was answer enough.
Chenle groaned louder this time, throwing his hands up. āYouāre out of your mind! If Mark finds out, youāre dead.ā
āHeās not going to find outā Haechan said confidently. āWeāre discreet. Besides, sheās the one sending the picture, not me.ā
āWow, what a great excuse,ā Chenle said sarcastically. āDo you even hear yourself? This is a terrible idea.ā
āLookā Haechan said, leaning closer, āSheās always had a little thing for me, you know that.ā
āThat doesnāt mean you should encourage it!ā Chenle scolded. āMark is one of your best friends. How do you think heād feel about you messing with his sister?ā
āIām not messing with herā Haechan argued.
Chenle stared at him, shaking his head. āYouāre unbelievable.ā
āPlease, Chenle.ā Haechan said, his tone shifting to one of genuine desperation. āIām begging you. Just this once. Itās harmless, I swear.ā
Chenle hesitated, clearly torn. He took one last drag from his cigarette before tossing it into the ashtray. āThis is such a bad idea, Iām telling youā he said finally. āBut fine. Iāll help you. Donāt make me regret this.ā
āYou wonātā Haechan said, relief washing over him. āThank you, man. I owe you.ā
Chenle rolled his eyes as he turned to slide the door open. āYeah, yeah. Just remember, when this blows up in your face, I told you so.ā
As Chenle stepped back inside, leaving the door ajar, Haechan stayed behind, staring out at the city with a mix of relief and unease. He took one last puff of his cigarette before letting it die, his thoughts racing as he trued to convince himself that everything would work out.
The air inside had warmed considerably, filled with the clinking of glasses, faint laughter, and the soft hum of conversation. Most of the group had gravitated toward the kitchen, where Mark and Yunhee busily orchestrated the next course. Renjun and Chinsun, however, remained in the living room, seated comfortably on their seats, engaged in a quiet conversation.
āYouāve always been good with people,ā Chinsun said with a warm smile, her gaze steady on Renjun. āItās no wonder the kids in your music workshops like you so much.ā
Renjun rubbed the back of his neck, smiling sheepishly. āI think itās less about me and more about music. Kids just need a way to express themselves, you know?ā
Chinsun leaned forward slightly, her eyes sparkling with genuine interest. āItās still a talent, though. Not everyone has that ability to connect.ā
Just then, the balcony door slid open, and Haechan stepped back inside, brushing the cold air off his sleeves. He immediately caught sight of the scene and quirked an eyebrow.
āWow, you two look cozyā Haechan said, his voice laced with playful sarcasm. He crossed his arms and leaned casually against the doorway. āShould I be worried?ā
Chinsun didnāt even flinch, rolling her eyes as she turned toward him. āShut up, Haechanā she said, a hint of exasperation in her tone.
āHey, Iām just saying,ā he replied with an exaggerated shrug, though his eyes lingered a little longer on Renjun before he finally walked past them into the kitchen.
And before this, without being noticed (or so he thought) he successfully switched phones with Chenle.
Daeun and Soyul stood near the counter, half-hidden behind a column, their glasses in hand. From their vantage point, they had a clear view of Haechanās expression as he glanced over at Chinsun and Renjun.
āDid you see that?ā Daeun whispered, tilting her head toward the living room.
Soyul smirked, her lips barely moving. āHeās so jealous, itās almost funny.ā
Daeun narrowed her eyes slightly. āDo you think Chinsun has a thing for Renjun?ā
Soyul shook her head after a momentās thought. āNo way. Sheās just naturally warm with everyone. And letās be honestāRenjun is so clueless about stuff like that.ā
Daeun chuckled. āTrue. And Haechanās possessiveness is basically part of his personality. Still, itās kind of cute, jealousy looks good on himā
Their quiet observations were interrupted as the others began filtering back into the kitchen. Plates and trays were passed around, Mark working diligently to ensure everything was perfect for the meal. The room buzzed with chatter about favorite dishes, the best way to cook steak, and Markās secret marinade recipe.
Once everyone returned to the dining table, the conversation shifted to lighter topics.
Mark, ever the gracious host, served up plates of food while Yunhee teased him about his near-obsessive attention to detail.
āSo, Mark,ā Jaemin said, leaning back in his chair. āYou really couldāve been a chef. Why didnāt you go for it?ā
Mark shrugged modestly. āCookingās a hobby. Turning it into a career mightāve taken the fun out of it.ā
Yunhee rolled her eyes playfully. āPlease, he says that, but heād probably be a world-famous chef by now if he tried.ā
Renjun chimed in, āHonestly, Mark, you should start a cooking blog or something. Share your recipes with the world.ā
āThen weād lose the exclusivity,ā Soyul interjected with a grin. āI donāt want everyone knowing Markās secrets.ā
The group laughed, the energy light and playfulāuntil a phone buzzed loudly on the table, drawing everyoneās attention.
The phoneās screen lit up, displaying the name Monique.
All eyes turned to Chenle, whose āphoneā sat innocently on the table.
Chenle stiffened immediately, his hand darting out to grab the phone. āNothing to see hereā he said quickly, trying to play it off.
But Yunhee was faster. āWait a secondā she said, her eyes narrowing. āMonique? Isnāt that Markās sister?ā
A collective gasp rippled through the table. Haechan froze, his face carefully blank as he avoided looking directly at anyone.
Chenle glanced briefly at Haechan, his expression screaming help me, but Haechan offered no assistance. With a deep breath, Chenle forced a sheepish grin. āYeah, umā¦ weāve been reconnecting lately.ā
āReconnecting?ā Mark repeated, his voice low and skeptical. His fork paused mid-air, his knuckles tightening slightly.
Jaemin leaned forward, grinning like a kid about to witness chaos. āOpen the message, Chenle. Letās see what she sent.ā
āJaemin!ā Daeun scolded, though her curiosity was just as evident in her eyes.
Chenle hesitated, clearly torn. But under the weight of everyoneās stares, he reluctantly unlocked the phone and opened the message. His face went beet red as he saw the photo: a sultry, carefully posed picture of Markās sister.
āWhoaā he breathed, his eyes wide with shock.
Immediately, Jaemin and Renjun crowded around to see, while Soyul and Daeun leaned over curiously. Yunhee covered her mouth, stifling a gasp.
āChenle.ā Mark snapped, his tone sharp. āHow long has this been going on?ā
āJustā¦ a few monthsā Chenle said weakly, shrinking under Markās glare.
āAnd how long were you planning on keeping this from me?ā Mark demanded, his voice rising.
Before Chenle could answer, Daeun interjected, āWhat about Jiul? Isnāt she your girlfriend?ā
Chenle opened his mouth, floundering for an answer, when Haechan finally spoke up.
āLook, the guy finally has some gameā Haechan said, his tone breezy as he leaned back in his chair. āCan we give him a little credit?ā
The comment earned a mixture of gasps and laughter, though Markās expression remained stormy. Yunhee, however, was quick to step in.
āMark, relaxā she said firmly. āYour sisterās an adult. Let her live her life.ā
Mark muttered something under his breath, but he reluctantly leaned back in his chair, though his jaw remained tight.
Chenle, meanwhile, shot a glare at Haechan, who merely smirked back at him, clearly unbothered by the chaos heād created.
Moments later Chinsun glanced at his watch, his expression shifting to one of excitement. āHey, itās time! The full eclipse should be happening right now.ā
Everyone murmured in agreement, standing up from their chairs and moving toward the balcony once more. The cool night air greeted them as they stepped outside, the moon now completely cloaked in shadow, casting an eerie, beautiful darkness across the sky.
Mark leaned against the railing, gazing up at the celestial phenomenon. āItās incredible,ā he said, his voice quiet but reflective. āThe moonās always there, but we only ever see one side of it. This is one of those rare times the shadow makes it feelā¦ complete.ā
Renjun nodded, equally captivated by the view. āItās like the earth is revealing its own truth. The light we always chase is just an illusion. Itās the shadows that really show us who we are.ā
āLeave it to you two philosophers to turn a pretty moon into an existential crisisā Jaemin joked, breaking the momentary silence.
