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It's really, very simple what I feel about Jude and Cardan. It's just such a long fucking journey with them in a series where they barely (truthfully) communicate with and comprehend one another. It's not just that they start off by hating one another, it's also that they're constantly drawn to one another. They go from being enemies to working together, which was basically just them really seeing each other. They don't know when they can trust the other, but they also learn that they get each other. They experience fear, pain, and betrayal at different times but also together. They experience loving each other without trust, but they also experience it with such a force that it is all that drives them when they've lost the other. In the end, everything just knits them back together better and stronger.
It's magnificent what all @hollyblack delivered in such a short series with each book being less than 400 pages.
#it's just that when you dive deeper with me#into the 5Ws and H#that you see how complex & heavy it is#when you read between the lines#and ofc.#i can go into heavy detail#jude duarte#cardan greenbriar#jurdan#the cruel prince#the wicked king#queen of nothing#htkoelths#how the king of elfhame learned to hate stories#the folk of the air#tfota#holly black
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ILYILYILY YOUR MEGUMI INSTA POST WAS BEAUTIFUL I NOW NEEEEDDDDD A YUUJI ONE 🙏🙏🙏🙏
YUJI FANGIRLS RISE UP!!! indie I LUV YOU TOO!!
DATING YUJI ITADORI INSTAGRAM!
details!
instagram posts w/ comments while dating Yuji Itadori!
a/n OBVIOUSLY these are just pictures off of pinterest, reader can be however you imagine!
a/n Americanizing this one because my homecoming is next week and I think Yuji would be such a good hoco date
a/n Yuji plays football and track/cross country((idk the difference, sue me)) (GO WITH IT.)
a/n modern!no curses!AU
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aoi.todo replied to your story: the friendzone is a terrible place for my brother. luvfromy/n: huh!?! No way! Yuji doesn't like me like that there's no way!! We're just super best friends! aoi.todo: oh I see. aoi.todo: Say, Y/n, whats your type? luvfromy/n: uhhh well... selfless, enthusiastic, and incredibly kind people. someone who's like the sun aoi.todo reacted "👍" to this message
yuujithetiger replied to your story: No need to thank me for hanging out with my favorite person :DD luvfromy/n: :D Being with you is my favorite part of my day yuujithetiger: same here!!
yuujithetiger · 9w
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yuujithetiger She was the first to run on the field after I got a PR!! :DD I luv my best friend!
luvfromy/n I luv you too!! I'm so proud and happy for you! yuujithetiger luvfromy/n THANK YOU!!! i think I did better because you were cheering for me... just saying! luvfromy/n yuujithetiger well I'm glad I could help then! :DD
barabara nice job loser
aoi.todo THATS MY BROTHER!! choso.kamo aoi.todo 🤨🤨🤨
luvfromy/n · 6w
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luvfromy/n two weeks before homecoming! Had to cheer yuji on at his practice <3
yuujithetiger i always perform better when you're in the stands luvfromy/n yuujithetiger guess I'll just have to keep coming 🙂↕️🙂↕️ yuujithetiger luvfromy/n guess you do :/// (:DDDDDD)
barabara tell your man to put a shirt on 🤮🤮 luvfromy/n barabara HUH? MEAND YUJI ARENT DATING!?!?!??! barabara luvfromy/n oh! that's interesting...
okkatsuyuta its like hes a machine when you're cheering for him! please keep coming to our games and practices!! luvfromy/n okkatsuyuta wouldn't wanna be anywhere else! I'll always be cheering for Yuji!
luvfromy/n · 6w
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luvfromy/n I almost CRIED! I'VE LITERALLY WAITED FOR THIS FOR SO LONG!!!
yuujithetiger MY HEART WAS POUNDING SHOWING IT TO YOU. I'M SO GLAD YOU SAID YES luvfromy/n yuujithetiger WHY WOULDNT I???? yuujithetiger luvfromy/n I THOUGHT I WAS IN THE FRIENDZONE! luvfromy/n yuujithetiger I THOUGHT *I* WAS IN THE FRIENDZONE!!
megumi.fushi finally barabara megumi.fushi literally. choso.kamo barabara listening to him talk about her nonstop was giving me a headache 😭😭
aoi.todo THATS MY BROTHER.
