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| I apologize if this isn’t good- I have never posted my poems anywhere- And this is mostly for venting, but if you have advice please share! |

The World: 

Soft indie music with the windows down

Rainbows on every little doodle

Pastel clothes and drawings 

Sunshine painting my vision

Meeting you took that away

Meeting you gave me more

Meeting you gave me rainbows

Meeting you gave me the Sunshine

Pink skies and bike rides outside

Watching setting suns from my window

Soft love songs early in the morning 

Excitement and bright clothes

Losing you took that away

Losing you ripped it from my warm hands

Losing you burned my chest 

Losing you took away the stars

Tears and mint chocolate ice cream

Sad songs and video games

Rock music and dark clothes

Binge watching and red pens 

Losing you took that away too

Losing you taught me to love

Losing you taught me that love hurts

Losing you taught me about the world

Fun music with windows down

Laughing with new friends and junk food

Watching movies past the sunset 

Sleeping in till the sun has risen