#'cause i have like 6 fics for that as well lololol
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starmocha · 18 days ago
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So it turns out if you make Sylus say "my bride" in
Three
Different
Fanfics
In a row, you manifest an engagement 🤓
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Do not question my clown logic the evidences are evidencing 🤡
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sorikkung · 2 years ago
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person who signed off as "sho" on the wgoin questionnaire i am holding you gently in my hands like this
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i have no idea if you're from here or from ao3 but i hope youre from here so you can see this. that response meant everything to me. also i would just like to address and talk abt some of the things you mentioned so i'll put it under a readmore cause i ramble a lot but like wherever u are i appreciate u immensely and ily <3
i loved your brief elaboration back their when Chan called their scars pretty and i would totally love to see more moments of tenderness like this in the middle of an intense fuck session. like just imagine Eric taking his frustrations out on mc after everything that happened in ch 5 but he just holds MC's hands halfway through??? Can we please talk about that?????
[furiously scribbling notes on a napkin] tenderness during intense fuck session, GOT IT! DFKJKJHFD no but like i definitely have more of that planned, don't you worry. chan's is very deliberate to his character though, while eric... well. he's a lot more directly frustrating LOLOLOL not that he wouldn't hold mc's hands during an intense scene, but more that he is a capricorn and he is Extremely Petty and given the nature of what he's frustrated about currently, i hate to say that he won't be taking out his aggression on mc. 😔 that would be pretty hot though. but porn definitely takes the longest for me to write and i already have sooo much of it planned SKJDFHKSDF
the whole chan, mc, felix, Eric dynamic is intense and honestly i just need em to pile upon each other and fuck already.
you are so fucking real for this. SDFHKJSDKFHKSDF you're right they absolutely just need to fuck it all out theres a lot of pent up emotion there... but well, if the prism was any indicator, it seems that only tends to pile up even more emotions than release any, but yknow. mc in particular is really good at deluding himself. LMAO
i fucking loved the prism scene and your descriptions for the dances (as a dancer, i approve but please don't let my teacher know I'm reading this fic)
oh WOW okay i am very much Not a dancer so this one came as a surprise LMAOO i got two left feet but i can Dream </3 glad it sounds like i know what im talking about tho! LOL ur secret is safe with me <3
honestly i am fucking high everytime you have some angst cooking up with the background of other characters but mc especially. like i would love to see a lot more coming from there and maybe when the whole thing unravels he's just rlly frustrated because he just wanted to be cocky boi androgynous whore and everyone's looking at them as sad boi androgynous whore???? idk bro.
this has me rolling bc you absolutely understand the very basis of this mc. SDFKHJKSJDF tfw you want to be cocky boi androgynous whore and only end up seeming like sad boi androgynous whore 😔😔😔 there's definitely a lot more angst cooking, everything we've seen so far has been set up for it and it just keeps on building. after all, you don't get such... colourful characters like the mc and their band without a healthy helping of trauma and internalised issues. they aren't called the runaways for nothing! i will admit the angst even does get rather dark much later down the line, so here's a warning in advance for that, but like usual the warnings section will include anything that could be potentially triggering. unless you came from ao3 in which... whoops. maybe i should put individual chapter tags in the notes.
lonngggg as long as daddy eric- again, no pressure on you but i would appreciate longer chapters even if they take more time to release:)
SDFJHSDKFHDS LONG AS DADDY ERIC IM HOLLERING. i mean so far the implication in all of the mentions within wgoin is that mingi is fucking huge and the biggest mc has taken but like, i respect this LMAO anyway it seems like longer chapters is the general consensus altho i really do wonder when most people started reading this fic when they say that bc theres been 6 month waits in between some chapters and i wonder if youd still choose longer chapters over shorter ones if they took that long. LMAO. i tend to run long anyway but im tryna chop them up into smaller pieces so i can update more than like, twice a year, which seems to be working so far, but good to know if theres another chapter 1 moment where i do feel like it all needs to be in one chapter, i can just keep the ball rolling that long.
Ok i rlly think your writing style is not only very unique but rlly suitable for the type of fic you're going for so i would not suggest any changes there. be as fucking cocky as you want with the plot and writing.
this is actually so nice to hear im so 😭🥺💘😳💞 like i don't have words to express how that's one of the nicest compliments ive ever received, thank you so much. i'm always very aware that my writing comes off very differently from most of what i read and sometimes it frustrates me but for someone to call it unique and frame it in such a positive light is so heartwarming 🥺
overall thank you for taking the time to answer these questions for me and with such enthusiasm this is really the kind of thing that keeps me writing each chapter 😭😭💞 i'm very very touched and happy that you're enjoying the ride <3
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neonun-au · 4 years ago
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Fanfic asks: any three questions you wished someone would have asked 💕 (I just love listening to you talk)
HAHA well I’m glad that someone likes hearing me talk, ‘cause I do a lot of it 😘
Okay, I will pick three though I think most of the most interesting ones/easiest to answer have been asked haha
2: least favorite fic you wrote this year
There are 2: Gravity and Sunshine (two of my earliest fics for requests) I just don’t like how they turned out, they weren’t quite what I wanted but...I wasn’t sure what to do to fix them either at the time. I might rewrite Sunshine one day but for now I’ll just let it die lmao 
6: least popular fic this year
The actual least popular is Gravity, which is fine because I don’t like it and I should just delete it. The least popular that I like a lot is probably foraoise, which i get ‘cause it’s Ateez and I don’t write for them much but it’s a damn shame because I liked the concept a lot haha (also in laudem maleficus which i also get cause....red velvet....but it’s cool)
26: number of favorites/bookmarks you made this year
I’ve been on here like 6 months and I have almost 1000 things in my likes page and I’m gonna say like half of that is fics I have yet to read lol whoops. So if I liked your fic and have never commented on it, give me some time I am making my way there lololol
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touchmycoat · 4 years ago
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6, 10, 26, 50 aaannd GO!
6. List your OTP from each fandom you’ve been involved in.
ooooh well!!!! i’m a free-love type of ho, so I don’t think I really have OTPs by the strict definition of the acronym....? Like there are people I canonically believe love certain other people in a way central to their personalities, and that will always be in my characterization of them: sabo & ace, songxiao, xiancheng, wangxian, etc. etc. wn & wwx! wq & wwx! jyl & wwx! fucking everybody & wwx but he’s worth it...
ofc hualian, dear god. literally cannot convince me two people are more in love, holy fuck. mq & xl? at least one-sided, i think his very complicated emotions re: xl are so central to mq’s character lolol.
stucky in the same way. sam & steve, steve & peggy.
10.  Is there a fandom you read fic from but don’t write in?
most of ‘em, ‘cause my ass is apparently very all or nothing when it comes to fic writing sjdnfkjsdfsdf at least for now. I’ve never written for marvel, never written for leverage....
there’s actually a lot of fandoms i’ve not written in!!!! it really depends on how much i love the characters & how much content is out there already lol
26. How do you come up with your fanfic titles?
skdjhflsdlfsd erratically! My primary purpose in coming up with a title is setting the memory hook for what the fic is about, because i have SHIT memory esp re: my own writing. So like, “Cultivation No. 6,” because the plant shop is central to the whole story! “Bite the Hand (that starves you)” is about hands that ought to care for you but maybe don’t and paying dues that maybe aren’t yours to pay (& revolting against it) so Katakuri & his mommy issues. “Homecoming” because they all come home and they all come ‘cause it’s a gangbang :D “that’s the kind of love” is the fuckiest hozier song so obviously that’s a gangbang too. "Narcissistic” is the water god gangbang ‘cause narcissus in chinese is like, “water spirit.”
oh on a practical level i love giving english & chinese titles! ‘cause once i get one phrase in mind i can riff off it and get the other. i think titles are where i get my most hashtag-deep lololol so uh, i think there’s shit to analyze b/t my fic content & the fic titles LMAO. in case anyone ever wants to hit me with an english essay.
50. How did you get into reading and/or writing fanfiction?
reading.... i don’t actually remember!! I started reading fics when I was like, 12 or 13 lol, and it was probably all anime fics.... Probably naruto if we’re gonna be honest?? most likely i was just searching up things and then things started coming up and then i was like “wait a minute this is a new story...” which is how most people start reading fic i think
and as for writing, by sheer force of egotism lolololol. I def started writing self-inserts, mostly because I wanted to populate the worlds & occupy the characters that i loved so much. funnily enough, i think the first fic i ever wrote was for saiunkoku, a.k.a. the anime that was based off of ancient China...! so I’ve been destined for c-fandom my whole life....
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advernia · 5 years ago
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around june of last year, i decided to revive my writing blog as one of the many potential stress-relief methods i could think of.... i didn’t think i’d be able to keep it active for long since work + family duties keep me preoccupied most of the time, but eyyy!!! so far i haven’t lost the motivation to keep going back to this blog, and i even managed to keep it afloat for half a year!!! amazing!!! (•̀o•́)ง
and now here we are halfway through 2020!!! it’s waaaay overdue but here’s a big T H A N K  Y O U  V E R Y  M U C H ! ! ! to everyone and anyone who dropped by this blog last year + all them likes, comments, reblogs...... please know that i’m still i n c r e d i b l y grateful for the support & interest in the content i’ve posted up!!!! tbh my activity’s still hella sporadic so it’s really amazing for me that i even gained new followers.... i’m very honored to have all of you stick around my blog despite my irregularity!!!!!!!! (༎ຶ ෴ ༎ຶ)
it’s also overdue, but i slowly managed and finally cleaned up the blog like i’ve been meaning to do + changed the blog name to match my ao3 handle for consistency!!! i make no promises to be super active... but i’m sure that i still want to continue writing & keep this blog alive!!!! 
again, thank you all for your time + reading my works!!!!!!  ∩( ´∀` )∩ work commentary on the rest of my works last year follows under the cut!
oct 1 // hero’s journey
a drabble on blanc + oliver about the alices... now that i think of it, calling the first alice first alice is kinda funny considering that alice is really her name... or is it? 
i do hope blanc’s route talks about her a bit, haha! i mean, i wish cybird remembers that they’ve been dropping the occasional background tidbits about her... like for example, her pocketwatch (that she gave to blanc eventually) having a magic crystal engraved into it.... her potentially leaving a fucking globe in the black army’s possession (like... wow... u fell with that thing????????)....
plus, i just find it interesting that she was remembered by cradle as a heck of a troublemaker lol! it also makes you wonder who among the main cast met her, blanc aside... though it’s not stated when exactly she fell into cradle, so maybe only blanc had the opportunity of meeting her...
so does blanc speak of her fondly bc she’s a woman, or is there something else??? has he been frequently visiting the land of reason pre-game??? has he found the first alice’s antique shop / met her again??? does he still try to figure out the reason why there’s a magic crystal engraved into the first alice’s pocketwatch????? hmmmmm......
on another note, it would be hilarious if cybird pulls a peter pan 2......... since we can’t pull off a mother-daughter relationship like wendy & jane’s, what if alice the second is somehow actually related to the first alice?? and while she’s completely different from her predecessor, blanc finds himself falling for alice the second........ just like he fell for the first alice? drama!