The group chuckled, and Chinsun, inspired by the occasion, clapped her hands together. āThis is too good to miss! Letās take a photo.ā
Everyone gathered around her, smiling and adjusting their positions. āChenle, hereā she said, handing him her phone. āYouāve got long armsātake the picture.ā
Chenle took the phone with a grin. āAlright, everyone squeeze in. Ready? One, twoāā
A sudden notification interrupted him, a message popping up at the top of the screen:
Sunghoon: Hi.
The screen glowed with the name, drawing a moment of awkward silence as everyone caught sight of it.
āWhoās Sunghoon?ā Chenle asked, raising an eyebrow.
āYeah, whoās that?ā Daeun chimed in, her curiosity piqued.
Haechan, standing just behind Chinsun, stiffened immediately. His voice turned sharp as he askedāWhat the fuck does he want now?ā
Chinsun waved it off, her tone casual but her expression betraying her discomfort. āNo one important. Letās just take the picture.ā
Chenle glanced at her skeptically but lifted the phone again. āAlright, where were we? One, twoāā
Another message popped up.
Sunghoon: I need you.
The group fell silent again, the tension palpable. Haechan didnāt hesitate this time. He stepped forward, snatching the phone from Chenleās hand.
āWhy the fuck is he texting you this shit?ā Haechanās voice was low but seething, his jaw tight as he looked directly at Chinsun.
Chinsun took a deep breath, trying to keep her voice calm. āHeās been texting me for two weeks now, but I havenāt responded to him at all. You know how much my last relationship broke me. How could you even think Iād entertain this?ā
Haechanās glare didnāt waver. āOh, please. We all know Sunghoon thinks heās some kind of hotshot. Does he still have that stupid haircut that you liked so much?ā
āHaechanā she snapped, her patience wearing thin. āThatās not the point.ā
The group began to shuffle uncomfortably as the argument escalated.
āIf you donāt believe meā Chinsun said, her voice firm now, āthen call him. Ask him yourself.ā
āI donāt need to hear you two flirtingā Haechan spat, his tone laced with venom. āThank you very much.ā
The insult stung, and Chinsunās expression hardened as she yanked her phone back from his grip. Haechan turned away abruptly, grabbing another glass of wine from the table and downing half of it in one go.
Chenle, hesitant but concerned, stepped in. āMaybe you should hear her out first, manāā
āShut up, Chenle.ā Haechan snapped, his words cutting.
Mark, now visibly annoyed, intervened. He reached over and took the wine glass from Haechanās hand. āThatās enoughā he said firmly.
The girls, gathering around Chinsun, encouraged her. āJust call himā Yunhee said softly. āSet things straight. Itāll help.ā
Chinsun hesitated but eventually nodded. She dialed the number, her fingers trembling slightly. The phone rang a few times before the call connected.
āFinally, Sunnyā Sunghoonās voice, smooth but laced with smugness. āYou decided to call me back. Whatās the matter? Does your boyfriend not satisfy you anymore?ā
Haechanās grip on the edge of the table tightened, his knuckles white as he held himself back from exploding.
Chinsun, kept her voice steady. āI donāt want anything to do with you, Sunghoon. Stop contacting me. Iām happy with Haechan.ā
A low chuckle echoed through the phone. āHeāll never be meā Sunghoon said arrogantly.
That was the breaking point.
Haechan took the phone from Chinsunās hand and brought it to his ear. āThank Godā he said coldly, his voice dripping with disdain. āBecause Iām so much better, you pathetic fuckass.ā
Without waiting for a reply, he hung up and tossed the phone onto the table, the conversation firmly ended.
He didnāt say another word, instead walking back to his seat at the dining table and sinking into his chair. The others exchanged uneasy glances before slowly following him back inside, one by one.
The air in the room was thick with tension after the heated exchange between Haechan and Chinsun. Everyone tried to move on, lightening the atmosphere by reminiscing about past vacations.
āSummer vacations are the bestā Jaemin said, leaning back in his chair with a grin. āNothing beats long days at the beach and bonfire nights.ā
āSure, if you like sand everywhereā Yunhee teased. āWinter vacations have charm. Cozy cabins, hot chocolate, and snow-covered landscapesāitās magical.ā
Jaemin rolled his eyes playfully. āYeah, until youāre stuck shoveling snow off the driveway.ā
Renjun chuckled. āBoth have their perks. I think it depends on where you go. Remember that summer trip we took to Jeju? The hikes, the ocean viewāit was perfect.ā
āExcept for the sunburnsā Daeun added with a laugh. āI was peeling for weeks!ā
Soyul chimed in āWinter vacations are underrated, though. Remember that ski trip last year? The slopes were amazing, and the hot springs afterwardāunforgettable.ā
Haechan, still visibly tense, tried to force a laugh. āIād take summer any day. Winterās justā¦ depressing. Too much darkness, not enough fun.ā
The conversation was beginning to lift the groupās spirits when an unfamiliar chime interrupted them. A strange notification sound echoed through the room, causing everyone to pause.
āWhose phone is that?ā Haechan asked, glancing around.
Chenle, sighed trying to stay composed āItās yours.ā
Haechan frowned but nodded slowly. āRight. Soā¦ whatās the message?ā
As he read the message he looked confused.
Chinsun peaked behind him āWhoās Jisung? And whyās he asking you how are you feeling?ā
The table fell silent.
āWhat the hell?ā Jaemin blurted out, leaning forward. āWhoās Jisung?ā
Haechan looked at them, trying to think at some excuses. āHeās a new guys who works with me..you know he got a little crush on me and wonāt leave me aloneā he said, laughing a little.
āWell thenā Chenle starts āwhy donāt you give him an answer?ā
Haechan looked back at his friend, gulping. āRightā¦ā He said as he started typing
āI said āIām okay, Iām at a friend house.ā Haechan said, nervously putting the phone down.
Another message light up the screen.
Jisung: What? You said you had fever! Thatās the whole reason why we didnāt meet tonight. You promised meā¦
As everyone listen to the message, their faces light up with confusion, looking at the boy.
āWhatās going on?ā Daeun asked, her voice filled with confusion.
Chinsunās face was frozen in shock as she whispered, āHaechanā¦? What did you have to do with this Jisung?ā
Haechan let out a strained laugh, trying to diffuse the situation. āAre you guys seriously thinkingāwhat? That Iād be intoā¦ guys? Baby, come onā he said, looking directly at Chinsun. āLook at me. How could I ever like boys?ā
Renjun, sitting across the table, folded his arms and raised an eyebrow. His voice was calm but pointed. āWhatās wrong with liking boys, Haechan?ā
The question hung in the air like a loaded weapon.
Haechanās eyes flicked to Renjun, then back to Chinsun. āNothing, obviously! But itās justā¦ not me.ā
Renjunās gaze sharpened, the calm in his tone replaced by something more cutting. āOh, really?ā
Haechanās voice dropped, pleading. āRenjun, pleaseāā
Renjun leaned forward, cutting him off. āNo, please. Go on. This is hilarious, hearing you talk all this shit.ā
The rest of the group looked on in confusion, their gazes darting between the two.
āWhat are you saying, Jun?ā Daeun asked hesitantly, her tone laced with concern.
Renjun ignored her, keeping his focus on Haechan. āWhat? Did you forget about that summer? Oh, wait, maybe you forgot about the whole year too. Yeah, that happens as you get older, doesnāt it?ā
The weight of Renjunās words hit the table like a bomb.
Chinsunās eyes welled up, and a tear slipped down her cheek. āIs this true?ā she whispered, her voice trembling.
Haechanās face was pale, his hands gripping the edge of the table as if to steady himself. āItās not what you thinkā he started, his voice cracking.
āThen what is it?ā Jaemin pressed, his tone confused but firm.
Soyul glanced between Haechan and Renjun. āWaitā¦ are you saying you twoā¦?ā
āNo!ā Haechan exclaimed, his voice too loud, too defensive. āIt wasnāt like that! It was justāā
āJust what?ā Renjun interrupted coldly. āA phase? A mistake? Poor this Jisung guy, he doesnāt know what he got himself up toā
Chenle shifted uncomfortably. āGuys, maybe this isnāt the timeāā
āShut up, Chenle!ā Haechan snapped, then immediately winced, realizing how out of control he sounded.
