#CHeriff Jacky

[the-broccodile]

Page thee and four of the comic beta, these pages all 1-4 are simply test pages in order to find an artstyle that works, I belive I’ll put in more detail, I wan’t the pages to look nicer, however I don’t really know how to work out the backgrounds. I’ve tried using outlines and even some that are thinner and softer but they just make everithing so chaotic so I’ll just look out more with the lineless style for the backgrounds, it will be difficult to do more detailed stuff but when I get used to it maybe it will be easier than using outlines...  Maybe I’ll redo Noras character design a bit as well when I get to the real Comic I’ll also play arround with the way the text bubbles look, I’ll still write everything myself but I’ll likely change the shape of the bubble, make them less angles and more fitting, I’ll line up the writing better and make it thinner and better readable. I’ll take out the signature on the bottom right and the comic name on the bottom left, I belive this is unnessisary... I’ll likely add more shading, but not close to as detailed as in action shots. Also gotta play arround with the background colours more, theire so bland... I mean I guess theire supposed to be bland for especialy the first  area, but well... it will be all nicer looking once they leave the forrest. Not sure if I’ll to the whole first chapeter as a beta and then normal or if I’ll only do a few pages and redraw thouse, probably the ladder. I especially have to work on the mein character, currently she is the blandest character I have and one of the onlys with out an actual personalety written out for them... that’s not a good approach of mine hehe...

[the-broccodile]

This is a Blue sprout tree, a rare magical tree wich grows up hollow, over the years this tree grows taller than any other on the Brother planets, They’re commonly used as homes for inhabitants nowadays. As you can see this tree seems to be infested with giant Fireshrooms, which get their name from their extravagant coloration. Unlike most mushrooms which tend to be parasitic to trees, these mushrooms enter into a symbiosis with this spesific tree only. The tree grants it great power and magic resources while the mushroom grant it all the enegy it needs as this tree is not able to absorb solar power by itself alone.

This Blue sprout specificly is a home as you can see, the towns cheriff, Jacky has made it her home.

[the-broccodile]

[the-broccodile]

This is Jacky my lovely chimereon, she’s mostly based on dinosaurs as thei’re said to have had feathers while still being reptilian. She has a long neck that is able to strech out even longer. Despite it being physicaly imposible she actually is able to hinde in her shell which is bullet proof.

Jacky is a strong and independent person, her strongest abilety is her agilety despite her rather bulky built. She’s friendly and helpfull though she tends to call peoply names, meaning she insults people without them noticing most of the time as she acts to nice for it. Jacky is a cheriff and keeps her village safe together with her trusted dogs Lucy Jack and Lucky.

[the-broccodile]

Here’s the comic from before but visually better to look at just the third pannel isn changin anymore. Here you can actually read it.