that’s just a random thought but kidding aside, i do hope blanc’s route is hella interesting bc i think he’s our mr. exposition for knowing more about cradle itself lol
oct 1 // fair (?) ladies & phony (?) enchanters
a result of going manic a few days after seeing harr’s trailer + route release.... ahaHAHA I’M STILL WILLING TO PLAY UR ROUTE IN JP HARR (if i actually had time to sit down and translate gET REKT)
i liked writing these drabbles and i think they’re cute but tbh they did nothing to ease my curiosity about harr’s route.... if anything else, it became even w o r s e  haha........................
if i think of blanc to have a cradle-centric route, i do hope harr’s route is magic tower-centric! naturally it will be since he’s got history there, but i hope a lot of my questions about the magic tower will be answered.....
will harr’s perspective of the magic tower be in the eyes of a test subject or a disciple???? he was scouted by the magic tower, but it wasn’t stated what he was doing exactly..... going by hints + loki’s & zero’s routes, it’s more of him being a disciple, so there’s bound to be guilt.......
hopefully alice’s characterization in his route is good + we get a fun group dynamic with loki!!! their potential.... the most(?) notorious criminal of cradle, a sought after test subject, and that one girl who nullifies all magic; a renegade trio lurking around the forbidden forest.... what an odd bunch!
oct 4 // god is a five minute hymn
a religious themed fic with lancelot & alice - tbh i don’t even know why religion was the first thing that came into mind when liz and i were talking about cultural differences, lol.
on that note though! i personally like thinking that if ever cradle had a semblance of a religion, it would be polytheistic & nature-centric, and not strictly practiced - the stratocracy of both territories i’d like to think makes it harder for religion to have a voice, much less have one that is practiced by the general population. the only thing general about it is that the religion centers or has magic crystals as an important factor... or something. yeah.
that aside, i think i specifically chose lancelot in this piece for the sole reason that his canonically stated lack of common sense, in my opinion, gives him the curiosity of a child sometimes - there’s no sense of malice or doubt, just the pure innocence of wanting to know something....... religion does that to kids, especially when introduced to it at first.
rereading the fic makes me think of the instances where when faced with dire or unsettling situations, people turn to faith as a life line.... well, i’m not sure if i had that subconsciously in mind when writing alice, but that does give a spin to it....
oct 6 // flow like the river nile
a spontaneous red army-centric fic! it certainly turned out better than i expected... i liked the formatting i used for this one!
if cybird can give us more about the pre-game suitors it would be great, tbh! and while the stuff about them in school is interesting, i’d like to see more about when they assumed their positions + combat scenes! the neutrals are special cases, but knowing more about their living conditions + daily lives is also a treat...
i was thinking of adding one last snippet about lancelot in the eyes of the reds, but i scrapped it out and switched it to alice & lancelot’s conversation about duty - it could’ve worked better if i stuck to using the what is your duty? question, but i scrapped it eventually too. ah well. it does look good enough as it is. 
oct 7 // seeking out phantoms
a mandatory(???) odd one out aka content that’s not ikerev, haha! i missed fe:a all of a sudden...
i never got around to writing properly for this fandom tho, what a shame - i’ve got some bits of pieces in my drafts that looked interesting and easy enough to pick up, and this was one of them.
robin investigating more of their plegian heritage could’ve been a good subplot tbh... i still wish there was something like a paralogue or dlc about it, bc honestly the valm arc goes a bit slow until you get to the future past revelations. ah well.
and gaius bc first husband for the win.... not like i actually had the guts to marry anyone else in my other save files lololol
nov 7 // push me off a bridge (to catch me as i fall)
my longest project of 2019, holy shit! i didn’t know i still had it in me to write something past 10k... i need more of that motivation + energy....
there’s nothing much to say about this since i blabbed about everything in the post-reading notes, but as much as i fought myself to get this done, i really enjoyed writing a long fic again! hopefully i can get myself to write another one this year...
nov 18 // beloved, beloved, let me be clear
18 sentences on zero & alice + macross frontier references! man, when i really got to the point about the earrings i was thinking of sheryl a lot....
kept it in sentences cause i didn’t have enough time to put up a decent ficlet! but i really wanted to get my screaming out of my system....... i used to do sentences + three word sentences challenges before, and doing one again was pretty fun!
but really.... zero’s route kept me happy for days???? their buildup + dynamic was something i was totally w e a k for, no joke..... thank gods the collection event was going on, bc i really made good use of my stocked chapter tickets lolol!
i was especially excited come the ball scene, and that cg..... a h a h a.... i need more of those pretty cgs where i can see alice’s face + costume change....... 
nov 20 // coloring inside the lines
jonah + alice + makeup!!!! tbh this was really fun, i enjoyed writing this one - if i remember, this was a fic that i managed to continuously work on the day i thought it up!
jonah may not be my best boy but tbh i find writing him very easy - i guess it’s because i’m very fond of characters like him!!! those uptight nobles who are as prideful as hell but can definitely live up to their name + are more capable than their bragging suggests... idk if there’s a general trope name for these doods, but i especially like analyzing their motivations + convictions!!!
i liked how i ended it, but i apparently i made an actual ending that’s now a snippet in my drafts - jonah & alice head to the ball, and somewhere along some bystanders’ flow of conversation someone drops a comment about jonah’s lips looking... quite more luscious than usual, lolol. so t h i r s t y. upon hearing this, alice can’t seem to stop smiling for some reason..... 
nov 27 // blue fields, verdant skies
a practice drabble set centric on a ray/alice development that i liked so much i made it into a series - plus, it’s black army content and honestly i need to write more of them! my red army bias is showing whoooooops
it’s a feudal + arranged marriage au, with the latter... being quite spontaneous. it’s those types of marriages where neither have even met - not even once - only to face each other come the wedding... so it’s a given that audiences from both parties are rather curious how this will turn out.
since i had the theme of fate in mind, ray was the automatic pick for the male lead. the rest of the black army is a given and for kicks, i added dean and dalim! i actually want to write about them + mousse, but since i’m still unsure on their characterizations i’ve been holding them off.... but i gave in anyway.....
alice is again named for word count convenience purposes since it’s in actual 100 words aka drabble form! i have planned scenes + an ending already in mind, but going there is pretty hard bc.... i still have to write the scenes in between + resist temptation to expand further on other scenes, haha....
initially i was planning to keep it updated here as well, but any more updates of this are on ao3 instead! the formatting looks better there instead of my blog tbh, and it also gives it a sort of muted tone to the story that works with me!
this is also the 31st fic in this blog, marking an end of the challenge liz bestowed to me lolol - since i brought this blog back to life around june, i was dared that by the end of the year, i should’ve posted more than 15 fics to add up to the initial 15 i had already posted before, thus the numbers on my fics back then.... now that i actually succeeded, i can stop counting lololol!!!! tho hopefully i can still be pretty active this year....
dec 22 // duck, duck, bullet
oliver & fenrir on guns... this probably wins as the most spontaneous idea i had on my head - tbh, i wasn’t even sure where i was going with it at first! but i’m sure i was suddenly thinking about that one detective conan movie.... then it became kid!oliver with a gun.....
i wonder if he tests the bullets at night, when he’s in adult form.... then again, kid!oliver with a gun still works.... say that because he’s a genius inventor, he made some models to serve as his shooting targets.... but another thought that amuses me more is.... blanc does the bullet testing for him!?
lololol i already thought about blanc being oliver’s live target, but i also find blanc with a gun very interesting.......... i mean, blanc certainly doesn’t look like he can fight, but who knows??? i mean, mousse is the former ace of hearts, but i still can’t imagine him fighting..... appearances can be deceiving....
the two aside, i wonder how fenrir even met oliver and got him working on his bullets........ was it through blanc or other connections???? how long have they been seller and buyer???? does anyone else commission anything from oliver?????? hmmmm.....
dec 23 // terms of surrender
i’ve been told by liz + luci + other friends that i needed to practice writing more.... cheesy fluff. i’m not sure if this sirius/alice piece counts, lol. in fact, i think it’s my definition of fluff i see here - and it translates to not exactly fluffy at all!
tho if you want me to be honest about it - when i write suitor/alice stuff, how alice was characterized in the suitor’s route is still my basis for how i’ll write her, and sirius’ alice................ haha......... i think she’s the alice that’s honestly easy to write but i choose to avoid.......... 
i don’t dislike the sirius/alice dynamic per se, tho. i do find it cute, especially if cybird stops emphasizing the issue of maturity in the relationship on alice’s side. i understand - i really do - that it’s a potential issue in the relationship, but...... that’s not the only problem you can possibly have as time passes, right?????
on another note, it’s funny that only sirius gets to be harped about the maturity due to age difference issue - setting aside blanc, who heavens know how old he is, lancelot’s 29 and since alice is presumed to be around ray + fenrir’s age, you could say that she’s 24 or even 23 to be safe.... so that makes a 5 / 6 years difference but it’s never brought up, lol. but i guess it’s because unlike lancelot, the black army’s been making sirius’ age a running gag....
anyway, this piece is pretty decent! i was thinking of something along the lines of mornings between a “married couple”.... there were two scenarios i had in mind, and i opted to write this one out first.... maybe i’ll have the second one posted up here another day.
dec 28 // a chain of black thrones
pre-game!sirius & ray and bc i was thinking a lot about the previous chosen, the former jack of spades!!! i wonder if the armies have a set age for retirement lolol... it would be awesome if there was still a chosen who’s already past his 50s or something, haha!
since sirius was constantly badgered to take on the role of king, i was also wondering about how long the black army was ‘king-less’... i mean, if the tension between both armies was really as great as they say, having no king puts the black army at a precarious position... i also thought that ‘nah, maybe there was a king or something but maybe the black army didn’t like him or something so they insisted that sirius take it instead’ but sirius’ 1st anniv. epilogue says otherwise - there really was a period that the black army had no king, wow. how the heck did they deal with that???? surely the red army saw this as a display of vulnerability....
can the black army’s chosen choose to leave their posts when they feel like it??? when they’re defeated by a challenger, what happens to them - a demotion, or do they serve under the ‘new’ chosen??? does the black army’s chosen change constantly because of their meritocracy + challenger system??? like, how do they deal with that, and do they announce their changes in chosen each council meeting??? each new question just snowballed my curiosity, whoops...
there were so many angles i thought of but i decided to settle for addressing the king-less state of the black army... through the eyes of a veteran who’s probably served many kings throughout his time of service as part of the black army’s chosen.
i gave this jack of spades character a name, actually - garret folner. maybe someday i’ll write him again, bc i actually enjoyed thinking about the present + past chosen interactions - maybe i’d think about that for the red army, but this time i find the black army’s side more interesting for this situation.
dec 29 // steadfast tin soldier
a zero/alice piece for zeroweek - i was about to post pt. 1 as a standalone, but then i just thought about how.... zero bought alice a gown.... but never got to dance with her at the day of the ball..... so i rushed to add pt. 2 haha!
with the addition of pt. 2 it looks cut short tho - i did think of putting a scene in between, but no good ideas came into mind bc i was too fascinated with the dancing scene... i swear at some point i will find myself writing a fic or a part of a fic that’s a dance scene for the rest of the ikerev suitors + alice....
this is the kind of fluff i live for, actually... i’m totally fine with the steamy content cybird throws during events + bonus stories, but if i were to be honest i say.... where’s my non-sexual intimacy????? the simple, wholesome stuff?????????????????
man, i feel hilarious for typing that out..... but well, i guess it’s a matter of different strokes for different folks, lol!