The tension was thick enough to cut with a knife when the phone rang, breaking the moment.
Chenleās phone -now Haechanās- lights up again for an incoming call.
The name āJisungā flashed across the screen.
Chenleās breath hitched. āDonāt answer thatā he said quickly, his voice strained.
But it was too late. Renjun, stealing the phone, had already pressed the green button.
Jisungās voice came through the speaker, sharp and accusatory. āWhy did you lie about being sick? We were supposed to meet tonight, and now I find out youāre out with your friends?ā
The room went silent.
Haechan, panic flashing across his face, stammered. āIā¦ I donāt even know what youāre talking aboutā¦ Jisung?ā
Jisung scoffed, his tone cutting. āReally? Because Iāve got your location on 360. Itās over, you asshole.ā
The call ended abruptly, leaving everyone stunned.
Chinsunās tears flowed freely now, her hands trembling as she covered her face. The silence was deafening until Haechan finally spoke.
āGuys cāmon..You all know meā¦I would never do this. Iām not intoā¦ boys. Itās not true. None of it is true!ā
Renjun let out a bitter laugh. āOh, really?ā
Haechan looked at him, pleading. āRenjun, pleaseāā
āNoā Renjun said, standing up, his voice steady but full of disappointment. āIām done listening to this. Itās so funny hearing you deny everything, though. Keep goingāitās entertaining.ā
āRenjun, stopā Soyul whispered, her voice soft but firm.
āWhat am I stopping?ā Renjun snapped, glaring at Haechan. āReminding him of the truth? Maybe he needs it. Or maybe heās too scared to admit it.ā
Haechan sank back into his chair, his face pale and his shoulders slumped. Chinsun stared at him, her tear-filled eyes full of betrayal and heartbreak.
No one spoke.
The room was silent, thick with tension, after Renjunās cutting remarks. Haechan was frozen, struggling to form a coherent response, his hands gripping the edge of the table like a lifeline. Yunhee, however, decided it was time to step in.
āOkay, enoughā she said, her voice sharp, rising over the tension. āRenjun, you donāt have to do this. Heās already overwhelmed, and youāre justāā
Renjun cut her off with a cold laugh, looking her straight in the eye. āOh, donāt even start, Yunhee. You want to defend him now? I have every right to get angry since how he left me for you?ā
The room collectively sucked in a breath.
āWhat?ā Jeno blurted out, his voice laced with disbelief. āOh god, youāve got to be kidding me.ā
Mark turned slowly to Yunhee, his face a mixture of confusion and disbelief. āWhat is he saying?ā
Yunhee looked as though she had been caught in headlights. Her mouth opened, then closed, as her hands fidgeted nervously on her lap.
Haechan sighed deeply, throwing his head back as if resigning himself.
āYeah, Markā Renjun said, his voice heavy. āWhere do you think she got those new earrings?ā
His voice was dripping with venom as he gestured toward Yunhee. āThey were mine, by the way. Before Haechan decided he was fully straight overnight and that fucking his best friendās girlfriend was better.ā
All eyes turned to Yunhee, who instinctively touched her earrings, her face pale.
Soyul, her voice trembling with shock, muttered, āOh my god, are you serious? This is insane.ā
Mark stared at Yunhee, then at Haechan, his mouth opening and closing as he struggled to process the betrayal. āYunheeā¦ā he began, his voice quiet but full of hurt.
Yunheeās voice cracked as she tried to explain. āMark, IāItās not what you thinkāā
Chinsun, who had been silently crying, let out a bitter laugh. She stood up abruptly, wiping her tears with shaky hands. āYouāve got to be kidding meā she said, her voice breaking but laced with nervous laughter. āThis is crazy. And youāā she pointed at Haechan, her laugh turning into a scoff. āYou even had the boldness to accuse me of cheating? While youāre sitting here with a whole whore army?ā
Yunhee bristled, standing up to face her. āIām sorry, who are you calling a whore?ā
āOh, you heard meā Chinsun snapped, her hands on her hips.
āExcuse me, I was here first.ā Yunhee shot back, her voice dripping with venom.
Renjun leaned back in his chair, watching the chaos unfold with a sardonic grin. āIf weāre playing that game, technically, I was first in line.ā
Both women froze, turning their angry glares on him.
Mark, meanwhile, hadnāt moved, his gaze fixed on Haechan, his face a mixture of anger and heartbreak. āYou were my best friend,ā he said quietly, his voice trembling. āHow could you do this?ā
Haechan opened his mouth to speak but hesitated, looking utterly defeated. āMark, Iāā
āDonātā Mark interrupted, shaking his head. āJust donāt.ā
The room fell silent again, but it didnāt last long.
Jeno broke it with a frustrated sigh, throwing his hands in the air. āGod, Haechan, you couldnāt have just told us? About all of this? Especially aboutā¦ you know.ā
Haechan frowned, his exhaustion giving way to irritation. āWhy the hell would I have to tell you?ā
Jeno leaned forward, incredulous. āUh, maybe because we all used to sleep and shower together back in the day? I want to know if the guy I sleep next to is a homosexual.ā
Haechan tilted his head, genuinely confused. āAnd why would that concern you Jeno?ā
āOf course it concerns me Haechan I-ā Jeno started before being interrupted.
Jaemin, who had been quietly sipping his drink, suddenly smirked, half-laughing. āOh, you shouldnāt be the one pointing fingers, Jeno.ā
All eyes turned to Jaemin now, confusion written across everyoneās faces.
Daeun blinked, looking at him. āWhat are you talking about?ā
Jaemin looked at Jeno, then back at the group, his expression unreadable. āReally? None of you ever noticed anything? You thought I had fewer girls than Haechan just because I wasnāt trying hard enough? There was a reason I was always with Jeno.ā
The table erupted in shock, voices overlapping in disbelief.
āW-what..?ā Jaeminās revelation sent Soyul into full-blown tears.
Renjun, however, seemed unfazed. He leaned back in his chair, arms crossed. āYeah, I already knew. Heard them in the changing rooms back in high school.ā
Soyul stood abruptly, her sobs echoing in the room. āJaemin,ā she cried, her voice breaking. āThis isnāt still going on, right? Itās just old stuff, it isnāt happening anymore right? Right Jaemin? Tell me Iām right.ā
Daeun immediately went to comfort her, wrapping her arms around Soyulās shaking shoulders.
Jaeminās smirk disappeared, replaced by guilt as he rubbed a hand over his face. āSoyul, Iāā
āIs it still happening?ā Soyul partially screamed, her voice filled with desperation.
Jaemin lowered his head, unable to meet her eyes.
Soyulās tears intensified, and she choked out āJaemin I-m..ā
The boy tried to look at her.
āIām pregnant Jaemin.ā
Jaeminās eyes widened in shock, and he stood abruptly, his chair scraping against the floor.
āWhat?..ā
But Soyul didnāt let him approach her. She backed away, shaking her head as she sobbed uncontrollably. Then, turning on her heel, she bolted toward the bathroom, slamming the door behind her.
Renjun, looking exasperated but concerned, stood up and followed her, muttering āGreat. Just great.ā
The room was left in stunned silence, everyone staring at Jaemin, who stood frozen, his face pale.
Haechan, still seated, let out a humorless laugh, shaking his head. āWell, this just keeps getting better and better, doesnāt it?ā
No one responded. The only sound was Soyulās muffled sobs from behind the bathroom door.
The tension in the room hung heavy like a storm cloud, and it wasnāt long before Jeno erupted. He slammed his hands on the table, standing up abruptly and glaring at Jaemin. āWhat the hell is wrong with you?ā he barked, his voice shaking with anger. āWhy would you say that? To everyone? Here? Now?ā
Jaemin, still standing, looked at him, his expression unreadable. He met Jenoās furious gaze with a steady one of his own. āWhat did you expect, Jeno? That weād just keep pretending forever? Sooner or later, it was bound to come out. Better now than years down the line.ā
Jeno scoffed, his tone bitter. āYou think this is better? You think this was the right time? I wouldāve taken this secret to my grave if I could. Thatās what I wanted.ā
Jaemin smirked slightly, but there was no humor in it. āOf course you would, Jeno. Youāve always been good at hiding, havenāt you?ā
Jenoās fists clenched, his jaw tightening as he took a threatening step toward Jaemin. āYou have no idea what youāve just doneā he hissed.