yuujithetiger · 5w
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yuujithetiger the most beautiful girl in the world <3
luvfromy/n the most handsome boy in the world <3 yuujithetiger luvfromy/n homecoming was so fun! It felt like a dream being with you luvfromy/n yuujithetiger NO REAL! I was so nervous the whole time!! but being with you made it better (as it always does) yuujithetiger luvfromy/n I'm glad I could make you feel not so nervous :D luvfromy/n yuujithetiger you really are the sun <3
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ok let me get this straight - jk and oc were together, zion already in the picture, oc is pregnant with second baby, jk gets accused of plagiarism at work, oc works herself to the bone to clear jk’s name and it works, but jk stays at the company that accused him….. bc of oc working so hard, she gets a miscarriage. she resents jk for not putting his family first, and she also resents herself for working so hard and losing her second baby. she asks for a break up but they don’t really break up so she doesn’t know what it’s like to lose him (?) also she’s mad that jk doesn’t want more for himself, but his decisions are his own and that’s what he wants (?)
that new chapter hurt so bad :( sometimes you just think love is not enough
after all that all i can say is tanginaaaaaaaa ang sakit 😭😭😭
timeline (as of 16)
(11 months ago) jk and oc have established careers and are raising 3 year old zion together. jk is a visual director for an advertisement company and oc is lawyer, trying to make partner at her firm.
they've been having issues in their relationship where oc is upset because jk keeps rejecting work promotions. she knows jk works hard and is capable so it frustrates her that he limits himself. it's not that she wants him to work himself to the bone,, it's the fact that he doesn't try. on the other hand, jk is upset because he feels like her career gets in the way of their relationship.
(10 months ago) jk's plagiarism issue begins. oc prioritizes fixing it for jk because she sees this as an opportunity to show jk how her career benefits their relationship. on top of that, she pushes and makes his name spotless because this is how she defends jk. this is how she shows her devotion and care towards him. as she does this, (it's been hinted in the past chapters that she has issues with stress and self-neglection) ((which is a very realistic flaw might i add)) she puts jk first and her health second (((unintentionally)))
(9 months ago) oc is pregnant (don't quote me on the sex math this requires). jk settles his lawsuit. oc doesn't love his decision and jk does not communicate why he settled. due to the fights, confusion, stress, and anxiety; oc goes through a pregnancy loss at 5w. she did not know she was pregnant and neither did jk ((idk if that was clear in the story))
the same time she's going through all of this; her work gets piled up and she begins to deal with burn-out. oc also still tends to zion's needs and realizes that she's going through post partum depression. to cope, she focuses on work and zion.
jk doesn't feel neglected; he feels confused. oc doesn't talk about the loss and neither does he. they both avoid it and begin to blame everything around them to be the issue. ie: work/career.
it gets so bad that oc isn't functioning like she should. she wants space and asks jk for a break. not a break up. a break. eventually, it grows into one. they continue to sleep with each other regardless.
(present) oc attends therapy to clear her headspace, fully knowing that she is unfit for their relationship. jk continues to pursue her (which is romantic in a sense but also very suffocating when you need space to heal).
,,, haynakoooo. tbh true love is when u know love isn't enough,,, so u do everything to grow together jus to be together.
diba yun sila? hehe
also u're right
tangina talaga!
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Kyle's 5W's and How
After thinking about this for a bit, I decided to use this to dive into Kyle a bit more and hopefully show why I love him. This is inspired by @sweetestlittledarling's post.
(Note; this takes place post-plague and pre-game. Think a few days before the game is set.)
Who is Kyle?
Kyle is a young magician's apprentice who's around two years younger than Asra.
He has bright blue eyes with small islands of green scattered throughout them. This is due to having segmented heterochromia in both eyes. (He has been told he has the world in his eyes.)
He has short, fluffy, bright red hair that's less curly than Asra's but just as fluffy.
Kyle has a skin tone closest to Muriel's, but if you look closely, you can see little specks of dark skin (freckles) but also pale, harder-to-see ones.
Standing at a whopping 4'4, he makes even Portia look tall. His small height is surprisingly not genetic but rather a magic phenomenon that happens in his birth country. Birds, lizards, bats, dragons, fish, and plants all have the chance to be a lot smaller than normal. This magic means that if Kyle had kids, he would be as safe as a normal-sized person having a baby in those times.
Having ADHD and ASD He has sensitivities to certain textures and flavors. Being sensitive to both spicy food and minty food, while absolutely loving Selasi's mint tea due to the baker making sure to make his cup mild mint instead of the normal rich flavor that causes Kyle to reflexively scrunch up his nose. Some textures he's sensitive to are silk; he loves the feeling of silk clothes, but one time when Asra swapped the bed cover with silk, it left Kyle sleeping downstairs until it was changed back. Don't worry, Asra was able to repurpose it into a bunch of different items and arts and crafts projects. Nothing was wasted.)