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crossbows-and-moonshine · 5 years ago
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Guys I did it! *Sobs violently*
Alright, here’s my list of recommended fics you super awesome humans. 
As I said in my other post, writers helping writers is awesome so I’m so happy to tell you some of the fics I’ve read that I love. Go show these amazing people some love for the time and effort they have put in to create wonderful fics. Any fics I mention have been read by me (multiple times with some), and I totally recommend them. 
I’m gonna do this in a few ways, first off, I’ll section Archive of Our Own separately to FanFic.net, just to make it easier for me to grab the links. Ao3 has a nifty little thing where you can see your reading history so I can grab them from there, with FF, I need to go through and find them, pray for me lololol.
I’ll also be separating the Boondock Saints ones and Daryl ones, just for your ease, if you're only interested in one and not the other. The Daryl ones are only on Archive, because I haven't really read any over on FF for some reason, don't ask me why, I just haven't.
They’re not in any particular order, just as I see them, I'll grab them.
These aren’t all the fics I’ve read, some of the ones I love have been deleted by the writer, which breaks my heart honestly, and some of them I just can't remember.
It’s so fucking long guys, brace yourselves, I’ll put it under the cut.
So, here we go!
Archive of Our Own [Boondock Saints]
- One of Three 
I really like this one and you guys should really check it out.
Author Summary; She had cocooned herself, letting routine and safety run her life. After everything she knew it wasn't much of one, and because she decided to do the right thing her life's about to hit a tailspin in some of the worst and most fantastic ways.
This is a Murphy/OC/Connor story and it’s amazing.
Chapters; 18
- Boondock Saints OC Arc
This ones a little different because it's not set out like the usual fic. Its an arc and some bits have one chapter, one of arcs even has 36. They all follow the same storyline and it flows like a normal fic, the author has just chosen to post it this way, and it works.
Author summary; The story of one girl's first up close and personal encounter with one of the brothers on a late-night subway.The 1st story in my Boondock Saints OC story arc.
This is a Murphy/OC/Connor fic, and it's one of my favs honestly, I've read it all numerous times.
Chapters; I can't give you an exact number with the way it's set out, but as I said, one arc alone has 36, so there's plenty to sink your teeth into.
- Everybody Knows
I love this one, it's short and sweet.
Author summary; Everybody knows exactly what Marissa needs to do to get over her recent breakup. She's spent the last month in mourning and her friends are ready for her to move on...
Murphy/OC/Connor.
Chapters; 4, but there's also a sequel which is 5 chapters long, I won't post the link for that since when you've read this one, the option to click on to the next part is at the bottom.
- Saints Alive
I looooove this one!
Author summary; Skid is once again on her own and she has to find a new place. Luckily for her, she knows a friend who knows a guy who knows of a place for free. Downside is it's in the South side of Boston where crime is rather terrible. Of course, with two Irish brothers as new next door neighbors, what's the worst that could happen? 
Murphy/OC/Connor
Chapters; 7
- Time Zero Blues
Okay, so this one, omfgjwoehdjshndloihd. This is one of my favvvvvs of all time, I’ve read it so many times, if you don't read it, I just might cry.
Author summary; Murphy and Connor get out of work early and are headed to McGinty's. Murphy finds a trail of Polaroids along the way that lead them to an unexpected situation. 
Murphy/OC/Connor
Chapters; 23
- Sacrament of Penance
If you’re after something to get you hot and bothered, this is it :’)
Author summary; "If we confess our sins, He is faithful and just to forgive us our sins, and to cleanse us from all unrighteousness." (1 John 1:9) Pure PWP, sacrilege, and gratuitous smut.
Murphy/OC/Connor
Chapters; 5
- Robyn Hood
This one is mine! Lololol. I’m not recommending it because I’m saying its good, but I haven't posted it here because honestly I’m lazy, so if you wanna read another one of my multi-chapter fics, then hop on over :)
Author summary; When Robyn gets thrown into the life of The Saints, it causes a big stir between the brothers. The boys deal with their feelings for her in very different ways, and all of their lives get turned upside down. Connor/OC/Murphy.
Slightly AU, set a year after the first film, they don't go back to Ireland.
Murphy/OC/Connor
Chapters; 15
- Choíche Is go deo
Another one of mine I’m pretty sure I’ve never posted here.
Author summary; Follow Niamh Flannagan as she grows up with the twins in Ireland and watches them turn from boys into men. How will they both deal with having feelings for her? Will jealousy get in the way? 
Murphy/OC/Connor.
Chapters; 8
Fanfic.net [Boondock Saints]
- Risk it all
I’m in love with this one, it’s really fucking good.
Author summary; Nolee moved to South Boston with a hope to escape her past and make a better life for herself. What she didn't plan on was the peculiar Murphy MacManus coming into picture and breaking down everything she thought she knew. As they attempt to bond, can she overcome her tainted old life and let down her walls? Especially with one extra problem: she's already pregnant.
Murphy/ OC
Chapters; 22
- Warrior Shepherds
Another one of my all time favs. I love the dynamics of the characters and how well the boys are written. There’s some serious humour thrown into the mix and I laughed out loud so many times when I read this one. You’ll also be pleased to know this author is on Tumblr, @risingphoenix761. If the username looks familiar, it's because I tag her in all of my shit and recently wrote her a BDS drabble for her birthday. She's an awesome human, so check her out :D
Author note; They were called to destroy evil, but crossing paths with a wayward soul meant compromise. And in compromising, the MacManus brothers get more than they bargained for. Connor/OC/Murphy (rated M for violence, language, and sexual content)
Murphy/OC/Connor
Chapters; 37
- Amaryllis
Also by @risingphoenix761, and equally good and worth a read.
Author summary; She wasn't necessarily in their plans. They definitely weren't in hers. Yet between fate, coincidence, a few misadventures and some small favors, plans don't count for much anyway. Now the only question is, are they really just friends?
Murphy/OC/Connor
Chapters; 6
- Two Lads and A Lass
I love this one!
Author summary; This is a story about my OFC, Timi, who meets the MacManus brothers a year and a half before they become the Saints of Boston. Follow their adventures as Murphy and Connor try to pull the shyness out of Timi and teach her what love and fun truly is.
Murphy/OC/Connor
Chapters; 27
- Her Defenses
Yet another high on my list, I love everything about this story.
Author summary; "What do you two see in me that makes you want to try and fix me?" A new life in Boston meant giving up everything she had back home. That never meant that she had to give up her defenses at the same time. Rated M for language and (future) adult situations.
Murphy/OC/Connor
Chapters; 40
- A Saint, A Sinner
Now this one right here, I have probably read so many times I know it word for word, I’m not even kidding. This is very high on my list. The boys are written perfectly, I love every fucking thing about this one, and there's some very interesting hot and heavy shit along the way.  If you only read one fic of this list, it needs to be this one.
Author summary; Connor M./OC/Murphy M. BDS prequel/romance. What happens when you drink whisky with the boys? It's got it all: romance (as far as the boys can DO romance), fluff, hurt/comfort, plot, canon plus research. Rated for MacManus mouth, violence, & explicit three-way smut (no twincest). Note: The BDS belong solely to T. Duff
Murphy/OC/Connor
Chapters; Now it says 87, but the author has been reworking this fic so it's actually about 67 I think? I’m unsure, and the chapters are a little shorter than usual fics. It’s still amazing and a lot for you to immerse yourself in.
- Saints Angel
Another good one you need to check out.
Author summary; The Saints help to protect everyone in their city, but what if they had a protector of their own? In comes a woman, a hurt, young, lovely woman that was rescued by them, given a new life. To her, they are her boys and she will now do anything to protect them. She will become their Angel...forever to walk by their side...forever to watch over them. 
Murphy/OC/Connor
Chapters; 21
- Once More, With Feeling
This one is perfect quite honestly, I fucking love the OC so much and everything about this fic.
Author summary; [HIATUS - UNDER REVISIONS][ConnorxOCxMurphy] Avery, an emotionally independent journalist becomes complicated by her simultaneous feelings for both of the twins. As their secret life of vigilante world unfolds, Avery is left unattended to an entitled, delusional psychopath.
Murphy/OC/Connor
Chapters; 9
- Alexis's Saints
Another one I absolutely love.
Author summary; Alexis just recently moved to South Boston with her mother. When a nightmare from her past returns full force, she runs into the MacManus brother's and despite trying to stay away from them, she finds herself growing attached to the two brothers as the three try to figure each other out. Rated M for language and some adult themes. Please Enjoy
Murphy/OC/Connor
Chapters; 13
- The Possessed 
This one is fucking amazing. It’s so different from any other BDS fic I’ve read and well worth the read. There's also a sequel which is Connor/OC, so if you wanna read that, click on their username after reading this one and give that one a read too.
Author summary; She is possessed by something evil and supernatural. They have been asked to help save her, to call upon their faith, but one of them is struggling to believe in anything anymore. If she can't be saved then they will be forced to kill her. Do they have the strength to do what they must? Can he believe in something again? 
Murphy/OC
Chapters; 19
- The Librarian
I love the humour in this one and just everything about it.
Author summary; "You're murderers." Rhetta held up a hand, "And please don't give me a speech about how you only killed 'evil' men. I've heard it all before. And while I do agree that the men you killed deserved it, I do not believe that you have the right to take the law into your own hands." "So, you're no' a fan?"
Murphy/OC/Connor
Chapters; 17
OKAY, I’m gonna leave it at that for the BDS ones, I know there's more but you have no idea how long that just took me, omg lolololol.
Archive of Our Own [Daryl]
- His Walls
This one is so fucking good, it’s number two on my list of Daryl fics. I love how it starts off with young Daryl, they write him so well and exactly how I imagine him to be. It’s soooooo good guys, read it
Author summary; People build up walls, not to keep others out, but to see who cares enough to break them down. Truer words have never been spoken where Daryl Dixon was concerned. He never expected anyone to care enough, until someone did.
Starts out AU with 20 yr old Daryl, from Chapter 22 on out we'll be in the ZA-world.
M-rating for smut, language, adult topics, descriptions of abuse & attempted rape.
Chapters; 51
- Gorgeous
I hadn't actually read this one before, but I came across it when searching for ones I had read, and I fucking loved it. Young Daryl is my jam and this was so well written and just a good read. It’s a young Daryl AU, so the rest of the twd characters are in it too, like Rick his best friend, Maggie the readers best friend etc. 
Author summary; After meeting Daryl on the way home from a party the reader hatches a plan to get him to like her. But if it isn't friends and well-meaning King County citizens that tell her to stay away from him than it's Daryl himself, who's trying to keep his own feelings from coming to the surface.
Chapters; 16
- 357 Daryl Jerkin' It Drive
This one is a little different, this is a collection of works by the writer where they write not only about Daryl, but a lot of different characters Norman has played. As you can tell by the title, they’re all smut based, and well worth the read. It's also worth mentioning that the writer also has a tonne of other Daryl stories so make sure to head onto their profile to check everything else out, it would take too long to link them all here. Most of them are AU Daryl which I love and they're a really talented writer.
Author summary; none.
Chapters; it's hard to say since its a collection, most are one-shots but I know at least two of the works in there are nine chapters each.