At that moment, Haechan pushed his chair back and stood, his eyes flicking between the two men. His voice was sharp as he interjected, āOkay, hold up. Whereās all this oppressed homophobia coming from, Jeno?ā
Jeno whipped his head toward Haechan, his face flushed with frustration. āWhat the hell are you talking about?ā
Haechan crossed his arms and tilted his head, a sardonic smile playing on his lips. āOh, come on. Youāre out here acting like Jaemin just destroyed your life or something. Letās not forget, it was you in his bed, not someone else. Repeatedly. No matter how much you want to deny it now.ā
Jenoās face turned red, and his breathing quickened. āShut up, Haechan. You donāt know anything about it.ā
āI donāt?ā Haechan shot back, taking a step forward. His voice grew louder, his tone dripping with mockery. āBecause it sounds to me like youāre just mad that you liked it. That you liked him. And now youāre pissed because everyone knows.ā
At this point he clearly knows what heās talking about.
Like heās talking to his younger self.
āDonāt,ā Jeno growled, pointing a finger at Haechan, his voice trembling with rage. āDonāt twist this into something itās not.ā
āOh, but it is,ā Jaemin interjected, his voice cold. He stepped closer to Jeno, his eyes narrowing. āYou can try to rewrite history all you want, but you know damn well that none of this was one-sided. You were just as much a part of it as I was.ā
The room fell silent again, the weight of Jaeminās words hanging in the air like a guillotine. Jeno turned away, running a hand through his hair as he paced in frustration. His breathing was labored, his mind clearly racing as he tried to process everything.
The tension in the room hadnāt yet dissipated when Daeun, standing near the edge of the table, looked visibly shaken. Her normally composed demeanor was gone, replaced by wide eyes and a trembling hand that hovered near her lips. She had been silent through most of the arguments, absorbing the chaos, but now it seemed something had shaken her even more.
And, unexpectedly, it was her phone that buzzed sharply on the table, piercing through the uneasy quiet. The sound was differentāa personal ringtoneāand it made her freeze. Slowly, everyoneās attention shifted to her.
She stared at the phone like it was a live grenade, her breath catching. She gulped audibly, her hands fidgeting by her sides.
From across the table, Mark raised an eyebrow, his voice tinged with suspicion. āWell? Are you going to get that?ā
Daeunās gaze flicked to him, then to the phone. Her voice cracked slightly as she forced herself to speak. āAre we reallyā¦ still doing this?ā
The question hung in the air, heavy with resignation.
Chenle, who had been unusually quiet during the earlier confrontations, suddenly stood and reached for her phone. āAnswer the damn phone, Daeun.ā he said firmly, his tone sharper than usual. His eyes met hers with a mix of concern and frustration.
Her hand hesitated over the screen before tremblingly hitting the green button.
āHello?ā she said softly, her voice so low it was almost a whisper.
A manās voice came through the speaker, loud enough to be heard by the others.
āDaeun?ā the male voice called, familiar and almost gentle.
Her throat bobbed as she swallowed hard. āYes,ā she replied in a small voice. āIām listening.ā
Jeno, who had been quietly stewing after his earlier clash with Jaemin, suddenly sat down beside her. His gaze bore into her, searching, confused, concerned. The intensity of their eye contact was palpable, like an entire conversation was being held without words.
The manās voice on the other end of the phone continued, oblivious to the growing tension in the room. āIāve been thinking about you. Aboutā¦ us and everything.ā His tone dropped slightly, more hesitant. āHow have you been feeling? Since, you knowā¦ the thing?ā
The weight of his words dropped like a bomb in the room.
Jenoās eyes narrowed slightly, confusion etching his features. He leaned forward slightly, his focus entirely on Daeun. She didnāt look away, her gaze locked with his even as the voice on the phone kept talking.
The man sighed. āI feel like I shouldāve reached out sooner. I justā¦ Iām sorry about how everything happened. We shouldāve been more careful.ā Then, after a pause, the voice added tentatively, āDoes he know?ā
Daeun stiffened, her lips parting but no words coming out. She and Jeno stayed locked in their silent standoff until finally, with her voice barely audible, she said, āNo. He doesnāt know.ā
With that, she ended the call abruptly, her hand shaking as she placed the phone back on the table.
The silence that followed was deafening. No one dared to speak. All eyes were on her and Jeno.
Finally, Jeno broke the silence, his voice low and harsh. āSo? What was he talking about?ā
Daeunās hands curled into fists at her sides, but she refused to answer him.
āDaeunā Jeno pressed, his tone rising with frustration. āWhat the fuck was he talking about?ā
She finally spoke, her jaw tight. āYou donāt have the right to make that tone with me.ā she snapped.
āThe hell I donāt!ā Jenoās voice boomed as he stood again, abruptly, the chair scraping loudly against the floor. āTell me what the fuck he meant!ā
Her control broke. āI was pregnant!ā she screamed, her voice echoing through the room. She stood as well, facing him with fire in her eyes.
The words hit like a physical blow, and Jeno froze, his face paling.
The room fell silent again, everyone too stunned to even breathe. Daeun and Jeno stared at each other, their gazes unrelenting and raw.
Jenoās lips moved, but no sound came out at first. Finally, he whispered, his voice broken and tentative, āIt wasnāt mine, was it?ā
Daeun let out a bitter laugh, her eyes glistening with unshed tears. āHow could it have been yours, Jeno? Itās been months since the last time you touched me.ā
Her words cut deep and Jeno flinched.
Then, with a deliberate pause, she glanced at Jaeminājust briefly, but enough for everyone to catch itābefore turning her gaze back to Jeno. Her voice dropped to a deadly calm. āā¦And now I understand why.ā
The implication of her words rippled through the room like an electric shock.
Daeunās gaze lingered on Jeno for a moment longer before she let out a shaky breath and stormed away, walking past the table. She headed toward the bathroom, where Soyul was still crying, cuddled with Renjun.
Jeno stood rooted to the spot, his fists clenched tightly by his sides. His face was a mixture of shock, anger, and something deeperāregret, maybe, or guilt.
No one said a word. The weight of the revelation was too much to process.
Jeno finally let out a shaky breath and sat back down, his head in his hands. āWhat the fuck,ā he muttered under his breath, though no one could tell if he was talking to himself or everyone else.
The heavy silence in the living room seemed impenetrable, each person trapped in their own thoughts after the nightās shocking revelations. Even the usual sounds of the houseāMarkās fridge humming, the faint ticking of a wall clockāfelt muted under the suffocating weight of everything left unsaid.
Then, suddenly, the doorbell rang.
Everyone jolted, startled by the noise, and looked around the room in confusion.
āWho the hell is that?ā Jaemin muttered under his breath, still nursing the glass of wine he hadnāt taken a sip from.
Chinsun, still perched on the edge of the sofa where sheād been sitting with Chenle, let out a dry laugh. āI guess another one of Lee Donghyuckās boyfriends has arrived!ā she said, her tone cutting.
Haechan glared at her from his corner of the room, but before he could retort, Chinsun stood, brushing imaginary dust off her pants, and motioned toward the door. Chenle hesitated but eventually stood alongside her.
The rest of the group, including Renjun, Daeun, and Soyul, who had just returned from the bathroom, slowly began to gather near the door. The tension among them was palpable as they waited for Chinsun to open it.
When she finally did, the tall, broad figure of a strikingly handsome young man was revealed. His tailored coat and polished shoes screamed wealth, and his air of confidence seemed out of place in the disheveled chaos of Markās house.
The man smiled hesitantly, trying to break the ice. āHi, Iāmāā
But Chinsun interrupted him before he could finish. āYou can come in and get Haechan,ā she snapped, crossing her arms. āAnd then the both of you can get the fuck out of this house.ā
The young man blinked, clearly caught off guard, his confused gaze shifting from Chinsun to the rest of the group. His eyes scanned the crowd, passing over each face until they landed on one that finally seemed to click.
āā¦Uh, I donāt even know who Haechan isā he said, his voice unsure but firm. His eyes locked onto his loved one, and his expression softened. āIām here for Chenle.ā
The room fell into a stunned silence.