While I don't tend to do voice claims, I did it for Kyle and a few other characters and used this as the voice claim for Kyle, with the difference being that Kyle has a Kiwi accent. But this is close to what I imagine his tone, pitch, etc. to sound like.
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What is Kyle?
I could give the generic answer of, well, Kyle is a human moving on. However, I want to dive into this a bit. What makes Kyle who he is?
I could see an answer of his free spirit. But what does that actually mean to Kyle as a person? Since it's not always exploring, it's the way he pauses to watch a leaf fall, to watch a bird hop around, the way he goes into new shops he's never been in just to look around.
But that isn't all of it.
He's kind. Another vague word. Which in this case is his ability to stand up for others even when it's scary. The way he sometimes brings a huge pot down to the beach to make a ton of soup for those who need it. The way he will go out of his way to help those he can.
Yet, even then, he'd argue those are more selfish than kind. He brings soup to hear stories, and because he's not feeling good, he helps people because it makes him feel good.
In reality, asking the 'what' is always going to be harder than the 'who.'
Why is Kyle Kyle?
This might be a stupid question on the surface, but why is Kyle the way he is?
Diving pre-plague, a lot of his formative years were spent around a tropical forest, large trees, large birds, humid air, and mild winters.
But the earliest thing to define him was in his original home being ignored by the elders. Being allowed to wonder while being small meant he was easy prey for large birds, and while he obviously survived all the attacks, it did leave him with scars on his shoulders.
Then there was the time he snuck onto a boat to join his dad on a trip and accidently caused his dad's death. (The boat crashing didn't kill him, but by the time Kyle got help, a flock of StormBird's had gotten him. Giant birds that fly around during heavy storms looking for food.)
Then in his new home, he was told who he should be by different people who had different wants for him.
Having his home burned down in front of him, he became a pirate for a few years as free passage towards Vesuvia, where he heard of someone who shared a last name.
Finally learning magic from his aunt.
A lot has shaped Kyle, and while it's been long forgotten by Kyle himself, he will always carry the scars of how it shaped who he is as a person.
When is Kyle, Kyle?
Kyle is mostly himself when he forgets about thinking; a few examples are;
When the shop is filled with people as Kyle bounces between customer service, helping people find items, and restocking shelves.
Birdwatching/animal watching. Even if it's watching Faust make her way from one side of the shop to the other.
Half asleep cuddles with Asra, where his brain is turned off and he's already halfway towards sleeping.
Speaking of half asleep, also early mornings when Kyle is just waking up.
So basically whenever he isn't overthinking himself or the world around him and can just enjoy being alive.
How is Kyle?
He's good.
He hides his insecurity about his height by playing into his childish clothing choice and baby face. Using any infantilization of him to the person's disadvantage as he analyzes everyone as thoroughly as Nadia does.
While he appears cheerful and sweet, the truth is he just likes being happy. He likes being able to openly smile to openly laugh and to try his hardest to look on the bright side. While he does have pessimistic thoughts, he buries them with kindness to himself and others. 'What if his friends secretly hate him?' 'Then it's on them for not telling him, and all he can do is try his best to be the best person he can be.' 'Nobody cares what he has to say?' 'He cares, and that's enough.'
While he isn't prone to depression, he needs support from people due to his ADHD and ASD. He won't remember to do certain things, and the shop and house will slowly clutter and fall apart around him. Which will cause him to suffer through depressive episodes as he loses control of his environment, leaving it inhabitable. Kyle is unable to fully take care of himself, and he knows this. This is why he has Bluebell and Hunter as friends who'll check in and help him when Asra's away on long trips.
He's braver than he thinks he is. Partly due to ASD and partly due to learning in a supportive environment, he doesn't fear people as much as he used to. Making him more and more willing to stand up to people who are otherwise scary. Muriel is nearly twice his height, and yet the only time in the game he's ever felt scared of Muriel was one time in Nadia's route, where Muriel suddenly stands between him and the bear carving, towering over him, and twice in Asra's route, once during a dream and once during their first? meeting. Even when scared, he's calm trusting himself and his ability to handle the situation. He's willing to face Muriel head-on, not because he thinks he could take Muriel in a fight but because he trusts himself and his magic to be able to get him away before a fight breaks out or before he gets hit. A shield spell to block the blow and retreating.
Despite being quite smart, he feels like an absolute idiot a lot. Yet he knows deep down this is just his own insecurities and works through this by writing things down to help with his sometimes horrible working memory and short-term memory.