- Night Stalker
Okay I lied, this is the same author as above and the next one is too because it's a sequel to this, but they're my favs by this author, I love them. They're a little dark and they're AU, but if you're like me, you'll love them. I recently recommended the sequel to this one to someone in my ask box.
Author summary; Daryl is mentally unstable, but functioning. He falls in love.
Chapters; 15
- Walking in the Light
The sequel to the above story, I’m in love with it, read it now!
Author summary; Sequel to "Night Stalker". Daryl is improving under the care of his new nurse, Krissy. He is still confused by the hallucination, and why Krissy reminds him so much of Kristin.
Chapters; 17
- Just Another Day
Another AU Daryl story that is amazing.
Author summary; Redemption. It's a concept Daryl Dixon is completely unfamiliar with- but desperately needs. It lives in his dreams, where he's a hero among men in the zombie apocalypse... but that's not real life. Real life is sorrow, loneliness, and pain. Until he meets his beautiful neighbor- then its possibility, hope, and maybe a bullet to the brain.
Chapters; 15
- In The Little Town of Jasper…
Yet another amazing AU Daryl story. Are you sensing a theme here? Looool. I’m pretty sure this is the same author as His Walls that I recommended, but I’m too lazy to check. 
Author summary; -Abrasive. Yes, that description fit him perfectly. The guy smelled like trouble, and she knew he would get even more abrasive the longer she talked to him. Too bad she didn't care. -A pretty stranger that talked to him, knew his name and his place of work? In Daryl's book, that just couldn't be good news. AU - Daryl Dixon/OC, Explicit for language and sexual situations. Yes smut!
Chapters; 65
- Second Hand Hearts
This is another fic I highly recommend you read. (Duh, or it wouldn't be on the list, God Sarah ur like so annoying) :’)
Author summary; In her darkest hour, a woman who has lost everything is rescued by a handsome man with a crossbow and nothing to lose-until he meets her. In a nightmarish new world, where the dead prey on the living, can they beat the odds and together make life worth living again?
Chapters; 32
- Transference
Another AU Daryl one, but it’s so fucking good and different to a lot I’ve read.
Author summary; Be warned. This is a story about Daryl seeking out a different and not so mainstream relationship. It is 100% consensual and he asks for it. He seeks out what he wants so if you have read the tags and you continue to read it's on you. Xoxoxox Krissy
Chapters; 14
- Hope is a Waking Dream
I know I keep saying I love the fics, but I do, clearly. This one though is another favourite of mine and you really need to read it. I love the dynamic between the OC and Daryl.
Author summary; Set between Seasons 2 and 3. Melissa Sheppard is alone in the ZA, but she was alone before the dead owned the earth. She prefers it that way. Boy, is she pissed when she gets back to her cabin to find it has been taken by strangers.
Chapters; 24
- Paths Crossed
I’m getting sick of hearing myself say I love it over and over, so just fucking read it and make me happy! *sobs*
Author summary; While out hunting Daryl comes across a stranger and decides to help her despite his better judgement and they begin on their journey together.
Chapters; 61
- Daryl Dixon Loves Me
This is another I hadn't actually read until now when I was searching, I actually really loved it. It's full of smut and that's never a bad thing. It took me a couple of chapters to really get into it, but it's really worth the read.
Author summary; Daryl comes across Lucy (OC) in the woods and claims her for his own. The story begins during the Farmhouse era of the series.
Chapters; 14
- A Star In A Sea Of Darkness; Darkness In A Sea Of Stars
Another one, just read it.
Author summary; After the Governor attacked the prison, the only person left in Daryl's shitstorm of a life was Judith. For Daryl, it's enough. Until he met her.
Chapters; 28
- Roommate
Holy shit, this fic is everything. It's AU pre-ZA and it's just the best. It's so good, I can't even put into words, very high on my list and it also has a sequel set in the ZA that’s 13 chapters long, please read it. If you like AU things, this is for you. The way they write Daryl in this, it's just gold. It’s also told in Daryl's POV which is just amazing.
Author summary; Several bodies are found in the area of a small town. In this town lives Daryl, the killer of all those people. The investigation goes on, the profile is made, and now the police and the FBI look for a specific type, a loner type, ... Daryl's type. He decides to find himself a roommate in an attempt to mislead the police. Let's see how that will turn out for him. AU pre-apocalypse horror story. Obviously very OOC Daryl.
Rated M for a good reason, violence, foul language, adult content... it's all there, consider yourself warned.
Chapters; 12
- Wallflower
Okay, so this ones a little different. It's actually a Daryl/OC/Rick love triangle and I usually don't read Rick fics (loool that rhyme though) but this is a good fic.
Author summary; Thea Graham has lived in Alexandria for over a year and is happy being mostly invisible. This is what happens when she suddenly has the attention of two men.
Chapters; 20
- Running Wild
This story is number one on my list guys, this is right up there with His Walls. This is my number one fav Daryl fic of all time and I’ve read it so many fucking times it's unreal. This fic is life, it’s everything. If I could only read one fic over and over for the rest of my life, it would be this one.
Author summary; Four years have passed since their sanctuary at the prison fell at the hands of the Governor and the surviving members are now thriving at their new home just north of Atlanta. Out of the blue, late one afternoon, Daryl Dixon stumbles across someone they thought they'd lost long ago; a member of the Woodbury community that had returned with Rick to the prison.
Warning: This fic is quite a bit darker than my other ones. If you are looking for fluffy bunny, happy prancing unicorns and rainbow colored endings, this is not the story you are looking for.
Chapters; 67
- Amnesia
I love this fucking story, ‘nough said.
Author summary; Her story isn't all that different from anyone else these days. The world went to shit, and the dead don't want to die. She's lost people. So has everyone else. Who she was before isn't who she is now. But there is one difference between Lena and every other survivor she's come across. She doesn't know who she was. And who she is? Well, she's still trying to figure that out.
During the mayhem of the early days of the apocalypse, a fateful smack on the head stole her memory. All she's ever known is the world she's living in now. But that doesn't mean she's adept at surviving it. Eventually, she ends up alone and near death's door. Till a man on a motorcycle chooses to save her life.
Now she has to decide if who she was is worth finding, or if she'll fight the hell that comes with what's forgotten and strive for something better with the one man in the world who can see past it all.
Chapters; 48
- Cherokee Rose
Yet another amazing fic!
Author summary; Daryl and Raven's world collide after a visit to Hilltop by the group from Alexandria. Raven's only love is her Black Stallion Obsidian and Daryl has been done with loving anything for a long time. He's had a lot of practice hardening his heart but the dark vixen is finding cracks in his armor. Will Raven be the one that will finally make Daryl feel again? Rated for sexual situations.
Chapters; 21
- Lips of an Angel
I fucking love this fic. This author has already made it on this list because she's so fucking good. Just go read all of her shit. Its AU Daryl, which by now you guys should probably be able to tell I love looool.
Author summary; Daryl calls a phone sex line. I know this is a trope that has been done before but I feel like I added my own spin on it. I hope you enjoy. I love Hinder, and I heard this song on the radio, so here we are.
Chapters; 11
- The Country Singer
Amazing story, go forth and read my children…
Author summary; Country Music rising star, Melanie McCall and her songwriting partner are headed to D.C. to find hope after their tour bus breaks down and their band is wiped out. They are given a chance to come to Alexandria...but what will happen once their new neighbors find out she was Beth Greene's favorite singer?
A story about losing voice, but finding hope.
Chapters; 18
- Home at last (Redux)
Yet another good one for you guys to read. 
Author summary; There are two people alive in this world for whom childhood was a dangerous, precarious, frightening place. For whom life has never been easy and relationships always strained and unnatural things. Having connected, against the odds and then been torn apart by civilization falling around them. How will they react when they meet each other again.
One of them has survived on a deep well of anger and pain, found a family, of sorts, and begun to try and put his past behind him and learn to let people in. The other has dropped the pretense she'd built up before the world went to shit and now she is as detached and self-reliant as he used to be. What happens when these two meet? Can two misshapes fit together and face the world as a better, stronger, complete whole? Can they find, in each other, a place to call home at last?
Chapters; 84
- Of Myths and Men
I fucking love this one, please read it.
Author summary; This story will follow an Original Female Character and her dog through to TWD world from the beginning of the turn.
She will meet the rest of the group, around mid season four.
There is no Beth in my story, Beth fans. I'm sorry.
Artemis. Greek Goddess of the hunt, wild animals, wilderness, childbirth and virginity. Though many Gods vied for her affections only her hunting companion, Orion, could win her heart.
She'd heard them all, been asked if she was a virgin, asked if she had a twin brother, Apollo, asked if she was raped and attacked by her friends and family, asked if she had killed anyone... She was just a girl from a small town with a stupid name.
Artemis had never wanted an Orion, and now the world was falling apart she gathered the chances of meeting one were slim to none. Right? She has Diablo, her best friend and protector.
Who needed the Greek giant Orion when you had the Devil on your side anyway?
Chapters; 42
- Saving Valentine
OH MY GOD THIS STORY GUYS. I love this one, really fucking love it. High on my list. It's got a little bit of Negan/OC in there, but who doesn't love a bit of Negan? I certainly fucking do lololol It’s mainly Daryl/OC though, so even if Negan isn't your jam, I would really recommend reading this.
Author summary; She fought and killed to survive but she lived for revenge. Valentine waits for the right moment to kill the man who murdered her family. Can she do what needs to be done to escape the Sanctuary that is her prison? Can she accept the helping hand from strangers to do it? Can she live with all she lost? TWD world, non canon timeline.
Chapters; 51
- The Living and The Dead
Can we just talk about vampire Daryl for a second, because like HOLY FUCK WHY IS THIS THE ONLY VAMP DARYL FIC I HAVE EVER FOUND. *Breathing intensifies*
Anywho...this story, just fuck. It's everything, it gives me life, please read it omfg.
Author summary; Daryl is the last of his species, in a world that has just turned stranger and stranger since the day his brother turned him.
He's living as normal a life as you can on your own in the woods surrounded by Walkers... until Evie shows up, and threatens to bring all his instincts right back to the surface.
Chapters; 65
- Beasts and Monsters
If you're after a badass OC, this is the story for you. It's so good.
Author summary; Having lost her entire group, Lena finds herself alone in a crumbling world watched through darkened eyes. She is courageous, savage and uncomplicated. Her only companions being an obedient horse and two pet Walkers. When she finds herself outside a prison, inside the walls she finds a group of survivors capable of giving her a glimmer of hope.
Chapters; 31
- Stay
I really love this one *whines*
Author summary; Hannah has been alone for months, but somehow she's made it. But after discovering a school tucked into the northern hills of Georgia, she encounters a stranger who is just as damaged and broken as she is.
Chapters; 48
- Born Nameless
What's this? Yet another good story? Why yes, it is. 
Author summary; Anamika has been alone from the start of the apocalypse and she likes it that way. Groups meant vulnerability, which meant death and Anamika wanted to survive. However, circumstances change and when she agrees to give Alexandria a chance, she finds that she just might not have met the right sort of people before, in particular a dirty, gruff redneck with a hidden heart of gold.