The air, already heavy, seemed to grow impossibly thicker.
Chenle let out a long, weary sigh, stepping forward past his frozen friends to stand beside the man. He reached out and took his hand, intertwining their fingers, and turned to face the group. His gaze swept over their stunned expressionsāsome confused, some shocked.
āYesā Chenle began calmly, his voice steady despite the tension in the air. āThis is my boyfriend, Jisung. Or as some of you may know himā¦ Jiul.ā
The collective gasp that followed was almost theatrical in its intensity.
āJiul?ā Jeno blurted out, his tone somewhere between disbelief and accusation. āWhy the hell did you tell us it was a girl?ā
āAnd why didnāt you bring him to dinner?ā Yunhee added, her voice tinged with genuine confusion.
Chenle huffed out a dry laugh, standing shoulder to shoulder with Jisung, who looked equally baffled by the situation.
āYou want to know why?ā Chenle began, his voice sharper now as his frustration bubbled to the surface. He gestured around the room with his free hand, his gaze unwavering. āLook at everything thatās happened tonight. Look at how all of you reacted to Haechanās situation, to Renjunās story. The petty fights, the accusations, the thinly veiled homophobia thatās been lurking under the surface all night. And you wonder why I didnāt bring Jisung here?ā
No one spoke, though a few of them visibly shifted, uncomfortable under his words.
Chenle shook his head and let out a bitter laugh. āI told you Jisung was a girl because I knewāI knewāthat if I told the truth, youād judge me. Youād judge him. Youād find some way to make this about your own insecurities instead of just letting us be happy.ā
Jisung squeezed the boyās hand gently, his expression softening, but Chenle wasnāt done.
āI didnāt want him to come tonight, and now Iām glad I didnāt bring him to dinner,ā Chenle continued. āBecause this,ā he gestured at the group again, āthis mess? It wouldāve ruined him. Heās too pure for thisātoo pure for all of you.ā
He turned his gaze pointedly to Jeno and then to Jaemin. āYou two canāt even have a functional friendship without dragging your relationship baggage into it.ā
Then he turned to Haechan. āYou spend so much time lying to yourself and everyone else that youāve started destroying the people who care about you most. You have no right to judge anyone else when youāve been tearing your own life apart from the inside.ā
Finally, his gaze landed on the entire group, sweeping across them like a storm. āAnd the rest of you? You sit here and watch, like youāre better than everyone else, when the truth is youāre just as broken and hypocritical. You still have all this deep-seated homophobia inside of youāwhether you realize it or not. You canāt even handle a little honesty without blowing up. And thatās on you. Thatās something you all need to fix in yourselves instead of pointing fingers at everyone else.ā
The room fell silent again, Chenleās words hanging heavy in the air.
Jisung finally spoke up, his voice hesitant but kind. āUhā¦ Should we go? I donāt want to cause any more trouble.ā
Chenle glanced at him, his expression softening for the first time since he started talking. āYesā he said quietly. āI think itās time to go homeā
Chenle gave one last glance at the group, his eyes hard but filled with disappointment. āGood night, everyone,ā he said flatly, his hand still clasped firmly in Jisungās. The door clicked shut behind them, leaving the others staring at the space they had occupied moments before.
Renjun was the first to move. His gaze flickered to the othersāno goodbye, no explanationājust a glance that spoke of finality. Without a word, he walked over to Daeun, who had been standing near the kitchen island, her expression unreadable. āCome on,ā he said softly, and she nodded, letting him guide her out of the house.
Soyul followed soon after, her tear-streaked face pale and exhausted. Chinsun, who had been silently leaning against the wall, pushed herself off with a small sigh. She grabbed her coat and bag and walked toward the door without sparing anyone a second glance.
They didnāt say goodbye. The door opened, and they left.
Jaemin and Jeno stood awkwardly near the door, their expressions as cold as the night air that began to seep through the cracks. Jeno looked at Jaemin, his eyes conflicted, before sighing heavily and grabbing his coat from the back of a chair. Jaemin followed suit, his movements slower, as if weighed down by unspoken words.
As they reached the door, Jaemin hesitated, looking back at Yunhee. His lips twitched into a faint smileāone of acknowledgment, regret, and resignation all rolled into one. He nodded at her slightly before stepping out after Jeno, letting the door fall shut behind them.
Now, only Mark, Yunhee, and Haechan remained.
The living room felt cavernous, like a hollow shell of the home it had been only hours earlier. The three of them stood frozen, avoiding each otherās gazes.
Haechan sighed deeply and moved toward the coat rack. He pulled on his jacket, his movements uncharacteristically slow. He lingered for a moment, standing by the door, his hand resting on the handle.
āIām sorry,ā he said quietly, his voice barely above a whisper.
Mark and Yunhee exchanged a glance, but neither of them responded. There were no words left, nothing that could smooth over the damage that had been done tonight.
Haechan didnāt wait for a reply. He opened the door and stepped out into the cold, letting the door close behind him with a soft click.
One by one, as they exited the house, the lunar eclipse began to fade. The moon, which had been cloaked in shadow, slowly emerged into the light once more. Its silver glow illuminated the quiet streets outside, casting long shadows as if trying to cleanse the darkness that had enveloped the night.
Mark stood by the window, watching as the obscurity faded and the world outside returned to normal. The celestial phenomenon, which had felt so significant just hours earlier, now seemed like nothing more than a fleeting eventāa brief moment of darkness before the light inevitably returned.
Underneath the glow of the moonlight, Chenle and Jisung waited near their car. They lingered by the curb, their faces relaxed, but their conversation was light and casual.
Daeun and Soyul exited the house shortly after, joined by Renjun and Chinsun. They strolled down the steps, their chatter warm and friendly. Daeun raised an eyebrow at Jisung, a teasing smile playing on his lips. āSo, whoās this handsome guy, huh?ā he asked.
Chinsun followed up, her curiosity piqued. āWhere have you been hiding him, Chenle?ā
Chenle stole a quick glance at Jisung before responding smoothly āOh, weāre just really close friends. Same department and all that. You know how it is.ā
The others nodded, the explanation seemingly enough, and the group shifted into easy conversation. Laughter bubbled up as Jaemin and Jeno joined them, their arms casually draped over their girlfriends. Jeno playfully nudged Chenle with a grin. āSomethingās fishy. Is there something going on between you two? Chenle, are you hiding something?ā
āMe?ā Chenle asked, feigning mock indignation as he stole another glance at Jisung. āNever.ā
Everyone laughed, the tension of the evening evaporating into the cool night air. When Haechan finally emerged from the house, Chinsun turned to him with a radiant smile, her hand waving him over. āCome on, baby! Weāre all waiting for you!ā
Haechan jogged down the steps, his face lighting up as he reached her, pressing a quick kiss to her cheek. āWhatād I miss?ā he asked, slipping an arm around her waist.
āNothing importantā she replied with a grin.
Chenle jingled his car keys. āAlright, I guess this is where we part ways. See you all next time?ā
A chorus of agreements followed, and the group exchanged playful goodbyes.
Haechan stopped in his tracks, turning to call out, āJaemin! Donāt forget about the basketball game next weekend. Weāve got space if you can keep up.ā
Jaemin smirked, raising an eyebrow. āKeep up? Iām ready to destroy you.ā
āIād like to see you tryā Haechan shot back with a grin, before returning to Chinsunās side.
The group dispersed, heading to their cars or walking down the street under the soft glow of the moonlight, as though nothing had shifted in the delicate balance of their friendships.
Back at the house, Mark and Yunhee were finishing up. The table was cleared, the wine glasses washed and left to dry. Mark wiped his hands on a towel as Yunhee sat on the edge of the bed, taking off her jewels.
āLong nightā she said, her voice light.
Mark nodded, leaning against the doorway of their bedroom. āYeah. You know, Iām glad we didnāt play that game tonightā he said, his tone measured.
Yunhee glanced at him, her brow furrowing slightly. āWhy? Whatās so bad about a silly game?ā
Mark sighed, crossing his arms. āSometimes itās better not to know everything. People have their secrets, and maybe they need to stay secrets. Not because theyāre trying to hurt anyone, but because knowing them wouldnāt help anything. It would justā¦ ruin things.ā
Yunhee considered this for a moment, nodding slowly. āI guess youāre right. But honestly, I donāt even have anything to hideā she said with a small smile as she placed her earrings on the nightstand, right next to her phone.