He knows he's not perfect and has learned how to be okay with that and, over time, how to forgive himself more than he used to be able to do. And because of that, he's good.
#the arcana#the arcana game#the arcana mc#the arcana fan apprentice#mc kyle#the arcana apprentice#vesuvia weekly#5Ws and HOW?#the arcana spoilers#Youtube
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Hello! First of all, I’m so glad this blog exists, thanks for keeping the fandom and our creativity active!! Now for the dumb question…
i don’t understand the last prompt (the 5W)… is it ok to ask for an explanation? (turned out I’m more stupid than i thought XD)
That's okay friend! And thank you for asking ^.^
The 5 W's (Who, What, Where, Why, and When) are a commonly used writing device to help authors ground their written pieces - it's a really useful tool to look over a scene you've written to make sure it makes sense! (e.g., you've written a conversation [What] between Muriel and Nadia [Who], but where is it happening? In the Palace? In the woods? When is it happening? Before the Plague? After the Plague? Why is it happening? A friendly visit? An emergency?) Checking whether you've answered these questions in your writing, or why you've purposefully not answered them, is a fantastic way to ground your story :3
"How" is a frequent add-on to the 5 W's, and in this case, the prompt is for a character asking those six questions.
I hope that helps anon friend!
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hmmmmmmmmmm i need to lay out basic elements of a story, where are the “5w”s when you need em
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🎤 (ゝω・´★)
(( I associate so many songs with this bastard it's insane (I'm insane)
Okay but like. Consider,
Three by Sleeping At Last specifically for post-canon Akechi who's slowly (and I mean slowly) healing.
"it's so exhausting on this silver screen / where I play the role of anyone but me."
"Unabridged and overwhelmed / A mess of a story I'm ashamed to tell."
Honestly any argument can be made that he's either 3w or 5w but from a lyrical standpoint using Sleeping At Last's enenagram-specific songs? He's a three guys trust me (don't, I know nothing about mbti and enneagrams) ))
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2000 Magic Invitational Duplicate Sealed Card List
On Twitter today, I told a story about the making of Masticore where I referenced a Magic Invitational duplicate sealed event where I recosted existing cards. People were interested in the list, so I looked it up. (And yes, I now realize my timeline was wrong, the Invitational came after I made Masticore, but both were tied to my strange fascination with Mishra’s War Machine).
Cost Original Cost
White (16)
Creatures (9)
Argivian Archeologist W [1WW] 1/1
Cho-Arrim Alchemist 1W [W] 1/1
Cloudchaser Eagle 3WW [3W] 2/2 flying
Devout Witness 3W [2W] 2/2
Herald of Serra 5W [2WW] 3/4 flying
Knight of Valor 3W [2W] 2/2
Preacher 4WW [1WW] 1/1
Revered Unicorn W [1W] 2/3
Voice of Truth 4W [3W] 2/2 flying
Spells (7)
Cooperation W [2W]
Empyrial Armor 2WW [1WW]
Jihad 2W [WWW]
Null Chamber W [3W]
Pegasus Stampede 3W [1W]
Swords to Plowshares 4W [W]
Winnow W [1W]
Blue (16)
Creatures (8)
Brine Seer 1U [3U] 1/1
Clone 5U [3U] */*
Iridescent Drake 4U [3U] 2/2 flying
Old Man of the Sea 4UU [1UU] 2/3
Raven Familiar 1UU [2U] 1/2 flying
Rootwater Thief 1UU [1U] 1/2 flying
Taniwha 4UU [3UU] 7/7
Waterfront Bouncer 3U [1U] 1/1
Spells (8)
Bazaar of Wonders U [3UU]
Curiosity 1U [U]
Exclude 3U [2U]
Forbid 2UU [1UU]
Juxtapose 2U [3U]
Mana Drain 3UU [UU]
Psychic Vortex 1U [2UU]
Venarian Gold XU [XUU]
Black (16)
Creatures (8)
Bone Shredder 5B [2B] 1/1 flying
Cadaverous Knight 4B [2B] 2/2
Frankenstein’s Monster XB [XBB] */*
Hell’s Caretaker 3BB [3B] 1/1
Khabal Ghoul 1BB [2B] 1/1
Plague Witch 2B [1B] 1/1
Stronghold Taskmaster 4B [2BB] 4/3
Xenic Poltergeist B [1BB] 1/1
Spells (8)
The Abyss 1BB [3B]
Animate Dead 3B [1B]
Breeding Pit 2BB [3B]
Dark Banishing 3BB [2B]
Demonic Tutor 3BB [1B]
Fear B [BB]
Scavenged Weaponry 3B [2B]
Tombstone Stairwell B [2BB]
Red (16)
Creatures (8)
Aladdin 2R [2RR] 1/1