Chapters; 35
Random bonus fic;
- I think I liked you better when you didn't have a knife in your hand, Peaches…
I thought I’d throw this one at you, why’s it a bonus fic you ask? Its a Negan fic, not Daryl, but what the fuck, have it anyway, its really fucking good loooool I fucking love Negan man, I’ve thought about writing him so many times :’)
Author summary; When Blake finds herself sold out to the Saviours by her abusive fiancé, she realises that she's certainly not on her own anymore and finds an unlikely friend in Negan. And Negan does NOT like men who beat their girlfriends, one tiny bit….
Chapters; 140
And that is it guys! Holy fudge nuts, can we just talk about how long this list took me to make? It’s 20 pages long guys *sobs* don’t say I never give you anything.
That nifty history thing on Ao3 I mentioned, for some reason, quite a few weren’t there and I had to go through the fics to find them. Not every single one is on the list, that would take me fucking forever to do, but these are the best ones I've read.
On that note, I want to just say something.
I’m an avid reader of fics, and as you know if you're here, a writer. So let me just take a quick minute to tell you how much writers appreciate feedback on their fics. 
We write for free, we gain no money from what we do, using our spare time and take painstaking hours to not only write fics, but edit, make them perfect and get them out to you. Every like/kudos, or comment/reblog, it means the fucking world to us.
I reply to every comment I get, every time someone likes my shit or comments, it makes my fucking day. Because it reassures me I’m doing good.
I have my days where I think I'm a shit writer and that no one would care if I gave up, and then someone will comment, even something simple like’ this was good’, and it fills me with so much fucking joy.
So, if you read a fic and like it, please let us know. Even if you just like/kudos the thing, just a click, it doesn't take any time, it means so much to us. If you really liked it, comment, let us know. Don't know what to say? 
‘Awesome’
‘Good job’
‘I loved this’
All of these are adequate, you don't need to over think what you say. If you liked one line in particular, tell us, it's everything. 
Of course you don’t have to, but it’s always welcome is what I’m trying to say.
So with that out of the way, I hope you enjoy the fruits of my labour with this list and I’ve given you a lot to read. My eyes feel like they’re falling out and I might die, but there we go, it’s done. :’)
Much love
Sarah x
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yandereshit · 6 years ago
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Hey hey ~ I hope you're having a good day. How about 2) or 6) for a Saeyoung x MC fic? ♡
Even though the question is old, fyi I’m having a good day today, way better than yesterday even though I woke up like 2 hours ago lololol thank you and enjoy!
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707 x MC: “Hey, hey, calm down. They can’t hurt you anymore”
Mint Eye was going to be destroyed on that day, that much all of them knew. They – of course – had their jobs to do, and human life depended on them. But whether or not the organization would survive, was already out of the question. It was deemed to fall today, to end all the pain it caused to the people inside.
Many times has he wondered, whether or not the people he saw on cameras came there of their free will. Whether it was their own choice that caused them do all of these awful things to those who didn’t want to obey their Savior.
The car finally stopped and they went out. They were still a bit far from the building, they could barely see it through the thick curtain of trees. According to the plan, he and Vanderwood were supposed to get in first and make sure to get out the innocent victims they knew of, and then the people hired by Jumin Han would arrive and take over the situation. Last but not least, the police would enter. 
It took him quite a while to convince Vanderwood to help them, but right now the man didn’t utter a word of complaint, focused on his task like nothing else. 
There were two innocent victims in this place, at least two they knew of: V and MC. And they had to get both of them safely out. The time was limited and they had to hurry. It was only reasonable to go separately. 
The girl stared forward, at the wall. She wasn’t told to do anything, so she just stared, deep in her thoughts. What these thoughts were? No one would be able to tell. Maybe she was just daydreaming, imagining that the things went on differently?
Maybe, for these few moments, she was able to actually feel like she was in a different place? Was it giving her any relief? Or hope, at least?
No one would be able to tell, because her face was completely dull, only tired.
The door opened behind her and she flinched, curling up.
“You ready?” the irreverent voice echoed. She nodded hesitantly, turning around to look at the white-haired man in a suit. “Good. They should be here any second. You don’t really have to do anything, so it’s even better for you, yeah? It’s not like you’re of much use anyway, you can do as much as to sit here” the man mocked, but she didn’t find any strength in herself to reply. Her fists tightened though and her jaw clenched in a hopeless need of resistance.
Saeran didn’t say anything else and just left, letting her dwell on her sanity in silence. 
And the girl stared at the wall, counting seconds, once a while looking to the side, where the window was. She didn’t dare to look outside, afraid of seeing whom she didn’t want to be here.
It was a trap, Sevy. 
She wanted to scream it out. If the man came here, it wouldn’t end well for him. She somehow prayed the he wouldn’t, that he would change his mind, maybe let the police handle the whole thing and not engage just for her. 
If only she could use the messenger now. If only she could send him any kind of warning. But for her phone has been taken away long time ago, the outside world couldn’t hear her pleas.
She didn’t know how much time has passed before the door started to open once again, very slowly. The sound only made her shut her eyes tightly, as though to prevent tears from spilling out. She knew who it was even before the voice sounded out.
If he was here, then it was already too late.
Too late to save him.
“MC…? God, you’re here…” He stormed to his side, not even thinking of shutting the door.
Now she couldn’t stop crying. His voice was so relieved, but so oblivious.
Tears streamed down her cheeks when the man knelt by her side, gently taking her hand in his own. The gentle gesture was what she craved for so long, after being thrown around like a trash in this place. 
“Hey, hey, calm down. They can’t hurt you anymore” the man said, stroking the inside of her palm gently. 
“It’s not myself that I’m crying for” she uttered in a shaky voice, finally sparing him a pitiful glance.
The meaning of the words stayed unknown to him. His eyes slightly widened, trying to proceed what she wanted to say. 
He didn’t look up right away, when the door creaked behind his back. She didn’t dare to, either. 
But once the weirdly familiar voice echoed behind his voice, he knew that their plan has failed.
“It’s a game over, Saeyoung.”
He could only pray for Jumin’s people to arrive soon.
Please, reblog if you enjoyed! You can find more on my masterlist! It’d be great if you also considered buying me a ko-fi!
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distractedbythesun · 5 years ago
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6, 9(Cricket), 12, 15, 19, 29, 30, 36, 47(Paper Rings and Dirty Dreams)
6) If you had to delete one of your stories and never speak of it again, which would it be and why?
Again, the crossover.
9) In your xxx fic, what’s your favourite scene that you wrote?
The sequence of events where Cricket goes to the bar to get her dad, into the hospital scene and death. 
12) Who is your favourite character to write for? Why?
Molly McKenney cause she’s 100% that bitch. 
15) If you write OC’s, how do you decide on their names?
I really don’t even know lol...I’ve always loved names and thinking about combinations of names so I just brainstorm until I find one that fits the character I have in mind. 
19) Are there any stories that you’ve written that you’d really love to do a sequel to?
YES!  The One That Brings Me Back and Between the Lines.  Attn: @justfinethanx
29) Do you have a story that you feel doesn’t get as much love as you’d like?
Between the Lines is IN MY OPINION a very well crafted narrative and it is slept on but IT IS FINE.  I deeply appreciate those who have read it. 
30) In contrast to 29 is there a story which gets lots of love which you kinda eye roll at?
All of my rando one shots lololol. 
36) Can you give us a spoiler for one of your WIP’s?
Ghosts! Crime! Mystery! 
47) Here’s a fic title - insert a made up title. What would this story be about?
Tolly Tolly TOLLY TOLLY TOLLY!!!!!!!!!
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jimlingss · 5 years ago
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[1/7] jungle park was so good!!!! hoseok is especially so cute but hot at the same time. serious and professional hoseok is alright but CHEESY ROMANTIC HOSEOK STOLE MY HEART!!!!!!! I love his flirtatiousness in general but in chapter 22 when hoseok and oc were taking a trip down memory lane and hoseok was playing out scenarios of how their life would’ve been alternatively !!!!!! hoseok is such a hopeless romantic I was melting I love that side of him 😭💕🥺 also I love yoongi and sunyi’s-
[2/7] -relationship too, I’ve been soft for yoongi lately and idk why but jungle park yoongi’s characterisation made me Feel Things, not even with the way yoongi and sunyi interact but also the subtle things he does/says that indicate he likes her, I liked it a lot!!! I love yoongi 😪 and as always, idk how u do it bec I imagine it would be hard to write, but I love the characterisations of each jungle park character and how they all have their own actual personalities and I love how their-
[3/7] -characters and the storyline develops, and everything develops So Well at just the right pace!! idk why but I just love every scene in jungle park, even if it was just fluffiness or one of the trips or the taxi rides, they all seem memorable and feel like they just add to the story imo?¿ this might sound silly and I don’t mean to sound so serious but u know how ppl say reading helps u learn things? I never gave that much thought and assumed it just applied to non-fiction but I honestly-
[4/7] -feel like throughout the fic I learned a few life lessons almost, even if they were some things I already knew/it added more insight to what I already knew/it made things clearer to me, and it just makes me even more fond of jungle park?¿ lololol, but even so, I actually laughed out loud at some parts of jungle park and I enjoyed the humour LOL. I’m glad the storyline didn’t take a cliché turn as well bec I do enjoy clichés sometimes but I’m glad hoseok didn’t somehow recover all his-
[5/7] -memories of oc by the end, it just wouldn’t have fit with the story as well and also it makes chapter 22 even more adorable and special 🥺❤️ in case u can’t tell, chapter 22 is peak fluff and I loved that chapter so much! but I also liked how in the chapter 24 u really engraved a sense of nostalgia for readers while reading final chap, with certain paragraphs being similar to chapter 1/earlier chapters in the fic and with the flashback scenes in the epilogue :’) I’m so happy with the way-
[6/7] -this fic turned out! I wasn’t meant to write so much but I just found myself continuously writing my thoughts about this fic, I guess reading jungle park just made me wanna write out praises!!! honestly I’ve kinda been in a reading slump lately, if u can even call it that lol, and idk if it’s the slice of life aspect or just the ur writing/storyline creative skills but I really enjoyed reading jungle park! it felt really easy/comfortable to read and interesting/amusing/entertaining too.-
[7/7] -and I binge read it in like 3 days (sorry I just enjoy binge reading stuff 😩) lol!! okay, I feel like I’ve finally said everything (that I can remember rn) that I wanted to say about jungle park 😅 thank u so much for gracing us with another wonderful story crafted and delivered beautifully by that creative mind of yours!!!!!!! 🙆‍♀️💖
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uwu anon, oh my god you’re the real MVP. out here shooting bullets of lovely feedback to me and trying to cause my cardiac arrest, i see you. Honestly I’m glad you liked it hahaha especially chapter 22 cause I was worried that was WAYY too much fluff and therefore it was cringey (I figured tho after hundreds of pages, I’d indulge readers a bit). Yoongi for sure I’m such a sucker for. In all my stories he’s there with some kind of love interest haha I just love him as a lowkey soft character. I’m glad you enjoyed it so much and that every scene was memorable for you :’) that’s all I can hope for. Thank you for noticing all the details that usually go over people’s heads. And thank you for such wholesome messages. 