Markās eyes lingered on her for a moment, a faint smile playing on his lips. āThose earrings are beautiful, by the wayā he said softly.
Yunhee chuckled, sliding under the covers. āThanks, theyāre my favorite.ā
Mark reached over to turn off the bedside lamp. āGoodnight,ā he murmured as the room plunged into darkness.
Outside, the moon shone brightly, its light spilling into the quiet streets below. The obscurity had passed, but its lingering shadows remained, woven subtly into the hearts of those who had gathered that night. Though the light had returned, it seemed that not everything could go back to normal. And yet, life went on, as it always does, under the moonās watchful gaze.
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Pip pip from your friendly neighbourhood lurker, I saw your requests are open and so I shall request my fluffy little idea to you dear writer and I hope you find just as funny and sweet as I did.
So for my request for the mtp bois basically on TikTok I saw a vid where a gf found her bf sleeping on the soft and decided to prank him by setting up a fake game of uno (but you can choose a different board game/card game if you want) once set up she starts shaking him awake and telling him its his turn obviously confused and half asleep but still takes his turn.
I donāt have any pacifically for this request so Iām leaving up to you to choose who would be best for this scenario.
From yours truly,
Your friendly neighbourhood lurker ļæ¼
Hello, Friendly Neighborhood Lurker! For your ask, I decided on a few things on my own. Sadly, I don't believe uno existed during the Victorian era, so I opted for chess instead (a game I am absolute trash at, but shall write about it nonetheless). I also decided that William and Sherlock would be the most likely to fall asleep on the sofa during a busy day, so they will be our victims lol
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My Turn? - Moriarty Boys x Reader
William Moriarty
Your poor William had been working himself to death lately.
Between the long days of teaching, long evenings of grading papers, and long nights of committing acts of violence, it was a miracle he ever got any sleep.
So when he finally fell into a deep slumber on the sofa one lazy morning, you knew now was the perfect time to spring your trap.
William awoke to the realization of a few things. 1. There was fresh tea brewing beside him. Earl grey, as far as he could tell. 2. You were sitting beside him. The floral notes of your favorite perfume was unmistakeable. 3. You were calling to him. Gently, lovingly. It brought him out of his slumber in the most lovely way he could imagine. His eyes opened sluggishly, turning his head to look over at you. "Yes, y/n? What is it?" He yawned, trying to focus on your words. You giggled, "It's your turn, William." He realized what you were talking about. There was a chessboard in front of you, set up next to said previously mentioned tea. The table between you two held snacks as well, set up like one of your usual game nights. He observed the board, before chuckling himself, "I can assure you, my dear, I am not the one who placed these pieces. But, to humor you..." He picked up a pawn, using it to behead one of your knights. Another laugh, "Why do you say that, Will? We were playing, and you must've been so tired you dozed off-" "This board is set up to a Stafford's gambit. Though I am no great chess player, even I know that this is a poor choice of plays." You finally released your laughter, trying to scoff it down to no avail, "And here I was, dear, hoping I had finally tricked you." Finally, he sat up. leaning across the table to give you a peck on the cheek. "Mm. Maybe one day, my sweet girl. Maybe one day."
Sherlock Holmes
This man is the most manic creature ever created by fiction, do you think he sleeps on a regular basis?
He's too smart to fall for your tricks after just one nap, which is why you waited for a much different occurance to happen...
You waited til he was coming back from a case.
"Dove?!" He was elated. His latest case had truly been genius. A devious crime scene, a truly mad perpetrator, everything he could have wanted! Even a headless nun! He simply had to tell you, his beloved partner of 2 years, all about it! "I'm over here where you left me, Lock!" He ran to you, bounding over heaps of books that he had looked through earlier, before joining you on the ragged sofa. In front of you was a chessboard, still in the early few plays. "Did John play a few games with you? Goodness knows that man is rubbish at chess. He should stick to being a doctor." You laughed, placing your hand on his knee, "No, dear, remember? We were just starting our game when Lestrade barged in and asked for your help." His face fell, trying to recall the events earlier that day. Truly, he couldn't recall too much besides following Lestrade out the door. A guilty look marred his face, "Dove, I am so sorry. I don't even remember. The case, it took up so much of my mind..." He looked over to you. Normally, he would have expected you to look sad. Disappointed, maybe. Instead, you had a smile. He took an extra second to observe the layout in front of him. Those were not any type of moves he would have played. He pinched your arm, and you squealed, "Liar. Good one, though. You almost got me." A kiss on your cheek, and he picked up one of your bishops off of the board. "Now, let me tell you about the headless nun."
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boy in silly sitting positions compilation
#cats#I especially like the last one where he just has one single paw poking out of that box for some reason lol#I still have costumes to post and like a billion other things.... grr... constantly failing at staying active on social media aughh#I think because currently my Main Focus is on trying to get my game done and stuff.. which basically just means sitting and writing all day#so there's not much to post about. Though I know the Good At Social Media thing to do would be to post about the#writing and share progress and talk about the game and characters or whatever to try to build interest or something but that is SOOO weird#to me.. I could maybe get it if it was like a tiny tiny discord groupchat of playtesters with like 5 people in#it.. But something about talking openly about things before they happen is weird to me?? Like presumptuous feeling or something#''oooo guess whats gonna happen LATER!!!'' like.. how do you know.. what if it doesnt. what if you dont finish it. what if its not the way#you think it's going to be. what if something changes. etc. Like I literally avoid movie trailers and game trailers for the same reason ghj#Even if it's not ME doing it it just feels... weird.. Maybe it has to do with my OCD and how I just don't like talking about ''future''#things in Certain Terms. Like if I was going to say ''Oh yeah sure. come over to my house in a few months''. I would have to follow it up#with like ''HOPEFULLY you can come over to my house in a few months'' or 'They'll come over in a few months MOST LIKELY''. Because just#stating that something will happen matter of factly takes for granted like.. what if somehting horrible happens and I DONT have a house#in a few months? or what if something bad happens to me. or to the person coming over? I can't ever DEFINITELY say with 100% certainty#that one could ACTUALLY come to my house in a few months. anything could change. So I have to allot for that in my phrasing. hbjjkn#There are a lot of situations where you're expected to just Assume Things but for some reason that bothers me. My brain literally does not#even Assume the most basic things.. like how do *I* know that just because it's someones birthday that they want to be wished a happy#birthday? what if they dont? everyone is different and has different preferences. I should check with them first. or wait until they public#ly announce that theyre accepting birthday wishes. I have to allot for all 5034859069 rare possibilities at any given time and never take#anything for certain. etc. ghjbjhbh.... ANYWAY.. I have been feeling a bit sick lately as usual.. but still slowly making progress on some#things. Moslty I need to edit costume photos. make sculptures. and work on the game. Going back reading some of the old writing from like#2018 and suprisingly I don't have to change that much of it? In fact I like it mostly. so that's good. I would be very interested if I were#playing the game myself. Though that doesnt mean much since my tastes are so niche lol..#Still really want to clear some of my million tumblr drafts as well... alas and aughh and ooughh and so on and so forth. Between all of my#evil appointments other such things...why cant I have one billion dollar to retire into relaxed hermit artist life of no stressors.. bleas
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Honestly, this is the sort of thing that all of us who deal in dark kink one way or another have to deal with. I remember when I first started writing darker stuff - bondage, noncon fantasies, that sort of thing - I was genuinely haunted.
''Am I a bad person for writing this stuff? For enjoying it?''
It was made worse because I was writing what I liked. I remember trying to deal with it at first. A sheltered girl who felt the need to write hardcore stuff as a way to cope with the world while worrying that this made her a bad person. In a sense, I suppose that worry was a good thing? it made me examine myself. I introspected a lot. I actually thought out what I was doing and why I did it, and the conclusions I reached I still hold to this day.