Avalanche Riders 4R [3R] 2/2
Hyperion Blacksmith 2R [1RR] 2/2
Keldon Firebombers 4R [3RR] 3/3
Kris Mage 1R [R] 1/1
Rukh Egg 4R [3R] 0/3 [4/4 flying]
Subterranean Spirit 5R [3RR] 3/3
Varchild’s War Riders R [1R] 3/4
Spells (8)
Brand 1R [R]
Consuming Ferocity R [1R]
Fanning the Flames XXR [XRR]
Fit of Rage R [1R]
Fork 2R [RR]
Goblin Bombardment 2R [1R]
Illicit Auction 1RR [3RR]
Land’s Edge R [1RR]
Green (16)
Creatures (10)
Arctic Wolves 4GG [3GG] 4/5
Caustic Wasp 1G [2G] 1/1
Deepwood Tantiv 3G [4G] 2/4
Groundskeeper 1G [G] 1/1
Hunting Moa 2GG [2G] 3/2
Maro 4G [2GG] */*
Scarwood Bandits 3GG [2GG] 2/2
Stampeding Wildebeests 5G [2GG] 5/4
Tracker 3G [2G] 2/2
Wild Mammoth 1G [2G] 3/4
Spells (6)
Berserk 1G [G]
Emerald Charm 1G [G]
Explosive Growth 1G [G]
Living Plane 1GG [2GG]
Spidersilk Armor 3G [2G]
Survival of the Fittest 2GG [1G]
Artifacts (10)
Creatures (3)
Mishra’s War Machine 5 [7] 5/5
Tetravus 8 [6] 4/4 flying
Triskelion 8 [6] 4/4
Spells (7)
Black Lotus 3 [0]
Coat of Arms 2 [5]
Crown of the Ages 0 [2]
Nevinyrral’s Disk 8 [4]
Tawnos’ Coffin 6 [4]
Thran Forge 4 [3]
Winter Orb 1 [2]
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History of the Marlboro man
Before the ad campaign the company had 1% of the market share
1972 top product in the world, outselling coca cola
Marlboro woman
Encouragent for women to smoke in public which previously was only allowed at home with your husbands permission
Acceptable women avoided smoking altogether
Smoking in public could get you arrested
Smoking = feminist; its cool its new “you’ve come a long way, baby”
Lgbtq = valuable customers, spend more money on themselves
A woman wearing pants in the sixties in Poland meant you could be spat upon
Virginia slims
Glamour as a marketing strategy
Glamour = freedom
You had to be very feminine to make up for smoking
Red tips to keep lipstick intact and hide stains
Displaying younger women to showcase youth, beauty and glamour
Bridge party, limousine
Grease proof tips to prevent lipstick smudging
“Ivory tips protect the lips”
Cigarettes = “torches of freedom”
Woman want cigarette. Penis envy. Woman want be like man. Man have penis.
Lucky strikes campaign protest of women (debutantes) walking a parade while smoking
Marlboro = Philip morris = virginia slims
The women dressed in white for easter
The story was covered by every newspaper
Hollywood encouraged women smoking by showing actresses being cool, seductive by smoking
Using seductiveness and women’s attraction to sell cigarettes “anything for the boys”
“Smoke your boyfriends favourite cigarettes since he’s off at war”
Cancer finally reveals itself as a consequence
Scientists in the fifties discover much more about lung cancer and smokings influence on it
Filter = acc works
Making manly men smoke with filters to regain sales
90’s - men were less forced to be manly
Marlboro men die from
Myth - story that pre-exists in the minds of people, stories from childhood
The American west
Manifest destiny
Self-reliance
Good night and good luck
The canvas - YouTube
The age of innocence
Olympia - Loni Reifenstahl
weekend freedom
He's alone
No.1 selling cig
White hat
“Recognisable”
all-American hot guy
The myth of the hot American cowboy
westerns change the face of the cowboy
Cowboys go from smelly to righteous
We know nostalgia does not exist but the pain of losing that distant “memory” is too much
We are not looking at real cowboys we are looking at a nostalgic myth
AIDA is used mostly for marketing but can be used for dramatist pentad
Dramatist pentad used for reading and analysing books and dramas
5w’s and h fits into pentad
Marlboro man: act - invitation to the world of real man; agency - smoke it; agent - the real man of the free man; scene - wild west Marlboro country; purpose - participation in an authentic life with no family or responsibility and adventure (tough and manly)
Like Arthur got Excalibur and became a king, if you smoke Marlboro yo become a man
Smoking gives you liberty just as wars
Give me liberty or give me death
The Marlboro man seems lonely but he is not, he belongs `a group of manly men
Group identity
Why does the marlboro man not work?