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fanciful-follies · 6 years ago
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- 😭😭 Alex is so worried about Aaron BUT he finally gets to go home :') -huh... yes... weird... they escaped... how could that happen.... -'Even now, he’s still trying to protect Aaron' hhhhh he cares about him so much omg -jfc i completely forgot Washington was in this story at one point + that be died!!! what!!! -Alex just comes up with a good lie on the spot he's so smart (1/?)
-GOD HE EVEN WANTS TO PROTECT AARONS PARENTS LEGACY WHY IS HE SO NICE -‘It is nice to have friends again’ he was alone for such a long time 😭 I’m glad they found him ❤️ -'Alex grins, and practically races after Theodosia’ lol he’s so cute -they’re!!!! back!!!!! home!!!!! -his mom omg ❤️❤️❤️ she’s so worried :’( -OH YEAH I FORGOT HERC & JOHN DIDN’T TELL ANYONE THEY WERE LEAVING!!!! their poor families omg (2/?)
-eyyyy the schuyler sisters are together again -hell yeah everyone is impressed bc eliza is the best™ -again, Washington is dead?? i still hope he might be alive but I’m starting to give up hope lmao -Eliza has to tell the story for him bc he’s too sad 😭😭 -oh yeah shit we still have no idea how Seabury was able to get the map to Alex!! :0 (3/?)
-’“We were all fine,” he tells them. “I mean, I almost fell into a pit of lava, but Aaron caught me”’ you can’t just say that!!! everyone is worried already and the first thing you say is how you almost died?? jfc -“uuuuuhhh yeah they 'escaped’… weird… ” -“I can’t believe you hired pirates” big mood tbh, like I’m glad she did but… how? (especially jefferson lol) -YEAH THE GOLD!!! -“He saw you for the man that you are, Alex” that’s so cute and true and ugh i just love Alex’s mom (4/?)
-“You grew up so much on that trip” hell yeah he did -another thing i forgot lol, he KILLED someone!!!! wow -his mom loves him so much 💕💕 -“I don’t know what I want to do” and that’s the biggest mood -“I…I feel like I still don’t know what I’m good at.” I was wrong this is an even bigger mood (5/?)
-'So he bounds down the steps, wondering how late everyone else slept in’ well definitely not as late as he did lmao -SHE’S NOT A CAPTAIN ANYMORE :( -yay Eliza and Theo 💕💞💕💞 lov them -“To keep us quiet about what happened.” i mean that sucks but it’s still a very good opportunity! -“We were given orders to explore the planet, and either kill or take hostages if anyone was found” YIKES YIKES YIKES!! (6/7)
-“Don’t apply right away. I know it’s selfish, but I’m not quite ready to let you go again just yet.” 💕💞❤️ cute -HE’S JOINING THE ACADEMY!!!! HELL YEAH (7/7)
Listen, Alex is to good of a person for his own good lol. - HMM yes a mystery indeed. - HE IS IN LOVE OKAY. - I know lol the whole Washington thing happened so long ago. - And Y E S people always underestimated him so he felt like he had nothing to say/contribute but now he is confident and throwing ideas out left and right.
TOO NICE like Aaron really better appreciate this boy. - And right??? Lafayette is so happy to be around people again. HE DESERVES TO BE HAPPY. - HOME
As they should be. - She really is. So smart. I love her. - And I mean okay yeah he is definitely dead lol sorry. - A true friend. - Debating whether or not I’ll actually take time to go through that whole story or leave some mystery to it.
Lol I know he says that so casually. - Again, such a MYSTERY. - And lololol I know. She was just so excited and had never hired a crew before and tbh in my mind she only met with Aaron and Bellamy so she was like okay yeah whole crew hired you two seem trustworthy! - THE GOOOLLDDD. - She is speaking the TRUTH and she loves Alex so much.
HE DID and I am so proud. - S A M E which is awful cause I am the AUTHOR of this fic lmao. - And SHE DOES - Lol isn’t it? A constant mood tbh - Well take comfort in the fact that we all feel that way lol.
Alex was all “ah yeesssss I know everyone else slept in so I won’t feel embarrassed for doing it too and - oh, oops, nevermind” - I know :( - BUt not being a captain means more time to spend with Eliza :) - EXACTLY. They are shady but it’s still a very good opportunity - And yeaaaahhh that’s pretty bad. And Aaron will NOT be happy if he finds that out.
VERY CUTE - AND HE IS GOING TO DO SO WELL
THANK YOU
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imagine-that-haikyuu · 7 years ago
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one-year anniversary countdowns: our favorite of each other’s scenarios/headcanons
may’s favorites of rachel lauren’s
10. Helping s/o on her period (with Oikawa) - (this is very relevant at this moment tbh) and i am weak for guys who would take care of their girls on their periods (because i want one of my own huhu). i’ve told y’all oikawa isn’t my favorite character, but i just think he’s adorable in this 9. High-Heeled s/o (with Hinata, Iwaizumi, and Bokuto) - as a tol girl who loves wearing heels, i love this. very much so. and i am also a sucker for being lifted up and spun around (even if it hasn’t happened yet lol. i think i actually have a fear of being carried because the last time someone carried me i screamed. loudly. in public. but it can’t hurt to imagine!) 8. Babysitting for Oikawa - THIS IS ADORABLE. ‘NUFF SAID. OIKAWA JUST BEING A GOOD DAD. ANNIVERSARY. IWA-CHAN COMPLAINING ABOUT OIKAWA SPOILING HIS SON--IT’S JUST TOO CUTE OKAY 7. Victory Sex (NSFW, with Ushijima) - my reasoning, explained in one gif:
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6. Chubby s/o (with Tsukishima) - tsukki growing up and being conscious of what he says about people is. my. jam. (and lbh i love every scenario where  end up with tsukishima lololol) 5. "You’re in the science teacher clique and I hang with the English teachers. I’d say our love is like Romeo and Juliet but I don’t think you’d like that much" (with Tsukishima) - I. LOVE. THIS. SO MUCH. YOU DONT EVEN KNOW. THE BANTER, THE SIDE GLANCES FROM THE OTHER TEACHERS, THE ACTUAL, SPOT-ON INSERTION OF R&J ALLUSIONS. BRUH. B R U H! !! !! as an english lit major, this really did it for me tbh 4. Morning Cuddles and Kisses (with Ushijima) - soft toshi. just. soft toshi and early mornings and uuuuuugggggghhghghghgh thE FLUFF. I HAVE NO WORDS TO EXPLAIN JUST HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS 3. Lazy Morning (with Asahi) - lazy mornings are my weakness. i too wish to have a lazy morning with volleyball jesus (throw in some hanky panky after breakfast too and you have me sold) just. damn it, this one is great, guys, just trust me 2. Year One (with Kuroo) - FLUFF. BANTER. KUROO BEING A HUGE DORK. ME BEING A DORK WITH HIM IM. THIS IS THE BEST BIRTHDAY PRESENT EVER I SHIT U ALL NOT. i was smiling as i read the whole thing and huhuhuuu smol kai and yaku and kuroo fighting over the littlest things i----*screams* 1. Rough Day (with Ukai) - (non verbatim) “would it be childish if i asked you to call someone and tell them to pee their pants?” is seriously the funniest line i’ve ever read, ever. i really love how you write Ukai (especially the pick-up line one, which is an honorable mention lol) it really is something else when you write for your muse--the words just flow so well that i got lost and immersed in the short time i was reading the fic
rachel lauren’s favorites of may’s
10. Silly but cute AU prompts: #1 - rival superheroes who are trying to protect the same small city (Kuroo, Tsukishima) - this one wasn’t a request we got but i still loved it anyway. the idea of “rival superheroes” seems so silly already to me anyway (same cause, why rivals?) and with these two? witty banter galore. 9. Decorating the Baby’s Room (Oikawa) - may is one of the best fluff writers i know so i knew this one was going to be right up her alley when we were calling dibs on which scenarios we wanted to write. i feel like she captures the fun (or funny) side of oikawa well 8. Silly but cute AU prompts: person A who sits in the back of every staff meeting and makes snarky comments under their breath about everyone the whole time and person B who arrived late and sat next to them and can barely hold in their laughter (Kuroo, Tsukishima) - did you mean me every meeting at work? when i read reader-inserts, i tend to remove myself from reality for a little bit because i know the reader isn’t always going to be characterized exactly like me because that’d be impossible. except may went ahead and wrote me into these whether she realized it or not 7.  Library notes (Akaashi, Yamaguchi) - this was my undergrad meet-cute fantasy turned real, or as real as reader-insert fanfiction. speaking from experience, i know it can be difficult to characterize akaashi sometimes because we don’t have a ton canon-wise to work with (thank you fanfic writers everywhere for filling that void) so i was definitely impressed with akaashi here. think it’d be neat if may wrote a part 2 to these with akaashi and yamaguchi leaving notes for the reader. 6. Victory Sex (NSFW) (Oikawa, Suga- see below 5. Pain Relief (NSFW) (Oikawa) - i really don’t have a lot to say about these other than they’re hot. may used the gif i wanted to use already so please see the above gif for my feelings on these 4. Silly but cute AU prompts: posted a joke ad in the classifieds but someone actually responded (Tendou) - this was my first introduction to may’s writing, so of course it already holds a special place in my heart. thanks to this piece, may solidified herself as my top choice for a new admin when I was searching for one. it’s light, fluffy, positive and the perfect introduction to her work.  3. Stealing the Remote (Tanaka) - i love tanaka, and there’s not nearly enough stuff with him as there should be. that being said, this is cute as all heck. i also love the sibling interactions between saeko and ryuu. 2. New Girl (Ushijima) - i’ve been in such an ushijima mood lately, so this is right on-point. like i said before, i remove myself from realty with reader-inserts and allow myself to be a different person for the sake of the piece, but for this one, it felt like something i might actually do (except for the being short bit, but again, i usually don’t mind). 1. Hitman!Kuroo falling for his target’s daughter (Kuroo) - i think this is a good departure from most of the fluff we’ve been writing, and the tone is pitch perfect here. perhaps it’s because kuroo is may’s fave and our best work tends to go into the characters we like the most (no shame in that!). i’m so pumped for part 2 of this (i was busy all day yesterday and haven’t had the chance to read yet)
tune in tomorrow for a special announcement for the blogaversary!
- the admins
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gvenevera · 7 years ago
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Tagged by @black-and-white-is-my-aesthetic
Well erm…better late than never? So sorry for my inactivity, I’ve been forced into slave labour (selling shirts to raise funds) and the 7 hours of lectures a day are driving me insane. At least I’ve got you to brighten up my day, Saori! *sends virtual hugs*
Rules:  1. Post the rules  2. Answer the questions given to you by the tagger  3. Write 11 questions of your own  4. And tag 11 people
Let’s go!
1) What’s your favourite subject? 
English! Or actually almost all language subjects (except my own, it’s too fcking hard). There’s just something exhilarating when I’m able to understand writings and dialogues from other parts of the world…
2) Which Greek god or goddess is your favourite? 
Ouch, I don’t read much Greek myth (or Percy Jackson lol). I’m gonna chose Hades just because of Disney’s Hercules xDDDDD
3) Who is your hated teacher? 
There’s this chemistry teacher in my high school who complains about EVERYTHING. Like. Someone would be wiping the blackboard and she would come in and complain that we make all the chalk dust spread, causing breathing hazard or something.
On the whole though, I don’t really hate any teachers, usually it’s just irritation.