Fantasy is fantasy. It's human nature to be attracted to the extreme, drawn to the abyss. We're like moths to a flame in a way. We know that in reality, what we dream of would be horrible. It would hurt people, it would destroy lives. But there is a part of us drawn to the *fantasy* of it. To the game of it. Just so long as we know we can put that game down at the end of the day and come back to a world where everything makes sense.
Writers like me - I don't want to speak for you here since I am sure you have your own conclusions and feelings on the matter - we create fantasies. We weave forbidden tales. We satisfy the desire for dark things in a safe way. I won't say that we don't walk a thin line. We absolutely do. People can consume what we create in an unhealthy way. We need to be aware of that. We have to hold it in our minds.
But we can also help people.
Some people - many people - deal with their traumas, their fears, their worries about the future with sex. The most basic example of that is the classic BDSM surrender thing. Where a sub just wants to surrender, to let their guard down, to *not worry* for an hour or so and relax into a world where they're taken care of and they don't have to make decisions. For them, the lack of control isn't a punishment, it's a release. And they have the right to experience this. For some of them, it's the only release they get.
But it goes further than this. Sometimes for people who face prejudice and bigotry in real life, whose lives might very well be in danger and who face suffering for who they are, fantasies like this are a safe way to engage and cope with those facts. This is true both now and in the past. During World War 2, Nazi porn was massive among people who could be targeted by the Nazis. You know why? Because if you take something scary, something terrifying, something that wants to hurt you and you make it sexy? In a sense, you're removing it's power. You're taking control. You're telling it that you won't be scared of it. You'll take it and use it as fuel.
That's also human nature, and it's something that many people - people who don't deal with it because they're lucky enough not to be threatened in that way - don't really get. They look at, for example, noncon fantasies and think it's about guys lusting after a world where they can just fuck a woman no matter if she wants it or not. There are some people like that, I won't lie. But there are also girls who use it to cope with a fear that they might one day *live* in that world. There are women who were forced into encounters like that and who use stories to contextualise their experiences and reclaim their power and control.
There are trans girls who write and get off to stories focused on transphobia and misgendering, not because they're self-hating but because those are things they deal with every day and they need a release.
And these days, as things skew more and more towards the worse in the real world, releases like this are only going to become more important.
tldr, humans when given the choice will usually choose horny over scary. A lot of people are having to make that choice right now. Dark kink like the sort of thing we produce can be a release for those who desperately need it. Also, apologies for spinning off your post into one of my own. It got me thinking and I wanted to put my work words to it.
Kink in the Hard Era
I got a message recently. It succinctly told me to end my life. Interesting how we can do that in three letters!
Normally, I ignore such missives. This time, however, I engaged. I asked why I should die.
The answer was simple: "you're a misogynist loser".
And you know what...? I get it. I do. This kink, involving power, mind control, gender roles and all that good stuff is a lot less fun when reality seems to be turning fantasies into nightmares.
I trust that everyone here knows I'm not a misogynist, right-winger, complete asshat. But if you need to step back from my content, I absolutely understand. To be honest, I'm not conflict-free in my head about it.
My hope is to provide a place for play, for fantasy; a haven where we can explore power dynamics without the inherent malignancy of hierarchy. But, as stated in my bio: this is all fantasy. Always has been.
And if you are truly a misogynist, transphobe, racist or any other flavor of pond scum making the real lives of real people harder and more dangerous: kindly fuck off.
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When I think about Mizuki in aini itās like, I know something is just so off about her but I have trouble articulating it. Itās really frustrating cuz she was like my favorite character in the first game and when I play the first game I feel like I have a really good idea of who she is as a character. Like she acts strong and and hangs out with people much older than her and has to take on a fuck ton of responsibility but sheās also just a kid she cuddles with a rabbit toy she raises fish in the fridge she can be kinda gullible in the way that kids are and she doesnāt always understand more mature jokes. She acts sassy and hostile towards Date but sheās described as kinda and compassionate by Hitomi and she defends the weak and loves her friends deeply and thinks Aiba is cute. She pokes fun at Date for being grumpy at the shrine and then excitedly holds his hand and drags him over to the offering box to pray for his safety and she gets scared when thereās danger and she hugs Date for comfort but then tries to brush it off because she was taught to feel shame whenever she required basic attention and affection. She was hurt badly by her biological family and finds herself at home with Date despite her fears of him not caring for her. Like sheās a really solid well rounded character with strengths and weaknesses and her story makes me feel every possible emotion known to man
Then I play aini and I was soooo excited to see that Mizuki was gonna be a protagonist and that she had Aiba (its what made me buy the game immediately after finishing the first game lol) and then like. I honestly canāt tell you a damn thing about her character in aini. Like sheās the protagonist for half that game and I canāt think of any particular struggles she has as a character or like any moments where she stands out. Itās like, I know this is Mizuki she has the same basic features of that character but sheās not really given much? And anything new you learn about her is just like, retcons of her already established and well written backstory that just. Really didnāt need to be made and honestly they just kinda do a disservice to her character
Like first off thereās the Bibi twist which. Oof. I have some pretty complicated feelings about Bibi in general like okay. When she appears as the masked woman I was totally on board and thought she was really interesting and I was so prepared for her to be a favorite character her somnium is probably my favorite one in the game. And then she was revealed to be Mizuki. And it was revealed that we were playing as her for half of the B side of the story and we didnāt know it. Like, where to even begin. They stopped writing Bibi as her own character and she pretty much just became Mizuki except idk, she has a bigger grudge against Ryuki and has a heart condition I guess. And like I think it really speaks to how flat Mizuki was in this game if we can play as two completely different characters and have them be indistinguishable. Bibi shouldnāt be anything like Mizuki, theyāve lived completely different lives. And I hate the clone twist like good god I really hate the clone twist because IT ADDS NOTHING TO MIZUKIS CHARACTER OR HER CONFLICT. In fact it like, actively goes against her arc from the first game??? Cuz like half the point of Date and Mizukiās relationship is there to show that family isnāt what youāre born with, itās what you make. Both Date and Mizuki feel like their little family canāt exist because theyāve been taught, like most of us have, that biological family is the most important and real and valid way to have a family. Youāre supposed to love and respect your biological parents because they MADE you, and Date has to live with the anguish that he canāt be Mizukiās REAL father because they arenāt blood related. So like, to pull the rug away and go "oh yeah btw I guess Mizuki was adopted lol" it just completely erases what made her story so impactful to most people. And the clone reveal adds nothing like Mizuki doesnāt NEED this at all she wasnāt looking to discover the truth of her backstory because. There wasnāt any truths that needed to be discovered, we already know her deal and so does she. And her having a clone doesnāt really fit with the half to whole theme cuz like, she wasnāt looking for a fucking clone or like a secret sister or anything like that. Itās just stupid itās so stupid
What Mizuki needed was like, a new actual conflict that required her to overcome challenges and grow as a character. A lot of people, myself included, have complained about how her relationship with Date just isnāt talked about hardly at all, how he went missing for 6 years and they didnāt even get a proper reunion and the game kinda mocks you for wanting one. We dont get any context as to how Mizuki coped during that time like she was completely alone for the most major years of her life she was separated from the one person who was her real family and we donāt know what she felt during all that cuz the game refuses to talk about it. And there isnāt much indication that the adults care about this either, Boss maybe has a soft spot for her but thatās kinda the extent of it, she makes a joke that Date is probably off chilling in a hot spring in Atami so clearly no one is giving Dateās disappearance the weight it deserves. So like, we have this potential thing we could work with here like why is Mizuki a detective now and why does she care about this case? Because her dad was taken by tearer and has been gone for 6 years and sheās been all alone and she wants to find him and find out if heās even alive and she wants to kick tearers ass cuz he tore (hehe) her family apart. And this can also give her an actual connection to Ryuki too like Ryuki is the one who betrayed Date and knew some shit about tearer and saw what happened to Date and he just never told Mizuki the truth and sheās spent all this time looking for Date so this would be like, pretty major conflict when it all gets revealed. And it actually gives what Ryuki did actual consequences that affect him cuz honestly the fact that no one seems to care that much about Dateās disappearance makes Ryukiās guilt and depression seem completely fucking useless lol. So here we go, thatās some conflict for Mizuki to have and it gives her a personal connection to the case, we can add more to it but really even this alone is way more than what sheās given in the actual game. And I think just the big problem with her in aini is I think the writers were too afraid to do anything that could ruin her character or cause her to change too much so they just like. Didnāt write anything that could allow her to develop and instead just fucked with already established information about her which. I honestly donāt know how that is seen as better??? In what fucking world. It just feels really pointless to have even made Mizuki a protagonist to begin with since they donāt really do anything with her and lol I think the writers realized this so thatās why like. Ryuki gets all the character conflict but makes lowkey no progress in the case and the real investigation doesnāt happen until the Mizuki side cuz they needed to make up for the fact they didnāt write anything for her alskla
So yeah just to wrap things up, Mizuki just didnāt get to be a character in aini and she wasnāt given any interesting conflict despite how easy it wouldāve been cuz the writers were too scared of doing anything with this character that could ruin her but dude. Dont fucking make her the protagonist then if youāre too scared of doing anything with her. Donāt piss me off like that
#aitsf#aini#ai the somnium files#ai the somniun files nirvana initiative#mizuki date#im still working out the kinks for my aini rewrite so i had to RESTRAIN MYSELF from getting into that too much lol#but yeah god like this is a really big problem and like its hard to talk about the fact that mizuki wasnt given any real conflict and was#basically just a cardboard cutout of a character this whole game#without it sounding like idk. complaining about the fact that shes a girl and just automatically writing her story off as bad#because shes a girl and just being really misogynistic cuz ive definitely seen that with her and its like AAAGHHH#i agree that shes not written good but its not cuz women are inherently boring and stupid dipshit#i think we can argue that her story is bad because of misogyny if we wanted to cuz id say its a factor#but yeah its just really frustrating cuz like ive played this game THOROUGHLY very thoroughly and still cant tell you much about mizuki#uh anyways i hate the clone twist i will never not hate it i was so ready to be a bibi stan i was so let down š
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50$ to print 10 of the same skin has always been so insane to me. you're telling me it's 50$ to print....only 10.....of a single skin....and that's normal. And not only is that normal, that's what's required for a skin shop. where ppl may not even sign up for 10 runs. and then you're left in the shitter with at minimum 1-4 skins nobody wanted (not to mention if some people decide not to pay afterward) that you have to just pray someone finds & buys on the auction house. And it's 50$. Uhuh. And then that's just the artist's issue and fault and we're gonna blame them instead of the fact that a 10 print run costs as much as groceries.