Unrealistic
Removed from the truth
The reality of the cowboy was how hard it was to actually be one, living outside, starved, poor, most died at a young age.
The American cowboy was mostly black, native american or hispanic
The lone cowboy is a myth since cattle need more than one operative to behave
Barbed wire=end of cowboys
Whitewashed
Cowboys actually came from traditional Spanish roots
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HI WRITER BY CAREER BOTH CREATIVE AND TECHNICAL
You only have to be conscious of paragraph size when you're doing technical writing. It's literally because in technical writing, you often have a limited total word count, and you have specific information you need to include in said writing, and in order to fit said information into said limit of word count, there are formulas and style guides for writing it.
In journalism, depending on the type of article but for brevity let's say a standard print news article, you're typically limited to around 500-700 words, (and online it goes down to 300 for nebulous attention span reasons) because that's literally how much space you have in the physical newspaper for your text. Because space in a newspaper is determined by how much ad space was bought for that edition compared to printing and distribution costs.
So you can have a news article with anywhere from 100 to 700 words, depending on said space, but you have to include the who what when where why how of the story, and qualifying and clarifying information, and it goes from most to least important based on aforementioned attention span reasons.
What you want in a news article is attention, so as much of your 5w and h information as possible goes in your intro paragraph, if it doesn't fit it goes in your nut graf (second paragraph), and you want ideally around 5-7 lines in a column per paragraph so it's not a wall of text, because column layout is already hard to read but it's the easiest to print and format.
So in journalism, in a standard a4 word document with 11pt Ariel font you'll have 2 lines per paragraph, 3 if you're pushing it, and you have to fit your inverted pyramid very carefully into that structure, which leaves you with 50-80ish words per paragraph, and you have to make them count.
In creative writing this is not necessary at all, because the formatting of books are different. They're not limited in space by advertising revenue, and they're not restricted to the inverted pyramid style of writing, or any style at all really.
All you technically have to consider when writing creatively is the flow and legibility of your work, and if that means you put in a paragraph break wherever it makes the most sense then that's what you do. You don't have to write strictly 100 words per paragraph, a paragraph can be one word or 100 words, and what divides it is conceptual.
Every new concept is a new paragraph. Hell even if you just want people to take a small pause in the middle of the same concept you can break up a single concept into two or more. What matters is how easy it reads, and how much emotion it evokes, and however you chose to do it is entirely up to you.
If you're not doing academic, scientific or journalistic writing, you can go nuts to your heart's content, especially if you're self publishing as an outlet and not for monetary gain. School teaches you 100 words per paragraph because it's the easiest to grade en masse.
Whole-heartedly BEGGING writers to unlearn everything schools taught you about how long a paragraph is. If theres a new subject, INCLUDING ACTIONS, theres a new paragraph. A paragraph can be a single word too btw stop making things unreadable
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16 Oct | News Reports
SAS - JOURNALISM
We will explore news reports to understand what they contain and how to write them. A news report is an article with the key facts of a story, including quotes from people involved, written in the third person without giving the writer’s opinion.
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TASK 1: In 2/3s, please draw on the sample news report that has been printed out for you. Highlight and annotate the report to indicate where the following news report elements can be found and how you can tell:
THE 5Ws
FURTHER DETAILS
QUOTES
BACKGROUND
FUTURE
Scan your annotated paper to add to your Supporting Document.
TASK 2: Independently now, select a news report of your choice from a newspaper’s website. Repeat the process, this time screenshotting the news report, and annotating with the elements you can see and how you know which ones they are.
TASK 3: Time for some creative writing. Please write a fictitious news report - aiming for 300+ words. Although it is made up, please bear in mind all the guidance from our presentation - it should be serious and sound factual in tone (even if facts are made up).
Choose one from the following headlines to base your new report on:
The Internet is Dead - and it’s Not Coming Back
Creative Education Made Free at Universities from 2025
Teens Moving Away from Social Media - But What’s Next?
EXTENSION: Design a newspaper-style layout design for your finished newspaper report. Include in your Supporting Document.