4) When you’re sad, what song do you listen to? 
Inspirational songs, here are some examples:
Fight Song by Rachel Platten
Gold by Nicole Britt
Or alternatively, just blast something metal ‘till you forget about the sadness.
5) What’s your comfort food? 
I love all food lololol. Hmm…perhaps, Greek yoghurt and Pepperidge Farm cookies.
6) Would you like to see any Disney movie in particular? Doesn’t matter if you’ve already seen it or if you haven’t. 
There’s that Robin Hood version with talking animals, I haven’t watched it in years and years! Ah, nostalgia. (According to wiki, it’s the 1973 animated version)
7) Who’s your favourite Disney Princess? 
Mulan!
8) What’s your hobby? 
My profile says reading and embroidery…these days it’s really just scrolling thru Tumblr or Twitter or AO3 lol.
9) Are you willing to share something happy for when you’re depressed? If so; what is it? 
I’m just a simple person, my otps cure my depression and revitalizes me after a heavy day! I guess that’s what my blogs are for - to spread/share fandom goodness with every one else. I try to screen out all the fandom drama too, we got enough in the real world.
10) What is the lamest thing about your country’s government? 
WELL, considering we’re in military dictatorship right now….
11) Newspapers or books?
Books. Sadly, I don’t keep up with the news unless someone RTed it to my timeline.
Now for my questions:
1.       What’s your childhood anime?
2.       Social medias? Which one’s your favorite?
3.       Does your name (real or penname) have any meaning?
4.       How many meals do you eat in a day?
5.       Are you afraid of ghosts? Or horror movies?
6.       What kind of phone do you use? iOS vs Android?
7.       How many languages can you speak?
8.       Which fic would you rather read: Major character death OR Non-consensual?
9.       How do you feel about spoilers, especially for manga/anime? 
10.   Favorite travel destination?
11.   Describe your OTPs – what do you think they have in common? xD
Tagging: @shipeo because I saw you like my previous tag game!!!! Muahaha. You don’t have to do it if you don’t want to though! As for @black-and-white-is-my-aesthetic I’m curious about how you would answer these too ;)
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sixmorningsafter · 8 years ago
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Chapter 14: Review
I’m taking another break from my study session to write you a review since I haven’t for a while and this chapter is so great, I want to cry. Here we go!
A/N: Ahhhh, gah, thanks so much for writing this all up, love! So detailed and thoughtful and just aaskfan;olgv. So glad you liked it! Hope your test went well!
1) First part
This Caroline’s contract is so her and Stefan making edits is so him, I loved that you opened the chapter with that hah! Also it’s hilarious how he also makes those edits to annoy Caroline, I love how he teases her sometimes.
The only thing I’m addicted to is you, Steffy bear: I’m so tired of Defan in the show. Bless you for making their bromance so likeable in this fanfic :)
So when you said Stefan was going to be jealous I instantly thought about him getting jealous of Damon with the contract thing being involved. AND I LOVE IT. I mean, I totally love how you write Stefan’s personal thoughts and mind battle between his jealousy emerging and at the same time him trying to repress those emotions because they’re just casual and he doesn’t have the right to. Yet, it shows that Stefan feels something more deeply for her and that the thing of “I just want casual sex” is going to bite him in the ass and I’m so here for it. It’s so funny though, because he thinks Caroline has this contract for him because he thinks she isn’t into him in the same way that “she was into Damon”, when she actually writes this contract as a way to put a wall between them so she doesn’t fall for him. How can he be so oblivious lolol
And I could see what you meant with “judgmental”, “critical” Stefan. The way he went at Damon just because he was feeling jealous. You know, even if it was super wrong, I guess it’s a very human thing to do, especially from Stefan. I get that it brings memories of cheater Elena back and he gets defensive straightforward. Having said so, though, I’d love to see a honest talk between Damon and Stefan, with him explaining to Damon why he behaved so irrationally and immature. I love their brotp moments. So, I was wondering, will Stefan tell him what was going in his mind? 
A/N: WHEW, so much good stuff here - first of all, loooove all your notes and thoughts. All super, super spot-on. Defan is definitely a funny, drama-free bromance in this fic, so naturally I was like ‘DRAMA TIIIIMEEE’. No dynamic can go unscathed, muahahaha. No, but in all seriousness, I’m thrilled with your interpretation of how their tiff went down - I was absolutely going for a very human but still very flawed moment from Stefan because I felt like he was overdue for it, and Damon felt like the unexpectedly right target. There will definitely be a talk between them in the future about it - Damon might be used to letting things slide off him like butter, but Stefan’s not okay with what he did, so he’ll seek him out. Defan bonding ahead! Likely not in 15, though - already a lot going on there, lmao.
Re: the contract, aren’t they both being such idiots? Caroline pretends she’s writing it for Stefan when she’s absolutely writing it for herself, and Stefan’s convinced that her giving free reign to Damon meant she was more into it than her thing with him when it’s the exact opposite. Dumb, dumb, dumb. Luckily, no matter how many stubborn conclusions they come to about each other, their natural magnetism keeps winning out and giving them moments like the one in her room, so. Safe to say we’ll have more of those :)
2) Second part
1. Honestly, this whole moment has made me feel as through I was reading a suspense/mystery/detective story for a moment hsdbaysugd. I’m writing this review as I’m reading so I don’t know if this whole thing about the different IDs will be explained later but I’m so intrigued about these 2 identities and what’s going on! 
2. I’M DEAD ABOUT KAI SENDING BIRDS LIKE WTF. I’m crying, like, what is even this guy?! When I watched the video you made and I saw the birds, I thought it’d be just like a crazy thing caused by the wind or something, but the fact that Kai has all these birds, and sends them to deliver notes? THIS IS TOO MUCH I’M ON THE FLOOR. 
3. Isn’t it hilarious how Damon has gotten under Bonnie’s skin and she can’t shake him off? The sexual tension is too much hehehe.  When I read first Kai’s appearance, I got a vibe that he had a thing for Bonnie. Maybe I’m wrong, though. But it’d be great to see Damon driving Kai crazy during the dinner while flirting with Bonnie in front of him and Kai suddenly releases a lion or tigger or something as his revenge. 
4. Did Damon seriously use Caroline’s shampoo for the wounds? I can’t.
A/N: Woooo, mystery fic feels! That plot’ll come around again during the dinner date, but as you probably know by now, Bonnie does bring it up, lololol. Maybe not in the most productive way but it’s out there. 
Kai’s a delightful lunatic and I can’t wait to write him in an extended role in 15. So glad you’re enjoying him and his bird zoo! Much more madness to come - as fun as the Bonnie x Kai will be, I really think the Damon and Kai dynamic is going to push it over the edge. Speaking of, LOOOOOL at releasing a tiger on Damon. He’s definitely going to be a pretty shameless fake boyfriend and we’ll have to see how Kai takes it all. TBH, I’m pretty sure he finds Damon just as hot as Bonnie so it’ll be an interesting interaction for sure. 
And yes, he washed out cuts with fancy French lavender and there’s a 1000% chance Caroline’s going to kill him if she finds out he wasted her expensive ass shampoo for that.
3) Third part
OH MY GOOOOOOD
1. I love Caroline/Liz’s relationship SO MUCH. You have a gift when it comes to writing family dynamics, just saying. I love the friends vibe I got from them even if they’re mother and daughter. (I can totally imagine Liz meeting Stefan and playing Cupid between the two of them asdbayusdgf). Jump Mr. Brenner’s bones: jnfydsuhf Caroline. Can we expect to see Liz again? 
A/N: Will definitely see Liz again! Either in another phone call or during the Christmas chapter(s). So glad you liked their relationship!
2. Caroline trying to control herself and not snap at Stefan after seeing all the edits was hilarious.
A/N: LMAO the perfectionism is strong in that one.
3. Plus, she couldn’t help but feel like there was a general… off-ness about him right now that she couldn’t put her finger on. A brusqueness, almost, or a sense of calculated distance that reminded her of how they used to be: so, when I read this, I got a little confused as to what could be causing this behavior from Stefan. Was he acting a little distant because of a) his previous jealous-situation earlier? I mean, was it because he was still feeling a little off because Caroline let Damon do more stuff when they were having sex?; b) he thinks Caroline and Damon might be still hooking up?; c) he’s determined to keep it as a casual thing so he’s trying to put some distance between them in that sense or between his own feelings?; d) all of the above? (This sounds like an exam, I’m sorry).
A/N: I think c is probably you best bet. He went into that room business-like, focused, like it was a case he was working on, you know? He’d just finished reading through the entire contract so he had a very clear sense of what she wanted out of him (physical), and on top of that, he’d read it with a determination to prove to himself that he could totally do no-strings-attached. I think the jealousy situation played a role in that, too, but maybe less because of him being upset about Damon and Caroline and more because he was upset at himself and his own inability to handle that well. Basically, he was pulling a Caroline and putting up a front that cracked pretty quickly. 
4. Can I just say how great the positions of Stefan and Caroline felt in this moment? Like, them being sitting in front of each other, around clothes, and in her room, gave a sense of intimacy to everything and I think it was a great scenery.
A/N: Awww, gah, thanks so much, love! This is like such phenomenal feedback to hear as a writer - I tend to try to write things in a way that feels like a movie playing out in your head, or like you’re there in the room with the characters watching it all happen, so the fact that you could feel the intimacy of that scene makes me really happy. 
5. I know Caroline doesn’t like hair pulling, and I don’t expect her to like it even if it was coming from Stefan lmao. But, I don’t know why, I feel like once Stefan “runs” his hand through Caroline’s hair, she’ll like it, at least this way of hair playing? A girl can dream, right? I totally see Stefan doing it even if he tried not to. Maybe it’s because I have this headcanon that Stefan is obsessed with Caroline’s hair in the show, so I’d really love to see that in the fic since we’ve seen Stefan touching her hair while making out with her in the fic sometimes.
A/N: I feel fairly confident saying that the biggest problem she’ll have with Stefan running his hands through her hair in the future will be liking it too much. I also feel fairly confident saying it’ll happen often.
6. Okay, writer: I love this uadasdygf. 
A/N: :)
7. YOU GAVE US THE FIRST HAND-HOLDING, I FEEL BLESSED.
A/N: All the tactility! 
8. I CAN’T FUCKING BELIEVE YOU GAVE US THIS MOMENT OF CAROLINE IMAGINING A MARRIED LIFE WITH HIM. I’m hyperventilating. I know it’s too soon but you’ve hit me right in my feelings. I get the “Caroline being romantic af” vibe from it and I’m in love gurl. Like, I know it’s over the top, but Caroline starting to believe in love again, the love that she loves so much, is such a cute thing to see? P.S. I really hope they have a mini Caroline one day, because I can totally see a little girl wrapped around his shoulders like a monkey as you said. And I can see her being very Caroline-like with her sassy comments and rolling her eyes every time Stefan starts rambling about nerdy things and she and Caroline exchanging exhausting looks. You’ve ended me, thanks :)
A/N: Looooove that you got the Caroline-the-Suppressed-Romantic vibe from that because it was absolutely what I was going for - she’s super vulnerable to love. She’s hard-wired for it. She grew up with sweeping books and romantic movies and grand gestures and her and Matt started out like a fairytale, you know? So I wanted to sneak in a moment where you start to see that repressed side of her that she denies so hard, and figured daydreams about Stefan the Hot Dad was as good a way to do it as any ;) So, so happy it killed you! LMAO, and aw, a flashforward of that would be tooooo cute. 