#dont get me started on how gems to real money is i hate it and i think its stupid but in particular its bad for uma folks#i just cant comprehend it. i know yall making FAR too much bank off uma ppl don't beg me to turn your ads back on bro youre literally fine#fr#flight rising#chimechatter#yeah fuck it ill put this in the main tag who give a shit#50$ is such a slap in the face. not even to mention how hard it can be to keep accents within the 35% range so youre only spending 25$#instead. like u have to limit ur vision. which uscks. idk. just not a fan of it purrsonally. if you are then good for you ig#i just cant support pet site png packs costing more than like 10$ each. i cant do it. inconcievable.#EDIT: got one comment that made me want to write an essay on how FIFTY DOLLARS IS GROCERY MONEY AND THE ENTIRE POINT OF THE GAME IS DECORAT#NG YOUR DRAGON SO OFC PEOPLE WANT TO DECORATE THEIR DRAGON AND MY POINT STILL STANDS THAT 50$ IS INSANE#2000G/20$ IS SO MUCH MORE REASONABLE AND Basically if you even half-defend it i'm blocking you sorry.#āāāoptionalāāā premium item doesnt excuse fucking grocery money cost and not everybody wants to grind their life away fulltime petsite job#anyways. my point of this edit is im turning off notifs and if you send me an ask about this i'm blocking you. goodnight
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My hyper-specific type when it comes to otome guys:
- Absolutely pathetic - Cannot speak to a girl normally to save his life - Tries to be calm/aloof, but turns tsundere when flustered enough - A good and pure man at heart, yet does some questionable things - ...Little Red Riding Hood???
#heart fragment#taisho x alice#otome#doofenshmirtz voice: if i had a nickel for every time i fell in love with a video game guy heavily associated to little red riding hood...#..i'd have two nickels. which isn't a lot but it's weird that it happened twice!#i made this post basically as a way to announce i played heart fragment recently. and uh. it's REALLY GOOD#i probably do love clive the most (and i was immediately interested/biased considering his similarities to Red) but...#the rest of the cast is great too! I ADORE shannon and i am beyond ready to figure out what jasper's deal is#and honestly i'm into the mystery and the strained family relationship aspects too. just great writing all around even beyond the romances#this is one of Those Games that messes with you and the more you play it the more it sneaks new creepy stuff in#whatever the hell is going on with inigo in the dreams is unsettling. and i love it.#but seriously i'd recommend this to any otome fan and ESPECIALLY taiali fans considering the similarities go far beyond just this#you like fairy tales? you like exploring psychological issues and trauma? this is the game for you#also you can date guys AND girls which is a rare treat! again - i LOVE shannon. i just... love clive even more#but to be fair i think the hangup is that no matter what you're very close and friendly with shannon#so even if you don't romance her you still have a great relationship with her regardless#meanwhile with clive he's starting as a stranger and you basically have to be a jerk to him or blow him off which hurts my heart#and also clive seems to fall kind of fast and hard for you so the relationship developing in a romantic direction just feels. right IMO#i can accept being just besties with shannon (even though I definitely still love her romance outcomes)#but it pains me to spurn clive's affections#on an unrelated note i do intend to post my thoughts (basically a review) of winter's wish: spirits of edo#but i want to finish getting the sorrow endings for CGs and lore which means a second run through several routes
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my feelings on sonic boom (the show to be specific, im not really familiar with the games. #fakefanalert) are so complicated these days like there are things i like about sonic boom. i wouldnt revisit it every time i cant find anything else to watch if i hated it . but sometimes the characterizations in boom really bother me . like i dont think their personalities being a bit different is an inherently bad thing i understand its an alternate universe where the characters have been living completely different lives, and its also a comedy show so things are often gonna be exaggerated for the joke. but i hate how some of these characterizations that do not work well for the mainline characters impact peoples view of those versions of the characters anyway and sometimes even bleed into the games themselves
basically every time i see someone call knuckles a himbo or amy a girlboss mom friend i look at sonic boom and go THIS IS YOUR FAULT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
#like (game) knuckles isnt stupid youre ignoring all context of his actions if you think he wa sjust being stupid#amy doesnt have to be ''mature'' to be a good character let her be a kid for the love of god#and maybe its not really fair to blame sonic boom's impact on the show itself because the creators of the show had no control over that#but. i do think there are times in the show where it feels like whoever is writing the episode#doesnt really have much respect for the characters or source material. i cant think of any specific examples off the top of my head though#it definitely doesnt help much that sonic boom came out in that really weird 2010s era where sega was acting like.#embarrassed of themselves and trying to appeal to people who hate sonic instead of actual sonic fans#and the official sonic social media accoutns were basically just meme pages where they would make fun of their own games#and interact with the game grumps and be like ''lolll remember sonic 06. that game sucked so bad''#because it was funny and trendy to hate sonic. i mean it still kinda is but it was a lot worse back then
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so does anyone actually know what happened exactly with subnautica below zero? I feel like ive asked this before but i dont recall
all i know is i remember reading developer blogs where they mentioned that the lead writer changed midway through development and there was some sort of situation where the dev team rewrote absolutely everything that the original writer had done to the point where it was unrecognizeable
cause the early access iterations of SBZ had a drastically different story and plot thread, so playing through it on full release was just... not good
#thunderclap#i tried rly hard to like it but man it was really hard. i just dont understand why they had to change all of the writing for it#especially after so much positive feedback for the early access versions. they had to redo so much voice work so many animations#idk its just so confusing to me still like!!! there was so much work done the game was basically DONE all that was missing was the ending#and they CHANGED ALL OF IT... WHY#it just felt so much sloppier than the first game the environment had nothing to do with the story there wasnt a good place to build a base#the crystal caves and below are just cool set pieces that are terrible to navigate bc there arent any landmarks#idk man its weird. i think about it a lot. i think it says a lot too that no one talked about it online everyone is still messing with S1
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