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Brain Storming
This was my first draft in figuring out my character, using the exercise of 5W's and 1H. it helped me figure out the back story to the character. However i wish to expand on this mind map more to provide more insight on the character, but it helped give me a clear direction in where i wanted to go forth with the character's backgroud
What is the character: The character is a Demigod
When did they become a demigod: when they were mortal the town was being destroyed by a dark force, they died trying to protect the village
Where are they: they travel around the lands
Why: they seek to fight the evil that attacked his home village
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mp – identifying my context.
using the 5W's and 1H to assist me.
who?
not too sure on who this is for, except those interested in true crime and different portrayal of feminism and misogyny, in a way??
what?
the problem is the fact female killers aren't as recognised as male killers, but can be as notorious as them. "women can kill too". underlying misogyny even when the subject is murder – also creates this comedic interpretation of why we're arguing over murderers in the context of wanting equality within it. then it makes me question if it would be worth it, why should we care if female killers don't get more representation than male killers when both sides are bad people anyway? – overall it contributes to the conversation on portrayal of women.
when?
not too sure? I guess I'd use this if I'd just finished watching or reading about a bunch of true crime – a rabbit hole of content.
where?
still deciding deliverables – could be online?? most true crime stories are found online with videos/tiktoks/articles. maybe a online database?? similar to this example I previously looked at.
why?
genuine interest and intrigue for true crime, especially the reason we don't see female killers as often as male killers. and I think because misogyny and feminism is such a big and important issue, the idea is something small identified within something huge and people already have an interest in both. especially women, as we tend to watch true crime without a flinch.
how?
editorial, ui/ux, and typography – under 'where?' I linked the example of a project that created a physical and online database. I think this would work really well, but I don't want my piece to be another version of this existing piece.
I think it could be worth the push to do something like that though, since I'd be creating something I'm guaranteed to love with an editorial piece. then also something challenging, but what I like working with too, creating easier access for the audience.
sources:
https://medium.com/ux-design-research/the-5ws-1-h-for-building-a-better-product-from-the-start-d1d33f9766a0
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Navigating Success: Unveiling the Tapestry of Top PR Firms in NYC
In the vibrant and fast-paced realm of New York City, where skyscrapers touch the clouds and business aspirations reach even higher, the significance of exceptional Public Relations (PR) cannot be overstated. The city that never sleeps demands an unmatched level of PR expertise, and fortunately, NYC is home to some of the most distinguished PR firms in the world. Let's delve into the dynamic landscape of these top PR firms in NYC, exploring the unique narratives they craft and the strategic communications that set them apart.
1. Edelman: Defining the Global Standard
Edelman stands as a stalwart in the PR industry, consistently setting the global standard for excellence. With a presence in over 65 cities worldwide, Edelman's NYC headquarters serves as the nerve center for innovative PR strategies. Renowned for its integrated approach, Edelman excels in shaping compelling narratives that resonate across traditional and digital platforms. The firm's commitment to authenticity and its ability to navigate the evolving media landscape have solidified its position as a top player in the industry.
2. Weber Shandwick: Mastering the Art of Storytelling
Weber Shandwick, another heavyweight in the NYC PR scene, is celebrated for its mastery of the art of storytelling. With a client roster that spans industries and continents, the firm has a knack for weaving narratives that captivate audiences. Whether it's crisis management, brand building, or digital innovation, Weber Shandwick's strategic prowess ensures that their clients' stories are not just told but heard, resonating with authenticity and impact.
3. Rubenstein: Boutique Excellence
Nestled among the giants, Rubenstein stands out as a boutique PR firm with a reputation for excellence. Specializing in luxury lifestyle, real estate, and corporate communications, Rubenstein's personalized approach sets it apart. The firm's commitment to tailored strategies and hands-on client relations has earned them a distinguished place in the competitive NYC PR landscape. In the city where trends are set and lifestyles defined, Rubenstein crafts narratives that echo the essence of its clients' brands.
4. DKC: Nurturing Relationships, Amplifying Voices
DKC, a force to be reckoned with in the PR arena, emphasizes relationship-building as a cornerstone of its success. With a client base ranging from entertainment and technology to healthcare and beyond, DKC excels in amplifying voices and fostering meaningful connections. The firm's ability to adapt to diverse industries while maintaining a personalized touch has earned DKC a spot among the best PR firms in NYC, making them a go-to choice for brands seeking strategic communication solutions.
5. 5W Public Relations: From Startups to Fortune 500
5W Public Relations has earned its stripes by catering to a broad spectrum of clients, from startups to Fortune 500 companies. Known for its agility and results-driven approach, 5W PR navigates the ever-evolving media landscape with finesse. The firm's comprehensive suite of services, including media relations, influencer marketing, and crisis management, positions it as a versatile player in the NYC PR scene, capable of addressing the unique needs of diverse industries.