4) Fourth part
1. I can’t believe Bonnie confessed she’s having sex fantasies about Damon. I was reading the whole dialogue and conversation and thinking she’s not going to, right? She’s not going to. And once she did I laughed so hard.
A/N: lololol Bonnie’s the biggest wreck she’s been in ages and she is so done with life.
2. I love how Bonnie and Damon can be so direct to each other sometimes. Like I love how Bonnie just said everything that was going on in her mind without biting her tongue, and it makes such a good parallel with Stefan and Caroline because they’re always so scared of just following what they’re truly feeling? I mean, I enjoyed Bonnie’s moments of craziness and running away from Damon all the morning, but reading her exploding was like yay girl, go for it. Also, I’m wondering if Fell is your violent criminal record name and thinking about googling it, but I’m also hoping your towel falls off. It’s all really healthy: I’m dying, poor Bonnie.
A/N: Love this parallel! So accurate - Stefan and Caroline are sort of tentatively navigating around each other and their unacknowledged feelings for each other, and they’ve been doing it in a kind of slow, steadily building way for chapters on end. It’s more controlled, more lingering. Meanwhile, Bonnie just kind of woke up in 13, was like WHOA BOY what is this feeling, did like acrobatics to try and get around it, and didn’t even last a day before cracking. I think there’s a sort of combative volatility to Bamon that lends itself to that, to those big, rip the lid off scenes and poke-the-other-till-they-snap beats, and even though it took longer to get them where they are than it took Stefan and Caroline, they’re almost moving more quickly now because the defenses are down. The pretenses are melting. At least on Bonnie’s end. Damon, there’s still a lot to dive into, but now that Bonnie’s not as focused on being a tight-lipped human stress ball, she’ll get back on the offensive with him and girl can fish. Damon’s up against a lot.
3. Okay, that was hot. Damon’s all in, and he’s being so happy and such a tease about it lol. I’m here for this “you’re not going to be able to resist me” while pretending to a couple. I don’t care if it’s cliché or shown in a lot of fics and shows, I’M SO HERE FOR IT because it’s going to be so fun to read. 
A/N: LMAO it’s the biggest cliche to ever cliche so OFC it’s in this fic! So happy you’re looking forward to it! I think it’s going to be a lot of fun. Sexy, surprising, and fun. 
5) Fifth part
1. How cute that Stefan and Caroline were just watching videos like 2 normal people. A cute, normal moment (let’s forget they were watching videos of people kissing/having sex/basically porn sfsydgfdf I’m dead).
A/N: LMAO right? Casually watchin’ makeout scenes with your pending booty call, nbd. It’s always fun to write them slipping into comfortable moments without really realizing it, since their origins were so tense.
2. The thing of the scarf kind of reminded me of the Harry Potter drabble with nerdy Stefan lol. Also, thank you for this kind of moment because seeing them just bonding is always nice to see. Especially because you can see they’re totally different but they get so comfortable with each other and they work together so well.
A/N: So true! Totally nerdy Stefan! And yeah, absolutely, I think the sexual attraction has been more than established for them at this point, so now’s when the bondy moments start picking up steam, you know? Like the unexpected ease with each other/shared senses of humor/things that imply something deeper than just sexual chemistry. Not in full-force, obviously, since Caroline would probably bolt, but in worrisome flares that get longer and longer every time. 
3. You know, earlier today, I…: I NEED to know what Stefan was going to say! I mean, my first thought was the he was going to tell Caroline about his jealousy earlier, with Damon, but I’m not sure. Well, whether it was or wasn’t that, I was wondering if we’ll see Stefan telling Caroline about that, by the way. I picture Stefan telling Caroline he felt jealous because he has this kind of thought that she sees him as boring or not fun enough, and she reassures him and confesses that he actually makes her laugh sometimes, BUT ONLY SOMETIMES hahaha. 
A/N: In my head, I saw it as he was going to say something along the lines of like, ‘earlier today, I thought that maybe this whole thing was a bad idea.’ Sort of lowkey admit that he was considering not signing the contract, that maybe he wasn’t right for this, and that he had this idea that the only way it could work is if he was super detached or distant, but that actually, the past hour had just been genuinely fun and he was glad he hadn’t decided that. That’s what I was thinking. Not sure he’s at the point with her where he’d open up about any kind of insecurities re: her and Damon, because so much of that is tied so heavily to the blow his self-esteem took with Elena and it’s just a loaded conversation. But maybe a little further down the line, I could see something like that happening!
4. Stefan checking Caroline out and devouring her with his eyes while she was stretching was not subtle at all and I’m happy. He’s so attracted to her, it’s crazy. Honestly, both of them are going to feel so relieved once they finally have sex after so many days of increasing sexual tension lmao.
A/N: I’ve sketched out a few potential first time scenarios for them in my head and I think the one I’ve settled one is very much in line with this, hahaha.
5. I’M HYPERVENTILATING WITH THIS STEROLINE KISS OMG. I swear I felt butterflies, you wrote it so well :’) And YAS, because of course this would happen. Caroline trying to teach him what intimate is so that he doesn’t do it, and yet here he goes, his hand sliding up her spine, his fingers in her hair, his other hand around her waist to pull her to him, and then on her face. He couldn’t resist lol, he’s so whipped already. 
6. Sliding the pad of his thumb over the arc of flecks on her left cheek and causing a wash of butterflies to flutter through her/ His thumb swiped down to the mark just above the left corner of her mouth. The feather-light friction left a flare of warmth across her cheek, and her pulse skittered at his proximity to her lips, at how easily he could brush a fingertip over them: GIRL WTF, LIKE WTF.  Stefan can try all he wants, honestly, everyone knows he’s not going to be able to be “non-intimate” with her. Like, LOOK AT THEM. 
Her index finger traced a line from his right eyebrow to the jut of his cheekbone: GIRL WHAT GAME ARE YOU PLAYING. Can I just say how beautiful this moment of exploration and knowing each other was? And I love how flirty and idiotic and playful they were afterwards, like Stefan pretending to be offended and to want to pull away but not in the slightest. MOOD:
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LIKE DO THEY REALIZE HOW HARD THEY’RE FALLING FOR EACH OTHER BECAUSE, MAN.
Also, I wanted to thank you because it’s been cute to see Caroline being nice to Stefan and not putting walls between them as she usually does. I’m proud of my baby.
A/N: LMAO just responding with a <3 to all of this. So, so happy you liked it. I knew some people were worried about how purely physical they were in 13 so I was like ‘how can I fast-track a little intimacy without going OOC’ and this was what I came up with, lololol. Just a sort of forbidden moment where all things go and intimacy is the whole point but it’s also a slippery slope because it’s messing so much with both of their heads, you know? So needless to say, I’m really glad it landed! They’re dumb, I don’t know why either of them ever thought that would help rather than hurt they’re ‘casual sex’ crusade buuuuut this is what comes out of my head. 
I’m really curious as to who is going to realize it first, like, you know, have this moment of realization, and if they’ll just follow what they feel or want to stop so it doesn’t continue. I’m fragile, I don’t want to suffer. 
Oh, and the fact that they have this constant need to mark what is intimate and non-intimate, and the whole contract thing, doesn’t that make them think that if they need all of that is maybe because they know they feel something deeper for each other even if they don’t want to say it aloud? I DON’T KNOW BUT I’M READY FOR ANYTHING THAT IS COMING FOR THESE TWO.
A/N: I think Christmas is going to be a key time for them in terms of coming to those realizations. Just like that first stretch of time apart, where the extenuating circumstances that brought them together are over and there’s no convenient excuse to see each other as much anymore, you know? That’s my predication. LMAO I honestly don’t know ‘cause chapters morph on me like crazy. 
And re: the recognizing needing rules = feelings, YOU’D THINK. Denial’s a hell of a drug, man. 
7. Does Bonnie really not notice anything or at this point she’s just pretending she doesn’t because I can’t believe it lol. By the way, I really loved this moment with the 3 of them. 
A/N: I think after three years of seeing Caroline and Stefan avoid each other and get super stilted anytime the other was around and just in general be entirely uninterested in the other’s existence, it’s going to take a lot for Bonnie to leap into ‘they’re hooking up’. Like as readers, we’re diving into the fic right when they’re starting something so we’re like Damon, we see it as super obvious. Bonnie has a whole three year history of them being allergic to each other that is kind of putting up a mental block, and on top of that, she’s sort of the main character of her own romantic debacle right now and that’s compromising a lot of her observational skills. I do think, though, that once it clicks in her head forreal, she’s going to immediately identify all the obvious af signs she missed and be outraged at herself.
8. Okay, first Stefan, now Bonnie. Like no wonder these two are besties. They even get jealous at the same time and over the same people, it’s hilarious. Damn crow, by the way -though I find the crows thing so hilarious, can they adopt one or something?-, but will the girls talk about Bonnie’s feelings for Damon? 
A/N: Eventually, for sure. They’ve both got other things they’re dealing with in 15, though. And LMAO they should, though for some reason I see those crows as like unfailingly loyal to Kai. 
6) Sixth part
Love of my liiiiife: I can’t with this guy. All of this comical moment was too much. Like, throwing her over his shoulder and just leaving the apartment; Bonnie with no shoes and calling him out; and they’re about to have dinner with Kai -and the fact that Damon uses like 100 nicknames for him lmfao-. This is going to be fun.
A/N: I think that’s a pretty good indication of the kind of energy the opening of that date’s going to have, so I’m super glad you’re looking forward to it!
7) Seventh part
For the sake of Stefan and Caroline, they really just need to have sex once and for all or they will die -and me too-. 
PLEASE TELL ME IT’S FINALLY HAPPENING IN CHAPTER 15 SO I CAN GET READY FOR MY DEATH. Also, any idea of when you will post it? Just a tentative idea?
A/N: Would not be unwise to start making funeral arrangements. And lmao, unfortunately I have kind of a crazy few weeks coming up, so probably in like three weeks at the earliest? I’ll try to make that, I know I left some pretty nasty cliffhangers in this chapter. 
And lastly, I saw someone is making an appearance, an “unexpected new guest”. Is he/she someone we know? A neighbor? Someone we don’t but that either Stefan or Caroline do? 
Yessss, the new guest mystery! You know them. They’ve been mentioned. Muahaha.
I CAN’T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. Let me tell you this one was one of my favorites and that I feel blessed and I’m gonna reread it like 100 times. Sorry for the super long review!
A/N: GIRL, never, I loved the super long review. Made my day! <3 I know this fic is largely fluff, but let me tell ya, fun as they are, these chapters end up being like 50-60+ pages on Word, so they definitely take quite a bit out of me and quite a bit of time for me to crank out. When I first post them, I never really have any idea what to think and just sort of wait to hear back on if this thing I just spent way too much time on (time that I do NOT have lololol) is any good, and you’d be surprised how long it usually takes to get any kind of feedback (I really think people think this fic is more popular than it is?), so neeeeeever apologize for leaving a long review. It’s like the best possible thing to get. Thanks so, so much for writing it, and I’ll make sure to start posting teasers for 15 soon!
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