6. M Booth: Creative Innovation Unleashed
In a city fueled by creativity, M Booth stands out as a trailblazer in innovative PR strategies. The firm's commitment to pushing boundaries and embracing new ideas has resulted in groundbreaking campaigns that capture attention and leave a lasting impression. M Booth's focus on creative innovation makes it a go-to choice for brands looking to disrupt the status quo and redefine their narrative in the competitive NYC market.
7. Sunshine Sachs: Impactful Advocacy
Sunshine Sachs brings a unique blend of PR expertise and advocacy, positioning itself as a leader in purpose-driven communication. Specializing in entertainment, social justice, and corporate responsibility, Sunshine Sachs helps clients navigate the intersection of media, culture, and social impact. The firm's commitment to making a positive difference through strategic communication sets it apart in a city where influence and impact go hand in hand.
8. Marino PR: Niche Specialization, Big Results
Marino PR thrives on its niche specialization, focusing on sectors such as real estate, hospitality, and healthcare. This boutique firm combines industry expertise with a hands-on approach, delivering tailored solutions that resonate with targeted audiences. Marino PR's ability to carve a niche in specific sectors while maintaining a commitment to personalized service makes it a standout player in the NYC PR landscape.
9. Ruder Finn: Global Vision, Local Expertise
Ruder Finn seamlessly blends global vision with local expertise, offering a holistic approach to PR that transcends borders. With a diverse client portfolio spanning healthcare, technology, and consumer brands, Ruder Finn leverages its global network to provide clients with strategic insights and comprehensive communication solutions. The firm's commitment to understanding the nuances of each market ensures that their campaigns are not only impactful but culturally resonant.
10. BerlinRosen: Amplifying Voices for Positive Change
BerlinRosen has carved a niche for itself by amplifying voices that drive positive change. Specializing in advocacy, real estate, and progressive causes, the firm combines strategic communication with a passion for social impact. BerlinRosen's dedication to representing clients who are at the forefront of change makes it a go-to choice for brands that aim to make a meaningful difference in the world.
In the city that never sleeps, these top PR firms in NYC are the architects of narratives, the orchestrators of reputation, and the architects of strategic communication. Each firm brings a unique flavor to the table, contributing to the vibrant and ever-evolving landscape of public relations in New York City. As businesses navigate the complexities of the modern media environment, these PR powerhouses stand ready to craft stories, shape perceptions, and redefine what it means to communicate in the bustling heart of the business world.
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BLACKBOX WORKSHOP
We were put into groups of 4 and then given and envelope with a product in. we then created a moodboard that gave hints about what the product was. We had to make one to represent birds eye alphabites, we made hints like red square with a bird and and eye on top.
We were then given another groups mood board, it took a couple minutes but we worked out that it was tangfastics.
We then started mindmapping ideas using the 5Ws and H. We came up with the idea of having it in black and white until they eat the tangfastic and then it all becomes bright and colourful.
We then story boarded our ideas and planned where and when we were going to film. After we filmed all the scenes, we all came in and worked together to create the advert, one of us worked on editing the clips together and isolating the colour of the tangfastics bag whilst the rest of us worked on the animation that would play at the end. We all took turns sharing ideas and giving advice, I think this was very productive as it definitely improved our ideas.
I'm really happy with how the advert turned out. I think having the tangfastics only in colour really emphasises our slogan "tangfastics a way to brighten your day". I also think the music works really well, how it gets louder once he eats the tangfastics. The animation turned out really well as we all took turns adding to make it more bright and explosive to represent the taste of tangfastics.
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Interim Critique (LO3, LO4)
Feedback from the crit:
answer 5W's and 1H
put words into categories
define constraints
define audience and narrative
tablecloth could be my aesthetic driver
does russia and ukraine need each other to exist?
what am I really trying to say? - with family there is no conflict, tablecloth brings people together, family transcends war
look at other stories of people that had to leave homes
picking the narrative apart
what is my deeper personal experience? - feeling tense any time I hear ukrainian language/news
Ukrainians understand Russian but Russians don't understand Ukrainian fully, is it mirrored in their understanding of each other as people?
where does English come into it? How do I explain my idea to the tutors? Can I communicate it visually? Or maybe use little cards with text like in museums
Get inspiration from stack magazines
tablecloth + zine
how others present dual languages?
what landscape am I using, what layouts?
how does tablecloth interact with the table, how book sleeves do?
This tutorial gave me a variety of aspects to consider that will allow me to enhance my project and the message I am communicating.
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